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Re: Survivor - Ash Island

Postby Irishgrl3 » Fri Mar 11, 2005 4:32 pm

I had a feeling Andrew was the next to go. Xander needs to listen to his gut feelings though, always go with them. I hope it doesn't come around to bite him in the ass. Willow and Tara in water with shampoo woo-hoo. Aren't they getting to know one another a little. :blush I like Willow's casual asking Tara is married. Snicker, snicker. Can't wait for more!

-anna

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Re: Survivor - Ash Island

Postby meretricious » Sat Mar 12, 2005 9:38 am

debra, i read the inbetween parts and i think "i like these better" because it's more one-on-one willow and tara, and i love the way you write them, but then you do an island update and i think, "no, i like this part the best" because of the suspense, and the soap opera of it. so i guess i just like both parts equally, but differently.

one thing (of many) that i love about the way you write au fic is that you will change some things about a character, like willow being more confident and a player, but you still remain true to the basic character. it's a fine line that you seem to have an unerring sense of.

and stupid, gullible, and well..stupid xander. i'm not in the "i hate xander" camp as a rule, but i would so love to see him suffer the consequences of his actions for a change. now willow, buffy and oz are three strong, and xander's days are numbered, surely. can't wait to see what happens next! ~mary

you're dangerous, 'cause you're honest
you're dangerous, you don't know what you are U2

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Re: Survivor - Ash Island

Postby pipsberg » Mon Mar 14, 2005 10:42 am

Hey Deb. I'm really enjoying this. I like seeing the relationship develop on the show when I already know they have one after the show. I can't wait to see you get these girls together. More please :)



:peace

-pipsberg



"We live our lives, do whatever we do, and then we sleep - it's as simple and ordinary as that."

Michael Cunningham, The Hours

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Survivor - Ash Island

Postby JustSkipIt » Tue Mar 15, 2005 6:21 am

Still Waters T – Well thenks for considering me one of your faves and sending some feedback my way. You know I love it. Thank you for all your lovely words.

I think the consensus is definitely that people like the in-betweens so I’m glad that I decided on them too (although they are harder to write as I said earlier). Yep, Xander’s a real fool.

You’re right that Willow is over being a player and she will definitely meet Ariel. But in time. Thanks for everything.

mollyig – Hey there again. I feel like I haven’t seen your screen name in a while but perhaps I’m forgetting. Anyway, welcome again. Thanks. I’m glad you’re liking the formatting of the story. I think it works but I’m definitely open to other suggestions. Thanks.

Irishgrl3 – Yeah, I actually randomly determined that he would go. I’m glad because it makes more sense that way. Yes, W&T are definitely getting t know each other on the island. Good for them. Thanks.

meretricious - That’s hysterical. But definitely good that you like whatever part you are reading. I’m glad the format is working.

Au is complicated because you have these characters who are laid out by M.E. and then we (wirters) take them, change them, use them, and do what we want. I don’t like fics where the characters act in ways that aren’t even slightly similar to their characters but I think it’s a fine line. I’m glad that you think I’m on the right side of it. I love Xander but I think he’s a fool. Thanks.

pipsbergThanks. I’m glad you like it. Yes, it’s strange to write the two stories in parallel.


Title – Survivor – Ash Island

Part 8 – Hard Questions

Author – JustSkipIt

Pairing – Who do you think? (W/T of course)

Feedback – Oh yes.

Spoilers–None

Ratiing – G to PG

Disclaimer – I own none of these characters nor do I own Survivor. And believe it or not, I also don’t own any small islands. On the other hand, this island is fictional so let’s say I own it. I’m making no money from this fiction and intend no copyright infringement.



Tara switched off the TV and leaned forward to pick up the popcorn bowl from the coffee table. She glanced at Ariel, expecting the girl to immediately mirror her actions to pick up her glass of milk and carry it to the sink. She picked up the bowl and her own glass and took them to the sink before returning to find the girl still sitting on the couch.

Quietly Tara sat down next to her daughter and waited. When a few minutes had passed without Ariel saying anything Tara quietly said the girl’s name: “Ariel?”

“Mommy,” the girl said, “do you still think Willow is nice?”

Tara nodded her head slowly as she realized where this was going. “Yes,” she answered, “I do. I think she’s very nice and I like her very much.”

“But she tried to beat you in the guessing game,” Ariel argued.

“She did,” Tara agreed, “we were both trying to win.”

“And you wanted to beat her?” Ariel asked. “But I thought you like her?” Ariel continued, obviously confused.

“I do,” Tara insisted, “but that was the way the game we were playing worked. We b-both tried to win.”

“Then both teams kicked off someone?” Ariel bit her lip as if she was thinking about something. “What if they kick you off?”

Tara smiled as she answered, “Then I’ll be done playing and I won’t win the game.”

Ariel thought about it for a while. “I hope you don’t get kicked off but I don’t want you to lose either.”

Tara smiled at her daughter’s understanding of the game. “I hope not either baby,” she said, “but the game already happened. I can’t get hurt anymore.” She held up her arm in a tentative bicep and winked at the girl. “See, I’m strong like an Amazon.”

Ariel smiled at the old joke and held up her arms too. “Me too!”

“Come on, Amazon,” Tara said as she patted her daughter on the leg and handed her milk glass, “It’s bedtime.”

Ariel jumped up and carried her glass to the sink and rinsed it out. When she finished doing so, Tara noticed she was standing at the sink for a long time, again obviously thinking. As she dried her hands she turned back toward Tara and held her mouth a little sideways as if really thinking about something. “Mommy, I want to ask you a question but I think I heard a bad word,” she finally said.

“Ok, sweetie,” Tara said walking over to take the girl’s hand. “Do you want to get ready for bed and then we can talk?”

Ariel nodded before walking with her mommy toward her room. A few minutes later the girl had brushed her teeth and gotten into pajamas. She got into bed and Tara sat on the side of it. “Mommy,” Ariel started, “what’s dyke?”

Tara nodded immediately. “Did someone at school say it?”

Ariel looked down at her bedspread like she thought she might be in trouble. “Jared,” she whispered. “He’s the one who said that other bad word about daddy and I that time.”

Tara nodded again. Of course! “I remember,” Tara assured her, holding the small girl’s hand. “You remember how we talked about how some mommies love daddies and some mommies, like me, love other mommies and we call them lesbian?”

“But you love Daddy,” Ariel protested at Tara’s explanation.

Tara nodded. “Yes, baby girl. I love your daddy but not like this. I love your daddy because he’s a very good friend and a good man and a wonderful daddy.” Ariel smiled as her mommy said such nice things about daddy. “But you also know that I don’t want to be married to daddy. I want to be married to another woman,” she explained in very general terms.

