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Willow and Tara's 'Sin City' - Complete 12 Mar 07

Postby Alcy » Thu Mar 30, 2006 2:07 am

Title: Willow and Tara’s Sin City
Author: Alcy
Rating: strictly NC-17
Disclaimers: I don’t own the rights to Buffy…nuff said. This fic is of course AU so no spoilers for any season. I don’t own the rights for any of the Sin City comics either and don’t even bother suing cos I got nothin’ except a gorgeous girlfriend.
A warning before you read, this fic contains graphic language, violence and sex. In other words, it’s not very nice. If you’re game, read on for what will hopefully be an interesting, challenging and action packed story.
Summary: This fic is based on Frank Miller’s ultra violent noir comic books, borrowing some plot elements from his stories, “That Yellow Bastard” and to a lesser extent “The Big Fat Kill” and then weaving them with my own.
Tara Maclay is a tough cop who has just one night left in Sin City before she gets the hell out and moves to New York City. However, as Tara waits in the rain for the night to be over, she doesn’t know that this will be the night that all hell breaks loose and her life changes forever…all because of a little kid by the name of Willow Rosenberg.
Notes: Tara’s voiceovers are in bold text
Feedback: Yes please, let me know what you think!

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Chapter One - Little Willow Rosenberg


There are some things in life you can’t change. You’re born, you live and you die. And then there are some things that you have to try your damndest to change, and you’ll know that no matter what the cost, even if you happen to die along the way…it was worth it.

Tonight is special. It’s my last night in the hellhole known as Basin City. Tomorrow I’ll be winging my way to a new posting in New York City. A paradise compared to this place. One more night...


The rain continued to piss down without a single lull. The narrow ledge under which the two cops stood afforded little protection from the harshness of the element. They were both soaked to the bone and becoming increasingly irritable.

Tara Maclay tugged up the collar of her coat in a vain attempt to try and keep at least a little of the water from snaking down her neck. It hardly helped, she kept pacing as she was unable to stand still and continued to grow wetter with each step. Her features were difficult to make out in the darkness but her jaw was strong; skin pale and unblemished; lips rich, red and full and eyes burning with sapphire coloured intensity. Her dirty blond hair hung in wet strands down over her shoulders. She had turned the collar of her long, leather coat up but it did little to keep the rain from running down the back of her neck.

Her partner Seamus O’Hara lent against the graffiti covered wall behind him. He was a big, fat useless piece of shit who hadn’t moved a muscle for the past half an hour except to feverishly light cigarettes. His arms were folded tightly across his chest, a look of utter resentment frozen on his already crabby features. It was clear that he did not want to be there. It was Tara’s last night, so she couldn’t care less what O’Hara did.

Even so, it had been a bad night…and it was shaping up to get even worse…

“The informant was bogus, if there was any crack being shipped out of here tonight we would’ve seen something. We’ve been sulking around here for two hours in this fuckin’ rain and I’m as dry as a nun’s cunt,” O’Hara rasped in the whiny voice he used when he really wanted something.

“Well they probably heard you fart and knew we were sniffing around,” Tara growled, “Something definitely doesn’t smell right tonight.”

“You watch your trap Maclay!” O’Hara snapped, his patience wearing thin, “Let’s knock off and head over to Kitty’s…have you seen that new girl?”

Tara couldn’t be bothered with his shit tonight, she barely acknowledged his question with a slight shrug. She continued pacing the same route she had for the last two hours...to the dumpster and back. All manner of rubbish and filth gave way beneath her feet, Basin City was a city of endless filth. Tara took one last drag on her cigarette and cast it to the ground.

O’Hara didn’t seem to care that Tara refused to be drawn into his conversation and continued talking all the same, “She’s a real piece o’ meat that one, I’d crawl over glass to fuck her…bet you would too.”

O’Hara looked sideways at Tara to see if he had provoked a reaction. Tara just fumbled in her pocket for another cigarette and it was not until O’Hara thought he had been completely ignored that she replied.

“I wouldn’t crawl over glass for my own mother…god rest her soul,” Tara spoke in a monotone, her voice reflected her mood, as her face was momentarily illuminated by the glow of her lighter, “And I most certainly don’t have to crawl over glass to get laid.”

O’Hara snorted disdainfully, “Fuckin’ dykes get all the pussy.”

“It’s cos I know how to treat a woman right,” You ugly sack of shit

Tara gave O’Hara a piercing glance from the corner of her eye. He wouldn’t know how to treat a woman right if someone gave him a dummies handbook. She had never liked the rotund cop in fact she despised him. As far as partners went, he was really scraping the bottom of the barrel. There was nothing to be done about it. Corrupt, rotten to the core cops were the norm in Sin City…Tara was one of the rare exceptions.

”You’re on a fast track to an early grave, Maclay,” her first partner had told her, first day on the job.

“Don’t really want to hang around in this city anyway,” was Tara’s all too honest reply.


Tara believed there wasn’t one bright spark of hope in all of Basin City. It was depressing to say the least, to live in a town where even the victims were lowlife scum not worth saving. It was a rotten, shitty existence, sentenced to hell on earth.

A small shape moved in the darkness across the road and both cops glanced over. Tara peered through the gloom and tried to make it out. It was only when the shape moved closer that she saw it was a kid. A real small kid shrouded in an oversized rain jacket.

Tara loved kids. Somewhat of a contradiction for the tough as nails cop who appeared not to give a damn about anything. There was something about their innocence that meant there was hope for the future of Basin City. There was still room for improvement, for them to learn and grow into something other than a dirty, rotten crook or a whore. Whereas the criminals Tara usually dealt with were fit for nothing except a long stint in jail. With kids…there was hope.

As such, Tara volunteered to speak to schools whenever someone was needed for an educational talk. Tara hated the thought of someone like O’Hara lecturing kids on morality and how to be a good citizen…what a crock.

The kid turned its head slightly and Tara saw a flash of white skin and red hair. A shiver ran down Tara’s spine. She recognised the kid instantly.

In all her school visits, one kid stood out. Bright where the others were stupid, and interested where the others were bored. Red-haired, little Willow Rosenberg. She was a skinny kid with nothing much to her except a whole lot of light shinning right out of her little face. That was one kid Tara wouldn’t forget for the rest of her life. The only question was, what the hell was she doing out all alone on a night like this?

Tara’s foot twitched in preparation for a step forward. As she was about to move across the road to catch-up with the kid a black Merc glided passed the two detectives skulking in the shadows and drew to a smooth halt just beside young Willow. The next thing she noticed was the license plate, Tara stopped in her tracks.

Talbot

That name sent a shiver down her spine as she read the plate. Everyone who lived in Basin City knew that name and to ignore it was folly. Madame Talbot ran the most exclusive brothel in town but the establishment was so much more than that. Not only was it a den of vice, filth and immorality, half of the town’s drug deals; murders and embezzlement could be traced to that place. Through its doors passed the city’s most influential, most crooked and vilest inhabitants. Madame Talbot magnified her customers’ traits tenfold. Everything about her was artificial, from her bronze hair to her huge lips. Everyone knew that dame was a real piece of work.

The car door swung open just ahead of Willow and out stepped exactly who Tara expected. The young man that emerged tossed his shoulder length hair with a practised arrogance. He turned his head slightly and Tara saw his profile, delicate, pointed features that belonged on someone much younger and far less of a monster.

Tommy Talbot, a sweet sounding name…for a devil child.

A second man stepped from the drivers’ door and moved around the car to open up an umbrella over Tommy’s head, partially obscuring him from Tara’s view. Tara growled low in her throat. Just as everyone knew what kind of woman his mother was…they also knew what kind of man Tommy was…or rather wasn’t. Tommy liked them young and pretty, the younger the better. He used them like toys and disposed of the evidence with little remorse. Tara had been aching for years to be able to pin something on him…but the evidence was never there.

