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New NC-17 Fic: Under the Sea (Completed September 15th)

Postby SithLordWiccan » Tue Mar 14, 2006 9:24 pm

• Title: Under The Sea
• Author: SithLordWiccan (Alex)
• Email address: decepticons_4_ever@hotmail.com
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• Distribution: Through The Looking-glass (http://www.uberwillowtara.com) Mystic Muse (http://www.mysticmuse.net)
• Rating: NC-17
• Disclaimer: This fic contains situations that may be considered unusual and strange to some. These include (but are not limited to) underwater sex between two females, breathholding and implied drowning. If any of this disgusts you, stop reading now and go find something else to do. This disclaimer is here for a reason: to let me off the hook so that I can feel free to go into as much smutty detail as I want without having to feel guilty about it. All "Buffy" characters belong to Joss Whedon and Mutant Enemy.
• Notes: Thanks to SallyMcFine and Irene for being my betas early on, and to highlandlass25 for stepping up to help me with their departure. I owe them more than words can ever say. They're as much responsible for what you're about to read than I am. They deserve their props, too.
• Summary: Tara is a member of a race of undersea mermaids. Willow is a recreational diver who stumbles into their territory. Smutty underwater loving ensues.
• Uber Setting: Contemporary Supernatural

[center]Chapter One[/center]

Willow Rosenberg sat on the edge of the small boat she had rented from the docks earlier that day, preparing her dive gear for her latest underwater adventure. The area was rather popular with the local crowd, and tourists often came here for fun and relaxation. She hoped that none would come today, however. Today she wanted to be alone.

She looked out to at the silently rippling water as she thought briefly about how much she enjoyed gliding through the weightless environment of the ocean. Her parents were certified divers and had often let Willow come with them when she was little. Of course, they didn’t allow her to go into the water herself, saying that she was too little and that it would be too dangerous. She always stayed on the boat with the captain playing cards.

She couldn’t recall when it was that she started to appreciate the water, but she did know that from her teenage years, she always felt as if she had always belonged there. During high school she would spend what free time she had at the local outdoor swimming pool enjoying the feelings she had as she glided around. Most of the time, however, the place was often too crowded by families, so she wasn’t able to enjoy it as much as she wanted to. It wasn’t that she wasn’t a people person. It was just that sometimes she wanted to be alone. She figured it must have come from her upbringing, when her parents spent so much time traveling with her in tow that she didn’t have time to make any friends.

The only constant in her life had been swimming. Even after high school, when her parents allowed her to come on their trips, she had found ways to indulge herself. No matter where her parents had gone to, there was a swimming pool either at their hotel or within walking distance. On the times that her parents had left her at the hotel while they went diving, she had often gone to the pool and swam around, though she found that the pools there were often more crowded than they were at home. She didn’t mind, but she wished that she could be alone so that she could enjoy herself without having to feel too guilty that someone may be watching.

That led to her decision one night to sneak into the pool after it had closed, just so she could be by herself without having to listen to the constant noise that had often accompanied her daytime visits. Wearing a loose fitting T-shirt and pants and holding a bag containing a mask and fins in one hand, she scaled the fence, dropped as silently as she could to the ground and walked to the edge of the water. Dropping the bag next to her as she reached the edge, she took off her shirt and unbuttoned her jeans, letting them fall down to her ankles. She had taken a moment to examine her body, clad as it was in the blue one piece swimsuit she always wore and never really liked, as it did little more than to highlight just how unremarkable her teenage body was.

She sat down and took her shoes and socks off, putting them, along with her pants, down by the nearby diving board. She then moved to the edge of the pool, soaking her feet in the slightly chilled water. She felt a tingle go up her spine as she moved to don the fins and mask and slid into the water.

She swam around the pool for several minutes, taking several opportunities to dive under the water and run her hands across the pool’s surface. As she dove under the surface and began her third slow lap around the pool, she began to feel something that she hadn’t really felt before.

She was starting to get aroused. The sensuous feel of the water against the bare skin of her arms and legs was sending jolts of electricity down her spine. The cool temperature of the water, amplified by the colder surrounding air, brought forth a shudder. She looked down to see her nipples poking through the fabric of the swimsuit. She gently rubbed them both with the tips of her fingers, sending a spasm through her body.

As she swam to the side of the pool and started to rise, she took the time to think about what she was feeling. It wasn’t something terribly new to her. As a blossoming teenager, she had often felt sexually excited, though it wasn’t until she had read some books at the library that she was able to put her feelings into something tangible. But she had never felt this way while swimming in the water. Maybe it was that she was alone or maybe it was that she was doing something she wasn’t supposed to be doing. She couldn’t tell for sure.

As she broke to the surface, she took a few moments to look around. Although it was night and the chance that anyone passing by was slim, she wanted to make sure that she was alone. After all, breaking into the pool to go swimming by herself was one thing. But what she was about to do was something else entirely.

Taking several breaths, she dove under the surface once again and began to swim to the opposite side of the pool, much like she had been doing. Only this time, she was mainly using her legs to keep her moving forward, as her arms began moving of their own volition across her body. She traced her fingers across her body, sending small pulses across her skin as she teased herself, drawing her fingers away after only a moment’s touch. She brought her left hand up to rub the nape of her neck, teasing it by rubbing with her fingertips one moment, then her entire hand the next. Her right hand circled both of her breasts, gently stroking and pinching the nipples after every third or fourth pass. She felt a burning ache in her lower body around that time and moved her hand down to her lower regions, feeling the beginnings of a growing intensity in her chest as her fingers gingerly grazed her mound.

Reaching the other side of the pool, she surfaced and started some breathing exercises, taking in as much air as she could as she prepared to swim back to the pool’s opposite end. As she did, she reached for the straps of her bathing suit, pulling them down over her shoulders. She paused for a moment before removing the suit completely, allowing it to fall to the pool surface below.

She thought about the situation she was in. Floating in the pool as nude as the day she had come into the world, she knew that she should be embarrassed. After all, empty or full, night or day, being naked in a public swimming pool was something she would never do.

And yet, as Willow took a final few breaths and dove under the surface again, she couldn’t bring herself to care.

Holding onto one of the bars of the nearby pool ladder as well as she could with her right hand, she began to move her left hand in a cursory exploration of her body. She traced a curve around her chest, in between her breasts and lightly rubbing her nipples again, having become painfully erect thanks to the combination of the chilled water and her earlier teasing. She moved her hand back down to gently tickle her thighs, teasing the skin of her sex as she did so. After repeating these motions about three or four times, she moved her hand to her sex again and cupped it in her hand. She gently slid a finger inside of her; gently massage her clit and teasing her inner walls. She paused briefly as she felt the pressure on her chest increase as the waves of pleasure began to course through her.

She struggled to keep herself from breathing, knowing that her orgasm would be more powerful without the lack of oxygen. She couldn’t tell, however, if this was because of the fear of drowning or because of the thrill it was bringing her. These thoughts left her mind as quickly as they had come however as she continued to tease her inner walls, having added two fingers to her damp folds, feeling the wetness inside of her just as easily as she felt the wetness outside.

The urge to breathe was growing more intense as she continued to pleasure herself. Willow knew she was on the verge of a powerful and cataclysmic orgasm. Her moans, which had started off small, began to grow in intensity, magnified by the fact that her mouth was clamped shut in an attempt to keep herself under control. An attempt that was, she found herself admitting, failing spectacularly. The need to breathe was overpowering, but she fought it as she buried her fingers deeper inside herself, desperately trying to bring herself to the powerful climax she knew was coming.

Suddenly she felt an intense shock wave pass through her. She gripped the pool ladder and began to moan loud as an intense orgasm passed through her. This intense emotion, combined with her need to breathe, threatened to cause her to black out. As the last shreds of her powerful underwater orgasm faded, she grabbed onto the opposite bar of the pool ladder and weakly began to climb up.

As she moved to sit on the side of the pool, water dripping down her body, she took a moment to figure out what this all meant. Being the overly curious teenager that she was, she had often looked through things she wasn’t supposed to. That included several sex books. But none of them had ever said anything about this. She slipped back into the water to retrieve her swimsuit, which had floated up from the pool’s bottom and now was at the opposite end of the pool.

