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Re: Elemental: Seven Stories for Seven Days (a series)

Postby Emms » Wed Nov 02, 2005 8:58 am

*deep breath*.....Cyd......simply....wow.

It’s amazing how a good piece of writing can floor one so thoroughly...that was better than any book I've ever read......that was the most amazing piece of writing I have ever read.....I don't even have words.....

I would quote something......but I'd have to quote everything......there is one thing though that cannot go un-highlighted

piles and forts and miniature walls of foliage.


I loved that....it was....wow I can't even think of any words....

I'm sorry Cyd....I meant to leave you some really good feedback....but I can't seem to wrap my mind around the proper words to do so...

Thank you for writing this.....

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Re: Elemental: Seven Stories for Seven Days (a series)

Postby binky » Wed Nov 02, 2005 11:16 am

I haven’t a clue about whether the group planned it this way, but the W&T of both Water and Wood seem about as different from the archetypal canon W&T as you can get. Of course, both stories are predictably well-written, so I don’t mind in the slightest.

hermitfish, Wood – this was just wonderful. I think it’s my favorite of the series so far which is really saying something, though strange enough, the characters are the most alien from the ones I’ve come to know from the tv serial. I loved the contrast and balance here, using wood, as natural a material as you can get, and marrying it with metal and technology. Plus you managed to switch the archetypal roles usually assigned to W & T (i.e., how W is normally tech-girl, and T is Gaean-earth-mama). I agree completely with watson—this story more than the others feels like a prequel to something of more epic proportions. Also because it’s not tied to the original characters as much, I’d think there’s a lot of potential here for a true original story, beyond BTVS fanfic (not that there's anything wrong with ff). I was a science fiction junkie before I got hooked on Buffy. I know I’d buy it, based on this little peek.

Thanks to the both of you.

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Re: Elemental: Seven Stories for Seven Days (a series)

Postby terra21 » Wed Nov 02, 2005 9:42 pm

Cyd, this story is... amazing. This creation of yours could be a stand alone novel or series for that matter. I can see many possibilities both prior to and after this episode. I think you most definitely have to write more of this universe.

I was capitivated from the get go. Even though I knew what the story was about, I am still floored at your talent. The descriptions of the scenery were right on, I could clearly see everything in my mind.

Your element was more of an subtle factor until we are introdced to the "Willow tree", even then "wood" became an after thought because I was so engrossed in the story line. That's no discredit by the way. I'm just saying that this story is much more than just about wood.

I do hope you continue I have a lot of unanswered questions. Like...

What lies ahead of W/T?
What was Adam's plan?
Who was Willow's master?

Impeccable writing Cyd. Just im-freaking-peccable!

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EDITED: Wtf? I forgot to comment on the SMUT! Now that is some good writing when I forget to comment on the smut. So now I'm back to say that it was effn intense!
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Re: Elemental: Seven Stories for Seven Days (a series)

Postby justin » Thu Nov 03, 2005 2:39 pm

That was a brilliant story.

You draw the reader in from the start, with the first POV, wandering who it is and why they're caged.

From then on it's impossible to (metaphorically) put the story down, wanting to know what's going to happen next.

The story leaves a lot of information out. which is good since it let's the reader come up with their own answers. Also too much exposition would have distracted from the main story.

Like most everyone else I'd love to see more adventures of W&T in this universe.
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Re: Elemental: Seven Stories for Seven Days (a series)

Postby hermitfish » Thu Nov 03, 2005 4:48 pm

I am having tech difficulties with the individual replies but I wanted to say that all this lovely feedback makes me very glad I made the posting deadline. Just to clarify - I have planned two more parts to this story but I'm not sure when I will start working on the next bit. Once again, I have to thank all the great people in the group. I've had such a good time.

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Re: Elemental: Seven Stories for Seven Days (a series)

Postby meretricious » Thu Nov 03, 2005 5:33 pm

wow, cyd, as much as i loved every version of this story in the development, your final version shines even brighter. if i hadn't already been your groupie, i'd be begging to become one after this.
so many moments to love in this story, i especially liked willow thought that tara was "a beautiful world to cast my eyes upon", excellent contrast to willow's loss of the only world she's ever known. now willow has found someone worthy of her emotional connecting ability, love how tara's anger for willow and feelings toward willow allows her to begin to rediscover her individuality. love the emotional fusion being realized as willow describes "I was her heart, pumping full and strong…her lungs, breathing jagged and sharp", though of course it put maria mckee's song "breathe" in my head for a day or two (your heart beats my blood, my breath fill your lungs).
you've created such a fully realized world here, and it seems so effortless. such careful word choices, and no unnecessary words, it's amazing to me how you can create something so vivid with such economy of phrasing.
think i'll go reread this again now so i can have a big goofy dreamy look on my face for a while-your writing does that to me~mary
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Re: Elemental: Seven Stories for Seven Days (a series)

Postby tarawhipped » Thu Nov 03, 2005 6:57 pm

Oh dear, where to begin? I love your portrayal of the young Willow…it so succinctly describes her character without spending a lot of time on the past. It also firmly grounds her in canon, imho, despite how much the story itself differs. Willow has great power, but she’s also a people-pleaser, so it’s fitting that she uses her power to benefit or please others, even if they’re using her for their own purposes (her Master), or don’t actually want it (Tara).

There’s so much going on in this story that it’s hard to focus on any one or two things, but I think you did an amazing job with the idea of Willow being bound not by her cage so much as by her own sense of duty. If her cage is unlocked now, has it always been? She is clearly devoted to her Master, and attempted escape seems unlikely. The unseen Master is herself an enigma…did she have any real feelings for Willow, or was she always just using her for her abilities? The destruction of the tattoos seems simply a punishment at first, but after rereading every draft, it struck me that perhaps she was freeing Willow of her servitude, knowing that her business was ruined anyway. Whether it was belated benevolence or that she really thought Willow had betrayed her, it seems as much a symbolic gesture as a punishment. Either that or they tied Willow to her in other ways…now that the Master is presumably on the run, did she need to destroy the link to Willow to sever a telepathic link? I dunno…in any case, I hope you come back to it.

The casual yet vibrant, entertaining interactions between Tara and the crew (and Faith, Xander, and Donnie are a brilliant combination!) are a nice contrast to the austerity of Willow’s situation. I loved the line “much is forgotten when it is not spoken,” and it leads in so well to the Willow/Tara interactions, since Tara actually taking an interest in Willow the person seems to make Willow remember her own humanity, her desires, dreams, plans, leading up to this, which I thought was beautifully put:
When I spoke those memories, they became alive again...yet they didn't hurt. For a moment, there was more than just pain. I had recovered sequences of time that filled the entire spectrum of emotions. The person kept in the dark didn't have to hide anymore.


I know you plan to continue this, and I hope you spend some time describing (in whatever form: flashback, exposition, etc.) Willow’s life over the four years of her enslavement. When we first see her she’s so resigned to her life, and I can’t help but wonder if she was from the beginning or if her will was broken along the way, cause she doesn’t even seem to think of the future.
The elders always told me of a grand prophesy and how I would play a key role.
I just never knew my destiny, to rule as the High Priestess, would be the portent for the demise of our civilization.
Ok, so that seems pretty bad, but I have a feeling that her role in the prophecy is just beginning. While Willow’s determined to be with Tara, I like that it’s only after she recreates Tara’s world and discovers that Tara doesn’t want her for her abilities, but for who she really is, that Willow asks “Will you take me with you...when you go?” It’s a good way of showing that, prophecies and fate or no, they’re choosing a future with each other out of free will.

The sex scene was so well done, and so meaningful, with Willow breaking the cage, then choosing to leave it of her own accord to go to Tara. Tara saying Willow’s name in her sleep was a nice way of proving to Willow (if she still had any doubts) that Tara wants her, and I love how you shift the perspective on waking to Tara, who finally gets what she’s been missing.

Every draft of this impressed me more, Cyd, and the final product blew me away. The depth of emotions and issues you include make every one of your stories worthy of repeated readings, and it’s been a pleasure to see the progression of this. I can’t wait for the continuation of this, your other in progress fics, and anything else you care to post (oooo…Cyd’s grocery list!). Frickin’ amazing, dude.

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Re: Elemental: Seven Stories for Seven Days (a series)

Postby hermitfish » Thu Nov 03, 2005 8:39 pm

Sally: For some reason my reply to you was crashing the damn post. To sum it up...glad to make you sound crazy on a train and I look forward to your dibs when I get to the next part.

caz: Hi Caz...I like 'fucking brilliant'...sounds like a good t-shirt. :)

Missocki: I'm glad you liked...thanks for stopping in.

tarebear: Hi Ceci...thanks for all the niceitudes...you're too sweet. My muse is notoriously fickle but next times she floats in, I'll have a word with her concerning your request.

i shall never doubt watson EVER again!


No doubting of the watty here...she has the statistical evidence to prove everything. Hmm...if anything, we should probably cower in fear of her awesomeness.

arwen276: Hi Arwen...I thought the theme was a little tricky on this one because most of the other elements have clearer emotions that I could associate with them. I wasn't sure a big fricken tree was necessarily enough for the entire story, thematically, so I tried to tie it more into a death/rebirth life cycle balance type thing. I'm glad you liked that aspect.

umgaynow: Thanks

UnderTheirSpell: Speechless is okay :)

eirnlove: Thanks for the interesting thoughts. I do agree that the fic is more Willow focused with how it explores her pov. I really thought Willow's own thoughts and feelings were a barrier here almost as much, if not more, than the Master. Willow felt she had failed her tribe and, when she became a servant, she almost relished it because it was punishment for her failures. I think she almost felt accomplishment, in a twisted sort of way, when she found she could do what her Master asked of her. That was what made her so obedient despite all the magical power she had.

Tara here was really Willow's introduction to a different type of life as Willow didn't really know a lot about truly living. Tara could empathize with having her world destroyed but rather than let that destroy her, Tara tried to rebuild herself. Willow finally realized, through her newly formed relationship with Tara, that she could rebuild herself too. She realized that she didn't have to hold a dead world together because of the unwarranted guilt she had.

Anyway, I've probably rambled a bit...but I'm so glad you enjoyed. Thanks so much for stopping by.

Boschi: Re: Gay Aboriginals in Spaaaaace

I have no idea what book that is but it sounds interesting.

Re: Faith

Thanks...like I said in a previous reply, this is the first time I've written Faith as anything more than a cameo and I really liked what voice I found with her. I'm glad you did as well.

Re: Flashbacks

I'm happy they flowed okay for you. I think it's very easy to get lost in flashback and drag them out and slice up the present day story.

Artemis: Hi-ya Chris...

That was really cool. This, for you, is a 'short fic'?


Heehee...no. Now, I clearly remember asking if there was a maximum length and getting a 'no, don't worry about it' kind of response. Of course, when this thing shot 5000 words over my own expectations and I was pressed to deadline with fears of being beat up by Car's shovel (b/c she's closest and skilled in shovel-fu), I realized that this probably wasn’t the best choice for a challenge fic. :)

Speaking of fic...

...how much Willow wanted to please Tara, yet at the same time how much she didn't understand how to go about it.


Yes, that was exactly what I was going for - the idea that Willow had never been subjected to a 'normal' relationship and she had no idea what she was feeling or how to act. I think Tara was very good for her on that front.

Faith and Tara and the boys wouldn't be explaining 'the Blight' and the workings of their ship and their position in the socio-political structure to each other, any more than out here in the real world you explain how your car works when you give someone a lift.


:lmao I like a 'show not tell' format for that kind of stuff. There was little need to get into the Coalition and the societal structure of the universe, in general, because this section focused more on W/T and her home world. That kind of stuff should come into play at a later date.

Heehee...poor Xander indeed. He prob just needs to get laid. Hmm...but don't we all....

I'm glad you liked the smut. It is an extra special compliment coming from someone who writes those types of scenes so well. Thanks so much, Chris.

watson: Hi-ya watty-boss...

I’d like to get my request in now, before you become all famous and forget your friends


That's not my style, dear...your request will be granted at the first possible date (if such a pipe dream actually materializes)...

I'm using Cages cos that's how I think of the bigger story


Okay, now for the title confusion. As you know, Wood is the obligatory title for Elemental. The freestanding series title is Searching for Infinity. The first part of that series is called Cages. In other words - stop naming so many damn things already, Cyd!

I commend your efforts on reading so many versions and I knew you would check that word count for me - I expect nothing less.