The thought of red-haired, little Willow Rosenberg in the hands of that child-molesting monster is making my blood boil. She’s just eleven…a cute as a button kid with this stringy red hair and huge green eyes that seem to fill her whole face. Willow is a good kid. There is no way that she deserves anything that monster will do to her, she’s never done a thing in her life. It’s always the innocent ones that get hurt…and I hate it when that happens. I didn’t care that he was the son of that bitch and that the other cops left him alone because of it. If he was going to hurt Willow in any way, I was going to make him unrecognisable even to his own mother.

O’Hara was not completely stupid. He saw everything from the black Merc, Tommy Talbot stepping out and the determined set of his partners jaw. He knew that this was just the kind of shit she would get herself involved in and damn the consequences. O’Hara had a feeling this botch was going to get him killed.

“So, do you want to knock off or what?” O’Hara interrupted Tara’s concentration on the scene unfolding before her, “Kitty’s will be just warming up, first one’s on me, anything you want.”

Tara ignored him a though he were a fire hydrant squatting on the pavement. Instead her eyes were riveted on the car, its occupants and the little girl across the street. She could not hear what they were saying but Tara could more or less guess the sickeningly sweet honey dripping from Talbot’s lips as he tried to entice Willow into the car. Whatever he said had obviously not won her over as she attempted to make a sudden dash for freedom. Talbot immediately reacted, reaching out to grab the scruff of her coat. He hauled the helpless girl back to him even as she continued to lash out with her hands and feet.

It was the last straw for Tara, she reached within her coat and withdrew badge in order to display it clearly at the band of her pants. Both her pistols pressed into the middle of her back in their special, customised holsters with their handles facing downwards for quick draw. Their lack of visibility gave her the advantage of appearing unprepared and slow to react. She heard O’Hara whine desperately behind her and she suppressed the urge to turn around and shoot him in the kneecap.

“Tara, it’s none of our business, let’s get out of here!” he hissed, drawing further back into the shadows.

He’s a fucking moron and I won’t do him the courtesy of replying to the garbage that’s spewing out of his mouth. I don’t know if anyone else in this town cares, but this is my job…and what’s more, it’s right!

Tara stepped out into the streetlight, her coat billowing around her as she strode purposefully across the street. Her boots slammed into each puddle with all the ferocity of her walk. Even as rain streamed down her face, Tara meticulously surveyed the scene in front of her. Talbot was on the far side of the car, partially illuminated in the glare of its headlamps. He had Willow by her elbow, refusing to let her go as he continued to speak to her.

Good girl, just keep him talking and we’ll have this sorted out in no time…

Talbot was undoubtedly carrying a pistol beneath the expensive leather coat he wore. Talbot’s henchman was just behind him, still trying to shelter his boss with the umbrella. There was no doubt a hefty weapon was packed inside the holster beneath his coat as well. The Merc’s windows were tinted and Tara could see nothing except her own reflection; a cloaked angel of death striding towards the car. There would be at least another one of them still inside, although she knew she ought to expect two. Tara pictured them now, clad in Black Armani and feeling for their own pistols as they watched her approach. She didn’t like the odds. For a moment Tara wished she could count on O’Hara to back her up but the fat son of a bitch was probably long gone.

The umbrella holder spun around when he saw Tara, his face morphing into a threatening growl that clearly said to come closer meant risking death. It was an expression that Tara gave exactly the same consideration she’d just given O’Hara…almost none. Talbot had seen her as well but he didn’t relinquish his grip on little Willow in the slightest. Tara bristled at the brazenness of it all. They knew full well they were the law.

“Move along bitch, nothing to see here,” the henchman growled.

Tara came to a halt just a few metres away from him. She kept one eye on both the car doors. With a casual flick, she pushed back her coat and rested her hand on the band of her pants, revealing her badge to all assembled. Both the henchman and Talbot smirked.

“Surely you don’t want to go around flashing a little piece of metal like that,” Talbot laughed, hauling Willow around in front of him, “What…you want money? A bribe? Bit short of cash to supply your drug habit?”

Tara searched out Willow’s face. The little girl was terrified, her green eyes staring wide and pleading silently for Tara to help her. It was then that Tara noticed the little stuffed animal she clutched in her free hand. Where had she been going at this time of night with just the toy to keep her company?

“Cut the bullshit Tommy, it’s not going to work with me,” Tara replied calmly.

Willow tried to run towards Tara but Talbot switched his grip from her elbow to her hair. He jerked her backwards and she cried out in pain and fright.

“I don’t believe it, a wannabe hero cop. Who might I have the privilege of addressing?” Talbot drawled mockingly.

“Maclay,” Tara replied gruffly, her patience was wearing thin, they were just stalling for time by keeping her talking, “Let the girl go little man and I might consider letting you go with your balls intact.”

The umbrella-carrying henchman shifted, purposely revealing the holster beneath his arm. Tara merely smiled lazily. Her casual air did not betray the state of tense alertness she was actually feeling. She watched the car for any sign of movement. There it was, the passenger door closest to her opened with a barely audible click. The sound almost drowned out in the rain but Tara both saw and heard it. She’d had enough of pussy footing around. They expected her to run away with her tail between her legs…what they were going to get was judgement!

In one fluid movement Tara reached both hands up into her coat and slid the twin Beretta’s from their holsters, metal and leather were as smooth as silk. Both guns were out from beneath her coat and dealing out their deadly payloads in a mere split second. Arm as steady as steel, Tara fired into the narrow crack created as the passenger door opened. As soon as she had started to go for her weapons, the driver had urgently fumbled for his own pistol. He was levelling it in her direction when her bullet slammed into his forehead. The umbrella clattered to the sidewalk. Tara then brought both guns to bear directly on Talbot as the passenger door opened and a suited body slid partially out onto the pavement, a gun landed in the gutter. She was pleased to see that Talbot’s face had gone a sickly white.

“I think you’ll be driving yourself home tonight Tommy…minus your entertainment!’ Tara hissed, she was all too acutely aware of the fact that she was soaked to the bone and freezing, it time to get this over and done with, “Now hand her over before you get one too!”

“All this for a fucking kid?” Talbot demanded in a shrill voice as he glanced down at his dead driver.

Rather than release Willow, he picked her up with one hand. He now held the kid as a shield in front of him, betting on the fact that Tara cared too much about her to shoot him and risk hitting her. Tara’s jaw tightened, the son of a bitch was going to do this the hard way. Even now she could see his free hand twitching slightly. Tara guessed his pistol was tucked in the band of his pants. She grew even angrier if that was possible, he was deliberately putting Willow in the firing line and in terrible danger of being hit in a resulting cascade of gunfire.

I could tell he was gonna be stupid about it, psychos always go that little bit too far…they never know when to call it quits. And this guy is used to getting his own way.

“I’m prepared to go even further,” Tara replied, not phased in the slightest by the bodies lying in the rain, and trying not to be phased by little Willow being used as a human shield, “Are you?”

Talbot answered Tara by reaching for his gun. In his haste he wasn’t nearly smooth enough and brought his gun hand out too far from his body. In a heartbeat Tara fired a single shot with precision. The bullet took his hand off at the wrist and hand and gun fell to the pavement. Talbot stared at his bloody stump for a few seconds before his mind connected with what his eyes were seeing. He finally screamed in pain and dropped Willow, the kid falling hard on the pavement. To her credit she didn’t fall apart into a blubbering mess. She scrambled to her feet and ran to Tara’s side, deciding that the safest place for her to be was holding Tara’s coat.

“Willow, run over to that stoop there,” Tara indicated it with a nod of her head, “and crouch down behind the pillar, don’t move for anything! Not until I say so,” she pulled her cell phone awkwardly from her pocket and handed it to the kid, “You know how to dial 111?”