That had been nearly twelve years ago, and Willow could still remember it as clearly as if it had happened yesterday. Since then, she had discovered dozens of internet websites that were devoted to Aquaphilia, a term used to describe a form of sexual fetishism which involves images of people swimming or posing underwater and engaging in sexual activity in or under water. Willow could easily admit, and felt proud to do so, that she now considers herself one. ”After all,” she had thought at the time. “What could be more serene and beautiful than the human form balanced gracefully within the gravity free environments below the sparkling surface of a swimming pool, a rainbow colored coral reef, or crystal clear lagoon?"

It was then that she discovered another major revelation about herself. Most of the stories and pictures she found on these websites involved women underwater and in sexual situations. She found that reading these stories and seeing these pictures aroused her and many was the night that she fell asleep masturbating to them. The dual revelation of being both turned on by both water and women was something that she knew would affect the rest of her life.

”Talk about discovering yourself all at once,” she thought as she zipped up her wetsuit top and raised the hood over her head, encasing her upper body in smooth neoprene rubber. She had decided to wear a bright red bikini bottom instead of the wetsuit pants, as it would make any attempt to pleasure herself while she was underwater (and she had no doubt such a situation would arise) much easier.

She had gotten certified as a diver when she was twenty-two, having saved up enough of her money to pay for the lessons herself without her parents’ knowledge. She knew that they would disapprove of Willow’s frequent dives, since they considered it more of a hobby enjoyed once in a while rather than a way of life. She did so partly because of her interest, piqued as it was by her parents’ dives. But mostly it was so she would be able to act out her private underwater fantasies alone.

A small frown creased her features as she moved to strap her buoyancy compensator and its attached tank to her back. Not only had she not told her parents about her pastime, but she never told those who she considered her closest friends. Not even Buffy Summers, herself a certified diver who often accompanied Willow during the relatively few times Willow decided to join others on her underwater adventures. It wasn’t that she didn’t enjoy the company, though. But every time she went into the water, she felt the uncontrollable urge to please herself. And that wasn’t something she knew she could get away with around others. This left her feeling rather isolated, with no one with whom to share the passion for her hobby.

Picking up her mask from the boat’s steering controls, she moved to the side of the boat, putting the mask on and adjusting it to her face. She had always known that she wanted to share her fantasies with someone, but her natural shyness kept her from approaching women she found attractive. She had come to accept it, but she had always hoped.

Or maybe it was just that she hadn’t met the right woman yet.

Sitting down on the deck of the boat, she put the regulator into her mouth and drew several breaths, pleased to see that the equipment was still in tip-top shape. Placing a hand to her face to help secure them, she flipped off the boat and began yet another underwater adventure, completely unaware of the fact that this adventure would be different from all the others that had come before.

**

Tara swam silently in the ocean, admiring the natural beauty of the coral reefs and the tropical fish that swam about in schools. Normally such a sight would be amazing, but to one like her, it was merely an everyday part of the scenery.

Taking another look at her surroundings, however, she realized that she was nowhere near where she should be. It was well past the borders of her that were put in place by her clan of mermaids, and it was one of their most sacred laws never to travel this far beyond them. But she couldn’t help herself. She was often curious about the world outside her own, mostly because few ever spoke to her about it.

Tara had lived her whole life under the ocean. Despite the common stereotypes associated with mermaids by the surface dwellers, she and the others of her clan had nothing that in any way resembled a tail. They appeared to be, in all aspects, relatively human in appearance. The only features giving away her aquatic nature were a series of small greenish scales, which stood out in contrast to her alabaster skin. These scales resembled those found on several smaller marine animals such as fishes. They were grouped together in several areas across her body; particularly her head, where they emerged from her hairline for several centimeters. Her thighs and feet were also scaled, in addition to the sides of her neck; where, also, a series of gill slits the length of about two inches, allowed her to breathe in the underwater environment. In all other aspects, however, she looked very much like a human woman.

It was a comparison that those of her race were loath to admit, however. She knew that her clan of mermaids held a distrust of humans, stemming from an incident in the past that was long forgotten. She didn’t realize why, though, and had often wanted to meet a human, knowing that they sometimes traveled down to the ocean using some form of magic that she couldn’t understand. And as a practicing mage, she was familiar with most forms of mermaid magic.

She continued to swim majestically through the ocean floor, one hand lazily tracing across her nude body as the other moved to caress the schools of fish in various shades of color and spongy coral as she floated passed them. She took a moment to examine her body and realized that it was nothing that she had to be ashamed about when it came to her body. With long, golden blonde hair that flowed in the ocean currents, long shapely legs that ended in webbed feet that made her a powerful swimmer, and a generously sized chest that, more often than not, was kept hidden by her beautiful blonde locks, she was the perfect picture of the typical underwater goddess.

Suddenly she saw something out of the corner of her eye. Turning her head toward the movement, she was surprised to see a body moving off in the opposite direction. It was then that she realized that it was a human! The thought filled her with dread, as she had heard rumors from others in her clan that humans were both disruptive and destructive. She knew she should return to the meeting place to inform the Elders of what was going on.

Instead, her curiosity was piqued. She knew that it might be dangerous, and that she would most likely be punished for doing so, but she couldn’t help herself. There was something about this human that called to her. She decided to move to investigate, using the nearby coral as cover. After all, she figured, she always wanted to meet a human. This might be her only chance.

**

Willow glided silently through the ocean, the only sound the rhythmic pulsing from her regulator as she breathed in and out. She watched as the bubbles traveled to the surface, a tingle of excitement growing as she did. She knew what that meant, and she wasn’t at all surprised. Whenever she entered the ocean recently, she had felt an intense desire that begged to be released. It made her long, not for the first time, for someone to share her passion with.

She began to trace her left hand over her body, sending a jolt through her body. She gently teased herself this way as her right hand slowly made its way to her bikini bottoms. As she did this, her left hand grasped the zipper of her wetsuit top and gently began to pull it down. Stopping halfway, she reached inside and began to gently caress her breasts, feeling her nipples grow and harden as her teasing brought them to attention. Her other hand dipped into her bikini and gently cupped her mound. She shuddered as she felt the growing wetness that yearned to be released.

She was all too happy to comply, gently inserting a finger into her sex and began to caress her inner folds.

**

”Oh, goddess!” Tara thought as she watched the human from a safe distance as she fondled herself. ”I never knew a human could be so…be so…”

She couldn’t think of any way to put her thoughts into words, as the actions being put on display in front of her defied all conventional explanation. She had often spied on humans as they made their way through the area, but she had never seen one so engaged.

She had always had a weakness for female mermaids. This, combined with her talents in magic, had made her unpopular with the majority of her clan. But there were those with whom she enjoyed special moments, where they could discuss whatever was on their minds and practice their Craft. However, they had drawn the proverbial line in the sand at acting on the feelings that they had shared for one another, for fear of bringing the others' wrath down upon them all.

But as she stared at this human, she felt something for her, a feeling that went beyond simple lust. It felt half like a yearning, half like a desire. What caused this desire, she found herself wondering. What was it that was causing this pull she felt toward the human? Tara thought that it was that, unlike most other humans she saw in the area, she was alone. She was often alone, as well, though this was because she wanted it that way. Did this human have desires, too? Was she here alone because of some repression that the surface world had brought upon her?

She gazed intently at the human as she continued her exploration of her body. And she noted that, it was a remarkable body. Modestly proportioned, with shapely legs and a small yet ample chest. This, sadly, was all that she could see, as much of her upper body, along with her lower regions, were covered in clothing. Tara felt regret that she couldn’t see more of her body and that she had felt the need to cover herself. The ocean was a place to be natural, to be free.

She lost her train of thought as she became aware of the fact that her hands, seemingly having detached themselves from the rational part of her brain, were moving across her body in much the same fashion as the human’s. The thumb and forefinger of her left gently pinched the nipples of her exposed breasts until they became the size of small peaks. Her hands then raised to gently knead them over and over again, sending ripples of pleasure coursing through her body, inflaming her soul. She never thought that anyone could bring out such feelings in her, especially not a surface dweller.

She paused as she opened her eyes to see the human gently begin to unzip the clothing that concealed her upper chest, and silently gasped as she caught sight of two of the most perfectly sized breasts that she had ever seen in her life. They, much like everything else about this human, seemed too good to be true.

