Fic: Take It Lying Down

[AutumnT]

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Unable to keep even a vaguely straight face, Willow stammered out "Shoudn't we ... shouldn't we come... I mean go... to that thing? In the place? The one with the... stuff?"

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Heh. Well that was amusing and sexy. Thanks.

Autumn

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Buffy Season 6: It grated, like something forced in where it doesn't belong.

[Little Pile O Crackers]

It's really appreciated. I get all warm and snuggly when I see that someone has bothered to write to me!



snuggle: I'm glad you liked the story and my avatar. Cute, isn't it. Damn, but that girl is hot.



Aly: I try not to make hard decisions like that one. Although, if it came to the crunch...



wiltar and Miss Quirky: Actually, I'm not sure if I'll be doing a sequel. This idea came to me after I underwent a... similar torture. I don't think I'll be challenging Ruth's crown any time soon



WiccansIllusion: I think babbling is cute. Maybe I should get your help to write Willow!

Oh, and I find Jerry Springer frightens me. Yucky, yucky whoremonger of a man that he is.



Funkyasian and LeatherQueen: Tara is nicest when she's naughty



Tigger: Thank you. I read some of your work the other day and was most impressed, so a compliment from you is very heartwarming.



Tk: Hehehe. Cutie.



Seriously though, what should this fic be rated? I know what it would be rated here in Australia, but I'm afraid I haven't a clue about your convoluted Yankee don't-use-the-metric-system ways It would help to know what kind of lines I can cross.

Edited by: Little Pile O Crackers at: 7/27/02 3:40:36 pm

[Tiggrscorpio]

This was totally hot. I think we need to see what happens up in the bedroom, now that naughty Tara has Willow all worked up. Great job!

*****

She's my everything!

[tkheaven]

huh duh, who uhh...*gulp* I uhhhh, heh, the st-uhhh, with the teas-uhh, and umm, i uhh...yuhh....*tk begins to fan herself... hoo Hot...*gulp*



Edited cuz my writing is just as incoherent..hooked-on-phonics will never work for me when it comes to these kinds of fics

Tk's new and improved "GrrArgg"

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Tara was similarly riveted, her body on slow burn as Willow's lips parted and her mouth opened, the food slipping inside and being consumed. Never in her life had Tara ever wanted to be a chicken casserole so badly...Later that night..."It's good to be a chicken casserole," Tara murmured, before passing out. ~ Answering Darkness by Sassette

Edited by: tkheaven  at: 7/27/02 3:38:19 pm

[wiltar]

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This idea came to me after I underwent a... similar torture.

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Wow...lucky you

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I don't think I'll be challenging Ruth's crown any time soon

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Ah. but you see, it's not about challenging Ruth's crown.. it's not even (and yes, I too am shocked to say this) always about pure smut and evilness. It's all about a great start of a story that you just CAN'T leave this way (hehe, now if you other kittens will please help me here; come on, suck up everyone!)



So, I still vote for sequel. I love it and I would love to see more of it. If you ever feel the need to write again, or write the perfect sequel for this fic, feel VERY free to do so.



Patricia

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W-what were they looking at?

-The hotness of you doofus!!!

[The Next Tara Maclay]

Mmm I am not worthy *Bows to Lil Pile O' Crackers.* I am not worthy!

[MadeinNZ]

Wow - that was - and again I say fantastic. The evil bunnies story line made me laugh out loud and your wicked Tara is priceless. I vote for chapters 3,4,5 and ....

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"When someone falls for Willow, they stay fallen" - Normal Again

[wiccagood]

I told you the second part was worth waiting for

"But with Tara, I just know she likes Willow, and she already has one of those..."

"...I believe you're both profoundly stupid..."

[xita]

LPOC, that was hmm funny and delicious.. and a sequel, well how can you resist, or maybe not a sequel, an epilogue.



And Tara.. do not mess with her man, revenge is sweet though

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"Oooh Xita!" - Amber Benson

[Puff]

Well part 2 was worth the wait. And I agree with Xita an epilogue would be great

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You know, it's a real deal relationship and that's why people can relate to it
Amber Benson

[HotMamaYama]

I liked this fic a lot. okay, so I enjoyed the nasty bits but I also laughed my ass off at the exploding bunnies and Jerry Sprniger, for some reason Tara as queen of the Exploding bunnies just tickles my funnybone



I especially liked:

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Tara asked innocently, "So, what's the topic today?"



"' My Breasts Weigh 40 Pounds Each'," replied Anya, engrossed in the commercial that was just ending.



"Ew." Willow screwed up her face in disgust, but Xander sat up straighter, a pleased smile crossing his features as the camera panned across Jerry's well endowed guests.



"Hey, that one looks like Britney Spears. With larger... uh, hair."



"Oh, down boy," Anya scowled at him. "Those women are frightening. And Britney Spears? Please. She's stupid. If I had a television show, I wouldn't let her on it."



"Me neither," Buffy interjected from the kitchen.

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LOL! given SMG's supposed shunning of Brittney, this made me laugh my ass off I don't know if all that's true or anything, but it made me laugh



and of course Willow wanting to go to the place with the thing and the stuff..., and Anya's line about the Queen of the exploding bunnies



Anyway, I thought it was great. Don't stop writing, okay?

[Little Pile O Crackers]

Patricia: It WAS torture. It lasted for three hours and damn near drove me insane. If you get a chance, do it



Also, I think I gave the impression I don't plan to write anything again. I didn't mean this - I just was kinda hoping that I could write something more real; that dialogue and descriptives could carry my story rather than smut... Not that there's anything wrong with smut. Far from it.



