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Re: Butterfly

Postby umgaynow » Mon Sep 12, 2005 8:40 pm

Oh my! :::fanning self:::

Not so much a fan of opera here...all I know about it is from the various selections in the french horn practice books I had in school...what can I say...sopranos give me a headache...but this story...

WOW...you have an amazing style and thank you for finally letting them act on their thoughts...cuz all that mutual internal lusting was driving me crazy...I must say you really know how to write a love scene...such lush description so that you feel as though you are being carried away on the wave of their passion for each other...just read the whole story in one sitting in fact...what would the cyber equivalent be? A file you can't put down? Anyway, color me impressed...and now...

MORE PLEASE!!!!!!! :applause :applause :applause :applause :applause :clap :clap :clap :clap :clap

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Re: Butterfly

Postby The Rose24 » Mon Sep 12, 2005 10:13 pm

I just read this whole thing in an entire sitting. I was kind of reluctant at first because I am not too crazy about opera.

First, I just love the way you incorporated season four into the opera scenario.

Second, The W/T interaction is phenomenal. They portray so much to each other with a simple touch as on the show. They can't seem to keep their hands off of each other, and I have very little doubt that Tara will stay to get the Willow lovin' she has been fantasizing about from the beginning.

Third, I agree with Sacinema. Will you reconsider putting BS together? They never should have happened. I liked him a lot better when he was more evil and Buffy's rival. On the other hand, it is your story. I'll just skip over the Buffy and Spike parts.
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Re: Butterfly

Postby JustSkipIt » Tue Sep 13, 2005 10:45 am

Wow and wow. I'm so glad that you didn't just tease and tease us. And boy did you not tease. That was so amazingly sensual and beautiful! So well done. You do a wonderful job of communicating their passion and sensuality and also putting in their doubts. Very well done.
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Re: Butterfly

Postby Artemis » Thu Sep 15, 2005 8:48 am

Oh, wow. How'd you like to be the Ministry's head of musical operations? You definitely know how to make singers happy! :blush

That was just... I mean, the whole time, the attraction between them was incredible - I'm surprised it wasn't crackling around and making their hair stand on end! How they even made it back to Willow's flat is a miracle - I can't fathom how they didn't just jump each other in the park, and give the squirrels and swans something out of the ordinary to look at :lol

As always, I love how you weave personality into every moment of the sensuality - Willow and Tara never stop being Willow and Tara (rather than just 'two women making out'). Things like Willow's internal Tara database (Tarabase?), Tara's doubts, Willow's surprise at her own boldness... the singing :x And best of all, the kissing at last :wtkiss

I just want to draw attention to this line:
"And then finally… Goosebumps on overheated skin happened, blood racing like waterfalls happened.
Love happened."
No insightful comment from me here, I just adore it :clap

I liked how they repeated the move with the coffee cup, as they'd done earlier at the restaurant - but now with an entirely different feeling behind it. The same action, yet before it was asking a question, and now it's after the answer's been given. Drinking from the cup seemed almost like them saying "We're going to make love." "Uh-huh."

All I can say is, Buffy and Riley better not pick now to barge in! Of course, the way Willow and Tara are at the moment, they may not even notice.

Great work :bow

(Incidentally, not that I know opera much as I said, but I've always thought of Maskerade as a parody of Phantom, rather than opera in general. And really, Phantom - the musical, that is - never struck me as being very operatic, in spite of its setting.)
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Re: Butterfly

Postby Graceland » Thu Sep 15, 2005 3:37 pm

Hi there.
Wow, I'm really impressed with this fic. The feeling behind it is so sensual and passionate. Whether you're describing the music, the food, or the girl's interactions it is very palatable. I feel like I can imagine being there. The entire description of their kiss(es) is beautiful. Normally I get kind of bored with a description that long but this one was just so sensual and erotic that I'm looking forward to what happens upstairs. Thanks.
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Re: Butterfly

Postby Safuega » Fri Sep 16, 2005 8:12 pm

Gentle Writer:

Sorry to have ruined your 'Bitter and Twisted' street cred, but I must point out that it is your own fault for writing such lovely updates like this one. What else am I supposed to call you but 'incurable romantic' when you write such beautiful and almost lyrical make out sessions between Willow and Tara? :impatient

I found the whole update exquisite but I particularly liked the part where they sign that bit from The Knight of the Rose where they both ask, 'when and where have I been so happy?' What a lovely and telling line!

I also liked the phrase about how and when love happened. It made me think of fireworks and the allegro non molto of Vivaldi's Winter in the Four Season. Lovely, really lovely.

Viene la sera indeed. I am eager to see what else this night has in store for our star struck lovers.

Thy faithful reader who humbly begs for more,

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Re: Butterfly

Postby eirnlove » Sat Sep 17, 2005 12:28 am

:bow


HOLY :sheep:


WOW!
...

looking forward for the next update.
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Re: Butterfly

Postby CrazyTaraWitch » Sat Sep 17, 2005 7:31 pm

need...more.....
hot.....so hot...want tara...need...
MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :bow
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I hope, we'll have more happy ever after
I hope, we can all live more fearlessly...

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Re: Butterfly

Postby tarasgirl » Mon Sep 19, 2005 7:34 pm

*Races into the thread to leave horribly overdue feedback*

:glasses Hi.

Dearest betrothed,
Soooooo, the whole tarasgirl thing is not actually a reference to my girlfriend, it's my little demonstration of my love for Tara from Buffy! Therefore, the only person joining in would be Tara or alternately, Amber and I'm totally fine with that!! :banana
*Squinting up at the sky* Still waiting for that silver rose to come falling through your hole in the world anytime soon... ;-)
Can't say I've ever been engaged, let alone with a girlfriend on the side! Hehe, it'll be an experience for both of us.
I am all in favour of lax boundaries myself! I have two extremely close friends who have basically no physical boundaries, so I'm quite comfortable with getting close!
I'm with you on the unrequited love scale, so we shall have to adjust now that we have found each other :flower .
*Wanders into the actual feedback munching on a cherry*

I've read this update several times already, it takes me a while to process everything and then be in the right headspace for leaving feedback, sorry for the delay!
Love the snail flavoured icecream! Very cute; also the cherry chocolate combination - nice blend of bitter sweet that suits Tara down to the ground. Actually I adored the entire icecream sequence. You have a wonderful flair for teasing...something I may have to keep in mind for future reference :flirt. This whole update was loaded with heavy breathing...or perhaps that was just at my house :blush ! Food can be so damn sexy if used in the right way and boy, was this the right way! Besides you cannot go past someone making love to your fingers...*shiver*
I can completely relate to Willow wanting to take things inside and her need to tuck Tara away and keep her for her eyes only, I'm really selfish when it comes to sharing people I love, hehe.
Loved this quote:
Willow closed her eyes and let the sensations and scents flow through her like water.

The repetition of the tea gesture was perfect and your description of Tara's lidded eyes was also stunning. Everyone else has mentioned your description of love and I merely bow down to how lyrically accurate it was :bow .

The whole thing was just...wow, really. Absolutely breathtaking. Can't wait for more.

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Re: Butterfly

Postby Reallybigpineapple » Thu Sep 22, 2005 10:28 am

Notes: A lot of people have commented that they hesitated to read the story because of it's opera setting. I cannot stress this enough: The singing is just to replace magic as a metafor for hot monkey love. Don't like opera? Just skip it, as Tara would have put it. I'm only in this for the smut, as I am sure are you :-D Sorry about the plot, as I've said, but it just happened.


Cohen101: Of course she’ll bleeding stay! I’m sooo not Joss Whendon, so no coitus interrupted by angst in my stories!
Thanks for reading, Julia!

Grimlock72: Nah, no Buffy and Riley…Who am I to get in the way of quality Willow/Tara smootchies?

tcurti3: Welcome and thank you very much indeed! I’m glad you liked it!

Binky: I’m very happy that my story won the match against your basement… :eyebrow Maybe you can avoid cleaning your attic with this chapter :-D

Spells42: By all means, don’t miss a morning in bed on account of my story. Staying in bed is one of the great joys of life. Personally, I like to read a spot of smut Monday morning at work, just after having had breakfast and checking my personal e-mail on paid time… :eyebrow
One of the great things about smut is that if you look focus and scowl at the screen a lot, the boss will actually think that you are thinking about work. How I love computers….
Anyways, imagine a me in a Josephine Bakeresque banana suit shaking a pair of maracas (Actual maracas, that is… :-D) and hopping about animatedly. This be the Big Pineapple dance of “Yay, me be favourite romantic fic!”
Don’t worry about Tara’s fate. Me no be Joss. Me will make with sickeningly happy ending.
Here be big smut for reading pleasure.


Beanie: So, have I forever given you naughty thoughts in connection with piano stools, then :eyebrow And if so, is that good or bad? Didn’t mean to distract you from your piano playing by sending you mental pictures of hot, smootching people reclining against your key board… Actually, I did, so that’s a lie :glasses
Considering how Tara acts in NMR, I think it makes sense to make her slightly insecure about their relationship in the beginning.
Thanks you very much for all your compliments… I think I’ll have to do the dance with the banana suit and the maracas again… I thought that this chapter might have been on the over sappy side, so I’m glad that people seem to think that it worked…
Oh and by the way, MY gay boyfriend is a cellist as well!

Sacinema: Hi! I really enjoy it myself when AU-writers keeps many elements from the original series and just give them a twist that suits the AU-setting. In my case, I’ve basically just substituted magic with music. For me, music is the closest thing to magic that actually exists, if you see what I mean…
As for Spike and Buffy… Well I’m sorry, but it’s going to have to happen… My best friend writes Spuffy smut and she would never talk to me if they didn’t get it together, so I really have no choice in the matter :lol Don’t worry, it’s not going to be fluff, just sex. They’re not going to like each other or anything, I promise… :devil
I will do my best to keep to frequent updates, since it is so huge with the suckage when people just abandon their stories in the middle of nothing… (Where is my next chapter of Huddled Masses!? Legend of Green Eyed Red!? Rosenberg Institute!?) Thank the gods that Neverland is back at least!
Thank you for all your kind words! I’m glad you like it! Hope you’ll like the next chapter too!