The enormity of what Willow is doing, her powers, yet how small she appears how little she thinks of herself.


Yes, definitely a combination of the 'cages' she's put herself in since her world was destroyed and her treatment. Lots of self confidence to build/rebuild...good thing she's got Tara in her corner.

There is so much unknown between them
and
How their hearts are slowly and tentatively taken by the other is so sweet and romantic


I didn't want Tara to show up and they instantly have no more problems and were in super happy love zone. That would be like a tap dancing musical number appearing halfway through the fic for no particular reason (I can only get away with that in Insanity). I liked the fact that they really didn't understand each other but were still attracted nonetheless. I think the set-up gives the relationship room to grow.

Princess Leia...that is a giggle. Then, my brain shifted to Willow in that little gold outfit and checked out for the rest of the day.

Thank you, thank you, and thank you again for the invite to something so special. Means a lot.

Tiggrscorpio: Wow, you read it a few times...thanks and I'm glad I could draw you in. I packed a lot of story background, uber setting information, and altered characters into this fic so I get why it is kind of overwhelming. Your thoughts on the theme are very lovely. If I had to summarize it for someone, I think I would try to explain it that way.

AntigoneUnbound: Hi-ya Mary...

which is not to be confused with the woody element


Don't get me started on the vast number and variations of 'Cyd is bringing the wood' jokes I had to endure...you'd think with this many talented writers/betas, one of them would actually be funny...oh well.


*ducks under the desk and says 'just kidding'*


I love this whole section, BTW...

Willow's evolution, too, was just fascinating to read. You worked the element of power so effectively: she was taken as a young child (a time we associate w/ powerlessness) b/c she was marked as special, and even within that select group she was seen as powerful; so powerful, in fact, that she would be a leader at a remarkably young age. And then she's stripped of power, reduced to servitude, and enters a bizarre new relationship to authority.


This Willow is prob the most complex character I've ever tried to jigsaw into a puzzle. Power shifts, lack of free choice, and isolation...oh my.

You chose a unique (and potentially dangerous) twist to have Willow be connected to a Master that was relatively kind (key word: "relatively") and who also chose to use her in some very special ways. It would have been easy to have the Master be an unequivocal villain for whom Willow felt only hatred.


Willow has a lot of power in her gift. If she hated or had grown to truly hate her Master, it’s likely that she would have lashed out at some point. Now, we don't know what good or bad that would have done because we know very little about her Master. Like I said earlier, Willow felt this was what she deserved...and nothing that happened during her servitude convinced her otherwise. In fact, she began to need the routine. It became rewarding. There will be clarification on this relationship at a later date that will fill in some of the pieces. At any rate, I still have a lot of work to do with this character.

[Blight element], in conjunction with Willow's distinctly sylvan background, made their MO even more heinous.


Indeed.

did Faith have some kind of unspoken crush on Tara?


No, more of a really strong friendship. Not planning anything on that front.

Thanks so much, Mary, for gracing the thread with your always eloquent feedback...I appreciate it.

ringwaldoeuvre: Hi Mary...I tend to think the story is in the details - the more I can coherently give, the more the readers can see. It is far more important with an uber fic where the setting is something new. The crutch that is Sunnydale and the world BTVS created is not there to fill in things, so I try to make that sort of thing a priority. Thanks for the kind words.

the hero factor: Thanks...I'm glad you enjoyed. :)

JustSkipIt: Hi Debra...

It's not just that the space is so boundless, but even the world they are currently on, Willow's calm, seems huge. I have no impression of any boundary.


Here, I was thinking of outer space as infinite, without boundaries (hence my preferred title choice). I glad you see that in the fic.

And Willow seems emotinally stunted to perhaps age 13 when she became high priestess.


I think Willow sees herself as two people...the child/high priestess she was growing up and the servant she became. The first, the phenom child destined so much responsibility and pressure so young. I think this set her in an isolated class and her societal skills and, certainly, her coping skills were never properly developed. This other figure, the servant, is harder to discern. Her role seems less of a traditional submission and more of a person immersing themselves in a fantasy...a 'game'.

She certainly has been broken by her Master.


Was it her Master that broke her or her own inabilities to cope with the slaughter of her people and the layers of guilt she put on herself? Or both? This is one of several truly unanswered questions.

To me the most disturbing part is Willow's inability to give up the servant role. While their relationship seems "real", it's impossible to tell if she's just looking to play "the game." I find that part very scary.


You have also hit dead on to another unanswered question within. Namely, does Willow see this as the fantasy, the "game", or has she truly begun to realize a different, real relationship with Tara? I think the evidence is pointing at the latter but it's not that simple given her background. I'll get to these questions. Your astuteness is appreciated, Elvis.

irishgrl3: Hi Anna...

One of things I wanted to do with this story was emphasize the visuals. Now I didn't expect anyone to see it as DVD quality :) , but I felt that the setting was really important, especially in terms of contrast. Glad Tara works as a medic. I didn't really see her as a solider type and I thought that was the best solution if I wanted to use a military operation as part of her background. There is more to be explored, although not in a weekly format...I wish. So don't be bummed - I'll get back to this next year. Thanks, dear.

taralicious: First, I appreciate your kind words about the story. I'm glad you found it so moving. There certainly was some exploration of wood in both a physical and spiritual element. I thought this was the best way to incorporate the motif because I couldn't find an emotional side that seemed to fit. It is a very scary thought to imagine how long Willow would have waited if Tara hadn't made an appearance. Her character is a very different one but I find it interesting to explore. Thanks.

lollipopgirl: Hi Katie...hmm...it was a fic that fought with me at various points in the writing process. I'm not used to having so many rewrites to get a piece to say what I mean...perhaps that was because I was packing in a lot of elements and making it complicated. I'm glad you enjoyed the effort.

Miss Kittys Ball O Yarn: Emmy!

Aww...shucks...you're making me blush. Thanks for the praise, dear - you know how highly I think of you (you do...right? right? :P ) so the words mean even more.

binky: You're the third person (or so) to say write this as an original novel. It's very flattering. If I made it a novel, though, I'd never continue with the fanfic. So it's a tough call with me. This never really spoke to me as an original piece the way they usually do. I always saw W/T in the roles...just not exact cookie cutter fill-ins from canon. Again, I'm flattered.

terra21: Hi-ya t...

Hmmm...a prequel...interesting. I hadn't thought about that. I always figured I go about showing the past through flashback or dialogue like I did in this first part. You're sneaky - making think about writing more to an already lengthy piece. :)

Glad you liked the scenery...that sort of description is not something I consider to be a strength of mine but I felt it was important in this piece so I tried to highlight it. You ask interesting and, potentially, important questions.

Wtf? I forgot to comment on the SMUT! Now that is some good writing when I forget to comment on the smut.


:lmao t forgot the smut? It really must be a good fic then, but now I’m looking for the apocalypse I must’ve started to make that happen.

justin: I’m glad I could pull you in from the beginning…thanks for reading.

meretricious: Hi-ya Mary dear…

So…if you weren’t already my groupie, there would’ve been begging?

*sigh*

This was the first version I was comfortable with…it took a long time to tap into what I didn’t like about the others and fix it. At least I didn’t have to post the back-up Wood story I wrote (and, yes, I’m that crazy). It didn’t have the impact I think this one does.

You know, with all the words and phrases in this fic, I was bound to tap into some song you knew. Or ten. Heehee…you know I love that musically inclined brain of yours. Thanks, hun.

tarawhipped: Cam…hmm…this is why once upon a time I made you my official reviewer. Sometimes it sounds like you’re in my head. You’re not, are you? Eees a strange place.

This is a Willow from canon in ways…but not entirely. I’m glad you see that. I’ve always thought her overwhelming desire to please was both a strength and weakness for in canon…as it is here.

Willow being bound not by her cage so much as by her own sense of duty.


Yes, that was a big point.

The unseen Master is herself an enigma…did she have any real feelings for Willow, or was she always just using her for her abilities? The destruction of the tattoos seems simply a punishment at first, but after rereading every draft, it struck me that perhaps she was freeing Willow of her servitude, knowing that her business was ruined anyway. Whether it was belated benevolence or that she really thought Willow had betrayed her, it seems as much a symbolic gesture as a punishment. Either that or they tied Willow to her in other ways…now that the Master is presumably on the run, did she need to destroy the link to Willow to sever a telepathic link? I dunno…in any case, I hope you come back to it.


Hmm…very interesting line(s) of thought…I’ll be back here at some point.

It’s a good way of showing that, prophecies and fate or no, they’re choosing a future with each other out of free will.


Oh, yes…and who said that anything in this part dealt with the prophecy that the Elders claimed Willow was in. Or maybe it did? :devil

Thanks muchly for your thoughts, my slacker friend.


*sweeps wood chips off path*


TO ALL: Chris's Gold is next in line on Friday.


*swoons*

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Re: Elemental: Seven Stories for Seven Days (a series)

Postby Artemis » Fri Nov 04, 2005 1:14 am

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Title: Gold
Author: Chris Cook (Artemis)
Rating: NC-17
Summary: On an ordinary day, Willow has an extraordinary experience.
Spoilers: None.
Copyright: Based on characters from Buffy The Vampire Slayer, created by Joss Whedon and his minionators. All original material is copyright 2005 Chris Cook.
Feedback: Yes please!

Note: Without giving anything away, this story is... how should I put this?... the smut is, well, 'conceptually adventurous'. Very much not of the vanilla kind. I have been assured by the other writers on the Elemental project that there's nothing icky about it, it's just quite out of the ordinary.

Thanks: To all the other Elementalists: writers, betas, and organisers.

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[center]GOLD[/center]


Willow picked up a tarnished old tankard, examined it briefly, and put it back with a sigh.

'Can't exactly see myself hauling that out for tea,' she mused as she allowed herself to drift with the moderate crowd, on to another stall.

Friday at the street market was something of a tradition, though today it was - at least, she intended it to be - more of a comfort. Every Friday, with the week's work done and plenty of time later to worry about the next week, she would meander and dawdle and pick through the oddments and cheap antiques and bric-a-brac and what-nots, and forget everything else. It was a habit she had picked up from Xander, her one-and-only boyfriend - pre-gay - and best friend from that few weeks in the tenth grade onwards. His forays to the markets were more focused, specifically on Star Wars toys, which he rarely found but never stopped looking for. Willow had little interest in Luke Skywalker and Han Solo - though her fascination with Princess Leia in her metal bikini should perhaps have given her a clue, earlier than the tenth grade - but as a faithful best friend she had always tagged along, and browsed randomly in his wake as he inspected packagings and compared production years stamped on figures' legs. Her bedroom, formerly a bastion of Spartan functionality, began to acquire a collection of random items Willow found attractive - or junk, as her mother had put it. 'The collection' had made its way with Willow across the city when she moved out, and now brightened, or at least filled, her home.

She paused to run a finger along the edge of a ceramic bowl, then decided she didn't like the pattern and moved on.

'Wish Xander was here,' she thought glumly. He always knew how to 'turn her frown upside-down,' even if it did sometimes involve manually pushing the corners of her mouth up. Willow's frown was today downside-down, and seemed likely to remain so. It had been that kind of a day.

A necklace held Willow's attention for a moment, before proving on closer inspection to be rather gaudy.

This Friday hadn't been disastrous, by any means. But it was the little things, and they had piled up. Breakfast cereal that had, against all reason, managed to arrange itself in its plastic storage box such that all the sultanas and apricot bits had already gone, and all that remained were bland wheat flakes. A sore back, presumably acquired sometime during the night from tossing and turning, god only knew how, that made her morning exercises test her patience. Morning radio during said exercises, which managed to play not one, not two, but three songs which irritated her unduly, forcing her to switch the damned thing off. Clients at work deciding that, actually, while they had specified exactly what sort of program they wanted - a process which had taken its sweet time and put various projects back to begin with - they now realised that what they actually wanted was something completely different...

And lunch, Willow recalled with a grimace. She had to stop letting Buffy set her up on dates. The girl was... cheerful. Disposed to smile, at anything and anyone, so much so that by the end of the meal Willow had sincerely wished she would lose her temper and have a tantrum, just for variety. Or at least to talk about something other than clothes, cheerleading - Willow hadn't even realised there were professional cheerleaders - and Lindsay Lohan's boobs. It was as if she was a lesbian version of the gaggle of girls Willow remembered, with disdain, from her school days, the ones whose conversations consisted mainly of "Oooh, he's so dreamy..." Note to self, she had decided, no more Buffy-arranged blind dates. Something in her personal trainer's mental circuitry seemed to go haywire when she turned her keen focus onto matters of her heart - Willow's or her own, to judge by the string of odd boyfriends she had been in undying, true love with, and thoroughly sick of a month later.