MadeinNZ: Hey, neighbour. Glad you liked it. Drop round for a beer sometime



The Next Tara Maclay: Please don't do that! That makes me feel all squirmy!



Wiggy: What are you, my personal cheer squad? Thanks so much for all your help. You're a legend.



If you're looking for a beta, you could do far worse than wiccagood. Witout her, my whole stori would lok like thus.



xita and Puff: Thanks for the comments, they're really appreciated. As for an epilogue, that might be do-able. I'm in the middle of another story at the moment, but I could come back for more in a little while...



HotMamaYama: First of all, I like your nick. Do you come from geek-infested roots too? Secondly, thanks for the positive feedback. I'm glad you liked it.



Ah, I love kittens. So nice and cuddly.

[willowsgrrl]

WOW umm i need a cigarette after reading that.

Edited by: willowsgrrl at: 7/28/02 1:01:44 am

[MadeinNZ]

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Hey, neighbour. Glad you liked it. Drop round for a beer sometime

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When you say neighbour do you mean "we're in the same hemisphere" or "look out your window - that's me waving"? Cause I like beer. But not so much that I'd leave the country for it.



Edited to add: I've just realised you're in Aussie so I'm afraid the beer will have to wait. Pity. And about the rating - I'd go with NC-17. Any story where "fingers" and "entered" are in the same sentence usually means OMG NC-17 territory.

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"When someone falls for Willow, they stay fallen" - Normal Again

Edited by: MadeinNZ at: 7/28/02 1:18:30 am

[Tulipp]

That was definitely worth waiting for. Um, is it too much to hope that you will be writing more soon? Thanks for sharing that. Very sexy.

We're sorcerers. The night is still our time. A time of magic.
–Ethan Rayne.

[mollyig]

Just found this. Heh, loved Tara's revenge!



The bunny plague, and Willow's defence of Anya were fun.



Would be most happy if you were to continue!

Adding up the total of a love that's true, multiply life by the power of two
Indigo Girls

[tiredsoul]

Revenge is sweet, if not frustrating :-)



Great fic!

[the vamp nurd]

Need more .

The vamp nurd.

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"maybe I like Tara in leather." Willow.

"Yeah but do you think she'll like you?" Christina.

"Hey!" Tara.

"I'm off, the cat o'nines are still sore." Christina.

Present, an novel in progress.

[Indygo]

Oral exam?? *chuckling*



*more chuckling*



*laughs until ribs hurt*



And Anya's lines? And the evil exploding bunnies??



Will somebody please call an ambulance? I'm dying over here!



Indygo

[Little Pile O Crackers]

willow'sgrrl, Tulipp, mollyig, tiredsoul, VampNurd and Indygo - thank you so much for all being so nice. My head is swelling up like a big ol' meat zeppelin.



MadeInNZ: Thanks for the ratings advice. Much appreciated.



You know, I never knew I'd be such a feedback whore.

[saphire tear]

ohhh Cold shower right now.... Write more PLEASE!

[KrisBo5]

LPOC, This was a wonderful little read. And I have to agree, an epilogue or something would be greatly received by all, I'm sure. Good work! Thanks for sharing.

Kris

"Frell that!"

[ensam]

heh heh.



very cool indeed.



an excellent fanfic.



ensam

just bring tara back...

[Indygo]

Being an Aussie myself, I can relate to not ranking this story as NC-17. I mean, I don't really understand that rating - we don't have it down here. Does it mean "rudeness plus" or "ohhhh nasty!" or "banned in 36 states!"?



In Australian ratings this is definitely an R rating. You wouldn't hit an X rating unless the bunnies were actually involved! *wicked grin*



I keep reading this over and over for the chuckle fits I keep having. I'm taking notes for how to write Anya from this piece!



Indygo

[Jennpurr]

Oh, good God....



DUDE, that was.... WOW!!!



Please let there be more. Will there be more?? Please?? You can't leave it there.



Naughty, naughty, Tara.



Mmmm.... must go and ... um... hee...take care of stuff.



Jen

------------------------Willow: strong like an amazon?
Tara: Strong like an amazon, right.

[Little Pile O Crackers]

saphire tear, KrisBo5 and ensam: Thank you . I hope you like my upcoming story just as much.



Indygo: You're taking notes? That's a huge compliment. Thank you SO much, even though I don't actually think it was warranted. Also, maybe Americans are more prudish than us. What do you think? Although, I'm not so un-prudish I would ever actually include the bunnies.



Jennpurr: Wow. I've never gotten a THUD before



Really, guys, every time I come online I just start grinning all over, you people are so nice...



I kittens.

Edited by: Little Pile O Crackers at: 7/31/02 8:17:47 pm

[Jennpurr]

Hee... well, here's another, if you want it.



Did I read that right? You are working on an upcoming story?? Will it be a sequel to this one?? I can't wait to read it. You are very talented.



Looking forward to more of your stuff.



Jen

------------------------Willow: strong like an amazon?
Tara: Strong like an amazon, right.

[vmpIrslAr]

if you don't update soon...you are so going to get it missy!!

VmpIrslAr out.



"she's my everything."

[TareBearRS]

Great story!!



O man, first the hotmess of Willow and then to top that the Hotness that is Tara, WOW...



Loved it.

R.

[wiccagood]

Hey Crackers, where are you? I've tried calling you heaps and you haven't answered my emails. If you're just being lazy, then get a move on, you big bum...

Lead me not into temptation, I can find the way myself...