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FIC> The Gates of Paradel (updated 30/05)

Postby Crazed Attourney » Tue May 17, 2005 2:57 pm

Title: The Gates of Paradel (Part 1 of ???)

Author: Crazed Attorney

Email: crazed_attourney@hotmail.com; or crazedattourney01@yahoo.co.uk

Rating: 15/18 for sex, violence and bad language

Pairings: W/Uber T (est.); B/T (orig. f/f); G/J (orig. m/f); A/R (orig. m/f); E/J (orig. m/m); and A/H (uber X/A).

Disclaimers: The Buffy characters all belong to Joss Whedon, Mutant Enemy and other luckier (and richer) people and organisations than myself, all used without permission but I am making no money whatsoever from this at all.

Spoilers: None – uber story

Warnings: This story does mention slavery and all the abuse, both physical and sexual, that accompanies are used – there is quite a bit of violence in this story.

Author’s Notes (1): I hope Roland’s words are not too confusing I’ve tried to make tailor them to who he would actually speak – sort of a cross between a heavy cockney and Yorkshire accent.

Author’s Notes (2): A new part of ‘Empire’s Honour’ is next (finally) - Which will be followed by a new part of ‘In the Shadows of Darkness’!!!

The Gates of Paradel

The sky wailed as lightening ripped it apart and the ground bubbled as it was brutally pounded by thick droplets of rain, whilst the heavy winds tore through homes and forests with a casual, almost malicious destruction. And for all the fury of the storm, it was all overshadowed by the first joyous scream of a child’s birth and a mother’s relieved sobs. In that moment of absolute joy; was born a moment of absolute despair – for through the blood and the tears the worst of all omens was revealed: the child was a boy.
****

The Port of New Hope – 40 years later

The redhead shifted awkwardly under the hard leather armour; despite its familiarity she was uncomfortable in the revealing armour that gave shape to her form that it did not naturally possess. Unlike the popular, sensationalist view of her race, her body resembled the result of a decade of martial training – slender and hard, rather than curved and soft.

She blushed as a young man passed her, as he was unable to prevent his eyes travelling along the shaped red leather and expanse of pale skin it removed; nervously she fiddled with the sword at her waist – her blush deepened when she saw fear rather than lust explode in his eyes. However, as he passed she couldn’t but feel the small but delighted grin spread across her face at the fear that she’d caused in the boy. She instantly felt guilty over her pleasure, and she could hear the voice of her teacher chastising her for feelings unworthy of an Amazon Warrior, but she couldn’t help but walk just a little straighter – for it was not the reaction, which she shy little Willow – just of age and training – expected.

Her elation dropped suddenly as she realised that she was also lost – twilight was drawing in on the bustling port and it made the uniform whitewash houses and dirt roads appear identical.

She could feel her cheeks explode in a hot blush.

A distinctive but familiar noise filled her ears as she attempted to backtrack – the dull clunk of metal against metal and the sharp grunt of air forced from a person’s lungs.

Her body began to move with barely a conscious thought as instinct took over – her bow was suddenly in her hand, its string taught but its arrow steady as she moved smoothly, silently through a set of alleyways – her heightened senses leading her towards the struggle.

She could control the gasp that escaped her lips when she finally saw the fight. A young, attractive blonde was surrounding by numerous heavily robed forms, blood trickled from wounds on her face through thin cuts on her green uniform – yet still she stood defiantly with a bloodied sword firmly held in her hands. Willow could see though that her time was running out – it was taking both the blondes hands to hold the sword steady, and her body was twisted and hunched to awkwardly protect her left side.

For the first time, however, since she’d first picked up a bow the redhead’s hands trembled and her mind’s focus shattered – it was the first time she’d aimed a weapon at another outside the training pen, this time someone would die.

She hesitated – fear and blood screamed in her ears.

One of the robed forms moved forward in a blur, slamming his heavy scimitar-like blade into the blonde’s sabre with a ferocious strength, and to Willow’s amazement she parried the blow. The Amazon could see what was to happen next, the move had been a feint and one his companions flicked out with his blade catching the women’s wrist and so her next parry collapsed, and she fell to her knees under the strength of the blow.

Willow’s finger twitched and the arrow slammed into the nearest robed body.

The next arrow flew before she’d realised she’d fired the first – the third never came as a blade sliced through the bow, but she was already moving before the blade descended and her own blade rose, the viciously pointed, ribbed blade flashed quickly and she twisted away to face the next opponent. As the fourth and fifth died as easily Willow began to relax and twisted towards the fallen blonde, her sword flicking out towards another robed figure.

Her eyes widened in shock as the blade sliced air rather than flesh, and her arm wrenched her shoulder as a strong hand caught her arm and pulled.

Willow whimpered in pain and fear as her sword clattered uselessly to the floor, and she quickly followed it.

The redhead huddled over the barely moving blonde – her eyes closed tight as the robed figures raised their blades.

“Mistress, hear my prayers,” she muttered suddenly seeking comfort in a half remembered prayer. “Grant me a light, to guide me in the darkness, grant me an Angel, to protect me from harm. Mistress, hear my prayers.”

She straightened her back as the ancient words gave her unexpected warmth, and she waited for the final blow to fall.

Eternity passed in a moment, but the blade did not fall.

Meekly she opened her eyes – one of the swords of one robed figure’s hovered above her, a hairsbreadth from her head, held in place by another thick blade.

“Need a ‘and luv?” A coarse, common voice called – its owner was a dark haired man dressed in dark tunic and cape that made him seem part of the darkening night. His sword arm was steady as he continued to hold the robed man’s sword, another was held at bay with a small hand-held crossbow – now only two others were left alive and they cautiously circled the newcomer.

She nodded nervously, resulting in a grin and wink from the older man.

The crossbow fired, the violence of the bolt throwing the robed figure into the third, he threw the now empty crossbow at the fourth as he flicked the second’s blade up. He caught the flailing blade and plunged it into the fourth’s stomach, whilst dragging his own blade along the second’s throat.

Even to Willow’s trained eyes his movement’s were a complete blur, and the stranger only came to rest as the third body slumped to the ground – he was still tense still alive for the fourth and final enemy.

“Oh shit – mo…” he began to shout as the final robed figure moved firing his own concealed crossbow – the stranger’s blade flew in answer. Willow screamed in pain, but her instincts had taken over and she’d caught the bolt, but unlike the arrows of the training ground this was fast, heavy and deadly and the force wrenched bone and muscle from her shoulder.

“You ‘kay luv?” He asked softly, as he gently removed the tightly gripped arrow from her hand.

“W-w-w-wha…I th…” She stammered awkwardly, before wincing in pain.

“Yeah – ya banged up ya shoulder pretty good,” he chuckled softly, carefully probing the darkening skin, “no real ‘arm though – be sore for a few days nuffin’ more.”

Willow nodded, suddenly feeling light headed as the excitement and adrenaline of the last few minutes began to wear off.

“You stay put Red,” he winked kindly, as he watched her eyes flicker and roll, “I’m gonna see to Blondie.”

“Dat woz some damn fine shootin’ Red,” he nodded approvingly as he manhandled the robed bodies with a casual callousness, “shame ‘bout the bow.”

“My bow?” Willow squeaked.

“Aye luv – sliced clean in two.” He called back; nodding to himself he roughly lifted the small blonde’s body free.

“Blimey – she’s a real beaut’,” he whistled approvingly as he took in the small body in front of him, “leful though,” he chuckled as removed the bloody, slender sabre that was still clutched in her hand.

“My bow,” Willow whimpered as her shaking hands moved towards the now useless weapon.

“‘ere I woul…bugger.” He sighed as the redhead went a ghostly white and collapsed.