“Like Miss Turner,” Ariel suggested.

Tara again grinned, “Miss Turner and I dated which is what grownups do before they get married but we didn’t want to marry each other.”

“Maybe you can marry Willow then,” Ariel followed up her first suggestion.

“Willow and I are dating,” Tara responded with a smile, “but I don’t know that we want to get married to each other.”

“Maybe when I meet her, I can tell you if you want to marry her,” Ariel said.

Tara could hardly keep from laughing but contained it as she remembered the original reason for the conversation. “We’ll see, baby,” Tara responded. “But you asked about that word?”

“What does it mean?”

“It’s a mean word that people use for lesbian if they want to hurt feelings,” she explained. She certainly didn’t want to go into the entire political pride issues the word sometimes carried.

“Does it hurt your feelings?” Ariel asked.

Tara smiled as she explained: “Mostly it makes me feel sad for people who have such meanness in their hearts.”

Ariel thought about this for a long time. “Ok,” she smiled and hugged Tara. “Can I meet Willow once she leaves the island so I can tell you if you should marry her?”

Tara smiled back at her daughter, wondering at the way a child’s mind worked. Ariel could understand that Tara was no longer on the island but apparently still thought Willow was there. “I’ll see if she can visit,” she told the girl. She looked at the clock and said, “Now it’s late but if you want a short story I think we can do one before bedtime.”

Ariel clapped her hands together and settled back to listen to the story.

--

Tara pulled Ariel’s door mostly closed and exited her room, letting out a huge sigh. Much as she tried to feel compassion, she also felt anger at the Jared and his stupid parents. She could never see why they would care about how she chose to live her life.

She changed her clothes and looked to note that the light on the answering machine was blinking, smiling as she did. She pressed the button and heard the voice she expected: “Hey baby. It’s me. Willow. Again with stupid things to say. I hope I’m the only one calling you and saying ‘hey baby’ although maybe I’m not and that’s ok if I’m not.” There was a pause as Willow obviously attempted to recover from her babble. “If you have a chance to call me, I would love to hear from you tonight… well or any night… or I guess any day… you know the number.”

Tara called Willow’s cell phone surprised that the redhead didn’t pick up immediately. Finally she left a message and reached for the book she was reading. Just as she picked it up, the phone rang.

Tara answered the phone on the first ring, “Willow?”

“Hi, I was in the bathroom,” Willow said breathlessly, “Thanks for the necklace. ”

She could hear the smile in the blonde’s voice: “That’s what the c-card said too. Thank you for the flowers, Willow.”

“I would have rather delivered them myself but it seemed a bit stalkerish,” the redhead joked.

“How did you get them to deliver them a-at the commercial break?

“It’s amazing what a little money and a little celebrity will do,” Willow answered, glad to hear that the flower shop had in fact delivered the flowers she had sent immediately following the broadcast of the tribal council. “Is everything ok?” Willow asked, “You didn’t answer the phone right away.”

“I was talking to Ariel,” Tara explained.

“Is she ok?” Willow worried.

“She’s ok now,” Tara said, “first she wanted to know why you tried to beat me if you are my friend.” She took a breath. “Then she wanted to know what ‘dyke’ meant.”

“What?” Willow exclaimed.

“This mean fourth grader said her mother was a dyke and she was u-upset,” Tara explained. “Small-town thing. You can imagine what he said about Kent.”

“What does the school do?” Willow asked.

“Oh you know,” Tara explained, “I go down and talk to them. They call in the parents who pretend that they can’t believe what their child said and he gets a few detentions. And of course, r-really the fake-appalled parents are the ones who said it in the first place.”

“I’m sorry, baby,” Willow said. “How did you explain it?”

“Well,” Tara explained as she settled back into her pillows, “she already knows I like women so I explained that it’s a mean word for lesbian.”

“So you’re out to Ariel?” Willow confirmed. “I mean I was hoping that you were but we hadn’t really discussed it.”

“Oh yeah,” Tara answered, “I’ve been out to Ariel always and I went out with one of the teachers at her daycare last year so she remembers that and understood what it meant.”

“A teacher at her daycare,” Willow echoed, “am I going to have to come up there and get all large with the butch?”

Tara laughed at Willow’s jealousy. “No, sweetie,” she answered, “that’s been over for quite a while. Anyway, you’re the playgirl or at least that’s the impression I’ve gotten.”

“So what was wrong with Miss Wrong?” Willow attempted to steer the conversation from herself.

“Oh she was nice enough generally,” Tara explained, “but a bit m-m-militant.”

“They have militant lesbians in Reynoldsburg?” Willow asked incredulously.

“Maybe militant isn’t the right word,” Tara speculated. “She was just all ‘PPP’. You know, penis pure and proud.” She took a breath, “Which I don’t mind but she was really offended that I wasn’t. And as if that wasn’t a stupid enough attitude, she was especially offended that I’d been with Kent.”

“Wow,” Willow said, “that’s stupid alright.” Tara could hear the smile in the redhead’s voice as she said, “But it’s nice of her to be such an idiot so that you’re available incase you meet any cute chicks while stranded on an isolated island.”

“Yes, convenient isn’t it?” Tara chuckled.

And your mom and Kent?” Willow asked.

“Mom and Kent rarely go to islands,” Tara joked.

“Are you out to them?” Willow explained.

“Oh yeah,” Tara answered, “I’m all kinds of out. And now out to a national broadcast audience it would seem. I mean I thought you were the one who is all out, not me.”

“Well,” Willow teased, “you tweaked my gaydar. Why not a national broadcast audience?”

“Speaking of tweaking,” Tara intimated, “would you like to come visit?”

“Oh,” Willow said, “definitely sounds interesting.”

“Definitely,” Tara teased back. “Seriously,” she said, “Ariel wants to meet you.”

“Tough audience?” Willow wondered out loud.

“She wants to t-tell me if I should marry you,” Tara giggled.

“Wow,” Willow answered, “and then we skip the whole continue dating, romantic stuff part?”

“Definitely not,” Tara answered firmly.

“What a relief,” Willow said, “I like the mushy romantic parts.”

“Mmm,” Tara said dreamily, followed by a loud yawn. “Oh, sorry,” she apologized.

Willow smiled. “That’s ok,” she said. “Why don’t we talk tomorrow about my visiting?”

“That sounds good, Will,” Tara agreed yawning again.

“Thanks again for the necklace,” Willow said.

“Well, it seems to be paying off for me,” Tara said.