Sam7777: Oh, yeah, there’s gonna be much more alright… :eyebrow
Me glad you liked!

Comicchick: Welcome, Jodie! I did exactly the same, actually… I lurked for months, being certain that someone in a kittens t-shirt would show up with tar and feathers if I said a peep… But then I realized that we’ve all kind of studied taglarin mythic rites, if you know what I mean, so I decided to show my insect reflection…
Thanks you for taking the time to comment. I’ve never realized how much feedback means until I started posting my own story…
Here be more smootchies!

VixenyTarasHot: She is indeed… :eyebrow
Yeah, I’m with you girlfriend… Never mind the opera, that’s just a bit of plot to make the smut make more sense anyway… So here it is!

Watson: Excellent!
Yes, the single line spacing was deliberate. Not sure if that had any profound thought behind it other than a general dislike of too much air in the text, but still…
Me glad chapter hot! Me make more nude in this chapter!

ShyTemptress: What to the what-song? MORE!? Well, then more you shall have!

Umgaynow: Oh, sod the opera, it’s just an excuse for smut anway!
Sorry about the UST, but they haven’t known each for other more than a week and a half or something like that, time wise, so it’s still pretty quick….
Well, colour me happy you think I can write love scenes. I felt a substantial fear that I might fall off the line between fluff and “I’m passing out from lethal glucose levels and an overdose of bad poetry”.

The Rose24: You can skip the opera parts too, if you like…
Sorry, B/S will have to happen. See explanation given to Sacinema.
Oooh, yeah, there’ll be Willow lovin’ for Tara alright… :eyebrow

JustSkipIt: Schplendid, miss Galore!
Your son in the picture? Really sweet…

Artemis: I should like nothing better than to be Head of Musical Operations at the Ministry, General!! Can I have my own little badge with a pair of crossed bunny ears and a g-clef or something? (jumps excitedly up and down with an ever so slightly mad look in her eyes)
Your kind words about my humble fic make my white little bunny ears tremble from joy!
Had I known how much anxiety I would create by mentioning Buffy and Riley I would have made them go away on a long weekend or something… Or maybe a concert tour to Buenos Aires or something to eliminate the barging in-factor. 
I agree, Maskarade is not half bad as a parody of The Phantom of the Opera, but most people I’ve talked to about it seem to see it as an opera parody. Agnes (That is her name, isn’t it?) looks suspiciously like Birgit Nilsson the way she’s drawn on the cover, by the way…
If you need a little make-out music for Smut Bunnies or something, just beep my badge! Salutes.

Graceland: Excellent! A fair warning, though: If you get bored by long descriptions, you’ll probably be bored to tears by this next chapter… :lol
Thanks for reading!

Safuega: : Well, I suppose it’s my own fault for being so sappy… :-D
Well, music kind of makes me think of making out generally, actually. Music is very erotic for me, so a combined music and make out session seemed obligatory…
What the night has in store? SMUT! NUDITY! FORNICATION! Heheheheh (slightly maniacal laughter)
I really like Gilberto Gil, by the way, in connection with nothing at all…

eirnlove: Thank you for your kind barn yard animal and for reading. Here be more story!

CrazyTaraWitch: I can relate, girlfriend. I need Tara too… :-D
Here is fornication for your reading pleasure!

Tara’sgirl: Well, I kind of figured that it would be Tara from Buffy, since you having a girlfriend named Tara? Way too freaky a co-incidence…. Besides, I wouldn’t suggest a threesome with your real girlfriend, since that would be kinda rude even for me… I’m actually stealing her girlfriend, which isn’t a great set-up for a threesome… It would appear, however, that I have no respect whatsoever for Ambers privacy, since that threesome just makes me go: Oooh, yeah, bring it on! :bounce
The rose is on it’s way, babe. With all the difference in time between Australia and Sweden, I’ll probably arrive yesterday. Just hope it doesn’t get intercepted by the dragons who live at the centre of the earth.
Cherry Garcia is my own favourite ice cream flavour, so that’s more a case of me being hungry during writing than any profound insight into Tara’s character :blush But it’s very flattering that people assume that I have a purpose with my writing… :glasses
I love food. Women who eat properly are sexy. Go Amber!
I know sod all about love actually, having three capsized relationships to my name (my best friend Evil Olive who is reading this, is going “Yeah, with complete idiots!” in the background right now…), but that will obviously change now that we’re getting married… :flower
So, here is some fornication, especially for you!
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Chapter 9: Wie des Blutes ströme sich Zünden

Tara looked into her eyes and nodded slowly.

Then the frame froze as Willow realised that she and Tara would actually have sex. She was going to go to bed with a woman.
Correction: She was going to go to bed with THE woman. Was the thought strange to her? No it wasn’t, she realised. She. Just. Wanted. Her. So. Much .

Tara never seriously considered turning down the invitation. Her insecurities made their tormenting little voices heard, but she pushed them away. She was going to be a good lover to Willow, because she loved her more than anything. She just had to show her just how much with her body.
Willow took her hand and led her towards the stairs. Tara felt the hand tremble a little. She felt her heart swell with pride that Willow Rosenberg wanted her.

I am Tara Maclay. I am desired. I am the woman she wants. I am the one.

She felt like a giant, like nothing could touch her now. She reclaimed her territory by putting her arm around Willow’s waist while they ascended the stairs as one creature. Willow’s walking was made more difficult by the repeated turning of her head to kiss Tara.

The soprano’s room was at the end of a shadowy passage with a low ceiling. The top floor was really a converted attic. Willow and Buffy had loved the flat and bought it even though they couldn’t really afford it. They could now, of course. Willow’s room was comfortably cluttered and decorated in soothing warm colours.

Tara had no clue about all of this, however. During the walk down the passage she was too busy kissing Willow, who was walking backward toward her room. As they entered, the distraction continued when the room’s owner kicked the door shut and threw herself at her and kept kissing her as if her mouth were the last oasis in the Sahara. Tara’s senses where too overloaded with Willows skin, her body heat, her scent and movements for them to process any other information.

They ended up sitting on the side of the bed, almost on top of each other, trying to touch as much skin as possible.
Willow started to unbutton Tara’s white shirt to reveal the hidden treasures inside. A tantalising preview had been offered to her hungry eyes all evening by the slight transparency of it.
As more and more skin was revealed, Willow’s motions became slow and deliberate. She finally stopped moving.

“Is s-something wrong?” Tara asked anxiously, trying to calm her ragged breathing down.

“Of course not, baby. Just trying to make the moment last…” Willow said, eyes filled with wonder at the sight in front of her.

“You don’t have to”. Tara placed tiny feather light kisses along her jaw bone.

“What do you mean? Willow breathed anxiously.

“You don’t have to make this moment last… Because after this one, there’ll be another…” She entwined her fingers with Willows.

“And another… “ Her other hand ran around Willow’s waist to her back.

“And another… “ She leant forward and pressed her upper body against Willow, who gasped and let her other hand slide inside Tara’s shirt.

Willow became more focused on the desirable goal of a naked Tara. The shirt was soon unbuttoned all the way. Willow reverently slid her hand down Tara’s stomach, marvelling at the sensation. Her eyes followed her hands down to her waist, feasting on the sensuous curves, so deliciously different from her own petite and svelte body. A moan escaped her as one of Tara’s hands found its way inside her trousers down to her bottom. Tara cupped her in a warm hand and pushed her closer. The feeling of the hand on her flesh with nothing but her panties in between drove her crazy.

Her own hand sought out another coveted goal: The soft white mound of Tara’s breast. Her breathing was suddenly fast and shallow as she made contact with the delicate lace of her bra. It was an extravagant little thing, which didn’t leave much for the imagination. She didn’t know that Tara had bought it only days ago, grasping at the thought that Willow might spend the night in her room again. Not that she had expected anything to happen if she had, but the soprano had made her feel like she was a woman who belonged in underwear like this.

Willow realised how different it was to put your hand on another woman’s breast to cupping your own. Like practising kissing with yourself in front of the mirror compared to kissing the love of your life. She moved her palm over the lace and felt the nipple harden underneath. It quickly joined the entering of Tara’s tongue into her mouth as a joint number one on the list of the most arousing experiences ever. She couldn’t suppress her soft moans as she moved her hand. She had discovered Nirvana…

Tara had stopped moving for a moment when the other woman touched her breast. Her breath caught. She leant back and arched into Willow’s heavenly hand. She felt herself trembling as a thumb very lightly moved over the hard nipple and the mezzo realised she was whimpering gently at the touch.

Willow pushed the bra strap off her shoulder and bent over to kiss the mark it had left. Then she put her lips on the collar bone. She stayed completely still, just trying to memorize exactly what it felt like: the structure of the skin, the temperature and the shape against her lips.

Tara agonizingly slowly ran the tips of her fingers over Willow’s bent neck, marvelling at the transparency of her love’s skin. She discovered that Willow liked having her earlobes kissed and that the spot of soft skin just behind her ear made her squirm restlessly. As she ran her hands over the material of Willow’s top, she realised that she wasn’t wearing anything that would leave marks. She inched the thin cotton T-shirt slowly upward.
Willow’s white stomach still held the same fascination for her. She slid her flat palm gently over the skin, following the structure of the ribs, the navel and the hips. She continued to push the material further up, until a mesmerising glimpse of the curve of a breast showed. With a feather light touch, she ran the back of her hand along the edge of the perfect little hillock. Willow seemed to concur with her opinion that it was quite enough of clothes now. She pushed Tara’s shirt off her shoulders and removed it.