A wooden chicken, no doubt intended to brighten any kitchen with an aura of farm-y wholesomeness, gave Willow cause to wonder if the carver had been ill.

She decided it was time to face the facts - God, fate, the powers that be, blind chance, and/or whoever was idly mucking about with a planet-sized game of The Sims had decided that today would be a write-off for Willow Rosenberg, and nothing she might find during an after-work trawl through the street market was going to change that, not even the deep golden mirror peeking out at her from behind a box of old records...

Willow stood as close as she could, her hips bumping the edge of the table, and leaned over, peering at the disc. It was a foot across, slightly convex, polished to a fine finish but dimmed with age, decorated at its edges with abstract, embossed patterns.

'Must be an imitation,' Willow mused, staring into the dull reflection of her own form, leaning forward. 'A copy of some old antique... I mean, it looks like it's made of gold, no-one would put it out here if it was [i]really gold. Still... real or copy, what's the difference if it looks good?'[/i]

"How much for this?" she asked the woman behind the table, who was chatting with a friend beside her.

"That old thing?" she asked, glancing down at the mirror. "It's a fake, you know?"

"I figured," Willow nodded. "How much?"

"Sixty-five," the woman suggested, as a first offer. Willow had done her share of good-natured haggling, and knew how the game was played.

"Done," her mouth said before the rest of her could stop it.

The woman gave a look of mild surprise, then shrugged, wrapped the mirror in tissue paper, taped it up, and slid it into a paper bag.

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Willow's phone rang - or rather, played a tinny rendition of the theme to 'Fraggle Rock' - just as she reached her door, somewhat damp, but not drenched. It had begun to sprinkle on the way home, making Willow regret her choice to walk, despite it being her favourite mode of transport. Finding the mirror had cheered her somewhat, though, and she felt it would be best to take advantage of her good mood. She had ended up carrying the wrapped mirror in both arms, like a baby, unwilling to trust its fate to the strength of a damp paper bag. All in all, she had to concede a bus may have been preferable.

'Lucky the rain's as half-hearted as everything else today,' Willow griped silently, balancing the phone between her ear and her shoulder as she searched for her keys.

"Hello? Oh, hi Buff... Yes I met her. What?" she asked defensively, opening the door to her modest house and kicking it closed behind her as she entered. "I do not have an I-knew-it-would-be-a-disaster voice... okay, it was a disaster. I'm strenuously resisting the temptation to say I told you so... Because she's just not my type- Yes I know it's a cliché. Well maybe it got to be a cliché from being true a lot of the time, which is why people kept saying it..."

She put the package on her dinner table and moved on to the kitchenette in search of coffee.

"No, I think I'll stay in tonight, watch a DVD or something... I know, I promise I'm not being moody stay-at-home girl, I just feel like staying at home... not moody, I said! The home part is pure coincidence. Look you go have fun, you're still meeting that Irish guy? Well there you go, you'd be better off without a chaperone, wouldn't you?" She gave a brief laugh at something Buffy said, but the laugh didn't reach her eyes.

"Okay... yeah I'll call you tomorrow, or Sunday. No I'm fine, I've got a new antique from the market to play with... antique, Buffy, not junk. You have your wardrobe, I have my ju- collection. Yep. Okay, see you. Bye."

Willow gave a sigh and a wry smile as she hung up, left the kettle heating up, and returned to the dining room to investigate her new purchase. The tape holding the tissue paper closed proved to be fingernail-resistant, so she spent a moment hunting for an extraordinarily thick Swiss army knife, spent another moment searching among its fifty or so attachments for a knife, and then slit the tape down the centre.

'One of these days I'll get into the habit of just tearing stuff open,' she promised herself.

"Okay mirror, come to momma." She lifted the object out of its resting place and held it carefully by the edges, keeping her fingertips away from the polished surface. She studied her reflection in it, going slightly cross-eyed to try to make it out.

"Needs a bit of polish," she concluded, noting her reflected features were distorted slightly, changing the shape of her face. Of course, the metal imbued her image with a golden tinge, but that was to be expected... Even so, she mused, it wasn't an unattractive piece... in fact, as she stared into it further, she could see it having a place somewhere in her home, in the bedroom, perhaps. She smiled slightly at the thought. It wouldn't be much good as a functional mirror - even if the slight distortions in its surface were worked out, which she was by no means sure she wanted to go to the trouble of doing, it was still not flat, and the wrong colour. But the thought of having this curious artefact on her dresser appealed to what she liked to consider her 'sense of eccentricity'.

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Willow went through her usual evening routine, but found herself starved of vitality - dinner seemed uninteresting, to cook and eat, nothing in her DVD collection seemed particularly noteworthy tonight, and the television on offer was the usual bland fare. With the mood of the day lingering over her, Willow was tempted to just throw in the towel and go to bed early - everything seemed grey and disinterested.

Except the mirror, which was what kept her from doing so. She was curious about it - she knew nothing, save that it was different, out of the ordinary, and - the more she glanced at it through the evening - beautiful.

She ended up, inevitably it seemed, sitting at the table with the mirror propped up on a stack of books, with her laptop open beside it. Knowing so little of it to begin with, it proved difficult to find any information at all. Strangely, she didn't find this frustrating - she would stop now and then, to stare into the golden surface, and feel a kind of peace descend over her as she studied her faint reflection in it.

At last, with her cup of tea cold and forgotten by her side, she turned up a promising lead, and pursued it through various searches and websites until she found a photo of what seemed to be the same mirror. 'Must be the original it was made to look like,' she told herself. Intrigued, she read on, about the artefact's origin in ancient Persia, the discovery of various like it, among the treasure troves of the rich and prosperous, the stories about them... it began to seem like it had come from Ali Baba's cave itself.

They were referred to, in the flowery tales associated with it, as 'mirror' or 'well' - 'well of life', in one instance. One account, from a website more interested in myth than fact, but which Willow nonetheless read for entertainment, told of the artefacts being used to summon djinns, genies, brought forth as if from a magic bottle. Those blessed with a visit from these spirits were made rich, but not with three wishes - rather, the tale went, they were made rich in spirit, their souls rejuvenated, and though they came away from the experience no more prosperous or fortunate than they had been before, they lived happily to the end of their days.

Willow smiled wanly, and gave the mirror a quick rub.

"No genie?" she said. "Oh well... not an original." She looked around the quiet interior of her home, and sighed. "Pity."

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Willow cleaned up dinner, washed her dishes, had a shower, and was getting ready for bed when her eye fell on the plain mirror adorning the wall above her dresser, and she decided on a whim to put her new possession in place. She took down the old mirror and found an old frame for holding portrait photographs upright which, she judged, would do for the mirror after a little dusting.

It was while she was carefully settling the mirror onto its new frame on top of the dresser that she noticed a curious thing about it - while its reflection of her was indistinct, and coloured gold by the metal, it didn't seem to be reflecting the room around her at all. She spent a moment peering into it from different angles, walking to the other side of the room and looking back, and even found a torch to shine into it. Still, she was the only thing that had a reflection.

'Am I some kind of reverse-vampire now?' she wondered, putting the torch away. She hazarded a guess that it had something to do with light levels - or perhaps the reflection was so indistinct that it was only the fact that she, and thus her reflection, were moving that allowed her to make it out. Still, it seemed odd. Odd and intriguing, she concluded as she stared at herself, able to dimly make out her features, her hair - which seemed a deep blonde, in the gold metal - her figure, the loose track pants and t-shirt she wore as she was preparing to go to sleep. Her form seemed different, somehow - which she put down to the slight imperfections in the mirror's curved surface - not so slim, more sensual. She noticed with a grin that her reflection had curvier hips than she did, like a subtle version of a fairground mirror stretching her reflection. 'Maybe I should get more of these... I wouldn't mind having hot hips on a regular basis.'

Gazing at her reflection, for no good reason she could discern, she found herself studying her form, posing provocatively. With a shy grin at herself, and having double-checked that the blinds were properly closed, she stripped off her clothing and stood, hands on hips, surveying herself.

"Not bad," she conceded, thinking back to her college days. "Red Hot Rosenberg's still around, huh?" She trailed a hand across her stomach, remembering what it had felt like to be touched, various caresses both shy and bold, and sighed forlornly as she turned to her empty queen-sized bed and pulled back the covers.

Behind her, unseen, her reflection watched her as she moved away.

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It was fifteen minutes later that Willow dropped her book on the bedside table and reached for the switch on her lamp. With a click the room fell into darkness, and Willow settled down to sleep, the covers rumpling slightly as she wriggled into a comfortable spot. Finally there was silence, broken only by her slow breathing. Five, ten seconds it stretched on - then, a voice.

"Willow."

There was a sharp intake of breath, then a thud, and the sound of Willow's hand scrabbling in the dark for the lamp switch. After a few seconds light bathed the room, revealing Willow sitting up, naked with the blankets pooled around her waist, and the source of the voice.

There was an old, faded lounge chair in the corner of the bedroom, by the windows which, when the blinds were open, looked out onto the small patio and back yard. A stack of books rested on a side table; on lazy afternoons Willow was in the habit of sitting there, in the sun, curled up in the chair which was just large enough to accommodate her folded legs comfortably, and reading something old and familiar.

The chair's current occupant was neither old nor familiar. Her appearance, and the soft glow of her skin, spoke of youth, yet there was an attractive maturity to her - in her clear blue eyes, and her proud, prominent cheekbones and lips, which perhaps might have made her face seem somewhat angular had the overall effect not been so elegant. Blonde hair, a deep, rich golden blonde, framed her face on either side and spilled over her shoulders, falling straight and luxurious, the edge of the light from Willow's lamp catching its highlights. She sat comfortably, at ease, with her elbows resting on the chair's armrests, one hand laid flat on the rest, the other draped down enough that her fingertips touched her hip, and her right leg was drawn up slightly, nestled in the crook of the armrest beside it, with her ankle resting behind her other calf.

She was extraordinarily beautiful, so much so that it was a moment before Willow realised that she was also extraordinarily naked, and another moment still before she realised that there was, indeed - beauty and nakedness aside - a complete stranger in her bedroom.

"What?" she demanded, while her thoughts scurried around haphazard in her head. "Who are you? What do you want?" She felt cool air across her chest and snatched up the edge of the top blanket to cover herself, suddenly realising her acute vulnerability.

"I've got a gun in here," she lied, moving her hand to the bedside table's single drawer. "And I know how to defend myself!" That, at least, was true, thanks to Buffy's fascination with martial arts. "So," she finished, hoping she sounded unafraid, "you'd just better leave, if you know what's good for you. Got it?" 'My home,' she wanted to say. 'Mine. No strange people, no matter how naked.' The initial shock having passed, Willow frowned, wondering what would come next, and stared intently at the intruder. 'Holy yipes, she's really naked...'

"I mean you no harm," the stranger said, keeping carefully still. "None at all, and I promise to leave, if that's what you want. But you did call for me. I'm Gold."

It took Willow a few silent seconds to realise she was using the word as a name.

"Gold," she said flatly, without really thinking further. The self-proclaimed Gold nodded once, calmly.

"I'm pretty sure I didn't call you," Willow said levelly, hoping that, at some point, the direction the conversation should take would become apparent. Gold turned her head and nodded again, towards the dresser. Willow glanced quickly at it, and the mirror atop it.

"What?" she asked. "I-it's not yours, is it?" She cringed inwardly. 'What sort of idiot question is that, under the circumstances?'

"No," Gold replied. "No, in fact, it would be more accurate to say that I belong to it. And tonight, to you."

Willow stared at her in confusion, trying to think of the sensible thing to say. Gold's nakedness - and sensual figure - wasn't helping her clarity. She somehow didn't feel threatened - she didn't honestly know what she felt.

"Could you perhaps explain that?" she hazarded. Gold nodded again.

"I am Gold," she said again. "I go where I'm called, through the well. As a well yields water to replenish life, I yield pleasure to replenish souls. You called to me, Willow - your sadness, the dull ache you felt at the greyness of the world around you. I realise, now, you didn't know it at the time, but you called to me to give you back colour, and vibrancy, and... and to fill your soul. To help you remember how beautiful the world can be, if you let it."