Her right hand slowly lowered to her sex, the throbbing and feelings becoming too much for her to ignore anymore, her thoughts on the shape of the human’s luxuriously formed chest and how much she would enjoy fondling, nipping and gently stroking them. As that last thought burned into her brain, she began to rub her sex, sending two fingers inside, following up quickly with a third. The small scales on her fingertips helped send her body afire, the heat of her passion flowing out over her as her wetness joined with the natural wetness of the ocean around her.

**

Willow’s hand was moving of its own volition now, all pretense of calm or patience abandoned as her fingers impacted against her inner walls, sending insurmountable pleasure through her body and forcing her to draw air more quickly than she would have liked. She was close now, she could feel it. She continued to send her fingers deeper into herself, her other hand lazily climbing back up her body.

Her moaning, muffled as it was by the regulator, began to grow in intensity. Her breaking point was near, and she only increased her determination. Her hips began to buck violently as she felt her passion explode from her, her self made wetness joining with the natural wetness of the sea.

**

Feeling herself coming to the breaking point, Tara increased her thrusting, bucking her pelvis to help bring herself closer to climax. She could feel the tidal wave of pressure beginning to form, begging to be unleashed, and suddenly, without any warning, it had. Tara threw herself back into the ocean and moaned in ecstasy as spasm after powerful spasm washed over her.

**

As Willow began to slowly swim away, her body still tingling in the throws of her orgasm, she realized that she was in no hurry to bring her underwater adventure to a sudden and, she had to admit, pleasurable end. She noted, however, that she didn’t want to do it out here in the open where other divers happened along. She looked around for somewhere she could be alone and continue to explore, and spotted an entrance to a cave nearby.

She checked her air supply, found that she had enough to last for quite some time, and made her way to the cave entrance.

**

As her orgasm subsided, Tara realized that her cry of passion could have alerted the human to her presence and she moved quickly to find if she had been noticed. She was relieved to find, after a few moments, that she was still underwater, though her pleasure at seeing her was soon changed to dread as she saw that her destination was a nearby cave.

Tara knew the cave all too well. It was a superstitious place among her clan, where mermaids had gone and never returned. Her mother had gone several years ago to disprove this theory, and never returned. She didn’t know what had happened to her, and those she asked merely said that it was “surface dweller aggression”.

Tara hadn’t believed that. There was no way that she could. But it didn’t help that she still carried a fear about the place. And that the human was now making her way there.

She had been planning to leave to tell the Elders, but she knew that to do so would abandon the human to die. And this was something that, despite her nature, she could not allow. She felt…something for this human, and it just wouldn’t allow her to come to harm.

Moving cautiously, and keeping to the coral as much as she could, she kicked her legs and began to follow the human into the cave.

**

Taking a length of rope from one of the pouches on her buoyancy compensator, Willow wrapped it along the shaft of a nearby piece of coral, and entered the cave, holding onto the rope with her left hand as she swam slowly, her right hand moving down beneath her bikini bottom to one again begin rubbing her sex.

After several minutes, she came to a stop and rested on the ocean floor, sitting cross legged with her back to the cave wall, the tank clanking as it impacted the surface. She let go of the rope in order to free her hand, bringing it up to unzip her wetsuit top the rest of the way, exposing her breasts to the cooled water, her nipples still hard from her earlier teasing. She brought the thumb and forefinger of her left hand up to gently pinch them, the intensity of her touch causing her to squeal each time she did. Her right hand, meanwhile, continued its massage of her precious parts, slowly at first, then more rapidly, two fingers gently inserting to caress herself once more.

Her moans, soft and muffled with her regulator in the way, began to grow in frequency and loudness as the fingers brought her peaks to attention and her sex to a furiously painful wetness just straining for release. She bit down on the regulator’s mouthpiece as her hand vibrated faster, her moans increasing in intensity as her orgasm began to build.

After several more seconds, she lost control and began to arch her back; her breaking point reached as wave after wave of intense pleasure was sent through her body. She arched her back again and again, the intensity building, then slowing and finally ceased.

As she began to breathe normally again, she figured that she could probably bring herself to another peak of ecstasy, but she realized that she might not have enough air left. She moved her hand back to the cave wall and began to look for the rope, only to realize that it had disappeared.

”Where did the rope go?” she thought, bubbles nervously pulsing from her lips. ”How am I going to get out of here now?”

After a few moments of searching (and failing to find) the rope, she began to panic internally as she realized that she was completely lost in the middle of an ocean cave with no idea how to get back. Every path she could find only seemed to send her deeper into the cave. She should have been aware of this, but her desperation to find a way out blinded her to all other thoughts. The only thing she did think about was how her situation could get any worse.

Then she attempted to take a breath…and didn’t draw any air.

Panicking, she reached for her air pressure gauge, and found that it was near empty. ”How?!” she panicked. ”I had plenty of air. Unless…”

She thought briefly back to her intense orgasm, how her back had arched itself violently…and only now realizing that it must have damaged her tank. She was so intent on trying to find a way to escape that she hadn’t realized it…until now.

With blind panic, she began to scramble back the way she had come, hands clawing at the rock around her in a feeble attempt to move faster. She began to feel an intense tightening in her chest, though this time Willow was not pleased about it. Instead, she knew that, unless she found means other than sexual release to make this pressure go away, she would die down here. And no one would know.

**

Tara had followed the human inside of the cave, after pulling curiously at the piece of rope stuck to the coral near the entrance until she had tugged it completely out. She wondered what it was, but her more immediate problem was to help the human.

As she entered the cave, she was glad that her natural attenuation to the water would her to track her as she moved deeper into the cave. Her empathic senses began to pick up danger, however, and she began to increase her strides.

”I hope she’s all right,” she thought to herself. She couldn’t tell for sure, but a sudden sense of danger ahead didn’t help to assuage her fears, so she kicked her legs faster.

She turned left to find the human racing towards her, hand clutched on an oval shaped device over her mouth as she attempted to breathe from it. Tara didn’t know what she was doing, but she could tell from her movements that she was panicking about something.

It was then that the human’s head looked up at her, emerald green eyes reflected in the mask that she wore. Eyes that quickly widened in fear at the sight of the unknown person in front of her. She backpedaled several feet before realizing that nothing awaited her back there, but realizing that she could go no further, she muffled some sort of exclamation, gesturing wildly to the device she had in her lips.

Tara nodded, knowing that she had to take extra precautions. She gestured with one hand and spoke an ancient chant that would allow the human to fall into a sleep-like trance until she could get her to the surface.

The human looked quizzically at her for a second before falling limp. As Tara moved to collect the human in her arms, she checked to see if she was all right. She was somewhat glad to see that, expect for her inability to breathe (due to the spell sending her into a trance like state), she was all right.

She also noted, with some surprise, how warm the human’s skin, where it was exposed, felt against hers. And how much pleasure she found in holding her against her own bare skin. But these feelings would have to wait. She knew that the spell she had cast would not last long, and she would need to take her somewhere she would be safe when she awakened. Flicking her powerful legs and holding onto the human like a long lost treasure, Tara headed back the way she had come, knowing that there was a place nearby where she could tend to her.

And perhaps, if all went well, even learn more about her.
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Re: New NC-17 Fic: Under the Sea

Postby Emms » Tue Mar 14, 2006 11:06 pm

Second dibs!

I don't know what I can say about chapter one that I haven't already said via PM...but I'll give it a go. :lol

Even though water smut isn't really my thing, I have to give you props for writing it so well. It is completely believable that Willow would feel drawn to water...especially since we know that Tara is a mermaid. It's a gravitational thing. (sorry if that didn't make sense. It did in my head...but that's not saying much. )

I'm interested to see how all this is going to go down with Tara in the process of rescuing Willow from a watery grave I’m curious to find out how the other mere folk are going to handle that. Will they kick Tara out of the sea? Or will they accept Willow into their deep sea home? So many questions…

Great job on chapter one! I can’t wait for chapter 2!

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Re: New NC-17 Fic: Under the Sea

Postby Boadecia » Wed Mar 15, 2006 4:55 am

This sonds like its going to be great! Looking forward to the next chapter :D
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Re: New NC-17 Fic: Under the Sea

Postby sacinema » Wed Mar 15, 2006 6:10 am

What a hot and spicy nice little peace of work. :clap :clap :clap Keep on going. Wow. Can't wait till they discover together the pleasure of - how did you call it - Aquaphilia? I think they will soon because Willow is a curious girl and Tara already has the hots for her.
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Re: New NC-17 Fic: Under the Sea

Postby Willowtree252 » Wed Mar 15, 2006 11:52 am

oh ya I am so HOT AND WET mission acomplished. more more oh please more and :wtkiss soon
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Re: New NC-17 Fic: Under the Sea

Postby FineyMcFine » Wed Mar 15, 2006 8:37 pm

Hey Sith - yay for a new story! I like how you set this up with the present-day Willow going for a dive and then immediately into flashback to give us a very clear and realistic picture of how her aquaphilia first made itself known and how it developed through her lonely adolescence.