Half naked, no-one would think to call Tara a girl. She was just all woman. With parted lips, flushed cheeks and eyes burning bright in the half lit room, Willow stared at the vision before her.

Tara looked at Willow’s face and thought it was the most beautiful thing she had ever seen. Sensually, she dragged her fingers along her love’s sides and coaxed the material off her upper body. She lost her ability to think at the sight of the half naked form in front of her.

Chest heaving, Willow leant forward and reclaimed Tara’s lips greedily. They moaned together as their skin touched. As she passionately caressed Tara’s tongue with her own, Willow’s hands went around the mezzo’s back, trying to unclasp her bra without looking.

Again, she kissed the collarbone which she found so irresistible before moving down to Tara’s breast bone, leaving a trail of butterfly kisses. She took a few breaths to calm herself down before tentatively placing a light, closed mouthed kiss on the outside on one of the creamy hills she desperately wanted to devour. Her other hand gently shaped itself around the other breast, researching its weight and texture. She placed kiss after kiss on the delightful flesh, never getting enough.

“Tara, lie down?”

Her body couldn’t handle kissing Tara’s breasts and concentrate on staying upright at the same time.

Trembling, Tara obliged her request quickly, feeling like even rudimentary muscle control would be beyond her.

They lay down together; Willow half on top of Tara. Willow gasped audibly as her over sensitized sex came to rest on Tara’s hip and thigh.

“Ok, don’t move for a few seconds and everything will be fine…”

Her attempt at self control was ruined by the sight of Tara’s naked breasts in front of her. She kissed the right one lightly, willing herself to take it slowly.
The enormous Tara database in Willow’s head rapidly gained an extensive new chapter in the book entitled “How to touch Tara”. Willow learned in that moment that she and Tara had yet another thing in common: They both loved it when she kissed her breasts. The mezzo’s breathing was heavy as she moved restlessly against Willow, burying her hands in her hair. The soprano’s mouth got closer to the appetizing pale pink of Tara’s nipple. Willow’s second attempt at self control was also ruined, this time by the gentle first kiss on the aureole and subsequent tasting of the centre of the mound. The waves that went through the mezzo’s body when Willow hungrily opened her lips to take the nipple in her mouth were matched by the soprano’s trembling from desire. As Tara’s back arched involuntarily an inch off the bed, Willow’s assault became more and more passionate. She couldn’t imagine getting enough of Tara’s breasts. She had never thought twice about her own, and was intensely surprised to discover that her most erogenous zone was located on another woman’s body. Tentatively she researched what Tara liked having done to her. Her lust soaked brain noticed proudly that whenever she moved her tongue on the stiff peak, it provoked the same level of enthusiasm from the divine, soft and supple body beneath her. In amazement she realised that she could feel every single ridge as the peak constricted between her lips and under her tongue. She opened her mouth wider to taste more of it. She was becoming so wet it was almost uncomfortable.

Tara thought through the haze of her passion, as she arched her upper body against Willow’s wonderful mouth, that she was behaving selfishly just taking this earth shattering pleasure from her lover, but she just couldn’t resist. She was so close to her own climax….

Regretfully, she withdrew from the magic of Willow’s tongue and gently pressed the soprano’s shoulders back into the mattress. Willow whimpered in protest as her lips lost their bounty but silenced quickly as Tara straddled her and kissed her ravenously. Willow pressed her self against her, raising her body slightly off the mattress. Tara started to make her way down her neck. Her hand moved slowly up Willow’s stomach, finally and infinitely gently cupping her right breast in her elegant hand. It seemed to be made to fit her hand perfectly. The nipple moved and hardened immediately against her palm. She covered every available inch of skin with warm kisses. The room being half lit by the street lights allowed her to admire the startling contrast of the snowy white skin, bright red hair and darkness of the lust hazed eyes. Willow tugged at her and made her lie down on top of her properly. Tara marvelled at the strength of this delicate looking body as Willow roughly pressed her against her own naked skin and possessively reclaimed her lips.

She wouldn’t let Willow stay in control, however. Her whole system demanded to get to finally show her how much she loved her and craved her. She put her cheek against the snowy hillock of Willow’s breast and marvelled at the contrast between skin and the almost scarlet aureole. The sight of her hard nipples and heaving chest made her centre ache with arousal. She wandered if Willow shared her sentiment that they were wearing way to many clothes?

It was her turn to take Willow into her mouth and relish the feel of the tight nipple against her tongue. She learned that Willow was impatient and whimpered in disappointment every time her lips left the nipple naked and bereft of her warm tongue.

She started to kiss her way down the firm stomach, running her hands down Willow’s sides, along her ribs and toward her slim waist. Now she learned that Willow was ticklish. Very ticklish… Cruelly, she ran the pads of her fingers back up the path, lovingly tormenting the squirming body. Willow gathered herself enough to rise herself from the bed, vengeance on her mind. Now it was Tara’s turn to squirm, as Willow kissed her and ran her fingernails down her back and pressed their naked upper bodies so close it was almost painful.

Tara’s hand sought out her original target of Willow’s obstructing jeans.
Willow apparently did share her sentiment that they were wearing too many clothes, since her hands mimicked her motions as she slipped her hands into Tara’s less resistant linen trousers. She loosened the drawstring and moved her hands further down. Looking into Tara’s eyes for approval, she tentatively slipped her hand beneath the soft fabric of her underwear and sighed raggedly as she cupped Tara’s bottom with one hand as the other was pushing the material down past her hips.

Willow’s senses felt like they went into overdrive as the beauty of the feminine body in front of her was revealed. She slowly started to ease her new lover’s underwear down her hips. Her hands trembled with the effort of holding back her impulse to just rip them off. It seemed unreal that she soon would experience the miracle of feeling this woman against her naked skin. The thoughts of what they were going to do with each other rushed through her head. Her mouth became desert dry. She groaned when Tara’s hand gently caressed the skin that was bared as she unzipped Willow’s jeans. Looking attentively at her for any sign of discomfort, she slid them over her hips. She lowered Willow back onto the bed with infinite gentleness and finished her task of undressing her.

The woman of the cream coloured skin let her blue eyes sweep over the lily white body. She had to take a deep breath and swallowed with great effort as her eyes rested on the woman she desired so much she thought she could already taste her on her tongue. She stretched out a trembling hand and ran her fingertips along her cheek bone, forcing herself not to be self conscious in front of her Fairy Queen. Tara thought that she had never seen anything as beautiful as these huge forest green eyes looking at her with such desire.

The vision in front of her was so stunning in the lamplight that the woman of the green eyes felt a pain in her chest and her lower abdomen. The assault on her senses when the other woman looked at her with heavy eyelids made her breath catch. She still couldn’t quite grasp the fact that these delights were being offered to her. The lethally seductive Dalila in front of her looked at her like that because she had been touched by her…

Tara ran her hand lovingly along Willow’s slim hip, in awe of the fact that she offered herself so freely. She hadn’t sensed a single moment of hesitation in the woman she adored and she was fairly certain that Willow had never been near a woman romantically before. She tried not to rush things, but the sweet scent of the soprano’s arousal made her heart rush madly in her chest.

Willow ran her hand along the inside of Tara’s thigh, getting closer and closer to her centre. She swallowed audibly as she let her hand wander tentatively along the soft skin, rejoicing in the sound of Tara’s breathing becoming more and more erratic with the touch. They started kissing again, telling their partner with their lips and tongues how arousing the sight of the other person’s naked body was.

Willow decided as her arousal was becoming more and more difficult to keep at bay that she needed to know what Tara felt like. She let her hands wander along the insides of the mezzo’s thighs again, only this time not stopping. She heard her own ragged breathing echo through the room as she felt Tara’s heat even before the hand was placed very gently against the core of the woman she had realized during this day that she loved. She felt to her amazement how Tara’s wetness almost covered her palm. She stopped the motion of her hand.

“Is this me?” She whispered.

“Am I doing this?” She looked at Tara, wide-eyed with wonder.

“Oh, god, yes honey”, Tara moaned.

“Every time you walk in to a room, or smile at me or hold my hand, you do this”.

She took Willows hand and pressed it gently against her wetness.
Willow hadn’t known that it was possible to get so sexually aroused that it was painful until today. The throbbing in her lower abdomen became an ache at Tara’s words.

“So soft…” she moaned hoarsely as she let Tara’s excitement lightly coat her finger tips as she moved them reverently along her sex. Tara’s felt her thighs fall apart involuntarily and as she moaned helplessly into Willow’s greedy kiss, she decided that this was enough of taking it slowly.

She brought Willow gently back against the pillows. The soprano made protesting noises at the loss of her warmth against her fingers, but she soon realized where Tara was going and stopped the protests. The mere thought of her lips on her made it almost impossible to lie still. She ran her fingers agitatedly through the blondish brown mass of Tara’s hair as the mezzo made a short detour to Willow’s dainty white breasts which were just screaming for attention.

Tara made the journey down the soprano’s body with infinite tenderness. Willow looked like a woman who could break if she wasn’t handled with care, but Tara knew better. She rested her forehead for a brief moment on her stomach, to regain her focus before continuing to cover it in kisses.
Willow whimpered like she was in pain when Tara’s warm lips retreated and then started to make their slow way from her calves up to her knees and along the silky soft skin on the insides of the white thighs.
When she got close to Willow’s centre she smiled an introverted smile to herself as she ran her hand gently over the dark patch of hair. She thought that her love might enjoy this, since Tara, despite her notoriously bad self confidence, knew deep down that she was going to be very good at it. She tried to disregard her own raging arousal and focus all her attention on making the woman she loved feel better that she ever had before.

Willow cried out in pleasure as Tara’s lips ascended on her sex. Even a closed mouthed kiss there was enough to make her tremble and loose her ability to breathe. She had never experienced anything like having these full lips on her own most sensitive place. As Tara’s lips parted and tenderly let out a hint of tongue, it took all of Willow’s willpower to not just beg to get release. She would have done anything to feel more of it. She buried her hand in the mezzo’s hair and tried not to apply any pressure. She would have to let her do this at her own pace, but it was becoming increasingly difficult to ignore the roar of her body.

