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Re: The Star Witches Saga: EPISODE II Chapter Six Now Up

Postby SithLordWiccan » Fri Jan 26, 2007 3:13 pm

CaptMurdock: Glad you're reading and enjoying. I've seen the teaser update you did for "Fearful Symmetry". Can't wait to see that updated.

Speaking of updates, here's the latest update. It doesn't feature W/T, but is essential for the plot. Enjoy. :)

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• Title: Star Witches Episode II: Sins of the Future (Chapter Seven)
• Author: SithLordWiccan (Alex)
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• Spoilers: No real spoilers, since anything that might be mentioned has been out for at least four years. Still, it bears noting that this fic references stuff that happened in "Star Witches: Episode I", along with stuff that happened in “Attack of the Clones” (though for the most part, it's on the periphery) and a whole bunch of Expanded Universe material that I’m not even going to begin mentioning, since I’ll most likely be adding to it as I go along.
• Rating: PG-13.
• Disclaimer: Willow, Tara and other “Buffy: The Vampire Slayer” stuff that may show up belong to Joss Whedon and Mutant Enemy. All things Star Wars belong to George Lucas and Lucasfilm (though if you ask me, I’m doing a lot better with it than he has in recent times.) No money is being made off this fic, and I don’t have anything anyone would want anyway, so don’t bother suing me, OK?
• Summary: On the eve of the galaxy’s greatest conflict, Jedi Master Tara Maclay and newly anointed Jedi Knight Willow Rosenberg face a more personal crisis.
• Note: Special thanks to Chris Cook (Artemis) for beta’ing this fic, hosting it on his site, for being an overall swell fellow and for putting up with me (I know from experience how difficult it is for anyone to do that.) Also thanks to all the readers who liked the first one enough to leave feedback, and for providing me with the inspiration and strength to keep going. You guys rock. *hugs*

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[center]Chapter Seven[/center]

Hoersch-Kessel Drive Lucrehulk Class Freighter Profiteer
Approaching orbit of Geonosis, Outer Rim Territories
2 Days Prior to the Battle of Geonosis


Nute Gunray made his way through the corridors of the ship toward the starboard hangar bay, knowing that at this moment, someone somewhere had just done something that had terribly wronged him. It wasn’t surprising that he should feel this way. Life as a Neimoidian, especially one of his high status and position, had built up within him a sense of paranoia, cautiously skulking around shadows and seeing things where others did not.

It was a feeling he had tried to ignore for much of his life. Ten years ago, however, the various deities of the universe had seen fit to give physical form to that feeling, making his already too obvious for words state of perpetual nervousness and anxiety induced paranoia that much more difficult to ignore.

Gunray brought his arm up, looking once more at the prosthesis that adorned the spot where his right hand had once been. It was, naturally, the best of its type that money could buy, with little outward hint that it was a mechanical appendage other than a slight discoloration of the skin. That was something that could not be helped. What also could not be helped was the fact that it had an unfortunate, and rather annoying, habit of locking up whenever he got overtly emotional, particularly when he was either angered or nervous.

Much like he was at this moment, though this time, it was more his overall irrational emotional state than any real tangible, specific emotion that kept the fingers of that hand from moving at his command. He might be able to blame that on his nervousness were it not for the fact that his other hand, not bound by those same restraints, was behaving very much in a similar manner.

It was obvious why he was acting this way. It was because of his anger at being treated as little more than a message courier for Count Dooku, and having to do so in order to deliver a message to one of the few people in this galaxy who he could honestly say he despised more than Senator Amidala, which was no small feat, considering what she had done to him ten years ago, or the one that had dealt him this injury. It certainly was ironic that the one who had taken his flesh had been the daughter of the one who had, intentionally or not, put him on the path to where he was now.

”Like father, like daughter,” Gunray thought as he stepped through the blast door and into the primary hangar deck, where his personal shuttle, the Lapiz Cutter, awaited him. Also awaiting him were a par of Neimoidians that had become important to the day to day running of the Trade Federation. One was Settlement Officer Rune Haako, his aide for the past ten years who had, much like himself, played a part in the Naboo disaster, though he had been lucky enough to escape without suffering any real harm against himself; the other was Gilramos Libkath, a promising young Neimoidian that served as Gunray’s aide and contract scribe. Both of them made showy signs of respect as Gunray approached, and moved to join him onboard the Lapiz Cutter, the ship lifting off and heading for the surface of the planet shortly thereafter.

**

The trip down to the arid surface of Geonosis had been rather uneventful, Haako and Libkath taking the quiet time to bring him up to speed on events that had transpired on the world since his departure to Nar Shaddaa days ago, neither of them daring to bring up the reasons why, out of fear for their own safety.

Haako had said that the foundries were working at top efficiency, producing thousands of droids at a record pace, a pace the three of them saw for themselves when they had first seen the massive machinery at work. Gunray couldn’t help but be impressed by the amount of product that was being produced in such a short time. The Geonosians were, if nothing else, skilled at the art of droid construction.

The Geonosians…and the heads of the Techno Union that kept them employed at the factories they owned there, along with the factories on countless other worlds, such as Mustafar, Hypori and Metalorn; worlds that had no great love of the Republic, and were more than willing to throw their infrastructure into the burgeoning Separatist war machine.

It was the formation of the ruling council of that war machine, which would make them the political force necessary to be the spear that thrust the armored tip of those armies into the Republic’s heart that had brought Gunray and others to this world, along with whatever ships they could reasonably spare without drawing too much attention to themselves. It all had to be done in secret; after all, even in the Outer Rim, there were those that were more than willing to take advantage of a supposedly weak force of cargo ships and freighters, even if the Republic themselves could never touch these outlier worlds.

Gunray couldn’t help but be amused by the fact that his actions had sent the worst elements of both together on a far away world, where they would most likely remain occupied well after they would begin the strike that would see the source of their livelihoods crumble around them. He may not have liked to do it, but thinking about it in those terms alleviated his disgust somewhat.

But as much as the Jedi and Kieran Maclay troubled him, they were insignificant compared to the trouble that Senator Amidala had brought down upon him. The embarrassment of the Naboo debacle, even after ten years, continued to hang around him like the unpleasant aftertaste of rotten fruit. It was made all the worse by the fact that he had been in command of the operation, while the conflict with the Jedi and Kieran’s small band of smuggler outcasts had occurred at a time when all that concerned him was getting the most credits out of the small sphere of influence he held within the Federation.

After he became Viceroy, however, that sphere grew to encompass more than he thought he was capable of controlling, and there were those, both within the Republic and within his own people, that were willing to make sure he suffered for that. But somehow, despite all the potential trouble and possible hardships, Gunray had escaped with his life, though the Trade Federation which he commanded was left a shattered husk of its former self, its droid army forcibly, and rather grandiosely, disbanded and their influence within the Senate diminished.

Gunray had been assured that by joining the growing Separatist movement, the Federation and the Neimoidians would regain the status they had once held throughout the galaxy. It was a tempting offer, but he had made it clear that he would not join until Dooku had brought Senator Amidala to him.

The Lapiz Cutter touched down in the hanger, and the three Neimoidians got to their feet, moving towards the landing ramp and out to join the group that had assembled there.

**

Stalgasin Hive, Geonosis

Making his way down the corridors of the ruling Geonosian hive, Gunray turned to look at his companions; a motley assortment of former Republic Senators, corporate businessmen…and a former Jedi.

To this day, Gunray could remember the first time he had met the Count of Serenno. It was during his final trial for his role in the blockade of Naboo, and though he had kept it a secret during his trial, he confessed rather easily to Dooku the fact that it had been a Sith Lord by the name of Darth Sidious that had been the true mastermind behind the blockade. Dooku had promised to tell the Jedi Council of this, though whether he ever did was something Gunray did not know. The fact that both he and Dooku were still among the living proved either that he had not, or that Sidious had gone deeper into hiding, choosing to spare them both for the only reason Gunray could discern: that in their current roles, both he and Dooku were of use to him.

After several more minutes, the group entered a spacious conference room, where they were greeted by several more dignitaries, former senators and corporate heads seated at the table, along with three individuals that stood against the far wall. Gunray could easily tell that the male was a warrior, by the way he composed himself more than the armored suit he wore. The female was a curiosity, her blue skin, blue-black hair and glowing red eyes immediately marking her as an alien, yet of a species that Gunray couldn’t identify.

The third…well, the third appeared to be nothing more than a highly elaborate droid, no doubt a bodyguard to one of the people in the room, the two standing beside him not appearing at all to be in need of one like him.

Taking a seat near the head of the table, Gunray watched as Dooku moved to sit beside him, and addressed the assembled group. “Now, friends, as I explained to you earlier, I am quite convinced that with your support, ten thousand more systems will rally to our cause. By signing this threat, you will not only be ensuring support for our common goal, but will bring you profit beyond your wildest dreams.” He turned to Gunray. “Our friends from the Trade Federation have pledged their support, and when their battle droids are combined with yours, we shall have an army greater than any in the galaxy.”

Gunray knew that the others would not believe this, but that didn’t matter. If they had even the faintest idea that the Federation would become part of the group, they would willingly join as well, if only to ensure that the credits were split equally among themselves rather than have them all lumped within the coffers of the Federation’s private money holes.

It was a few moments more before anyone spoke. The first was Passel Argente, Magistrate of the Corporate Alliance. “I am authorized by the Corporate Alliance to sign the treaty.”

“The Techno Union army is at your disposal, Count,” the stentorian voice of Wat Tambor, Head Foreman of the Techno Union, added some moments later.

Dooku nodded in approval and looked at San Hill, Chairman of the Intergalacitc Banking Clan. As he was one that Dooku knew would benefit the most out of this arrangement, in addition to being the one whose feet had been the first to proverbially soak in the dangerous waters that this enterprise represented, his assurance in this matter was all but certain.

It was thus a shock when the Muun’s nasal voice said, “The Banking Clan will sign your treaty, but only if we are granted a nonexclusive arrangement.”

The armored man moved a hand to his holstered blaster, but stopped himself midway from drawing it with a gesture from Dooku. “Explain.”

Hill’s thin face broke out into a smile, despite what had just occurred. “Do not misunderstand, Count Dooku. The Intergalactic Banking Clan wholeheartedly supports you in your endeavor, but we also feel that it would be in our best interest to support both sides. After all, in a war, the control of finances will be important, and there are no better money launderers than those employed on Muunilinst.”

Dooku smiled at that. If there was one thing Hill and his kind were known for, it was milking as much credits as they could from others. “Very well, then.”

After going around the table and gaining the support, either financially or militarily, of the organizations the assembled individuals represented, Dooku brought his head up to the three standing beyond the table. “Now that that’s over with, allow me to introduce to you three individuals with whom you will be spending a great deal of time with from now on.” He tilted his head towards the armored male. “First, allow me to introduce to you Jango Fett. He is a…freelance businessman recently hired by myself to perform a service for Viceroy Gunray.”

