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Awww, that was so sweet and cute. And yay, smoochies! Was that the end of Sam? Somehow I don't think I will be so simple. I will be watchful for more plot twists, you can't lead me into a false sense of security, ya hear! :lol

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love it love it love it oh and love it. cant wait until the next update. :wtkiss

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Great update! I love everything about it! Update soon please :pray

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Great coming-together in these last couple of chapters - the fake-out with Tara dreaming (I thought something was a bit odd, around about the flying kick), Willow's babble, the sweetness of the two of them together... :blush And I liked Sam's exit too, not in a nasty get-out-of-here way - "The red-head squeezed back, loving Sam more now than she ever had, then they let go." That was a great line. They weren't meant to be, but it's not really difficult to see how they were together, for a while. I liked that mix of emotions.

Also "AND I’M IN LOVE WITH SLEEP! SHUT UP!" That was hilarious :lmao

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Tazraven,
That was so worth the angsty peril you put us through with "the interloper".
After Tara was faced with the Long Dark Teatime of the Soul, and a vivid dream of Willow going all Xena on Tara's front door, we found Willow as we know and love her.
Trying to screw up her courage to actually make the transition from the assumed to the real and make everything manifest into reality by telling Tara about Sam exiting stage left to make room for Tara to ascend the throne of Willow's heart.
Nothing makes delayed vicarious smoochies better than detailed and intimate descriptions of tongue kissage.
Just makes you want to sit back and visualize the yummy goodness taking place.

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Hey everyone =).

It is time once again for me to respond to my fabulous feedback. I'd also like to take this opportunity to tell everyone that I may not be posting a chapter 9, but instead an epilogue. I haven't exactly decided yet. If I can get out a good sounding chapter, then I'll go for it. But I'm not the best at writing happy endings, so I may cheat and go straight to the epilogue. Just wanted to give ya'll forewarning, just in case.

Once again, thanks to all the kittens who have read and enjoyed this story. :peace


PancakesinBellies: Hehe, yes. Smoochies galore. Keep twirling for as long as you want.

db: Does Sam just dissapear? Well, she wasn't living with Willow, so I guess she could have. And yes, there may be a happy horseback riding off into the sunset =).

Dianneswillowtree: Glad you like it. It's an early spring =).

lilkitty1389: Thanks for the compliment. More to come.

JustSkipIt: I can't promist you a dinner because I'm not sure if I'm gonna just write an epilogue or if I'll do another chapter. But I am glad you enjoyed the latest installment =).

Lonewolf22: Hehe, I got a kick out of writing that dream. Gonna try and write a date scene, hoping it'll turn out alright =).

sadie: More to come hopefully. I'm happy you're enjoying it =).

JujuDeRoussie: What more do you need? Nothing besides Willow and Tara's vicarious smoochies. No shame for Willow, Tara deserves a morning off =).

songbird: Lol, glad to see you're staying on your toes. Though I can tell you I don't plan on introducing more angst. Sam bowed out gracefully.

witchlove: Glad you love it! And yay for Willow and Tara kisses.

Willow Watcher: Updating as soon as I can.

Artemis: Thanks for the feedback =). Hehe, I laughed out loud writing that line. Is it weird to laugh at your own writing? Glad you're enjoying it =).

taralicious: I'm very happy that it was worth it. Heheh, Willow going Xena on Tara's door. Didn't think of it that way =). Visualize away :blush


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Me again, Im just popping in coz I have o say it publicly.......

The unstoppable force and the immovable object just cant exist at the same time...... and sorry sam, but the unstoppable force wins, especially when its W/T smoochies....


Oh and kittens, you think you have it tough with this..... spare a thought for the poor beta...... apparently its funny to play practical jokes on her and send her teeny bits of chapter to get all excited over and then POOF! no more chapter!!!!

Very comical taz and well, taz2!!!! ;-)

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This story is definately cute and I can't wait to see how it ends. I find myself looking for a bad guy here, but there just isn't one. Just people kicking themselves in the ass.

Hoping for a conclusion soon. Good luck with it.