Tara had a theory that a woman’s sex should be kissed no differently than her mouth. The knowledge of what had excited Willow when they were kissing was etched on her memory forever. She parted her lips a little further and let her tongue tentatively touch her centre. She thought of how Willow’s tongue had felt when it had entered her mouth for the first time. She mimicked the slow, deliberate motion from their first kiss and delighted in the sounds of pleasure coming from the soprano. Kissing the velvety folds, she felt her passion cover her lips. She hadn’t been prepared for the taste of her… It filled her senses and made her so unbearably hot she found it difficult to take it slow, or think, or breathe… The clean, bright scent of Willow mixed with something raw and primitive and unmistakably female made Tara groan in unison with the woman underneath her. She parted her lips further and kissed Willow’s sex in earnest, as the hand in her hair became an iron hard fist.

Willow was throbbing all over in previously undiscovered places deep within. She wanted to scream at the top of her lungs in pleasure, press Tara closer and beg her for something she couldn’t put a name on. But she held back and instinctively silenced her self, a little afraid of this insatiable animal that she had become, afraid of what Tara would think of her extreme reaction. She tried to make her body stay still. Willow had always liked to stay in control in sexual situations. Surrendering her self and admitting her ferocity of her need was a little frightening to her.

Tara sensed the change as Willow’s breathing was forced back to regularity and her body tensed with the effort of not moving too much against her.

“Don’t hold back, darling… Don’t hide…”, Tara whispered lifting her mouth briefly from Willow’s sex.

She ran her hands soothingly along Willow’s legs and met her lovers gaze.
Willow felt like an electric shock was going through her at the combination of the endearment and the look on Tara’s face. Her lover’s moist parted lips, flushed cheeks, heavy eyelids and tousled hair was so sexy she felt her chest constricting with the impact. Her naked look of abandonment before the task made Willow let go of all pretences of control. She watched Tara’s lips return to their bounty. Gently but deliberately she ran her agile tongue along the soft lips of Willow’s sex.

“Oh god, baby, you make me crazy”, Willow panted as the sensation of Tara’s velvety tongue caressing her wetness made her fear that she would break in two with pleasure.

Tara closed her lips on the sensitive peak just below Willow’s dark curls and the words left the soprano’s head. She heard the sound of her own moaning fill the room up, as Tara’s tongue moved expertly on her.

Her lips gently closed on Willow’s sex, Tara ran her tongue around and over the peak. Smiling inwardly, she started spelling out the letters of “I love you” with the tip of her tongue.

Or she would have, if Willow’s body hadn’t been hit by the avalanche of her orgasm on the letter y. She screamed Tara’s name as wave after wave of pleasure crashed through her body. Tara just kept kissing her. She felt Willow’s taste in her mouth and felt genuinely smug for the first time in her life. She also felt sexy, desirable, invincible. Her beloved had just come against her lips, screaming her name… She was sick from love. If she died right this moment, she would die completely happy.

She kept kissing Willow’s sex very gently to bring her back down from her amazing high, caressing her hips and legs.
As the tremors in the soprano’s body stopped, she kissed her way back up and was pulled into a passionate embrace by her satisfied lover.

Willow felt a strange mixture of satiety and feeling like her body had just woken up to an unquenchable hunger. Her mind still couldn’t grasp the fact that Tara had just made her come with an intensity that was almost painful. Right now, it felt like if she just kept touching her, she would want nothing more in this life. As she felt Tara’s light kisses fall on her body like rain, she feared she would start crying from the tenderness she felt for this woman. She wanted to touch her again and again, until exhaustion lulled them to sleep. She pressed Tara close with an almost predatory fierceness.

“Did that feel good, baby?” Tara murmured gently in Willow’s ear.

Deliberately slowly, Willow kissed her deeply, running her fingers through her hair. She tasted a little of herself on her tongue, but she didn’t mind. Her breath was still laboured and her heaving chest matching the motions of Tara’s, as she kissed her with overwhelming passion and tenderness.

Tara was acutely aware of her own centre pressed against Willow’s hip and the roaring of her own unreleased body. Willow just kept kissing her and running her hands down her back and along the elegant feminine curve of her hip. She felt how wet and warm Tara was against her thigh. She wanted to do everything with Tara, touch every inch of her body and almost didn’t know where to begin.

“I want to show you how good it felt…she whispered as she removed her thigh and hip and replaced it with her hand.

Moving it slowly up the supple, creamy thigh she felt traces of Tara’s wetness against her fingers. Once again, she placed her palm against the hot centre. She moved her hand gently, exploring the sensational feel of Tara’s warmth on her fingers. It already felt like coming back to an old friend when she closed her lips around her nipple. How she had come to adore the sensual breathy sounds that Tara made when she kissed her breasts…Tentatively, she started to move her hand. She could see Tara’s pulse beating wildly and she kissed it. Tara’s eyes fell shut and she moaned softly as Willow moved against her. The soprano had to know what she tasted like. When she removed her hand to bring it to her mouth, Tara opened her eyes and looked at Willow with an almost pained expression. The mezzo’s over heated body ached from several hours in this state of arousal. The sight and sound of Willow groaning as she put her fingers in her mouth to taste her did nothing whatsoever to calm her down.

Willow had thought that another woman’s moisture might feel strange to taste, but it wasn’t. It was intoxicating and arousing. Tara was so rosy and clean and everything about her caressed Willow’s senses. She put her hand back and let it do some gentle exploring. She would have guessed before hand that it would make Tara feel good when she touched her like this, but she had had literally no idea that it would make herself feel so much. Feeling the heat and moisture cover her hand made the need surge back up to the surface, renewing her desire like she had never been satisfied. She really wanted to enter her, but she wasn’t sure if she would like it.

Tara moaned against her warm neck and ran her hand restlessly down Willow’s moving arm. It was the soprano’s turn to gasp when she felt Tara’s hand slip between her thighs and start to mirror her motions. As they moved their fingers and palms against each other, kissing and tasting every inch of skin available, the unreleased and the reawakened bodies rushed towards a climax.

“I want to be inside you, Willow”, Tara moaned as they moved close together.

“Yes…” Willow gasped, as Tara’s hand read her body like an open book.

“Do you…?” Willow whispered hoarsely, wanting to feel all of her against her hand.

Tara nodded and slowly slid into Willow. Her finger explored every tiny spot of soft wall, reaching deep inside.

“More...?” She breathed out, nibbling on Willow’s earlobe.

“Oh, yes…” Willow’s fire was raging just as hotly as before and she couldn’t get enough of Tara’s hand.

The mezzo entered her with another finger, moving them to the spots which her instinct guided her to. Willow whimpered and buried her hand in the heavy tresses in the nape of Tara’s neck. Kissing her passionately, she followed her lover’s example and let her fingers slide inside, groaning against Tara’s lips as they were enveloped by her flaming hot arousal. She raised one of Tara’s knees to her hip and wrapped her leg around her own waist to get better access. She learned gradually how to move inside of her for Tara’s body to tremble and feel her moaning against her lips as they kissed. She let her hand slide out and caress the glistening peak repeated times before entering her again, still keeping the pressure on her sensitive spot. Suddenly, her mouth was devoured by the mezzo before she threw her head back and screamed Willow’s name as her body tensed and then erupted against the fast learning hand touching her. The waves flowing through her and cresting against Willow’s hand seemed to go on forever. Willow lovingly smoothed the hair back from her hot, sweaty brow as she calmed down. She soared high as a bird as the fix of knowing that she had provoked this reaction in the object of her desire rushed through her veins.

“I love you” she mouthed silently against Tara’s shoulder, not daring to say it out loud. A huge grin spread on her face.

“I made the woman I love scream my name…”

“Oh, honey…” Tara mumbled against her neck.

Slowly, she started to move inside of Willow again, adding the heel of her hand to her hard peak. The grin disappeared from the sopranos face as she felt her body respond with a jolt of pleasure to the touch. She gasped as the fingers moved to touch places she hadn’t realised she needed to be touched in. She sunk her fingers into the soft flesh around Tara’s hip bone and pushed her closer. Tara bent her head and took one of the scarlet nipples in her mouth and moved her slim fingers over the spot inside Willow that screamed to be touched. Her second climax didn’t take long to arrive; the waves going through her making her cling to Tara so hard she was afraid she had left bruises.

Willow put her head down on her shoulder, exhausted and sweaty. The corners of her mouth were turned up in a wide Cheshire cat-grin. Her heart pounded like a jackhammer in her chest. She drew little circles on one of Tara’s breasts with her finger tips.

Tara was running the back of her hand along her shoulders and down her back. They lay in silence like that for a few moments. Willow looked up into Tara’s sapphire eyes and felt her chest constrict at the sensual look in them. She had learned today that the look on Tara’s face could turn in seconds from sweetness to predatory sensuality. Tara exuded constant sexuality, at least in Willow’s opinion, but there was a certain look on her face that made Willow feel like she wanted to be her slave.

Tara, on the other hand, adored the naked look of wonder and honesty during their touching. She loved it when Willow showed so openly that she desired her and wanted to touch her. She had never felt as confident before in her life as she did now when she saw the smile on Willow’s face.
Their lips met and they kissed slowly and sensually.

“Willow, that was…”

Tara wasn’t quite ready to start looking for the words to describe her experience, so she didn’t finish the sentence. She just went back to the kissing.

“I hope you don’t think I’m going to stop touching you? Willow mumbled against her lips between kisses.

“I want to feel all of you, taste all of you…

She gathered her strength and started to kiss her way down Tara’s body.

When Tara realised where Willow was going, she was suddenly apprehensive, thinking that perhaps Willow thought she had to do everything even though she wasn’t ready for it.