Poor Willow is very isolated. I can see why she didn't want to tell her parents or Buffy about it. That's the kind of thing I'd only share with someone who would be likely to want to share it back. And speaking of which, hoorah for mermaid Tara! With the conflict between the mermaid race and humans, there's a definite Romeo and Juliet feel about the situation you've set up here.

It's HIGH DRAMA that Willow almost drowned. Thank goodness for the curious and far-ranging Tara or else this would have been a short story indeed. ;)
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Re: New NC-17 Fic: Under the Sea

Postby Darth Pacula » Wed Mar 15, 2006 10:42 pm

G'day, Sith. Well now ... that was ... um ... different. Can't say I've read anything like that before, but hey, I can probably say that about a lot of things.

Nice starting point, with plenty of smutty goodness (that would probably be out of place in Star Witches, but that's just my opinion) and an interesting plot hook. Tara as a mermaid is conjuring an interesting mental image in my deranged little mind, and hey, anything that requires her to be in her birthday suit pretty much all of the time gets a big thumbs up from me. :-D

I gotta say, Willow's little hobby is seeming a tad risky to me. Diving alone is risky enough, but when you add in ... er ... manual manipulation of the fiddly bits ... well, lets just hope no sharks come along.

Nice as the smut is, I think I actually prefered the traces of plot you worked in there, with antagonism between the humans and the mer-people? (stupid PC tendencies)

Oh, and I think I have to disagree with Sally. Sure, Tara saved her, but Willow might not have been in as much trouble if Tara hadn't pulled out her guide rope. But maybe that's just me being a jerk. :-D

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Re: New NC-17 Fic: Under the Sea

Postby SithLordWiccan » Wed Mar 15, 2006 11:20 pm

Irene:

Dibbing away!! :flower


I'm still waiting on those dibs, mi amiga. ;) :blush

Emms:

Even though water smut isn't really my thing, I have to give you props for writing it so well.


Thanks for that, though like I said, half the praise should be divided between me and the super perfect beta team of Irene and Sally. They've really helped me out here.

It is completely believable that Willow would feel drawn to water...especially since we know that Tara is a mermaid. It's a gravitational thing. (sorry if that didn't make sense. It did in my head...but that's not saying much. )


It kinda makes sense to me, yeah. The way I had it, Willow's all alone on the surface (given her hobby and how she decides to "indulge" in it) and Tara's all alone in the ocean (while not as completly isolated from the world as Actual Human Canon Tara was before she met Willow, is still alone in her own world). It makes sense that they would be drawn to one another, regardless of the circumstances under which they do so.

I'm interested to see how all this is going to go down with Tara in the process of rescuing Willow from a watery grave


You won't have to wait very long, I'm sure. ;)

I’m curious to find out how the other mere folk are going to handle that. Will they kick Tara out of the sea? Or will they accept Willow into their deep sea home? So many questions…


Well, you can keep asking them. Just don't expect an answer, because I'm not gonna let the cat out of the bag. At least, not yet.

Boadecia:

This sonds like its going to be great!


I hope so. Glad you like it.

sacinema:

What a hot and spicy nice little peace of work. :clap :clap :clap


Thanks. I've long gone under the assumption that I can't write Willow and Tara in a smutty situation. They say you should write what you know, though. And I know quite a bit (more than I really should, to be honest) about underwater sexual escapades, so this seemed like a natural way to explore Willow and Tara in a new and original smutty world.

Dianneswillowtree:

oh ya I am so HOT AND WET mission acomplished.


Well, I certainly wasn't setting out to do that, though I'm not saying that I'm not glad for the compliment. :blush

Sally:

I like how you set this up with the present-day Willow going for a dive and then immediately into flashback to give us a very clear and realistic picture of how her aquaphilia first made itself known and how it developed through her lonely adolescence.


I'm glad that you thought I was able to capture the scene well. I actually have a little experience in that area, as Willow, at least in this way, is very much myself in a similar situation (though I've never gone and...well, you know...) I didn't know such a thing existed until a few months ago.

Poor Willow is very isolated. I can see why she didn't want to tell her parents or Buffy about it. That's the kind of thing I'd only share with someone who would be likely to want to share it back.


Yeah. That's very much what the whole Aquaphilia community is about. It's not exactly one of the more well known fetishes out there, which makes it hard to talk about it unless its with someone who feels the same way.

And speaking of which, hoorah for mermaid Tara! With the conflict between the mermaid race and humans, there's a definite Romeo and Juliet feel about the situation you've set up here.


I wasn't really influenced by anything when setting this thing up, but I'm glad that you can see an influence there, though I should say that Willow and Tara will end up better than Romeo and Juliet did.

It's HIGH DRAMA that Willow almost drowned. Thank goodness for the curious and far-ranging Tara or else this would have been a short story indeed. ;)


Yes, that scene is highly dramatic. This scene was partially inspired by a scene from the movie "Black Widow", in which Debra Winger and Theresa Russell's characters go diving and Winger's character runs out of air.

Paul:

Well now ... that was ... um ... different.


Different? Well, I'm glad you thought it was "different", though I'm a little worried about your definition of "different". At least in this case.

Nice starting point, with plenty of smutty goodness (that would probably be out of place in Star Witches, but that's just my opinion) and an interesting plot hook.


Glad you thought I was able to do the smut good. Like I said, I never thought I could write smut as good as Sally or Chris or about half a dozen other people who post here. I like to think I've carved out a niche in the smut category.

And I really wanted to write a W/T story with smut, and "Star Witches" doesn't fit into that category. So...from the depths of a deranged mind are plot bunnies formed. ;)

Tara as a mermaid is conjuring an interesting mental image in my deranged little mind, and hey, anything that requires her to be in her birthday suit pretty much all of the time gets a big thumbs up from me. :-D


I'm glad you think so. I feel the same way. And if there's an artist out there who would be willing to help commit that to paper, then what are you waiting for? Let me know! :D

I gotta say, Willow's little hobby is seeming a tad risky to me. Diving alone is risky enough, but when you add in ... er ... manual manipulation of the fiddly bits ... well, lets just hope no sharks come along.


Well, yeah. It's dangerous. But then again, that's what makes it so arousing. A lot of smut fic like this I read works under the same principle.

Nice as the smut is, I think I actually prefered the traces of plot you worked in there, with antagonism between the humans and the mer-people? (stupid PC tendencies)


Believe me, I can hear the "Smut With A Plot? That will never work. How can you pull it off?" in that statement. Let's just say, for now, that I've got a pretty good idea...or three.

Oh, and I think I have to disagree with Sally. Sure, Tara saved her, but Willow might not have been in as much trouble if Tara hadn't pulled out her guide rope. But maybe that's just me being a jerk. :-D


Or maybe its you blabbing away about an upcoming plot point and not realizing it. ;)

Anways, I'm glad you're all enjoying the fic. Chapter Two will (hopefully) go up tomorrow. :)
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Re: New NC-17 Fic: Under the Sea

Postby Artemis » Thu Mar 16, 2006 1:54 am

Mmm, yum! :x Tara the mermaid and Willow the water-lover should be quite the hot and steamy couple. Once they stop accidentally endangering each other, and Willow comes to terms with the existence of mermaids, in any case.

I really like the added element of Willow's aquaphilia. It's very sexy on its own terms, and a little unusual, in that smutfics (I'm not excluding my own, either) can sometimes be kind of omni-philial, with Willow and Tara getting more or less equally aroused by everything and anything they try, rather than either of them having a specific fetish that gets them going like nothing else. Of course, a lot of people do have specific fetishes (self-confessed Taraphiliac here... what? It's a valid term), and that seems to add depth (forgive the pun) to Willow and her underwater antics. On top of that, it really makes 'Tara is a mermaid' much more than just a plot gimmick - Willow's love for all things wet and swimmy is obviously going to play a huge role in how she sees Tara.