****

Willow whimpered as she shifted in her sleep, the tightness in her shoulder threatened to bring her crashing from her restful slumber, her pain quickly receded as she was drawn to the warm form beside her. Unconsciously she began to snuggle up to the other body, revelling in the comfort the soft curves provided as her body began to react on instinct and seek out and tease familiar places…

“Hey Red – as much as I’m enjoying the show, I fink you’re ‘arking up the wrong tree!” The leering, amused chuckle broke into her mind like a bucket of ice-cold water.

“Wha…who…what…ahhh,” Willow shrieked as she sat bolt upright and instantly awake.

“Mornin’ Red!” The crude, common voice crowed cheerfully.

“Oh Mistress!” Willow’s cheeks turned a burning red instantly as she stared at the slumbering blonde beside her and the grinning man in front.

“Nah luv – Roland Thatcher at ya service.” The man bowed, and Willow let out a sighed as she recognised her anonymous saviour from the previous day. He was a tall well built man something that his rough, loose fitting clothes couldn’t hide, his thick dark hair was peppered with white and his skin was darkened and lined by both age and sun, but made his real age difficult to gage. Willow was also startled by his grey eyes, they contained both a youth sparkle and a hardness that she’d only seen in faces of a battle scared veteran.

“Now – da ya wanna get some breakfast, or ya gonna continue with da show?” He winked, with a teasing leer, causing Willow to blush heavily again.

“What about…er…” Willow gestured wildly back towards the room, as she left a little time later.

“Blondie?” Roland filled in bluntly, he shrugged at her nod. “She took a poundin’ – I’ll send somefin’ up later, but she’ll be fine – where d’ya fancy?”

“The Sailor’s Hope Inn,” Willow answered quickly.

“Why?” He asked cagily, not liking the speed of her answer or the dangerous grin that touched the corner of her mouth.

“No reason.” Willow answered innocently.

****

Alaatha, Capital City of the Amazon Isles – 29 years earlier

The boy twisted his lanky and slightly awkward frame with surprising grace so that the stone landed with a dull thud into the dirt around him, rather than his face. More stones began to fall on his small group of companions – most missed him but his friends scrambled away from the attack.

“Arturo!” A loud, feminine voice screamed, and with surprising calmness the boy turned to face his attackers – a wide grin spread across his features as he took in the group of older girls in front of him.

“Hello Maia – did you enjoy my little gift.” His voice was an awkward mix of adult and child.

“So you don’t deny it?” The leader of the group snarled gesturing at her armour, the rest of the girls twitched and fidgeted like a pack of angry animals – their training armour covered in dark, purple blotches.

“Er…no.” His bright blue eyes sparkled with delight.

“You little shit.” She snarled, and the gang moved forward.

“Bigger ‘en you!” Arturo crowed happily as he darted away from the awkward lunge.

“Fuck!” The older girl snarled and as a group the girls moved to chase him, the lanky, reddish blonde boy turned and clumsily banged into a nearby web of scaffolding as he leapt into a nearby alley.

The group of girls moved to follow, when suddenly the scaffold creaked and bulged dangerous and a tide of purple dye swept over them. Maia looked up angrily as the thick liquid stung at her eyes and was confronted by Arturo bowing deeply and making an obscene gesture before disappearing into yet another alleyway.

****

The Sailor’s Hope Inn, Port of New Hope

Roland was pleasantly surprised by the Inn; it was clean and orderly, not the spit and sawdust he’d been expecting – the customers were quiet rather than boisterous, the waiting staff were attractive but not vulgar and seemed efficient.

Immediately, Roland felt nervous and he let his hands hang loose around his waist.

“Can I help you?” A perky waitress asked with a fake, insincere smile.

“Yeah luv,” Roland responded in an equal tone; his eyes tracing her curvy figure, “we’re gonna grab a table, and bring us a chicken, bread and some light mead.”

He nodded appreciatively as he watched her flit to the next group of customers, “ah well now that’s a nice view.”

“What?” Willow mumbled absently, finally noticing her companion for the first time since they’d the Inn.

“Nuffin’ Red – bird watchin’ that’s all,” he backed off slightly at the angry look thrown his way. “So…er…who’s da little birdy you were dreamin’ ‘bout?”

“I d-don’t…wha…what…why?” The Amazon stammered weakly as her pale face turned a bright red, causing a mischievous grin to spread across Roland’s features.

The green eyes narrowed as she regained her composure. “And why are you helping me?”

“It’s a simple luv – money!” His grey eyes sparkled before letting out a deep, hearty laugh. “I know you is skint – all ya damn Amazons are, but well Blondie she’s got that whiff’a cash.”

“Y-you’re a mercenary?” The redhead stammered in surprise.

“Aye luv – wot ya fink I’m doin’ dis outta kindness of me heart?” Roland chuckled happily. “Now who’s da little birdy wot’s got your ‘eart Red?”

“H-how did you k-know?”

“Well ya see – if ya take Blondie, she knew wot she were doin’, more’s da pity, but she were just copin’ a feel,” Roland winked salaciously, “but you, you luv knew wot ya were lookin’ for and who ya lookin’ for – so who is she?”

The mercenary was surprised when instead of answering the Amazon stood bolt upright and lurched away from the table.

“‘Ere Red, wo…”

“Ta! Ta!” The redhead shouted, ignoring the flustered mercenary, as she raced towards a collection of tables at the back of the Inn. The tables were partly hidden under a balcony, but Roland could make out eight young women each marked with a simple white tunic and red sash – the mark of a prostitute.

“Ta,” he heard Willow hiccup as she collapsed in front of one of the women, dragging them both to the floor. Roland recognised the young woman as a Felinitas Demon, the very human-like cat demons, the Amazon began to nuzzle the Demoness’ thick blond main before bringing their lips together in a very soft kiss, causing the other girls to giggle and chatter at their actions. However, they weren’t the only people to notice and Roland felt the heavy shadow fall before he saw the huge bull of the man approach the table. The man was tall and heavily over weight, though surprisingly for such a huge man he had dark tiny eyes, but Roland felt danger roll off the man and despite his size he knew that layers of muscle were hidden under the fat.

“‘Ere mate,” he called moving to stand just in front of the huge man, but not close enough to be a threat, the girls behind him gasped behind him and he knew their faces were covered with fear.

“What do you want?” The huge man’s deep voice rumbled dangerously.

“Roland Thatcher,” he introduced himself disarmingly.

“Eric the Innkeeper – now what do you want?” The huge man moved forward, his already tiny eyes almost disappearing into his heavy features as they narrowed dangerously as he saw the Amazon and the Demoness.

“Nuffin’ just a friend ‘elping a friend,” he answered reasonably, “so how ‘bout it?”

“They are disrupting my girls,” Eric answered with a deep sigh, as even the briefest examination of this Roland identified as more trouble than Eric could afford.

“‘Coarse mate, but ya know wot young luv’s like – ‘ere for ya trouble,” Roland tossed the Innkeeper a small leather purse and wasn’t surprised by the speed that Eric used to snatch it from the air.

“They may have fifteen minutes – outside, no more and then you leave.”

“Fair ‘nuff mate – hey Red let’s take this outside ‘kay?” Roland boomed and they promptly ignored him “hey Red you and ya little birdy ain’t gotta lot time.”

“What!” Willow snapped, after ignoring him a second time the mercenary began to physically drag them out.

“You and birdy need ta move,” he hissed flicking his head towards the glowering innkeeper, “understand?”

Roland breathed a sigh relief when the redhead nodded her understanding.

****

“Now you got fifteen minutes ‘kay?” Roland snapped firmly at the pair of women. “Good, now I’m gonna keep watch.”

Willow breathed a sigh of relief when he departed with a tuneless whistle, and standing in the Inn’s doorway he was giving them as much privacy as he could. Gently, almost awkwardly she ran her hands up Ta’s bare arms and up into her thick hair and lifting her face up to look into her deep, mournful blue eyes.

