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Re: New Fic : The Game Of Love.

Postby behindhereyes » Sun May 08, 2005 8:50 pm

Sheba :bigwave

Progress... a resounding YES... always ! The story is fantastic, every update garners my rapt attention :-D .

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Re: New Fic : The Game Of Love.

Postby cooper » Sun May 08, 2005 11:34 pm

Sheba,

I have been following this story as a lurker since the first post. It was so exciting to read a chapter that has definite movement towards Willow and Tara together. I get really happy when I see that you have updated.

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Re: New Fic : The Game Of Love.

Postby Artemis » Mon May 09, 2005 12:07 am

Disaster narrowly averted - I know Anya and Cordy mean well, but "So have you considered gay love? For instance, with Tara?" in the middle of their flight would probably send Willow into a nervous babble-fest that would last the whole weekend. Much better to have just the two of them - Willow's nervous enough as it is :D

Tara sitting in Willow's couch-spot was so sweet :x They have it soooo bad for each other.

Great update, looking forward to the big trip :bow
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Re: New Fic : The Game Of Love.

Postby JustSkipIt » Mon May 09, 2005 4:07 am

Great update. It's really nice in this update to have all three foci. We have Willow by herself thinking (even briefly) and her trip prep, the conversation between the two with the longing and slight flirting and how lovely..., and then Tara by herself. It's not terribly long but it really sets up the trip. On one hand I felt very optimistic about the path because they are both in action on their relationship. Willow has broken up with Oz and Tara has told C&A and has invited Willow on the trip so how could they possibly not take action more? But on the other there is...

"I won’t miss a thing” Tara had stated, hoping to God that she didn’t. The last thing she wanted was for Willow to be actually interested, and to miss out on any signals the green-eyed beauty might give out.
It's like saying, "we're safe now. The vampires never come down this street." Or something. She will now miss 100 signals or something. Arggghhh!

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Re: New Fic : The Game Of Love.

Postby stillrunning » Mon May 09, 2005 7:28 am

Aww I think you're making some very slow...inching progress...but still! Progress is progress! And now that Anya and Cordy are helping(no matter how intrusive it might end up being), and Tara is going to be paying attention and 'not miss a thing'(which just jinxed the hell out of her!), they're all set! Can't wait to see how the weekend and the concert goes!
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Re: New Fic : The Game Of Love.

Postby Traveler4069 » Mon May 09, 2005 1:33 pm

First I want to take a second to apologize-5 updates without me leaving a single reply. This wonderful story deserves applause :applause every time you add a chapter. Tara and Willow in LA, I hope between being with Tara's Mom and the concert I hope they have time to express how they feel to each other. I'll be watching for and reading further updates. Thanks for sharing. Traveler
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Re: New Fic : The Game Of Love.

Postby WT214 » Mon May 09, 2005 2:03 pm

Making her way to the couch, she collapsed on it, even she thought ‘Willow was here…probably sitting right here…’ she sank further into the couch, somehow convincing herself that she was getting closer to Willow that way.

Now that was just cute :x Can't wait till the next update.
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Re: New Fic : The Game Of Love.

Postby Insanity » Mon May 09, 2005 2:07 pm

Okay, today we had a party, my stepmom became 50 today. Now its 11 p.m. local time and I'm a little drunk *gggg* (I've already corrected 5 typos in this short sentence....)

I liked the update very much. Tara waiting for Willow...
I think I have to agree with Debra (again! I seem to do that A LOT...) Willow and Tara will miss a million signs from each other.

I would love to see them get together in LA, but I don't want this story to end.

Argh.. I don't make any sense... sorry, maybe I'll be able to make some sense te next time...

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Chapter 65.

Postby Shai » Mon May 16, 2005 7:42 am

Hello lovies! I figured it was time for an update, so here I am! I’m trying to be a better writer, so before I update, here’s my list of thank you’s for this time!

littlecrazy80 – I still haven’t figured out what I’m putting in the update, which I will be typing out after I’ve replied to all the feedback, so I can’t make any promises!