As for the hot steamy underwater sex, bring it on :D Funny coincidence, after writing Gold, with Tara as her winged/tailed self, the notion of doing a mermaid fic naturally came to mind, but I never locked onto an idea I felt worked, as more than just "I'm a mermaid, let's make out!" - and now I don't have to, because you've done the concept proud. Now I just need to stop procrastinating and get onto that dryad idea I had a while back...

In conclusion: yay for Under the Sea, and may there be many more chapters full of interesting mermaid/human interaction. And not just of the smutty variety, I like the backgrounds Willow and Tara have from their respective 'clans', and it'll be interesting to see them coming to terms with each other. But smut is good too :lol
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Re: New NC-17 Fic: Under the Sea

Postby SithLordWiccan » Thu Mar 16, 2006 2:03 am

Chris:

Mmm, yum! :x Tara the mermaid and Willow the water-lover should be quite the hot and steamy couple. Once they stop accidentally endangering each other, and Willow comes to terms with the existence of mermaids, in any case.


Well, of course they will. You know, after they stop endangering each other. ;)

I really like the added element of Willow's aquaphilia. It's very sexy on its own terms, and a little unusual, in that smutfics (I'm not excluding my own, either) can sometimes be kind of omni-philial, with Willow and Tara getting more or less equally aroused by everything and anything they try, rather than either of them having a specific fetish that gets them going like nothing else.


Yeah, I've read a lot of W/T fics where they would go at it like...well, kittens at the (apparently literal) drop of a hat, so I think its fun to do a fic that revolves around a specific fetish, especially since its one that I happen to have some knowledge of (I have mentioned that I'm an Aquaphile too, right?)

Of course, a lot of people do have specific fetishes (self-confessed Taraphiliac here... what? It's a valid term), and that seems to add depth (forgive the pun) to Willow and her underwater antics. On top of that, it really makes 'Tara is a mermaid' much more than just a plot gimmick - Willow's love for all things wet and swimmy is obviously going to play a huge role in how she sees Tara.


It's like I said before. Willow = Water lover. Tara = Water person. It just works for some reason. ;)

As for the hot steamy underwater sex, bring it on :D


Oh, it's coming. (Yes. Make jokes if you want. That's what I'm here for.)

Funny coincidence, after writing Gold, with Tara as her winged/tailed self, the notion of doing a mermaid fic naturally came to mind, but I never locked onto an idea I felt worked, as more than just "I'm a mermaid, let's make out!" - and now I don't have to, because you've done the concept proud.


Oh, dude. You gotta be kidding me. First I rip off your idea to do a Star Wars fic, and now this? What is wrong with me? Some people are going to start thinking that we're clones or something.

(I should probably point out that I meant the above in the nicest possible way. Please don't hurt me.)

In conclusion: yay for Under the Sea, and may there be many more chapters full of interesting mermaid/human interaction. And not just of the smutty variety, I like the backgrounds Willow and Tara have from their respective 'clans', and it'll be interesting to see them coming to terms with each other. But smut is good too :lol


Don't worry. Like I said, this is "Smut With A Plot", so expect to see a lot of action (of both kinds).
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Re: New NC-17 Fic: Under the Sea

Postby VixenyTarasHot » Thu Mar 16, 2006 4:56 pm

So I'm.. very curious about this story... I'm not much into the oh... is it called science fiction? The whole star wars and mermaids and all that kind of stuff never really intrigued me, but this story... it's got me curious.

So I shall stick around and see what comes of it. Ok... mostly because its smutty but.. all good. ;)

Anyways, I'm awaiting the next update!

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Re: New NC-17 Fic: Under the Sea

Postby tarebear » Thu Mar 16, 2006 9:34 pm

hey sith!

what an interesting story indeed. i have never read anything quite like this before and you definitely got me hooked with the whole idea.... i absolutely love star witches and i'm sure i'm gonna love this one as well... this story has so much possibilities and i can't wait to read where you are taking us with this one...

more soon i hope!
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Re: New NC-17 Fic: Under the Sea

Postby Willow Watcher » Fri Mar 17, 2006 8:48 am

Oh I totally agree with tarabear. Never thought about anything having to do with uh...well...ya know the water thing. :sheep BUT I don't think I'm gonna try it. Willow may be able to hold her breath but as for me, I'd definately drown. Ya know, spashing around, turning blue...not a good look for me! This is a very interesting start. I hope you update soon.
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Re: New NC-17 Fic: Under the Sea

Postby beanie » Fri Mar 17, 2006 11:57 am

Well slap my bottom and call me . . . well slap it again a second. What an . . . unexpected pastime from our Willow. Unexpected yes. Also SAUCY. They're both so saucy it tickles me. And ooh, I like the way your mermaids look better than the Disney version. Were yours too risque for our perverts in the Disney studios? I liked how you really started from the beginning for Willow's saucy hobby. It unfolded like a little itty bitty story that was, well, HOT. And I felt my oxygen becoming an issue when Willow started panicking in the cave. Also is that cave like the evil cave cuz there's a monster living in it or something? At first I thought because it was so deep and easy to get lost in, people could never find their way out like a labryinth, but Tara came out. So what's the deal-io? :-D

It's fun. More more more! :bounce

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Re: New NC-17 Fic: Under the Sea

Postby SithLordWiccan » Fri Mar 17, 2006 12:57 pm

Hi, guys. Sorry. This isn't an update (though I hope to have one up later tonight, so keep watching this space). Just wanted to say thanks for the feedback. And to let anyone interested in finding out what mermaid Tara looks like know that they should go check out my fic @ Chris' website (http://www.uberwillowtara.com). The title graphic says it all, I think.

Anyways, responses:

Ashleigh:

So I'm.. very curious about this story...


I imagine you are. Don't worry. Everything will be explained. :)

Irene:

Maybe I shouldn't dib anymore...I seem to take forever to get back and leave fb...darn real life.


I know how you feel.

Under the sea, under the sea
Darlin' it's better down where it's wetter
Take it from me.
Up on the shore they work all day
Out in the sun they slave away
While we devoting full time to floating
Under the sea


Now you see why I tried to come up with a better title for this fic. I mean, while I thought the title was rather good, it evoked this image a bit too readily for my liking. I mean, I liked "The Little Mermaid" as much as the next kid, but Disney watered (pardon the pun) fairy tales wasn't exactly the image I wanted to invoke here.

I have mentioned this to you before and I will mention it again so everyone knows: You my dear have a very imaginitive and creative mind. :-D


:blush It means a lot for me to hear that. It really does.

Never had I thought that there was such a thing as Aquaphilia, but I suppose if people find feet arousing, why not water?


Yeah. I never figured such a thing existed, though I must admit that I always found women underwater arousing for some reason...

Your introduction to Willow's water 'fetish' was well written. The flashback into how Willow first became aware of this particular part of herself is believable. She was alone and doing something she greatly enjoyed. At the same time you have a young adolescent girl, discovering new sensations and 'feelings'. I am impressed with how well you captured this aspect of a young girls life.


That part I think needed to be done, as it would make the rest of the fic more believable. I figured that if I could establish Willow as a lover of all things underwater, it would make her (eventual) attraction to Tara merely an extension of her already present underwater passion.

Now, going swimming without a back up plan? Bad Willow. There should always be a back-up plan incase you find yourself in a hairy predicament.


Well, you know how Willow is. She's normally always has a plan for such situations. But when you're caught up in the moment... ;)

Let's talk about Tara for a sec...Yummy is all that my brain is able to come up with...wait...there's more...Super Yummy! :x


Yeah. Mermaid Tara = Muy Yummy. :blush

I'm left wondering what is it that the merpeople have against the humans. You mentioned a specific event that occured long ago.


I can promise that this will be explained sooner rather than later. And that I can guarantee that it's not what you think it is. (I'm known for being rather...unconventional when it comes to plot stuff, as you've seen from "Star Witches")

Life is life, whether you are a surface dweller or living in the ocean, Tara understands that life is precious.


Yes, she is. And its what makes her rather secretive and closed off to most of her fellow mermaids. Even those she practices magic with find her odd, though, so it's not like she's well liked among even those who are her friends.

Remember when I thought she'd have a tail... :lol . You memmer...memmer?


Yeah, I remember. And I'll pay you whatever you want to never bring it up again. ;)

I'd like to thank you Sith for allowing me to a part of this story. This is all you, I just added what little I could to help you get this fic posted. Sally has done a remarkable job...you two deserve most of the credit. :blush


Don't sell yourself short, Irene. Like I said, you're as much responsible for helping me out here as Sally is.