"Oooooo-kay," Willow said slowly. "You're... a, a genie in a bottle?" Gold laughed softly - a rich laugh that touched Willow and forced her to suppress a grin.

"In a sense," Gold smiled.

"Okay," Willow nodded. "See, here's the thing: you could actually be Barbara Eden, and just popped out of a mirror to say hi... naked..." she gulped, "or, and this is the bit that's kind of on my mind a bit, you could not be? And being that you're here, and here is my bedroom where normally people wouldn't be without at least letting me know beforehand, I'm wondering. Yeah?"

"Of course," Gold said soothingly. "You didn't know... perhaps it will help if you looked in the 'mirror'?"

"Come over there, you mean?" Willow asked warily. Gold, slowly so as not to startle Willow, shifted in the chair, crossing her legs, and placing her hands together in her lap.

"I won't move," she promised, and Willow was inclined to believe her. She couldn't put a finger on the reason, but the woman just didn't seem dangerous. And, now that the redhead thought about it, she had somehow appeared, in the space of a few seconds, in a room Willow knew to be empty when she turned out the light, without - she glanced around quickly to check, before returning her gaze to her companion - disturbing the blinds covering the closed glass door to the patio, or moving the t-shirt which Willow had hung on the knob of the door leading to the living room. There was definitely something not adding up with the 'crazy intruder' theory, no matter how much didn't add up on the face of the 'genie in a bottle' theory pitted against it. At least the latter makes sense internally, once you get past the nonexistent part of it.

Willow leaned forward and pulled up the old dressing gown, which she kept near the foot of the bed on top of the blankets, covering herself without taking her eyes off Gold. Cautiously she abandoned the presumed safety of the bed, on the side opposite her visitor, and walked to the dresser.

"You want me to look in the mirror," she said - a statement, not a question. Gold nodded.

Willow glanced at the mirror, keeping Gold's naked, motionless form in the periphery of her vision.

"I don't see anything," she said carefully.

"Nothing at all," Gold agreed. "No reflection." Willow looked again, and frowned, confusion making her momentarily forget to keep an eye on Gold. She had no reflection - she was as invisible as the rest of the room, and the surface now seemed to be nothing more than a polished disc, smooth but not reflective enough to be of any use as a mirror at all.

"May I move?" Gold asked, startling Willow. She looked quickly at the naked woman, who had remained motionless.

"Why?" she asked.

"To demonstrate," Gold replied. Willow backed away, and nodded before she realised it. Gold slowly stood - her motions were as smooth as ripples on a calm ocean - and took a few paces to stand in front of the dresser. She held out an arm to the mirror, touched its surface with her fingertips, then reached further, and to Willow's amazement her hand passed through the metal.

"Wha..." she gasped. "How are you...?" Stunned curiosity overriding her lingering suspicion she quickly moved closer, and leaned over the dresser to look behind it. Gold's hand was nowhere to be seen. She leaned back to look at the mirror side-on. Gold's arm simply vanished at the wrist - not through the mirror, but into it.

"How are you doing that?" she demanded.

"I came from the well," Gold said simply. "Its light is my source. I can return... if that's what you want."

Willow stared at her, a million questions fighting for space in her head. For some reason the one that came out first was:

"Suppose I don't... then what?"

Gold slowly drew her hand back out of the mirror, took a step back, then turned and seated herself elegantly on the edge of the bed before looking back up at Willow.

"If you permit me," she said quietly, "I'll please you."

"How?" Willow asked, again with her mouth voicing the question before the rest of her had made up its mind.

"Any way you want," Gold said, with the ghost of a smile touching her lips. Willow stared at her, while half her thoughts whirled around uncomprehendingly, and the other half comprehended all too well and presented a number of fascinating, distracting possibilities. She found herself moved to join Gold, sitting with her on the bed, with a decent distance between them... yet, closer. Gold's scent reached her, subtle yet powerful, a perfume that carried with it whispered tales of passion and magic.

"This is crazy," Willow said feebly.

"You've never noticed the world being crazy before?" Gold asked, one side of her mouth turning up impishly.

"Well when you put it like that," Willow agreed before she could help herself. "You really... you want to...?" She met Gold's stare, and was stunned by what she saw - Gold did want to. Willow had seen similar gazes before, partly shrouded by indecision or confusion, but Gold's eyes hid nothing. Gold wanted, completely, passionately, and simply, to make love to her.

"I do," the naked woman said, unnecessarily.

"How can you..." Willow asked in a whisper. "I mean, you... you don't even know me, how can you want..."

"I do know you," Gold assured her calmingly. "I am... what I have been, forever. At many times, in many places, with many people. But the well shows your desire - what you desire, and that's the form I take. As you see me now, the... the person I am, I am newborn, virgin, and for you alone. I'm your desire - this is how I am, and how I'll remain until the morning's light." She ventured a smile. "So, naturally... I want to... with you. You see?"

"Until morning?" Willow asked. Gold nodded.

"And then, what?"

"Then," Gold replied, "I return to the well. This Gold," she placed a hand softly on her chest, which Willow had to fight not to stare at, "will have been, and the essence of me that is forever will wait to become another."

"A-and," Willow said slowly, marshalling her courage to believe, perhaps, that something extraordinary was happening, "you're... my desire?"

Gold seemed to sense the tentative change in Willow's demeanour, and smiled more broadly. Slowly, so as not to startle Willow, she moved herself further onto the bed and leant back, folding one arm beneath her head like a pillow, while her other hand trailed down from her chest across her stomach, and came to rest on her hip, her fingertips pointing provocatively inwards.

"Aren't I?" she asked quietly.

She held Willow's gaze, then glanced down at herself, silently giving Willow permission to do likewise. Willow helplessly took in her smooth neck, the collarbones spreading to the curve of her shoulders, her generous breasts pillowing softly on her chest, nipples erect, her flawless stomach, her exquisitely womanly hips, and - she couldn't stop herself - the dark gold thatch of hair at the apex of her thighs, growing from tiny, thin hairs to thick curls as Willow's gaze neared her centre, before travelling on to encompass shapely legs, with firm thighs, elegant calves, and finally her smooth feet resting on the edge of the bed.

Three thoughts were paramount in Willow's mind. The first and most obvious was that this was entirely too implausible to be real. The second was that Gold was, without a doubt, the sum total of all her fantasies, and that from the top of her head to the tips of her toes, there wasn't an inch of her that disproved her extraordinary claim to be tailored exactly to Willow's own desires. The third was that, if she did tell Gold to go away, and the strange woman did so, she, Willow, would very probably regret it for the rest of her life.

"You are," she whispered, making up her mind.

Gold slowly sat up, resting on one elbow.

"May I touch you?" she asked gently. Willow hesitated, unable to go further and unwilling to go back.

"May I touch your hand?" Gold said after a moment's indecisive silence.

'Seems safe enough,' Willow thought absently, as she nodded. Gold gave a grateful nod in reply, and reached out the arm she wasn't using to prop herself up, taking Willow's hand gently in hers. Willow half-turned to watch more closely as Gold drew her hand closer to herself, and finally placed it against her shoulder, sliding Willow's fingertips across her skin at a snail's pace.

"Is this alright?" she asked, as she brought Willow's hand to the side of her neck.

"Sh-shouldn't I be asking you that?" Willow asked with a hesitant smile, her voice sounding jarringly loud to her own ears in the hushed silence between them.

"You can if you want," Gold replied with a chuckle. "But the answer will always be the same."

Willow couldn't think of a response to that, so she watched in silence as her hand was gently guided up Gold's smooth neck, beneath her jaw as the woman tilted her head back, and over her chin to her mouth. Her blue eyes fluttered closed as her lips parted beneath Willow's fingertips - not quite kissing, but touching, yielding beneath Willow's touch. She felt Gold's sigh caress her fingers, and the whisper-touch of breath on her fingertips travelled straight to her core.

Gold did kiss her then, lifting her fingers and pressing her lips beneath the redhead's knuckles, before guiding Willow in exploring the rest of her face. As if in a dream Willow watched and felt Gold's smooth cheeks, her forehead, her temple, with golden hair silkily caressing the back of her hand. The tiny hairs of Gold's eyebrow tickled Willow's fingertips, and she couldn't suppress a sigh as she felt the woman's soft eyelashes move, and her hand was guided back down to Gold's lips as she once more revealed her hypnotic blue eyes.

"More," she whispered into Willow's palm, "please?"

"More," Willow echoed.

Gold let go of her hand and leant back, rolling over and rising to her hands and knees. Like a big cat she prowled towards Willow, leaning forward to stroke her face against the redhead's thigh, nudging the edge of her dressing gown a few inches higher. She slowly rose up before Willow, on her knees, and in one fluid motion straddled her and began to gently, patiently push her to the bed. Willow gasped as she felt Gold's hands move from her shoulders to her chest, taking the edges of her dressing gown and beginning to move them slowly back. Gold's hands stilled at the sound, withdrew, and she looked down into Willow's eyes questioningly.

Willow stared at the face she had never seen before this night, but had explored by touch, and which now gazed at her with such devotion and desire, while she inhaled Gold's sweet aroma... before she knew it her own hands were replacing Gold's on her dressing gown, and she was baring her body to her. Gold looked down, slowly, unashamed of the liberties her eyes were taking with Willow's modest, firm breasts, and the flat expanse of her stomach, then she caught Willow's eye again and leant down to kiss her.

Willow was no stranger to kisses, but this was unlike any she had known before. Gold's lips parted easily, as did her own, responding instinctively to the softness. Then Gold's tongue was searching out hers, the tips touching, then stroking the length of Willow's tongue, caressing it. Willow moaned as she tasted Gold, honey and spice melding into a flavour that mingled innocence and lust. She felt the woman's breasts on hers, felt a burning, moist sensation on her waist, and the touch of Gold's thighs on her hips, but the kiss swept everything else away, and Willow found herself lustily drinking Gold's flavour, without hesitation.

It seemed an age before Gold withdrew, and Willow raised herself up, craning her neck at first then pushing up on her elbows, to win a few more seconds of Gold's divine lips. She opened her eyes, pleading silently, when the contact broke. Gold was staring at her, her skin flushed, her breathing quick and heavy, her eyes half-closed, and with pupils threatening to overtake the crystal blue of her irises.

'Afterglow,' Willow thought instantly, noting a second later how moist her stomach was where the woman's soft sex was pressing against her, 'did she...? My god...'

"More?" Gold asked in a husky whisper. Willow nodded quickly, urgently.

Gold leant back down, but instead of capturing Willow's lips her tongue snuck beneath the redhead's chin, and gently tilted her head back. Willow lay back down, delighting in the feel of Gold's tongue on her skin, as the woman moved slowly down and parted her lips wider, covering the front of Willow's neck and kissing her. It was something Willow had never felt before - it was primal, animal, but she felt no fear as she surrendered, as she felt the echo of a predator in Gold's mouth on her vulnerable neck.

Gold left her gasping as she moved on again, leaving a trail of lusty kisses across the hollow of Willow's throat, down to her chest. Willow heard, and felt on her skin, Gold moan as she neared her left nipple. Then her mouth opened again, and Willow was engulfed, and could no longer stifle the squeal of delight that erupted from her.

Gold suckled at her voraciously - her tongue drew Willow's engorged nipple deep, caressing, spiralling around the nub, as the suction from her mouth yearned for something from Willow's body to fill her. And by the way she resumed grinding her hips against Willow's lower stomach, she was finding it, and revelling in drinking her fill. Willow, slightly more clear-headed, having reached a kind of plateau after the initial desperate shock of unbridled desire had passed into her, realised her earlier suspicion was true: Gold was about to climax, again she believed - the blonde writhed and thrust her soaking, yielding flesh against Willow's skin, held herself in needful agony for an instant as she abandoned Willow's left breast for her right, and gave a mighty shudder as she began to repeat her attentions there.

Willow arched her back sharply, lifting herself up off the bed on her shoulders and hips, and Gold's hands flew to her back, holding her up as she eagerly devoured her breasts, licking, sucking, nibbling, spreading her lips open over mouthfuls of soft flesh again and again. Willow desperately needed relief - it was too much pleasure to bear without letting it burst out of her, and she moaned plaintively and squirmed her hips, unable to form words to express her need. She didn't need to though, for Gold seemed at once to understand, and relinquishing her straddling position above Willow, her mouth began to travel down over Willow's stomach, while her strong arms moved down also, lifting Willow's hips from the bed.