Her lover had changed in the months since she’d last been together, her hair was now a uniform blonde rather than the patches of light and dark yellows and browns she remembered and twisted into the resemblance of the latest fashion – her thick back mane was now shorter and neater than normal. Her clothes were different too, they were a plain in colour but they were far more revealing than the shy demoness would have chosen, though Willow felt a deep guilt in her delight at the way they enhanced her already voluptuous figure.

However, that emotion died as quickly as it had come as she took in the other changes, all which made her heart churn with sadness and anger; Ta’s nose and cheeks had obviously been broken and reformed to give a more human appearance and she even from the briefest of touches she could tell that her claws been removed and her teeth filed, and even Ta’s tail’s had not escaped – Willow remembered it as thing of constant movement a gage of Ta’s emotions almost with a mind of its own, but now it was rigid and unmoving locked in a crude representation of sexual arousal.

Gently the Amazon brought their lips together, “I missed you – I missed you so much.”

“Y-y-you f-found me?” Ta hiccupped and Willow could feel their tears mingle together. “I d-d-didn’t be-b-believe, I c-couldn’t…”

“I promised that I would, that I’d always find you.” The Amazon interrupted gently, pulling the other girl into her even tighter.

“H-h-how?”

“I’m an Amazon remember – we have our ways.” Willow’s voice broke as she tried and failed to bring a moment of lightness to her words. “I’ve come to get you – I won’t leave without you.”

“B-but E-E-E-Eric, h-h-he’ll h-hurt y-y-you,” Ta trembled with fear as the words caused her to recall a dark memory.

“I’m fully trained now – I’ll kill him if I have to,” Willow answered firmly.

“N-n-no y-you c-c-can’t,” Ta broke away slightly, “I w-wo…you a-al-already h-have?” She asked with shock, her lover’s green eyes carried a shadow that hadn’t been there before.

“L-last night – they were hurting someone…they were going to kill someone, I couldn’t let it happen,” Willow let out with a sigh, “and I won’t let anyone…anything hurt you…I love you.”

Despite herself Ta let a small smile of happiness touch her features at those three simple words, “I l-love you t-too…p-pr-promise m-me…th-that y-you…”

“I can’t…I can’t promise you that,” Willow cut off her lover’s words with an unintentional hardness, “I know what you think…what you believe…but I can’t…I won’t…you’re my everything Ta.”

“Okay – I w-won’t,” Ta nodded reluctantly, knowing sadly that her lover would not be moved.

Thank you, Willow mouthed before pulling them together once more.

****

Willow was almost deathly silent as they walked back to Roland’s quarters while he absently munched on an apple he’d appropriated from a nearby market stall.

“So luv – how’d you and birdy meet?” Roland asked through a full mouth, both bored and impatient with the silent and stiff air his companion held since leaving the Inn and blithely ignoring the frosty look that his questioned earned. “Come on Red – I gets da feeling you ain’t no customer and she ain’t no willing ‘hore, so wot’s ya story?”

“Why do you care?” The Amazon snapped.

“‘Cause I’s is bored Red – I’ve ‘ways been a sucka for a pretty face and a bit’auv advenchure,” Roland shrugged nonchalantly, “so I wanna know wot I’s is gonna get inta trouble for.”

“A group of refugees came to our camp – they were running from the Empire of Rochelle, you know what that is right?”

“Aye luv – bucnh’a nuttas from down sarf, fought ‘em for a town’a Cats few years back – nasty little buggers, all for wan’ of a God an’ a not bein’ human.” Roland shook his head sadly. “Nice folk ‘ope dey got out in time.”

“Er…yes anyway,” Willow stammered slightly surprised at the mercenaries tone, “they came to our village about two years – Ta…Ta’pha was a trainee healer and magician…and well she would help out with the cuts and things that came with our training…I was…am a klutz so she saw a lot of me…and we kind of fell in love,” Willow blushed slightly caught up in her memories, “and then about 6 months ago her father caught us…we…we were…”

“At it luv,” Roland teased lightly, “nowt ‘rong in that Red.”

“Her father disagreed…and she was gone…he sold her…he sold into slavery…” Willow hiccupped through her falling tears.

“‘ope it got wot he woz owed luv?” Roland spat nastily, almost angrily.

Willow nodded, remembering with a dull sense of satisfaction his pitiful mewing after she had paid him a visit. “I finished my training and followed her here.”

“An’ ya wont ‘er back right?” Roland asked casually, not expecting an answer he continued: “There’s’ya problem luv – ‘less ya gotta stack of gold ‘bout ya, it’s gonna a wee bit messy.”

Roland felt a shudder of fear run down his spine when she turned to face him, her green eyes dark with anger.

“Good.”

****

Gabrielle’s Farm, Atena’s Isle, Amazon Isles – 27 years earlier

The ground shook and the screaming of men and animals pulled Arturo from his exhausted sleep, his bruised body and torn back burned as he rolled to his feet. The door of the slave’s dorm shook as if a great force were knocking on it and the walls began to shudder as the men and elves around him began to chatter and cry with fear.

“Father, father what is it?” Arturo pulled at tall figure beside him.

“I don’t know son,” the elder man nervously ruffled his son’s hair, “I don’t know son.”

Screams outside of the dorm began to turn fear into panic as they heard the desperate cries of women were accompanied by inhuman, animalistic howls and shrieks.

“Oh Mistress,” Arturo squeaked fearfully, “what about Portia?”

“Your sister we’ll be fine – your mother won’t let anything happen to her,” the brutality and hatred that had met the young teen’s short life meant he knew what was missing from his father’s bitter words: not like us.

“I h-have to help – she’ll be scared,” he stammered.

“Art…no wait!” He shouted as the young teen moved to scratch at the heavy main door. Suddenly it exploded causing the young teen fly backwards violently, and a heavy weight tore his breath away.

“M-m-mummy?” He stammered as he recognised the bloody form on top of him – the slaves around him tried to disappear back into the shadows at the sight of their broken mistress, but that sight did not drive them to suddenly tear at the dorms thick walls – that was caused by the twisted, scaled form that twitched in the doorway, and it’s bright red eyes and thick forked tongue flickered excitedly around the panicking bodies crammed into the dorm.

****

Roland’s Digs, the Port of New Hope

“Mornin’ Blondie,” Roland boomed as he entered his digs to see the young blonde awake and tearing into her breakfast, “‘ere luv I’d be careful or ya’ll do yaself a mischief.” He teased lightly.

“And who might you be?” Her voice was light but heavily cultured; there was a whiff of inbred disdain in her voice.

“Roland Thatcher luv – an ‘umble soldier at ya service.”

“A mercenary more like,” she sneered.

“Ya cut me ta the qwik luv, but ‘haps not unfairly,” he winked.

“And your friend?” Her lip twisted nastily, though her pale blue eyes lingered on the figure revealed by the hard leather armour.

“Ah well Blondie – dis ‘ere’s Willow, she’s an Amazon,” Roland introduced with a flourish, grinning at the little wave that the redhead gave in response, “now who‘re you?”

“I don’t think that’s any of your concern.”

“Now luv – ya in me bed an’ me an’ Red ‘ere did save ya life last night,” Roland responded with a mild rebuke, “I fink its only fair.”

The blonde shrugged, “I’m Lady Brianna Silidas.”

“Of Paradel luv?” Roland asked happily, throwing a quick knowing wink back to Willow, “You’s’a way from ‘ome Blondie?”

“That’s not your concern.”

Roland shrugged ruefully, “aye luv ‘tis true – just being friendly.”

“Well then you will bring me my staff, my clothes, and we’ll be on our way,” Brianna responded dismissively, returning her attention to her food, “well I’m waiting.”