Cecile:

Glad to see you like this fic (and Star Witches as well). Yeah, this fic is rather interesting, and I'm glad to get you hooked.

Willow Watcher:

BUT I don't think I'm gonna try it. Willow may be able to hold her breath but as for me, I'd definately drown. Ya know, spashing around, turning blue...not a good look for me!


Yeah. Although smut fic usually glamorizes it, its not exactly the sort of thing one should really try in real life. Glad you like it. :)

Beanie:

What an . . . unexpected pastime from our Willow. Unexpected yes. Also SAUCY. They're both so saucy it tickles me.


Yeah. It's rather unusual. And saucy, too. Like I said before, I happen to know a lot about this particular fetish (and they always say you should write what you know), so it makes it rather easier for me to write.

And ooh, I like the way your mermaids look better than the Disney version. Were yours too risque for our perverts in the Disney studios?


Yeah. I heard that Disney wanted to use my mermaid designs, but tossed them at the last minute. Luckily, I was able to find them (don't ask me how), and so here we are. :)

I liked how you really started from the beginning for Willow's saucy hobby. It unfolded like a little itty bitty story that was, well, HOT.


Thanks. Like I said, if that part worked, the rest of the fic becomes easier. :)

Also is that cave like the evil cave cuz there's a monster living in it or something? At first I thought because it was so deep and easy to get lost in, people could never find their way out like a labryinth, but Tara came out. So what's the deal-io? :-D


Patience, young one. All will be revealed in time. :)
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Re: New NC-17 Fic: Under the Sea

Postby willowspiritus » Fri Mar 17, 2006 1:21 pm

Very nice! You write a very graphic hot underwater picture :-D
Glad to see there will be an update soon. I cant wait to see how Willow will react to her saviour and in return Tara to the babble fest that will probably happen. I was wondering about the communication and how you will make that work. Maybe talking with they're hands because they seem really handy ;-)

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Re: New NC-17 Fic: Under the Sea

Postby Boschi » Sat Mar 18, 2006 3:40 pm

Wowza. Yes, "saucy" is definitely the word for wet little Willow.
Much fun, even the cavehanger (it is too a word) ending.

Looking forward to more,

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Re: New NC-17 Fic: Under the Sea

Postby SithLordWiccan » Sat Mar 18, 2006 10:14 pm

willowspiritus:

Very nice! You write a very graphic hot underwater picture :-D


Thanks. It helps that I've seen a lot of images like that before.

Thanks for another great story!


You're welcome.

You're welcome. :)

Boschi: Yeah, we Willow is hot, isn't she? :blush

Anyways, update to be up in a minute. (Yeah, I know its late.)
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Re: New NC-17 Fic: Under the Sea

Postby SithLordWiccan » Sat Mar 18, 2006 10:17 pm

[center]Chapter Two[/center]

The ocean held many secrets, most of which, quite surprisingly, lay in plain sight for anyone to see. As Tara swam towards the exit of the cave with the human still in her arms, she was more than grateful of that fact, because it meant that there was nowhere in the ocean more safe for the two of them than her secret hiding place. Tara found the small cave when she was a teenager. Its location is very close to the borders of her clans underwater city, and was far enough out of the way for her to be alone, yet close enough to her clan to feel safe. Many was the time she had swam there to think about the greater mysteries of the ocean world: Why she felt so alone, why she could not confide in others her deepest desires and most of all, if there was anyone in the world who she could feel love for.

Her legs kicked fiercely as she sped into the cave, knowing that the spell she enacted would not last long. Tara hoped that it was the spell that had caused her unconsciousness. She didn’t want to believe that she had accidentally caused the death of an innocent. She would never be able to explain it to the others. Or forgive herself.

She saw the cave wall above her head vanish and replaced with water. She knew then that she had made it into the cave’s air pocket. She headed for the surface, feeling her arms and legs beginning to ache. The weight of this human and of the bulk attached to her slowed her down and caused a rather large drag on her ability to swim.

As Tara broke through the surface of the water, she became aware of another ache. Like the others, it was due to the presence of the human. Unfortunately, this ache was completely different and was more difficult to ignore. Now was not the time for it, though, and she knew it. Better to deal with that problem later, if for no other reason than to ensure the human’s continued survival. Once she was awake and breathing, then she could deal with these feelings and their possible ramifications.

Loosening her unnaturally tight grip on the human, Tara slowly dragged her body to a cluster of nearby rocks. Reaching her destination, she gathered all her strength and lifted her up, carefully laying her on top of the smooth surface of one of the rocks. The heavy equipment on her back caused her to nearly topple over, but Tara moved quickly to steady her.

Tara began to remove the ‘foreign’ materials from the human’s body. She first moved to the backpack, struggling a bit with as she tried to remove it. But, not being familiarized with this human’s contraption, the task was difficult and time consuming. Tara had no time to waste; this beautiful human’s life depended on her figuring out the best way to strip her of this heavy burden. She tested several of the straps, finding ones that, once removed, made it easier to slip off. She continued for several minutes, removing the other equipment and clothing until the human was lying nearly nude in front of her, the only covering she wore the red cloth tied with string.

She was prepared, now. As Tara jackknifed under the water, she swam to a nearby collection of small rocks where she usually kept her medicine bag. Normally she and the others who practiced their magic would only do so with each other and not on their own, but she always knew that an emergency would arise that would require her to be ready, and that it never hurt to have some supplies handy.

Granted, she never would have figured that an emergency to save a human’s life would ever present itself.

”If Baji knew I was using my talents to heal a human, I’d probably never hear the end of it,” she thought as she began to remove the last rocks covering the hole where she kept her bag.

As she did so, she took a moment to reflect on the form that awaited her in the cave above her, recalling some of the details of that exquisite body. Her long red hair was a shade darker as the cloth that she adorned, framing a face that sparkled with the radiant beauty of a child. Green eyes and small, yet undeniably perfect breasts that had been covered by the strange upper garment she had unzipped during her earlier exploration of her body. Well toned legs and sculpted thighs that, though not as muscular as hers, were smooth to the touch, completely devoid of the scales that covered her own.

The human’s most attractive feature, however, was her lips. They were…Tara had no idea how to even begin to describe them. Every time she did she found herself wondering how pleasurable it would be to bring her own lips in contact with the human’s and gently press, nibbling then parting them ever so slightly to allow her tongue to enter her mouth and explore deeper.

She also briefly thought about how different they appeared. In addition to the lack of scales, she lacked gill slits. Her hair was short and cropped neatly around her head, contrasting with her long and free floating golden locks. What’s more, she had made an effort to keep herself from being nude. That was what she found the most strange about her patient. From what she was doing, it made her appear to be as at home in the ocean as Tara herself did, notable physical differences notwithstanding.

She removed the last rock covering her bag then, and reached forward with one arm to grasp it. She kicked her feet and began to swim back to the surface. Breaking through the calm water, she gently swam over to where the human lay and crawled on all fours onto the rocks, taking several seaweed wrappings from her bag and began to place them across the human’s exposed abdomen.

After she placed the final one down, she withdrew a clamshell. Muttering an ancient chant and running her fingers across its surface, the clamshell popped open sending tendrils of mist in the enclosed space, which eventually evaporated in the cave’s walls. The clam’s juices, contained inside the shell, would aid in bringing the human back to consciousness, by drawing her essence to the surface.

Replacing the shell in her bag, she crawled on her hands and knees, stopping mere inches away from the human’s face. Tenderly, she began to anoint her head with the clam’s juices, creating tiny intricate patterns, invoking the Gods and Goddess of the sea to watch over their children of the ocean.

As she continued, she began the chant necessary to complete the spell. “Oh Goddess, may your light shine brightly on this visitor from above and show her the way back into my…” She paused, caught herself, and hastily amended, “your warm and waiting embrace. Oh God, let your eternal wisdom allow her to come back from the spirit world so that she will see my…” Again, she caught herself and hastily added, “thy waiting arms."

As her fingers finished tracing the pattern on the human’s face, she gently placed them against her lips. She bent forward, gradually parting her own lips and lightly pressed them together. She found herself unwilling to break the kiss, though she knew she must. She had to say the final incantation to complete the spell. She parted lips with the human, gently whimpering as she did.

