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Fic: Behind Enemy Lines (AU)

Postby badkitty » Fri Oct 15, 2004 6:57 pm

TITLE: Behind Enemy Lines (AU)

AUTHOR: badkitty (gail)

DISCLAIMER: Joss & his Mutant Enemaites own Willow and Tara and whoever else from BTVS that may appear in this story. Everything else is the product of world history, legend, and my overactive imagination. This is just a fanfic – I’m not making any money off of it, and no copyright infringement is intended.

RATING: Most chapters will probably be R, but I’m going to give this an overall NC-17 for the inevitable blood, gore, violence… and of course the eventual hot girl on girl action. Ratings will vary for each chapter, and I’ll try to give a heads up beforehand. But I’m also forgetful about stuff so I might not.

SUMMARY: Lt. Tara Maclay is an agent for the Office of Secret Services (OSS), working for the Allies and deep under cover within the Nazi party in Germany. Her mission: to uncover a plot within Himmler’s SS Genheim Sparte to create a nefarious army of demon soldiers – a nightmarish and interminable force of undead killing machines under Nazi command and control. When the OSS loses contact with Agent Maclay only weeks before the planned D-Day invasion, they send the equally talented and deadly Agent Willow Rosenberg to find her.

SPOILERS: None. This is totally AU.

FEEDBACK: Yes please.

NOTE: I’d like to apologize in advance for mangling the German language. I’m almost sure that’s going to happen, unless I get a beta who knows the language. But I don’t expect to use it much, so whatever. Also, this fic deals with Nazis. They were/are not nice people. Some of what they do or say might be disturbing to some people. So I’m just giving a heads up there.

UPDATES: I’m shooting for weekly. I’ll give a heads up if I expect to be late, or if I’m planning on, say, disappearing with a half finished fic and lots of impatient and pissed off kittens. I say “lots” in the sincere hope that this doesn’t completely suck, and people actually want to read it. And, uh, I’m not planning on disappearing unless George Bush gets re-elected and my wife and I decide to move to Canada and there’s a lag in my ISP service. Or if I get run over by a bus. (looks around) Did I forget anything?





Behind Enemy Lines

Chapter One (PG-13?)



May 8, 1944

MEMO – OSS HIGH COMMAND

Washington D.C.

Col. Henry Willis

RE: Loss of contact with Agent Maclay



Henry:



As you are aware, Agent Maclay’s mission to uncover information relative to the alleged “demon stratagem” within the SS Genheim Sparte has come to an abrupt and disconcerting halt. Our OSS mission contact in Berlin, Max Werner, lost contact with Agent Maclay more than a week ago. With plans for Operation Overlord less than a month away, it is vital that Agent Maclay’s whereabouts are discovered. She, by this time, should possess critical information regarding the status of the Genheim Sparte’s plans. As with all OSS agents behind enemy lines, Agent Maclay’s orders are to terminate her own life if she is discovered and unable to escape, as Nazi interrogators are notoriously adept at gleaning information from their prisoners by utilizing a chilling variety of torture methods. We can only hope and pray that Agent Maclay is still alive, and in possession of the information we so desperately seek.



Like Agent Maclay, Agent Rosenberg has been recruited for this mission due to her abilities in wielding magickal powers. Agent Rosenberg will be dispatched to our contacts in the Ardennes, who will assist her in entering Germany at the border somewhere near Aachen. From there, her mission is to locate Agent Maclay and await further instruction from OSS Command. I know you are concerned with Agent Rosenberg’s fitness for this mission. I have been assured by Major Giles at MI5 that her powers are well within her control, and that she is our best hope for finding Agent Maclay – or, if need be, for taking over the mission should our worst fears materialize.



I expect to hear from Agent Rosenberg within the next 48 hours. I’ll be in contact with you then.