Gunray scowled at that, knowing that Dooku had just revealed to the others, whether intentionally or not, the lows he would sink to gain that which he desired most.

Shu Mai also took notice. “It is like you to associate yourself with that kind of scum, Gunray. Neimoidians never get their hands dirty if they can get someone else to do it for them. You would never see the Commerce Guild associate itself with people like him.”

“Nice to meet you, too,” Jango replied, his tone so sarcastic that were it a liquid, it would fill a dozen tumblers of Whyren’s Reserve.

Taking no apparent notice of the bickering, Dooku indicated the female. “Next, I would like to introduce you to the one that will be leading our armies into battle. Ladies and gentlemen, meet General Sev’rance Tann.”

The blue skinned female gave a military bow at the mention of her name. “I will be honored in leading your forces to victory over the Republic, my Lord Count.”

Gunray could barely contain his composure at hearing what he had just heard, but did so out of fear that voicing what he thought at that moment would be a disastrous mistake. A woman leading the armies of the Confederacy? Impossible.

He knew that a change in topic was necessary at that moment, and turned towards Poggle the Lesser. “Archduke, I must compliment you on the fine craftsmanship of your droid foundries once again.”

The Geonosian blinked turned to look at Gunray. “What do you mean?”

Gunray made a dismissive gesture towards the hulking droid form standing between the armored male and the alien female. “I mean in crafting an exquisite piece of machinery. I must admit, it looks as if it could easily kill anything that dared cross its path.”

Gunray had no sooner spoken those words than he found out for himself just how true they were, for too quick for anyone to see, the droid was across the room to stand directly in front of him, one of its metal arms reaching down to grasp him by the neck, and hoist him into the air. Gunray tried to struggle against the grip, but found his efforts to be in vain.

It was then that he noticed something about this droid. For a creature that appeared to be one hundred percent droid, he had surprisingly organic eyes, eyes that were even now boring themselves into Gunray with the intensity of blaster bolts. They reminded him so much of the Sith Lord Sidious had sent to assist them on Naboo ten years ago. Not unlike the situation he now found himself in. Then he had been caught in the grip of a powerful enemy that was meant to be a friend. But then he had the comfort of knowing that he was worth more alive than dead, something he had no way of knowing this time.

“Do not call me that,” came the electronically processed voice of the one being kept alive by this droid exoskeleton. “I am Grievous, warlord of the Kaleesh and Supreme Commander of the armies of the Confederacy. And I am not a droid!”

“That’s quite sufficient, General,” Dooku said, the only one who hadn’t been surprised by the actions that had just transpired. “Viceroy Gunray meant no disrespect. He is unaware of the actions that resulted in your condition. I would believe that if he were, he would be more sympathetic towards you.”

“It is not a condition,” Grievous replied, the processed words hiding the venomous gall Gunray knew they no doubt contained.

“Be that as it may, General, your point has been made. Now release him.”

Grievous held his grip for several more seconds before finally releasing it, dropping Gunray to the floor beside his chair. “As you wish.”

As Grievous made his way back to where he was and the others murmured among themselves, Dooku turned to look at Gunray. “I trust we will not have a repeat of this incident in the future?”

Gunray composed himself as best he could. “No, Count Dooku.”

“Good,” Dooku smiled in reply. “Now, what of our other business?”

“The message you sent me to deliver was given to its intended owner,” Gunray replied, refusing to speak the man’s name. “He seemed…rather surprised to receive it.”

“No doubt,” Dooku admitted. “I would have thought he would be more grateful to have me arrange for his release.”

“I gathered the impression that he would have done the service you had asked for free,” Gunray countered.

Dooku stroked his beard. “Perhaps, but with the incentive we have given him, do you not think he would do so with more…expedience?”

Gunray allowed a rare smile to cross his face. “Yes, and in the long run, that benefits us all.”

“More than you know, Viceroy,” Dooku thought. “More than you know.”
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Re: The Star Witches Saga: EPISODE II Chapter Seven Now Up

Postby Devi Crystalseeker » Sat Jan 27, 2007 5:58 am

Even with the lack of our girls, I enjoyed this chapter muchly. *much fangirl drooling & squee at your portrayal of Grievous, and the introduction of Sev'rance Tann - I love Chiss! (as you probably know)*

Shu Mai also took notice. “It is like you to associate yourself with that kind of scum, Gunray. Neimoidians never get their hands dirty if they can get someone else to do it for them. You would never see the Commerce Guild associate itself with people like him.”

“Nice to meet you, too,” Jango replied, his tone so sarcastic that were it a liquid, it would fill a dozen tumblers of Whyren’s Reserve.


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Re: The Star Witches Saga: EPISODE II Chapter Seven Now Up

Postby SithLordWiccan » Tue Feb 27, 2007 10:20 am

I know there's feedback, and I'll respond to it as soon as I've got the next chapter done. In the meantime, I wanted to let everyone know that the series (or at least, Episode I) has been nominated for an I Am You Know award.

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Postby SithLordWiccan » Fri Apr 06, 2007 2:35 pm

I know I said I'd reply to the feedback as soon as I got the next chapter done. And while it isn't, I am working on it (I've been a bit busy writing "Moonlight Denestsu"), so I might as well respond to the feedback now, in the hopes that doing so will revive interest in this story.

Devi: Yeah, this was a non-W/T chapter, but I had one in the previous story, and it was needed in order to convey important information, not to mention set up important people. In that regard, I think it worked. Don't worry. We'll be back to W/T in the next part. :)
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Re: The Star Witches Saga: EPISODE II Chapter Seven Now Up

Postby Devi Crystalseeker » Sat Apr 07, 2007 6:11 pm

SithLordWiccan wrote:I know I said I'd reply to the feedback as soon as I got the next chapter done. And while it isn't, I am working on it (I've been a bit busy writing "Moonlight Denestsu"),


That's good to hear. I can understand that you're more interested in working on 'Moonlight Densetsu' right now, but I'm glad that you haven't lost interest in this story either. Would be a shame.
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Postby Willowtree252 » Sat Apr 07, 2007 8:23 pm

:pinky I am so proud of you sith and you will win count on it :kgeek
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Re: The Star Witches Saga: EPISODE II Chapter Seven Now Up

Postby SithLordWiccan » Sat Apr 07, 2007 8:56 pm

Devi Crystalseeker wrote:That's good to hear. I can understand that you're more interested in working on 'Moonlight Densetsu' right now, but I'm glad that you haven't lost interest in this story either. Would be a shame.


I didn't "loose" interest. I got hit with the creative spark to do that story, and had it for longer than I thought. I'm still interested in working on that (I've got the next chapter all ready to be beta'ed), but I've really hit the creative peak with that, and need some time to work out where I want to go with it.

So in the meantime, I figured I'd come back to this. I had a general idea on what I wanted to do, so I figured I'd get down to it. (And I did, getting most of it done yesterday. A little editing, and it should be ready to go by next weekend.)

And wouldn't you know it? I finally get off my duff to finish the second part, and I find out the first part tied for second place in the "Best Crossover - Movie" category @ the I Am You Know Awards. Go me!
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Postby Devi Crystalseeker » Sun Apr 08, 2007 4:10 am

SithLordWiccan wrote:And wouldn't you know it? I finally get off my duff to finish the second part, and I find out the first part tied for second place in the "Best Crossover - Movie" category @ the I Am You Know Awards. Go me!


Yay, congrats!
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Postby SithLordWiccan » Mon Apr 09, 2007 4:19 pm

I'm pleased to announce that Chapter Eight is finally done and has been sent to my beta. With any luck, it will be up by the end of the week. :)
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Re: The Star Witches Saga: EPISODE II Chapter Seven Now Up

Postby SithLordWiccan » Mon Apr 16, 2007 6:24 am

• Title: Star Witches Episode II: Sins of the Future (Chapter Eight)
• Author: Alex
• Email address: decepticons_4_ever@hotmail.com.
• Feedback: I'm a feedback whore. I live on feedback, so feed the beast. It’s the only way I keep going.
• Distribution: Through the Looking-glass, Extra Flamey. If you want to put it anywhere else, let me know
• Spoilers: No real spoilers, since anything that might be mentioned has been out for at least four years. Still, it bears noting that this fic references stuff that happened in "Star Witches: Episode I", along with stuff that happened in “Attack of the Clones” (though for the most part, it's on the periphery) and a whole bunch of Expanded Universe material that I’m not even going to begin mentioning, since I’ll most likely be adding to it as I go along.
• Rating: PG-13.
• Disclaimer: Willow, Tara and other “Buffy: The Vampire Slayer” stuff that may show up belong to Joss Whedon and Mutant Enemy. All things Star Wars belong to George Lucas and Lucasfilm (though if you ask me, I’m doing a lot better with it than he has in recent times.) No money is being made off this fic, and I don’t have anything anyone would want anyway, so don’t bother suing me, OK?
• Summary: On the eve of the galaxy’s greatest conflict, Jedi Master Tara Maclay and newly anointed Jedi Knight Willow Rosenberg face a more personal crisis.
• Note: Special thanks to Chris Cook (Artemis) for beta’ing this fic, hosting it on his site, for being an overall swell fellow and for putting up with me (I know from experience how difficult it is for anyone to do that.) Also thanks to all the readers who liked the first one enough to leave feedback, and for providing me with the inspiration and strength to keep going. You guys rock. *hugs*

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[center]Chapter Eight[/center]

Corellian Sector of Nar Shaddaa
2 Days Prior to the Battle of Geonosis


It had taken Tara all of fifteen seconds for her to realize that she really did not enjoy being on Nar Shaddaa. True, the thought of having to face her father didn’t make her feel that comfortable, but that wasn’t what was upsetting her the most.

No, her current feelings of apprehension could be easily traced to the fact that she had been agonizing for the near full day that she had been skulking about on the world about whether her decision to continue on, despite the objections voiced by Master Halcyon and the doubts beginning to surface in her own mind, was the correct course of action. Her father was no doubt at this very moment making the rounds of the local cantinas, finding the worst of the worst to hire in his private vendetta against Master Halcyon, and seeing who out of their number deserved to have the honour of bringing him to his knees before he personally took his life, just as his was taken so long ago. And no doubt, after that was done, send those very same people after her.

Her paranoid feelings weren’t exactly assuaged by the fact that many of the people she had passed since arriving here had given her more than a casual glance, a rather unfortunate by-product of her choice of clothing, a pair of beaten up patch worked trousers and loose fitting top. The captain of the freighter who had brought her here had said that they belonged to this one girl he had met on Atzerri that had tried to rob him blind, only to meet a rather unfortunate end when he had caught her in the act. Tara had been reluctant to take the clothes, saying that she wouldn’t be caught dead wearing them in any circumstances. But she had relented when the captain had told her a very plain truth: “Maybe so, but you go out there dressed like a Jedi, and I can guarantee that you will get caught and you will end up dead.”