Roland shifted awkwardly, “well luv – ya gotta problem dere – dere a bit dead.”

“Pardon?”

“There dead milady,” Willow answered instead, “there were already dead when I arrived – if Roland hadn’t come…well we’d both be dead.” The mercenary nodded his agreement.

“D-dead, a-all of them – w-what about Simon – was there a messenger?” Brianna’s façade began to collapse.

Willow shrugged as did Roland, “what did he look like?”

“Short, redhead, very young wearing a blue tunic and trousers,” Brianna’s face was screwed up in concentration as she tried to remember her young charge.

“Aye luv he were – his right arm were missing.” Brianna collapsed as Roland’s words sunk in.

“I’ve failed,” she mumbled.

****

The City of Paradel

“Close the gates! Close the Gates!” The scream echoed throughout the huge marble hall, and was answered by the dull screech of wood and metal against rock.

“Father – Lord Rupert!” A young dark haired shouted as he struggled against the stream of panicking soldier. “Father I…we still have men out there, the lower city is not clear.”

“So be it,” one of the two older men growled, he was a time worn version of the younger soldier. The other soldier, who unlike the other in their clothe uniform was dressed in a bright plated suit, looked more kindly at the younger one.

“Alex – they’re already dead, there’s nothing more that we can do.” His light eyes were filled with sadness as he struggled to control his horse against the throng. “The Lower City and Keep are done – if we don’t close the gates it’s all over.”

“But we’ll be cut off.”

“Damn it Alex – enough,” his father growled angrily, “we must move!”

“Yes father,” Alex acquiesced weakly, as behind him the impossibly sized gates slide shut with a harsh breath and in his mind he could here the screams of those trapped behind them.

“Don’t worry Alex – Bri may’ve got through.” Rupert comforted gently.

“I hope so Rupert – I truly hope so,” they began to move with the retreating men, finally exciting the great marble gatehouse. The gatehouses surrounded the central city of Paradel – each made from an individual mountain, each linked by an impossibly thick wall, and each containing a massive gate all which were bigger than the central palace – the tall imposing tower of black marble that was the heart of Paradel and border one final great gate, the biggest of them all. The City of Paradel was one of the largest City’s in Avalon, a sprawling metropolis of towers, roads and houses, but it was all made insignificant by the ancient walls and towers that surrounded, which in turn were dwarfed its black heart and imposing gate

“We’ve no where to go if she hasn’t Rupert – no where at all.” Alex sighed as moved in to the City.
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Re: FIC> The Gates of Paradel

Postby ringwaldoeuvre » Fri May 20, 2005 1:46 am

This is fascinating. I admit I envy those that can create a whole universe for their creative ideas, and you have certainly have me feeling a little green. You describe action with great clarity, and I found myself very interested in the little details. You have caught my interest. Looking forward to more.

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Re: FIC> The Gates of Paradel

Postby Artemis » Wed Jun 01, 2005 11:23 am

Great opening chapter, your writing has an epic feel right from the start. You've got a gift for using exactly enough of a stereotype (Amazons, for example, or the traditional fantasy-story tavern, or the veteran working-class mercenary) to give it familiarity, and then making your versions of those things individual and memorable without labouring the story with mountains of exposition. Instant grand fantasy, wonderful.

Poor Tara/Tay - what she's been through physically really underscores the evil of her slavery. For some reason it was her tail that really hooked into my imagination and refused to let go - I got the image of a lively, vital part of her being stripped away and left lifeless, and it was really tragic. Of course the important thing is that Willow's found her, and together they can (hopefully) free her without too much trouble, but is it possible she might one day be able to be healed (or heal herself, seeing as that was mentioned as being her previous occupation) back to her original state?

As I said, a great beginning - Roland's a real character, I'm glad we saw a lot of him. I'll be looking forward to more.
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Re: FIC> The Gates of Paradel

Postby Crazed Attourney » Tue Jul 12, 2005 2:06 pm

Hi Chris/Mary,

Sorry for taking so long to come back - my internet connection has just started working again (yeah).

I just wanted to say thank-you for your kind words - and I'm glad you're enjoying it.

I'm not sure when they'll be a new part to GofP, the story has very quickly taken a life of its own and I can see it becoming a very long and involved - and I'm not a very fast writer!

Chris - I'm glad you are enjoying Roland, he's an annoyingly difficult character to write (especially in the way he talks) but he's quickly becoming a personal fav (does that sound strange?). Though without giving too much away - I haven't planned for Tay/Tara to fully recover physically from her slavery as I thought that'd be too easy (especially her tail) - but with the help of a certain redheaded Amazon she'll recover to an extent (how much and how...well I'm afraid you'll have to wait and see :)).

With my other stories - I promised a new part to Empire's Honour, but due to events I've put it on hold for now. Though not on Pens - I'll be posting a new part to 'In the Shadows of Darkness' very soon and hopefully another part to GoP in the not too distant future (not sure of the order).

I hope this makes sense - and a very big thank you for your fb!!!

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Re: FIC> The Gates of Paradel (updated 30/05)

Postby Crazed Attourney » Tue May 30, 2006 9:33 am

TITLE: The Gates of Paradel (Part 2 of ???).

AUTHOR: Crazed Attorney.

EMAIL: crazed_attourney@hotmail.com; or crazedattourney01@yahoo.co.uk.

FEEDBACK: Pretty, Pretty Please!!!

RATING: 15/18 for sex, violence and bad language.

PAIRINGS: W/uber T (est.); B/K (orig. f/f); G/J (orig. m/f); A/R (orig. m/f); E/J (orig. m/m); and A/H, along with other m/f, m/m, f/f couples.

DISCLAIMERS: The Buffy characters all belong to Joss Whedon, Mutant Enemy and other luckier (and richer) people and organisations than myself, all used without permission but I am making no money whatsoever from this at all.

SPOILERS: None – very uber story.

WARNINGS: This story, and this chapter, mentions slavery as well the physical and sexual abuse that often accompanies it – there is nothing truly explicit, but it is not hidden.

AUTHOR’S NOTES (1): I hope Roland’s words are not too confusing I’ve tried to make tailor them to how he would actually speak – sort of a cross between a heavy cockney and Yorkshire accent.

AUTHOR’S NOTES (2): Apologies this has been a very, very long time coming – I will pick up speed I promise. My muse went missing (that rascally muse) but for the moment appears to have returned!!

The Gates of Paradel

CHAPTER TWO

Gabrielle’s Farm, Atena’s Isle, Amazon Isles – 27 years earlier

Arturo watched with horror and fear filled fascination as the strange reptilian monster leapt overhead and into the nearest group of slaves – he couldn’t see what was happening but he could hear the screams and a dull, wet wrenching. His struggles against the dead weight of his mother’s body grew increasing desperate as the he felt a thick warm liquid mix into his hair.

The body was suddenly lifted from him, and his world suddenly became two burning red eyes surrounded by black scales.

Something wet flicked against his skin, and he could smell dank, rotting flesh on the monsters hot, damp breath.

Desperately his hands scrabbled amongst the dirt looking for something, anything that would make those eyes disappear.

Suddenly, they scrapped against something sharp and rough and with a bellow, somewhere between fear and rage, he slammed the splinter into one of the monster’s eyes.

It reared up in pain; a horrific high-pitched scream filled the barn, as the monster desperately scratched at the searing pain in its head. Its thick white blood flowed freely along it’s black scales – the scream faltered as it stumbled backwards it’s large, awkward claws driving the thin splinter deeper into its own brain. And then, finally it stopped and let out a fearful, pitiful whimper before bursting into flames.

Arturo gagged as ash filled his mouth and burned at his eyes, but he was free. Almost instinctively he wrenched his mother’s bow from her hands and left the dorm. He had to force himself not to look around or to give into the tears that stung his cheeks – he couldn’t hear anything in the dorm apart from his own shallow breaths.

