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Re: Part 16a

Postby Insanity » Tue Aug 31, 2004 1:08 pm

I knew it.. this was to good to be true.

There has to be an evil (or really stupid) guy who wants to break it all apart AGAIN.



I'm assuming Oz is back huh? Well, what can I say? I have faith in you, that it'll all work out nicely. :peace



Insanity



P.s.: do we... ähm does Willow have to wait much longer??

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It's always sudden! Tara; the body

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Re: Part 16a

Postby WickedReds » Tue Aug 31, 2004 1:17 pm

I have a bad feeling that oz is going to walk in the pic once more... just when r girls r getting back to being together again... Damn oz :rage ... nice update jeanne... hopefully every thing will work out and yeah... all the good stuff..



-reds:willow



my banana dances for smut :banana

:bigwave Kevin :eatme

Tara in a wet shirt, Tara in a wet shirt. Tara in. A. Wet. Shirt. “Of course.”-Willow From Remember to Breath By Yellow Crayon



Now that just sucks- me

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uh-oh!

Postby Arwen276 » Tue Aug 31, 2004 1:26 pm



This sounds very menacing, I'm spooked!



oh and BAD BAD OZ! :p I hope he won't do something drastic ...





More!!



~Arwen

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Re: uh-oh!

Postby sam darls » Tue Aug 31, 2004 2:09 pm

Ooh, sounds scary!!hehe..wonderful update :heart . Love sam xx

"Sometimes things happen between people that you don't really expect. And sometimes the things that are important are the ones that seem the weirdest or the most wrong. And those are the ones that change your life." - Jessie Sammler (Evan Rachel Wood)

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Re: uh-oh!

Postby YMKA » Tue Aug 31, 2004 3:44 pm

Thanks! And hey!!!....I didn't take ALL tissues!!!....:p



I knew it....I just knew it....It's Oz....isn't ???? Arg.... it's evening here already....update?:lol :lol ....Can't wait to read more...Tho now...no free show for Oz.....so W/T should wait :lol :lol :lol ...He can't be mad....he walked away....no letters no phone calls...nada....and he did get his second chance... so...bugger off dude!!!! [sorry...:blush ]



Thanks!!!

:peace :heart

M.

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Re: uh-oh!

Postby Arron CFF » Tue Aug 31, 2004 4:29 pm

Ohh please can Buffy find him in the bushes and beat the living stuffing out of him ..jerk... And I was glad to see the family was safe and Willow drove ok after being in the saloon ...Where can I get one lol.(Sorry it was just to funny not to mention.. The visual images of them driving in a Bar.:laugh ) I can't wait till tonight to see whats going to happen next.

Arron

She walks in beauty, Like the night of cloudless climes and starry skies; And all that's best of dark and bright; Meet in her aspect, and her eyes. ~ by Byron ~

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Replies

Postby kindagay » Tue Aug 31, 2004 5:42 pm

Hello kitties :wave ,



Some individual replies before I post 16b. Thanks to everyone who left feedback :flower



Uhm, seeing as how EVERYONE seems to think it's Oz following them, I'm just gonna say wait & see. Oh, & I loved all of your rants regarding the stupid Oz-moron, they all made me :lol & I agree with them all too :)



RaVeN: Okay, I didn't know why you found that line funny until I read Arron's feedback. You know I meant a big family car right? *Jeanne dies of embarrassment*

I love penguins too, but, I'm more like Lydia - I always go to see the monkeys first.



Irishgrl3: The family outing was nice - I quite agree :)

Calm down - yes Willow :luv Tara & nothing's gonna come between them.



SoL: They are a lovely family.

Yep, guys are stupid sometimes &, more very soon



tarawhipped: Oh, nothing's gonna spoil the domestic bliss don't worry. & the angst won't be too bad.



DreamLover: Glad you liked - more very soon :)



Wimpy: Thanks for saying I did a good job with the menacing - I was a bit nervous about it :)

Next update will follow shortly



alysagoddess85: Uhm, there's no fan hitting in 16b, but, there will be soon



Insanity: It was getting a little too good to be true, I just had to throw a spanner in the works - makes for a more interesting story. But, it will work out nicely - I promise. :)

& no, Willow doesn't have to wait much longer



WickedReds: Everything will work out & our girls will have much good stuff :)



Arwen: You're spooked? - Cool! Oh, I mean, oops, sorry for spooking you.