"Please," Willow heard herself moan, as Gold's arms wrapped around her hips and pulled the redhead's needy opening up to press to her abdomen, anointing herself with Willow's copious juices. She pressed her mouth to Willow's navel and extended her tongue as deep as the tiny hollow would allow, wriggling luxuriantly about as she drank in the remnants of her own earlier climax - a prelude which had Willow sobbing with desire for the consummation.

Gold obliged, dramatically. Willow felt her shift on the bed, then her arms were once more beneath her back, cradling her, supporting her with wide-splayed fingers, and with seemingly no effort at all she lifted Willow bodily off the bed until her thighs found themselves resting on Gold's shoulders, and her arms swung beneath her, fingertips trailing across the bedclothes. Willow had no time to be amazed at the sheer power in Gold's modest frame; she felt Gold's breath on her sex, and all thoughts of her novel position abandoned her as she spread her legs wide. There was a pressure, gentle against her swollen lips, an unfamiliar feeling - Willow lifted her head and gazed down the length of her body, shining with sweat and the trail of Gold's lips, to see the woman resting her forehead against her sex. She lifted her head slowly, allowing Willow to see and feel as her face slid through her silky, slick folds, and finally stared up at her, blue eyes burning bright in a face gleaming with Willow's passion.

The moment her eyes locked with Willow's she opened her mouth wide, yawning wide, and engulfed Willow's sex in heat and sensation and lust. Willow couldn't hold on - her head lolled back, eyes closed, and she moaned incoherently, ceaselessly, as Gold's tongue explored her. She felt herself begin to orgasm - hesitated a moment, wanting to prolong the exquisite feeling, but her body would not be held back. It made no difference, as Gold showed no sign of slowing as Willow's dam burst into her mouth. She feasted thirstily on Willow's nectar, and searched for more even as the thick gush of moisture was flowing down her throat.

Willow felt as if she were flying - she lost track of where the bed was beneath her, of what exactly Gold's mouth and tongue were doing, and felt only the devouring, incessant stimulation that held her in thrall. It felt as though Gold was everywhere, circling her clit, suckling on it like she had her nipples, and within her too, deep inside, calling another climax into being.

If Willow had had any thoughts, she would have been grateful she lived in a house, not an apartment with other people on the other side of thin walls. But she had no thoughts, only deep, throaty screams of joy as she burst again, and felt her flood cascade into Gold, joining them as her sweet nectar flowed through the seamless passage created from her centre and Gold's mouth. It seemed never-ending - Gold kept licking, sucking, wanting, and Willow rode the crest of a thundering, uncontrollable wave as her body kept giving, again, and again, and again... screaming pleasure, and again...
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Re: Elemental: Seven Stories for Seven Days (a series)

Postby Artemis » Fri Nov 04, 2005 1:22 am

Willow came to lying in a cocoon of warmth - Gold had placed her back beneath the blankets, and was cuddled around her left side, her thigh cast across Willow's hips, arm reaching around her torso, head cradled on her shoulder.

"Whu?" Willow mumbled, her voice slurring as she struggled back to awareness.

"It's alright," Gold whispered. "You were napping, not for long..."

"Passed out from bliss, you mean," Willow smiled lazily, feeling utterly peaceful - it felt so natural to have this enigmatic woman nestled up to her. "I've never done that before. Passed out, I mean." Gold gave a little shrug.

"Now you have," she said. Willow looked at her, catching her gaze as she glanced up, and mustered her courage.

"Can I...?" she began. "I mean, would you like... I'd like to, um... return the favour?"

Gold stirred, and Willow felt her hips shift against her side, sensually. But she rose up on her elbow and regarded Willow with a gentle stare.

"You don't have to," she said softly. "You don't have to do anything."

"But can I?" Willow persisted hopefully - Gold's voice didn't seem to refuse her. "I'd like to. I'd, uh... I'd really love to," she admitted with a blush, realising how silly it was to blush before a woman who had mere moments ago been practically melded to her sex, coaxing and drinking climax after climax from her. It wasn't simply the need not to seem selfish that motivated her - she genuinely wanted to give pleasure to Gold, to give her in turn, as best she could, the experience she had just received from her.

"I'd love that," Gold whispered, as if reading her mind. Willow grinned and bit her lip, wriggling up from beneath the covers as Gold helped pull them back, revealing herself. She moved herself up slightly, resting her head on the pillow and looking sidelong at Willow with a sensual smile as she lay on her stomach, naked and satisfied.

Willow knelt by her side and leant over to kiss the nape of her neck, slowly working her way down to her shoulders as she heard aroused murmurs welling up in Gold's throat. She sat up slowly for a moment, admiring the woman's naked back in the lamplight, and something caught her eye. So subtly that she'd missed them at first, two gold stripes ran from Gold's shoulder blades downward, diverging slowly, fading out as they curved over the top of her ass, either side of its crevice.

"What're these?" Willow asked innocently, stroking her hand down Gold's back, tracing the lines. At the other woman's hesitation she looked up, and saw doubt in her eyes, and something more - sadness, she realised.

"What's wrong?" she asked quickly, as Gold opened her mouth. The radiant woman hesitated, then spoke quietly.

"They're a... a remnant," she said.

"Of what?" Willow asked, frowning in confusion. She glanced again at Gold's back, wondering - 'remnant?' They weren't scars, as far as she could tell, they were quite smooth to the rest of her skin, more like very faint tattoos.

"I'm..." Gold began, paused, and swallowed. "I'm different to you. The way you see me is a, a..." she searched for the word, while Willow gently stroked her back, up and down, soothingly, "...an idealisation. What you see is your desire, the way you would want me to be."

"You told me," Willow nodded. "You're different each time you're... summoned?" Gold nodded.

"It's not just that though," she went on. "I'm different - not human. If I let go, I'd be... you'd still see your desires, that part of me, but I'd also be my own nature. This body," she shrugged slightly, sadly, "it's... I guess you'd say this is the human version of me. Of this incarnation of me. What's inside still shows through, faintly. That's what those marks are," she finished glumly.

"Well what's so bad about it?" Willow asked, quickly lying down to cuddle Gold. "I know you're different, I mean you came out of a mirror, but - don't they say it's what's inside that counts?"

"That's what 'they' say," Gold nodded with a faint smile. "But those are words, it's easy to say them when you don't have to see... what's inside isn't like... I'm very different, Willow."

"Could I see?" Willow asked. Gold shot her a startled look.

"Really," Willow assured her. "I'd like to see. I mean, if it's not dangerous - you wouldn't blow up the house or anything? Like, you're not really five miles tall or something?" Despite the hesitation in her eyes, Gold laughed quietly, and finally shook her head.

"I'm not dangerous," she said. She looked at Willow, wary and hopeful at once.

"I want to see," Willow said. Gold closed her eyes, her expression now inscrutable, and nodded.

"I need a little room," she said quietly, slipping away from Willow and out of her bed. Willow sat up and watched as Gold walked slowly around the end of the bed to stand in the open, between her and the blind-covered windows.

"Try not to be scared," she said, sounding almost resigned. She looked up once, meeting Willow's gaze for a fleeting instant, then closed her eyes again and took a deep breath.

Slowly, a golden glow built behind her, light streaming out of her back until it was so bright Willow could only see her as a silhouette. Her form shifted, and spread - on either side of her something was stretching outwards, reaching as far as the room's walls would allow. Her whole body was consumed by the light, which seemed to flow as thick as liquid, pooling around her, and then... then it was gone, in an instant, and in its wake a new Gold stood before Willow.

She was taller, almost six feet, and though still lithe and supple in form, her muscles were more defined than earlier, showing now a hint - only a hint - of the strength she held within herself. Her skin was a deep gold-tinged bronze, as if perfectly tanned, and she gleamed as if oiled. Her hair fell to the level of her waist, and was even more extraordinary, seeming to be composed of pure metallic gold, yet still swaying easily as she shifted her weight. All of this Willow took in at a glance, and without fixing on it, because behind her spread a pair of great wings, unlike anything she had ever seen.

She moved forward, tentatively, to see, and Gold half-turned. From behind her shoulders two new limbs extended outwards, perfectly-formed, unearthly yet beautiful - tanned, healthy, with a hint of strength in the firm muscles. They resembled arms, but were much longer, each stretching out almost two metres even when bent, and the hands at their tips were far longer, more slender, that those on her regular arms. They in themselves were stunning enough, but beneath them, stretching from the palms of Gold's new hands, all the way along her limbs, down her back to her hips, where the golden marks had ended, were shimmering curtains of translucent gold, imbued with subtle, shifting patterns like spiderweb married with the deep sea, giving off a glow of their own. Gold's new, second pair of arms flexed, and her... 'Wings?' Willow thought... the membranes stretched taut between them and her body, like a flying fox, lit the room with their light.

Willow marvelled. A motion lower down caught her attention, and she noticed a further change, overshadowed until now by Gold's wings - a tail, three metres long, smooth and slender, extended from above the crevice of her ass between the lower edges of her wings, trailing almost to the floor but rising again before it touched, swishing slowly from side to side like a charmed snake. Half-way along its length a golden fin began, like the tail of some tropical paradise fish, spreading to half a metre wide before narrowing quickly at the tip.

Willow raised her eyes to Gold's, trying to find some way to express the wonder she felt, but she met a downcast expression, sad and lonely, and... ashamed?

"What's wrong?" she asked, quickly abandoning the bed, approaching the unearthly form her mysterious lover had taken without a second thought.

"I... wish you hadn't seen me like this," Gold whispered, almost stuttering several times. Willow shook her head and reached up to stroke her cheek.

"Why?" she asked.

"I'm not h-human. I'm a-" She hesitated, but Willow, somehow, could hear the next words as plainly as if they had been spoken: 'freak, monster, thing'.

"No," she shook her head vehemently, taking Gold's face in both her hands and making her meet her gaze. "No, you're... Gold, listen to me. You are the most beautiful person I have ever seen."

Gold stared at her in confusion and, slowly, dawning realisation. She swallowed with difficulty, her lips parted to take in a shallow breath, and then she leaned forward and bestowed a soft kiss on Willow's lips, as tears fell silently from her eyes.

"You... really?" she asked, still hesitant. "I was so- After what we shared... I was so afraid..."

"But you let me see anyway," Willow said with a quick grin.

"I-I had to," Gold admitted. Willow's eyebrows shot up in surprise.

"What do you mean?" she asked quickly.

"I'm yours," Gold explained. "Your desire, so... what you want, I do."

"Wait," Willow shook her head. "You mean, if I tell you I want something, you have to do it? You can't choose, or..." She took a startled gasp of air.

"That's right," Gold said. "Willow what's wrong? It's alright-"

"Did we...?" Willow began, seeming horrified at herself. "What we did- Did I make you do that? Oh god... Please, did I-" She fell back a step from Gold.

"No," Gold shook her head, reaching out to take Willow's hands. "No - Willow, please. You never said you wanted to make love. I promise, everything we did, I wanted to do. Everything. Willow?"

"Really?" Willow asked, on the verge of tears.

"I promise," Gold replied. She gave Willow's hands a little tug, which brought the smaller woman back to her, arms tightly around her waist, tears falling on her shoulder. Her fingertips almost reached the edges of Gold's wings where they met her buttocks, and they felt hot, but not uncomfortable to touch.

"Oh thank god," she whispered. Gold stroked her hair tenderly, until she stiffened and drew back.

"Wait," she said cautiously, "that's still - you still have to do what I say, don't you?" She regarded Gold with wary curiosity, as she nodded.

"It's alright," Gold said soothingly. "Pleasing you pleases me-"

"It's not alright," Willow said hotly, brows furrowing in rapid thought. "Okay then - whatever I say, you have to obey?"

"Unless you tell me to stay," Gold nodded. "Come sunrise, I return to the well - that's my nature, I'm sorry. Not even you can change that."

"Alright," Willow said, "then... I, Willow Rosenberg, officially want you to never again have to do anything at all. Okay? You only do what you want to do, what you want. Nobody else. Alright?" She stared resolutely into Gold's crystal blue eyes.

"Yes," Gold replied in a whisper. Slowly, a smile spread across her face, lighting her up as if she was glowing.

"That works, right?" Willow asked. "You don't have to, to obey orders, or anything, anymore?"

"Yes," Gold said again. She was glowing, Willow realised - the subtle aura of light from her wings and tail-fin was stronger, and enveloped all of her, and Willow with her. It felt warm, like a hot bath, or sunlight.