“For both of us,” Willow agreed. “Good night, baby.”

“Good night,” Tara said. She waited a moment before hanging up the phone and turning off her lights. She smiled as she began moving into sleeping thinking that she would be seeing Willow soon.




"It is better to waste one's youth than to do nothing with it at all- Georges Courteline
"Censorship, like charity, should begin at home; but unlike charity, it should end there." - Chare Booth Luce
My latest story: Survivor - Ash Island
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Re: Survivor - Ash Island

Postby mollyig » Tue Mar 15, 2005 6:48 am

Hi JustSkipIt. No you weren't imagining it, I haven't been around for a while. Work has been hectic, and outside work I just want to spend as much time as possible with my girl!



Tara's daughter has her gentleness and also her wisdom - Maybe you can marry Willow then. It's lovely to see the interaction between them, and to see that Ariel knows that she can talk to Tara about anything.



Willow may have been all nonchalant about meeting Ariel, but I'm sure she'll be all nerves before the actual event.



Thanks for the update!


You stay the course, you hold the line, you keep it all together.

You're the one true thing I know I can believe in
- Sarah McLachlan

mollyig
 


Re: Survivor - Ash Island

Postby hidden watson » Tue Mar 15, 2005 7:00 am

We do seem to be keeping the same hours here on the board, but it's night-time for me, I can't get up at the insane (ooops, make that quirky, or is it necessary) hours you seem to. I have real admiration for people who are already up and about by 6am, it's hard enough for me to get up at 8.15am to be at work by 9am!



The update was so brilliant! Love the way Ariel's mind work, still thinking Willow's on the island -- of course, she saw her on TV just now. And
Quote:
Maybe when I meet her, I can tell you if you want to marry her
I'm going to start sending "say yes" vibes to Ariel starting.right.now. So she says yes, and Tara and Willow just can't refuse and they get married straight away, cos it's been decreed by their daughter. Hmmmm, warm fuzzy feelings ...



Thanks also for explaining Kent's role in the family. He's a good daddy, I hope he gets to meet Willow too, and add his vote towards the "yes to Tara marrying Willow" camp.



Still no clue about the outcome of the game. That's fine, I can wait. It's like reading two parallel, but equally addictive stories at the same time, it's great.



------

quiet thoughts

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Re: Survivor - Ash Island

Postby Artemis » Tue Mar 15, 2005 9:21 am

I'm starting an Ariel Fan Club, she's the greatest :D Naturally, of course, being Spawn of Tara, but still, yay Ariel, Pint-Sized Match-Maker. I hope she likes Willow. She's gonna like Willow, right? I mean, Willow's adorable, plus she's about 35% pure child herself (compliment, in case you were wondering), they should get on great.



Assuming, of course, that Ariel doesn't open the conversation with "Are you going to marry Mommy?" and follow it up with a full interrogation that reduces Willow to a state of nerve-wracked confusion :lmao



Grr Jared and his stupid parents :fit2 I'd wager they're the kind of people who'd consider Tara unfit to be a parent in the first place... as if they shouldn't be bowing down in awe of Tara's parenting. At least that's my layman's opinion - she treats Ariel with real respect, she doesn't talk down to her, explains things rather than just brushing them off if she thinks they're 'unfit topics' or whatever.



I'm interested to see what Tara learns about Willow, both on the island and out in 'real time' - there's been several mentions of Willow's 'playgirl' status, I'm curious to see how that came to light, what Tara knows, and how it affects them both. Willow steered away from it this time, but it's something that's going to come up sooner or later as they move from dating to seriously contemplating a future together.



Thanks for the update :bow

Chris Cook

Through the Looking-glass

A Willow and Tara for every world.

Smut Bunnies!: Saving the world, sexily!

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RE something or another

Postby MissKittys Ball O Yarn » Tue Mar 15, 2005 9:59 am

Great update Debra. I really loved everything about it, and I think this is the first time that a Willow/Tara conversation was upstaged by a kid. Ariel is great! And I second Artemis...we should start an Ariel fan club. It could be fun....and there would be cookies. I also liked the open way Tara explained things to her daughter...that was so real.



Great Job. I can't wait for more...possibly the Willow/Ariel meeting?



xoxo

Emms

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Re: RE something or another

Postby stillrunning » Tue Mar 15, 2005 10:37 am

Ok, I think it's a tossup between Ariel and Sam(from 'A Different Life') on who's got the cutest kid character. Your Ariel is just so frickin adorable! She's adorabley innocent, yet she's knowledgeable in her own way. The whole her wanting to meet Willow thing so she can tell Tara if she should marry her or not was so cute. I loved it!

"Heaven's not a place that you go when you die...it's that moment in life when you actually feel alive"

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Re: Survivor - Ash Island

Postby Still Waters T » Tue Mar 15, 2005 12:13 pm

Another great update! :bounce And I'm adding my thanks to the bunch of thanks being given to you for the update. :D



Quote:
“Small-town thing. You can imagine what he said about Kent.”


Am I crazy if this made me suspect that Kent is gay too? :eyebrow But then with this:

Quote:
she was especially offended that I’d been with Kent.


- I bumped right back to 'nah...I'm over-analyzing it' :hmm So I'm thinking that if Kent is gay as well, and if they both wanted kids, that they helped each other out and had Ariel. Or they were together, had Ariel, and found out they were both gay. Or again, I'm over-analyzing, and Kent is straight, but Tara found out she was and is gay, and people are talking about him and her because they figure he must've not been enough for her and turned her gay...? Okay, I'll stop speculating now :p



Should be interesting if and when Willow tells Tara about her playgirl days. :laugh YES Score! :party Willow will be meeting Ariel! :banana I'm imagining what Artemis said about her future visit and meeting Ariel:

Quote:
Assuming, of course, that Ariel doesn't open the conversation with "Are you going to marry Mommy?" and follow it up with a full interrogation that reduces Willow to a state of nerve-wracked confusion


That could be hysterical :lmao :D



Although I love the in-betweens, I do love the island updates as well, even though there aren't that many or long W/T alone times. :D They're still alllll good! And it's fun reading about all the challenges and intrigue and the alliances and everything. :read



I'm of course hoping Ariel will like Willow right away too. She seems like she likes her already, but still I can't wait to see how that goes! :bounce



And of the cutest kid characters - can't forget Hadley in "Never A Night Like This" :)



Liv :kitty

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Re: Survivor - Ash Island

Postby littlecrazy80 » Tue Mar 15, 2005 2:14 pm

Great update! :D The interaction between Tara and Ariel is so cute. I´m curious now if Ariel will tell her mommy to marry Willow or not. :p



*lil´c*

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Re: Survivor - Ash Island

Postby amazonaa » Tue Mar 15, 2005 3:37 pm

Hey. That was great and I hate people who are all judgy about that kind of stuff. It makes me very angry!!:mad



I think you did a good job at how Tara explained the definition of dyke to Ariel.