Oz? Drastic? :hmm I don't know what you mean :whistle

More very soon



Sam: Hee hee, scary is good :) Glad you liked it



YMKA: Aww, I know you didn't take ALL the tissues - we were running low after the flashback scene anyway :)

Update coming up very soon.

No, Oz can not have a free show, but Willow won't be waiting too long. :wink

Don't be sorry, I completely agree with your rant about Oz :)



Arron: Thanks for helping me realise why RaVeN was laughing so hard. I honestly didn't make the connection between saloon & bar - I just meant a car. Still uhm, dying of embarrassment about that one. *Crawls under rock & hides*

Update coming soon



Right, as promised part 16b will follow very shortly



Hugs

Jeanne

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Tara: “Let me guess – you want me to lie on your lap while you feed me grapes, but my sweet, shy, precious, honey you’ve been too shy to ask – yes?” - GROWW by WannaFriendsBe

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Part 16b

Postby kindagay » Tue Aug 31, 2004 5:50 pm

Okay, they had a fun day out, the kids are in bed, now Willow & Tara can have some alone time. :)

Oh, the ending is kinda cliffhanger-ish, sorry in advance



Thoughts are in italics



______________________________________________________________________________



Once the twins were safely tucked up and fast asleep in bed Willow and Tara indulged in some long-awaited, and much needed, alone time.

The scene mirrored, almost exactly, the first night of their reunion; soft candle-light, a quiet mix of romantic music, two glasses of wine. The two women snuggled closely on the couch, talking, giggling, kissing. Gently, slowly, lovingly. Soft finger-tips and fiery lips lightly stroked and excited sensitive skin.



The ex-lovers shared a scintillating kiss that only served to heighten their senses. A slow burning passion started to build up steadily and Tara’s heart started to sing with joy at being re-united with her one and only true love.



‘Oh Goddess thank you, thank you, my Willow loves me, my sweet Willow… my angel… I love you and oh god how I’ve missed you.’



Soon the blonde was totally caught up in the euphoria of the moment and with a tiny growl and frenzied hand movement she desperately pulled Willow closer into her body. She deepened the kiss with an almost desperate passion and sucked greedily on Willow’s tongue, eliciting a distinct mewling sound from the delirious redhead.



Tara’s hands practically developed a mind of their own and started to feverishly roam the slim contours of Willow’s body. Before long her hands had worked their way beneath Willow’s pale pink t-shirt. On feeling the creamy smooth softness of her love’s skin, something seemed to give way inside of Tara and she pulled back slightly and started to simultaneously talk and shower kisses all over the redhead’s face.



“Darling, I missed you, I missed you so much… I’ve been so lost without you, baby, so lost…”



She paused to suckle feverishly on the throbbing pulse point of her lover’s neck and somehow that contact only served to fuel her desire to a heightened level, causing more fevered words to pour from the blonde’s lips, her voice passionate and sultry.



“I’m so glad I found you again, you’re my very heart and soul, a-and right now I-I really n-need to m-make l-love with you…” Suddenly Tara’s words trailed off and she tensed slightly as she felt Willow start to tremble in her arms.



Pulling back fully to gaze at her love through eyes that had become slightly glazed from desire, Tara was alarmed to see tears shimmering in the trembling redhead’s eyes.



“W-Willow? Baby? W-what is it? Please, angel, talk to me… please don’t cry... What’s wrong…? Oh god, is it still too soon? I’m sorry; I’ll s-stop…” She could get no further because she was interrupted by Willow who spoke through quivering lips.



“No Tara… I, I, just… It’s… what you just said to me… you are so… Oh god Tara, you are the one who is an angel, you’re so wonderful and so good to me… still loving me after how much I hurt you. Tara I love you. I’m so sorry for what I did to you. I was such a scared coward, I saw how much I hurt you and I should have fixed it then… I should have. All those years without you… oh god Tara all those years I left you hurting… I’m so sorry that I hurt our love. I… I hurt you and yet, you forgave me… and still I did nothing. I let you go and left you hurting. … I swear I’m gonna make it up to you Tara you’ll see… I will. I love you so much.” Willow ended with an almost whimper.