Lt. Col. Jack Armstrong

London



****



Ardennes Forest, May 3, 1944



Lt. Willow Rosenberg was soaking wet and decidedly peeved. She’d waited at the checkpoint well past the appointed time, and her contact was nowhere to be found. Her green eyes peered up from under her mostly worthless wide brimmed fedora, taking in the angry gray storm clouds roiling in the sky above. “Oh, France, lovely this time of year,” she muttered to herself, as the rain poured down mercilessly upon her. She heard a light rustling of leaves in the trees directly ahead, but couldn’t see more than a few feet ahead of her due to the pouring rain. She immediately touched the handle of her trusty Walther PPK (silencer attached) hiding deep within an interior pocket of her trench coat, comforted by the feel of the heavy cold steel that had saved her life on more than one occasion.



A tall man emerged from the thicket, as Rosenberg crouched behind a fallen tree and waited for the signal. She grimly acknowledged to herself that if she didn’t hear the signal in the next ten seconds, the man would die here in the forest with a 9mm bullet lodged in his brain. As Rosenberg silently removed the gun from her pocket, the man finally whistled. Two short bursts, and the Lieutenant sighed heavily, not even realizing she was holding her breath. She whistled back as she stood, pocketing the Walther.



“Mademoiselle ... Lieutenant Rosenberg?” Willow nodded. “That’s me.”



“My name is Thierry. I am sent to help you, which you already know. Please, we must hurry. A group of German soldiers have entered the town. We must keep off the road, and get you to safety.”



Willow nodded in assent. “Lead the way.”



The two did not speak for the next forty minutes. Willow followed Thierry through the forest, careful to remain as quiet as possible. She knew that Thierry must have been a part of the French Resistance, operating secretly since the German army overran the country more than four years ago. Were it not for these operatives, many of whom were plain country folk spurred to action by Nazi aggression, Allied agents like herself would have a much harder time moving about the countryside and crossing the border into Germany undetected.



“We are close, Ms. Rosenberg. Just through the clearing up ahead. Please, stay here and I will make sure our way is safe.” Willow crouched down and waited while Thierry walked a few yards ahead. Moments later, he returned, visibly agitated. “Mon Dieu! Germans are at the house. We must take cover.”



Willow silently moved forward. “I need to assess the situation.” Thierry nodded and followed. She moved forward toward the clearing, Thierry by her side, and took in the scene at the farmhouse several hundred feet ahead. Four German soldiers milled about in front, engaged in conversation and smoking hand-rolled cigarettes.



“Es sollte ein Hotel in der Nähe geben.”



“Seien Sie kein Idiot. Wir bleiben hier.”



“Looks like our friends don’t plan on leaving. Four out front, more inside I’m sure,” she whispered. “What now?”



Thierry turned to her. “We have a problem.”



***



Ok kids, I know it’s short, but that’s all I have for now. First off, I want to make sure that there are people who are interested in reading further, or else there’s really no point in continuing. I also desperately need a beta. And please some feedback would really rock. Thanks for reading!



gail





badkitty
 


Re: Fic: Behind Enemy Lines (AU)

Postby sabina » Fri Oct 15, 2004 7:42 pm

Hi there :wave



I loved the beginning of your story :applause

Willow and Tara as Allies agents... Flighting the nazis together... protecting each other... falling in love in the process... Ai ai :sigh :lol



I think this will be a great story. :bounce

Please continue :grin



As for finding a beta, did you try and find someone on the beta readers thread? It worked well for me :)





Edited because I couldn't get my spelling right the first time :blush



P.S. Yay, I got to be the first to reply :banana




"I know I was born and I know that I'll die.

The in between is mine.

I am mine!" - Pearl Jam

Edited by: sabina at: 10/15/04 6:58 pm
sabina
 


Re: Fic: Behind Enemy Lines (AU)

Postby tarawhipped » Fri Oct 15, 2004 8:27 pm

Hi Gail (can I call you Gail?)...I for one am very interested in the start of this. The premise is great, I love AUs, especially in a historical setting, and Nazi Germany offers plenty of opportunities for tension and intrigue.