Her robes were safely stashed in the small room she had managed to rent in a nearby flat, where they would most likely remain until she was ready to depart. She kept her cloak wrapped around herself, hood covering her head to mask her face. It wasn’t at all necessary for her to go to those sorts of great lengths to hide her identity. Even though she was now on the Jedi Council, she had remained, mostly by her own design, a relatively unknown Jedi. Even her role in the galaxy’s most well known conflict, that of the Battle of Naboo, had been largely forgotten by the populace, the true honours of the day going where they rightfully belonged: to Master Kenobi and his apprentice, Anakin Skywalker. After all, both of them, along with Master Qui-Gon and young Queen Amidala, had played vital roles in the overthrowing of the Trade Federation. All she had done was throw Willow headlong into danger she had been ill prepared to handle, have her get captured, and nearly get her killed.

”And now it’s happening all over again,” Tara thought as she lowered her head to the ground, realizing only then why it was that she had decided to continue on. It wasn’t that she had any doubts as to the abilities of Master Halcyon and Willow, nor was it because she believed them incapable of handling things on their own that she had forcibly insisted that Devaronian accompany them. It all boiled down to one simple fact: unless she was with them, and was involved in what they were doing, even on a purely superficial level, they would both end up dead. And if there was one thing in this galaxy she wanted more than to be with Willow, is was to make sure that she was never placed into harm’s way because of her ever again.

“Perhaps that is why the Jedi Code preaches forbidding attachments to others. I wouldn’t have made the decisions I have for anyone other than Willow. I wouldn’t have lied to Master Halcyon for any reason other than to protect Willow. And I certainly wouldn’t have come here unless it was to help Willow. If being so much in love with someone can impair one’s judgement this badly, maybe it’s better to remain emotionally detached from society…”

Tara’s train of thought came to a sudden halt as she collided with someone in front of her only moments before she registered the impending act through the Force. Falling onto her rear, she moved to steady herself with one hand as she lowered her hood to look at the person she had collided with. The figure was a tall brunette female wearing a synthleather jacket over a skintight black bodysuit that more than complimented her figure. From her appearance, Tara figured that she must be an escort girl for some influential death stick dealer. But then she noticed the holstered blaster rifle slung on her left side and the vibroblade sheathed to her right thigh and realized that this person, whoever she was, was more than capable of beating up any of those sorts of people that came her way.

The woman extended a hand to Tara. “You OK?”

Tara took the hand and got to her feet. “Yeah.” Figuring that she should take the opportunity to apologize for her slight, she quickly added. “Sorry about that.”

“It’s OK,” the woman shrugged noncommittally. “But a word of advice, it’s not really a good idea to keep your head down. Never know what sort of kook will come up behind ya and slit your throat before you could do anything about it.”

Tara swallowed and nodded dumbly in reply, watching as the woman made her way into a nearby cantina, pulling a comlink out of the pocket of her jacket as she did so. For a moment, she considered going after her, then realized that it might not be a good idea to do that. For all she knew, that woman was someone who had been contacted by her father, and it wouldn’t be the best of ideas to let her or anyone else know who she was. The fewer people who did, the better off she would be.

Straightening her clothes, she drew the hood of her cloak up and re-entered the crown, doing her best to remain inconspicious.

**

“You see him?”

The Rodian lowered the electrobinoculars he held and turned to Beth, his snout upturned in a close approximation of a sneer. “No. Iz hard to zee any one individual among hundredz of otherz. Ezpecially when you have no idea what he lookz like.”

“You know what he looks like,” Beth retorted. “I showed all of you the holo of his face.”

“That doezn’t mean anything,” the Rodian countered. “He could be hiding hiz face. It’z not that difficult, and would be the zmart thing to do in a place like thiz.”

Beth blew out a breath, clearly realizing that she had been beaten. “Di’kut.”

“Language,” Kieran scolded, coming up to kneel beside Beth. “Got a lead on our perp?”

“Not yet,” Beth said, jerking a thumb back towards the Rodian. “That is, if you believe anything he has to say. Personally, I wouldn’t trust my life to anything he says.”

Kieran nodded. “I guess we move on to plan B.” He got up, stopped halfway, and looked back at Beth. “You do have a plan B, right?”

“Of course,” Beth hissed, watching as her uncle moved off. As soon as he was out of sight, she withdrew her comlink. “All right, Kallanik, Cade, Grizz. Go to plan B.”

“What’s plan B?” came the reply.

“I don’t know. Make something up!”

**

Faith pocketed her comlink she had been speaking into as she entered the “Burning Deck” cantina. It was an establishment whose reputation Faith knew by heart, being one of the three most popular dives in the Corellian Sector and known for its loose drinks and looser entertainment. And true enough, a majority of the bar’s patrons were clustered around the central stage, watching a group of Twi’lek and Zeltron dancers put on a show that would have been illegal in most civilized systems. A small crowd, however, had gathered near the back, watching as a petite blonde was working her own kind of show, one Faith knew was just as illegal as the one taking place on the main stage, and one in which she performed so well that she eventually squeezed every credit out of those who saw it.

Faith could remember the first time she had met the blonde. The Guild had recently posted a twenty thousand credit bounty on the head of some two bit piece of merchandise that had offed a prominent Republic legal aide. She had pursued the guy for a week and a half before learning that there was someone else going after him. Faith had never been the type to share, and thus had taken it personally that someone was after something she wanted.

Then she ran into a group of pirates attacking a ship on the outskirts of the Subterrel Sector, and realizing who it was they were attacking, she had been prepared to leave them to their fate. But then she had gotten a message from the ship. Only it hadn’t been from her rival, but some kid. Assuming that the woman she was competing with had captured some kid to use as a bargaining chip, she rushed to their aid, vaping three fighters and sending the rest packing before she boarded the ship to rescue the kid. And learning that she hadn’t been kidnapped, but had been the sister of her competitor, whom the kid insisted Faith rescue as well.

It was during the blonde’s treatment at a nearby medical facility that the kid – Dawn - had told her the whole story. The man Faith had been pursuing had assassinated her mother, the aide to the Anaxes Senator, and had gotten away from Coruscant authorities. Taking it personally, the blonde had taken a ship and gone after him, insisting that Dawn come with her so that they wouldn’t be lonely. Faith’s heart had immediately gone out to the pair. Having come from a bad home life as well, she knew how bad it must have been for the two.

It didn’t hurt that the kid’s sister was the finest thing on two legs that Faith had ever seen that hadn’t had the benefit of lekku or pheremones. She herself had a reputation as a girl who had someone at the spaceport of every planet from here to Wild Space, but after meeting those two, she knew that she couldn’t be that way any more. The kid…Dawn needed a stable family life, and Buffy would need to have someone in her life that she could depend on, and perhaps, given enough time, even care for.

Buffy…the first time she had heard that name, Faith had nearly laughed. No way in the Minions of Xendor was that her real name. But she had kept her mouth shut, realizing that it would be insulting to Dawn if she had made a mockery of her sister. And besides, it wasn’t as if she didn’t understand the necessity of having a dual identity. The two had decided to become Dawn’s surrogate parents, making sure she grew up right in a galaxy that looked to be doing its best to come apart. Excellent mechanical skill, an ear for eavesdropping, and a crack shot on a laser cannon only got you so far in this universe.

Moving over to the bar, she order two Gizer Ales, which the Besalisk bartender was quick to make and place in front of her, doing so just as Faith felt a pair of arms wrap around her waist. “I missed you.”

The small smile on Faith’s face faded. “It didn’t look like you did.”

“Is Dawn OK?”

“She’s fine,” Faith replied, downing a good portion of her drink. “I stopped by a friend of mine’s on the way back to the Five By Five and picked her up a holovid.” Seeing Buffy’s scandalous expression, Faith quickly added. “A tasteful holovid, B. I know a guy who makes a living writing historic holodramas and got him to do a vid based around the old Jedi Civil War.”

“The one involving Revan, Malak, Bastila and the Star Forge?”

“That’s the one.”

Buffy moved to the stool beside Faith. “Dawn always was a fan of those old holostories. Mom used to read to her every night. Her favourite story was the Ruusan Campaign.” She chuckled slightly. “I’m sure she’ll enjoy that vid. I wonder how she’d react if she knew we got the only surviving relic of that adventure stashed in our cargo hold.”

”Stop wondering, B,” Faith grumbled in reply, nursing her drink. “She’s never going to find out.”

Noticing her companion’s bad mood, Buffy moved to take her arm. “What’s wrong?”

Faith sighed. “Nothing.” Unconvinced, Buffy pressed on.

“Is this cause of what I was doing back there?”

Faith shook her head. Despite this, Buffy remained unconvinced. “It is, isn’t it? I knew that bothered you…”

“It doesn’t!” Faith shouted, unfortunately drawing the attention of those nearby. Once things had settled back down, she continued softly, “Look, B. It’s nothing you’ve done. I promise you. The kind of life you’ve led, you should try to find whatever opportunity you can to have fun. I know where you’ve been, remember?”

“Then what…?”

“The galaxy’s changing, B,” Faith said as she downed the last of her first drink and reached for the others. “Used to be guys like us fly in and out of the star systems, picking out the bad guys and delivering them to the good guys for the credits. Nowadays it’s getting harder and harder to find the good in most people. Take the Seps, for instance. They got legitimate problems with the Republic, yet are treated no better than the rest of us lowlifes simply because Chancellor Prissypants can’t get off his high horse to work out some kind of deal with them, not realizing that his side’s going down the Sarlacc pit faster than a Podracer tearing up the track at the Andobi Mountain Run. And as for the Jedi…”

Faith downed a significant portion of her drink and sighed. “It’s never been that great for them, B. Things like Antar IV and that whole ‘Baby Ludi’ thing ain’t exactly helping their case. The way things are going, it’s going to be a matter of time before someone out there does something the other side isn’t going to take very well, and this whole galaxy will go down the referesher faster that ice cubes melt on Tatooine.” She turned to look at Buffy. “And can you seriously think it would be a good idea for Dawn to grow up in that kind of environment?”

“I’ve never really thought about it like that,” Buffy replied after a moment’s pause, seeing Faith be so eloquent and philosophical really surprising her.

“Maybe it’s time you did,” Faith muttered as she downed the rest of her drink and motioned for the Besalisk to refill it. “You know I hate being the nice one in this relationship.”

“Liar.”

Faith snickered as the Besalisk placed a third drink in front of her. “That’s why I did it, you know.”

“What?”

“Got Dawn that holovid,” Faith explained. “The Jedi are being treated like nerf dung by the majority of folks in the galaxy, it’s not going to be long before their way of life becomes extinct and most of the people won’t bat an eye about it. I want to make sure that Dawn realizes that, despite public opinion, there was a time when they were seen as heroes to a bunch of folks. Because when the inevitable happens, it’s going to be up to people like you and me to bring them back, and I want to make sure that Dawn fights for the winning side.”