"So, um..." she ventured, "...I, uh... I want you to... stand on one leg." Gold looked down at her, and a giggle broke free of her lips.

"I don't want to," she replied, grinning brilliantly. Willow grinned too, tentatively for a second, then as wide as she could.

"So if I said," she whispered, "that you're the most beautiful, wonderful, amazing person I've ever known, and I wanted to make love to you, right now, as you are... you wouldn't have to say yes?"

"That's right," Gold nodded, taking a deep breath, unable to banish the smile from her lips. "I'd only say yes if I wanted you to." Willow gathered her courage, hugging Gold's gleaming body tightly.

"Do you?" she asked.

"Yes," Gold replied at once. Willow smiled, then released her grip on Gold's waist and looked to her side, straight at the shimmering surface of her wing. She reached out to touch it, and hesitated as she felt the radiating warmth on her fingers.

"Is it okay...?" she asked in a hushed tone. Gold nodded.

"You won't hurt me," she promised. "Touch me anywhere..."

Willow nodded and reached the last fraction of an inch, so that her fingers touched the fabric of the wing. It yielded under her touch, feeling soft and springy, like silk melded with elastic. Willow put her palm flat against the surface and stroked it slowly, up to the outstretched limb holding it in place, and down again. A lustful murmur rose in Gold's throat.

"Does it feel good?" Willow asked, already half-knowing the answer. Gold nodded anyway.

"Very," she whispered. Willow smiled and, daringly, stepped forward, spreading both arms wide and pressing her body into Gold's wing. It was soft and giving, like buoyant liquid, and enticingly warm - as Willow turned her head to watch Gold's face and rested her cheek against her wing, the sensation reminded her of lying on a smooth stone that had been basking in the sun all day.

"Mmmmmmm," Gold purred, swaying slightly. Willow grinned at her, then took her hand and turned her around, gently nudging her towards the bed.

"Can't have you falling over," she quipped, at which Gold chuckled and nodded. Willow sat her down on the edge of the bed, then reached up and ran her hands along the tops of her wing-limbs, gently urging them forward.

"Gimme a hug?" she asked, her lips curling into a naughty grin. Gold quickly complied, sweeping the arms from her back, and their attached wings, around herself and Willow, hugging her from behind. Willow giggled in delight as the warm, undulating wings covered her from head to toe, and stretched her arms out above her head, her fingers intertwining with Gold's long, graceful pair of wing-tip hands.

"Uhhhhyeeeeaaahhhh," she sighed, eyes closed, arching her back as Gold wrapped her wings around her, covering her tightly like a second skin. Every inch of Willow's body was treated to Gold's warmth, and the silky fabric of her wings worked on her skin, caressing her, kneading her pliant flesh. She felt herself slowly leaning back, and amazingly her feet left the floor, leaving her supported entirely by Gold, cradled in her wings. Meeting her gaze Willow let her legs part, allowing the warmth surrounding her to stroke freely across her sex and to bathe in the moisture seeping from her.

Gold's breaths came in quick gasps now, as she felt Willow's whole body writhe sensuously in her grip. Willow's smile widened as she saw the woman's hands move to her own body, one cupping her breasts, forearm beneath one as her hand covered the other and squeezed her nipple. Her other hand moved low, between her thighs, her fingers sinking without resistance between her own folds. Her eyes fluttered closed, her face caught in a mask of rapture.

Willow gasped loudly as she felt a firmer touch on her nether lips, and Gold's eyes flew open again, the hesitation returning to her face. Her wings parted to reveal Willow's naked form in full, and Willow looked down to see her finned tail withdrawing, brushing against her ankle as it drew away.

"I-I'm sorry," Gold said quickly, "I didn't- I wasn't thinking-"

"No wait," Willow interrupted her. "I..." She reached her feet down, finding the floor, and closed the short distance between herself and Gold's body, as her wings kept their presence around her back.

"I like what you 'weren't thinking'," she admitted with a smile. Gold stared up at her in wonder, and nodded, almost questioningly. Willow replied with a nod of her own.

"It... won't hurt," Gold began to assure her.

"I know," Willow smiled. She took Gold's hands in hers and put them on her own waist, then moved forward into her, straddling her hips, and put her arms around her shoulders.

"This is all so amazing," she whispered. "I don't want to hold anything back. I don't want you to think you have to, either. Just... do it. Anything." She leaned forward and pressed a kiss to the side of Gold's neck.

"I trust you," she finished, as she felt Gold's tail on the back of her waist, touching her tentatively.

Gold lifted her easily, settling her around her body, arms and legs fastened around her shoulders and waist, and kissed her deeply, while the tip of her tail stroked her sex tenderly, opening her as gently as sunlight would the petals of a flower. Willow moaned into her mouth as the slender, supple length began to enter her, the ethereal fin around it folding easily in as it slipped between her lips and into her core.

"Ohhhhh god..." she murmured indistinctly, her lips still pressed open against Gold's. She had had her share of penetration - the regular kind, with her eager, gentle, first-and-only boyfriend, and plenty subsequently with women, by way of various inventively-crafted toys. This was different - this was unlike anything else. Gold's tail surged and thrust, all the while caressing her inside, exploring her the way fingers might, and the folds of her fin brushed sweetly against her walls like lips, and outside loved her own folds tenderly, coaxing her open further.

Unthinkingly Willow took a deep, gasping breath without breaking her kiss with Gold, and moaned as she felt warmth flow into her lungs, and diffuse throughout her body. She felt no need for air - she breathed in Gold's essence instead, filling herself, bringing on her impending climax that much quicker in the process.

"Oh god!" she screamed, throwing her head back, while Gold moaned in bliss as Willow's nectar covered her squirming tail. Her huge wings lifted and whipped down, lifting her into the air as Willow clung to her, her head still thrown back, eyes tightly closed, her mouth moving soundlessly as she recovered from the first wave of pleasure.

Gold's tail slowed in the afterglow, and began to withdraw, but Willow instantly clutched even tighter, pushing her hips down, and with a sated smile Gold relented and remained buried inside her lover, moving gently to and fro as she used the length of her tail, snaking between her legs, to firmly rub her own weeping sex. Her wings continued to beat slowly - too slowly, it seemed, to truly lift her, yet she and Willow remained aloft, buoyed as if they weighted almost nothing.

"Th-that..." Willow gasped, slowly letting her head fall forwards into Gold's heaving bosom, "that was... I never... god, never felt anything like that..." Gold smiled and softly kissed the crown of her head, letting her own metallic hair fall either side of Willow's face, stroking her shoulders.

"Me neither," she whispered.

"You... can really feel it?" Willow asked. She tensed her inner muscles, and grinned as she felt Gold's body shudder.

"Everything," Gold promised.

"Um," Willow began after a moment of gathering herself. She looked up at Gold, smiling playfully.

"I don't want this to sound like a dumb question, but are we flying?"

"I do have wings," Gold pointed out with a laugh.

"You can really fly?" Willow asked, in spite of the obvious evidence that the woman she was still wrapped around was in no contact with the floor at all.

"Would you like to go for a flight?" Gold asked in reply. She hesitated, then smiled as an idea seemed to occur to her.

"There's something I'd like to show you," she said invitingly. Willow nodded, and Gold let them drift to the floor and walked slowly to the door leading to the patio.

"I, uh, don't have the key," she admitted with a sheepish smile. Willow giggled.

"I'll get it," she offered, unhooking her legs from around Gold's waist. "No, don't," she added quickly, as Gold again began to withdraw her tail. "It's just in the bedside table - it'll reach. I, uh," she grinned through a rising blush, "I like that."

Gold smiled and nodded, and neither of them could keep from giggling as Willow walked to the table on shaky legs, with Gold's still-embedded tail snaking after her, and returned with the key.

"See?" Willow laughed. "Easy, nothing to it..." She dissolved in a fit of giggles, and Gold kissed her cheek.

"Sweetie," she chuckled. Willow drew back the blinds, revealing the night-time garden outside, and unlocked the glass door, letting it slide out of the way. Gold snuck her hands beneath Willow's thighs and picked her up again, carrying her out into the garden. Willow watched, breathless, as Gold's wings first drew in on themselves to fit through the doorway, then spread to their fullest reach, filling the garden with her golden glow as they spanned more than eight metres.

"Beautiful," Willow whispered in awe. Gold kissed her again, then beat her wings slowly, lifting her bare feet off the grass, and held Willow securely, her arms moving up beneath her shoulders, holding her back, her legs reaching either side of Willow's thighs and locking around her waist.

"Oh," Willow pouted as Gold began, again, to withdraw her tail, but this time the luminous woman smiled.

"I need that to steer," she murmured, as the tip of the slender limb left Willow's sex, with a final loving flourish against her folds. She spread and beat her wings again, lifting higher - Willow could see over the fences into her neighbour's yards now.

'Lucky no-one's out late,' she mused silently, then, 'but who cares? Let 'em see if they want.

"Steering?" she asked. "I didn't think you'd have to worry about aerodynamics... the way you just sort of float, like this." Gold smiled, as her wings again lifted and whooshed down - they were higher than the rooftops now, rising.

"Etherdynamics," she replied. "Same idea, different medium. Do you trust me?"

"Of course," Willow said without hesitation.

"This may be... strange," Gold cautioned. "You'll be alright, I promise. I've got you."

"I know," Willow agreed.

Gold smiled at her, then lifted her eyes to the heavens, as her wings drew back far above her head. Willow trembled in excitement at the feeling of latent power in the body holding her, the bunching of muscles for an imminent exhortation, the feeling of potential, about to come into being.

Gold whipped her wings down hard, sending herself and Willow soaring up. Willow laughed in giddy joy as she watched her house, her street, her neighbourhood, drop away beneath her - a dizzying height, yet she felt safe in Gold's arms, secure, as if it were impossible for her to fall. Gold beat her wings again and again, gathering speed each time, soaring higher and higher, impossibly fast. Willow saw the whole city, the scattered, dim lights of sleeping suburbs, the main roads still lit up like arteries, the areas still busy by night glowing from thousands of tiny pinpricks of light, like colonies of fireflies. Then a layer of cloud rushed past in the blink of an eye, and Willow turned her gaze upward, to the stars and the shining moon, spinning slowly above them as they climbed.

When she looked back down the horizon was curved. Judging speed was difficult, but Gold's wings were moving slower, and they seemed more to be drifting than flying. Willow took a deep breath as Gold loosened her grip, letting Willow sit in her embrace rather than holding her tightly - her lungs filled with air, tasting of Gold. Common sense told her she should be suffocating, or freezing, yet she felt only the radiant warmth of Gold's body on her skin.

"How..." she began, then looked down and lost the ability to speak for a moment. The whole world was beneath her - stretching away in every direction, but curved clearly now, so that there was no longer the vast illusion of a world going on forever into the horizon. Willow, for the first time with her own eyes, saw the whole, vast world at once. The night side was curtained in a blanket of black, pure over the oceans, with dustings of light marking the landmasses. It was huge, incomprehensibly enormous, yet Willow reached out a hand as if to hold it -

"So small," she whispered.

"Yes," Gold agreed - in casual defiance of the vacuum around them, her voice was as clear as Willow's own. "But it contains so many miracles - so much life. Tiny seeds, with nothing more than soil and rain and sun, become towering trees... Lovers create life, a tiny stirring of seed and egg in the womb will become a living being, a new soul... Even an idea, a passing thought, the tiniest of things, can become the glory of a billion people. She drew Willow to her and kissed her tenderly.

"Imagine what this tiny seed, Earth, might become," she whispered. Willow cried silently, joyfully.

"This is what you're giving me," she said. "Isn't it? This is how you make me 'rich in spirit?'"

"You always were," Gold replied gently. "Everyone is. Everyone can be."

"You're a miracle," Willow wept. Gold shook her head.

"That's the miracle," she said, casting her eyes down at the world beneath them. "I'm just a reminder, that it's there."

"How..." Willow gasped. "How can I thank you? There isn't a way, not for this..."

"You don't need to," Gold smiled. Willow stared at her, then nodded, and leaned forward to kiss her. Their lips parted against each other, their tongues mingled, their hands explored each other's naked bodies under the silver light of all the stars in creation.