I like the memorandum intro to set the scene...already building in the drama that Willow has a limited time frame to find Tara. I think the most interesting thing however is that they still have magic powers, and that Willow's are of some concern. You're writing style is also excellent, so please don't let the lack of a beta keep you from continuing asap.



:peace -Cameron



What should I be but just what I am? - Edna St.Vincent Millay

tarawhipped
 


Re: Fic: Behind Enemy Lines (AU)

Postby The Rose24 » Fri Oct 15, 2004 8:46 pm

Intriguing start. I can't wait to see if Agent Rosenberg will find Agent Maclay.

Tara: My heart doesn't stutter.


Tara: Willow, I got so lost.

Willow: I found you. I will always find you.


The Rose24
 


Re: Fic: Behind Enemy Lines (AU)

Postby TromDeGrey » Sat Oct 16, 2004 12:38 am

ACK!!! Holy crap! More??? Great premise! Looking forward to an update.





Trom's Brain: Rubbing the World the Wrong Way

TromDeGrey
 


Re: Fic: Behind Enemy Lines (AU)

Postby sacinema » Sun Oct 17, 2004 6:53 am

Please, keep on writing, Gail. You did well. Interesting setting and beginning of a story - really an ambitious project. I'm also very interested in AU-stories and the setting during World War II.



I'm already wondering how and when the girls will meet each other. What's going on with Tara. Hope she is ok and there is no anxious reason for her not keep in contact with the OSS.



If you need someone to look over your german sentences feel free to contact me. I'm german and would be very pleased if you would get me into work. Bud you did really well in your first post. So no need to worry about something.



Hope to read an update soon.

sacinema
 


Re: Fic: Behind Enemy Lines (AU)

Postby amazonaa » Sun Oct 17, 2004 11:14 am

Great start. And yes you should continue.



Can't wait for more.





brittney







~Good friends help you move. Real friends help you move the body.~


amazonaa
 


Re: Fic: Behind Enemy Lines (AU)

Postby ladydameon » Sun Oct 17, 2004 11:33 am

Mmm...You have my interest.



Weekly updates? I can live with that.

ladydameon

----------------

Goddess of Violence

ladydameon
 


Re: Fic: Behind Enemy Lines (AU)

Postby Artemis » Mon Oct 18, 2004 5:43 am

Nice start! I love this kind of setting, hard gritty war story mixed with magic and the occult, you've certainly got my attention :) Agent Rosenberg is interesting already - tough, but still Willow under the circumstances, her little wry joke about the rain pointed to that. I hope Tara's okay.



I would love to host this story on Through the Looking-glass (alia.customer.netspace.net.au/glass.htm ), if you'd like? Just say the word :pray If you'd like an email address to go with it for feedback, you can email me at alia@netspace.net.au - or I can just link back to this thread, it's up to you.



So what now? Nazis in the house - can Willow evade them, or will she have to be more forthright about dealing with them? Is their presence coincidental, or is Willow in danger (well, more than usual, for an Allied agent in occupied territory)? Consider me officially installed on the edge of my seat :)

Chris Cook

Through the Looking-glass

A Willow and Tara for every world.

Artemis
 


kittens rock!

Postby badkitty » Mon Oct 18, 2004 7:59 am

Wow! Y'all are so nice with the feedback and positive comments and stuff. This is awesome. I'm really glad there are folks who want me to continue, because now I'm kinda obsessed.



sabina:thank you thank you! Hey, shouldn't you updating The Artifact? ;) Uhm, about the beta readers thread - I looked for it, but alas, I couldn't find it. I'm a dork.



Cameron: Yes, please do call me gail. Er, can I call you Cameron? ;) I'm really excited about the setting too. I had been racking my brains trying to think of a storyline so that I could have a fanfic of my own, and this finally came to me as I'm sitting at my computer playing Return to Castle Wolfenstein. The great thing about this is, besides the fact that I'm a bit of a WWII buff, that the legends surrounding the Nazi's dabbling in the occult are just rife with story potential. I mean, look at all the Indiana Jones movies, Hellboy, Wolfenstein, etc. I'm actually suprised I didn't think of this sooner. For now the lack of a beta won't stop me from writing, but being the anal person that I am, I'm sure little details that I miss are going to drive me completely nuts (I alreadly have one in the first posting, but I'm trying not to let it get to me). Btw, on another note, I am loving Island of DEATH! (that's Heather's fault, btw, that I can't just write DEATH! in small case without the exclamation point). Very much looking forward to more updates!