LittleKitten85 – Yup, 64 chapters and no smoochies! Hopefully you’ll put up with the fic till I eventually get to that place!

redjassy – Hey Joan! How are ya?! Yeah I’m aiming at keeping this fic in the sweet and cute category, while also trying to keep it real. Haha, I don’t think I’d be very good at the Willow babble, and I guess you’ve noticed I haven’t really put it in my fic yet. Still, I might try my hand at it not that you’ve given me the idea! And yes, the smoochies are on their way…I think! Hehe! Hope you enjoy the next part!

photographer02 – Nice to think you believe I’m making progress! Let’s hope I keep moving in the right direction now!

cperrins78 – Hey Christina. Believe it or not, I didn’t think of Entropy when I was typing out the scene. Yeah, now we’re off to LA…I have no clue what I’m gonna do when I’m writing out that bit! :p

GayNow – Hey Carleen! Thanks so much for the compliments! Yeah I think Anya and Cordelia would make great friends too! I’ve tried to keep their parts humorous, and from your feedback I think I’m doing pretty well at that! Lemme know what you think of the update!

Willow~ Rosenberg – Ok, first of all I looked at my keyboard for a good 10 seconds before I found the “~” symbol to reply to your feedback! Hehe! I’m glad I got you excited! I pray that this next bit has the same effect on you!

hells bells – Jun Low! You wait till I get back at you! Trust me, I’m definitely gonna! Lol! Now, stop obsessing about me writing a sex scene, and get your mind outta the gutter! And hey, I wonder how my picture got up there in the first place?!?!?!

behindhereyes – Hey Kim! Long time no see! I’m glad that you’re still liking the fic J Hopefully this update with garner your rapt attention too! Cheers!

cooper – Hey! It’s nice to see ya come out of the shadows to lemme know what you think about this fic! You’re also the first to say that there’s DEFINITE movement in the right direction, so I appreciate that! Haha, I’m glad I make you happy when I update! Here’s some more happiness!

Artemis – Hey Chris! Yeah, I didn’t think Tara taking Anya and Cordelia along would have been the best choice she could make! Like I said earlier, I try to incorporate a lotta sweet moments in the fic that just make the readers go “awwww”!!! LOL! To me, that’s what falling in loves all about!

JustSkiplt – I’m happy that you liked the technique I used to write this time, with three parts in all. I think you’re the first person to notice that I did that! Haha, yeah I could have jinxed Tara with her belief that she won’t miss a thing! But like you said, there’s also a lotta optimism going in to this chapter, so let’s see where my mind takes me!

stillrunning – Slow and inching progress huh? I’ll take that! I’m still working out details of the meeting in my mind…of course you’ll just have to scroll down and read what I’ve come up with since I’ll have posted the update for you to be reading this! Ok, I’ll stop here…lol….hope I haven’t confused you!

Traveler4069 – Apology accepted! Hehe! Thank you for the applause…I try! Knowing me there’s still a long way to go before they share their feelings, but I promise that I’ll get there…eventually!

WT214 – Glad you liked the cuteness! I’ll try to put in more cute moments!

Insanity – It’s fun being drunk! Maybe you and Debra should just confer and then type out feedback for me! LO!L And I know what you mean about not wanting a story to end…that’s how I feel about Neverland! Trust me, you made a lotta sense to me! Thanks! J

And now, let’s see what I come up with for the next update!

Disclaimers don’t change much around here, do they?!

Chapter 65.
“Hi. I’m almost there” Willow said into her cell phone, as the cab she was traveling in took the last turn to Tara’s home.

Glancing down at her watch Tara noticed that it was 10:10 am. ‘Nice’ she thought, impressed at the redhead’s punctuality. ‘Just another thing that’s great about her’ her mind said, as she spoke aloud into her own phone “Hey Will. How’ve you come?”

“Cab” Willow said, before she understood why Tara was asking. “Want me to keep it waiting while you come down?”

Tara smiled at how quickly Willow understood her. ‘It’s a sign of how well you vibe’ Tara could hear a voice say in her head, and for some reason the voice sounded a lot like Cordelia’s! Shaking her head slightly, Tara spoke “Yeah, thanks, that’d be great. I’ll be down in two minutes. Bye Will” she said, cutting the call, and walking back into her bedroom to pick up her small suitcase. Carrying it in her right hand, she glanced around the room to make sure that she hadn’t forgotten anything. Satisfied that she had everything she needed she walked into the living room, giving that room a once over as well.