“Honey, are you sure? You don’t have to feel that… You know, just because I did?”

“There’s no part of you that I don’t want to feel against my lips”, Willow answered firmly.

She lavished attention on the full breasts before kissing her way down the soft stomach and shapely hips. She knelt between Tara’s legs and slowly ran her hands up the insides of the calves and thighs. She continued her caresses until she felt signs of restlessness in the body under her hands. Tara’s eyes looked feverishly bright in the dark room and her cheeks were blushing pink from the blood rushing madly through her veins. Seeing Tara’s desire for her was every bit as delicious as being touched, which was something else that Willow had discovered that night. She settled herself on the bed and placed a few fleeting kisses on the insides of Tara’s thighs. She made a new entry in the Tara database that every single bit of her was beautiful, before leaning down to kiss the sensitive peak beneath the honey coloured patch of hair.

“Baby, tell me if I’m not doing this right…”

Willow favoured as always the method approach, researching until you find a formula for the best result.

“I doubt that there’s anything you wouldn’t do right…”

Tara managed to get out before ascending to the peak of sexual ecstasy. One of her hands was running through Willow’s hair and the other was clasping the sheet, making it into a miniscule ball in her fist. She moaned softly and her breathing became laboured and shallow as Willow ran her tongue agonisingly slowly along the length of her sex. She closed her lips around the peak and sucked on it as gently as she had done with her nipples. It seemed like the things that she liked having done to her also gave Tara pleasure, so she decided to trust her instincts. She swirled her tongue repeated times over the peak, reducing the tense body underneath her lips to a defenceless trembling and moaning. She still didn’t feel it was enough, she wanted everything at the same time. She wanted to feel the hot, pulsating walls surround her and gently entered Tara again. The mezzo gasped in pleasure and threw her head back with closed eyes. As Willow moved inside of her while continuing her passionate kissing of her most sensitive place, Tara shuddered and screamed Willow’s name for the second time that night. As she licked Tara’s juices from her lips and moved back up to bury her face in the crook of her new lover’s sweet smelling neck, she was completely exhausted. Her body felt sated and heavy.

The room fell silent. The new lovers kissed very slowly and lightly, over and over. Tara let her hand run a feathery course up and down Willow’s back. Willow played sleepily with Tara’s other hand, kissing each finger in turn and then entwining them with her own. Their breathing evened out as they travelled towards sleep covered by tangled sheets.

“Tara?”

“Yes?”

“Can we just have a tiny little nap and then do this all over again? And then again after that?”

Tara chuckled sleepily and snuggled closer to Willow.

“Anything you want, honey”, Tara mumbled, meaning it whole heartedly.

Two minds decided almost simultaneously that they didn’t want to put pressure on their new lover by saying “I love you”.

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Re: Butterfly

Postby watty » Thu Sep 22, 2005 10:41 am

dibs! mine, mine!

ETA: :rofl I didn't mean to scare you like that! I just happened to be on tbe board when you posted, and like the pure dork that I am, I couldn't resist with the dibs. Heehee

I did save the update for reading later. I'm sooo glad that I don't have anyone looking over my shoulders at work, cos .... um .... hot hot hot.

The lovemaking was detailed and drawn out, but instead of being bored, I wanted it to go on and on and on, it was so tender and loving. Even though I usually prefer the "feelling" type of smut over the "where does each finger go" type I think you've achieved a good balance here, each finger and lips were accounted for, but I could still feel the passion between the new lovers. This is so obviously new for them, from the sudden initial thoughts
Then the frame froze as Willow realised that she and Tara would actually have sex. She was going to go to bed with a woman.
Correction: She was going to go to bed with THE woman. Was the thought strange to her? No it wasn’t, she realised. She. Just. Wanted. Her. So. Much.

What a realization, and I'm so happy that she felt no embarrassment.

So much goodness in this update, but let me pick the two moments that made my breath catch.

[Willow]was intensely surprised to discover that her most erogenous zone was located on another woman’s body.

That is so HOT!

“Is this me?” She whispered.

“Am I doing this?” She looked at Tara, wide-eyed with wonder.

“Oh, god, yes honey”, Tara moaned.

“Every time you walk in to a room, or smile at me or hold my hand, you do this”.

The wonder in Willow's voice and the certainty in Tara's -- simply meltingly wonderful.

I hope that they do take their nap then wake up to do this again and again and again. Their relationship can only get more intense from this point, and wow! how their chemistry and feelings will translate to their performances! Can't wait.

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Re: Butterfly

Postby umgaynow » Thu Sep 22, 2005 1:14 pm

WOW! BRAVA!!!!!!!! :clap :clap :clap :clap :clap :bow :bow :bow :bow :bow :bow :bow
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Re: Butterfly

Postby spells42 » Thu Sep 22, 2005 5:01 pm

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Love your description of Monday morning at work... we have to do what we can to keep the stress levels down, don't we?

I don't think it would be possible to scowl at the screen while reading your latest update. It was very .... uhm ... let's just say my personal fire hazard warning sign went up to red. Seriously tho' it was great. The little snippets of thought in between the 'action' continued your character development: Tara's unusual confidence because she loves Willow and Willow's analytical storage of information in her 'Tara database' nicely demonstrating those facets of their personalities.

I don't think anyone's actually knocking your operatic AU, just that they're not familiar with it. Personally I like it and I think it has given your fic a very romantic setting. I have the advantage (or disadvantage depending on your point of view) of a brother and sister who're very 'into' opera and classical music. (They've got Anna Russell on tape 'doing' the Valkyrie opera - screamingly funny even to a dummy like me.) So while I'm very ignorant about composers and which opera's which, I do know that I really enjoy some of them, and I love going to see an opera (carefully chosen by my sister to suit my plebeian tastes). I love the rich costumes and scenery, the beautiful music and voices blending and contrasting, and the whole over the top - ness .....it's so sensuous and romantic. When combined with your easy descriptions of CG and surrounds (I thought you must be a Londoner, you sound so familiar with it) your fic has a very real setting.

Glad to hear you're going to update regularly, and I second your comment about Legend of GER, RI, and Neverland. I've somehow missed Huddled Masses, must give it a look. Thanks for a great story.

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Re: Butterfly

Postby vix84 » Thu Sep 22, 2005 6:16 pm

I loved the last two updates. The amount of detail in your writing is amazing. You have a great sense of humour and combine it so well with description. I nearly passed out while reading the second last update - it was agonizingly slow but perfect. And now this update is quite enjoyable, and of course character furthering too. ;)

Great job - I'm nervous to see how they'll deal with their relationship within the Opera House and around their friends.
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Re: Butterfly

Postby The Rose24 » Thu Sep 22, 2005 8:10 pm

The love scene is all I expected and then some. They get acquainted with each other's bodies really well. Their instincts really pay off, and their love for each other makes it that much more special

“Can we just have a tiny little nap and then do this all over again? And then again after that?”


How long do they believe they can keep going? :lol

Also, I think they need to have a conversation before the next round. They should talk about how much everything means to them, and how they are they are going to handle their relationship at the opera house, but as hot as they are for each other, I don't think they will be able to control themselves.. Things will probably be plain to everyone else.
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Re: Butterfly

Postby JustSkipIt » Fri Sep 23, 2005 4:32 am

Wow, this is amazingly beautiful and sensual. I think I said that before? If not, then double it this time. You do a really fantastic job of portraying both the newness of the experience for both of them and the instinct they are able to follow. I mean it's obvious that Willow has never done it (to the reader) and that Tara is not the world's most experienced lover but they care so deeply and are so "into" each other that none of that matters at all. Although your update is very detailed, it doesn't reach that sometime "too-much" level of hand, finger, thumb kind of description. Instead, it remains beautiful and sensual throughout.

I was a bit disapointed that they didn't have more communication about what it meant to them. I would have expected Willow or even Tara to make some indication that this wasn't something they do every week. You know if it had to be short of saying "I love you" then letting the other woman know how important making love is to her because it's so amazingly obvious that it is a sacred act. Interesting that both of them stifled those very words. Also interesting that Tara's insecurities lead her to want to perform so well, yet it would seem that when it comes down to it, her care and love are really what makes her such a great lover: not some learned technique.

Ok, I'm going to reread when I have time but after the first reading, I will say this is just fantastic. Well done.
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Re: Butterfly

Postby CrazyTaraWitch » Sat Sep 24, 2005 7:07 pm

:party :wtkiss :x :applause :bounce :bow :clap :flower
wow..............
"To days to come."
"All my love to long ago.


I hope, we'll have more happy ever after
I hope, we can all live more fearlessly...

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Re: Butterfly

Postby binky » Sun Sep 25, 2005 9:03 am

The basement, attic, garage, garden, tool shed, etc. will have to wait. I just discovered "Neverland" and I'm going to be busy for awhile. Before I go hermit for the next few hours, though, I have to say...

Yowza! I just gotta say it, it struck me as a bit idiosyncratic in the previous chapters (in a good way—you know, quirky), but your luxurious, lyrical style really shines in a chapter like this (i.e., sex scene). I feel compelled to be indulgent in turn and just point some specific lines out.

She was going to be a good lover to Willow, because she loved her more than anything. She just had to show her just how much with her body.


She couldn't imagine getting enough of Tara's breasts. She had never thought twice about her own, and was intensely surprised to discover that her most erogenous zone was located on another woman's body.


"Is this me?" She whispered. "Am I doing this?" She looked at Tara, wide-eyed with wonder.

"Oh, god, yes honey," Tara moaned. "Every time you walk in to a room, or smile at me or hold my hand, you do this".


I mean, oh WOW. You could probably write an animal husbandry scene and make it seem… well, operatic! Of course, your source material here is much nicer than sheep placenta. The critic in me is wondering how this will impact the plot of your story, cause, you know, sex always changes things, but the reader in me says, who the hell cares? You can go back and re-read that scene over and over and over.