Great job. More soon, please.





brittney





~Good friends help you move. Real friends helpyou move the body.~

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Re: Survivor - Ash Island

Postby ravenousgrape » Tue Mar 15, 2005 4:44 pm

Awww... Ariel's so cute. I don't know if I'm reading between the lines too much, but Tara's "it can't hurt me anymore" made me think that she wasn't the winner of the game. Which means Willow had probably won after all. I'm probably reading between the lines too much... then again, if physical strength is a huge factor at the end part of the game, Tara probably wouldn't have won anyway.



Hmm. The only Jared I personally know is a bigot too. Huh. What a coincidence. I'm already picturing some stocky little rascal with a rat face and yellow teeth with a little tent shaped space in the middle just big enough for you to shoot a miniature cyanide-based projectile through...



So Kent is gay. That kind of explains some things... and it kind of doesn't. Either they decided to be in denial together or it involved drugs... or it could be one of those numerous other things I'm thinking of but am too lazy to type.



Anyway, really looking forward to the next episode!

Do not misunderestimate the intellectial brilliantliness of religious fundamentalistics.

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Re: Survivor - Ash Island

Postby wimpy0729 » Tue Mar 15, 2005 6:56 pm

Hey Debra



What another great installment in this interesting journey.



I'm going to echo the others by saying that I loved the way Tara explained things to Ariel. It was very open and very honest. I'm going to also echo the sentiment of the others loving the little girl and the adorable way her mind works. You know what they say--out of the mouths of babes...



So now what do we get next--a trip back to the island perhaps, or do we get the date and Ariel's reaction to Willow? Either way, I can't wait to see what you have for us. I'm not even going to make a guess on the outcome on the island. I like the anticipation, and we all know how good you are at teasing us along, and I for one, love it.



Wimpy



"There was plenty of magic." ~ Tara

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Re: Survivor - Ash Island

Postby cperrins78 » Wed Mar 16, 2005 4:07 am

Great update as usual. I loved the gentle explanation that Tara gave to her daughter. It was so sweet. I can't wait for Willow's visit. Please keep up the good work.





Christina

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OT: Asher is a Toddler!

Postby JustSkipIt » Wed Mar 16, 2005 6:26 am

Ok, this is completely and totally off-topic. I'll post replies to comments later or tomorrow morning. But...



Asher has been taking 2-3 steps if you say, "walk to me..." Last night while we were watching Amazing Race (SPOILER: Goodbye and Good ridance to Debbie and Bianca), he just let go of the coffee table and started walking around the living room. Walked over to Rachel, got a hug, walked back over to me (another hug), walked over to the dog who got up and walked away (of course), walked over to the other dog who is stupid enough to lay there while he mauls her. And continued doing so for an hour! He's walking!!!!



I'm excited and also a bit melancholy. Excited because: Asher's walking. But melancholy because he's growing up so fast and he's so wonderful and he'll eventually turn into a teenager and think I'm stupid and talk on the phone all day (or whatever device exists in 15 years) and all that...



Thanks for letting me share!

"It is better to waste one's youth than to do nothing with it at all- Georges Courteline

"Censorship, like charity, should begin at home; but unlike charity, it should end there." - Chare Booth Luce

My latest story: Survivor - Ash Island

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Re: OT: Asher is a Toddler!

Postby mollyig » Wed Mar 16, 2005 6:53 am

Oh the walking stage. Going on past experience with my niece and nephew, next comes the "move anything at their level to a higher place" stage!




You stay the course, you hold the line, you keep it all together.

You're the one true thing I know I can believe in
- Sarah McLachlan

mollyig
 


Re: OT: Asher is a Toddler!

Postby MissKittys Ball O Yarn » Wed Mar 16, 2005 7:55 am

:aww that's great Debra. Babies are so sweet when they're able to get into things themselves. :p



It's like...one day you're looking at them and they're drooling on your shirt and getting mashed carrots in their hair....and the next minute they are reading and writing and cultivating weird obsessions with Lizzy Maguire...



Just remember, that now is the time to move everything you don't want in his mouth to higher ground... such as



1 mascara (any brand)

2 Dog food ( for some reason children think it's gourmet)

3 Little strings on the carpet (no matter how small and insignificant they seem)



Oh and... Have Fun!



xoxo

Emms

To the smut! ~ Me

Edited by: MissKittys Ball O Yarn  at: 3/16/05 6:56 am
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finally had to have a look

Postby ShyCanuck » Wed Mar 16, 2005 9:09 am

Hi there,



I've always enjoyed your stories but was a little skeptical about this one. It has nothing to do with your writing but my absolute dislike of reality shows...LOL. But I digress. Anyway I finally gave it a look and I do have to say it was well worth it. I really enjoy the interspersing of the Willow and Tara dating scenes along with the plot of the show.



Keep up the good work and I look forward to the next update.

ShyCanuck
 


Re: Survivor - Ash Island

Postby tarawhipped » Wed Mar 16, 2005 10:13 am

Wonderful update Debra! I don't think I'm alone in admitting I'm torn between wanting to see the excitement of the show and how those events progressed, and wanting to see more of the happy, sweet, post-show interactions. Ariel is adorable, and I love the way Tara talks to her...so loving and patient and honest. Whichever way you update next, I can't wait.



:peace -Cam



What should I be but just what I am? - Edna St.Vincent Millay

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Re: Survivor - Ash Island

Postby stillrunning » Wed Mar 16, 2005 10:41 am

Aww go Asher!! I understand your reluctance to want him to grow up though...I'm sure my mom went through the same thing. They're just so little and innocent at that age...and then they start walking...then running. Then before you know it they're driving away.



And that got really depressing...so I'll just stick with GO ASHER!

"Heaven's not a place that you go when you die...it's that moment in life when you actually feel alive"

stillrunning
 


Re: Survivor - Ash Island

Postby JustSkipIt » Wed Mar 16, 2005 8:27 pm

mollyig – Well, time with your girl is very important as is work so I can understand. If you’re like me, when you get too busy, you sometimes read but don’t fb. Which is totally fine IMHO.