Willow drew back, gasping, and smiled lasciviously at Gold. Gently removing Gold's limbs from around herself she nudged her shoulder, just hard enough to spin herself around, and caught hold of her thighs to steady herself, now inverted. She looked up, between their bodies, to see Gold staring down at her, a matching smile on her face. In unspoken agreement they lowered their mouths to each other's parting folds in unison, and once more held each other close as they feasted together. Gold's flavour was intoxicating to Willow, immeasurably stronger and spicier than when kissing her, and as she delicately held her soft folds open with her fingers she lapped hungrily, seeking out every drop of moisture to flow from her centre. The few that escaped formed perfect spheres and drifted slowly away.

Gold applied herself with equal vigour to tasting Willow, pressing her lips against the pink softness of her yielding core, licking lustily, before working the tip of her lengthening tongue into Willow and suckling direct from her source. Loud moans welled up inside her as Willow's body shuddered and surrendered its secrets to her, her thighs closing around her head, as hers did to Willow, and her wings slowly wrapped around them both, cocooning them in a vibrant, radiant blanket of passion. For a moment, a new star shone in the sky.

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Willow stirred, and woke slowly. She blinked in the dimness of her bedroom, and looked around.

'Just a dream,' she mused, with some reluctance to admit it. Her eye caught the gold mirror sitting silent on top of her dresser, and she gave a wan smile. 'But what a dream!'

She sat up, with the vague feeling something was different. She had to frown and think a moment, before she realised - she wasn't in her usual spot in the bed. Normally she occupied the centre, but this morning she found herself on one side, and to her left the blankets were rumpled, the pillows bunched, as if... '...someone slept there...'

Willow felt the sheets beneath the blankets - warm.

"Gold?" she whispered. She looked around again at the empty room, and her eyes fell on the full length windows, the blinds drawn, but letting in slivers of the sunrise from outside.

"Until morning? And then, what?"

"Then I return to the well.
This Gold will have been, and the essence of me that is forever will wait to become another."

Willow shed a tear for the strange, magical, gentle being who had changed her world. Moving slowly she got up, crossed to the windows, and opened the blinds to look out at the new morning. The sun was still low, most of the garden in shadow, but Willow could easily pick out the glistening of dew on the grass, the vibrant colours of tiny flowers turning their petals towards the sky, the little, jerky motions of a bird in the branches of one of the small trees, tugging at a twig for his nest.

'She didn't change my world,' Willow thought, a smile creeping onto her lips. 'Just opened my eyes to it. And it's all still out there.'

She opened the door - the key was still in the lock - and walked naked out onto the grass, feeling the tiny dew-drops of water trickle through her toes. The early sunlight touched her as she moved into it, making her feel incredibly alive, and she stretched her arms above her head, closed her eyes, and laughed.

"Thank you!" she called out to the sky.

"I told you you don't need to," Gold's voice came from behind her. Willow spun around to see her, as she had first appeared - human - leaning against the side of the house, idly stroking the leaves on one of the smaller trees that grew up against the wall. She grinned at Willow and walked towards her.

"I..." Willow tried to speak, "you... but... dawn? You said..."

"You said," Gold smiled, taking Willow's hands and placing them on her hips, "that I never have to do anything again. That I should only do what I want to do." She beamed at Willow. "I want to be with you."

"You..." Willow struggled, "but... you said I couldn't tell you to stay...?"

"You didn't," Gold explained, slowly drawing her into a warm embrace. "I told myself to stay... I hoped I could. And I did. And here I am." She looked around. "I've never seen the sun rise before... isn't it beautiful?" Willow nodded.

"That's what you gave me," Gold said tenderly.

"The sunrise?" Willow asked. Gold laughed softly and shook her head.

"You gave me me," she replied. "You let me love you, from my own heart. That's far more than I gave you."

"W-well then," Willow said, gathering her composure, "you could make it up to me? I happen to know there's a whole miraculous world to explore... you could explore it with me. If you want to?" Gold smiled radiantly.

"Yes," she said, "I do want to." She leant into Willow's kiss, knowing it was coming, and for a moment all was silent - even the bird in the tree paused in gathering its wood - while they shared themselves. Gold finally drew back a fraction.

"There is one thing I'd like to as you," she whispered.

"I love you," Willow promised. "Ask anything."

"A name?" Gold asked in reply.

"A name?" Willow echoed.

"I'm not 'Gold' now," she said softly. "I'm... something I've never been before. I want a name - and I want it to be from you."

Willow stared, searching her thoughts for something, anything, to fit this goddess. 'Goddess,' she thought, 'goddess... of peace, a shining star...'

"Tara," she whispered.

"Say 'my Tara,'" the other woman asked.

"My Tara," Willow complied, smiling.

"Yes," said Tara, "I like that name." She gave Willow a suggestive grin.

"What part of this world of miracles do you want to explore first?" she asked in a husky voice that sent a shiver down Willow's spine.

"Guess," Willow grinned, squeezing Tara's hips. They both laughed easily.

"So," Willow began, "you're... human now?" Tara grinned at her, and took a deep breath.

"No," she said, as she began to change, her glowing wings spreading around them both, "I'm your Tara... just like I always was."

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Re: Elemental: Seven Stories for Seven Days (a series)

Postby Boschi » Fri Nov 04, 2005 2:04 am

OK, so anyone else out there have a new sort of mental security blanket to think of when they can't sleep? Cozy warm Tara wings. Mmmmmm.

No, definitely not in any way icky. Anti-icky in fact - the ultimate in erotic warm fuzzies.

I'm just gonna sit here and smile for a bit.

Thanks Chris.

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Re: Elemental: Seven Stories for Seven Days (a series)

Postby Katez0r » Fri Nov 04, 2005 3:04 am

Boschi wrote:OK, so anyone else out there have a new sort of mental security blanket to think of when they can't sleep?


Totally.


I was looking forward to this particular installment because I'm a bit fangirly over your stories, and way to not disappoint! I am so in love with this story. I had a generally blah day, mostly full of small annoyances that just. kept. adding. up. but here I come and here this is and all of that has melted away. I'm basking in my very own warm Gold glow. Thanks for that.

I have more thoughts on this piece, but I'll have to read through this a few more times and possibly sleep on it, as I am far too tired to remain coherent for much longer.
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Re: Elemental: Seven Stories for Seven Days (a series)

Postby tarebear » Fri Nov 04, 2005 10:55 am

hiya chris :flower

OMG! what a story! :bow :bow :bow

brilliant! :clap :clap :clap

i'm lost for words right now, but it's all good believe me!

WOW! :applause i'll never be looking at old mirrors on sale the same way again! where can i buy one like it? is it on e-bay? wow! what i wouldn't give to have my very own gold!

anyways, i soooo love gold... a spirit sent to fulfill willow's greatest desire... willow's right, she's like a goddess in all her winged glory... not a freak at all... and the best part was that she stayed not just because willow wished it but because she really wanted to be with her... i'm glad she ordered gold to follow her own desires and not what she says...

from your own words stating exactly how i feel about your story Gold:

Even an idea, a passing thought, the tiniest of things, can become the glory of a billion people.


because i think this story of yours is definitely going to leave a lasting mark on everyone's mind not just to those who will be reading it now, but for the other people who will come upon it for years to come... not only because of its uniqueness as a story but its brilliance in capturing imagery and beauty. i'm just gushing all over this story of yours coz i really think it's beautiful! great job chris! i absolutely loved it! :x :x :x

oh btw, just thought i'd say that the smut might be a little different than the norm, but i assure you i personally was not icked by it!

thank you for putting a great effort in this series... the story just keeps getting better and better! elemental rocks! :bounce :bounce :bounce :bounce
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Re: Elemental: Seven Stories for Seven Days (a series)

Postby onlyhalfevil » Fri Nov 04, 2005 11:17 am

that was beautiful. for me, Gold read like a dreamy fairytale from start to end. the powerful imageries really evoked feelings of warmth and peace. loved the smooth contrast between Willow's disenchantment with her day and overall situation which was realistically, and comically :-D, conveyed early on and her eventual exuberance at life and all its wonder, especially how Gold/Tara helped in that transformation. the scene where they floated above Earth was inspiring while the naming at the end was really sweet. thanks.
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Re: Elemental: Seven Stories for Seven Days (a series)

Postby caz » Fri Nov 04, 2005 12:18 pm

:applause Loved this story - as onlyhalfevil said, it is like a fairy tale. I enjoy tales like this cos it's not angsty and you don't get any RL problems.

As for the smut - it was ok by me. I read alot of Laurell K. Hamilton's books, you wouldn't believe some of the 'pairings' she writes about!

Another worthy addition to the Elemental Series. :bounce

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Re: Elemental: Seven Stories for Seven Days (a series)

Postby SithLordWiccan » Fri Nov 04, 2005 12:19 pm

I've been following this for a while, and I just have to say that, of all of them, "Gold" is definitly my favorite, followed closely (by a nose, pretty much), by "Water".

For some reason, those two were the ones that spoke to me the most. Maybe it's cause I find the idea of a vamp Willow and Tara somewhat sexy or because of the way the story is written, but when it comes to W/T fic that's good for the just pure love between the characters as much as good ol' smut, these two are hard to top.

Of course, now that I've said that, watson is probably go and make a liar out of me. But to be honest, this is one of those very rare times in which I want to be proven wrong.

Keep up the good work. :wtkiss
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Re: Elemental: Seven Stories for Seven Days (a series)

Postby WolfNightwind » Fri Nov 04, 2005 4:53 pm

wow..i mean, wow...um just wow....

I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!! i too am quite a fan of Artemis's works as well and have been waiting for this story since the begining! and yet again i'm blown away!!!!! no ick in sight here infact i aplaud you for taking a track very rarly traveled here. brilliant job! just totally mind blowing!!!
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Re: Elemental: Seven Stories for Seven Days (a series)

Postby Tiggrscorpio » Fri Nov 04, 2005 8:12 pm

Good Heavens! Just when I convince myself that I couldn't possibly be any more overjoyed with this series, along comes another unique tale. Gold is quite simply a lovely addition, Artemis, to this ecclectic collection. By the end of the story I felt all warm and snuggly, like I was wrapped in those precious wings.

Once again, I can't help but see glimpses of things that remind me of canon. Willow's mopey behavior right before she finds Gold (Tara). Gold has a secret about her true identity and Willow can't help but love her regardless. I, for one, had no issues about the love scene with Gold in her true form. It was very erotic and definitely worked for me!

I don't know if this was intentional or just a natural progression with your gifted choice of words, but I noticed all of the other elements already written about sprinkled throughout your story - moon, fire, water and wood. I thought that was cool.

Now, I have to embarrassingly admit to something. I'm a Director of Housekeeping for a large hotel. I have a store room full of old mirrors. I have the strongest desire to just go and...check 'em out. What? You never know...a girl can dream...can't she?

Thanks for an enchanting tale!
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Re: Elemental: Seven Stories for Seven Days (a series)

Postby arwen276 » Sat Nov 05, 2005 6:26 am

Hey Chris,

Every week, after every story, I get into this sated mood, when I'm unconsciously convinced that it couldn't get any better , it does!
These stories are so different, that we can't compare them at all, and that's the beauty of it. I mean can anyone compare the elements?

At first my interest was piqued, when you said it was a tad unconventional and you were worried about it being icky, but after reading it, there are simply no words to describe it : it's wonderful, totally un-icky, au contraire, VERY SEXY, and rather intimate between two lovers who unveil their true nature to each other. I kind of felt like a voyeur :)
It also got me wondering, as I read it, after Gold embraced her true form, wouldn't Willow rather have her desire's form? but then the way she reacted to Gold was WOWish, and very beautiful. I also wondered towards the end, when Gold chose to stay, wouldn't Willow regret not having her true-to-form Gold? but then you go and give us that wonderful ending !

THANK YOU!

~Arwen

ps: I know I've been reduced to a gibberish of it's wonderful, beautiful, amazing, totally sexy and wowish, please believe that my vocabulary is quite expandable, however, you story rendered me a tad uncoherent, and totally wishing I had my very own Gold.
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Re: Elemental: Seven Stories for Seven Days (a series)

Postby FineyMcFine » Sat Nov 05, 2005 6:41 am

Chris, wow. WOW. This was amazing. It's so beautifully written, the gold-ness in the story seems to gleam through and bathe everything in a golden glow. It really speaks to the wonderful imagery that you use and just the right choice of words. I had the same feeling very strongly after reading Emmy's story, the impression I came away with was that everything was bathed in moonlight. Here, it's as if everything was bathed in gold.

The conversation and the reveal of Gold's true nature and Willow figuring out that Gold had to do what she wanted (and her reaction to that) was very sweet. Very Willow to set Gold free.