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Alright everyone. Hope ya'll enjoy the latest chapter. I think it's safe to say that this is the last chapter, and an epilogue will follow, but that's not set in stone. Once again, I hope everyone enjoys it!

Title: Chemistry
Author: TazRaven
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Summary: A chemistry professor and a horse trainer meet and the sparks fly.
Rating: R
Timeline: Totally AU
Author's Notes: Notes at this point would be moot…

Chemistry

Chapter 9

“Um, Tara?”

“Yes, Will?”

“Can I open my eyes yet? Because when I was little, I never liked the dark, and I had a night light. I mean, not that I’m scared of the dark now, it’s just you’re beautiful and I like to be able to see and can I open my eyes yet?”

Tara giggled softly, both at her girlfriend’s impatience and ability to babble endlessly. That word: girlfriend. Tara’s heart grew warm at the thought. She loves me, Tara internalized, amazed to believe that the woman she was walking with actually reciprocated her own feelings. “No, Willow. It’s just a little farther, I promise.”

“Alright, but if we lose our way, or fall, or get attacked by vampires or something, all because I couldn’t open my eyes, then I get to say I told you so,” She heard Willow grumble softly.

Tara let a half-smile grace her lips at Willow’s ramblings and once again went over her mental checklist. After reassuring herself for at least the fiftieth time that day that everything was prepared, she let herself relax the tiniest bit. The full moon shone brightly in the star dotted sky as she guided Willow through the forest. She was determined that date go well, as their first two had been as close to disasters as they could possibly get without one of them dying. Tara shook her head softly as she thought about their first date.

Willow and Tara had decided to go roller skating. Dinner had gone well, and they were hoping the date would just get better. It had been Tara’s idea to go, deciding that it would be fun and different. Things had started out exactly as she had hoped. The women weren’t too uncoordinated and they managed to circle the rink several times while holding each other’s hand. The sounds of children’s laughter filled the air as a birthday party was going on in the sitting area. Willow smiled at Tara, both feeling a bit silly that they were probably the oldest couple on the floor, surrounded by five year olds and groups of teenagers. But they didn’t care.

Willow couldn’t take her eyes off Tara. The blonde looked so beautiful, her eyes full of laughter, and her pink flushed cheeks, the half-smile that could render Willow speechless. As they began to round another section of the rink, Tara skated the turn but Willow missed it, having been so caught up in gazing at Tara. Before she could stop, she had skated into the low wall that separated the roller area from the sitting area. Unable to stop her forward momentum, she tipped over the wall and slid a few more feet, crashing into a table full of six year olds. The children screamed as Willow crashed into the party and jumped up out of their seats to see what had happened. Finally coming to a stop, she opened her eyes and looked up. There, on the edge of the table, a cake teetered dangerously. Willow only had time to put her hands in front of her face before the dessert toppled onto her, giving Willow a face full of cake and icing. Wiping the mess from her eyes, she once again looked up to see the group of children laughing brightly and Tara looking worried, but at the same time trying to hold in a laugh that threatened to erupt from her lips.


While Willow hadn’t been seriously injured, she had left the rink feeling sore, embarrassed, and very sticky. Tara had been hoping that the night would end differently, but after the incident, Willow was eager to get home, shower, and sleep off the after effects of her utter embarrassment. So, with a large amount of understanding on Tara’s part, the two women had parted ways after a loving good night kiss, during which Tara had giggled softly after tasting icing. The second date hadn’t been any better, and if anything, was inarguably worse. Tara let her thoughts drift to their second try.

After last week’s disaster, the two women had decided to avoid skating rinks and stick to the traditional date places. Following a very predictable romantic comedy, they had set off for dinner at a nice Italian restaurant ordering almost as soon as they sat down. They had settled on some light conversation with frequent admissions of love dotting their talk. Their food arrived and they both began to eat. Willow took a huge bite of her lasagna and giggled with a mouth full of food at the look Tara gave her. Tara also started eating, savoring the flavor of her pasta with cream sauce. She could detect a hint of an interesting flavor in the sauce, but she dismissed it as herbs of some sort, until several minutes later when Willow asked Tara if something was wrong.