Buffy was on the verge of tears by the time Faith had finished speaking, and motioned for the Besalisk to give her a drink. As he gave her the glass, she asked, “So when do we leave?”

“Tomorrow morning,” Faith responded. “I think we’ve cooled our retros here long enough. Besides, we promised we’d take Dawn to Aquilaris for her birthday.”

You promised,” Buffy smirked. “All I remember doing when you told Dawn we were going to go watch the Aquilaris Classic for her birthday was sit in disbelief as you spoiled her again.”

“What can I say, B?” Faith said with a grin as she took a swig of her drink. “I just love kids.”

**

Inferno Cockpit
Arriving at the outer edge of the Y’toub System


Willow had only made it several feet beyond the hatch leading to the cockpit before the ship lurched violently. Thrown off her feet, she only barely managed to catch the edge of a nearby console and work her way back to her feet. R5, not nearly so lucky, found himself sailing dome first into the side wall, letting out the electronic equivalent of a screech the whole way. Making her way to one of the chairs, Willow sat down and strapped herself in, turning to glare at the Devaronian at the pilot’s controls. “Fly much?”

“Not my fault,” came the retort from Villie as he worked the controls to bring the ship under some kind of control. “You know how cranky hyperdrive is; rest of ship no better off. We lucky to make it to Nar Shaddaa without blowing apart, if others don’t feel like blowing us apart first.”

Willow said nothing in reply as she looked out the viewport at the world in the far distance and the moon orbiting it. While she had been periodically making sure that the hyperdrive got them here in one piece, she had been reviewing everything she could on the Y’toub system. A system of six planets orbiting a yellow sun, it had originally belonged to a species known as the Evocii before the Hutts had moved in, and in predictable fashion, soon made it their own. The central planet of the system, originally named Evocar, soon became known as Nal Hutta, which meant “Glorious Jewel” in the language of the Hutts. It was, however, anything but, as thousands of years of Hutt occupation had turned a temperate jungle world into an over polluted bog of a planet only its new tenants could find beautiful.

It certainly appeared more preferable to Willow than their intended destination. Nar Shaddaa had become known to those in the know as Little Coruscant, as the moon, much like the Republic capital, had become a sprawling ecumenopolis early in galactic history and had more or less remained the same way throughout the last twenty four thousand years. The only major difference was that Coruscant’s upper levels were a haven of modernized artwork and cleanliness, while Nar Shaddaa’s upper levels put Coruscant’s undercity to great shame, and left little wonder to the state of affairs in the moon’s own undercity, which popular rumour held no one went into and survived.

The whole experience had brought back to mind fears from her own childhood, of getting lost in Coruscant’s underworld and running afoul of the dangerous miscreants inhabiting the area. Only through the interference of Tara had she been able to get out of that situation. Not for the first time, Willow found herself wishing that Tara was nearby. Things just seemed a whole lot safer when she was around.

“It will be OK, Willow,” Nejaa said, obviously picking up on her latent fears through the Force. “I’ll be there to help you. And so will Villie.”

“Not by choice,” the Devaronian muttered as he brought the ship on course of the moon.

Willow swallowed the lump that was forming in her throat, wishing once more that Tara was nearby. It was strange. For a few moments back on Bothawui, it had felt as if she had been close by, watching over her shoulder and making sure things were all right. But as soon as she had felt that touch, it had disappeared, leaving her more shaken than ever.

”I’ve got a bad feeling about this.”

**

”I’ve got a bad feeling about this.”

Tara had gotten that feeling of subtle wrongness about the situation through the Force for some time now, a feeling that she had dismissed as her nervousness about the situation overworking itself. But despite that, the feeling continued to persist, and it didn’t take long for her to come to the undeniable conclusion that something was very wrong. She moved a hand to her belt, where she had clipped her lightsaber out of sight, and waited for her unseen opponents to make the first move.

She didn’t have to wait long, as she saw from an alleyway ahead three figures detach themselves from the shadows and make their way towards her. Two of them were human, a bald man and a short cropped brown hair ruffian, both of whom didn't appear, or smell for that matter, to have taken a shower in days. The third being was a Wookiee, one who held a bowcaster aimed directly at her head. The others likewise drew their weapons and pointed them in her direction.

“Right, that’s it. Now put your hands where I can see them.”

Tara did as she was told, using the Force to unclip her lightsaber and put it into her hand as she brought it out from undercover. The bald man snickered at that. “Nice plan, Grizz. Only someone with something to hide would hang around the back alleys.”

“Come from the territory, Cade,” Grizz replied. “The only way to get what you want is to do it out of sight of anyone who can catch you.” To Tara, he continued, “OK, buddy. Drop that thing.” To Cade, he whispered, “Go get him.”

“Me?” Cade replied, obviously surprised by this turn of events. “Why do I gotta do it?”

“Because I got my gun trained on him.”

“I got my gun on him, too! So does Kallanik. I don’t see either of you making a move.”

“Just do it!”

Cade sighed and moved towards Tara, complaining all the while. As he closed in, she allowed her lightsaber to fall from her hand. Cade’s muttering grew louder as he bent over to pick up the weapon…and immediately fell backward as Tara brought her knee up to impact directly onto his chin. Before the other two could react, Tara reached out and yanked their weapons away, sending them back down the alleyway behind her. Calling her weapon back to her hand, she ignited the blade and brought it down to the fallen man’s chin.

“I don’t want to hurt anyone, so just answer my questions and we’ll have no problems. Understand?”

The three nodded. Unseen, Tara smiled faintly. “Good, now first things first. Where is Kieran Maclay?”

“Right behind you.”

Tara heard the voice a split second before she felt the stun blast come from behind her, knocking her breath away and sending her collapsing face first onto the ferrocrete ground. Ironically, as she slipped into unconsciousness, she found the voice to be more painful than the combined blast and fall.

**

Kieran lowered the modified Rawk chopped special he held and watched as Beth made her way over to the fallen figure. Something about the ease at which the past few minutes had gone by had clearly unsettled him. The man who had put him away so many years ago would not have fallen for such an obvious trap. What was going on here?

His concern only grew as Beth called out, “Uncle, you’d better come look at this!”

Kieran made his way over to where Beth was, watching as she looked down at…no. It couldn’t be. Kieran broke out into a wide grin and began to laugh. Beth smiled as well, and let out a chuckle.

The others obviously didn’t understand. “What’s so funny?” Cade asked. “This ain’t the guy we were hired to off.”

“No,” Kieran smiled. “She’s not.”

“Then who is it?” Grizz asked.

“Someone even better,” Kieran said, turning to Beth. “Someone who’s going to make sure things go our way. Now quickly, get her up and out of here before someone notices.”

**

Sitting in front of the sensor station of the Five By Five, Dawn Summers watched an interesting confrontation take place near the Corellian Sector from the security of her parents’ ship, a modified MSE droid, one of many she used for eavesdropping and espionage purposes, recording the whole incident from a safe enough distance to avoid being caught. From the look of things, whatever had just taken place had to be of some interest to someone, if they did it under the cover of a back alley and moved quickly to cover their tracks. All she had to do now was convince her surrogate parents to find out whom and see if they could get a little money out of letting those people know.

She smiled. “Happy birthday to me.”
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Re: The Star Witches Saga: EPISODE II Chapter Eight Now Up

Postby Useful_Oxymoron » Mon Apr 16, 2007 2:41 pm

Dibs, dibs! I finally got a dib! (Now for the commenting)

Heya Alex,

Took me one day and an evening, but I've finally finished the marathon reading, just in time for the latest chapter, mind you. I've just realized just how much I missed. A few highlights:

Nute Gunray. Seriously, I like what you've done with the guy. He doesn't get off too well in the movies, he's mostly just a slimy worm... which, of course, he still is in this story. :) But in the movies, I saw him more as an inept evil overlord's assistant archtype. Here, he's shown to be a bit more devious and has more depth. Which is apprioate. Inept helpers don't get to be viceroy of an intergalatic trade federation, after all.

The Kubaz, the Verpine and the Trandoshian... talk about an ethnic clash.

Tara facing off with Nejaa. Whoa nelly! Intensity there. Tara definitely has her moment.

The moment I read the words 'pit droids' and 'hyperdrive' in one sentence, I was hoping to see Watto again, but that was hope against all hope. I'm probably one of the few people who likes Watto.

Tara's reaction to the Deveronian's quip was very nice. Though methinks she doth protests too much. ;) :wtkiss

GRRRRRRRIIIIIIIIEEEEEEEEEEVVVVVVVOOOOOOUSSSSSSSS! Yes! (As you might have noticed, I have a bit of a thing for killer robots :D). Love how the 'incident' between Grievous and Gunray played out. Me, I'd have cracked his skull underneath my robotic clawfeet. :D

So, Faith is into holovids, yes? And even some holovids that don't involve Twi'leks doing sexy things to each other, no less? ;) Revan and Bastila (and, of course, Canderous, HK-47, Jolee and Mission) I like that particular holovid myself, mind you. Still, Kotor 2 had cooler Sith Lords. I daresay that Sion and especially Nihilus had a very high coolness factor.

And poor Dawn. Off to get into trouble again, ey?

I'm caught up again! Yay me. :)
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Re: The Star Witches Saga: EPISODE II Chapter Eight Now Up

Postby SithLordWiccan » Thu Jun 21, 2007 11:55 am

U_O: Thanks for your comments. Yeah, Gunray's getting a lot more depth in this story (he gets more depth in the EU books, too). I agree with your comments that, as the leader of the Trade Federation, Gunray does act a little spineless, but that's to be expected, because the EU does send up the fact that he's totally unreliable in his job. He just makes the best of it.

It's funny that you should mention Watto as being responsible for the failures of the Inferno's hyperdrive. I knew that there was a story in which that happened, but I didn't know the specifics. Looking it up now, I can see that Watto was responsible for that. Funny how I can get things right without trying, eh?

Glad you like the appearance of Grievous. He, like Gunray, will get a lot more character development here than in the movies.

Faith's really a character I like to put into my stories. I always figure that she got the short end of the stick in canon, so I enjoy putting her into situations where she can be the hero, even if she doesn't like it (even when she's the villain, such as in "Under the Sea" or "Moonlight Densetsu", she's more a misunderstood person than a cold hearted bitch). Dawn's really a homage to your own Dawn character in "Don't Fear The Reaper," whose always running around and getting into trouble.