Tara, for her own part, had struggled to stay silent through Willow’s anguished tirade, but she had sensed that her red-haired love needed to get things out of her system. So she had stayed silent, letting all of her immense love shine through her sparkling blue eyes and running comforting fingers lovingly through the red tresses of the precious woman she held in her warm embrace.



Willow had barely ended her speech when she soon found she needed to open her mouth again - this time to take in an involuntary gasp of air, as she found herself on the receiving end of the most beautiful smile she had ever seen.



Widening her smile and gazing deeply and lovingly into slightly misty green eyes, Tara slowly and tenderly cupped her love’s soft cheeks and used her thumbs to rub away the traces of drying tears on Willow’s face. Then she spoke, in a sexy-sounding husky voice which, combined with her soothing touch, almost made Willow swoon.



“Darling please, no more… We’ve talked about the past enough, okay? So please, just hush now and no more tears… All that matters now is that we’re together, I am so thankful we found each other again. I love you with all that I am and I know that you love me too, and that is more than I could ever wish for. But please sweetheart, I need you to make love with me, I need you to show me how much you love me, just as I desperately need to show you how very much I love you too.”



Then Willow watched almost mesmerized as Tara lightly wet her lips with the tip of her tongue. It was the most erotic sight the redhead had seen in a long time, and she unconsciously shivered at the hunger and desire that was so evidently present deep within Tara.

Slowly, ever so slowly, Tara inched her moistened lips closer and closer.



When the two women’s lips were almost touching, Tara paused her movement and said in a voice heightened with arousal

“Please make me complete again, my love.” Then she covered Willow’s lips with her own and kissed her deeply with all eight years worth of pent up passion.



“Tara… Upstairs… Now.” Willow pleaded breathlessly.

Off Tara’s nod, the redhead stood on shaky legs, held out her hand and led the blonde up the stairs.





Outside in the bushes green eyes faded to a deathly, angry black and a deep, primal growl resonated through the night air.



_______________________________________________________________________________



So, shall we have W/T loving next? Or shall we deal with the peeping tom?



Hugs

Jeanne

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Tara: “Let me guess – you want me to lie on your lap while you feed me grapes, but my sweet, shy, precious, honey you’ve been too shy to ask – yes?” - GROWW by WannaFriendsBe

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Re: Part 16b

Postby tarawhipped » Tue Aug 31, 2004 6:06 pm

Oh my...uh...wow. That was so beautiful, and sweet and SEXY!



As for what to have happen next, there's a moral dilemma. I want the smut! But knowing someone's watching them is creepy. Can't Buffy just happen to be walking by, take out the bad guy (notice I'm no longer assuming it's OZ?:wink ), and then Willow and Tara can get their happy in blissful ignorance that anything was ever awry.



Is that asking too much?

:peace -Cameron



What should I be but just what I am? - Edna St.Vincent Millay

Edited by: tarawhipped at: 8/31/04 5:06 pm
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Re: Part 16b

Postby Arron CFF » Tue Aug 31, 2004 6:13 pm

Both

Let Buffy pummel him to bits and tell the girls in the morning.

I loved this update they are so sweet with one another.

Arron

She walks in beauty, Like the night of cloudless climes and starry skies; And all that's best of dark and bright; Meet in her aspect, and her eyes. ~ by Byron ~

Arron CFF
 


Re: Part 16b

Postby shuyaku » Tue Aug 31, 2004 6:19 pm

Ooooh - yeah - I totally agree with Cameron (tarawhipped). Buffy so should be cruising by any minute. Evil is afoot and it is Buffy's job to fight evil - so get to steppin' slayer girl!



-shuyaku

Oh God, Willow—you’re giving me the gift of Karen Carpenter. Just when I think I grasp the full extent of your love." - Tara

"Why do birds suddenly appear? It’s because, you are queer…" - Willow (Gods Served and Abandoned by AntigoneUnbound)

shuyaku
 


Re: Part 16b

Postby Shy One » Tue Aug 31, 2004 7:45 pm

I would like to second what tarawhipped and shuyaku said.