“What do you mean, Will?”

“Well, it’s just, your face looks a bit,” she paused for a moment, trying to think of the correct word, “swollen.”

Tara looked surprised for a moment and then tentatively moved her hands to her face. Upon feeling the swelling, she went to the bathroom to look in the mirror and gasped at what she saw. Her now swollen face had turned slightly red and her fingers were becoming puffy as well. She ran out of the bathroom and quickly called over their waiter. In as calm a voice as she could muster, Tara asked her waiter what was in the cream sauce. Seeing the flustered woman, the waiter had slowly listed some of the ingredients in the sauce. As he said shrimp, Tara had grimaced and told Willow that she was allergic. Very quickly, Willow ran out of the restaurant and brought the car to the entrance. Minutes later they were at the hospital and Tara was rushed to a room to get a shot of epinephrine.


Once again, the date had ended with a loving good night kiss, and a promise from Tara to get some rest. Now, on the eve of their third date, Tara could only hope that nothing ruinous happened again. Tara breathed a sigh of relief that nothing catastrophic had happened so far as she and Willow arrived at their destination. Slowly, she guided Willow to a space she had cleared earlier that afternoon. She told Willow to sit and keep her eyes closed and then quickly went about making sure everything was set-up. Taking one more deep breath and whispering a silent prayer that Willow like what she had planned, Tara asked her girlfriend to open her eyes.

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Willow had been understandably nervous when she had arrived for their third date. Her anxiety had only increased when Tara had requested that she close her eyes so that she could guide her through a dark forest late at night. Of course, one look into Tara’s eyes had given her all the reassurance she needed. Without another thought, she had dutifully closed her eyes and allowed herself to be led through the darkness. Now, sitting on the ground, listening to the sounds of Tara preparing something, she felt her butterflies return. Their first two dates had been disastrous, and they had yet to make love, although both women were very eager to express their passion. Circumstances had gotten in the way, and Willow was determined that this date end better, hopefully with waking up in Tara’s arms. She sighed softly and strained to hear any sounds that would give away what Tara was preparing.

Finally, after what seemed like an eternity of waiting, Tara had asked Willow to open her eyes, and she gasped at what she saw. She was sitting in a cleared area of the forest. Mere yards away a bubbling stream cut into the ground, creating a soothing sound over the clearing. The moon cast a glow over the clearance, washing the area in a beautiful blue radiance. Directly in front of her lay a blanket spread over the ground; atop it sat two glasses filled with what looked like champagne and a small plate of chocolate covered strawberries. Glancing to the side, she noticed a large tent, the flap open and inviting.

Willow slowly turned her head, her eyes finally settling upon Tara. The moonlight shone on her as well, making it seem as though Tara was an angel, or as close to one as Willow had ever seen. She stood up and walked over to Tara, gathered her into her arms, and soundly kissed her on the mouth. After a few blissful moments, the two parted and Willow leaned her forehead against Tara’s. “Thank you, so much. I love you, Tara,” Willow whispered.

“I love you, Willow. I just wanted everything to be-” She was interrupted by Willow’s lips once again pressed against her own. They kissed slowly and softly, but full of passion. “Perfect,” Tara finished, very aware of the double meaning.

Not needing any more words to express their feelings, Willow sat down and Tara sat next to her, both as close as they could be without being in each other’s laps. They fed each other strawberries and whispered words of devotion of affection, frequently stopping to kiss or hold the other close. The strawberries finally finished, Willow lifted herself from the blanket and held a hand out for Tara. Her soon-to-be lover took the proffered hand and pulled herself off the blanket as well. They quietly made their way to the tent.

Willow stepped inside the tent first, once again releasing a breath at the lengths Tara had gone to. An inflatable mattress was laid on the floor of the tent and covered with blankets and a thick comforter. Looking up for a moment, she noticed a clear covering in the top of the tent that allowed the inhabitants of the shelter to gaze at the sky. She released Tara’s hand and gently sat on the mattress. She pulled back the comforter and gazed at Tara, waiting for her to make the next move. Tara turned around for a moment to zip the tent flap shut and then turned back. Her breath caught in her throat as she let her eyes settle on Willow. For the first time, she let herself realize what was about to happen. She was going to make love with the woman she was hopelessly in love with.