Glad you enjoy it, dude. Next part's all done. It'll be posted if/when I get it back beta'ed.
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Postby Zampsa1975 » Mon Jun 25, 2007 6:59 am

Wow! :thud Excellent blend of Buffy & Star Wars. More update-y goodness soon pleaase :pray
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Postby SithLordWiccan » Tue Jul 24, 2007 4:27 pm

Zampsa1975: Glad you're enjoying the story. Update's below. :)

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• Title: Star Witches Episode II: Sins of the Future (Chapter Nine)
• Author: Alex
• Email address: decepticons_4_ever@hotmail.com.
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• Distribution: Through the Looking-glass, Extra Flamey. If you want to put it anywhere else, let me know
• Spoilers: No real spoilers, since anything that might be mentioned has been out for at least four years. Still, it bears noting that this fic references stuff that happened in "Star Witches: Episode I", along with stuff that happened in “Attack of the Clones” (though for the most part, it's on the periphery) and a whole bunch of Expanded Universe material that I’m not even going to begin mentioning, since I’ll most likely be adding to it as I go along.
• Rating: PG-13.
• Disclaimer: Willow, Tara and other “Buffy: The Vampire Slayer” stuff that may show up belong to Joss Whedon and Mutant Enemy. All things Star Wars belong to George Lucas and Lucasfilm (though if you ask me, I’m doing a lot better with it than he has in recent times.) No money is being made off this fic, and I don’t have anything anyone would want anyway, so don’t bother suing me, OK?
• Summary: On the eve of the galaxy’s greatest conflict, Jedi Master Tara Maclay and newly anointed Jedi Knight Willow Rosenberg face a more personal crisis.
• Note: Special thanks to Chris Cook (Artemis) for beta’ing this fic, hosting it on his site, for being an overall swell fellow and for putting up with me (I know from experience how difficult it is for anyone to do that.) Also thanks to all the readers who liked the first one enough to leave feedback, and for providing me with the inspiration and strength to keep going. You guys rock. *hugs*

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[center]Chapter Nine[/center]

Corellian Sector of Nar Shaddaa
2 Days Prior to the Battle of Geonosis


The Inferno made its way down towards the landing pad to which it had been assigned, with very little in the way of problems. For Willow, however, the experience managed to become very highly ranked on the list of the most frightening things she had ever had to experience. She had known that vessels of the type flown by people like their reluctant Devaronian confidante had a reputation of being held together with little more than adhesive medical tape, spit and the good wishes of those onboard, but never had she before encountered a ship with the temperament and irritability that the Inferno possessed throughout their journey here. The only part of the ship that appeared at all to be cooperative was NT 600, and she hadn’t been able to do much besides offer her condolences and well wishes. It was all Willow could do to stop herself from running as fast as she could towards whatever passed for an escape pod of this piece of scrap, Jedi calming techniques or no.

As the Inferno finally came to a rest on the landing pad, Willow forced herself to loosen the death grip she held on the armrests of her chair and make her hands move to loosen her crash webbing she had secured around herself; having done so as tightly as she could manage without cutting off her circulation as the ship began its landing approach. Getting up, she shakily make her way over to R5, who had managed, through no fault of his own, to fall over onto one side.

“Fly much?” she muttered under her breath, hopefully softly enough for no one to hear her, a hope that was quickly and immediately dashed as she felt hot breath on her neck and a hiss in her ear.

“I do. And believe me when I say that, considering the alternative, you lucky to have gotten a chance to find out.”

Willow closed her eyes, drew a hissed breath and shuddered involuntarily, the memory of what she had suggested to do earlier coming to mind once more. It reviled her to think about what she had almost done, even if it was in the name of helping Tara. She had come a long way from the reckless Padawan she had once been, and should have known better than to even think of doing something that rash. Thank the Force that Villie had changed his mind; Willow didn’t know how she was going to explain that to Tara, let alone the Council.

“One down, one to go,” she thought as she got R5 upright. Then, looking towards Master Halcyon, she unhooked her lightsaber and tapped it against his dome. Two of the trapezoidal sections on the top of his dome withdrew, through which both Willow and Nejaa placed their lightsabers. Willow turned to Nejaa as R5 moved off to accompany Villie.

“I have a bad feeling about this, Master.”

“So do I, Willow.” Nejaa replied, moving to place a hand on Willow’s shoulder. “But don’t worry. As long as I’m with you, everything will be all right.” Willow nodded and headed off after R5 and Villie. As soon as she stepped out of the cockpit, she looked up and let out a sigh.

”I’d feel better if Tara was here.”

**

Abandoned Industrial Warehouse
Corellian Sector of Nar Shaddaa


The first thing Tara became aware of when she regained consciousness was the dull throbbing at the base of her skull. Taking a deep breath, her eyes still closed, she got to her knees and tried to center her mind to purge the pain and confusion that clouded it.

Her eyes snapped open quickly as she came to a startling realization: she could not touch the Force in order to perform the trance she needed to clear her mind. Panic stricken, she swung her head around to take in her surroundings, hoping to find something there that would provide her with an explanation as to why she felt disconnected from the Force.

She found herself in a medium sized room with a table at the center of the room, with a pair of chairs facing across from one another. And at each corner of the room lay a large piece of machinery and piping upon which rested a medium sized furred lizard creature, its claws dug into the framework as if clinging for dear life.

Tara had no further time to think of this as from behind her came the sound of a opening door. She spun around, cursing the headache she felt at the sudden action, to find a nightmare image looking back at her. She had tried to mentally prepare herself to face her father, but the aftereffects she still felt from the blow that had knocked her out, combined with her inability to touch the Force to calm herself, left her with little more than the emotional capability and coping skills of a child.

Kieran showed a complete lack of concern for her apparent fright, moving into the room to sit down in front of the table. He turned to Tara and motioned to the empty chair.

“Sit down over here, Tara.”

Tara cast her eyes towards the blaster slung on Kieran’s hip and hesitated. She knew that her father was capable of committing cold blooded murder without a second thought, and in her current inebriated state, it was very likely she could do nothing to protect herself when he decided to take her life.

On the other hand, it was becoming very obvious that, had that been his intention at all, she would be dead already. And even without the aid of the Force, she could easily tell that hurting her, at least at the present time, was the furthest thing from his mind.

Hesitating only for a fraction of a second, Tara got up and moved to sit down, flinching involuntarily as Kieran withdrew the blaster. She closed her eyes, knowing she could do nothing to stop him if he decided to shoot her dead here and now.

The sound of metal against metal rang in her ears, and Tara opened one eye to find that Kieran had placed the blaster down on the table. Opening her other eye, she looked deep into her father’s eyes, surprised to find there not the cold heartlessness of a killer, but the haunted pain of a tortured soul whose past transgression has finally caught up with him.

“I’m sorry.”

So intent was she on reading her father’s face – being unable to pick up on his emotions any other way -, Tara initially missed her father’s comment, her mind catching up quickly when she realized the impossibility of what it was he had just said. “What?”

Some of the pain Tara noticed in her father’s face receded, replaced by the simmering anger she no doubt knew he was keeping in check. “You heard me.”

Tara swallowed and nodded, unsure as to how else to respond. This was a man who had killed others in the past; someone who had killed her mother without a second thought; someone who had once tried to kill her. All of that gave him every right to be apologetic, but people like him didn’t feel that way. So why was he feeling that way now?

Casting her gaze downward, Tara struggled to make some sense, any kind of sense out of what was going on. “Why? Why apologize to me? Why not kill me now while you have the chance? You would have before had it not been for Republic Security. We’re about as far away from the Republic as you can get now, so what’s stopping you this time?”

“Time, Tara.” Kieran looked away from her, and Tara could tell that there was genuine sadness in his voice. “I’ve had a lot of time to think, Tara. Both on Oovo IV and…since, and I’ve come to the realization that the universe is, at its most basic, cruel and unfair.”

Tara tried to express disinterest in what Kieran was telling her, but it was difficult for her to do so, given that what he was saying was very much along the same lines as what she had been thinking over the past ten years, and particularly since she had become appointed to the Jedi Council. “What do you mean?”

Kieran looked up at the ceiling, then down towards Tara. “I’m surprised, Tara. I thought that you of all people would understand what it is I’m talking about. You’re still a Jedi, aren’t you? Of course, from the look of it, you may have taken up a new life as a slave girl of some Hutt overlord or something.”

He smiled thinly, and Tara tried not to give him the satisfaction of knowing how close to the mark his comment had hit. For the briefest of moments, she was glad that her connection to the Force had been severed. Her emotional control was in such turmoil that she feared lashing out in such a way as to compromise her principles.

Kieran made a dismissive gesture. “In any case, you should know as well as anyone else how inherently cruel the universe is. You Jedi parade around the galaxy, thinking you’re doing good and ridding the galaxy from evil, but you never quite seem to realize that the greatest evil you face isn’t from those who seek to harm the ones you protect, but from the ones you protect themselves.

Tara couldn’t help but agree with Kieran, even if she couldn’t bring herself to voice that agreement. It was all true. The Jedi were really being taken to task lately, what with the disastrous incident on Antar IV and the controversy over the Baby Ludi incident. It had become common practice among certain Senators to refer to the Jedi as “Palpatine’s Secret Police,” a belief that the Council did little to dissuade. Actions like that made Tara believe that the other members of the Council secretly believed themselves to be superior to the Senate and the Chancellor. She couldn’t help but imagine what would happen if, one day, the Council decided to take control of the Senate.

“I know,” Tara whispered. “I…I feel the same way.”

“I had no doubt you would,” Kieran replied. “Your mother was the same way.”

Despite herself, Tara found her interest piqued at that comment. “Really?”

“Oh, yes,” Kieran smirked. “She spoke to me several times about how glad she was to be with me, as it meant she didn’t have to put up with the Council and could live a relative life of peace and tranquility.” His smirk took on a feral touch, and Tara grew cold at he stared deep into her eyes. “And that’s what she wanted most, you know; a life away from all the chaos and corruption of the Republic. I wanted to give her that life, but she didn’t want it the way I wanted to give it to her, so she left me, and decided that the best thing for you would be to give you back to the ones she loathed the most. I wouldn’t call that the smartest thing she ever did, but considering what happened to her…”

Kieran let out a chuckle, and Tara looked away, unwilling to look her father in the eye any longer. The past few moments such had made it obvious to her that he was being manipulative towards her, hoping that, by being kind to her, he would find a chink in her armor through which he could cripple her more severely than she already was. Gone was the vulnerable figure that had entered the room, and in its place was the dangerous man that he was before, and would likely be for the remainder of the rest of his natural life.

He got up, retrieving his blaster as he did so. “I’m going to give you some time to think about your situation here, Tara. I’ve heard from reliable sources that friends of yours are on their way here. They may have already arrived. And as you may or may not know, we’re going to take them as our prisoners, just like you. When we bring them back here, I’m going to give you a choice. You can either stand beside me and live the life meant for your mother, or die alongside them, knowing you can’t do anything to stop me.”