Willow nodded eagerly and took the phone. Tara watched her from the corner of her eye until she was safely hidden. A few seconds later, a white face peered out from behind the pillar as Willow looked anxiously to Tara.

“Willow! What did I say?” Tara growled firmly, this was no playground.

The red hair disappeared back behind the pillar and Tara was able to concentrate all her attention on Talbot without worrying about the kid. In the few seconds that her attention had been diverted, Talbot had struggled back to his feet and had pried his weapon from his fallen hand. He stood trembling with his wounded stump tucked beneath his arm. Tara felt the strange urge to laugh at such a macabre sight. A split second later and the bloodied weapon fired in her direction. Talbot’s aim was poor and the bullet merely grazed her shoulder. Tara grunted slightly, feeling it’s sting but she responded brutally by hitting both his kneecaps with a single shot from each weapon. Talbot screamed and collapsed to the ground as though he were a puppet whose strings had been cut. The gun fell from his hand and he lay bleeding in the rain.

“You bitch, you fucking bitch!” he screamed, spittle foaming at the corners of his mouth full of gritted teeth. .

Tara calmly walked over to his side and with a firm nudge of her toe, sent the gun into the gutter where it was instantly swallowed up by the storm water. Against her better judgement, she was far from finished with Talbot. She holstered one of her Berettas and kept one at hand. Kneeling down in the street, Tara reached out and picked him up by the scruff of his neck. He had lost a lot of blood and his face was a ghastly white. Tara was hoping he bled to death in the rain.

“I’m the fucking bitch?” she asked with a raised eyebrow, “What about you, you sick bastard. How many girls has it been now? Twenty…more? All under the age of twelve for gods sake!”

She slammed him over the head with the butt of her gun and blood ran from the wound.

He coughed, the burning ferocity in his eyes not diminished by his wounds, “More than you’ll ever know Maclay…and none that you’ll be able to link back to me! Does that make you feel good you piece of shit cop?”

Tara placed the cool barrel of her weapon against his temple with every intention of blowing his brains out. The angel had had enough…and he had it coming to him.

Someone else fired, not Tara and it was not Talbot they hit. Tara felt an aching cold radiate out from her lower back, down through her legs and up through her chest. She glanced down and saw a hole in her leather coat.

Damn…

Tara wasn’t about to give up that easily. She rolled to one side off Talbot and twisted, bringing her Beretta up to fire at the rotten snake that had shot her in the back. Bang! Another bullet slammed into her left shoulder and sent her sprawling back against the pavement. Through the rain she saw a figure with a smoking gun still pointed at her. It began to walk forward.

Tara let out a hoarse laugh when she saw who it was…that fat son of bitch, O’Hara. He’d finally chosen to do something that took a little bit of guts and he’d chosen to shoot his own partner in the back. As far as Tara was concerned, you couldn’t sink any lower.

“Drop the Beretta Maclay,” O’Hara barked, trying to make his whiny voice sound commanding.

“I’ve got a better idea,” Tara said as she began to lift her gun, even though she knew she’d never be fast enough.

Bang! Bang! Tara saw O’Hara’s gun kick twice in rapid succession and felt searing pain in her right shoulder and chest. Again she was knocked flat and this time could not rise again. As she lay flat on her back she finally let go of the gun. Somewhere a little girl was screaming. O’Hara advanced, keeping his gun trained on her even though she was well and truly down. Tara lay absolutely still, staring up at the raindrops illuminated in the streetlight as they fell down to earth.

“Should’ve taken up my offer of a drink…but you had to be the hero,” O’Hara was basking in his power over her.

Somewhere in the distance sirens blared. They were coming closer. Tara knew Willow had called and they were on their way. Tara coughed violently and felt a trickle of warm blood flow from her mouth. The rain quickly washed it away.

“You can’t win against them you know, I’ve always known but you were always too pigheaded to accept it,” he continued, “There was no way I was gonna let you get me killed Maclay, now friggin’ way.”

“There’s always a day of judgement,” Tara whispered as the sirens grew even louder.

Good kid…nothing can happen to her now, she’ll be fine and with any luck I’ll be dead. Wish like hell I could’ve taken both these bastards with me…O’Hara and Talbot…

Tara was freezing; her eyelids grew heavy. Before they finally closed shut she saw a little face hovering over her. Little Willow Rosenberg. Tara tried to smile.

You’ll be fine kid…

~~~~~~

It was just my luck that I didn’t die, although with four slugs in me I wasn’t in good shape and damn near did. The doctors slaved over my bullet-riddled body for twelve hours and even got my heart ticking again after I flat lined. So I’m awake and lying in this hospital bed, knowing full well that they didn’t go all out to save me out of the good of their hearts. She had them do it.

Glory Talbot stood at the end of the bed, her eyes fixed on the half-dead cop lying beneath the pristine white sheets offered at the private hospital she’d paid for. She wanted Tara to know exactly who was behind her top of the line treatment and care. She talked and Tara did her best to let the machines monitoring her condition down out her brazen drawl.

“If you’re wondering why I’m taking such good care of someone who almost killed my little boy then I’m going to tell you…” she was at the end of the bed, both hands placed on the railing as she lent forward like some immaculately attired buzzard hovering a carcass.

She must think I’m a moron. Of course I know…I have to be punished for what I did, death’s not enough…

“I’m going to make you suffer Tara…suffer so much you’ll wish you were never born. Pity you don’t have any family, or I’d make them suffer as well…but not to worry,” she finished brightly, obviously looking forward to Tara’s punishment, “I’ll just extract more from your little hide.”

“Your little boy’s a monster,” Tara whispered weakly, she badly needed a sip of water, “I’m only sorry I didn’t kill him. I’ll get both of you one day…”

Glory laughed, “Not where you’re going you won’t.”

I really don’t give a fuck you trashy bitch…Willow is safe and that’s all that matters

~~~~~~

Tara had another visitor. She woke one morning to see the pale little face of twelve year old Willow staring at her from the side of the bed. The wounded cop managed a small smile as the kid reached out and took her hand.

“I don’t know how I can thank you for saving my life,” Willow whispered, her small voice choking with tears.

“What on earth were you doing out that late by yourself?” Tara asked quietly.

Willow ducked her head as though she thought Tara were blaming her for what had happened, “My stepfather kicked me out…I didn't do anything honest. I was sleeping on the sofa, that's where I always sleep, and he came in to say I was taking up too much space and had to get out. I only had time to grab Miss Kitty,” Willow held up the stuffed toy which Tara could now see was a cat.

There was nothing to Willow. How anyone could think she took up too much space was beyond Tara. A strong gust of wind would blow the kid away.

“It’s not your fault Willow, grown up stuff like that…it’s never your fault…you just promise me you won’t let stuff like that get you down,” Tara tried her hardest to rise an inch from her pillows so she could see Willow more clearly but even that simple task proved impossible.

“I’m won’t,” Willow replied with a hint of pride in her voice, her chin lifted a little higher, “I’m going to law school, I’m going to spend my life putting bad guys in jail.”

Tara laughed but it came out more like a croak, “That’s not what lawyers do Willow…but it would be good to have a few like you.”

A nurse entered the room and interrupted their conversation in a brusque voice, “Visiting hours are over kid.

Willow looked longingly at Tara one last time, “Are they gonna give you a medal now? For saving me?”