“Come back to us, gentle maiden from above,” she whispered.

**

Willow felt as if she was floating. Granted, this wasn’t a feeling that was strange to her. What did make it strange was how uncomfortable it made her feel. She felt guilty in letting herself get as carried away as she did. She began to realize why her parents didn’t want her to become involved in diving, insisting that she could never deal with any dangers that may arise. It was just as glad that they weren’t here now, she thought. They’d never let her hear the end of it.

It had really been an experience, though. She had to admit that. She hadn’t had a more powerful orgasm since her first time in that public swimming pool all those years ago. She remembered from high school how all the girls giggled and said that they never forgot their first sexual encounter. She never could understand it herself, though after he midnight escapade, she could understand a bit better. And now, she wished she could travel back in time and tell them how wrong they were.

Still, a small tingle of fear gripped her heart with one hand as her excitement gripped it with the other. Regardless of how good it made her feel, she had nearly died. But instead of feeling her lungs fill with water and her body grow cold, she just felt…nothing.

She was surprised to find it was a good nothing. She didn’t feel dead, nor did she feel alive. It made her feel…uncomfortable.

”But, hey,” she thought. ” At least I’m still alive. Or am I? Well, if I were dead, I’d certainly know it. I wouldn’t be here overthinking my own mortality if I were dead, now would I? No, no, I’d just be waiting in a big line at the pearly gates waiting for the keys to my permanent suite at the Hotel Heaven…”

Her thoughts trailed off as she became aware of the fact that wherever she was, it was making her feel chilled to the bone. ”OK. Good. Cold. Oh, wait. No! Cold! Wait. Feel cold, not cold cold. At least I know I’m cold. That’s gotta be good, no matter how grim it sounds.”

She also became aware of the fact that someone was speaking to her. Had someone found her body? No, nobody could have found her body. She had made this trip by herself. Nobody knew that she had left. No one knew she was here.

Except…except that strange girl she had seen as she tried to find her way to safety. Thinking back on it now, it must have been the seriousness of the situation that she had found herself in that made her mind play tricks on her. That had to be what it was .She was oxygen deprived and in a heightened state of panic. It must have been the only way to explain what she had seen, because strange looking naked women just don’t appear out of nowhere.

Through the darkness surrounding her, she heard a beacon calling to her. And she also felt that beacon pulsing over her body, exploring it gingerly. She had the cautious feeling of many slim, nimble fingers touching her chest, caressing her thighs, teasing her breasts and across her face.

Normally the thought of someone casually exploring her body in this manner would disgust Willow. After all, being touched in naughty places was something she didn’t like unless she was the one doing the touching. But what surprised her was that she noted how respectful the touch felt, as if whoever was doing it feared to cause her harm.

She also noted, with a small hint of surprise, that it didn’t feel that bad.

“Hello?” She thought, trying to get the attention of the mysterious presence. ”I don’t know who you are, but I’m a human, not a house of cards! You don’t have to be so gentle with the touching.” She thought for a moment.

”Then again, soft fingers…soft, nimble fingers…soft, nimble fingers dripping with water…soft, nimble fingers dripping with water across my naked body…”

She felt a grin form on her face. ”I changed my mind. Keep with the gentle touching, please!”

Just as her mind was getting accustomed to the feel of sensual touching, the hand moved away. If Willow could find the strength to move, or even whimper, she would have.

”Hey! Get back here with the fingers!”

The thought had barely breezed through her consciousness before the touch came back. Or rather, it was a new touch...in a new place

The touch seemed to set her every nerve aflame, bringing her back into consciousness.

Her eyes popped open without any warning, and was surprised to find, staring back at her, something that could only be described as a dream.

After all, nothing in real life could have been as beautiful.
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Re: New NC-17 Fic: Under the Sea (Updated March 18th)

Postby iamthespark » Sun Mar 19, 2006 7:02 pm

Nice update! Can't wait for Willow to wake up!

I also can't wait to go swimming again for some reason..
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Re: New NC-17 Fic: Under the Sea (Updated March 18th)

Postby Darth Pacula » Mon Mar 20, 2006 12:44 am

G'day, Sith.

Well, another episode of hot underwater loving, huh? Or, well to be more accurate, it's more damp groping, but still fun to read.

I liked where Tara had trouble figuring out how to divest Willow of all her diving paraphernalia. It's not quite a full suit of plate armor, but I've gotta imagine it's tricking if you don't know what you're doing.

Tara's ache, and her frequent verbal missteps with her incantation were nice too. It's funny how our subconscious can overrule what seems like better judgment at the time.

Willow's semi conscious inner monologue was fun to read too, especially on the subject of those unknown hands and their respectful groping. Nice point on which to finish too.

I do have one little quibble though. Is Willow's hair long or short, because as I read this it seemed to be both.

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Re: New NC-17 Fic: Under the Sea (Updated March 18th)

Postby BigBlueEyes » Mon Mar 20, 2006 12:55 am

I can't wait for more! This story is great. I love it! :bow
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Re: New NC-17 Fic: Under the Sea (Updated March 18th)

Postby Artemis » Mon Mar 20, 2006 5:09 am

Mmm, Tara-hands - and I liked how the water dripping from her fingers was part of what Willow noticed, as she was starting to get aroused. I've no doubt that Tara-hands alone are quite enticing, but it was elegant the way Willow's love of water played into the experience like that.

And Tara's demeanour throughout was very entertaining, and satisfying as story-telling - as well as the novelty (if you'll forgive me calling it that - it's new to me) of aquaphilia, there's also the intrigue of Willow being, in essence, an alien to Tara, a different kind that she's never known before, and is obviously intensely curious about. Willow's impression of Tara's touch, of the respect mixed with curiosity, was something that had already been well-established, with Tara taking care of Willow.

Tara's musing that she'd 'never hear the end of it' if it was found out that she was with a human seems to suggest that interaction between a mermaid and a human might not be so catastrophic to all involved, should someone in Tara's clan find out. Of course, there's a particular kind of interaction I'm thinking of here...

Though, apropos of nothing, does Tara speak English? I just wondered... thinking of that episode of Futurama with the mermaid: "Oh, you speak fish? Blblblblblblbl!" "What?" "I'm sorry, my accent is atrocious..."

Oh, dude. You gotta be kidding me. First I rip off your idea to do a Star Wars fic, and now this?

Heh :lol No need to worry - like I said, my mermaid idea never got off the ground (or should that be 'off the seabed'), mainly because I never had an idea, apart from 'Tara's a mermaid'. Willow's aquaphilia was a great idea - I think that, as much as anything, is what makes this story work. As for Star Wars, our fics (your actual fic, my would-be-if-I-ever-find-time-to-write-it fic) are plenty different - that we both have Tara as a Jedi is about the only element they share.

I'm keeping an eye on you, though - I'll have a new one-shot fic done in a couple of months, and if you beat me to it... ;-)
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Re: New NC-17 Fic: Under the Sea (Updated March 18th)

Postby SithLordWiccan » Mon Mar 20, 2006 9:17 am

iamthespark: Well...Willow's already awake. She'll be up and moving (in both senses of the word) in the next chapter.

I also can't wait to go swimming again for some reason..


Hmm...I wonder why...

Paul

Well, another episode of hot underwater loving, huh? Or, well to be more accurate, it's more damp groping, but still fun to read.


Well, don't worry. We'll get back to some hot underwater love next chapter.

I liked where Tara had trouble figuring out how to divest Willow of all her diving paraphernalia. It's not quite a full suit of plate armor, but I've gotta imagine it's tricking if you don't know what you're doing.


Yeah. I had trouble writing that part, as it was pointed out to me by Sally and Irene how difficult it would be for Tara to remove all that stuff. I hoped that was good enough to convince other people. I guess I managed to pull it off, yes?

Tara's ache, and her frequent verbal missteps with her incantation were nice too. It's funny how our subconscious can overrule what seems like better judgment at the time.


I'm glad that you thought that was good. Ironically, Sally and Irene pointed out to me how bad an idea it would be to have Tara thinking naughty thoughts about Willow at the same time that she was supposed to be reviving her. Not to be mean to my betas, but...

HA! TOLD YA SO!

(Plesae don't be mad. You know I loves ya, right? :pray )

Willow's semi conscious inner monologue was fun to read too, especially on the subject of those unknown hands and their respectful groping. Nice point on which to finish too.