Tara walked the few feet to the mattress and knelt on the edge of it. Willow took the initiative and leaned forward, capturing Tara’s lips in a soft kiss. The intensity grew as their passion was uncovered. Tongues dueled and hands roamed. Their lips and tongues caressed each other, their fingers caressing even softer skin. Clothes were divested and they lied down side by side on the mattress, covered by the thick blanket. And into the night, Willow and Tara made love for the first time under the stars.

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Thanks to all the kittens reading and enjoying!

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:pinky Dibs oh this was so cute just made use say what else could go wrong but in the end everything is perfect and lots of :wtkiss we can all say awwwww :applause :banana :kiss1 :banana :bigkiss :kitty

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Hi. :wave

Very sweet. and Hot :whistle

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Well, no riding off into the sunset -- but wandering off into the moonlight, so... I'll take it! :party

Am I to understand tath Tara took them off into the woods and set up camp and prepared the food herself so that there could be no mishap?

Now *that's* romantic... and possibly very slightly obsessive :-D (yet another reason she and Willow are perfect for each other!)

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*Big cheesy grin*

Awww, how precious. I have to say I really hope there's an epilogue, but if not, this has been a wonderful story. I hope you write more.

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tazraven: Great update, I'm really sorry to hear that this might be the last chapter, if it is I really, truly hope that you write something else soon. I really loved the effort that Tara put on the third date, I felt so sorry for Willow and Tara for what happened in the first two dates, at least the third date was something really special. I can't wait to read more.

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Ooo it's so romantic!! Nice update :-)

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I totally agree with you!! ;-)

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I think I may have mislead some kittens with my note at the top of this recent update. What I meant to say was that there was definitely going to be an epilogue, just not necassarily another chapter. Sorry for the confusion. Thanks for reading!

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i missed not one, but *two* updates.....and how cute! i love it how nicely they're progressing *dreamy gaze*

keep up the good job!

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Sorry for neglecting feedback for so long. You are constantly updating and I should show more gratitude as a reader by leaving FB.

Woohoo. Finally they are a couple. Even if I'm pissed with Sam for sniffing after Willow. That isn't appropriate in a relationship. She should have asked not spying on Willow. They outcome was okay. Sam is gone and the relationship with her history. Was one of Willow's worst ideas any way. And I'm so glad she is gone.

The first two dates were very funny. Not that funny for the two ladies it seems. Poor Willow, poor Tara. But in a few years they will laugh their heads of about the way it all started. The romantic styling Tara chose for the third date made up for everything. Very romantic setting. No wonder Willow was overwhelmed. Third time is a charm.

Thanks for this story. I really like it.

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Awesome update! I totally love it! :party :luv


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Tazraven,
I am gratified to see that you didn't shy away from the object lesson that both Willow and Tara have learned about trying to blend in with the rest of the sheep when planning their first date.
Roller skating and the fancy schmancy restaurant scene are not their style so no good could come of either of them.
Since they have an exalted status in and amongst the mere mortals they walk amongst, they are allowed to wipe the slate clean and have their third date become their first for purposes of being recorded in the ledger of of their lives together.
And what a first date it is with champagne and chocolate covered strawberries.
Such a yummy tableau of visual imagery it is; Willow and Tara in each other's arms teasing each other with the strawberries, Tara holding a ripe juicy berry in her mouth and beckoning Willow to nibble upon it until she reached Tara's moist lips and her tongue would dart out to lap up the juicy juice dribbling down Tara's chin and neck.
Then they adjourned into the privacy of their tent and I'm left with a pup tent of my own.

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Welp, I thought I'd take this opportunity to answer some feedback and say that the epilogue is basically finished. Just need Kay to sign on so she can beta it. Should be posted tonight or tomorrow. It's been great ya'll. Thanks for all the great support!