Let Buffy come by and kick the ever-loving sh*t out of

Mr. Peeping (Oz) Tom :punish and let Willow and Tara have their much needed 8 year reunion love-fest! :kiss2 :luv :luv2



After all, they've earned it! :p



Great update as always! Can't wait to :read more!



Shy One

:shy

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sprinkles

Postby MissKittys Ball O Yarn » Tue Aug 31, 2004 7:46 pm

Jeanne,



Ohh first off, let me just say...Let Tara and Willow have snuggles before Mr growly face, piercey eyed,

skulk-about comes and ruins everything.



Now...Im too familiar with Twists and turns to come right out and say I think the lurking menace is Oz...But I do have a strong suspicion...what with Mr peeper being about the right hight to be hiding behind bushes and such...oz was kinda on the short side wasn't he? :devil



Anyway...That trip to the Zoo sounded fun :laugh



and that last update...with the candles and music...and romantic talking...made me a little... :aww and a little :drool and then there was some.... :thud (all in that order I think...) Once again...I loved the cliffhanger...although... :fit2 <---------Bob was pretty upset (but then again, that's not surprising...he's pretty much angry all the time...) :D



Oh yeah.... Bob and I straightened everything out...he told me to tell you to tell Kevin that he said.... *out of breath* (and I'm quoting) "candle wax tastes funny...in the same way shrimp pizza would" who know's what that's supposed to mean.... :crazy I think I'm going to ask him to move out. :D



oh and...Yes I see what you mean about the small detail thing... Does it bother you? cause if it dose...i can stop..I think... :p





Great update! :luv



MissKittys Ball O Yarn
 


Re: sprinkles

Postby umgaynow » Tue Aug 31, 2004 8:02 pm

Screw the peeping tom! Well, not literally of course because eeeewwwwww....PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE Willow and Tara loving...soooooonnn...our girls deserve a happy or two or twenty after all these years...anyway, maybe reading your W & T lovin' will inspire me to get back to writing my own...our girls have been hanging out on the bed with their shirts off for almost a week now...I seem to have lost my muse...maybe you could loan me yours?? Huh?? Pretty please with Tara on top??? (as it always should be...mmmm Tara on top) :letter :drool



So to make a very long story short...I also vote that Buffy happens by and the peeper ends up wearing his butthole as a collar and our girls make some long overdure love in uninterrupted peace...more delicious ficcyness please!!



umgaynow



Quote:
you all didn't happen to do a buncha drugs did ya?


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Re: sprinkles

Postby WickedReds » Tue Aug 31, 2004 10:06 pm

OOh more story... yay!! okay... much smoockies me likes... i'm so agreeing with tarawhipped and shuyaku... and umgaynow with tara on top... please please TARA ON TOP!! oops i have a thing.. yeah tara on top... Umm i'm gonna go now... update soon jeanne... hi kevin :eatme ..



-reds:willow



my banana dances for smut :banana



Tara in a wet shirt, Tara in a wet shirt. Tara in. A. Wet. Shirt. “Of course.”-Willow From Remember to Breath By Yellow Crayon



Now that just sucks- me

WickedReds
 


Re: sprinkles

Postby wimpy0729 » Tue Aug 31, 2004 10:26 pm

HOLY WOW! That was incredibly hot. Man, Tara was doing some sweet talkin, so no wonder Willow was with the tears. Man, eight years to make up for...so needless to say...I'm all for gettin with the lovin. With all that pent up...um...emotion and other stuff...I have a feeling there's going to be some fireworks. I hope the twins are wearing earplugs.



Ooh, I know!! I think they were getting so hot and heavy that the lurker hyperventilated and passed out right there in the bushes. See, he's probably a real wimp anyway.



Then the girls can go on with their long-awaited "completing" of each other, hopefully multiple times...and in many different positions. :D



More! More! More!



Wimpy

"There was plenty of magic." ~ Tara

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Re: sprinkles

Postby Tempest Duer » Tue Aug 31, 2004 10:48 pm

I don't want Mr. Peeping Oz to see what Willow and Tara have in store for one another.