Yes, Ariel is quite a cool kid. And honestly, based on some of the 6-7 year old’s I know. They are surprisingly intelligent and well spoken. My (almost) 6 year old nephew stood up at his kindergarten class the day before the election and gave a speech on why everyone should vote for Kerry. I think Willow is feeling pretty good about meeting Ariel but we’ll see how it all goes. Thanks for your feedback.



PS: Did you know that I used that Sarah McLachlan song in Paths when Eliza proposes to Michelle? I though the song was just perfect and beautiful.



hidden Watson – Really? Night-time? I though you were in America. Hmmm-my assumption. I get up at 5:00 so I can work out every morning although days like today I allow myself to sleep in until 6:00. I’ve always been a morning person and it’s a good time to have a little time to myself and get everything ready for the day.



Yes, I think it’s very confusing to Ariel to try and track that her mama (let alone Willow) is shown on TV every week on the island but is home now. She’s a cutie. That’s for sure. I’ll withhold any comments on Kent meeting Willow but will say that he’s a good guy and supportive of the relationship.



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Still no clue about the outcome of the game. That's fine, I can wait. It's like reading two parallel, but equally addictive stories at the same time, it's great.
I must admit that I don’t know who wins yet. I know who are in the final two (not telling) but I haven’t decided or rolled the winner yet.



Artemis – Hey look! You’re gay now. Tee hee. I love the term: “Spawn of Tara.” I’m sure that’s how she’d like her daughter to be referred to. Glad you like her so much. People like Jared’s parents are idiots but realistic ones.



Yes, Willow has definitely been a playgirl. And they’re having some fun about it right now. But fact is that Willow’s serious about this relationship and I think that Tara knows it.



BTW: If anyone is disappointed in the amount of smut (or lack thereof) in my updates, I recommend Chris’s Smut Bunnies.



Emms – Thanks. Lol. Yes, I guess the kid conversation did upstage W&T. It actually created some trouble for me since I thought it up when I couldn’t sleep and had to shift all the “in-between” parts down one to insert it. Quite a bit of work so I’m glad it paid off. Woo hoo for cookies. Willow & Ariel meeting soon.



stillrunning – Ahhh. Thanks for the compliment about Ariel. Yes, she’ can’t wait.



Still Waters T – You’re so so very welcome. I’m sorry to be cryptic about Kent. It’s not that I’m trying to be unnecessarily mysterious. It’s just kind of the structure of the story to reveal things one at a time and kind of out of order. Just to get everyone on the right path I will say this:



1. Kent is not gay.

2. Ariel was not a planned pregnancy.



I think Willow’s playgirl days aren’t something that needs a long explanation but it will certainly be mentioned more. Ariel and Willow’s visit will be very nice.



You are right about the Island lacking W/T alone time. I’m trying to be realistic about the format of Survivor and also about CBS’s editorial policies. At the same time, I will be bending the rules somewhat on the W/T Island updates. Thanks.



littlecrazy80 – Thanks. I’m glad you like it so much.



amazonaa – Thanks. People can be jerks but luckily they are a small portion of the world. Thanks.



ravenousgrape – Glad you like Ariel. Hmmm. I’m not saying who won. I don’t think I know any Jareds although my nephew has a friend by that name. I assume he’s not a jerk.



See reply to Still Waters above re: Kent. Thanks so much.



wimpy0729 – Thanks so much. I’m glad to be getting such a positive reaction to Tara and Ariel. Island update coming up next. Glad you’re loving the suspense.



cperrins78 – Thanks. I’m glad you liked Tara’s talk with Ariel.



On Asher Walking – Thanks to everyone for letting me share

mollyig – Yeah. I know everyone says, “Just wait until he walks. You’ll never rest again.” He’s a pretty tall kid and has been reaching up for everything for months so I’m not sure we’ll have to move that much. Just chase him a lot.



meretricious – I completely understand about your god-daughter. I’ve got hmmm… 5 nieces and nephews from my brothers and sisters and then Rachel has another 5 (although some of them are our age). Kids are just so amazing! Like your goddaughter, Asher is pretty good at his colors even though he’s 14 months old (tomorrow). He’s not on the alphabet yet but he’s very smart and also very funny. It’s amazing how fun he is every day!



Re: update. Yes, Willow is quite smooth. And it doesn’t help that she really wants to impress Tara. You’re exactly right about the cause/source of Jared’s attitude problem. You’re right about Tara laying the groundwork. I’ve known people who were somewhat closeted with their kids and it always caused problems. Kids are naturally kind and curious and lying to them or hiding makes no sense to me.



I think that you are somewhat right about these updates reading shorter. I think that’s because they are largely dialog whereas the island ones are largely action.



emms – Lol about your thought about they getting into stuff and being cute. He’s adorable I tell you. And Lol about your list of things to move. We keep the dog food in their crates but Asher likes to play in their drinking water. (Yuck and also a mess). Thanks.



ShyCanuck – Welcome and thanks for giving the fic a chance. I can certainly understand your feelings about reality TV. As I’ve said before, I love TAR and Survivor and hate most others. But thanks for giving this a chance. I hope the amount of W/T makes it worthwhile for you.



Cam – Thanks. I’m glad you like both show and non-show. Yes, Tara is all those things with her little girl. Glad you like. Thanks.



stillrunning – Thanks so much. He’s amazing and it does make me sad to think of him all grown up. Luckily, there’s lots of time before that happens.

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Re: Survivor - Ash Island

Postby Tempest Duer » Wed Mar 16, 2005 10:55 pm

Something tells me that Ariel will like Willow.

I got bitten by a drunk lesbian! Does that mean I'll turn into one?



~my friend Mary

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Re: Survivor - Ash Island

Postby Irishgrl3 » Thu Mar 17, 2005 11:24 am

Wow, Asher is walking, how exciting! Pretty soon he'll be moving so fast you guys won't be able to catch him. :D It is true the whole phone thing, we have a 14 year old and I believe that she has Super Glued the phone to her ear. Hee-hee



Speaking of parenting, Tara has a great relationship with Ariel. They communicate so well with Ariel being so young. She seems to really want to meet Willow. The marriage comment regarding Willow was funny! Wonderful update.

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Survivor - Ash Island

Postby JustSkipIt » Sun Mar 20, 2005 1:18 pm

Tempest Duer – We’ll see how that goes…

Irishgrl3 – Yeah, he’s pretty amazing. Lol about 14 year-olds and phones. I’m glad you like Tara and Ariel. It’s the way I’d want to be with my children when they are old enough.


Title – Survivor – Ash Island

Part 9 – Week Four

Author – JustSkipIt

Pairing – Who do you think? (W/T of course)

Feedback – Oh yes.