****

Roland’s Digs, the Port of New Hope

“Red, ‘as she quieted down?” The mercenary asked quietly as Willow quietly closed the door behind her.

The redhead nodded, “eventually – I don’t think she had anything left.”

“Pity – you fi…” Roland’s words tailed off as a deep frown formed on his brow, do you here that Red? He mouthed; as he began to move silently from his perch on the banister. Willow cocked her head to one side, letting her senses take over – she nodded, pointing to a nearby door from which she could hear a set of small scratches.

Roland directed her silently, as they moved to brace the doorway – the door creaked opened slowly and as it began to close again Willow made a series of short gestures – the mercenary nodded his approval and held up three fingers.

Three…two…one…

The redhead slammed into the door – it barely moved as she blinked in surprise, her brow creasing in an unspoken question as the door exploded.

****

Arturo stepped nervously out of the barn – his awkward steps a pale imitation of a warrior’s movements as the huge bow trembled in his hands and the heavy quiver of arrows bounced painfully against his legs. And then he saw it – a huge Treelaird, the huge tree-like demon towered above the farmhouse, its huge arms covered in braches and moss pounded the main house as the strange reptilian monsters used its body to swarm into the now dark windows.

Occasionally arrows caught the invaders and struck the huge wooden monster, but they were too few to make the assault even pause for a moment.

He struggled to raise the heavy longbow – its thick patterned bow barely fit into his small teenage hands and his thin, underfed muscles quickly began to tremble with pain as he struggled to balance the arrow and pull the string back.

The string tore free from his grip sending the arrow clattering uselessly into the ground – ignoring the searing pain and the blood that began to cover his raw fingers he cocked another arrow.


****

Willow began to leap and twist away from the door just as it began to disintegrate – she could feel the tiny splinters batter her armour and bare skin as she moved, using the force of the explosion to aide her own momentum and safety. She landed awkwardly, her bruised shoulder was barely able to support her and so her graceful roll turned into scrambled stumble onto her knees.

“You’s ‘kay Re…fuck!” Roland squeaked as a scimitar slammed into the plaster just above his head – reaching up the mercenary tore the robed figure’s hand from the blade as it struggled to free it from the wall. Pulling downwards the figure’s hidden face collided with Roland’s elbow with a sickening crunch.

The figure twitched once as it fell to the floor, and Willow winced as Roland calmly pushed a small dagger into the base of its skull before freeing the scimitar for himself. “Red – chek’n Blondie, I’ll do ou’‘ere.” And with barely a nod she moved back into Roland’s rooms, and was immediately confronted by the sight of the blonde aristocrat struggling desperately with two more robed figures.

She said a silent prayer of thanks to the Goddess that they continued to ignore her until her shoulder and fists struck.

****

The muscles in Arturo’s arms screamed in agony, it was a pain worse than any flogging or beating he’d ever received, it was as his blood had turned to fire – but still he continued to pull back on already taught string.

The bow and its deadly cargo trembled violently in his hands; he could barely aim as his eyes were blinded by tears, but at that moment only firing the arrow mattered.

He continued to draw the bow – the wood creaked and the arrowhead pricked his thumb, and he let it fly.

The arrow flew – it was shaky and awkward, but it flew. Somehow it missed the huge tree demon, flying through the gap between demon and the farmhouse – but it struck one of the reptilian demons as it leapt, and it became a burning touch as fell.

Whips cracked as wood and demon screamed – the Treelaird turned towards him.


****

“Ya’s two look like shit,” Roland chuckled around the thin dark cigarette at his lips, a look of a quiet enjoyment spread across his features as he took a long, deep breath. “Wan’ one? Matey’s gotta few ter spare.” And with a happy wink, he offered up a full pack to the two women, tapping a nearby body indicating his benefactor.

He chuckled when the Amazon blanched, but the aristocrat helped herself, it deepened when Brianna choked on the harsh, heavy smoke.

“That is vile.” She sneered as she took a second, but less heavy smoke.

“Nah luv – an ack-wired taste,” he chuckled happily, but his manner changed abruptly as he reached down and exposed one of the attackers faces. “Know ‘im?”

Both Willow and Brianna shook their heads, and Roland shrugged his heads ruefully before he roughly ripped the robe away from the body’s shoulders. “Does yer know wot dey is?” On the shoulder was the tattoo of a pyramid with an eye at its centre surrounded by the four phases of the moon.

Again Willow shook her head, but Brianna frowned as she nodded, “it looks like the symbol of the Luna Disciples.”

“Aye or de Bruvahud of der Serp’nt – funny dat.” Roland spat nastily, “I fink it’s time ta get yer Birdy back Red an’ get outta town ‘kay?” Willow nodded silently, she might not have recognised the symbol, but she knew that it belonged to the Cult that now controlled the Deltas around New Hope and the Criminal Guild that had followed in its wake. “Ya’s up for’s’it Blondie?”

“I believe so.” Brianna answered unconvincingly.

“Purfict – grab sum weapons an’ we’s off,” he crowed with an energetic clap of his hands, “Red, if it ‘elps I fink I gotta bow’n’staff round ‘ere.”

****

The Sailor’s Hope Inn

“Aaah…thanks luv,” Roland winked at the waitress as he eased himself down onto the nearby bench. “By der Gods – it’s been too long.”

With the coming of the day’s end, the Inn had been transformed – the quiet almost bland three-storey building had become a scene of abandoned revelry and from the Inn’s upper bar the three of them had a clear view of the chaos. The Inn unable to contain the huge throng of people that packed its walls had spilled over into its courtyard all served by a large bar that had replaced almost an entire wall and entertained by the jaunty tunes of a band that occupied one of the Inn’s many balconies. And the sights, sounds and smell of the heaving bar mixed to create a lively, jumbled din that assaulted all a persons senses.

“Tis grand ain’t’it?” Roland chuckled at the bemused expressions his companions had held since they’d entered the bar.

“This isn’t going to work,” Brianna said firmly at which Willow nervously nodded her agreement.

“Aye ‘t’will luv,” Roland disagreed firmly.

“Have you seen this place?” Brianna asked shrilly.

“I am sittin’ ‘ere luv,” the mercenary drawled sarcastically, “wot’s yer problem?”

“Have you seen this place?” Brianna asked again in the same tone.

“Aye luv – tis perfict,” Roland winked disarmingly, “now arfta gettin’ a good seat I’m gonna ‘ave sum suppa and a wee bevie.” He stated waving to a nearby waitress, grateful that the Inn’s second floor was a little more civilised and quieter than its riotous main floor. “Anyhows don’t worry sa’much – it’ll be fine.”

****

The second level of the Inn was sign significantly quieter than the chaotic bar area, and a series of small fires and candles across the floor gave it a civilised air. And by the time Roland contentedly pushed away his plate, the deepening darkness and the chill wind from the nearby coast had driven most of the customers to their homes and the roar from the bar seemed barely a distant rumble.

“Ain’t long now Red,” the mercenary warned softly as he finished his drink, nodding at the staff that were placing bright candle with a glass globe with a dull white flame on each of the bar’s tables.

“W-what happens now?” The Amazon stammered awkwardly, nervously rubbing at the calluses on her hands.

“Well luv, yer turn ya candle blue,” Roland twisted a small knob on the newly delivered ball, and the dull flame turned a surprisingly bright blue within its glass home, “an’ dey come ‘long an’ take ya order, and yer money.”

“You seem very knowledgeable about this Roland?” Brianna teased lightly, like the mercenary she’d managed to eat the Inn’s simple but filling food as opposed to the nervy Amazon who’d merely shunted her food from one side of her plate to the other and back again.