Tara’s eyes widened as he stopped at the door, turned around, and smiled faintly. “And by the way, that empty feeling you have is from those lizards.” He gestured towards the frameworks at the corners of the room. “Can you believe it? Turns out there’s as many people here who hate the Jedi as much as there are in the Republic. And it looks like the most dangerous weapons are those that don’t appear to be that way. While you’re in this room, you won’t be able to pull any fancy Jedi tricks to get out. So get comfortable. You’re going to be here for a while.”

All Tara could do as Kieran left the room was slump against the chair and start to cry, her entire life crumbling around her faster than she could imagine. She had let Willow down. She had let Master Halcyon down.

And now she was going to pay the price for it.

**

Kieran walked down the hallway, surprised, and somewhat shaken, by the encounter that had just taken place. He had no doubt that Tara believed his words to be a complete falsehood, but in truth there was more to them than he would have admitted. The universe had to be cruel and unfair. How else could he explain the fact that, instead of doing this on his own time and with his own resources, he was now, for lack of a better term, wrangled into it by individuals who held no real stake in it, but sought to use it as a means to further their own agendas?

If there was one thing he despised most in this universe, it was being a pawn in someone’s game.

He couldn’t exactly blame Beth for getting him into this situation, regardless of the truth of that statement and how much he wanted very much to do so. She thought she was doing what was needed to be with her only living relative, and for someone who had spent her childhood raised among the Mandalorians, it was only natural that she felt as strongly for him as she did. If there was one thing those nomadic warriors prized more than credits, it was family.

Entering a room at the opposite end of the hallway, he found that personage hunched over a computer monitor, looking intently at the screen, which showed an image of the room he had just left. Hearing him enter, Beth turned to look at him. “That was quite a show you put up in there, Uncle. You nearly had me believing what you said.”

Kieran glowered, an act that caused the young woman, a product of Manadlorian upbringing and a fearsome warrior in her own right, to shift uncomfortably in her chair.

“It wasn’t,” he said, his voice conveying enough malice to tell Beth to drop the subject and never to bring it up again. “Everyone out there looking for our next guests?”

Beth nodded.

“They know only to observe?”

Beth nodded again. “If they find him, they’ll contact me and let me know. Trust me, Uncle. Nobody’s going to act unless you say so. They want the honor of taking out that Jedi scum to be yours as much as I do.”

“Good,” Kieran smiled, patting Beth on the shoulder appreciatively. “Still, it would be more amusing…”

Beth cocked an eyebrow. “Uncle?”

“Nejaa Halcyon put me away,” Kieran explained. “And now he’s here to do it again. But he doesn’t know that his apprentice…my daughter, is already my captive.” He let out a chuckle, finding something about that scenario amusing; an amusement Beth apparently didn’t share, if her blank look was any indication.

“Think about it, Beth. Yes, I want to take Nejaa’s life. But how more satisfying for me would it be…to make Tara do it?”

The realization of what Kieran said finally blossomed in Beth’s mind, and she smiled in return, letting out a chuckle at how amusing she found the idea. Kieran gave her another comforting pat on the back, then turned and left the room, the sadistic smile still on his face.

”Yes,” he thought. ”How much more satisfying would that be?”

**

Willow’s steps were the stilted gait of an individual who had just suffered a serious back injury, the result of her constant state of nervousness ever since leaving what passed for the spaceport where the ship had landed. If that had been a representation as to what she would expect from the rest of the planet, there was a very good chance she wasn’t going to get out of the experience with her sanity intact.

Her mood was somewhat alleviated by the fact that Master Halcyon, being ever the comforting parent, had chosen to walk in step beside her, even taking her hand on the occasion when her emotional state tilted a little too heavily on the unmanageable side. He wasn’t Tara, but as there wasn’t anything she could do about it, all Willow could do was accept the comforting touch and hope that her overall nervousness and memories of her time in Coruscant’s underworld as a child didn’t get to her.

Leading the way, Villie took a look around, his tongue flicking out through his sharpened teeth. “This your game, Halcyon. Where you think we should start?”

Nejaa took a look around the immediate area, finding a seedy cantina nearby that would seem to be the best place to begin their discreet inquiries.

“That seems to be as good a place as any.” Villie turned to look at the cantina, the faintest hints of a smile appearing on his face. Seeing the interest he showed at entering the area, Nejaa stepped up beside him and placed a hand on the Devaronian’s shoulder. “Don’t forget. We still have a job to do.”

“True, true,” Villie replied. “But you know what they say, Halcyon. All work and no play make for dull boys.”

Willow sneered at the Devaronian’s comment. “I’m not a boy, you know.”

Passing a glance backward, Villie let out a dismissive snort. “Hard to tell the way you’re dressed.”

Nejaa stepped towards Willow and took her hand, forestalling any attempt on her part to react to that comment. Looking back towards the cantina, he let out a sigh. “All right, Villie. We’ll check out the cantina. But just try to remember that we have a job to do?”

**

Burning Deck Cantina

”I’m not joking around, Faith. I’ve got the proof right here.”

Faith let out a sigh. “So you’ve been sending out your scrap droids to spy where you know you shouldn’t again?”

The unmistakable sound of a whine accompanied Dawn’s voice as it came over Faith’s comlink. ”Well, you never let me come with you whenever you go to places like this, so how else am I supposed to find out about what goes on here?”

Faith shook her head. For all of her skills, Dawn still had a habit for getting her nose stuck into somebody’s business, and invariably bringing them along for the ride. “Dawn, don’t make me send your sister back to the ship. You wouldn’t want us to take away your special birthday surprise, would you?”

Dawn sighed. ”All right, but you have no idea what you’re missing.”

Faith shut down her comlink and returned it to her belt. “And I’m not really interested in finding out either.” She turned to look at Buffy, only to find her attention riveted to the cantina entrance, watching as three people stepped inside. “What?”

“That Devaronian,” the blonde replied. “I never would have thought I’d ever see him again.”

“What about him?”

“Remember what Dawn told you about how we met?” Faith nodded, and slowly came to realize what it was that Buffy was talking about. That Devaronian must have been the one who had killed her mother. Reaching down for her blaster, Faith made a beeline towards the trio, ignoring all of Buffy’s pleading attempts to stop her.

”That devil’s gonna pay for making my B hurt so much,” she thought as she unholstered her blaster and brought it up. But before she could discharge a bolt that, at point blank range, the Devaronian had no chance in the seven hells of dodging, she felt the weapon wrench from her grip to go sailing towards the nearby wall.

“What the…?” Surprised by the action, she didn’t notice immediately that one of the two individuals accompanying the Devaronian, a male that appeared to be in his late sixties stepped in front of her, offering a polite hand.

“Good day to you. Perhaps you’d like to explain why you’re intent on killing my friend here.”

Approaching from behind, Buffy looked up at the newcomer. “You have pretty poor taste in friends, buddy. This guy killed my mother.”

The Devaronian gave the blonde a quick glance. “Now that you mention it, you do look a little familiar. You the daughter of that Anaxes senatorial aide I killed?” He smiled. “Easiest job I ever had, even if NT couldn’t shut up about it.”

Buffy let out a feral snarl, and it was only due to the actions of Faith that she didn’t do any more. Noticing that they were beginning to attract far more attention than she wanted, she looked at the assembled group. “I think we can all agree that we should take this little meeting to someplace a little less…public?”

The male took a look at the crowd. “I think that would be the best thing to do.” He looked at his companions, giving the Devaronian an especially hard look, before turning his attention back to Faith. “Let’s take this outside before anyone here gets the wrong idea.”

**

Five minutes and two attempts by Villie to provoke the blonde later, Nejaa led the group into a more reputable establishment than the one they had just left. Of course, “more reputable” on this planet meant that it was slightly less run down than its contemporaries and less likely to be filled with people who wanted to jab a blaster barrel or vibroblade in your ribs, but he felt that the distinction was important enough. He didn’t need to reach into the Force to know that Willow was growing more unnerved by the moment, and the altercation that would have erupted had they stayed would have caused her to do something she might have regretted. With the situation getting out of control, he had to do whatever he could to make sure Willow was safe. He owed it to Tara.

Leading the others to a table at the far end of the room, he made sure that they all didn’t position themselves in such a way as to gain an unfair advantage they would be able to exploit against the others, then sat down himself, focusing his attention on the dark haired woman who, in turn, was staring vibrodaggers back at him.

“All right,” she said, shifting her focus to Villie before returning it to him. “You want to explain what’s going on around here?”

“I’d be happy to,” Nejaa replied, placing his hands on the table in a gesture of friendship. “My name is Nejaa Halcyon. I’m a…”

“Jedi,” the woman responded, smiling broadly as she did so. Seeing Nejaa shocked look, she clarified, “Oh, it’s all over the Holonet; how you got embarrassed during the Scarlet Thranta thing. I thought I recognized you.” Nejaa winced, his discomfort drawing an appreciative chuckle from his Devaronian comrade, which in turn drew a sour expression from the blonde. Noticing this, the dark haired woman moved to place a hand on the blonde’s thigh, then turned back to Nejaa. “I’m Faith, and this is Buffy.” She jerked the thumb of her other hand back at the blonde. “Call her B.”

“I’d call her a little spitfire,” Villie unnecessarily brought up, Willow moving quickly to damper the fire that comment would no doubt bring.

“What I’m sure our friend means, Faith, is that Buffy seems to have quite a bit of a temper.”

“You’d have a temper too, Red,” If you met the man who was responsible for killing your mother.”

Willow’s already obvious apprehension about the situation, not to mention the fear she held towards the Devaronian, grew by leaps and bounds. What was far worse for her to realize was the fact that she recalled at that moment a comment that Master Halcyon had made before, that the two of them had once engaged in secret activities that weren’t meant to be known by others. She couldn’t help but wonder how many, if any, of those activities resulted in the deaths of innocent people, knowing that Tara would never approve of that sort of thing.

“I’m sorry for your loss,” Nejaa directed towards Buffy, who didn’t appear to be willing to accept the apology. “Truly, I am. But you can’t allow a personal vendetta to get in the way of our current mission.”

“Why not,” Faith demanded. “What’s so important that you’d have to associate yourself with a lowlife like him?”

An uncomfortable silence passed between the group, Willow noticing that Nejaa was trying to decide whether or not it was a good idea to reveal the purpose of their mission to them. Deciding on her own that it would be the only way to gain their cooperation, or at least lessen their concern about them, she spoke up. “Because he’s important to us; he’s helping us find a wanted criminal who we know is somewhere on this planet.”

“Lots of wanted criminals on this planet, Red,” Faith countered. “And we aren’t exactly high on the Republic’s Life Day gift delivery service, either. You’re gonna have to be a bit more specific than that.”

Nejaa sighed and, realizing that, Willow having revealed their mission to them, he had no choice, withdrew a holoprojector from his belt and placed it on the table, activating it. And as the image coalesced into being, it caused Faith’s eyebrows to noticeably rise in surprise. “Kieran Maclay, huh? Boy, Republic Security sure ain’t what it used to be if that guy managed to escape.”