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Re: Butterfly

Postby sam7777 » Sun Sep 25, 2005 2:56 pm

“Willow, that was…”

:thud :thud :thud :thud
Yes that was just HOT HOT HOT and loving all at once. It's been building up and I can't think of a more satisfying conclusion. So to speak. Wonderful update.
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Re: Butterfly

Postby Safuega » Sun Sep 25, 2005 7:20 pm

Oh wow! :bow You don't joke around when you bring on the action, do you? But seriously, this was really beautiful and erotic. I particularly liked Willow's wonder at discovering how wonderful making love to a woman can be. And loved how you phrased it as Willow discovering that her most erogenous zone was located on another woman's body. I also liked Tara's sense of deserving this love and this beautiful creature, which you captured so well with the 'sick with love' line. It was my favorite line from this update. Really lovely and sensual update, RBP.

I have only heard that one song I'm quoting by Gilberto Gil and I really like his voice. My best friend is a rabid fan of all things Brazilian, and has all his cds and for a while went around saying things like 'but Gilberto this and Gilberto that' but I've yet to find the time to burn copies of his cds. Finally, I must agree with you that music can be very erotic. Was it KD Lang who said that good music should be music that you can fuck to? I wholeheartedly agree, but I would admit that since I'm a music junkie my opinion might be a tad biased.

Okay, I'm off to bed got a long week ahead of me. Thanks for sharing such a wonderful story with us, RBP.

I look forward to more.

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Re: Butterfly

Postby Guppy » Mon Sep 26, 2005 1:31 am

:x wow, just found this fic and gotta say, it's awesome. I have no knowledge of opera but i have a sudden urge to learn a lot about it. It's an original idea. and the way you develop Willow and Tara is great. off to research opera now! I can't wait for another update!
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Re: Butterfly

Postby Artemis » Mon Sep 26, 2005 8:10 pm

Wow! What can I say? That was hot!

I really liked the early thought of Tara's, 'I am desired,' and that notion seemed to flow through the whole chapter - each of them, knowing the other wanted them, gained a confidence that buoyed them through their (very very hot) lovemaking. I liked that they still had little doubts - Willow worrying about whether she'll do it right, Tara worrying Willow wanted to go down on her out of equality - but that's only human. Beneath it, I didn't feel they ever wavered in believing that they both desired each other, totally.

Incidentally, I know I'm probably the wrong person to ask - being all I-love-uberfic and so on - but I really enjoy the opera setting, for itself as well as it being a vehicle for Willow/Tara yumminess. And truth be told, I prefer the singing-sex metaphor to magic-sex - singing is real, after all, it doesn't require suspension of disbelief. So as far as I'm concerned, keep on opera-ing to your heart's content :D
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Re: Butterfly

Postby ringwaldoeuvre » Mon Sep 26, 2005 10:26 pm

Whoa, my reactions went from "I always liked opera" to "Oh... kiss already!" to "Drool." I just read this story in one sitting, and I must say that it's fantastic! If I had not been on hiatus, I would surely have read it sooner. This story is fabulous, and I have actually liked opera since I was very young, which makes it that much better. Your character development is thorough yet concise, and your language is engaging and sensual. And the last chapter was... wonderful. The anticipation was intense and the culmination was fabulous. Very much looking forward to more. Thanks for the story!

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Re: Butterfly

Postby Reallybigpineapple » Mon Oct 03, 2005 4:44 pm

Notes: Hello Kittens! Sorry about the delay… I’ve kind of had both a professional and a social life lately and believe me, no-one’s more surprised than me… :-D
So, life stuff tends to get in the way of one’s smut… Anyway, it’s been really good life stuff, if ya know what I mean… :eyebrow
Also, a fair warning: Because of afore mentioned life stuff, I’m seriously behind with my chapters, which means that updates can be a little more scarce than usual… Not Neverland-scarce (sorry Heather, love yah :-D) but still. I’m actually supposed to be working on an article with a deadline as I’m writing this…
This chapter might be a bit on the ridiculously fluffy side… Sorry about that, but alas, no time for re-writes…

Watson: So, I’m glad you liked the smut! I’m not sure if I would know where the line between “feeling smut” and “where does the fingers go”-smut, but I’m glad I seemed to have achieved a balance regardless :-D
Speaking of which, here be big pile of new smut! Hope the balance is still there!
I can’t resist quoting Lost in Translation here: Once more! With intensity!

Umgaynow: THANK YOU!!!!!

Spells42: Yes, well I find that the best way to keep the stress levels at work to minimum is to not do any actual work in one’s workplace… :-D Have you read Bonjour Parnasse? :-D
My personal Anna Russel favourite is the Gilbert and Sullivan parody. I dislike G & S intensely and therefore rejoice whenever someone sees fit to mock it.
I’m not English, but I did live in London for a couple of years. I actually worked at the Royal Albert Hall, not the Covent Garden. I went to a lot of performances, but my account of performance practice have been seriously adapted for the purpose of this story…
Huddled Masses is one of my absolute favourites. Or maybe I should say “was”. It’s both credible and well written and as soon as I find the evil author who abandoned the story a few months ago, I will bring forth my riding crop :-D

vix84: Of course my main intention with these last chapters was to further the understanding of my characters and nothing else… :eyebrow
Thank you for your kind words!

therose24: Well, that’s the beauty of smut, isn’t it? There’s no limitation on the sexual prowess of the intrepid heroes! :-D
As for The Talk, well that did take a while to occur in the series as well, bearing in mind that they had sex for some time before addressing the whole “I love you and we’re together”-issue, so I’m not sure they should be in such a hurry.
I’m glad you liked the update and here be more smut! Hope you like!

justskipit: Schplendid, thank you!
As for them not saying “I love you”, well I guess that’s just how I see the characters. The didn’t exchange vows of any kind until NMS but still had a physical relationship (according the comments by The Evil Producer) way earlier, from the passage to the neather realm. My thought, if I had one, was to take the canon elements and see if you could adapt them to an opera setting.
Anyway, there’s no hurry really, since no-one’s going to die at the end of my story… :-D Plenty of time for declarations of love later…
Hope you like the next chapter as well!


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binky: Neverland rules. So I guess that makes me a masochist, huh?
I have never consciously strived to be operatic, especially not when it comes to sheep placentas, but I’m glad you think it works… :-D
How will it affect their relationship? They’ll have lots more sex is my guess :eyebrow
Thanks for your compliments!

Sam7777: A: Thank you! B: excellent! C: Thank you!

safuega: Well, let me put it plainly: Me like big smut. Small smut disappointing, especially after much UST. Who makes big smut? No updates? Me make big long smut my self.
Well, to be honest pretty much everything makes me want to have sex, but music especially… If you’re with a bad lover, music can be distracting though, since you find you enjoy the music more than the act itself :-D
Here be more smut. Hope you like.

guppy: Thank you! Here it is!

Artemis: My humble dirty, smut addled bunny mind weeps with joy for these compliments from your High Smutiness! I would say that in High Amazonian, except for the fact that I don’t know the word for mind and so I’d just end up saying something about genitals again and I guess I should save that for the smut :-D
Here be more smut, General! Salutes, exits.

ringwaldoevre: Thank you very much! Hope you like the next one too!


Chapter 10: Wie du warst, Wie du bist!

Tara woke up very early, before Willow. The morning sun was seeping in through the window, filling their love nest with heat and bright yellow light. They had obviously been too busy to draw the curtains the previous night. Their bodies were hot both from the sunlight and sleeping on top of each other. Tara’s right shoulder was fast asleep, sending painful pins and needles through her as she very carefully moved her fingers to get the blood flowing.
She didn’t want Willow to wake up.

She felt a sting of overwhelming emotion as she looked at the tiny shadows on her cheeks cast by the eyelashes. The gentle waft of Willow’s breath caressed her shoulder. The fairy queen had cast her covers off in the hot sun and lay next to Tara in her naked delicate glory. The mezzo tried not to make a sound breathing and trying to bring her aching arm back to life. She relished this opportunity to just stare at the woman she loved. She smiled as her eyes drank in every detail.

“I can’t believe that this really happened…”

She thought in amazement as she drew their combined scents into her nostrils. She felt the slightly sticky residues of their mutual arousal on their thighs, one of Willow’s legs resting between her own. To her, it was the most romantic feeling ever.

But she also felt fear. If Willow woke up in the sickly pallor of regret, she just wouldn’t know how to go on…

The soprano inched very slightly closer and mumbled something inaudible in her sleep. She grew increasingly restless, flexing her feet and shifting her leg between Tara’s. The mezzo couldn’t resist the temptation of moving her hands soothingly over the enticing white limbs next to her.

“Hot…

Willow murmured and unconsciously tried to shift her body away from the light that bathed the room. Gradually, her eyelids started moving more and more decisively. A contented purring in the back of her throat signalled that she was on her way to wake up. When she finally opened her eyes, she couldn’t make a sound for several seconds, dumb struck by the sapphire lakes in front of her and the memories of the previous night flooding back.

Tara held her breath with a wildly beating heart, waiting for her reaction…

Willow felt her mind and body fill up to the brim with happiness. Tara was here. With her. Being hers… She couldn’t hold back a huge smile from spreading on her face.

Tara’s breath caught in her chest at sight of the radiance of Willow’s
smile. No doubt could be seen on her features. Tara felt a sigh
of relief escape her lips.

“G-good morning…” she mumbled, feeling suddenly shy, cursing her returning stutter.

“Good morning…” Willow answered in a different tone of voice, over flowing with sensuality. She turned Tara’s head back to face her, falling helplessly into the blue eyes.