The Rose24: Well, rest assured they will find each other eventually. Don't ask me when though. I have no idea!



TromDeGrey: I'm working on an update right now. Well, no that's not true I'm really just working on feedback replies but I will get to that update. Soon. Most likely in the next couple of days.



sacinema: Thanks for reading and offering your expertise in German! I must confess I don't speak a word of it - I just went to a translation website and typed in the sentence I wanted in English and it spit it out in German for me. Now, I know from my limited but still decent Italian skills that those web translators can be oh so wrong, especially without the benefit of context. So I will be sure to take you up on your offer if need be. Vielen Dank!



amazonaa & ladydameon: Thanks for reading! I'm working on an update... hopefully it'll be posted in the next couple of days.



Artemis: :bow :bow :bow Chris Cook likes my story! Woo and hoo!!! OF COURSE you can host it on Through the Looking-Glass! I'm the one who should be honored. As for an email addy, I have one on yahoo that I set up recently so you can just use that. It's badkittyfantastico@yahoo.com



It also makes me feel good that Willow still seems like Willow, despite the setting. I was worried that placing both girls in such a, well, brutal setting would make it difficult to maintain their personality quirks. That's probably the most important thing to me - I want to stay true to the characters no matter what. I think that's going to be my toughest challenge, probably more so with Tara than Willow. I suppose I probably should have mentioned that in terms of feedback, I really don't want anyone pulling punches there. My fear is that I'll get so wrapped up in WWII timelines and geography and inane details like the size clip a Walther PPK holds and whatnot that I'll overlook what's most important to me - making sure our two girls, despite the horrible circumstances they find themselves in, will still maintain the character traits and personalities we all love so much. I must get to work on that update. While I'm glad to hear that you are installed on the edge of your seat, I know that can start to hurt after awhile, so off to write I go...



gail:boot



badkitty
 


Re: kittens rock!

Postby alysagoddess85 » Mon Oct 18, 2004 9:01 am

wow...this definately seems like a fic i can get into...i love the concept...very cool...cant wait for more!



~mel:kdevil

'The Cat in the Hat' is fine, just not during sex.--Alyson Hannigan

alysagoddess85
 


The rest of Chapter One

Postby badkitty » Tue Oct 19, 2004 2:34 pm

TITLE: Behind Enemy Lines (AU)

AUTHOR: badkitty (gail)

DISCLAIMER: Joss & his Mutant Enemaites own Willow and Tara and whoever else from BTVS that may appear in this story. Everything else is the product of world history, legend, and my overactive imagination. This is just a fanfic – I’m not making any money off of it, and no copyright infringement is intended.

RATING: Most chapters will probably be R, but I’m going to give this an overall NC-17 for the inevitable blood, gore, violence… and of course the eventual hot girl on girl action. Ratings will vary for each chapter, and I’ll try to give a heads up beforehand. But I’m also forgetful about stuff so I might not.

SUMMARY: Lt. Tara Maclay is an agent for the Office of Secret Services (OSS), working for the Allies and deep under cover within the Nazi party in Germany. Her mission: to uncover a plot within Himmler’s SS Genheim Sparte to create a nefarious army of demon soldiers – a nightmarish and interminable force of undead killing machines under Nazi command and control. When the OSS loses contact with Agent Maclay only weeks before the planned D-Day invasion, they send the equally talented and deadly Agent Willow Rosenberg to find her.

SPOILERS: None. This is totally AU.

FEEDBACK: Yes please.