Outside Willow had gotten out of the cab, and has been waiting beneath Tara’s window for barely ten seconds when she saw Tara emerge from the building, only carrying a small suitcase apart from the bag she usually carried around her shoulder. The redhead couldn’t help but smile when she saw the blonde, and her grin only widened when she noticed Tara smiling back at her. “Hey” the blonde said when she got within 5 steps of Willow.

“Hi” Willow breathed back, glancing at Tara’s tiny suitcase “That’s all your luggage?” she asked.

Tara nodded, before adding as a way of explanation “I have a room at Mom’s house, with a closet full of clothes.”

Willow nodded in understanding, and stated more than asked “All set then?” When Tara nodded again, Willow reached for the suitcase “Lemme get that”.

Tara handed over the bag to the redhead, and as the suitcase switched hands, their fingers slightly brushed. Willow swooned at the feeling, and collected her thoughts before she dropped the bag, while Tara moved to sit down in the waiting cab, the word ‘Soft’ playing in her head.

Willow deposited Tara’s bag in the truck of the cab, before pulling the top down, and making her way to the backseat of the waiting cab. The minute her door closed, the cab driver was on his way.

Tara looked over at Willow and smiled “We’re on our way”.

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An hour later the plane carrying Tara and Willow had just taken off. The two were seated across each other, with a table in between them. A few seconds later the captain’s voice could be heard through the cabin “Ok girls, you can take your belts off now”. Doing just that, the girls smiled at each other again. Just then a female cabin attendant walked in and stood beside them, asking “Would you like something to drink?”

Tara looked at Willow with a question in her eyes. “A coffee?” Willow asked, and Tara nodded her way before looking up at the attendant “Two coffee’s please?”

“Sure” the other girl said, before disappearing again.

The blonde and the redhead looked at each other again, both aware that they were spending some alone time with someone they were mega crushing on! The drive to the airport had been comfortable, both girls making small talk about their friends and other easy subjects. When they’d gotten to the airport someone from Tara’s mothers staff had been waiting for them, and led them through al the necessary procedures before they’d all gotten into a car and driven up to a small white and blue plane, which Willow guessed belonged to Tara’s mother. As soon as they stepped out of the car a jovial looking man who seemed to be in his mid 40’s greeted them. Tara hugged him, and then introduced him to Willow as Steve, the captain of their flight. After that they loaded their luggage, and sat in the plane till Steve had been giving a clearance, and now here they were, waiting for their coffee!

“So” Willow started, “how long is this flight?”

Tara thought for a second, before saying “Not long. 40, 45 minutes, tops”

“You must go to LA pretty often to see you family huh?” Willow asked.

“Yeah…at least once every three or four months. When you have your mother’s plane at your disposal it’s kinda hard to give her reasons for not being able to make it!” Tara rolled her eyes, and Willow giggled, before Tara added seriously “And well, I like seeing them. It’s always nice to do silly family stuff” Willow nodded, as a horrific look came across her face. “Oh God…” she muttered, prompting Willow to ask her what the matter was.

“Every now and then Mom decides that she should throw a party in honour of the family being together, and I’m just hoping that this isn’t one of those times!” Taking a deep breath Tara continued, “I mean the whole idea’s sweet you know, her wanting to show me and Donny off, but I swear, sometimes I think I’m gonna scream if one more of our relatives or her friends tells me how tall I’ve gotten…or something silly like that!”

Willow couldn’t help but laugh aloud at Tara’s rant. “I’m sure it can’t be all that bad” she smiled, prompting Tara to say “Believe me, it is!”

They sat in silence for the next few seconds, both lost in their own thoughts, before Tara broke the silence “You know, Mom insisted that Donny and I learn to play an instrument when we were kids. I picked the piano, and Donny picked the guitar” she glanced at Willow, who was nodding her head and putting in little “hmm’s” and “uh huh’s” every now and then. “Anyway,” Tara continued “we both took to the instruments, and of course Mom had to tell everyone about that, so now whenever she has a little do, Donny and me are forced to play or something, and as much as both of us hate playing in public, we do it just to get away from the ‘You’ve gotten so big!!!’ talk! That’s how bad it can get” she ended, looking absolutely mortified.