It's insulting to the whole gender[sic] of rap.



~Eminem

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Re: sprinkles

Postby Stroke of Luck » Tue Aug 31, 2004 11:44 pm

Personally i am for the love making, but without distraction or an ogling guy! They have to share some alone time after those 8 years:pray



Cu:wave

SoL/Natti

"I wish that you were here or that I were there, or that we were together anywhere!"

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Re: sprinkles

Postby DreamLover » Wed Sep 01, 2004 4:22 am

That was so sweet, hot and sexy. What you must do :hmm

:hmm .



Definitely loving next with out that that that guy! You must get that creep out now. Oooh love/creep/love/creep what a dilemma I'm glad I don't need to write it because I will go nuts :gnome . Good luck with that.



More soon please





Edited by: DreamLover at: 9/1/04 3:27 am
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Re: sprinkles

Postby barnabasvamp » Wed Sep 01, 2004 5:03 am

Quote:
So, shall we have W/T loving next? Or shall we deal with the peeping tom?
Well now...That's some choice you've left us with!! :paranoid :no



I say let the girls reunite :luv2 and then they can deal with the peeping tom together.



Look forward to another update!



BV

It's the passion in a kiss that gives to it its sweetness; it is the affection in a kiss that sanctifies it.

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dilemma...

Postby Arwen276 » Wed Sep 01, 2004 5:42 am



That was quite a moving scene...and I definitely can't wait till they reach the bedroom.



However.



We, your gentle readers, won't be as relaxed as they will be, if you kept CreepZ in the background going from window to window to get a front seat view of what WE DESERVE to have the front seat of!

(It sounded better in my head...)



Anyway,



do as you please, but DO NOT TEASE!



more!



~Arwen

Arwen276
 


Re: dilemma...

Postby veiled isis moon » Wed Sep 01, 2004 6:24 am

Oh WOW!! *jumps up and down clapping hands* This story is truly amazing, well done you! I love the idea that after eight years apart and living completely different lives that they still are so much in love with each other, its so beautiful, it's like they haven't been apart.



Hopeless romantic<---------- ME!



Willow's girls are so adorable and cute as hell, i want them! You write them so well.



I love the flow of the story and how your not afraid to get into the tricky issues around Willow and Tara. The way you write leaves me with the image of something magical and sweet growing between them, rather than cheese. I don't like cheese! I think it can be hard to write emotional stuff and have it come off the way you intended, which is to lose the reader in the intensity and moment and have them coming out crying or laughing, but crying and laughing because it worked, not because it was crap and unrealistic. You've definetely nailed it. Absolutely no cheese here, just really good writing.



I loved Willow and Tara getting to know each other again, although it didn't take very long, naughty girls! I guess when you love someone with that much passion and feeling, things really arn't in your control any more. It's very sweet and hot and gives me butterflies.



Not liking the sneaky person outside the house who i really thing is gonna be Oz. I think he's either gonna totally lose it wolf out and try to eat everyone, or................he'll want to come back into Willow's and the girls life like before in NMR begging for aother chance just when Willow and Tara are back on track, and Willow will have the same decision to make all other again. Obviously Willow will choose Tara...................then Oz will go all homicidal and try to kill everyone!! Too late mate you blew it!! Over active imagination i know, but it's so much fun in my head!!



Michelle.xx

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Re: Part 16b

Postby Irishgrl3 » Wed Sep 01, 2004 6:44 am

More alone time upstairs without Oz interruptions please. :D :D :D

Their talk was so sweet with Tara forgiving Willow for what happened in the past. Way to go, confident Tara going after what she wants. :kiss1

Irishgrl3
 


Re: Part 16b

Postby Sheba » Wed Sep 01, 2004 10:24 am

Just caught the last two updates, and I loved em! Hehe, I know that short idiot would show up again...was just waiting for when he would come back, and this time Willow would show him the door in all it's glory! Keep the good work going dude!

Sheba
 


Re: Part 16b

Postby alysagoddess85 » Wed Sep 01, 2004 10:28 am

yea im definately agreeing with everyone who thinks that buffy should just come a-strollin on by and pummel mr peeping toms ass....then we have sum lovin...and then they can find out in the morning when peeping creep man is all tied up and on the recieving end of some more slayeresque pummeling....something along those lines would be just super...lol...more soon please!