Spoilers–None

Ratiing – G to PG

Disclaimer – I own none of these characters nor do I own Survivor. And believe it or not, I also don’t own any small islands. On the other hand, this island is fictional so let’s say I own it. I’m making no money from this fiction and intend no copyright infringement.

Note – Yep, I straight out (imagine that – straight he he) stole the immunity challenge from Palau. I actually already had another challenge written but I loved this one from Palau so much that I decided to use it instead.


Akathla Team – Returning from Tribal Council
“Ok, how in the hell did that happen?” Willow asks as the five remaining team members walk back to camp.

“Everyone voted for what they thought was best for this team,” Mac argues.

“Really?” Buffy questiones, “so three people on this team thought that keeping Andrew over me would be good for a team that has never won an immunity challenge?”

The five players arrive at their fire and begin silently eating some plantains.

Confessional Caption – Xander- Construction Worker
“Well, I knew I wasn’t the smartest person out here but this week really proves that. I believed Mac that Oz was with him and thought I was voting Buffy off 4-2 but instead, I tied it all up. I mean it could have been me that went home. I gotta start thinking smarter to win this game.”

Confessional Caption – Willow – Software Startup Owner
“That could have gone tremendously wrong! What a day. I mean first off we lost the challenge but Tara came over here.” She smiles a somewhat silly smile, “Ok. So sue me. I like her even though she’s on the other team. I know she’s here to win the money and so am I but she’s very cute and there’s just something about her. But maybe I shouldn’t be thinking this way. Everything could have gone wrong today. I’ve got to get my head in the game.”

We see night-vision shots of the five-person team sleeping uneasily.

MFashnek – Day 9
The MFashnek team sits around the fire drinking water and coffee. Tara tends to Riley’s injury with a fresh poultice while Joyce and Richard pass out fruit and nuts. All the MFashnek team is peppering her with questions about the interactions between Akathla, their camp, their energy level. “Hey everyone,” Riley interjects, “let’s let Tara tell us what she wants.”

“Their camp is n-nice but not like ours. The shelter is smaller and less water-tight. They have much less f-food, of course.” Seeing Kendra scratching at her arm, she picks up a small cup of a paste and hands it to her. Kendra takes the cup and scoops out some of the mixture and rubs it in before handing it to Faith.

“They definitely have a power split,” she continues explaining, “Buffy and Willow on one side, Andrew and Mac on the other and I really c-couldn’t tell where the other two fell.” She smiled for a moment before saying, “But they sent a present.” She pulls a small bottle which is about one third full of shampoo from under the log smiling and hands it to Joyce. The older woman, Faith, and Kendra stand up and immediately walk toward the beach.

Robin also stands up. “I’ll go gather fire wood until you three finish with the soap.”

“I’ll come with you,” Richard agrees.

Tara continues tending to Riley’s leg.

Confessional Caption – Riley – Pro Triathalete
Riley sits on a rock with his leg outstretched in front of him. We can see an ugly red cut running up the side of his calf, about 7 inches long. “I can’t believe this. I feel like dead-weight to this team. Who would have believed it? I’m in the best shape of my life and I’m completely useless and that girl” he points at Tara across the beach, “is brilliant. She’s been doctoring my leg, made a paste to keep us from getting bit to death by bugs, and even made a sunscreen from roots or something. Not to mention finding the best and non-poisonous berries.”

We see Tara swim up to Kendra, Faith, and Joyce who are finishing bathing.

Akathla – Day 9
Suddenly we are watching the Akathla team as a wild pig races past their fire. Buffy, Xander, and Mac jump to their feet with Willow and Oz slightly behind them. All seems to be pandemonium for a few minutes as we hear their yelling and the squealing of the pig. Buffy and Xander dive from different directions toward the pig, colliding heavily but the others manage to keep it from escaping. From her position on the ground, Buffy grabs the animal around the leg and holds on until Mac can grab it around the middle. The team cheers loudly as they look at the doomed animal.

“Well, we’re finally going to have some protein,” Mac proclaims as he holds the pig up.

“Akathla!” Oz and Xander cheer together.

Willow looks a little sick at the thought and announces nervously, “I’m going to check tree mail.” A moment later we see her rushing off into the woods.

Confessional Caption – Buffy – College Student
Buffy is laughing as she says, “You know you don’t think the stupid reward challenges have anything to do with survival skills. But a few days ago we had to catch pigs and now… we caught a pig.” She smiles a big smile.

MFashnek
The men are now bathing while the women gather firewood. They seem to work well as a team. In a shot a short time later, we see Richard and Riley using the hooks to attempt to catch fish. We see bits and pieces of the Survivors working on their home and eating the small fish they have caught.

Akathla
The team surrounds the fire noisily and appreciatively enjoying the pork. They seem relaxed and unified. “This could be a strong team,” Willow comments as she looks around.

“Yes, we can,” Mac agrees.

MFashnek – Day 10
“We’ve got tree mail,” Riley and Kendra call as they walk back into the fire area. We can see that the man is limping heavily.

“Teamwork, speed, and strength
Will be the key you need to unlock this challenge.”

They all nod their heads.

Akathla – Day 10
Xander reads the same tree mail and the team cheers with a renewed sense of teamwork.

Reward Challenge
Jeff greets the teams and invites both to see their new opponents. Akathla sees for the first time that Darla is gone while MFashnek sees that Andrew is no longer with the Akathla team. “How are you all eating?” Jeff asks.

“Great,” Xander answers quickly, “we’ve been eating pig for the last day and a half.”

The MFashnek team looks quite jealous but cheers on their opponents nonetheless. “Well, that’s good,” Jeff tells them because you will need it today.” He explains the challenge: “Each team will have five players participate. You will be chained together.” He holds up chains which will encircle the Survivors’s waists and cuff their wrists. “You will run together into the jungle and through an obstacle course. Each station of the course will have a key that you can use to unlock any one person’s locks. That person will then run with you but no longer chained to you. The first team to navigate the course, unlock all the Survivors, and return to this mat will win.”

“Do you want to know what you are playing for?” he asks unnecessarily. When the teams all cheer he waves his hand and a large yacht comes into view. “The winning team will have four hours on this yacht. It has food and a bar.”

We see the Survivors ready for the race. The five remaining Akathla members are chained together as are Faith, Kendra, Tara, Robin, and Joyce. Richard and Riley sit on the mat waiting for their teammates. At Jeff’s shout of “Go” the two teams begin to race across the sand toward the jungle. Both teams run awkwardly due to the chains but MFashnek reaches the jungle steps before Akathla.