Without thinking Willow reached over on the table and took Tara’s hand, in a show of support “Hey, she’s got her heart in the right place…who wouldn’t wanna show off a kid like you?!”

Tara’s heart had stopped beating when Willow had reached for her hand, and it took all of her will power to keep breathing. ‘Willow’s holding my hand…Willow’s holding m hand…Willow’s holding my hand…’ her brain screamed, and she watched as Willow glanced down at their hands.

‘Holy shit!!!!’ the redhead’s mind registered what she was doing. ‘I’m holding her hand!!!!! It feels so good to be doing this…but I can’t keep doing it or she’ll freak out…right? Of course she will you idiot…now you need to pull your hand back, and make it seem like it was a nice friendly gesture…be cool Rosenberg’ Composing herself, Willow looked up straight into Tara’s eyes, and simultaneously squeezed the blonde’s hand before pulling hers back, saying “And I’m sure you’re brilliant on the piano anyway”. ‘Bad hand’ she thought, looking back down and glaring at her hand as it came back towards her ‘running off on your own!!!’

Tara didn’t hear the last part of Willow’s sentence, she was too busy missing the feel of the redheads hand on hers. ‘She said that I was worth being shown off’ her mind registered, ‘AND she held my hand! Ok, now is when I wish I’d brought Anya and Cordelia along so they could tell if that was a sign or not…Damn, why can’t I tell if that was a sign that she likes me or not??? It could have just been a friendly gesture…right???’

“Coffee!” the flight attendant said brightly, and both girls were broken from their thoughts as she placed a cup each before both girls, before telling them to buzz for her if she needed anything.

Again both girls found themselves smiling at each other slightly as they sipped their coffee.

The rest of the flight went by in more small talk, Tara telling Willow about the times that she’d met Michelle Branch, Willow telling Tara about how she’d seen more places outside the United States than within it because of her parents’ job, and the likes. By the times the girls knew it, Steve was announcing that they were preparing to land, so both girls should buckle up again.

Thirty minutes later Willow had been formally introduced to James, whom she’d only seen once on the first day of the handball tournament, and the girls were on their way to Tara’s mothers’ house. James had smiled in delight when Willow had thanked him for bringing her the sandwich that day, and Tara was once again reminded of how considerate the redhead was. Throughout the drive Tara had pointed out places to the redhead, who had nodded along.

Finally the girls pulled into a lane, which housed a board at the beginning that stated in bold letters ‘Beverly Hills’. Tara continued to point out houses of people who’s names she knew Willow would recognize, until she got to a large gate. As they passed through it, Tara summed up “And this is where Susanna White, my mother, lives”, the note of pride obvious in her voice.

Willow smiled at the way Tara said that. When she’d heard Tara talk to her mother on the phone, she’d always noticed the affection in the blonde’s voice. Now she was looking forward to seeing the affection for herself. The drive upto the house was quite long, and along the way Tara again showed her the guesthouses, and a singe floor house, where she said her brother Donny lived. Finally they stopped in front of a house that could only be described as a mansion, complete with the large fountain right in front of it.

Looking up Willow took in the three floored white house, and then followed Tara to the front door, which the blonde opened with a key she’d taken out of her pocket. “What about the bags?” Willow asked, and Tara said “Let James handle those…trust me, you’ll hurt his feelings if you don’t!” she grinned, and Willow nodded, smiling back.

A second later they’d walked into the house, and Tara took a deep breath before yelling out “I’m home!!!!”

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Re: New Fic : The Game Of Love.

Postby WT214 » Mon May 16, 2005 9:26 am

Wootyness all around :party Glad to see that things seem to be going smoothly. :wtkiss in the near future? :-D Can't wait til the next update.
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A stress-free chapter? No way!

Postby ophelia11 » Mon May 16, 2005 10:19 am

Well I'm excited to see you're updating again. Yay for updates. And to think they had an entirely pleasant chapter without Oz-interference or handball distractions. Surely, the angst isn't over? I mean...it's only chapter 65. And I'm sure the hookup isn't planned until somewhere in chapter 90 so something evil must be brewing somewhere? Oz is a stalker? Xander is a woman? Buffy has a thing for redheads? C'mon...I'll keep guessing, ya know. :P

Anyways, nice update!
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Re: New Fic : The Game Of Love.