“He obviously had help,” Nejaa grunted, oblivious to the fact that Faith had no knowledge of his role in the events in question. Equally oblivious, Faith continued to laugh for several more seconds before she stopped, a curious look on her face. She reached into her pocket and Nejaa, noticing Villie reach for his weapon, held up a hand.

“Wait.”

They watched as Faith retrieved a comlink and activated it. “Dawn, you there?” No response. “Dawn?” Several more seconds passed before Faith, annoyed beyond measure, shouted, “Hey, brat! You awake?!”

A young girl’s voice erupted from the comlink. ”Jeez, Faith! What’s got your spanners in a vice grip now?”

“What was it that you said you wanted to show me again?” Faith asked.

”Why do you wanna know now?” Dawn responded. ”Find someone that might be interested in learning what we know?”

Faith looked at Nejaa and smiled. “I think so.”
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Re: The Star Witches Saga: EPISODE II Chapter Nine Now Up

Postby SithLordWiccan » Wed Aug 01, 2007 9:12 pm

OK, I've spoken out in my other story thread about my complete disgust about the lack of response to updates to my story, but I feel that it has to get posted here, as well, because the situation involving the last update has finally made me realize that my disappointment needs to be made known to everyone reading both of my works.

The reason why I am bringing this up here is because the past week has brought something I've been trying to ignore for a long time now. I posted an update to this story nine days ago. Obviously, it has gone without feedback. That this pisses me off there is no doubt. But what doesn't help is the fact that seven other stories have been updated since, ALL of which HAVE gotten feedback.

Quite frankly, I've been more than accepting about this situation for far longer than I really should have, and as I said in the other thread, while I understand the reasons why both my stories aren't getting many readers composed to others, that doesn't mean by a long shot that I accept them. I really would like to think that since I first started posting fic here on Pens, my writing style and structure have grown considerably, and while I haven't spent as much time on this story as I would like, I would like to believe that I'm getting better at writing it. And as I've said, I do consider my work on the "Moonlight Densetsu" my best work yet.

So you can imagine how much I dislike the fact that it's all being ignored by readers of Pens. Of course, I have only the fact that there's been little to no feedback to go on with making that statement. Lots and lots of people could be reading this for all I know. But seeing as how I get a best a combined two or three responses to an update (sometimes months apart), I have no way of knowing that.

I may come off sounding selfish by being angry about not getting feedback, but when I look at other stories that get updated after I update mine, and see them getting a lot more than I do, I quite frankly have to wonder why I should continue writing updates for stories that apparently don't get read by anyone.

In conclusion, I'll just say this. If anyone out there were to tell me that the reason why you haven't left any feedback for my stories was because you don't have the time to read them, then answer this question:

You have time to read other stories, and you have time to leave feedback for them, so why don't you have time to do either when it comes to mine?
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Re: The Star Witches Saga: EPISODE II Chapter Nine Now Up

Postby towanda47 » Thu Aug 02, 2007 7:46 pm

Sith,
Just read your story and it is AWESOME! I know this doesn't excuse those who don't leave feedback but I'm sure there are many people who read your stories and get a lot of enjoyment from them. I hope you continue this story and to write because you are very talented...hopefully you also get enjoyment from writing it.
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Re: The Star Witches Saga: EPISODE II Chapter Nine Now Up

Postby SithLordWiccan » Wed Aug 08, 2007 9:02 am

towanda47: Thanks for the words of confidence. It's nice to know people think that way towards me. It'd help a great deal, though, if those words came a lot more often.

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• Title: Star Witches Episode II: Sins of the Future (Chapter Ten)
• Author: Alex
• Email address: decepticons_4_ever@hotmail.com.
• Feedback: I'm a feedback whore. I live on feedback, so feed the beast. It’s the only way I keep going.
• Distribution: Through the Looking-glass, Extra Flamey. If you want to put it anywhere else, let me know
• Spoilers: No real spoilers, since anything that might be mentioned has been out for at least four years. Still, it bears noting that this fic references stuff that happened in "Star Witches: Episode I", along with stuff that happened in “Attack of the Clones” (though for the most part, it's on the periphery) and a whole bunch of Expanded Universe material that I’m not even going to begin mentioning, since I’ll most likely be adding to it as I go along.
• Rating: PG-13.
• Disclaimer: Willow, Tara and other “Buffy: The Vampire Slayer” stuff that may show up belong to Joss Whedon and Mutant Enemy. All things Star Wars belong to George Lucas and Lucasfilm (though if you ask me, I’m doing a lot better with it than he has in recent times.) No money is being made off this fic, and I don’t have anything anyone would want anyway, so don’t bother suing me, OK?
• Summary: On the eve of the galaxy’s greatest conflict, Jedi Master Tara Maclay and newly anointed Jedi Knight Willow Rosenberg face a more personal crisis.
• Note: Special thanks to Chris Cook (Artemis) for beta’ing this fic, hosting it on his site, for being an overall swell fellow and for putting up with me (I know from experience how difficult it is for anyone to do that.) Also thanks to all the readers who liked the first one enough to leave feedback, and for providing me with the inspiration and strength to keep going. You guys rock. *hugs*

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[center]Chapter Ten[/center]

Tara awoke from a nap she thought would help to center her mind and help calm her down to find a figure standing in the doorway. Blinking her eyes in an attempt to focus them, she saw the shape dissolve into a figure with red hair. For a moment, her heart skipped a beat, her subconscious mind telling her that this was Willow coming to rescue her.

Then her eyes settled on the figure, and she realized that this wasn’t Willow at all, but a female who looked at her with thinly contained anger as she held a tray of food in her hands, stepping forward to place it down on the table.

Tara watched as she walked away, and then decided to ask her a question. “So what are you getting out of this?”

The female spun on her heel and looked back at Tara, her hold on the anger she felt slipping slightly. “What?”

“I know what my father…what he wants,” Tara explained. “He wants to see my master humiliated and killed and then do the same to me.” She looked into her guest’s eyes. “What are you getting out of this?”

“What I should have gotten my entire life,” the female responded after a moment’s pause. “Somebody in my life I could look up to.” Seeing Tara’s expression, she continued, “Oh, sure, I found people who took care of me, made me feel a part of a group, but that’s not what I wanted. All poor little Beth wanted was a father figure. Oh, sure. They tried to raise me right, but it’s kind of hard to get that among a scattered clan of individuals, even if they do consider family the most important thing in their lives.” She looked towards Tara and snickered. “At least that’s more than you ever got. Never have anyone looking out for you, dear cousin? Anyone make you feel special?”

Tara refused to give the female, who apparently went by the name Beth, the satisfaction of responding to her comment, mostly because she was thinking about, and coming to a sudden realization, of the enormity of what the other had just said. “Wait a minute. So my father’s…”

“He’s my uncle,” was the reply from Beth to Tara’s unfinished question. “I guess that makes us cousins.” Giving Tara a once over glance, she grimaced. “Can’t say I’m glad to meet you, though.”

“Why not?” Tara asked, genuinely curious.

“Never figured you’d be stupid enough to get involved in this situation,” Beth replied. “But then again, that’s what you people do, isn’t it? Get yourselves involved in that which doesn’t concern you, acting as if you’re the galaxy’s secret police and can stamp out anything you have a problem with.”

“I…I…” Tara stammered, only to have Beth raise her hand and cut her off.

“Save it,” she replied. “I’m not looking for an explanation. And I don’t want your pity.”

“Then what do you want?” Tara asked.

“If it were up to me, I’d burn you here and now,” Beth said, turning back towards the door. “But apparently he’s got some big plan for you that your friends are a part of. I think it’s a bad idea, but I’m not the one in charge of this little adventure anymore, and maybe I never was, so all I can do is just go along for the ride and hope I don’t get splattered all over the duracrete.”

She walked through the door, leaving Tara alone with her thoughts. She made her way over to the meal, picked up the utensil and began to eat, all the while beginning to formulate a plan she hoped would get her out of here.

**

Faith led the group to the docking bay where her ship was berthed, she and Buffy agreeing (though reluctantly in the latter’s case) that it would be a good idea for them all to get up to speed and formulate a plan on what to do about their mutual problem there instead of in a cantina where any being worth his, her or its salt could eavesdrop. Neither Faith nor Nejaa ignored the obvious feeling of anger Buffy felt towards their Devaronian comrade, but both agreed that, seeing as how the enemy of an enemy could be a valuable friend, they convinced her to put those feelings aside for the sake of cooperation.

Whether or not Dawn would feel the same way, however, remained to be seen.

The five beings and one droid entered the docking bay, and Willow let out a breath at the sight of the ship before her. “It may be a piece of junk, but I’d have felt a lot safer coming here on that instead of that bucket of bolts.”

“It might be a junker, Red,” Faith said louder than she needed to. “But she’s got it where it counts.” She took noticed of the fact that the exchange bristled the Devaronian a great deal; a sight that she also noticed brought great pleasure to her companion. Withdrawing her comlink, she said, “OK, brat. Lower the hatch. We’re here.”

The sound of the hatch unsealing was followed by the sound of the hydraulic whine of the ramp being lowered, a young girl dressed in a dirty grey jumpsuit and boots walking down it towards the others, her hair tied back into a ponytail and a pair of work goggles on her grease smudged face. Taking off the goggles, she looked towards Faith. “Hey, Faith. Sorry it took so long. I was busy recalibrating the quad mount and…” She then took notice of the Devaronian among their number, and immediately retreated back up the ramp.

“Dawn, wait!”

Hearing Faith’s words, Dawn paused halfway up the ramp and turned around. “What’s going on here, Faith? Why are you hanging around with the guy that killed my mom?”

“I’m not,” Faith explained, gesturing to Nejaa and Willow. “They are.”

“And who are they?” Dawn asked indignantly. “I know we usually associate with riffraff, but I was kind of hoping that you would have found someone with credits who can put our info to good use.”

Nejaa took that moment to speak. “Trust me, child. My companion and I are more than capable of dealing with the problem of which you speak.”

Dawn crossed her arms over her chest. “Oh, yeah? Prove it.”

Nejaa turned to Willow, and then noticed a packing crate across the way. Willow followed his gaze, turned back to Nejaa and nodded in understanding. Turning towards it, they both raised their arms; fingers outstretched, and used the Force to bring the crate over to the bottom of the ramp. Not surprisingly, seeing the display brought Dawn’s attitude towards them around.

“You’re Jedi?” she asked, letting out a squeal as they nodded in confirmation. “Cool!” She looked towards Faith as she and the group made their way onboard. “So you think these guys can make use of our info?”

“They came here looking for some hotshot bigwig,” Faith explained. “If that’s what you’ve got, I think they’d want to know about it.”

“So how much?”

Faith blinked. “What?”

“How much are we going to ask them for it?” Dawn explained.