Willow’s smile, so full of satisfaction and happiness made Tara forget to be shy. It made her forget who and where she was. Nothing but the look in the soprano’s eyes and the thought of kissing her lips remained.
Willow desperately tried to convince her mouth to produce more saliva to get rid of potential morning breath.
At first their kissing was slow, tentative and sleepy, but the small amount of sleep they had was obviously enough to recharge their mutual desire. Breaths became heavy as the kissing increased in intensity and passion. They moved closer together, craving more skin. Laboured breathing filled up the room as the sun rose higher in the early morning sky. Soon, they were soaked with sweat and the heat was becoming unbearable.

“I think we need a cold shower, quite literally…” Willow broke the kiss to smooth away hair from her sweaty brow.

“Come on!” She tugged at Tara’s hand to make her rise from the bed. Tara made a
disappointed little noise when the embrace ended, but she was as hot as Willow and saw the sense in the idea. Naked, they tip-toed across the hall into the bathroom.

Tara felt almost reluctant to wash of the scent of their first joining. It didn’t last for long, however, as all thoughts but the present left her head at her first chance to really look at the naked Willow in daylight. The bathroom was brilliantly lit by a skylight. The light of the sun made the bright white of the soprano’s body contrast dramatically against her flaming hair. The mezzo ran her hands over her shoulders, feeling the hunger take over her body again. But first she wanted to touch, and feel, everything, again and again…
She felt an incredible high rush through her veins as they looked at each other. She was drunk and drugged by the look of desire in Willow’s eyes. Her confidence soared as the soprano’s hand trembled slightly when she ran it along her hip.

“Should I get you a towel or do you just want to share mine?” Willow’s breath was heavy against the crook of Tara’s neck.

“I always want to share…” Tara grinned as she was pulled into the shower by Willow.

They made a synchronized noise of pleasure as the cold water hit their over heated bodies. Willow poured shower cream into her hands and surprised Tara by kneeling down.

“Just making sure you’re not dirty, baby…” she smiled cheekily up at her new lover.

“Except for my mind, looking at you naked like this, you mean?” Tara smiled back at her.

Willow had a powerful sudden urge to say “I love you”, but swallowed and held back. This was perfect and she couldn’t risk making Tara feel crowded. She settled for reaching for her hand and kissing it. With the razor sharp focus that was typical of Willow Rosenberg, she motioned for Tara to lift her foot up. She lovingly washed it, running her fingers probingly over every inch before putting it down. Tara ran her fingers through Willow’s damp, wavy hair, feeling like she might break from tenderness. The same procedure was executed on the other foot.

“Maybe I should dry them with my hair…”

She smiled up at Tara, thinking of Parsifal. Tara ran the back of her hand across Willow’s cheek. The soprano leaned into the touch.

Parsifal…

The mezzo sang the sorceress Kundry’s seductive call with the sensual warmth that had put goose bumps on Willow’s arms the first time she heard it. She answered with a line from the chorus of flower maidens who surround the sorceress. Willow felt the customary shivers run through her body when they sang together.

“You make me all goosebumpy when you do that, baby…” She stood up and showed Tara her arms.

She had intended to wash all of Tara as thoroughly as she had her feet, but she lost her concentration when Tara cupped her breasts with her soapy hands. She made little circles, closer and closer to her nipple. Willow’s body, just the night before woken from hibernation immediately wanted more, closer, firmer. Tara ran her slippery palm over her nipples until they ached. Then she lovingly washed the white hills under the running water. She bent down to kiss a blushing nipple. When Willow saw the entranced look on Tara’s face when she touched her, she decided that subtlety could go to hell for the time being. With a move so swift it surprised the mezzo, she assaulted Tara’s body with her own, pressing her against the transparent wall and kissing her passionately, wildly, like she wanted to merge herself with her. The kissing lacked her usual elegance, but her desire was too great to be controlled. She just pressed against the wonderful body and full lips with total honesty and abandon.

Tara started to respond in kind and they sank deeper and deeper into each other, as the chilly water mercifully kept the fire to the inside and cooled their heated skin on the outside. The fierceness of her own desire surprised her. She behaved dominantly, possessively as she pressed Willow into her own body and claimed ownership to her lips. She wouldn’t have guessed that this behaviour was even in her character before meeting her. She used the sensations coursing through the body to battle the demon of low self esteem and despair within.

I’m alive. I’m awake now, and there’s nothing you can do about it. I’m wanted....

She smiled triumphantly against Willow’s lips. She stopped thinking when Willow cupped her bottom in her hands and pushed herself into her flesh. Willow felt moisture other than water when she pressed her thigh against her lover’s centre. A fleeting thought passed her mind that she never wanted anyone else to touch Tara like this. She whimpered against Tara’s lips when she felt her hand slip between her thigh and her sex and start to caress her peak. One of her hands landed on the wall behind Tara’s shoulders for support as her own hand followed suit. The mezzo kissed her neck ravenously as Willow’s hand found her sensitive place. The soprano thought that she could feel the blood flow through her lover’s body; thought she could feel her pulse pounding against her fingers when she caressed the heated silk. Tara’s breath was becoming heavier and Willow could feel her lover’s chest heaving against her own. She felt so close to coming already and gently increased the pressure on Tara’s swollen peak to make her climax before she came herself. She watched Tara’s flushed body and her own hand intently. She wanted to feel Tara come against her hand so badly she could almost taste her in her mouth. She needed the reassurance that she could satisfy her and that yesterday wasn’t just a fluke. She wanted to be able to love her like no-one ever had or ever could. The look on Tara’s face kept her entranced. Her eyes closed, the mezzo seemed to totally have blocked out all other sensory experiences but Willow’s hand on her sex. Every breath matched the soprano’s motions against her. The look of total abandonment on the other woman’s face made her breathless and throbbing with arousal. She varied her hand movements and increased the pressure ever so slightly. When Tara came against her a few minutes later, Willow rejoiced in the delicious pain of her fingers digging into her shoulder and forced the mezzo’s smouldering eyes to look into her own before putting her lips on Tara’s and swallowing her sounds. The waves crashing through Tara’s body and her helpless moaning reaffirmed Willow’s faith in her self as a lover. When the tremors subsided, Tara put her head on Willow’s shoulder and hugged her close. She rested like that for a few seconds. Willow ran her hands over her back and through the wet waves at the base of her neck.

Then Tara moved her thigh back in touch with Willow’s centre. Her fingers soon followed. Willow felt so aroused by the feeling of Tara’s climax that her own hyper sensitized centre responded to her touch as if electrified. She covered the white hand with her moisture right away and when Tara let her fingers move inside of her and out again, slowly alternating pressure and sucking on the beating pulse on Willow’s neck, she crashed over the edge with something akin to a sob.

With bodies heavy with satiety, they kissed slowly underneath the streaming water until they had cooled down again.

“I guess this wasn’t totally effective for the whole ‘getting cleaned up and cooling down’- theory”, Willow said.

“But the feel-good factor was very high…” Tara smiled a crooked smile that was so sexy that Willow had to fight the temptation to starting to touch her again.

“That is so true…” Willow smiled back and thought to herself what a different woman Tara was when they were alone. Open, joyful and unreserved.

“I make her like that…” Willow felt a roller-coaster sensation in her stomach at the thought.

“Ok, right maybe it’s time to think about getting cleaned up. I believe I didn’t quite get to finish what I started, she said as she put shower cream in the palm of her hand.”

“I’m not sure I agree”, Tara teased, feeling like she could fly if she really tried.

Willow giggled ad kissed her.

“Maybe we have to wash ourselves to get it done…”

Willow tried to be sensible, but their valiant efforts to keep to touching their own bodies failed miserably as Tara smeared soap suds on Willow’s nose. Entangled soapy limbs ensued. Willow felt childlike and carefree in a way she never had when she was young.

When they finally made it out of the shower, Willow wrapped them both in a huge fluffy red towel.

“We’re colour-coded, she explained.

“Buffy’s white and I’m red. So when you need to borrow stuff, just go for the red… Not that Buffy would mind, but I’m kinda hoping that you will prefer to share saliva with me rather than with Buffy…”

“Or your toothbrush gets jealous?”

“Maybe not, but I would definitely get jealous if you preferred to share saliva with Buffy…”

Willow started to dry Tara off with the thick terrycloth of her colour coded towel. Tara smiled a secret smile. No-one had ever wanted to take care of Tara Maclay before… That was always her role and now she relished the change.

She gets jealous…

Tara adored the idea of a jealous Willow. Did this amazing woman really want her so much that the idea of her wanting other people was distressing to her?

No chance, baby… You’re the best thing that has ever happened to me…

She decided not to respond to Willow’s comment since she was really anxious for them to establish the nature of their relationship before she started to make declarations of fidelity that might not be wanted.

Well, you can save yourself the trouble, since you have to go away. Selfish…selfish… the demon said.

She ignored it. She was getting really good at that.
“I suppose I have to leave soon so I won’t be late for rehearsals…” Tara said regretfully.

She hated for this moment and this morning to end. Suddenly, she got a surprised look on her face.

“You know, I haven’t got the foggiest idea where we are, and no idea how far it is to the opera house from here? I was kind of distracted yesterday in the taxi…”

Willow smiled sensuously at her. Tara just had to bend forward to kiss her…

“Actually, it only takes about ten minutes by taxi, so we have a little while still before we have to go.”

“I thought your rehearsal didn’t start until after lunch today?”

“I thought I might come with you? We could have breakfast together in the coffee break. Besides, I could use the extra time to rehearse the… Ok, never mind. I admit it. I really want to come and take the opportunity to hear you sing. Besides, I might get lonely…” She said in a mock trembling voice.

Ok, dangerously close to clingy, there… she cautioned herself.

She never used to be clingy. She used to like a lot of space in the beginning of a relationship. If someone would be too demanding she used to feel trapped and uncomfortable. She wanted absolutely no space today. She wanted to sit in the same chair, eat from the same spoon and sing only together.

Nice going. Needy and possessive already…

“I’d love it if you came…” Tara caressed her cheek gently.