Postby GayNow » Mon May 16, 2005 10:59 am

:bounce Yay for updates! I love me some updates! :bounce [br][br] This was some nice together time for W and T -- albeit short together time. But, they still have the rest of the weekend ahead of them, right? Oh, I've jinxed it..I just know I have. I can feel it in my bones -- here comes Tara's mom to take over and monopolize their time, right? The dreaded party will happen. On the plus side, Willow would get to experience Tara playing the piano...and maybe singing again...right? :-D [br][br] Now, let's see....we're on Chapter 65 and still no kissage. Hmmmm. I think we should be able to get some kissage soon, huh? I mean, there is such a thing as too much foreplay....isn't there? :confused [br][br] Looking forward to another update soon. This really is a delightfully cute story.

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Re: New Fic : The Game Of Love.

Postby cooper » Mon May 16, 2005 11:13 am

I am patiently and not so patiently hoping for the heart to heart that Tara has with her mom expressing her love for Willow, and for Willow to overhear. Ok not really, but what a great time to tell each other. I am wondering with mom and Tara being so close if her mother will pick up on the Tara liking Willow situation.

Can't wait for the next part
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Re: New Fic : The Game Of Love.

Postby stillrunning » Mon May 16, 2005 11:46 am

OMG OMG OMG!!! I'm happy now...because there is an update! And the progress continues with lovely handholding! WOOHOO!
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Re: New Fic : The Game Of Love.

Postby Nicole023 » Mon May 16, 2005 12:06 pm

Just wanted to tell you that I can't seem to stop reading your fic..

I've been reading it for the second time now and it just keeps amazing me ! Update was great..

Thank you..

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Re: New Fic : The Game Of Love.

Postby YMKA » Mon May 16, 2005 5:32 pm

Shebs!!!!!!

You updated!!!!! AGAIN!!!!!! I'm sooooo happy :grin

They had some time together....YAY!!!! Tara at least thought that there might be a chance of Willow liking her!!!!! I feel relieved....there is still a chance that they'll get smoochie this century!!!!!

I can't wait to read about Willow meeting her mom!!!!!! That should be.... interesting ;) :grin

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Re: New Fic : The Game Of Love.

Postby redjassy » Mon May 16, 2005 9:16 pm

yes!!!yes!!! another update from you sheba.. thanks :kiss :bow

and yes indeed sweet.. awww willow can't help it but hold tara's hand.. Man..sheba can't there be any smoochies :bounce can't wait for the smoochies..

awww.. This is a nice change to our quiet jock - Tara. She talks about her family to willow.. It seems that she is very comfortable with willow. sweet..
I like the fact that Tara is very close to her mom. hmmm.. I wonder, if they stay long with Tara's mom, would she be able to see that Willow and Tara have feelings for eachother. I'm sure excited to the next update yay!!! :-D *dancing*
thanks again sheba.. catch you online.
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Re: New Fic : The Game Of Love.

Postby hells bells » Tue May 17, 2005 5:23 am

SHEBA....great update.......as usual blah blah all the usual comments lol....I CAN"T HELP IT IF I POST YOUR PICTURE ON THE PICTURE THREAD...I"M TRYING TO GET YOU A GIRLFRIEND HERE SISTER!

I can't help it if you're hot...and single....

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Grrrr

Postby Shai » Tue May 17, 2005 5:26 am

hells bells wrote:SHEBA....great update.......as usual blah blah all the usual comments lol....I CAN"T HELP IT IF I POST YOUR PICTURE ON THE PICTURE THREAD...I"M TRYING TO GET YOU A GIRLFRIEND HERE SISTER!

I can't help it if you're hot...and single....



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Re: New Fic : The Game Of Love.

Postby Willow~Rosenberg » Tue May 17, 2005 7:12 am

Momentarily stumped you with the "~", did I? lol

Now on to the update.... Yay! Handholding. *does happy dance* Tara, that was definitely a sign. I think if Willow does one more thing on that line, Tara may pick up on the not-as-a-friend vibe. I'm glad they got to spend some time together, just the two of them. You made me smile when Willow scolded her hand for "running away." lol

In Beverly Hills....hmmm. Fond memories from a vacation I took there recently. I love the LA area. Now I think I like it even more picturing Willow and Tara there.
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Re: New Fic : The Game Of Love.