Roland shrugged, “I’m’a solja luv an’ where solja’s go ‘hores ter be sure ter folla – way fings work.”

“Just like that?” Brianna sneered nodding towards a young man being led away by a woman in grey with the distinctive red sash.

“Aye luv – just like dat,” Roland answered softly, “an’ dere be nought ‘rong wiv it luv. In rest of Westliegh all Red’s Birdy’d do is ‘and in ‘er sash an’ take ‘er stubs from der Guild and dat’d be dat.” Roland shook his head ruefully as he spoke. “Dat’s wot der Guild’s fer – like me own Mercies Guild, but dis ain’t no Guild bar – der no levy, no penshun, no docta…hell der ‘ven be no tax…no dat’s why its gonna end in a barnie.” Silence quickly followed in the wake of the mercenary’s softly spoken words.

“Can I be’a ‘elp ‘ere?” A woman in a dark dress with a bright blue sash asked brightly, interrupting the dark silence that hovered over the table.

“Not me luv…‘er,” Roland grinned softly nodding towards Willow.

“Oh I’m ‘fraid we ain’t got no chaps ‘ere luv,” the woman answered automatically, turning slightly to move away from the table.

“Dat’s good luv, she ain’t afta one,” Roland winked evilly.

“Well den – do yer’s ‘ave one in min…” The Hostess begun without missing a single beat.

“Yes…T-tay…Ta’pha – the felinitas girl,” Willow interrupted in a nervous, breathless rush.

“‘Kay,” the woman said brightly, hardly missing a beat at the redhead’s interruptions.

“See told’ja it’d be ‘kay,” Roland encouraged happily, but his eyes never left the Hostess as she was interrupted by a bouncer.

****

Roland began to hum happily along with the Inn’s band, his head rocked slightly out of step with the music, and he could feel the hazy warmth growing in his mind from the golden, honey-like ale.

“Can’a get’cha ‘nother ‘round?” The Hostess asked softly as she returned to the table.

“Wot ‘bout Red’s’order?” Roland asked quickly, his voice held the slightest hint of a slur.

“I’m’a ‘fraid Tay’s wiv’a client at der moment – shouldn’t be long thou,” the woman answered breezily, “so would’ja like ‘nother drink?”

“Aye luv – dat would’b grand,” Roland answered quickly, lurching forward to throw his arms around Willow’s shoulders. “Won’t it Red?”

The redhead nodded through clenched teeth, fighting to keep the pain from her face under the mercenary’s vice-like grip and with Brianna’s heels buried in her feet. Causing the Hostess’ smile froze slightly in confusion at their actions.

“Keep still,” Brianna hissed in Willow’s ear.

“Aye luv – just a wee bit longa,” Roland reassured from her other side.

“B-b-but…”

“Erm I’m ‘fraid der’s a problem,” the Hostess’ return interrupting Willow.

“Eh?” Roland turned quickly, annoyance crinkling his brow.

“I’m sorry, but Tay’s nay workin’ t’nite – can I get yer…” The Hostess squeaked as Roland suddenly pressed a small but wickedly curved blade into her neck.

“Where she be den luv?” The slur had disappeared from Roland’s voice, as beside him Brianna and Willow were already moving, pulling out their weapons.

“Wha…wha…” And as the Hostess stuttered with fear, one of the bar’s hulking bouncer’s began to move towards them. None of the three women saw Roland move, but they saw the bouncer collapse Roland’s knife buried in his chest.

“Where she be?” Roland snarled his eyes bright with anger and focused on the Hostess, ignoring the mayhem that was enveloping the bar.

“F-Fird f-fl-floor, r-r-room t-t-t-two…”

“Ta luv,” Roland growled; driving his fist into her stomach and jaw, leaving the Hostess to slump unconscious to the floor. “Red, get ‘er,” he barked.

****

Willow felt herself growl in frustration as she pushed through the growing crowd. Prostitutes and their clients reacting to the screams from the upper bar and were adding to the panic-filled bedlam as the scrambled to escape the fighting.

Her growl became a shout when Tay’s door barely trembled against its hinges as her fist battered against it. “Fuck it,” she spat under her breath and stepping back, she put all her weight into a heavy kick to the door.

Wood and metal groaned in protest, but the door stubbornly clung to its hinges.

Willow brought her leg up a second time, and bracing herself against the wall she threw herself forward. She let out a yelp of triumph as, this time, the door broke.

“Tay…Ta…” Her lover was tied naked to the room’s bed; her face and body were covered in a patchwork of fresh bruises and cuts. Two men hovered over her, one kneeling on the end of the bed while the second stood nearby wiping himself with a tattered shirt, both were naked.

All four of them looked on in a stunned silence. Willow moved first, the world turning silent as her bow moved without thought; her mouth filled with feathers as she tore a fletch to shreds and pulling back the bowstring she let her arrows fly.

At almost point blank range the force of two arrows striking snatched the man from the bed and into the wall, from where he hung like a broken dull.

The second man threw the shirt at Willow as he attempted to dive behind the bed, only to see it jerk back at him, caught in an arrow’s flight.

The arrow shattered his shoulder as it struck, slamming him against the wall. Tears of pain and fear stung his cheeks as he turned towards the sharp groan of wood and tight ‘string; for the briefest of moments his world was filled with the imperfections of an arrowhead.

Willow shrugged the bow over her shoulders, as she took deep gulping breaths trying to ease the burning anger that engulfed her.

Finally, it was a tiny whimper from Tay that brought her crashing back to earth.

“Oh Goddess,” the redhead muttered over and over again; desperately using an arrowhead to tear through the bindings at Tay’s wrists and feet. Willow quickly wrapped her lover’s battered form in one her attacker’s discarded cloaks. The Amazon could find no words as she delicately pulled the Demoness against her, and led her quietly from the room.

****

The prostitutes’ rooms lived on a large balcony surrounding the upper bar, and from this vantage point Willow let out a grasp of surprise at what she saw: Roland was crumpled against the bar, unconscious or worse and Brianna was desperately clutching a broken sword in her hands as she desperately tried to keep something between herself and Eric, the landlord.

Tay let out a terrified whimper as she saw the hulking form of Eric, in his hands was a huge multi-headed whip that he continually and violently flicked at Brianna. Somehow the aristocrat seemed to avoid the attacks, but each drove her backwards, and it was only a matter of time before she ran out room.

Gently Willow lowered Tay to the ground, “wait here love,” she whispered softly, gently running her fingers across a tiny thread of unbroken skin on the other girl’s cheek.

“N-no…N-no…” Tay stammered in panic, her voice hoarse with pain “d-don’t…d-d-d-d-don’t…”

“I have to,” Willow responded gently as she stood.

“P-p-p-p-please,” Tay all but screamed; her voice almost hysterical.

“I have to,” Willow repeated firmly, almost coldly. But instead of moving away, she drew her bow once again. Through the eyes of an arrow the world is a blur, everything moves as if caught in water and every sound is a dull murmur of nothingness. It is just the arrow and its destination - and then as it flies the world returns to normal, a chaotic rush of sight and sounds, before disappearing as the next arrow is drawn.

Willow barely heard Eric roar of pain and anger as an arrow buried itself into his shoulder.

****

Arturo lost himself in the bow and desperately tried to ignore the pain in his arms and the fear in his belly as the Treelaird turned towards him. He focused on drawing back the bowstring letting the arrow’s fletch tickle his skin before letting fly.

He barely felt excitement as this time the wobbly flying arrow struck the monster, but as he drew back the bowstring again it felt easier, whilst the pain and fear seemed suddenly far away.

The arrow flew steady this time, striking the Treelaird’s knotted face.


****

The bow began to grow heavy in Willow’s hands, and her muscles burned as fear clawed its way into her mind. Her arrows covered Eric’s chest and back but still he kept on coming, he was moving slowly, unsteadily but like a monster from a childhood nightmare he still kept on coming.