In fact, speaking of that, your story reads very much like a fairy tale - mysterious artifact that holds magical powers and teaches a person a lesson, and like Aladdin, Willow figures out that the right thing to do is to set free the genie. Although it didn't take Willow quite as long as Aladdin to do it - which is good, considering how horrified she was at the possiblity that she could have sexually coerced Gold.

Anyway, I also loved the perspective scene when Gold took Willow up to see the earth. It reminded me of part of A Wrinkle In Time (actually, I think it was A Swiftly Tilting Planet) where the unicorn Galadrial took Charles Wallace and Meg up to the stratosphere. Anyway, it was a perspective shift that Willow needed.

When Willow woke up and she said "Only a dream..." I was like NOOOO! But yay, because so quickly you showed us it was not a dream. And hoorah for Tara being able to stay, and she and Willow living happily ever after.

This story has so much power and is so wonderful. Thank you so much for sharing your talent.
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Tail Sex

Postby JustSkipIt » Sat Nov 05, 2005 11:59 am

Well, Chris you know I had to say it. Tail Sex.

I like to tease you but seriously, I'd say this is my favorite of the Elementals and the favorite of your writing that I've read. I don't mean any slight on any of the other stories, all of which are really wonderful, but I find this one ... more.

More. Really. It's all encompasing. It's original and beautiful. You do a really fantastic job of giving Willow the focus of the story but making it so much about Willow and Tara together. It's so easy to see Tara as a Goddess, a larger-than-life being. And Willow is a "normal" person and yet not so normal. She's the one normal person who is willing to make the right wish. To give Tara her freedom without even intending to do so.

We have a book on mindful parenting that is really great and it talks about how the role of a parent should be to give your child autonomy. To teach him/her responsibilty and to give autonomy at every stage. To me, that's what's so beautiful about this story: that's what Willow gives Tara.

The sex is of course wonderful, overwhelming, beautiful... So is the depiction of the flight. Honestly though, I simply love your descriptions of the two women in Willow's room. Beautiful and overwhelming and wonderful.

One more thing: this story appears complete and that's quite a change. Fantastic.
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Re: Elemental: Seven Stories for Seven Days (a series)

Postby sadie » Sat Nov 05, 2005 1:04 pm

Waw Chris that was an amazing story... Beautiful :bow :bow
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Re: Elemental: Seven Stories for Seven Days (a series)

Postby watty » Mon Nov 07, 2005 4:26 am

Summary: On an ordinary day, Willow has an extraordinary experience.

This is one of the best summaries I have ever read on Pens. Simple yet promising. Subtly telling us what is to come, but not revealing too much, because that would be spoiling the enjoyment of the story. People should read, come back to this summary, and think about what it means to them. It caught my eye as soon as I saw the posted version, and I was swooning already.

And what a story, Chris! You have tapped into every person’s secret desire. How many of us, even those of us who are married, haven’t wished for our own genie in the bottle? How many of us haven’t played the game of Three Wishes? How many of us haven’t come home from a depressing day at work, completely lethargic and wanted oodles of TLC from someone who knows what we want even before we say it, sometimes even before we know it?

I saw actual colours when I read this, more so than the other stories. What can I say, I’m a little strange. Emmy’s was a dark twilight blue; Cam’s was fiery red; Debra’s was neutral, sometimes sepia (I don’t know why); Cyd’s was natural colours (a lot like where the Ewoks live actually); yours was a radiant yellow-sunkist-gold, like every word was blanketed with the warmth of Gold’s magic; mine’s almost in black and white and T’s, like her font, in orange. Yours was the most vivid in terms of colour. Did that make sense?

I like how you slowly revealed the power and mystique of the mirror, how Willow seemed to be so drawn to it at the street market that she didn’t even bargain for it, how she dismissed it after researching on the internet, and especially how she thought she was some sort of reverse vampire and how her dim “reflection” was actually Gold herself.

When Gold finally appeared, I actually jumped out of my seat the first time I read it. It was scary, and I could well imagine Willow’s reaction. But like the Tara we know so well, Gold had so much calm and trust in her, how could anyone be afraid of her for long?

She was extraordinarily beautiful, so much so that it was a moment before Willow realised that she was also extraordinarily naked, and another moment still before she realised that there was, indeed - beauty and nakedness aside - a complete stranger in her bedroom.

Didn’t know whether to laugh at Willow’s thought progression or be awestruck at the extraordinary beauty. Like I said earlier, isn't this the fantasy of Every Single Person reading this story? Of Tara appearing as a naked goddess suddenly in their bedrooms and with no strings attached? You know us too well, Taskmaster.

Willow had chosen Gold well. Not only was she a tailor-made image of exactly what Willow saw in her ideal woman, she had a quirky sense of humour too.
"You've never noticed the world being crazy before?" Gold asked, one side of her mouth turning up impishly.

A succubus with personality! :P How wonderful of Willow to grant Gold free will. It is the age-old story, that by her generosity, she had gained more for herself than she could ever imagined. The way Gold shyly revealed her true nature was also a wonder.
"Try not to be scared," she said, sounding almost resigned.

Really felt for her there, could feel her trepidation and fear of rejection from Willow. But of course she had nothing to fear.

I have to repeat what Debra said. T-A-I-L S-E-X. Sigh. Must admit that not many writers on Pens would dare to tackle 1) a wing fic and 2) tail sex, and for it to come out as beautifully as you have done. No disrespect to the other writers of course.

Seeing the world, giving and receiving freedom to choose, being together. That was a great story, Chris. Remember when you first showed us the outline? So different. So original. Knew it would be excellent and beautiful and sexy and warm. And it is. Thank you, thank you and thank you for all the graphics.
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Re: Elemental: Seven Stories for Seven Days (a series)

Postby lollipopgirl » Tue Nov 08, 2005 8:42 pm

Well, I'm gonna be honest with my feedback here...
For the first half of the story I really couldn't get into it, I don't fully know why but I just couldn't find anything in the story to grab on to and that made me want to read more, I think it may have had something to do with me reading the feedback first and having very high expectations. Fortunately, the second half did fulfill my expectations and I really did enjoy the story from then on, especially the very end and the naming....sooo sweet. So I did actually enjoy the story once I was able to get into it...it just took a bit for me to get there.
Sorry if that was a bit harsh!

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Re: Elemental: Seven Stories for Seven Days (a series)

Postby Emms » Tue Nov 08, 2005 9:18 pm

Chris, Chris, Chris...what can I say that hasn't already been said (probably by watson) a hundred times and a hundred different ways (I swear I didn't plan that hehe) :lol

I read this days ago, but afterward, when it was time to write some kind of response I felt myself at a loss for words....well, I'm back now and I'll try to leave you with some kind of response...

I absolutely loved this story! The eloquence with which you chose your words is totally amazing; it's gravity intensified and sprinkled through with golden glitter-dust.

I loved the beginning. I love the way you portrayed Willow and the mundane’ ness of her everyday life--and how through a few sentences about her relationship with Buffy you were about to paint a complete picture of their friendship....that was just amazing....

I loved that the person selling the mirror gravely miscalculated its value; basically stating that it was a knock-off....But Willow felt something about it that said otherwise...

And then there was GOLD.....in all her feminine glory.....

I extra love (am I using that word too much?) the way you were able to transcend from point A to point B so fluidly that it was able to feel so natural. I liked how (trying out a new word there) Willow went from a foggy mistrust of Gold’s sudden appearance in her bedroom, to a misty curiosity and finally to a decisive admission of desire....it felt so natural....

and then there was the love-making and the much-talked-about tail sex...but to be honest, by that point I was so caught up in the characters and their story that I barely noticed that it was Tara's tail doing the "talking" ( for lack of a better word)....it just seemed like such a natural extension of her person that it almost didn't register for me at first.

What a wonderful, beautiful story Chris...it was completely satisfying in every way! And Tara's appearance at the end was very memorable....she stayed because she wanted to...and that is the most powerful message of all........

I really hope any of that made sense....it's been such a long day and I am so incredibly tired, but I just couldn't go another day without telling you exactly how much I really loved (there's that word yet again) your story....

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Re: Elemental: Seven Stories for Seven Days (a series)

Postby melmac » Tue Nov 08, 2005 10:01 pm

...And they lived happily ever after.
I was really left with a warm fuzzy happy feeling after this and though after good W & T lovin :wtkiss I am quite warm, I finished your story very content as well. No cliffhangers or whatifs, just happily ever after.
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Re: Elemental: Seven Stories for Seven Days (a series)

Postby taralicious » Tue Nov 08, 2005 11:41 pm

Chris,
I had an out of body experience and transcended to a higher plane of consciousness, that's how moved I was while reading your tale of desire made manifest to Willow as Tara.
As you are also the chronicler of the adventures of the Smut Bunnies, I anticipated the reference to Jill Masterson and her rather unique raiment and also wasn't surprised to see mention of the inclusion of everyone's favorite "Star Wars" fantasy, that being Princess Leia in the gold bikini.
What I couldn't foresee and which, never in my wildest imagination could I have thought made manifest was the visual imagery of Desire, in her natural form, making love to Willow in a tableau resembling the memorable illustration from the first "Preacher" graphic novel as drawn by Steve Dillon of the two angelic beings' carnality.
You make the white-skinned one Willow and change the red-skinned one to gold and give it a tail and you have the scene which defies description except as you wrote it.
Much like Cyd's tale of wood, words seem wholly inadequate to convey the sensory experience of visualizing this encounter.
May the Powers That Be reward you amply for your skill and ability to turn a phrase and to make the extraordinary seem within our grasp.
It's all very Flowers For Algernon as I don't want to leave the astral plane where such rare events can be glimpsed and vicariously shared.
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Re: Elemental: Seven Stories for Seven Days (a series)

Postby irishgrl3 » Thu Nov 10, 2005 8:47 am

Artemis,
What a great addition Gold is to this series! I really enjoyed :blush the fantasy aspect of this story, it was so very clever. :clap I like your Willow, you wrote her everyday life so realistic. I could totally see her wandering through the market picking up the different items and her facial expressions as she decided not to buy them. And Tara's character was so grand. Almost too worthy of anything on this earth. Your description of her was so vivid, and beautiful. I thorougly enjoyed reading your fic in what is such a fantastic project on Pens. :-D
Wonderful job!
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Re: Elemental: Seven Stories for Seven Days (a series)

Postby wimpy0729 » Thu Nov 10, 2005 9:30 am

Whew! Okay, I'm finally caught up with this amazing series. I just want to say that this is such an incredible project with the most fabulous writers, that this is just a delicious treat for all of us addicted fic readers. You have all taken us on a wonderful journey and captured your themes so perfectly that we feel like we're there experiencing it with your words.

Okay, Chris' is the freshest in my foggy mind, so I must say an extra kudos for such an interesting, creative way to capture their relationship. Just wow. I'll never see gold the same way. And of course, I would be remiss in my Smut Bunny duties if I failed to mention the interesting, beautiful and imaginative way you described the lovemaking scene. But I do have a request. Seeing as how you have such a gift with creating amazing pictures for stories, I was wondering if you might consider making one of the one-of-a-kind "tail sex". Just to satisfy my curiosity, and probably others. Please, pretty please, Chris.

Great jobs, all of you! Can't wait til the next installment.

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Re: Gold

Postby terra21 » Thu Nov 10, 2005 10:23 pm

Chris, I've lost count of how many times I've read this story. I have it stored on my hard drive and a shortcut on my desktop. So when I want a little tail-sex, I just double click.

Seriously though, this story is fabulous! The idea of Tara (Gold) being a winged creature that gives herself freely to the person who summoned her is so far in form from the Tara of canon. But her attraction to Willow and the fact that Willow enables Gold to become real Tara is synonymous with the show. The Tara (Gold) you've characterized in this story is in many ways like the Tara in canon. They both start out with silent strength yet not forceful, then transform under Willow's attention and blossom.

My favorite line - "Aren't I?" Grrrrrr, I could eat her up! Loved, loved, loved her seduction of Willow. Gold is such a sexy entity, I could picture every enticement.

Geez lou-weeez, I would totally have sex with a tailed/winged Tara! Especially the sex you described. This smut is flawless, and there are added appendages to deal with while writing. I believe you did a fine job finding a place for each extremity.

You used perfect words to tell a story from your magnificent imagination. I admire your work Chris, it really is some of the best on Pens and better than some of the novels in print I've read.

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