~mel:kdevil

'The Cat in the Hat' is fine, just not during sex.--Alyson Hannigan

alysagoddess85
 


hugs

Postby MissKittys Ball O Yarn » Thu Sep 02, 2004 7:36 pm

*making sad face through tears and various sniff sniff sounds* :sob I need an update....please please please! :pray Its like...It's like im going... :gnome and the only cure would be an update! What am I going to do Jeanne?? :shock How can I possibly stand the torture of being patient?? :shock How can I live without another chapter in this lovely saga?? :shock how come I keep asking more and more questions?? :shock why am I answering my own questions out loud as I type?? :shock



hehehe... :blush now that i've gotten that out of my system, I should go eat some chocolate.



xoxo

Emms

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I'm sooo going to...

Postby photographer02 » Sat Sep 04, 2004 10:05 am

Hey!



I really love this story! It is so touching and sweet!



I'm sooooo going to print this story out once it is finished!



Can I??? :angel



How many more chapters will there be? I can't wait!!



Anyway, do continue as soon as possible!



photographer02

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Replies

Postby kindagay » Sat Sep 04, 2004 11:19 am

Hello lovely, sweet kittens :wave



Thank you all so very, very much for all your sweet, touching feedback - it means so much to me :flower



tarawhipped: Glad you liked it

Hmm, Buffy walking by? :hmm interesting idea. Asking too much? -I don't think so :wink



Arron: Another vote for Buffy to come along huh?

Glad you enjoyed the last update :)



Shuyaku: Now that's 3 votes for Buffy to deal with the creepy lurker - I like how my lovely readers think :)



Shy One: Buffy pummel bad guy; Willow & Tara get with the lovin' - I think I can do that for you :wink



Emms: Don't worry, Willow & Tara will get with the snuggles - there will be no ruining of the snuggling, I promise :)

Hmm, Oz was kinda on the short side & quite possibly small enough to hide in bushes too :hmm

The trip to the zoo was fun to write, so I'm glad you thought it sounded fun :)

I'm glad you liked the last update too. I seem to have gotten away with the cliffhanger - I diverted the attention away from it by asking what people wanted next. But, :sh don't tell anyone.

Uhm, I'm sorry for upsetting Bob :fit2 . I agree his candle wax/shrimp pizza comment was kinda :crazy but, you're asking him to move out? I thought he was your soul-mate? The Tom Cruise of the emoticon world?

Oh, please, please don't stop picking up an the small details. It doesn't bother me in the least, in fact, I really appreciate you paying so much attention - Thank you :flower



umgaynow: Yeah, I can promise there will be no literal screwing of the peeping tom & I would like to second your eeeewwwww

Don't worry, our girls will get plenty of happys :wink

Aww, poor you losing your muse - that sucks. I would be happy to lend you mine but, well, mine seems to have gone missing too.

Oh, Tara on top :drool - Well, if that image doesn't inspire me, nothing will :)

Buffy to the rescue? - Seems to be a popular idea.

Uninterrupted peace for our girls? - Consider it done :)



WickedReds: Tara. On. Top :drool :thud Again that image gets lodged into my head, & once again I can do nothing but drool. :)

I will definitely be working to get Tara on top.... then Willow on top.... then maybe Tara again.....

Hi Smutty :banana *Kevin :eatme walks over to Smutty and gives him a yellow banana-y hug* Aww, aren't those two cute? :)



Wimpy: Fireworks? Oh yeah, I think I can manage fireworks :wink

Multiple, different positions? Oh boy, I'm gonna have fun writing that chapter.

I'm :lol at the image of the lurker hyperventilating & passing out



Tempest Duer: I don't want Mr. Peeping tom seeing our girls either - Shall I get rid of him?



SoL: Alone time for our girls? - I'll get right to it :)



DreamLover: Glad you liked the last update.