Tara smiled weakly and turned to look out the window, “No Willow sweetie, they’re not gonna give me a medal.”

~~~~~~

Tara sat stoically in the dock, as she had done for the duration of her trial. They had already found her guilty and were no passing judgment on her. She smiled as she remembered just how right she had been. No one could escape judgment.

The trial is a farce. They all knew I was well within my rights to kill those two crooks…lowlife scum like that are a dime a dozen. I will admit that beating Talbot within an inch of his life was a tad heavy-handed but I don’t give a fuck. I’ll gladly do time for the pleasure of teaching that piece of shit a well-deserved lesson.

So I sit in the dock and wait for the judge to reign fire and brimstone down upon me. I look at her from the corner of my eye, she’s giving off such conservative vibes it’s making my skin crawl. However, my sentence didn’t worry me in the slightest. The only concern I have is for Willow, who is going to look out for her now?

I knew what the papers said about me. I scan the crowd in the gallery, dozens of them packed in to see the psycho cop. They’re a pack of sheep here to get their thrills. I search for Willow’s pale little face, just to be able to see her one last time and check that she’s alright. Of course she isn’t here and nor should she be here. She’s tucked away with some nice foster family…safe. Willow is safe and that’s all that matters.


The judge coughed slightly before she spoke to make sure she had Tara’s full attention,

“Tara Maclay, the jury having found you guilty of the aforementioned crimes, I hereby sentence you to twenty years hard labour…”


TBC in Chapter Two
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby Alcy » Thu Mar 30, 2006 1:37 pm

Okay, I've had heaps of trouble posting this but it seems to have worked now, I hope I haven't posted multiple times!!!!

I know there's a few errors in it as well which I'm trying to fix but it won't let me do that either. One of which I've just noticed, I've put 111 as the emergency number Tara gets Willow to dial, which is of course the emergency number here in New Zealand as opposed to 911 which it should read!

Oh well, I hope it's readable!
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby BigBlueEyes » Thu Mar 30, 2006 2:52 pm

Oooh I loved it. More, more, more. It's great!!! You did an amazing job. :dance
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby Always410 » Thu Mar 30, 2006 5:26 pm

I like it so far! ALthough, not sure she'll be able to do the hard labour yet :P Hope Willow is alright...They so deserved being killed/blown up *nods*

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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby Fleiss » Thu Mar 30, 2006 6:46 pm

hey great story! i love the movie and am loving this as well!!!
more soon!
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby DelWhicker » Thu Mar 30, 2006 9:59 pm

Wow, great start. So...Tara as a foul mouthed, tough as nails cop with a huge soft spot for kids. To be honest, I was very unsure about this at the start of the chapter - to have her be so opposite of "canon" Tara, but somehow, I think it works. There would seem to be quite an age difference between this Willow & Tara. Even if Tara is twice Willow's age, making her 22 or so, how did Tara become so dark and hard-edged at such a young age?? I guess being a cop in a corrupt crime ridden city will do that to you in short time.

And, geez! Twenty years hard labor?? Holy crap. That's a long time. I worry what will become of little Willow.

Can't wait for more! Thanks for sharing. :-D

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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby cantbefredless » Fri Mar 31, 2006 12:39 am

Wonderful.. I love the movie so much.. and you need a freakin great job!! Cant wait for the next part!!!! :dance I love it!!!!

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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby caz » Fri Mar 31, 2006 4:50 am

Hi Alcy - Good start! I haven't seen the film although my son has got it.

Looking forward to your next update.

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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby Boadecia » Fri Mar 31, 2006 6:01 am

Awesome! I love Sin City and you captured the imagery and the language so well it was like a remembrance of the movie. Only Tara makes for a MUCH better looking cop than bruce Willis ewww! Cant wait for the next one, Methinks little willow's gonna grow up and fill out! :p
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby Willowlover » Fri Mar 31, 2006 12:25 pm

Good story. I like what you've done with Tara. Although I never saw the movie this sounds like a great story I can't wait to read more. :party
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby JustSkipIt » Fri Mar 31, 2006 7:49 pm

Wow, you're not kidding about the tone. That's one disgusting city indeed. So Tara's got 20 years hard labor. Willow should be 32 and a kick-ass lawyer when TAra gets out. Cool.
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby Alcy » Sat Apr 01, 2006 12:03 am

BigBlueEyes: thanks a lot, glad to hear you liked the first chapter!

Always410: Hard labour always sounds so serious, well, I’m sure Tara in this incarnation will be able to hack it.
That’s the thing about this kind of town, justice is brutal.

Fleiss: Glad to hear, I thought the movie was one of the best movies of 2005 (and Jessica Alba was the hottest cowgirl ever.

DelWhicker: ‘Foul-mouthed’ would be a bit of an understatement! You’re very right, she’s almost everything that canon Tara isn’t…but I think it’s believable when you consider the kind of environment she’s in. In the comics, no one is purely good, except maybe Nancy. So Tara is the Tara we know, but changed to suit the world she is in. And it’s also not surprising to find her so hard edged at a young age for the same reason. You find out how old she is in the next chapter.
And yes, twenty years is a lot of hard time! Stay tuned to find out what comes next!
I love sharing! Although I was a little apprehensive about this one given its so nasty but I thought what the heck, it’s a great challenge to make it believable according to both Buffy and Sin City canon and it’s great to see people are enjoying it.

cantbefredless: Yes, the movie rocks…I think you either love it or you hate it. Glad to hear I reworked it okay.

caz: I hope your son is old enough to be watching it! Seeing the film helps get the general idea of tone and stuff but isn’t vital to the whole enjoyment and understanding. All you need to know is that its got W & T and they’re gonna be kicking ass!

Boadecia: Thanks, it’s really hard not to rip off every scene and line in the movie cos they’re all so great but I think I got the tone and imagery without doing that so Im happy. And yes, I fully agree that Tara is far sexier than Bruce Willis thank god…she’s also meaner!!
Fill out you say? Wait and see!

Willowlover: Glad to hear, I’m still a little freaked out about what I did to Tara…but it’s fun. More coming soon!

JustSkipIt: Yup, It’s about as disgusting as you can get without going too far! I hope you can stick with me! We’ll have to see about that hard labour…I’ve got evil plans and they involve some other familiar characters…

Thanks for reading the first chapter everyone, I think this fic is going to pan out to be slightly shorter than my other fics simply because the plot I have planned out is quite concise. The next chapter will be up soon, almost finished it!
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby sinkinghearts » Sun Apr 02, 2006 10:19 am

ohhh!! this is a very interesting fic :D

i'm impatiently waiting for the next update :D
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby SithLordWiccan » Sun Apr 02, 2006 10:22 am

I think I'm gonna like this fic.
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby Artemis » Sun Apr 02, 2006 10:28 am

I was really surprised that I liked Sin City so much - don't mistake me, I never doubted it when I heard from so many people that it rocked, I just didn't think it was my kind of film. I'm not so big on film noir, or comics thereof, and with guys having most of the leading roles... Well, wasn't I surprised. Okay, of course I loved Gail (I'm slightly terrified of her, but I love her anyway), but I really got into Marv's single-minded quest for his brand of justice, the whole sense of him as this misplaced knight following his noble cause, and splattering anyone in his way. And Hartigan's nobility, concealed beneath a coat of cynicism and coarseness, really touched a chord with me - I admired the guy.

So this is just perfect - aside from her many, many other gorgeous qualities, Tara's nobility is what makes her wonderful, even when it's hidden beneath insecurity, or (as here) a harsh outlook on life and a vocabulary that would make a sailor blush. She's the best protector little Willow could possibly have asked for, willing to exchange her life for Willow's if necessary, but not needlessly melodramatic or show-off heroic - because I imagine Sin City is very efficient at eating 'heroes'.

Now there's just the question of what happens next, and how will Willow and Tara reunite, and scrape a happy ending out of the muck in Sin City?

(And if it could involve Faith in Gail's role, at some point, my adoration would be complete... :blush )
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby justin » Sun Apr 02, 2006 10:46 am

That's a very good start to the story. I'm intrigued to see how you where you go with it.

One worrying aspect is that you seem to be following the Bruce Willis/Jessica Alba storyline from the film. So I'm really hoping this story doesn't end in the same way as the film did. :paranoid
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby Alcy » Sun Apr 02, 2006 8:21 pm

shane: Thanks very much for reading, next update will probably be up today some time!

SithLordWiccan: Thanks very much for dropping by, I hope you do, I’m planning on havigna lot of fun with it!

Artemis: I was semi-surprised by the fact I loved Sin City, I had expected to enjoy Jessica Alba in her cowboy costume but that was a given! What I hadn’t expected to enjoy was everything else about it, the style, the music and the characters. Marv being my favourite. I’m not such a huge fan of comics either, although the movie made me go and get Frank Miller’s work, mainly because I want the pictures to move!
As soon as I saw the film I knew I wanted my next W/T fic to be set in this brutal world with Tara playing Hartigan, simply because as you say, her nobility is perfectly suited to the role. And Tara’s certainly not perfect, because you can’t be perfect in Sin City, so hence the foul mouth and violence.
And yes, I’m sure I can answer both your questions, one sooner than the other! I think you’ll be pleased!

Justin: Thanks very much, I’ve got it all planned out in my twisted little mind, trying to work out an exciting action packed story!
And I wouldn’t worry one little bit about that unfortunate ending (although it does have the bonus of Nancy avenging Hartigan in Sin City 2 Can’t wait to see Jessica Alba in that role!) we haven’t slipped into an alternate dimension, this is still Pens and I still love W/T…so rest assured!

Thanks again folks, Chapter 2 has come along rather quickly given the amount of spare time I’ve had at work at the moment. Although it’s a challenge having this sort of foul language up on your computer screen…the trick is to keep the font small!
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby Alcy » Sun Apr 02, 2006 10:05 pm

Chapter Two – Judgement Day


If you’ve never experienced a day that lasts a year, then you’ve never done hard time. I don’t just mean hard time, I mean backbreaking, soul-destroying hard time. At the trial I was judged, found guilty and appropriately sentenced to a punishment befitting my heinous crime. So it is with a sense of acceptance that I serve my time at Basin City Women’s Prison. An innocuous name for the hell on earth where they keep the scum of the earth…the female ones anyway.

Everything about this place is shit, the buildings, the cells, the exercise yards and the prisoners. As soon as I get out I’m going to find somewhere green, I don’t care if it’s a solitary tree and a patch of grass in some crappy little park, as long as it’s green.

The only pure things in this stinking hole are the letters I get from little Willow Rosenberg. One beautifully crisp white envelope arrives every Wednesday morning signed with the name, Olivia. She’s a good kid. She doesn’t use her real name and keeps herself hidden. I open the letters and find neatly spaced and joined handwriting. The kid’s bright and for some reason that makes me real proud even though I’m nothing to her except the screwed up cop that tried to save her life. Those letters are all I have to keep me going, those and the knowledge that she’s safe.

My time here isn’t going to be easy, I know that much but by god it was worth it. I wonder how little Tommy is adjusting to life as a cripple?