Postby Urn of Osiris » Tue May 17, 2005 7:37 am

Great update. Things are progressing. I like the idea of mother/daughter confessions being overheard. Willow could be wicked with the knowledge. Like I've said before, I really like your Tara. She holds everything so tightly together though, I have to wonder when all the juggling will tumble to the ground. There has to be a point when she's got to weaken and let her defenses down with Willow. I'm interested in this party, and the family interaction. Thanks for the update.
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Re: New Fic : The Game Of Love.

Postby littlecrazy80 » Tue May 17, 2005 12:10 pm

Great update! :-D I like that the "relationship" is progressing. The handholding was really sweet. :)

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Re: New Fic : The Game Of Love.

Postby Insanity » Tue May 17, 2005 3:03 pm

Hey Sheba!

I knew it:

Ok, now is when I wish I’d brought Anya and Cordelia along so they could tell if that was a sign or not…Damn, why can’t I tell if that was a sign that she likes me or not??? It could have just been a friendly gesture…right???’


The whole holding hands action was kinda cute.

Oh and a party could be good *g* So, will there be a party???

And BTW: really nice picture *g*

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Re: New Fic : The Game Of Love.

Postby Artemis » Wed May 18, 2005 8:54 pm

They're so sweet :blush After so many chapters, reading a new update is like meeting up with an old friend, it's a lovely feeling. They held hands... :x

Though I may be inclined to revise my former opinion - perhaps Tara should have taken Anya and Cordy along, just to say "Yep, it's a sign. Kiss her. No, right now, kiss her. Do it. DO IT! Why aren't you doing it yet?" Okay, it'd be nerve-wracking, but it's for a good cause :D

I'm really looking forward to seeing Willow and Tara's mother meet. Thanks for the update :bow
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Re: New Fic : The Game Of Love.

Postby behindhereyes » Tue May 24, 2005 4:20 pm

Sheba

Have I mentioned that I love this story... thought I might have mentioned it before. I love the way you have written this, your characters... they breathe :bow !

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Re: New Fic : The Game Of Love.

Postby Mikaelah » Thu May 26, 2005 1:00 pm

Hey Sheebs... Isn't it about time you updated again? :eyebrow Come on girl, I wanna know what happens next... Besides at the rate you are going, the sooner you update, the sooner we get to the 100th chapter where they finally kiss or something! It's nice to have a dream, I suppose.

Wonderful update as usual. :-D

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Re: New Fic : The Game Of Love.

Postby Shai » Fri May 27, 2005 1:44 am

Hey guys! I just had to say this...CARRIE WON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :clap Wooooooo Hooooooo!!!!! Mika, I got your mail, and yeah, I just saw you're post...lol, I knew you'd think of me when she won! Yay yay yay!!!! :party

Ok, getting back to the story....I'll have an update up this weekend! I'll reply to the feedback then as well....thanks to everyone who's written in and told me what they think of the story!

p.s Mika, don't you think you're being a little optimistic when you say they'll kiss in the 100th chapter? *chuckles*
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Re: New Fic : The Game Of Love.

Postby Mikaelah » Fri May 27, 2005 8:23 am

Sheebs...You are killing me! I was just thinking, last night someone told me that they would finish writing Laura's story if I did not let her post. (Auburn promised me cake and no updates till I get it.) Sooooo... if by chapter 100... they still have not kissed, I think I may have to take drastic measures and come across the world to personally tie you down and make you write it. ... Then again, you would like that... Hmmm... I am sure I will come up with something. I bet Jun would help me. :devil

I look forward to seeing what torture you throw at us this weekend. Tease!

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Re: New Fic : The Game Of Love.

Postby hells bells » Fri May 27, 2005 3:15 pm

I reckon you should just do away with the romance, and have them as just best friends...

that'd be the best story around :-D

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Re: New Fic : The Game Of Love.

Postby hells bells » Sat May 28, 2005 3:20 am

hey mika......i think i know what we could do to shebs...lets just say i had a tiny dream where shebs was in it...LOL. :glasses
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