Must get rid of creep? Must get rid of creep. - Yep, I'll do that, definitely :)



barnabasvamp: Reunion then deal with peeping tom together? Hmm, that's a new idea :hmm



Arwen: Glad you liked :)

So uhm, loving that the readers can peep at, but that CreepZ can't see? I think I can do that :) & I promise I won't tease



Veiled isis moon: Hello & welcome to my fic :wave

I'm very glad that you're enjoying my little creation & thank you for the enthusiasm. :)

Yep, I'm a hopeless romantic too :)

Glad you like the twins & thank you for saying that I write them well

Thank you so very much for all your kind words. It means a lot to me that you feel I write the emotional stuff well & I'm happy that you feel I avoid being too cheesy :D (unlike that grin, which is as cheesy as, uhm, cheese).

Wow! Willow & Tara getting to know each other again gives you butterflies? - that's so cool

Well, they're some interesting speculations you have regarding the lurker (who may or may not be Oz) - I guess you'll just have to wait & see :)



Irishgrl3: Alone time with no interruptions - as I told umgaynow, consider it done :)

& yeah, I like confident Tara too, after 8 years of waiting, she's finally gonna get what her heart desires - & nothing & nobody is gonna get in the way. I promise



Sheba: Glad you loved the last 2 updates :)

Oz? Who said it was Oz? You're right though, Willow certainly would show Oz the door, if it is him, which I didn't say it was, or wasn't

(Okay, I confused myself with that sentence :confused )



alysagoddess85: I like your ideas:

* Buffy pummels bad guy

* Willow/Tara lovin'

* Our girls find out the following morning

I have a feeling you're gonna enjoy the next few updates :wink



Emms: Calm down sweetie, no need to get all :gnome . I'm sorry I didn't update sooner, RL kinda got complicated, but, I have update-y goodness for you today okay? Does that stop you going all :gnome ? I hope it does :)



Oh, chocolate? You feel like sharing? :D Chocolate helps me write :flirt



photographer02: Glad you love my little story.

You want to print it out? Wow Yes, please do, feel free, just, knowing that you want to makes me :D a lot :)

I'm not sure how long it's gonna be - I'll keep writing for as long as people want to read. :)





Okay beautiful kittens, update coming, very very soon



Hugs

Jeanne

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Tara: “Let me guess – you want me to lie on your lap while you feed me grapes, but my sweet, shy, precious, honey you’ve been too shy to ask – yes?” - GROWW by WannaFriendsBe

Edited by: kindagay at: 9/4/04 10:30 am
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Part 17

Postby kindagay » Sat Sep 04, 2004 11:36 am

Okay, everyone seemed to agree with getting rid of the creepy peeper so that Willow & Tara can get uninterrupted alone time so....

It's short, I'm not all that happy with it but, I hope you enjoy



Thoughts in italics



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‘Well, all’s well at the Harris house, I’ll go check at Will’s. Not that there’ll be anything going on over there. Well maybe something between Willow and Tara. Tara’s back. I still can’t believe it; I never thought I’d have the chance to really get to know her properly. And her and Will are all with the flirting and touching. Oh, oh and Jules and Lydia just love her. No real surprise there, I mean Willow loves her so obviously the girls do too. And am I babbling? I'm actually babbling in my head. Willow Rosenberg what have you turned me into?’



Buffy was just approaching the corner of Willow’s block laughing to herself when her ‘spidey senses' suddenly kick in.



‘Something’s wrong. I can feel it.’ She thought to herself.

“Willow.” she called out worriedly as she ran up the street scanning for anything out of the ordinary. Just as she got to Willow’s front yard she heard it. A deep and extremely angry growl.

“Okay creepy peeping-tom monster, are you gonna come out from your hiding place or are you gonna make me have to drag you out?” Buffy taunted as she crept cautiously forward.



As she neared the bushes Buffy caught a glimpse of the intruder’s face and her jaw dropped in shock.



“Oz?”



There was no time to process what was happening as Oz wolfed out in front of Buffy’s eyes and leapt towards Willow’s front door. Buffy launched herself at the werewolf, wrapping her arms around its neck sending them both toppling sideways and successfully stopping its attack on her best friend’s house.



The wolf threw the slayer off his back and turned to face her.



“So, still not completely mastered the whole, emotional control thing then huh?” Buffy jibed before launching a round-house kick at the wolf’s face.