Dianneswillowtree: Yay for dibs. Heheh, yes lots of Willow and Tara smoochies. Love the dancing bananas.

Pinocchio1940: Thanks for the compliment =)

db: Nope, no sunsight, but definitely moonlight. Heheh, Yes, she really did that. Glad that you noticed the slightly obsessive bit.

PancakesinBellies: Thanks for the big cheesy grin =). There will be an epilogue, hopefully poasted tonight.

Lonewolf22: I definitely want to write something else, and I actually have a couple of ideas floating around at the moment. Don't feel too sorry for them, it can be funny in the future.

JujuDeRoussie: Glad you liked my answer. I know, I'm a sucker for romance. Thanks for the compliment!

Thianne: Hehe, love the dreamy gaze.

sacinema: No worries for neglected feedback. Readers are awesome, whether they leave feedback or not. Eh, don't be too hard on Sam, she just loved Will. Though she did betray the trust a bit. Glad you liked the first two dates, I know I definitely had a fun time writing that bit. Glad you like it!

lilkitty1389: Thanks for the feedback =). Glad you're loving it.

taralicious: Nope, lesson learned for both of them. Regular dates just don't work. Heh, not sure I wrote all that in the moonlight date, but visual imagery in imaginations is always welcome. And in the privacy of their own tent, we shall let them stay =).


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I would like to say a few thank yous to the people that have really helped me out during this experience. First, a huge thank you to my girlfriend for telling me to post my fic in the first place. Secondly, a possibly even bigger thank you to Kay (aka Ice, aka Spellbound). Seriously Kay, you’re the best beta anyone could ask for. Thanks for listening to me freak out about everything. Finally, a big thanks to all the kittens… This has been a great experience, and I can only hope my next fic is met with as much happiness and interest as this one was. Keep your eyes open for the next fic, which may even be a sequal (maybe). Have a good one!

Title: Chemistry
Author: TazRaven
Distribution: Sure, if you actually like it that much to use it.
Feedback: If you don’t have something nice to say, put it in a letter and send it to me anyways.
Disclaimers: I don’t own any of the characters. Please don’t sue…
Summary: A chemistry professor and a horse trainer meet and the sparks fly.
Rating: R
Timeline: Totally AU
Author's Notes: Willow and Tara ride off into the metaphorical sunset…

Chemistry

Epilogue

“Is that all of them, Tara?”

Tara giggled, too caught up in watching Willow as she tried to carry a heavy box up the stairs to her room than listen to the question. No, our room; our house, Tara corrected in her mind. She smiled at the thought.

“Tara, are you even listening to me?”

“What? Oh, sorry Nate.” She smiled sheepishly and walked over to him.

The tall man before her returned the grin, shaking his head. “I don’t know what I’m ever gonna do with you kid. You’re hopeless.” He threw up his hands dramatically and then enveloped her in a giant bear hug.

Tara laughed heartily, hugging him back with all her might. “You know you love me Nate. Don’t even try and deny it.”

From across the room, a shout was heard. “Hey!” The two friends released from the embrace and turned to face an envious looking Willow. “Don’t I get a Tara hug?” she asked sweetly.

“Of course, baby. You always get Tara hugs.” Willow smiled brightly and jumped forward to squeeze her girlfriend. Nate made a nauseous looking face, but was stopped with a glare from Tara. He smiled and left the two women to continue their hug.

“I’m so happy,” Willow whispered into Tara’s neck, unable to keep the joy from her voice.

Tara pulled back slightly to gaze into Willow’s eyes. She would never get tired of seeing the love she felt for Willow reflected back at her. She moved forwards and brushed her lips softly over Willow’s. The kiss was soft and sweet, but underneath there bubbled a passion that could not be contained. After a few moments, the kiss deepened, and was only ended when a noise that sounded suspiciously like a throat being cleared passed through their ears. The two women stepped back but still kept their hold on each other, their fingers entwined as if they could never let go.

Buffy stood next to them, her arms crossed, tapping her foot impatiently. “You two are just as bad as when you first got together. Can’t you keep your hands off each other for a couple of hours?” She sounded serious, but the good natured chuckle at the end of her question told Willow and Tara that Buffy was just joking.