~~~~~~

With a grunt of exertion Tara hefted the pickaxe up above her head, muscles straining with the effort, before bringing it crashing into the stone at her feet. The momentum of the heavy tool did most of the work but the jarring impact assaulted her already aching muscles. It was near quitting time but lunch had been an eternity ago and her endurance was at its limit. Tara let the pickaxe rest on the ground for a moment as she wiped the sweat from her forehead with her grimy forearm. She looked back and surveyed the path of rock she’d broken up over the course of the day, reflecting on the fact that it was almost like the course of her life over the past eight years. It had been one rock after another. Then she looked down at the impact those eight years had had on her body, clad as it was in a filthy t-shirt that had once been white and a pair of coveralls which had bee peeled off her shoulders and tied around her waist. Tara had never been soft but now her trim muscles were as hard as steel and there was not an ounce of spare fat on her body due to the combination of brutal physical work and sparse diet.

Not all her fellow inmates were as hard and lean. She looked across at the small group of favoured prisoners smoking cigarettes with one of the guards. A gang of heavy set stone butches and their femme girlfriends who had never lifted a perfectly manicured finger even though they were supposedly sentenced to hard labour.

One of the gang turned and saw Tara staring. Her name was Baby Dedera, the Queen Butch of Basin City women’s prison. She was six foot, two hundred and fifty pounds of angry, ruthless dyke. What’s more, she’d hated Tara’s guts from the moment she’d arrived. Tara guessed it had something to do with the fact that she was responsible for putting Baby away in the first place. Baby certainly hadn’t wasted any time trying to get her revenge. Tara’s second day in the joint, six of them jumped her on trash detail. There was no way in hell Tara was going to submit to that kind of shit. She’d fought like a wildcat, breaking two arms and a nose, gouging an eye, dishing out at least fifty stitches and inflicting countless bruises. She hadn’t escaped scot-free. Tara gently ran her index finger down the left side of her forehead, tracing the thick white scar which ended at her temple. In the fray, someone had got in a good slice with a broken bottle, narrowly missing her eye. It was a small price to pay for the respect Tara has earned from the other inmates. As a cop in prison, Tara had to maintain constant vigilance every hour of ever day, and it was exhausting. Tara’s shoulders sagged slightly, only once had Baby got the better of her. Just once…and she’d made sure it would never happen again. She tore her eyes away from the group of women and resumed work with her pickaxe, smashing the next rock with an added ferocity.

Several minutes later the bell rang to signal the end of the days work. Tara found herself looking forward to the slop that they dished out at dinner; at least it would be hot.

~~~~~~

Her leaden dinner sitting heavily in her stomach, Tara turned in that night to her narrow cot in her solitary cell. Before lights out she withdrew Willow’s latest letter from the concealed compartment she had painstakingly carved out behind the grill in her room. Although it was plain, ordinary paper covered in ink pen, Tara could swear a sweet smell drifted into the room with that letter. She lay back on the pillow and unfolded its crisp white paper. For a moment or two she stared at the neat rows of handwriting which she had watched mature with age.

Tara honestly couldn’t believe the letters had kept coming. Willow would be nineteen, or perhaps twenty? Tara had no idea when her birthday was. She had expected the letters to stop a few months after her arrival in prison. What kid maintained interest in writing letters to an inmate for eight years?

Yet they still came. Always the same meticulous style, full of little anecdotes, humorous stories that made Tara laugh whether or not they were made up. Willow never said where she was or exactly what she was doing. Although the word ‘studying’ came up a lot and Tara hoped that Willow was realising her dream to become a lawyer. She could just see the serious little girl surrounded by a pile of heavy textbooks…still the same skinny little Willow Rosenberg. It was difficult to imagine her as anything else.

Tara didn’t expect to see her for a long time, if at all, but for now, there were the letters.

~~~~~~

Tara looked at the days work assignments and saw with gratifying relief that she was back on ‘rock’ detail. Although it was exhausting, backbreaking work it was a chance for fresh air and a small measure of solitude. She supposed she ought to thank glory Talbot for making sure she got the worst details.

She waited for the bus in the bleak prison yard with the other ladies, her coveralls pulled up over her shoulders against the early chill of morning. The driver was watching her from the corner of her eye. She was some new woman Tara had never seen before. All Tara could see was a pair of full ruby red lips beneath the shadow of her trucker cap. Tara ignored her. Most of the prisoners stood around smoking fistfuls of cigarettes, Tara stood and dreamt of being in New York.

Baby and her gang of thugs joined the assembled crowd and they threaded their way through it to stand beside Tara. Tara ignored them as well. It wasn’t going to be that way for long however, Baby clearly had something to say. She made a point of checking that the guards were up front talking to the driver and partially obscured by the throng. Tara sighed perceptibly as two of her goons took up position on either side of her, hemming her in. She couldn’t stand crooks that lacked imagination.

“Lovely morning ain’t it Maclay, sleep well?” Baby asked in her clipped working class accent.

“Probably feel asleep reading her love letters,” another women standing in front of Tara sneered.

Tara always fell asleep reading Willow’s letters. She kept her eyes on her boots…they were in definite need of a polish.