Tay was crying openly beside her, her head covered by the cloak as she tried to hide from the monster before them.

Eric had reached the foot of the stairs, and she was running out of arrows.

****

“…to protect me from harm, mistress hear my prayer…” Arturo mumbled barely remembered words. He was hardly able to keep himself upright, as fear and pain had engulfed him – his arrows barely left the bow falling limply to the ground. The Treelaird was almost upon him, he could fell the ground tremble under its heavy footsteps and he could hear the wild, manic cries of the demons that drove it forward…

…And then he was warm and unafraid, standing on an unknown battlefield surrounded by noise, flame and chaos, but yet he was still and calm. An arrow burned in his bow, but he stilled his hand as panic would rob him of the perfect moment, his target seemed both distance and near, the angry shouts of his enemies were nothing in his mind. And then the moment came with a flicker of movement and a sigh…

…The arrow leapt from his bow, bursting into flame as it struck the Treelaird. For a briefest moment the flames disappeared before erupting upwards and outwards, engulfing the monster and its handlers in seconds.

The Demons screamed in agony as the flames ripped them apart.

“A-A-Arturo…Arturo?” He could barely make out a woman’s voice calling his name as if from a great distance, the night was suddenly turning red laced with a comforting darkness. He couldn’t feel the arms that caught him.


****

Willow she collapsed to the ground, barely having the strength to place herself between Tay and danger; Eric had reached them and her last arrow had buried itself deep but uselessly into his chest. Willow took a deep breath and stared hatefully into his tiny, black eyes; determined to now show the fear within her.

The leather of his whip rustled as pulled his thick arm back, and Willow’s eyes widened with surprise. Eric’s eyes clouded with confusion as he stared at his numb, empty hands. He rocked and turned slightly as if unsure where he was. Eric let out a small half whimper, half angry growl as he turned back towards the two women, but his legs didn’t move with him and he stumbled.

The barkeeper fell against the floor’s railing; the wood groaned under his weight.

It collapsed.

Blindly, desperately he groped at nothing but it only hastened his fall. The Inn trembled as his great weight slammed into the dull wooden floor.

****

Free Winds House, the Port of New Hope

Unlike the loud, bustling Fighters Guild or the neighbouring Naval Yard, the Mistresses Guild was a picture of quiet, faded glory. Its comforting luxury was slightly frayed at its edges and the lilting incense that filled its rooms carried the faintest hint of burnt smoke.

“Can we not talk ‘bout last nite – ever!” Roland grumbled loudly as he rubbed the knot on the side of his head.

“Why?” Brianna teased lightly, enjoying the mercenary’s embarrassment. The aristocrat’s laughter exploded around the waiting room at the pained, withering look that answered her. The disapproving looks that a nearby nurse and the well-dressed woman beside him threw at them, caused a hiccup of laughter to escape Roland’s lips.

Roland’s face reddened and twisted as he fought a losing battle against the laughter that started to shake his body. “I woz laid low by a ‘king chair…dat I fell over…dat I fell over!” He cried out as laughter burst free.

“Is there something you wish to share?” A cool, precise voice cut threw the pair’s laughing fit.

“A…A…Aye mate…” Roland’s laughter died on his lips as he looked up at the tall, dignified man in front of him. The newcomer was dressed in the simple, but expensive, blue suit of a Guild worker with its waist tied with a deep red and gold edged sash. His hard, but handsome face was framed by dark hair speckled with grey and his cold blue eyes regarded Roland and Brianna with barely hidden contempt. “Tis nay ‘portent, sir,” Roland continued with a slight bow, as he dragged Brianna to her feet. “Sir, may I ‘sent Lady Sildas and me humble self, Roland Fatcha’.”

“A pleasure Mr Thatcher,” the man nodded with a slight smile, pleased at the mercenaries old fashioned greeting, “I am Lars Merchant, Master of this house, and what service can we offer you?”

“The ‘osp’tality you’ve shown tis ‘nough sir.”

“And what might that be?” Roland smiled at his question; he had not missed the rolled paper in his hand nor the young clerk that waited quietly behind Lars.

“The services of yer docta, and perhaps a wee bit auv food ‘ter a long night,” Roland answered slyly.

“Simple things Mr Thatcher, but what of your own Guild?” Lars asked with a smile.

“Tis a matter auv’a wee unpaid levy,” Roland raised his hand to cut of any protest, “I gots de money, I just do nay wanna part wiv it.”

“Surely it can’t be that much?” In response the mercenary simply passed Lars the two squares of aged, darkened wood that hung about his neck. Lars’ eyes widened as he examined them, the disapproval in his eyes quickly changed to a cautious respect. “How many years?”

“Good fif’teen years I fink.”

“That would be a fair amount of money, which does not however explain why my doctors over your own.” Lars questioned coolly.

Roland shrugged and let the game slip with a sorry sigh, “dey maybe good wiv cuts ‘n’ bruises, but not wiv other fings.”

“Yes, of course,” the cold blue eyes dimmed with sadness for a moment, “there will be no charges for the Demoness’ treatment. Under normal circumstances I would be grateful for the ending of a thing such as the Sailor’s Hope and say nothing further. Unfortunately, my husband is the Captain of the Rangers and he was here during your arrival and wishes to speak to you…James take these two to Abraham, he is waiting in my office.” The silent and still clerk behind Lars sprung into life at his name, stepping forward with a polite, but firm wave of his arm.

****

“Come in, come in sit…no need ta stand on ceremony…” Unlike the worn decadence of the rest of the building the Masters’ office was a bright, airy room and yet stark and impersonal: a room for simple business. And the man greeting them was the complete opposite to the distant Master – casually dressed, fit and handsome man with thick greying hair and a warm, easy smile. “Does yer wanna drink – tis a bit early, but af’ter last nite…”

“Everybody seems well informed about last night,” Brianna grumbled.

“Well luv, ‘twas not ‘zacly a quiet fing.” The Ranger laughed loudly, “Yer had’a barnie in de most pop’lar bar in town; killed de barman; and run off wiv one auv der ‘hores.”

“Put like dat…’haps me plan coulda been a wee bit sutla’.” Roland chuckled in agreement.

“So what do you want?” Brianna growled.

“Angsty ain’t she?” The man teased lightly, “and wot fine manner’s dese norven nobs ‘ave.”

Beside her Roland joined in with the man’s laughter, knowing full well that he was as informed as his husband, “Roland Fatcha’ and aye I’ll’ve dat drink.”

“Brianna Silas,” she growled.

“Dat’s betta, A’brim Merch’nt,” the Ranger’s teasing tone quickly died, “and I’m ‘fraid yer’ll all ‘ave ter need leave town an’ quickly.”

“But…!” Brianna screamed.

The Ranger held his hands up to ward off the coming storm. “Now I got nufin’ ‘gainst wot yer did. Hell if I ‘rested yer, me marriage an’ me job wud vanish qwika dan a preacher’s pants ina ‘horehouse.” Abraham chuckled ruefully, “but de Inn woz one der Bruva’s, an dey’ll be afta yer – real bad.”

“But…but I can’t leave…n-not yet…” Brianna whimpered.

“Its fer yer own safety luv,” the Head Ranger sighed, “an’ me guard can ney protect yer.”

“An’ wot else mate?” Roland asked softly.

The Ranger smiled ruefully, “we found yer warrant at de Hope…someone ‘ad paid de Bruvas a lotta cash to kill blondie b’fore last nite…”

Roland could feel Brianna begin to cry beside him, and from the awkward look in the Ranger’s eyes and face he knew what was coming. Abraham let out a deep sigh, “de’ll be no ‘elp from Westliegh luv – we’ve none ta give,” he sighed sadly, “De war ‘gainst Rochelle’s a mess, dey got der Pallies now and wiv de Sisters and der Bruvahood next door.” The Ranger shrugged, “we’ll win, but we nuthin’ ter spare.”