Tara wanted to borrow something to wear, since she felt like her top from yesterday was getting a little ripe. Willow went to look in her closet and choose one of her favourites. When she came back into the bathroom she found Tara putting lotion on her arms. Willow just stood and stared at the naked Venus running her hands over herself. Then she walked over and took the bottle from her hands.

“I think that should be my job…”

She motioned for Tara to sit down. She started with the white shoulders and worked her way down. She hadn’t really meant for it to get sexual again… No, really, she hadn’t. She just found it so wonderfully sensual to run her lotion covered hands down the soft, sweet smelling body. Just as she was moving her hands over the fair skin on the inside of the thigh, she looked up at Tara’s face. Her breath hitched in her throat as she saw the parted lips, flushed cheeks and bedroom eyes that revealed how this was affecting her. Willow’s irregular breath suddenly sounded loud in the quiet room. She put lotion in her hand and slowly cupped Tara’s left breast. Moving in small circles, she reached the nipple and watched the aureole contract at the slightest touch of her lotion covered fingers. She moved the hand over to the other breast, getting the same passionate reaction. She continued down Tara’s stomach and stopped just before she reached the curls at the apex of her thigh. The temptation was too great and she placed a few light kisses on the inside of her thigh. She felt the excitement grow in her own body and it looked like Tara felt the same.

We should be getting dressed…she thought as she kissed Tara’s centre, already wet from the light touches. Tara gasped and pulled gently at her hair. Willow loved the feeling of Tara’s hands in her hair. The taste of her wasn’t exactly as she remembered it, them having just washed. As she moved her lips over the pink folds the taste of arousal started to overwhelm the tastelessness of soap. She remembered every moment of the previous time she had done this, and exactly what had made Tara squirm and loose control. As she took the hard nub between her lips and ran her hands up and down Tara’s legs and hips, she felt the aching in her own body return undiminished. She loved looking up at Tara like this, sitting exposed in front of her face. She embraced her hips and made her slide a little forward to get even better access. Then she resumed her attentions and made her lips and tongue proudly display its new mastery at this art. Tara whispered her name between moans and laboured breaths. Soon, the well modulated sounds of Tara’s climax reverberated around the white tile walls of the bathroom. Willow took the fluffy towel, wet it slightly and lovingly wiped Tara clean of her arousal. She started to wipe her sticky hands on a corner of it..

“Don’t bother, you’re about to get dirty…” Tara shot her an intense look from behind her curtain of hair.

Again, a jolt of arousal ran through her lower stomach. Tara took her hand and led her back to the bedroom and smoothed out the duvet before kissing her until she needed to lie down. Tara lay down almost completely on top of her. Willow moaned with pleasure at the feel of the silken nakedness against her and wrapped her legs around her waist to get closer. Tara adjusted the angle to press down on Willow’s centre. They moved together breathlessly. The soprano already felt like she was close to the edge when Tara kissed her way down her body.

Like her fingers, Tara’s tongue was an instrument of precision. With her gentle, sensual motions she touched all the places deep within and Willow didn’t even bother to strangle her own moans and cries as Tara let her tongue slowly slide all the way along her folds until it reached her hard peak above. She encircled it with her lips and moved her tongue across the tip of the nub over and over again, bringing Willow crashing over the edge and into the free falling of climax.

“I think maybe we need to wash by ourselves this time”, Tara mumbled as she held an exhausted Willow in her arms.

“You’re right… Do you want to go first, since I need a few minutes to recover from this earth-shattering experience?”

Tara smiled like a brilliant sunrise and disentangled herself from Willow with a chaste kiss on the forehead.

When it was Willow’s turn to wash her self, she picked the towel up from the floor and felt the scent of Tara’s arousal fill her nostril and set her heart speeding in her chest.

Oh no, you don’t! she told her body sternly. She left the bathroom to get dressed.

When Tara turned around, wearing Willow’s top, the soprano stopped dead in her tracks and smiled a “cat-who-just-ate-a-canary”-type smile.
Tara looked down on her self and again at Willow. The soprano chuckled to her self under her breath.

“Something wrong? I can wear something else…?”

“Oh, no you can’t… This is the way this shirt was meant to look…” She walked over to Tara.

“You should always wear my clothes…”

Willow ran her hands over the soft cotton of her own comfortable top, so deliciously different on Tara, hugging her body in all the right places. On Tara, the top was suddenly revealing, showing off the swelling pale skin of the upper side of her breasts. Willow knew that this sight would delight her endlessly through the day.

“Can I wear your sweater from yesterday? I want to wear something that smells like you…” Tara put her head on Willow’s shoulder and inhaled the mixed scent of skin and shampoo.

“Well, that seems only fair considering I actually took your sweater to bed with me when you were gone…” Willow admitted sheepishly.

“You did? You took my sweater to bed with you?” Tara looked at Willow with an open jaw and slightly moist eyes.

“Yep… Oh, it’s still in my dressing room, actually. I forgot to give it back to you… I put it on the pillow next to me, so it would smell like you. I wanted to feel like I was back in your bed room again... Does that seem all stalkery-creepy to you?” she asked a little anxiously.

“No…That’s the most romantic thing I’ve ever heard…” Tara snuck her arms around Willows waist and kissed her sweetly, again and again… The tenderness was so strong it was a pain in her body.

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Re: Butterfly

Postby vix84 » Mon Oct 03, 2005 5:31 pm

Oh, my god. I think this is one of the sexiest chapters I've ever read. You really are - shall we say - talented, when it comes to writing powerful and intense scenes.

Favourite beautiful line:

Entangled soapy limbs ensued. Willow felt childlike and carefree in a way she never had when she was young.

Favourite romantic line:

Tara ran her fingers through Willow’s damp, wavy hair, feeling like she might break from tenderness.

Sexiest bit:

Willow applying the lotion (and the consequences that follow).

You are amazing! A sign of a wonderful writer is a reader feeling breathless and almost dizzy with emotion and sensation. I've felt that in every line of this story.
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Re: Butterfly

Postby JustSkipIt » Mon Oct 03, 2005 7:30 pm

Hey there,
Please don't take anything I say as criticism. I was trying to say that I wished for the "I love yous." That doesn't mean that it was missing from the update. I feel like you are moving at the perfect pace with the two girls and it's just lovely to read.

This update is quite beautiful and I didn't consider it PWP at all. Quite the contrary, I felt there were some very important points to it. Mostly it focused around the way the girls got so many clues about each other's feelings. Tara woke up with the fear of Willow regretting their night and boy did she find out that fear was not valid. Willow seems to have basically no inhibitions in this new relationship. Sure, she seems a little nervous that she's being needy but beyond that, she wants Tara and wants to be wanted and doesn't mind anything about it. She seems unselfconscious around her new lover which is quite a relief.

I love all the little things the two girls do that show each other their loving. They are both so gentle and sensous that it is beautiful. This line
Willow felt childlike and carefree in a way she never had when she was young.
is one of the most beautiful I've read in fan fic. It explains everything about Willow's feelings. I'm thrilled that she confessed about sleeping with Tara's sweater.

Ok, I need to go but wonderfully done and I know you're busy now but I'll be looking for that next update.
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Re: Butterfly

Postby spells42 » Tue Oct 04, 2005 1:30 am

RBP
When I finished reading that update I just sat staring at my pc screen and went 'mmmmmmmmm'. That was sexy and sweet with just a touch of humour, and all the time we are experiencing it from Willow's and Tara's perspective.

I loved this line:
The fairy queen had cast her covers off in the hot sun and lay next to Tara in her naked delicate glory.

both a sharp visual and an insight into Tara's response to the view.

Interesting to see that Tara is aware of her usual lack of self esteem and the change in her wrought by Willow's presence and obvious desire for, and admiration of, Tara.
She wouldn’t have guessed that this behaviour was even in her character before meeting her. She used the sensations coursing through the body to battle the demon of low self esteem and despair within.

I’m alive. I’m awake now, and there’s nothing you can do about it. I’m wanted....


They're both tiptoeing around so carefully, not wanting to spoil this beginning with declarations of love, fearing they'll scare the other away. I'm worried they'll end up in a misunderstanding that'll split them up if they don't say something soon.
She decided not to respond to Willow’s comment since she was really anxious for them to establish the nature of their relationship before she started to make declarations of fidelity that might not be wanted.


As always, my day is made when I see an update to Butterfly. Thank you.

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Re: Butterfly

Postby WillowPowered » Tue Oct 04, 2005 2:41 am

:applause I LOVE this fic. So well written and anything that has some Willow/Tara action has my full support hee hee.

Can't wait for more . . . .

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Re: Butterfly

Postby watty » Tue Oct 04, 2005 4:54 am

I laughed at the number of times they had to clean themselves, they're pretty insatiable for each other right now, aren't they? Yet I hear smidgeons of hesitation amongst the passionate lovemaking.
Willow had a powerful sudden urge to say “I love you”, but swallowed and held back.

and
She decided not to respond to Willow’s comment since she was really anxious for them to establish the nature of their relationship before she started to make declarations of fidelity that might not be wanted.

Well, you can save yourself the trouble, since you have to go away. Selfish…selfish… the demon said.

Especially Tara's thoughts there. The "going away" that is resurfacing. It's worrying.

Rehearsals. How can they possibly keep their hands off each other? Everything they do together during the next few days will be sexual, they won't be able to stay decent. Can't wait for the reaction of Buffy and the others :devil Keep up the good work.
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Re: Butterfly

Postby sam7777 » Tue Oct 04, 2005 3:18 pm

“I think we need a cold shower, quite literally…” Willow broke the kiss to smooth away hair from her sweaty brow.

Wow they are not the only ones.

I can see why they held off on the "I love yous". They haven't really know each other that long and despite their great chemistry and attraction, it's still a big step to the love committment. Tara certainly has some personal demons and Willow's past love life may also contribute. Loved the update!!!
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