“Yeah,” Baby seized on this point and ran with it, “Who they from Maclay? Some little rich bitch up in Sacred Oaks? Probably lying to ‘yo lil arse, telling you she still loves you when she’s really out getting poked by some rich doctor.”

Tara lifted her head and met Baby’s ice-like stare with one of her own. She couldn’t keep her mouth shut any longer, “They’re not love letters, and besides, they’re none of your fuckin’ business.”

Baby growled low in her throat, that wasn’t the way you talked to Baby and Tara knew it…but didn’t care in the slightest. Like lightning, her thick fingers shot out and grabbed a fistful of Tara’s hair. She yanked Tara’s head back and lent over her. Tara averted her eyes so she didn’t have to stare at her but Baby grabbed her chin and forced her to look.

“They’re in my prison so of course they’re my business!” spittle flecked at the corner of her mouth.

As her rank breath assaults me I reflect on my bad luck. Why do I always get the complete and utter psychos for enemies? They’re dangerous, far more dangerous than a sane person. Unpredictable too. You never know what they’re gonna pull. It could just as easily be a knife in the guts...and everything would be all over, just as simple as that.

“Could be that they’re from a young lady by the name of Willow Rosenberg,” Baby clearly enjoyed seeing the way Tara’s eyes widened with shock, they widened even further when Baby withdrew a thick wad of white paper from inside her coveralls. Baby regarded the letters for a moment, waving them in Tara’s face, “There’s a whole lot more where these came from too…smart girl not signing her own name.”

She whacked Tara across the cheek with the letters just to rub it in even further. Her thugs laughed mockingly, the raucous sounds grating in Tara’s ears. Tara watched the letters move in her fat hand, wanting only to have them returned to her but knowing full well they were now gone forever.

They’re only paper you silly girl…only paper. They can’t hurt you.

Baby continued her taunting, “You see, I got some friends on the outside that would love to pay a visit to little Willow…in fact, I expect to be hearing back from them any day now. Maybe they’ll bring me a few souvenirs of their fun.”

Tara let out an angry roar and made to charge at her tormentor. She was seized from either side in vice-like grips, nails digging into her flesh through the material of her coveralls. With her thugs restraining Tara, Baby balled up her fist and with a grunt of effort, drive it straight into Tara’s stomach. Tara doubled over instantly and at the same moment the thugs released their hold on her. She fell face first into the gravel but did not utter a sound. Baby pounced on her within seconds, turning her face so her cheek was pressed on the gravel. She could see Baby looking down on her out of one eye. A thug pressed her boot down on Tara’s cheek to keep her down.

Tara glared, defiant even though her position hardly warranted it, “You’re a lying sack of shit Baby, you have no idea where Willow is and it’s gonna stay that way. Do you think I’d have any use for a stack of paper other than to wipe up the shit that comes out of your mouth?”

Baby was practically foaming at the mouth. With an indignant glare at Tara she passed the letters up to a member of her gang who was standing behind her with a lighter. With a look of malice, the woman set fire to a corner of the wad and let them fall to the gravel in front of Tara. Tara was forced to watch her only source of hope go up in flames, and pretend not to give a damn about it.

“Consider the others torched as well,” Baby ground her knuckles into the back of Tara’s head before she lent down close to her ear and hissed, “You’re never gonna make it out of here alive Maclay…the next time you’re alone and your back is turned, if you step into a dark shadow, if you relax your guard to so much as scratch your arse…you’re dead.”

I could yawn…if I had a dollar for the number of times I’ve heard that threat…well, let’s just say I’d be set for life when I finally get out. This time however, something’s different and I know it. Baby has new orders…get rid of me as soon as possible. Make me suffer…but get rid of me.

“Looking forward to it,” Tara whispered as the boot was removed from her cheek.

The guards were starting to move through the throng, organizing the work party into lines to file onto the bus. Tara felt a rough hand on her back lift her to her feet. Baby’s thugs brushed the gravel from her coveralls as though it had all been a bit of sport. They were smiling with their arms around Tara as the guards walked past.

They eventually let go of Tara to let her join the file which was moving onto the bus. As she shuffled towards the door, Tara kept her narrowed eyes on Baby’s back.