“Nuffin ‘t’all?” Roland asked hopefully, resting his arm around the weeping Aristocract.

“I don’ fink so mate…the Kingdom don’t care, Rochelle is te busy and there ain’t ‘nuff Pallies who’ll help…” He summed up sadly, “…but we’ll pay fer Mr Fatcha’ ‘ere to get yer home an’ I’ll give yer one of me scouts…but luv dere be nuffin’ more.”

****

Tre Nagia, Atena’s Isle, Amazon Isles – 27 years earlier

The ship’s captain rubbed his eyes in annoyance, “look…we are…er…no passenger ship…” he growled in awkward Amazon at the woman blocking his gangplank.

“He can work…he’s strong…he’s good with a bow…” The angry Amazon shouted, jabbing violently at Arturo with every word. The terrified, scrawny boy beside the Amazon began to cry under her assault, “…stop crying…” the woman snarled, striking him again.

The sailor’s eyes darkened with pity as he watched the boy desperately wipe the tears away, only to make them worse and further smudging his filthy features further.

“Look I can pay…take him.”

With a sigh he nodded, “okay…yes…I can use…er…er…a cabin boy…”

“Thank the Goddess…” The Amazon sighed heavenwards, and roughly thrust the boy and a purse at the sailor as she turned round growling, “…his name is Arturo.”

The Captain barely caught the boy and the heavy purse; angrily he rose to confront the Amazon only to find that she had disappeared into the dock’s bustling crowd.


****

Eastern Gate, the Port of New Hope

“Ain’t no worry, we’ll ‘quip yer…” Roland growled sarcastically as he prodded and prowled around the worn caravans that waited for them.

“It’s not that bad is it?” Willow asked softly, gently clinging to a bandaged and cloaked Tay.

“Cud’ve been worse, but t’ain’t nowhere near good…bloody cheapskates.” Roland spat as he pulled a sword free and carried out a series of parries and thrusts.

“I think they were slightly taken with your bill.” Brianna crowed as she rode up beside them.

“I maybe common luv, but I ain’t cheap,” Roland snapped, though he brightened as he looked at the horses Brianna had brought. “Now dese are wot I call an ‘orse,” he mumbled to himself as inspected the animals and their equipment.

“Why d’yer buy five?” Roland frowned as he looked up at aristocrat.

“There are five of us.” The aristocrat answered as if Roland had lost his mind.

“Aye luv, but des an Amazon an’a Cat,” Brianna deep frown caused the mercenary to role his eyes, and in response he merely pointed: Willow hung a stepped behind Tay, with the Demoness moving slower than her injuries allowed, as they approached the second caravan both looking terrified at the large, docile horse that lead it. “Show eva’ an ‘orse an’ dey’ll run ‘king miles.” Roland whispered.

“Fuck - I can’t exactly give them back.”

“Hand them in to the Rangers they might give you a better blade than that rubbish!” The voice held the smooth words of Westliegh’s merchant class, but with the subtle rasping undertone. Both aristocrat and mercenary turned together to face the voice. Like most of the Dark Elf race, the Ranger was tall and thin; her deep black hair covered lightly pointed ears whilst framing dark, bronze skin which appeared to have been baked smooth by the sun. Black eyes sat against her thin, striking features. Neither the loose, dark green uniform of a scout nor the well kept blade and bow at her side did anything to hide the slender, lithe form beneath.

“Corporal Janna Innes at your service,” the Ranger greeted with a bow.

“R-Roland Fatcha’”

“Brianna Silas.”

“Excellent, can I take a horse?” Her black eyes sparkled with mischief as both Roland and Brianna nodded as one.

“Blondie?” Roland mumbled as he watched the Ranger leave; he felt rather than saw Brianna’s nod. “I saw ‘er first ‘kay?”

****

The Westliegh Rose – 27 years earlier

It had been nearly nightfall when the huge, three hulled multi-mast ship had finally left Tre Nagia’s lagoon. In the twilight of dusk it had seemed distant to Arturo, barely lit by firelight it was just a shadow in the night, so different from the noisy, lively city he’d seen just a few hours before. But even those familiar lights had now passed. And in the strangely bright darkness of the seat night, all that he could see of his home was a dark blur that hid the stars.

Arturo hugged the ship’s mast, his skinned burned from the scrubbing he’d received and itched from the coarse, light blue uniform he wore, though he barely noticed as he watched Atena’s Isle disappear into the distance. And the cold sea breeze took the heat from his tears and the endless creaking of the wooden ship stole the sobs from his lips.

…to be continued in Chapter Three…
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Re: FIC> The Gates of Paradel (updated 30/05)

Postby notl33t » Tue May 30, 2006 11:50 am

You weave an interesting story. Reminds me a lot of D&D. I especially like the Roland character, he's hilarious, plus the accent is pretty strong...
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Re: FIC> The Gates of Paradel (updated 30/05)

Postby spells42 » Tue May 30, 2006 6:06 pm

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I just read this fic for the first time today and I'm fascinated. You've painted a fantastic, and terribly harsh world with intriguing parallel stories (the here and now with Willow, Roland et al, the battle in Brianna's homeland, and in the past with Arturo, if I've got it right). You've shown us how two of these are interwoven, but we've yet to discover how Arturo fits into the weave - as I'm sure he will, somehow.

I'm looking forward to reading more of this fic.
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Re: FIC> The Gates of Paradel (updated 30/05)

Postby Artemis » Fri Jun 02, 2006 10:39 am

We're still very much in the opening stages of the story, by the feel of things, so understanding isn't quick to dawn - it's more a case of 'go with it, it'll work out later'. I'll be intrigued to find out how the various stories all work together in the end.

There's surprisingly little Willow and Tara, especially Tara/Tay, who's understandably not up to being a big part of the narrative just now - that's not a criticism, I like that the world is bigger than just the two of them, and that you're taking the time to set the world and other characters up properly, rather than jumping heavily into the W/T aspect right away. Though Willow has had her share of excitement, and an interesting glimpse of her resolve to rescue Tay, and fury at what's been done to her. At the moment though it seems like Roland's carrying the story, and I'm all in favour of that - he's a magnetic character, everything about him (not excluding the way he speaks by any means) is enjoyable to read about.
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Re: FIC> The Gates of Paradel (updated 30/05)

Postby WillowRulez » Wed Jun 28, 2006 3:08 pm

Finally got around to read this story, has been sitting in my Favorites for some time.
Very unique idea - usually I am not much one for uber fics but this is really intriguing. Poor Tara, being forced into slavery by her own dad. :smash
Please update soon!
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Re: FIC> The Gates of Paradel (updated 30/05)

Postby Crazed Attourney » Tue Aug 08, 2006 2:40 pm

Big, huge apols - I am now no longer in between computers (phew), but am still in the process of transfering everything over from laptop to desktop and so writing's a bit on the backburner at the mo.

But it will NOT be another year for Chapter 3 (but I am not a quick writer, so no promises).

Chris - ah...yes you noticed...and this will probably got me in trouble, Roland has become the main character of the story, but with Arturo and Willow sharing second billing. W/T are still very big part of the story (grin), but not as big as I'd orginally intended.

Spells42 - Yes that is right...it sounds a bit worrying when put like that, they do all link together and the first hints come at the opening of Chapter Three (which is written).

Willowrulez - big thankyou.

Notl33t - good spot, yes, D&D (and Diablo 2) did play a little part in inspiring GoP.

I hope this is okay - and I just wanted to say a big thankyou for your (and others) feedback - it helps when my very elusive muse disappears for long stretches.

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