Glad you liked those parts. I'm kinda proud of them myself.

I do have one little quibble though. Is Willow's hair long or short, because as I read this it seemed to be both.


Well, Willow's hair is a bit on the longish side (think Season 4 promo shots Willow), but compared to Tara's hair (which reaches down nearly to her rear), its kinda short. And I mean short in the sense that it doesn't flow freely around as much as Tara's.

And if you don't buy that, then I guess I'm sunk.

BigBlueEyes: Glad to see you like it.

Chris:

Mmm, Tara-hands - and I liked how the water dripping from her fingers was part of what Willow noticed, as she was starting to get aroused. I've no doubt that Tara-hands alone are quite enticing, but it was elegant the way Willow's love of water played into the experience like that.


I'm glad you liked that scene. I'm kinda proud of it myself for some reason. Maybe its because of how sensual I managed to write it.

And Tara's demeanour throughout was very entertaining, and satisfying as story-telling - as well as the novelty (if you'll forgive me calling it that - it's new to me) of aquaphilia, there's also the intrigue of Willow being, in essence, an alien to Tara, a different kind that she's never known before, and is obviously intensely curious about.


It was my intention to have this chapter play off the notion that Willow is a stranger to Tara (albiet one that she feels intimately connected to). That intimate connection gives her a motivation to help her, despite what it would mean to her if it ever got out.

Tara's musing that she'd 'never hear the end of it' if it was found out that she was with a human seems to suggest that interaction between a mermaid and a human might not be so catastrophic to all involved, should someone in Tara's clan find out. Of course, there's a particular kind of interaction I'm thinking of here...


Well, you're right. What Tara's doing right now is bad as far as her clan is concerned, but she feels that she needs to do it because of her "all life is precious" belief. And the worst that would happen if others found out is that she would be told about how dangerous it would be to interfere with the humans. What she'll end up doing, on the other hand...well, that will cause a problem if it ever gets out.

Though, apropos of nothing, does Tara speak English? I just wondered... thinking of that episode of Futurama with the mermaid: "Oh, you speak fish? Blblblblblblbl!" "What?" "I'm sorry, my accent is atrocious..."


Yeah, that was something I toyed with. And I played around with the idea of making Tara unable to speak English. Then I realized I was going to have enough problems writing this fic as it is without having to add that to the list, so I decided to play the safe route (read: chicken out) and make Tara and the other mermaids able to speak English.

Heh :lol No need to worry - like I said, my mermaid idea never got off the ground (or should that be 'off the seabed'), mainly because I never had an idea, apart from 'Tara's a mermaid'. Willow's aquaphilia was a great idea - I think that, as much as anything, is what makes this story work. As for Star Wars, our fics (your actual fic, my would-be-if-I-ever-find-time-to-write-it fic) are plenty different - that we both have Tara as a Jedi is about the only element they share.


Ah, good. I can stop feeling guilty.

I'm keeping an eye on you, though - I'll have a new one-shot fic done in a couple of months, and if you beat me to it... ;-)


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Re: New NC-17 Fic: Under the Sea (Updated March 18th)

Postby SithLordWiccan » Wed Mar 22, 2006 1:29 pm

Irene:

Sith, see the only reason you and Paul would think that having naughty thoughts is okay while trying to save a humans life is because you two are male. Us females, would only be thinking about saving a precious life. It's just a simple case of US thinking with our heads and not our *coughpeniscough*.


Well, I would take offense, but that is essentially true. While you and Sally commented on it, and I did agree, I felt that, on some unconscious level, those feelings needed to be present. The trick was to balance Tara's feelings for Willow while at the same time her desire to keep her safe. You and Sally know how difficult that was for me. I would like to think that I didn't tip the balance too much.

Now that I got that out of the way, Sith you are doing a spectacular job writing this story. I swear, everytime I get the lastest update I feel honored, along with Sally, at being one of the first to catch a glimpse at whats coming up next.


Thanks. It means a lot to know that the two of you are helping me out. Like I said before, I never thought I could write smut (though I really seem to be proving myself wrong here, aren't I?). Having two well known smut writers help me is an honor. I can't thank you enough.

I think you handled Tara's behavior and manner, as a caring mermaid with great respect to her and her merpeople. They seem to be a proud race that has flourished with pride. It shows that they are a race that honors their ocean dwellings and all marine creatures that inhabit that same space.


That is true. They have a respect for the sea and everything in it. They don't exactly take too kindly to human intrusions, though. (There's a reason for that that I hope to explain soon.)

I wonder what sort of 'mystical' lineage Tara came from. Is magic something that is a common part of the merpeople's lives? Has it always existed for them? What kind of training did Tara get?


Those are questions that need answering, I know. And they will be answered soon.

Willow's musings were too cute for words. First wondering who or what is touching her and then not wanting the touching to end. :lol


Yeah, I'm kinda proud of that part.

It has been an abosulte joy working with you and Sally on this fic. I'll give my silent partner, Sally, her props also and a holla', for doing an amazing job as beta...HOLLA'!! :wave


:blush !!! Thanks. Hopefully, I can get your guys' beta comments back for Chapter Three today and we can begin putting it together.
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Re: New NC-17 Fic: Under the Sea (Updated March 18th)

Postby willowspiritus » Fri Mar 24, 2006 2:20 pm

You didnt think you could write smut???

Well you were wrong BIG TIME! Now bring it on ;)
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Re: New NC-17 Fic: Under the Sea (Updated March 18th)

Postby SithLordWiccan » Fri Mar 24, 2006 2:24 pm

willowspiritus

You didnt think you could write smut???

Well you were wrong BIG TIME!


Yes. Yes I was. And I've never been happier to be wrong. :blush
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Re: New NC-17 Fic: Under the Sea (Updated March 18th)

Postby tarebear » Sun Mar 26, 2006 6:41 am

hey sith! i finally got some time to give some much needed feedback, so here i am...

i really like this latest chapter of yours... how gentle tara was with willow's unconscious body...

...she noted how respectful the touch felt, as if whoever was doing it feared to cause her harm.


but at the same time wanting to ravish that body as well haha! i can't blame her though...

...she found herself wondering how pleasurable it would be to bring her own lips in contact with the human’s and gently press, nibbling then parting them ever so slightly to allow her tongue to enter her mouth and explore deeper.


and willow even in her unconscious state just cannot not get affected by her rescuer.

"Hey! Get back here with the fingers!”


and tara stumbling over the spell like that was really cute... her subconscious telling her something or what? hehe!

i cannot help but feel a little sad about tara's sentiments here:

Many was the time she had swam there to think about the greater mysteries of the ocean world: Why she felt so alone, why she could not confide in others her deepest desires and most of all, if there was anyone in the world who she could feel love for.


i have a feeling that this human can help her answer these mysteries (well of course! duh! :smug )

i hope to see an update to this wonderful story soon! especially now that willow's awake! woo hoo!
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Re: New NC-17 Fic: Under the Sea (Updated March 18th)

Postby FineyMcFine » Mon Mar 27, 2006 9:55 am

Like Ceci, I liked how gentle Tara was with Willow - it bespeaks well of the kind of respect and connection that she feels with her already even though her kind is untrusting of humans. Tara always has had her own ideas and sense of identity, even in canon, and this fits in well with this. I also get the same sense of loneliness from her that came through in the Wicca group in canon.

I also wonder if Tara's inadvertant stumbles with the spell will cause some kind of magical love-bond to develop between them. Of course, with these two there's bound to be a love-bond anyway, but I wonder if this will help speed it along. Or maybe it was just the mermaid version of a Freudian slip.

Yay for Willow being awake and not dead and yay to Tara for bringing her back.
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Re: New NC-17 Fic: Under the Sea (Updated March 18th)

Postby SithLordWiccan » Mon Mar 27, 2006 8:19 pm

Cecile: Yeah, it was fun to work on that chapter. To have Tara working to save her, but at the same time being slightly distracted by Willow's naked body. I mean, wouldn't you be? I also had fun writing Willow's thoughts in that sequence. That line was real fun for me.

Sally: I always felt that Tara marched to the beat of a different drum, too. I think that's what I'm going to enjoy most about working on this fic.

As for Tara's missteps, yeah. It was just a Freudian slip. No mystical magical mumbo jumbo involved here.

And you're right. Yay for our girls.

Anyways, gonna have the update up in a bit.
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