Once the teams have entered the jungle, Jeff climbs a tower which allows him to comment on the action. The first obstacle is a climbing wall. Faith and Robin put out their hands to boost Kendra to the top. Once up, Kendra pulls Tara and Joyce after her while Faith and Robin push the two women. Faith and Robin then easily climb the wall. Akathla has a harder time as Mac boosts Buffy up the wall. The blonde has a harder time pulling Willow and Oz over and they wait for Mac and Xander to climb over. By the time Akathla has reached the ground, MFashnek has unchained Faith who runs ahead to scope out the next obstacle.

Seeing that it is a low-net, she scoots under and reaches in to pull through the remaining members of her team as well as she can. Mac does the same for his team. Now Faith and Robin run alongside Buffy and Mac while the others trail behind them. Robin crosses the balance beam and waits in the center for his team while Faith waits to bring up the rear. Buffy similarly waits on the beam for teammates. Once they reach the beam, Tara, Joyce, and Kendra easily step onto the beam and with Robin and Faith’s help walk slowly across safely. Willow starts across but is almost pulled off as Oz loses his balance and nearly falls. Only the chains connecting him to Willow and Xander keep the young man from falling. As it is, all three give a scream as the chains pull on them.

By the time the Akathla team has righted itself, Joyce is running toward the staggered tires. She manages to high-step into them while Robin helps Tara and Kendra through the tires. They are already unlocking Kendra when Buffy and Mac reach the tires to help Oz and Willow through. Xander follows them.

MFashnek is surprised as they reach a sign which reads, “Carry the final person back to the beach for the key.” Looking at each other they shrug and Robin picks up Tara in his arms and begins to run toward the beach with Faith, Kendra, and Joyce alongside him. Akathla, on the other hand, has to take turns with Buffy and Mac both carrying Oz from the jungle toward the mat. When they emerge from the foliage, they can already see MFashnek celebrating.

They finish their journey to the mat and unlock Oz before dropping to sit. Jeff tells the MFashnek team that they can board the yacht now but also tells them that they can take one person from Akathla with them. Tara and Willow share a glance but the quick conference ends in Joyce inviting Buffy. She gives quick hugs to her teammates before accompanying MFashnek on the yacht.

Once aboard the yacht, the MFashnek team finds the buffet on the top deck. They quickly grab plates and begin to pile them with meat, potatoes, vegetables, salad, and desert. As she eats, Buffy keeps thanking the other team for inviting her. The team finds places to sit and after getting drinks from the bar, enjoys their food and drink. The conversation is light and discusses the difficulties of being on the island—hunger, sleep, heat and rain, and bugs. As the evening goes on we see groups beginning to move to different areas to talk. Kendra, Tara, and Faith move to the bow of the ship and confirm their alliance.

Richard, Riley, and Robin go try their hand at deep-sea fishing while Joyce and Buffy stay in the food area. They hug tightly and we see Joyce looking at Buffy for injuries or other signs of distress. “You’re thin, how are you?” she asks.

“No thinner than you are, mom,” Buffy replies.

“What are the alliances like over there?” Joyce asks the blonde directly.

“Willow and I are tight,” Buffy explains, “Oz and Xander are question marks. What about here?”

“The three girls are together,” Joyce explains, “I can’t tell if everyone else has explicit alliances or just thinks so. Richard thinks I’m with him and I think Tara does too but she’s also smart. Too smart to believe in Santa Claus.”

At the end of the four hours Jeff comes to tell the Survivors that their time is up. Each grabs another handful of food and hugs Buffy who walks the other direction down the beach.

Akathla Camp
“I wonder what she’s doing,” Willow muses as she stares at the fire.

“It was a drag,” Buffy says jokingly as Willow and Oz jump up to hug her. She looks around and reaches under her shirt to pull out 2 cookies and a few handfuls of food for her four teammates.

Akathla – Day 11
“New day,” Buffy says as she stretches and splashes water on her face. “This team can be strong. We’ve eaten a pig with our bare hands and we can stay strong in this game.” She walks back to the fire and makes a speech to the group.

Immunity Challenge
Both teams stand on their mats, looking excited. “This is the happiest group of Survivors I’ve ever seen on day 11,” Jeff remarks.

“Well, J,” Faith remarks, “yesterday we got food and drink and we’re ready to win another challenge today.”

“What about Akathla?” Jeff asks.

“We’re still enjoying the pig,” Oz explains.

“Well, you’re going to need your strength for today’s challenge,” Jeff says. He points to a large oval “track” marked off in the water. It goes from where the water is about one foot deep to where it is about 2.5 feet deep and is about 40 yards by 8 yards in size. “Today you are going to play tag. The first team to tag the other wins.” Everyone nods their understanding. “Five players will be clipped together,” he holds up a rope with carabineer clips attached to it, “and each will be carrying this.” He holds up a canvas mail sack and explains, “It holds 20 pounds of sand. If you are too tired, you can leave the challenge at any time but your weight stays.” Everyone gasps theatrically. “You must give your weight to another player,” he finishes, “when any team member from one team tags one from another team, the challenge is over.” He turns to MFashnek. “The same players can’t sit out so who is sitting out this challenge?”

Kendra and Joyce hold up their hands.

Next we see the five players for each team linked together at either side of the large track. Each person wears a pack and waits for Jeff’s command of start. When he yells “Start” each team takes its first steps through the water. As soon as they start, it is apparent that Riley can not complete the challenge. He takes off his bag and hands it to Robin who puts it over his shoulder along with his own 20 pounds. By the time the teams have slogged about halfway it is apparent that the slower and weaker members just pull the others back. At Faith’s urging, Tara takes off her pack and hands it to the stronger girl, dropping from the race. Willow does the same, handing her pack to Mac.

By the time the teams have gone another half-way around the circle, Richard has discovered that he was not as strong as he apparently though. His pack goes to Robin who now carries 60 pounds to Faith’s 40. The Akathla team has a more even distribution even after Oz hands his pack to Xander. Both teams tire in the direct sunlight as they carry their weight through the deep and the shallow water.

With their teammates cheering them on Robin and Faith carry their 100 pounds of weight while Mac, Xander, and Buffy carry their packs. MFashnek is losing ground as Akathla makes a run every time they reach the shallows. Seeing that they are losing ground, Robin shouts to Faith to give him another pack and she does, meaning that he is carrying 80 pounds. Even though he is in great shape, he can’t outrun the more evenly distributed Akathla team. It takes three more laps after Robin takes the 4th bag but Buffy jumps forward, tagging Faith on the arm before all five remaining Survivors collapse in the water as Oz and Willow cheer and run into the water to celebrate with their team.