Let them come. One thing I know for sure, I’m taking that fat dyke straight to hell with me.

~~~~~~

The working day passed uneventfully. Tara worked her heart out as usual and took her seat on the bus bound for the prison covered in the day’s dirt. She regarded her reflection in the window, her pale skin spotted with grime. Tara was approaching thirty-two and even in prison, the passing of years had done little to her face. Her cheeks were a little leaner, but her jaw was just as determined and her eyes even harder. She’d never been vain, what cop could afford to be? But she remembered the younger Tara that had captivated women. She had been a rookie cop with an air of invulnerability; aloof and unreachable. Tara had played on it for all it was worth…and by god had it worked.

It hadn’t lasted long, after a year or two she let the corruption and sin that ran rampant through the police force, not to mention the City itself, get to her. Tara remembered the last relationship she’d been in, a whirlwind of a ride with an up and coming young actress. It had been in all the papers, the fact that such a famous actress was involved in a lesbian fling with a rookie detective. It had guaranteed front-page news for months. The starlet had eventually given up and walked out on her, blaming everything on Tara’s dark moods and increasing anger at the world around her. Tara hadn’t bothered to argue with her, she was right. They played a few of her movies at the prison even now and then. Sundays were movie nights…all the dykes loved the actress. Tara sat and watched the films as though she were watching one of her own dreams.

After that it was work, and it was supposed to have been work for the rest of her life. Now there was just this. Breaking rocks and having your soul sucked out through every pore in your body.

“Wonder what slop they’re serving up tonight?” Tara’s seatmate was talking to her.

Tara turned, supposing a little bit of polite chitchat was still possible even though she was a marked woman, she frowned slightly, “What day is it today?”

“Tuesday I think,” the other woman replied.

Tara managed a small smile, “Beef casserole.”

Her seatmate laughed and remarked with scorn, “You mean that shit they pretend is beef casserole, I used to feed my dog better tucker than that.”

Tara didn’t argue, “I know what you mean, you get scared when it starts to taste good.”

Not to mentioned wondering whether it will be your last meal…

The other woman laughed, “I agree, I hate to think what’s in that shit.”

Tara didn’t reply to her last statement, she was too busy staring up at the road ahead where something was blocking the road. As the bus ground to a rather screeching halt she realised it was a beaten up Oldsmobile 88. The prisoners were talking animatedly amongst themselves as they guards stood with their weapons at the ready.

At first there was no sign of movement from the car and it appeared to be empty. One of the guards exited the bus, a heavy 12 gauge at the ready in her hands. The other two remained alert and scanned their surrounds for any hint of trouble while the driver was on the RT, radioing it in. The prisoners were craning their necks to look out the window, always ready to seize an opportunity.

What happened next was too fast for most eyes although Tara saw it all clearly. The attack came not from the car but the rocks on the right side of the road. Something smashed through the window, narrowly missing the driver and taking out a guard, ripping through her neck with deadly accuracy. When it came to a halt, embedded in the side of the bus just in front of her, Tara saw it was a deadly throwing star.

The guard outside merely had time to begin to lift her weapon when a dark shape moved from the evening shadows and ripped her to pieces with a pair of samurai swords. The remaining guards raised their weapons and fired from the open door, the shape darted away and the shot only struck gravel. As both guards pumped their shotguns to fire a second time, the driver stood up, drew a massive magnum from the holster at her waist and fired twice. One guard fell backwards down the stairs, her shoulder a mass of ruptured flesh and bone. The other dropped in the aisle, killed instantly with a giant hole in her forehead, her brains sprayed over a window.

The driver pulled off her trucker cap and tossed it to one side, shaking out her long brown hair from beneath it. It fell about her shoulders like a cape. Her eyes burned with intensity as she trained her weapon on the heckling prisoners. All clamoured to be set free. Tara just sat, calmly watching the brunette with her full red lips. There was a groan of pain as the wounded guard was pulled from the stairs and thrown unceremoniously out onto the road. Another woman boarded the bus, clad head to toe in blood spattered black leather, carrying two blooded swords in her fists. Her blonde hair was tucked up neatly behind her head, revealing a rather sweet face. No doubt it cleverly concealed the hellion within. She sheathed one sword at her waist and tossed a set of keys to the driver.

Tara’s eyes widened when the blonde raised her other sword and pointed directly at her, she didn’t say a word. The brunette unlocked the grate that separated the guards from the prisoners. She then strode purposefully to Tara, ignoring the pleas of the other prisoners to be set free. She stood above Tara, lazily twirling her magnum on her finger. Tara’s seatmate retreated as far back into her seat as she could with a look of stark terror on her face at being right beside the gun-twirling woman.

“You’re Tara Maclay?” she asked bluntly.

Tara studied the woman’s face, her brunette hair framing her olive skin and intense brown eyes and for once in her life she was almost speechless. She managed to find a little of her customary swagger somewhere.

“Depends, are you here to whack me or get me off this bus?” Tara wasn’t even sure which option she preferred.

The woman smiled, “We’re getting the fuck out of here.”

In a matter of seconds, Tara’s shackles were off. In the process her seatmate was freed but she just sat in her seat, too terrified to move. Tara felt distinctly odd as she walked down the aisle, trying her best to ignore the heckling that was being screamed out from behind her, mostly from Baby and her cohorts. As she moved off the bus, she didn’t dare look back at her tormentor. She could picture the twisted, malicious face in her mind anyway. Her feet crunched on the gravel and as she moved away from the bus she was stuck by the sudden and rather frightening realisation that she was free. She stopped walking and stared at the two women climbing into the Oldsmobile. She had absolutely no idea who they were and what they wanted with her. For all she knew it could be Glory’s twisted way of giving her hope and then snatching it away in the blink of an eye.

“Hey!” the brunette shouted, paused about to climb into the driver’s side, “Are you coming or do you wanna go back to prison? The goons will be on their way!”

Tara found herself running towards the car as its engine flared into life, there was no way she was going back. No sooner had she opened the door then the cars wheels spun furiously and launched it down the road. Tara allowed herself one last look back at the bus behind her. It was only when she faced the front and settled back into the leather seat that she realised her heart was beating as though she had just run a mile. She regarded her rescuers…if they could even be called that.

“I’m not being rude, but considering that you know my name…” Tara began and the blonde immediately swivelled in her seat, giving her a piercing stare.

The brunette looked in the rear vision mirror and smiled to reveal a set of pearly white teeth beneath those ruby lips, “Don’t be offended, she doesn’t say much except with those blades of hers…she says a hell of a lot with those. She’s Buffy, and I’m Faith, pleased to meet you, Tara Maclay.”

“Likewise,” Tara breathed, suddenly feeling extremely grateful, “I don’t think I would’ve lasted another week in that place. I don’t get it though…why would you do this for me?”

Faith kept her eyes on the road ahead but she reached for an object in the glove box, “Don’t get me wrong Maclay, you seem real nice and all, but I would never do this for you. I’m doing it as a favour for a real good friend…and she made me promise to give you this as soon as I could.”

Faith tossed a small object back at Tara and she caught it. Tara stared at the little misshapen, grey, furry object in bewilderment. She turned it over in her dirty hands and came face to face with two little button eyes and a few stitches for a nose. She recognised it, the last time she had seen it was in the hands of a little redheaded kid standing beside a hospital bed talking to a wounded cop.

”I only had time to grab Miss Kitty…”

~~~~~~

“You have the nerve to come in here and tell me that fucking dyke that crippled my baby has escaped?”

The three grown men quailed beneath the fury of the impeccably manicured bronze-haired woman standing in front of them. Her scarlet Chanel gown tightly hugging each of curves. Glory Talbot strode forward and delivered a back handed slap to the man nearest her. His eyes watered as she snatched his chin and dug her nails into the flesh of his face.

“Madame Talbot, it was unexpected,” he croaked, ‘We had no idea!”

“You had no idea?” she parroted in a mocking tone, “You fuckin’ morons. It’s your job to have an idea!”

She released her hold and strode back to her leather reclining sofa. She sat down and threw her feet up on it, rubbing her temples as though she had a fierce headache.

The past eight years appeared to have been kind to her, although a closer inspection would have revealed that it was mostly the result of trips to the plastic surgeon. Her cheeks were a little too rounded, her lips too swollen and her breasts most definitely too perky for a woman of her age. She selected a grape from the tray at her fingertips and placed it in her mouth, biting down on it savagely.

“She was supposed to die in there!” Glory raged, spitting out the grape pips onto the floor where a hovering servant immediately scooped them up, “I don’t ask for much from you but I did ask this one little thing. Just how hard is it to knock off an inmate doing hard labour that no one gives a fuck about?”

“We had it planned on the inside…” the suited man began pitifully.

Glory picked up a second grape and threw it at him, hitting him on the forehead, “Well you’ll have to change your plans won’t you? I want her good and dead you hear? Now get out!”

With a chorus of ‘Yes Madame Talbot’ the three men scurried as fast as possible from her presence.

She called out at their retreating backs, “I still want her to suffer mind you! Make sure she does!”

With an almighty huff, Glory fell back amidst her cushions, an immense scowl completely ruining her handsome features. She silently vowed that Tara Maclay would come to rue the day she messed with the Talbot family.


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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby Boadecia » Sun Apr 02, 2006 11:21 pm

:applause again with the gritty imagery and dialogue. Its Great!
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby cantbefredless » Sun Apr 02, 2006 11:54 pm

yay!! so freakin awesome... im really lovin it.. your doing such an awesome job with it,,, i feell like watching sin city right now... then watch buffy... im going to do a dance :dance i would do a real dance but sadly i cant walk on my one foot.. so i online dances are just as good :dance
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby tarebear » Mon Apr 03, 2006 2:31 am

oh my! what a brilliant story you have for us alcy! i'm really engrossed!

tara really had a hard time in prison, but she's free!! i was afraid at first that this two ladies were hired by glory, but it seems that she was rescued as a favor to willow! yey!

i can't wait for the next chapter where i know they'll finally meet face to face again...

i'll definitely keep a watch on this!
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby justin » Mon Apr 03, 2006 2:18 pm

I have to admit that when Tara noticed the new driver watching her I was worried that she would turn out to be working for Glory. I never suspected that she'd be there to get Tara out of prison. Or that they'd have been sent there by Willow.

So how did little Willow Rosenberg meet a couple of people like them. Not only that but to know them so well that they'd be willing to do a favour like this for her. Maybe it has something to do with her ambitions to be a lawyer.

So Tara's away from prison, but she's in no way free from Glory's vengeance. I can see things being difficult for both her and Willow in the future

Looking forward to the next part
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby beanie » Tue Apr 04, 2006 1:55 am

Love this story. Big surprise. Party. :party

Your stories are SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO serious. And SOOOOOOOOOOOOOO tragic. And SOOOOOOO emo. You have got to stop making me mentally tear. It's terrifying to cry (in my head) so much. I think my brain may be depressed!

Or whatever. Ninja Buffy. Pretty fun! I imagined her decked out in the whole ninja thing while she was fighting the prison people. And I also had her making ninja fighting sounds. It was like a MOVIE!

Anyway, the whole concept behind the story is yay. I always liked stories where Tara saves Willow as a young girl and then they meet again, only to find that they are . . . attracted to each other, already hopelessly in love? All that good stuff. Yeah, so you know I can't wait for the whole let's meet without my ninja buddies.