Oz-wolf quickly recovered from the blow to this head and pounced at the slayer, effectively throwing her off balance and pinning her to the ground. For a moment it appeared that the blonde was in trouble. Thankfully the werewolf wasn’t balanced well enough and it was no match for the slayer’s speed as she kicked her legs down and bucked him off her body as quick as a flash.



“You really think I’m gonna make getting into that house that easy for you?”



Oz-wolf growled angrily, baring his teeth menacingly at the blonde who was now stood and waiting to seriously kick some werewolf ass. The wolf once again launched himself at Buffy, but this time, she was ready for him. She rolled with the wolf and used the momentum of his movement to toss him over her shoulder and behind her, straight into a tree.

Before he had a chance to re-orientate himself, Buffy was on him. She ranted angrily as she repeatedly swung at the wolf with a broken tree branch.



“I am not gonna let you hurt Willow again. After what you did to her and those little girls, you don’t have any right to be anywhere near here. Now, I know there’s still a tiny part of you in there Oz, will you just, stop and think about what you’re doing? Your daughters are in there, were you planning on just, barging in all wolfie?”



The thought of what a wolfed-out Oz might have done to the twins made Buffy’s blood boil. Her blows rapidly increased in power as burning, blinding tears stung the back of her eyes.



“You don’t go anywhere near those little girls or I swear I will fucking kill you. I don’t care that you’re human; if you so much as touch a single hair on their precious little heads I will take great pleasure in beating you to death. Do we have an understanding?”



The slayers assault was too much for Oz’s demon; the wolf faded to leave a barely conscious Oz curled in a tight ball shielding himself from Buffy’s onslaught.



The horrific images that were creeping into Buffy’s mind suddenly weakened the blonde. She dropped, shaking and sobbing, to her knees and emptied the contents of her stomach.



Once she had composed herself Buffy stood on shaky legs, gathered Oz’s tattered clothes and threw them at him.

“Put those on.”



Oz did as he’d been told and whilst he dressed Buffy went and found some rope in Willow’s garden shed. She dragged Oz to his feet and tied his hands behind his back.



“Move.” The slayer demanded, shoving Oz forwards. “You’re spending the night in my basement. I’ll deal with you in the morning.”



Oz’s head was hung in shame as he silently shuffled all the way to the Summers’ house and compliantly allowed Buffy to chain him up.



Buffy walked to the bathroom in a daze, not entirely believing what had just happened. As she thought about the events of the evening, and considered what could have happened if she hadn’t turned up when she did, she was, once again, violently ill.



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Okay, I'm not so good at writing fight scenes so, did I do okay?



We'll get back to the Willow/Tara loving in the next update - I promise



Hugs

Jeanne



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Tara: “Let me guess – you want me to lie on your lap while you feed me grapes, but my sweet, shy, precious, honey you’ve been too shy to ask – yes?” - GROWW by WannaFriendsBe

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Re: Part 17

Postby MissKittys Ball O Yarn » Sat Sep 04, 2004 11:54 am

Ohhhhhh Buffy kicked that ass!! woo hoo!.....

Ugh Oz just makes me sick with his selfish unconcerned behavior. :( Well at least he wont be causing anymore trouble tonight. (that's a relief) I wonder what will happen when Buffy tells Willow he was there... she will tell her right? I hope Willow has the strength to stand up to him this time and tell him to get lost.



Oh and... :fit2 <---- yes...it is true, bob is a pretty face...but there's more to life than looks right? And besides...he refuses to attend an anger management course. at first I was intrigued by his no-nonsense nature, But now.... :sob but now... Its all I can do not to throw the toaster oven at his head every morning..... besides... hehehe.... I think he might be.... Gay.



That was a really good update sweetie.... short but sweet. though I must say... (not that I'd ever complain...) I can only hope for a longer update next time...what with the snuggles and all :love



xoxo

Emms

The people I'm furious with are the womens's liberationists. They keep getting up on soapboxes and proclaiming women are brighter than men. That's true, but it should be kept quiet or it ruins the whole racket.----



Anita Loos

Edited by: MissKittys Ball O Yarn at: 9/4/04 10:56 am
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