Confessional Caption – Richard – Small-Town Mayor
“Well I’ll tell you what. I really like this Riley boy but he’s costing us too much.”

We see Joyce and Richard talking to Kendra. The three are motioning down the beach to where Riley sits on a rock.

Confessional Caption – Faith – Personal Trainer
Faith is walking away from a conversation with Richard and Joyce. “Well, I agree with Richard for today but he’s all talking about a weak link. You want to know who our weak link is? It’s him. The only reason Riley’s weak is because he’s hurt. I mean, I don’t expect anything more from Tara or Joyce. They are who they are and Tara’s worth her weight in gold but Richard is dead weight.”

We see the MFashnek team walking to tribal council. They enter and place their torches in the designated places. “Well,” Jeff starts, “this is your first trip to tribal council after losing a challenge.”

“Jeff,” Faith tells him, “we lost today pure and simple.”

“Robin,” Jeff starts, “at the end of today’s challenge you were carrying 80 pounds. Do you feel like you were trying to carry this team?”

“Jeff,” Robin says, “this is a very strong and very fast team. We were short some of our strength today and it cost us but I still believe we are the better team.”

“Is that right, Faith?” Jeff asks next.

Faith shakes her head at the question. “You’re damn right, J,” she tells the host. “This is a very very strong team. Most of the people on this team are giving their 100% and that’s all we can ask.”

“With that,” Jeff says, “it’s time to vote.”

Faith votes first and we see her write down Riley’s name. “Riley,” she addresses the camera, “it’s nothing personal but we’re going to do best in this game with strength.” Next Kendra, Tara, and Robin vote. Riley writes down Richard’s name and then Joyce and Richard vote.

Jeff carries back the bucket and declares. “I’ll read the votes. First vote: Riley. Second vote: Riley. Third vote: Richard. Fourth vote: Riley.” He takes a breath as he opens the next vote. “And the fifth person voted off Survivor-Ash Island is Riley.” Riley pats Tara and Robin on the shoulders and has his torch snuffed out.

Next week on Survivor
Voice-over: “Old wounds come back:”
Buffy is shouting, “You double-crossed us!”

Voice-over: “Tempers are short.”
“Why don’t you see how you do without Tara if you think she’s so expendable,” Faith screams at Richard, “the rest of us want her around.”

Next week on Survivor


"It is better to waste one's youth than to do nothing with it at all- Georges Courteline
"Censorship, like charity, should begin at home; but unlike charity, it should end there." - Chare Booth Luce
My latest story: Survivor - Ash Island
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nice update

Postby cperrins78 » Sun Mar 20, 2005 5:20 pm

Great update. I think it was a sweet reunion with Buffy and her mom. Can't wait to see how this all plays out and who makes it to the final four.





Christina

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Re: Survivor - Ash Island

Postby hidden watson » Sun Mar 20, 2005 5:49 pm

Edited to organize my comments and of course to add more comments.



First off, that was an awesome IC, I'm so glad to see it repeated here cos it's probably one of the best challenges on Survivor, ever :applause



Second, voting off Riley a la Jeff on Palau? Not such a good idea, I know he's hurt but he can still lift and stuff. I read the episode again (and your reply that you wrote this before the Jeff incident -- how awesome! talk about co-incidences) and he's hurt more badly than I initially realized, so I'm more okay with his elimiination.



Something else I noticed is how strong Buffy seems to be. She grabbed the pig, helped carry Oz back to the starting mat in the RC and stayed till the end of the IC. Residual slayer powers or she works out a lot?



Not a huge amount of W/T interaction except the one glance at the end of the RC, but it doesn't take anything away from how much I'm enjoying this.
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“I wonder what she’s doing,” Willow muses as she stares at the fire.
Was she thinking about Buffy or Tara? :hmm



Next time Akathla loses an IC, it's a tight choice between Xander and Mac. Xander's an ass but Mac's more dangerous, the tribes will merge soon and Mac's not really someone Buffy, Willow and even Oz wants around. On the other hand, they need his physical strength. On the MFashnek side, Richard's not endeared himself at all. But there are other threats too. Joyce, even though she seems to hold an important vote, is herself be a weak link simply because she's weaker physically. I don't like it but I can see where Richard is coming from if he (in the teaser) is really plotting to get rid of Tara, cos she's useful and is someone who is likely to slip into the final two without anyone noticing. Intriguing!



About the US thing, I used to live in New York, does that count? Mostly I'm one of those "global travelers" who've lived all over the world and don't really have a home. C'est ma vie.



By the way, your son walking? Congratulations! Well done, Asher. Now you really have to watch him, cos soon he's walking more, and then comes the running, and climbing, and taking things apart. Isn't it fun to watch them grow up?





Edited by: hidden watson at: 3/21/05 4:27 am
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Re: Survivor - Ash Island

Postby the hero factor » Sun Mar 20, 2005 7:09 pm

Quote:
She walks back to the fire and makes a speech to the group.




Was this a dig at all the speechifying Buffy did in season seven? 'Cause it sure made me laugh.



Great update. I can't wait to see the Willow-Ariel meeting. That should be cute.

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Re: Survivor - Ash Island

Postby JustSkipIt » Sun Mar 20, 2005 7:18 pm

Quote:
Second, voting off Riley a la Jeff on Palau?




OH yeah, I forgot to say that I wrote this part weeks before the whole Jeff and Palau thing. Yes, I rewrote the challenge because I liked the challenge but the reason they lost and Riley's being voted off was the same.

"It is better to waste one's youth than to do nothing with it at all- Georges Courteline

"Censorship, like charity, should begin at home; but unlike charity, it should end there." - Chare Booth Luce

My latest story: Survivor - Ash Island

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Re: Survivor - Ash Island

Postby meretricious » Sun Mar 20, 2005 9:24 pm

so the akathla team finally won a roll of your dice, or you took pity on them. and xander is aware he's an idiot, but i still don't have any sympathy for him. i was suprised oz didn't last longer with his sandbag, i don't think of him as weak especially, just compact. and your willow eats pig, huh? less jewish than the canon willow. :)

so riley made himself the easy elimination target, postponing any real drama with the mfashneks for the time being. i liked joyce being a little cagey there, too, i think she may have some bargaining power before this is all over. how and when do they decide to combine the tribes, is it strictly a numbers thing? you still haven't gotten me to watch the actual tv show, but i've come close, very close. still loving this~mary

take me somewhere we can be alone
make me somewhere i can call a home~zero 7

Edited by: meretricious at: 3/20/05 8:25 pm
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