Willow gave Buffy a brilliant smile and answered with absolute conviction, “No, and darn happy about it.”

Buffy laughed and walked away, but not before shouting one last jab over her shoulder. “You know if you both want to get moved in today, you better stop making out and start helping.” She laughed again at the blush that formed over Tara’s cheeks and then left to lug another box up the stairs.

Tara lifted her lips into a half-smile and turned her gaze back to the red-head in her arms. “She’s right, you know. As much as I hate to admit it, we really should be helping.”

Willow shook her head and pouted. “Don’t wanna,” she whined cutely, pulling Tara closer to cement her point.

Tara grinned at her lover’s amazing ability to be the cutest thing ever, and then leaned her face closer, close enough to breathe in to Willow’s ear. “How about I make it up to you later tonight?” she whispered sensually, unable to suppress a grin from forming when she felt Willow shiver beneath her touch.

Willow took a deep breath and willed herself to speak without squeaking. “Um, and how exactly will you make it up to me?”

“Well, I can be very, very, persuasive,” Tara whispered, punctuating the last three words with little licks to Willow’s earlobe.

This time Willow did squeak, unable to hold back the sound as she felt Tara’s warm tongue caress the bottom of her ear. The squeak quickly turned into a low moan as Tara began to kiss her way down Willow’s neck, Tara’s fingers lightly massaging the sides of her stomach.

“Well,” Willow breathed, “as long as you promise.”

“Oh, I definitely promise,” Tara answered, loving the sensations she was causing in Willow. She pulled her hands up to Willow’s face and grabbed her lips in a fiery kiss, a kiss that promised passion and love for not only tonight, but the rest of their lives. And as abruptly as the teasing began, it ended. Their lips separated with an audible pop, and Tara released her hold on Willow, running up the stairs and giggling the entire way.

Willow shook her head, trying to allow the fog to lift from the Tara induced haze. After a few moments, she ran up the stairs after her, looking forward to Tara fulfilling her promise eternally.



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Hey !! I don't say DIBS like people say when they are the first because I don't know what it means :blush

But it's a sweet epilogue... the two of them in THEIR house... it's so natural!

Thank you and I'll be looking for your next fic ;-)

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:pinky Hay TR wonderful and very much with the Awwwwwwwwww so sweet. you are a great writer and I will be watching for more work from you and if you do a sequal oh boy and last since you like my bananas here you go :banana :eatme :banana :eatme :banana :eatme :banana

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Ok, that was seriously cute. :heart What a wonderful, lighthearted and fun little love story. Great writing! I can't wait to see what else you'll come up with in the future. :applause


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Oh it's finished how sad. But a good ending which sums it all up. Thank you for your great story, i had fun reading it.

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Tazraven,
First of all, YAY! at hearing that you are going to bring us another chronicle of Willow/Tara lovin' and everything that peripherally floats around in its wake.
Proving once again that from a closure, some greater good must come, and I foresee that Willow and Tara will be coming and coming far into the night and the next day and...
There is no finality to the Willow and Tara union as they are as open-ended as the universe; nice that you have reflected this in your drawing of the curtains, metaphorically and otherwise, upon their house so that even if we no longer can voyeuristically watch them them in this variation, we know that Willow and Tara are taking every opportunity that their own house allows in making each other scream their beloved's name out and make lots of other growling and moaning noises.
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You know if you both want to get moved in today, you better stop making out and start helping.”

That's really what Slayer strength is for. Buffy can move all the boxes into Willow and Tara's house and they can borrow her stamina to christen every room in their new domicile with the hot sticky sweaty goodness of their lovemaking.

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tazraven: Great ending, I loved how everybody was teasing Willow and Tara for not helping to move into their new place, LOL that was just so funny. I really hope that we get something new from you very soon, I can't wait.

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Awww...They're all precious with the moving in and stuff. Although, I didn't get up to any hanky-panky when I was moving in with my fiance. Hmmm...maybe I'm doing something wrong. ;-)


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