“We’re not,” Faith answered eliciting a look of concern from Buffy, one that disappeared as Faith turned to look at her. Dawn, however, was less tactful.

“I can’t believe this, Faith. I know you like to go all gung ho for the good cause, but good intentions and being friendly don’t buy food or spare parts, and there’s only so far we can get by on our own.”

“We would be happy to recompense you for your expense,” Nejaa interrupted. “We may not have much, but you are certainly welcome to it if…”

“No,” Faith snapped, then, after calming down, added, “No. It’s not a problem. We’ll give it to you freely.” Seeing Dawn begin to protest, she jerked her thumb down the corridor. “Take Red and their droid to look over your collection; see what we can use to help them.”

“But…”

“Now, brat.”

Knowing that she was beaten, Dawn shoulders slumped as she made her way down the corridor as Faith indicated, Willow and the R5 unit moving after her. Moving to sit down at the nearby console, Faith called up the information that Dawn had uploaded into their computer, playing back the last few moments of the recording. Nejaa watched in fascination, then in growing concern. Something about what he was seeing didn’t sit well with him, that was certain, but he couldn't place what it was.

“I’ll be spaced,” Faith snickered. “It really is that space bastard.” She turned to Buffy. “Whatta know, B? Look’s like the brat’s snooping turned out to be of use to us for a change.”

“Remind me to raise her allowance,” Buffy deadpanned in response.

Faith turned to Nejaa. “So now that you know he’s here, what are we going to do?”

Nejaa rubbed his chin and cocked an eyebrow. “’We’?”

Faith let out a small chuckle and bit her lower lip. “Well, consider this my payment for giving you this info. Like Dawn said, I’m a sucker for a good cause. Besides, someone’s got to teach her that life’s not all about living from moment to moment scraping by just enough to do it all again the next day.”

“Indeed,” Nejaa responded.

“Hold on a second,” Villie cut in at that moment. “I didn’t sign up for a suicide mission.“ He glared at Nejaa. “I think it time to reevaluate the terms of this agreement.”

“I agree,” Buffy interrupted. “Why exactly do we…well, you, need him anyway?”

“We needed transportation from Bothawui,” Nejaa explained. “I…I knew him from dealings in the past. I thought he could be of help to us.”

“And I was, till you said you wanted to go here,” Villie continued. “You lucky that Blondie came around when she did to help you. If not for her, Villie most likely have let you there to rot.”

“Typically cutthroat of people like you,” Buffy pointed out.

“Enough,” Faith interrupted, working on the controls to refocus the image on the screen on the face of the person whom Kieran and his small group had just kidnapped. Nejaa hadn’t given it much thought before, but upon seeing the magnified image of the person’s face…

He gritted his teeth, his anger threatening to boil over at the sight of Tara getting captured by her father and his hired goons. Faith’s next words did little to assuage his bad mood.

“That dumb blonde. I told her to keep her neck out of the trash compactor.”

“That ‘dumb blonde’ just happens to be a very dear friend of mine,” Nejaa replied calmly.

“Really?” Faith responded with a shake of her head. “Looks like B was right. You do have bad taste in friends.”

Nejaa ignored the comment, deciding to focus his anger towards the others, looking at each of them in turn. “None of you tells Willow about this.” He gave the Devaronian an extremely hard glare. “Especially you. I swear by the seven Corellian hells if you say anything about this to her, I’ll grind you into meat chunks so small, even the Temple’s finest forensic droids won’t be able to tell who you are.”

Villie held up his hands defensively. “Believe me, Halcyon. Doing anything to anger Blondie the furthest thing from my mind.”

Letting out a breath, and with it his anger, Nejaa turned his attention back to the console, reaching over to call up plans of the local area. “Now that we’ve got that settled, let’s get to work formulating our plan.”

**

Willow had been thankful to get back inside a spaceship, even if it wasn’t the one on which she had arrived. Being out in the open presented too many opportunities for her to have been taken out by some wayward sniper or backdoor dealer with a vibroblade or hold out blaster. But being here among friends, even if some of them were less reputable than she would have liked, helped to calm her frayed nerves, if only to keep her from jumping out of her skin.

Of all of them, though, this young girl was the one that intrigued her the most. Far from being the sort of young person she would have expected to see, Dawn apparently had the wisdom of a woman twice her age, though from snippets she had overheard, she still had the maturity of a teenager.

And as she followed Dawn into her quarters, one other fact became immediately apparent.

”And the cleaning habits of one as well.”

The room was not unlike others she had seen, but what made this one stand out was the fact that nearly every square inch of the place was festooned with droid parts in various states of disrepair. Among the parts she immediately took notice of was the rusted head of a 3PO protocol unit on the pillow lying on the bed, several boxy MSE “mouse” droids on a nearby workbench, a pair of pit droids, one of which was turned on its side, at the foot of the bed and the bent arms of a WED Treadwell stacked against the side of the workbench.

“Impressive,” she whispered despite herself. Dawn smiled and picked up the head of one of the pit droids.

“Yeah,” she agreed. “It might seem like a lot of junk, but…it’s my junk.”

“So what do you do with it?” Willow asked.

Dawn shrugged. “Not much. Tinker with it a bit; see if I can get it operational.”

Willow cocked an eyebrow. “Use them to get into places you shouldn’t?”

Dawn smiled sheepishly. “Well, Buffy and Faith won’t let me go anywhere dangerous without their supervision, so I’m usually stuck here whenever we all stop somewhere like this. Besides, I usually don’t get us into that much trouble.”

Willow couldn’t help but notice the emphasis the young woman placed on her words. “Usually?”

Knowing who Willow was, and feeling that she was beginning to be interrogated, Dawn shouted, “It wasn’t my fault! How did I know Gorpa had a droid sensor in his private treasure room? And it wasn’t like I was looking to get into trouble. I just wanted to get an accurate map of the place so that I could catalogue it for future reference.”

Deciding that it was probably in her best interests not to pry any further, Willow picked up the severed torque arm of an R astromech as R5 followed her into the room, doing his best to avoid tumbling over. “Doesn’t look like there’s much that we can use.”

“You’d be surprised,” Dawn said. “Like I said, it might be junk, but it’s my junk. And I can put anything together out of this stuff.”

Turning to look at Dawn, Willow found herself impressed at hearing her speak so well of her abilities. Then again, even as she admired her words, one question found itself being asked. “And how often do those things usually work?”

“Long enough,” Dawn countered, and only after looking at Willow for several moments did she finally admit, “Not long enough to do most things, but long enough to serve as a distraction while we get away.”

Willow started to pick up random junk. “Then let’s start putting together something from all of this. I get the feeling we might need a distraction.”

As the three of them got to work, Willow couldn’t help but feel through the Force the adulation that Dawn felt towards her, a feeling that she found herself liking. Too many people these days were out to kill people like her, Master Halcyon and Tara, and it was nice to meet someone who saw her not as someone to be feared, but as someone to look up to and help, even if she wanted to do it for monetary compensation.

Thinking of Tara made Willow think briefly about her beloved, and she wished that, wherever she was, she was safe. The way things were going here, she was glad that the blonde was as far away from all of this as she possibly could be.
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Re: The Star Witches Saga: EPISODE II Chapter Ten Now Up

Postby Zampsa1975 » Wed Aug 08, 2007 9:17 am

Good update-y goodness...
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Re: The Star Witches Saga: EPISODE II Chapter Ten Now Up

Postby whatmakesyouhappy » Wed Aug 08, 2007 12:32 pm

:party GREAT GREAT GREAT update and that's all I have to say










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Re: The Star Witches Saga: EPISODE II Chapter Ten Now Up

Postby towanda47 » Wed Aug 08, 2007 7:28 pm

Great job. Can't wait for the next chapter!!!
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Re: The Star Witches Saga: EPISODE II Chapter Ten Now Up

Postby Alcy » Thu Nov 01, 2007 10:44 pm

Hi there, Alex,
I am exceptionally overdue in delivering feedback for this story and I have just spent a pleasant afternoon catching up on the many chapters that have passed since I last left feedback.

I thoroughly enjoyed Episode 1, and of course you are right in saying that you are doing a better job with it than George Lucas did.

Episode 2 is playing out just as well, with Willow and Nejaa tracking down Kieran Maclay and Tara following them closely.

I thoroughly enjoy the depth of detail in your story, while I of course do not have as good a grasp on the Star Wars universe as you do, I can instantly see the world that you are creating, complete with authentic inhabitants and settings, everything truly reads as though it is a part of the Star Wars Universe.

I love Faith’s role as well, definitely the lovable scoundrel character and she plays off well with Buffy and Dawn. The events are now at such a tense point in the story and I would hate for them to be left as they are, I’m dying for Willow to find out that Kieran has Tara and see just how she reacts, probably by dishing out some serious Jedi justice.

Anyway, this fic is great and I just wanted to let you know that all your hard work is much appreciated. I hope very much that you are able to find the will to come back to Star Witches because I love the whole series and I really want to see it play out.
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Re: The Star Witches Saga: EPISODE II Chapter Ten Now Up

Postby SithLordWiccan » Mon Nov 19, 2007 7:59 am

Zampsa1975: Glad you enjoyed the update. :)

whatmakesyouhappy: That's more than enough for me. :)

towanda47: I'm afraid you'll have to. I haven't had time to work on this story (though it's not for lack of ideas). Hopefully next weekend I'll find time to get to work on this.

Alcy: I'm glad you've enjoyed the story, especially the fact that you love how much detail I add to it. You're kinda my inspiration in that. I've read your stories (Sin City, Van Rosenberg, etc.) and I'm in awe about how well you can craft a very detailed fic. It helps that, as you said, I have a certain knowledge of the subject matter at hand. I'm a big fan of Faith, too. She's the sort of character in canon that's so misunderstood that I can't help but write her as a sympathetic character.

Sadly, as I said above, between work and school, I haven't had time to work on either this story nor "Moonlight Densetsu." And for the past several weeks, the only time that I have had time, I've been too busy going out. (It would, of course, help me to get this story written if I had a few more readers, but whatever...)

Anyways, glad you guys like the story. Hopefully I'll have something for you very soon.
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Re: The Star Witches Saga: EPISODE II Chapter Ten Now Up

Postby SithLordWiccan » Thu Mar 06, 2008 7:26 pm

Hey, guys. Doing a quick little post to let you know that I haven't forgotten about the story, but with Real Life grabbing me by the throat, I haven't been able to devote time to updating it. However, I'm currently thinking about some ideas, and hope to have them down in print sometime in the near future.

Hang in there, folks. :)
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Re: The Star Witches Saga: EPISODE II Chapter Ten Now Up

Postby nanotech » Fri Jun 13, 2008 11:55 am

I'm dying to find out what happens next! I never 'get' why people like Star Wars so much but I do love your stories now -- this and the Sailor Moon series -- awesome!

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