Hope this chapter lives up to your expectations.

Are they going to try to give her a soul, devamperise her, or something else?
I just started reading a bit of it a few days ago, and just finished the last updates now, and I really like it!
I'm not great at giving feedback and explaining why I liked the things I did, but anyhoo the writing style you have reminds me of reading or rather watching a BtVS episode (only it's better than the episodes!), and also it sort of reminds me of Kirk Baldridge's W/T fics.
but I think what I'm saying is that I like dark, and haunting, as much as the next kitten here.
The start was all "oh no!" - Willow's still human, so she's about to lose her humanity, which would be bad. But when she finally is a vampire, and she makes the best out of it (I love VampWillow btw)
I'm just rooting for her when she's off killing the Mayor's extraction team for example.
Setting things up. Willow is really cool as a vampire!
There's just something about her.
I mean, 1st his girlfriend gets herself kidnapped by none other than Spike, then they find out she's a vampire (oh the horror!
) and if that's not enough that's she and Spike have joined Angelus and Drusilla, AND finally that she's working for the mayor. Oh and then he's probably not too happy about the shocker of VampWillow liking Tara in a less than platonic way either!
I do feel bad for him, I do! BUT I like Willow & Tara together more than him and Willow, so...from his perspective - badness, but from the whole W&T perspective - yayness!
So it's a little hard to feel bad about this whole situation.
This is probably my fave scene between them:
"Well, that's one part of the problem. See, it's not a guy," she said as Faith nodded her head before she realized what Tara had said.
"Oh..." Faith said, growing slightly red which only made Tara blush harder.
"It's not y-you...it's somebody else. Not anybody in the gang either," she said, nearly running the sentence together as one word as Faith looked at her confused.
"I promise T," said Faith as she knelt down in front of the blonde so they were face to face. Tara took a deep breath and closed her eyes.
"It's W-Willow," she whispered so low that Faith barely caught what she said. Faith leaned back, eyes wide.
"But-but...she's a vampire isn't she?" asked Faith as Tara looked at her with eyes brimming with tears. One tear fell, signaling the start of a cascade as Faith leaned forward and wrapped her arms around the blonde.
"Shh...it's okay. If you want Willow then you'll get her. Vampire or not, my best friend deserves to be happy and I'll do everything in my power to help you. That and B boinked Angelus so at least we have a precedent," said Faith, getting a smile from Tara. Faith wiped a tear away and handed Tara a tissue. Tara dabbed at the tears as Giles rapped on the door, earning a glare from Faith.
And VampWillow & Tara is just droolworthy here.
I really love the VW & Tara interactions here!
"Does naughty enter your definition of detrimental?" she asked, arching an eyebrow as Tara swiveled her head to the vampire. Allen gulped and abruptly turned, heading back to Wilkins' office as Willow turned with a smile back to Tara. Willow leaned against the counter, chin propped in the palms of her hands. Tara drove her hand into her pocket, gripping the bottle of holy water but not yet pulling it out.
"So, what's up cutie?" asked Willow with a smirk. "Wanna play Kitty?" she asked, leaning closer as Tara could only gaze back at her mesmerized.
"W-What?" Tara stammered, trying to get control of the situation but practically melting at the look Willow was giving her. Willow leaned in, close enough to bite her neck but instead leaned towards her ear.
"I'm a vampire and you're not. Aware. That doesn't mean we can't have some good times though. I was thinking chains, chocolate syrup..." trailed Willow, nibbling Tara's ear. Tara let out a soft moan of pleasure as her hand loosened on the bottle of holy water. Willow pulled back with a smile when a voice rang out.
Awww Tara's all melted by Willow.
Who'da thought?
Bad mayor, for his bad timing *grumbles*
The plot is excellent, so is the descriptions of the scenes and settings, the characters no less! And the fast updates, love those too!
but anyhoo the writing style you have reminds me of reading or rather watching a BtVS episode (only it's better than the episodes!)
I'm just rooting for her when she's off killing the Mayor's extraction team for example.
I liked that Willow and Tara didn't meet right away. Letting the plot thicken, letting us get to know the characters of Willow, Spike, the other vamps, the Scoobies, and Tara and Faith first, before Willow and Tara actually met in person. cool Setting things up. Willow is really cool as a vampire! There's just something about her.
The VampWillow and Spike situation: If I had been Willow, I don't know if I would have put up with Spike the way he's treating her. He seems to think she can't handle herself. But then again, from a calculating point of view, I might have; if I thought I could use him for something later. Don't want to get him at my bad side, right?
I kinda feel bad for Oz. shh I mean, 1st his girlfriend gets herself kidnapped by none other than Spike, then they find out she's a vampire (oh the horror! shock) and if that's not enough that's she and Spike have joined Angelus and Drusilla, AND finally that she's working for the mayor. Oh and then he's probably not too happy about the shocker of VampWillow liking Tara in a less than platonic way either! I do feel bad for him, I do! BUT I like Willow & Tara together more than him and Willow, so...from his perspective - badness, but from the whole W&T perspective - yayness! So it's a little hard to feel bad about this whole situation.
I'm happy that Faith and Tara are best friends. They really do seem to care for each other.

I find myself wondering now, if VampWillow is really playing both sides. Is she really working solely for the Mayor now; what with her obvious attraction for Tara? Or is she playing the Mayor, so she can be with Tara (and as an extention - the Scoobies)? Or is she playing both sides, to see which is the stronger and then join that team? VampWillow seems too much in 'like' with Tara to want her, and/or her friends, serious harm.
Good for Tara that she can, up to a certain point at least, control VampWillow. Willow doesn't seem to mind too much having TakeChargeTara. And VampWillow & Tara is just droolworthy here. I really love the VW & Tara interactions here!
I love how Allan is terrified of VampWillow!!
Glad you love it. I wrote it as a one time thing at first and then decided it'd be cute to continue with the interaction. That and it adds another element to the relationships in the fic.The plot is excellent, so is the descriptions of the scenes and settings, the characters no less! And the fast updates, love those too!
Thanks.

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