The voiceovers are very cute and funny. Though it's not new to fics, they're not used particularly often, and not as well as you use them. Wait for it, wait for it . . . It was like a MOVIE!

Well I'm off. Though I will be thinking about this story, constantly. It's what I dooo.

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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby wimpy0729 » Tue Apr 04, 2006 8:18 am

Wow Alcy! This is so exciting and interesting. I gotta admit I love the fics where Tara is strong, emotionally and physically. Strong Tara is very sexy. I love the way she stands up to the evil crap in the city and in the prison.

Now I'm really curious about what Willow has really been doing the past eight years as she grew and matured (very nicely I'm sure). Seems she found some very interesting friends along the way.

Great job! Can't wait to see what's next.

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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby JustSkipIt » Tue Apr 04, 2006 8:43 am

Damn! Faith and Buffy as sort of assassins and friends of Willow's. What the hell has Willow been doing in the last 8 years? Are they foster sisters? What? Your depiction of Tara's time in prison is amazingly strong. It's easy to read it and imagine the dirt, the hard work, the terror and resignation. Very well done.
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby Fleiss » Tue Apr 04, 2006 9:01 am

another great update!!
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby BigBlueEyes » Tue Apr 04, 2006 10:21 am

MORE, MORE, MORE!!! Yay I love this, it's amazing. *Does dance* :pinky I can't wait for more!
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby caz » Tue Apr 04, 2006 11:26 am

I hope to God that I never have to go to prison and meet an inmate like Baby Dedera - she scared me witless! One thing I did notice though, she didn't try to take Tara on by herself, she had her followers do it! That is the sign of a true coward. Put Tara and Baby alone in a room together and I know who would walk out - Tara, carrying Baby's spine!

How sweet of Willow to write to Tara. Sounds like the letters were the one thing that was keeping Tara going. How did Baby know Willow's real name and why does she want to find her?

So out of character for Buffy to be the silent type. Is Faith's character different too? I'd say that they work for Willow but after Baby's threat, I'll keep my mouth shut until I see the redhead.

I don't like Glory - can you kill her sooner rather than later. Thanks!

Good update.

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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby sacinema » Wed Apr 05, 2006 10:58 am

Gosh. I so begged to myself not to start reading a new fic again that just began. Than I saw you had a new one. I lasted two updates and finally started reading it. And it was so worth a while. Even without knowing neither the comics nor the film I like it a lot. Hard boiled Tara in a fucked up world. Brilliant scenario. And Willow as the only reason to keep up. I nearly expected her to greet Tara in the car. But that would have been to soapy. Instead you brought Miss Kitty back. Much better choice.

Why do I think this wasn't the last time we met Baby? But Tara will deal with her. She can't stand a chance without her buddys. And I think Glory's minions hired her for dealing with Tara inside prison. That must be the reason she knew Willow's name. But you know what Glory? You are not going to get her. In the end they will get you and your little bastard child molesting son.
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby Alcy » Wed Apr 05, 2006 4:46 pm

Boadecia: thanks very much, I do love grit!

cantbefredless: I’ve got both Buffy and Sin City on DVD so I know what you mean. I hope your sore foot gets better soon!

tarebear: Thanks heaps, Tara’s time in prison was never going to be easy. Glory wanted her to suffer as much as possible. In all the prison films I’ve ever watched (and I watched a lot because my girlfriend loves prison films for some strange reason!) there’s always someone to torment the hero. And yes, Willow and Tara will be meeting up again in the next chapter.

Justin: Anyone new arrival on the job should be viewed with suspicion, and I guess Tara was so used to keeping an eye out for threats to herself. I’m going to answer your questions in upcoming chapters, maybe not the next chapter, but I’ll get there eventually!
And yes, I’d say the pair of them have a pretty big problem even though Tara is out of prison!

beanie: My stories aren’t always serious? Are they? I normally manage to throw in a little bit of humour every now and then. But whatever I do, I don’t set out with the intention of depressing people!
Ninja Buffy rocks, it’s easy to imagine her as a super fast little blur with a pair of swords.
The plot for this story is a lot of fun, I wanted to do something based on the Sin City stories and this one seemed to fit best with W & T, and I’ve never written a fic where they met at different points in their lives, and certainly not one with such a large age gap.
The voiceovers are really hard to write, probably because they’re in the present tense and I don’t normally do that. So I’m glad they sound okay.
I seriously love movies, I have a deep affection and addiction for/to them. I see each of my fics unfolding like a movie in my head so that’s how I try to write it. And having such great imagery from the Sin City movie and comics to start from makes it a lot easier.

wimpy: I love writing strong Tara. It was nice moving straight from Captain Red to this fic because she’s strong in both incarnations, albeit even stronger in this one! And you have to be hard to stand up in Sin City. If I maintained an accurate portrayal of Buffy Tara, she would be eaten alive rather quickly. It’s all about adapting to your reality – which is a concept I love exploring when it comes to our girls. Okay, they were the Willow and Tara we know in the Buffyverse, but what if we took those same characters and dump them in another universe. It’s obvious they can’t remain exactly the same.
And yes, from now we’ll start finding out all about little Willow and what she’s been up to. Thanks very much for reading!

JustSkipIt: I’m taking my cue from the movie here. Faith and Buffy are based on Gail and Miho from the Sin City world respectively. Gail is the leader of the ‘Ladies’, who I’ll explain more about in the next chapter and Miho is a samurai sword wielding assassin who doesn’t say much. So I’ve stolen the general concept but the characters as they play out in my fic are very much still Faith and Buffy. We’ll find out how Willow has come to know them over the next few chapters.
Having never been to prison myself I had to draw on every prison movie I’ve ever seen, and as I said above, it’s quite a lot. It was difficult to write, it could have been even worse but I didn’t want to go that far or spend too much time on it. Thanks very much, I’m having a lot of fun with this one.

Fleiss: thanks very much! Next one coming soon!

BigBlueEyes: Hopefully you shouldn’t have to wait long, I may have the next chapter up before the weekend, I tend not to write at all during the weekend.

caz: I would hope that real prisons are a little bit nicer! Although I too hope that you don’t have to go to one! Exactly, she knew full well that Tara was too tough for her to take on alone. We’ve got to keep the distinctions clear between the heroes and the bad guys. In Sin City, the heroes are always loners with no friends…although I’ve given Tara some friends cos I like Faith and Buffy!
If you notice, Glory had someone on the inside assigned to kill Tara, no doubt this would have been Baby as the biggest and baddest crook in there. She would have fed Baby the info and generally helped her out. Another thing I’ve learned from movies is that the prison Big Bads tend to have even bigger and badder outside help!
It’s definitely out of character for Buffy to be silent, although I did want to stick to the character she is representing in Sin City and I also thought it might be interesting to write Buffy’s actions rather than her words. Throughout Buffy she was always talking, making quips, even when she was fighting – here she’s just got her moves.
I’d like to think that Faith and Gail are somewhat similar characters, both very hard, rough ladies with a penchant for violence and skanky behaviour and I love Faith so she’s pretty much Faith.
And yes, Glory is particularly heinous, but we need someone like that to really up the stakes and add an aura of menace (and madness) to Sin City.

sacinema: I’m glad you did decide to read. I know exactly what you mean though, it’s hard to keep up with reading every fic you enjoy. I know all too often I read fics and don’t leave feedback, I should rectify that!
And I do love this scenario, I love writing tough women characters. And yes, it seemed a little unrealistic that Willow would be in the car, further evidence for this will be in the next chapter.
You know your bad guys well! The really nasty ones always come back to bite you in the arse! Haha, I’ve got you hooked!

Thanks very much for reading and leaving feedback! It's so valuable when it comes to knowing how your writing is perceived and what elements of the story are working! Next update shouldn't be too far away as I'm having fun with this one (although I should really cast my eye back to R & R as well!)
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