NOTE: I’d like to apologize in advance for mangling the German language. I’m almost sure that’s going to happen, unless I get a beta who knows the language. But I don’t expect to use it much, so whatever. Also, this fic deals with Nazis. They were/are not nice people. Some of what they do or say might be disturbing to some people. So I’m just giving a heads up there.

UPDATES: I was shooting for weekly, but I'm going to say weekly at least, because I may in fact post updates more frequently. Because I'm impatient and mildly obsessive.





Behind Enemy Lines

Chapter One (continued)



Previously...



Willow silently moved forward. "I need to assess the situation." Thierry nodded silently. She moved forward toward the clearing, Thierry by her side. She took in the farmhouse several hundred feet ahead, with four German soldiers milling about in front, smoking and engaged in conversation.



"Es sollte ein Hotel in der Nähe geben."



"Seien Sie kein Idiot. Wir bleiben hier."



"Looks like our friends don't plan on leaving. Four out front, more inside I'm sure," she whispered. "What now?"



Thierry turned to her. "We have a problem."



************



Willow simply nodded to him, "I can see that." Meanwhile, her mind was in overdrive. A problem, she thought. I knew the French were an understated people, but seriously. I hate Nazis. I hate Nazis, so I come to France, an entire country overrun with Hitler's finest. But that's just the coming attractions to real picture, because in less than 24 hours I'm supposed to be in good old Deutschland herself, a fly in a wasps nest, a mouse in an alleyfull a cats, a little Jewish girl in a land taken over by monsters with a pathological hatred of everything I am and I could just take out those guys right now, just me and Walt, four easy shots before they even knew what happened and who am I kidding? Dumb Rosenberg, really dumb. Keep your emotions in check. Think.... think. Maybe a simple glamour spell... or not. Don't know how many of them there are. Then there's the possibility of completely screwing that up and getting us killed. The day I'd be worried about screwing up a glamour spell... well, it's not every day you find your self in a situation like this. It's not like I'm trying to put one over on Xander during a poker game. Those are real fucking Nazis. And this is just the beginning.



"Thierry, we can't just stay here. I'm, uh, a little pressed for time."



"Oui. I can only hope Herbert managed to escape before the Germans got here. He had maps for you, and an envelope with information from your command. If he escaped, we must hope to find him in the forest close by, or..."



"Or I'll have to find a way to get word to the OSS that I'm flying blind. Who is the contact in Aachen? It still is Aachen, right?"



"I do not have that information Lieutenant."



Willow sighed heavily. This just keeps getting better and better.



***********



"Frau Lichtermann?" Silence. "Frau Lichtermann?" Abruptly the woman's head turned away from the gaping mouth of a window set into the castle wall to face the soldier standing only a few feet behind her, framed by a massive arched stone doorway. She said nothing, making the soldier even more uncomfortable in her presence. She worked hard on little details like this - forced silences, piercing stares whenever she could muster the appropriate ire - anything to keep them off balance in her presence. Still, she did not speak or move toward the man. She simply raised her eyebrow and waited. He nervously cleared his throat. "Frau Lichtermann, Doctor Eckhardt requests your presence in his office at once." She nodded only slightly, and the soldier bowed uncomfortably and backed out of the room. Once he left, she sighed heavily and turned her gaze back toward the snow-covered hills below.



Of course he wants me, she thought to herself. Goddess forbid I spend more than an hour in peace, away from that slug of a man. She shuddered to herself, daring to think for only one nauseating moment what Eckhardt's real motivations were. She wasn't stupid. Most of these racial purists who fancied themselves Aryan supermen could only dream of creating a mini race of Uberkinder with her, the prototypical blonde haired blue eyed Aryan woman, who in reality and completely unbeknownst to them was Scotch-Irish and at least one-sixteenth Native American Cherokee.



Agent Tara Maclay turned away from the window and made her way out of the tastefully appointed lounge, down a labyrinthine maze of ancient stone corridors lined with torches that never seemed to go out. She arrived before a set of massive oak doors, guarded on either side by Eckhardt's personal guard. The one on the right nodded wordlessly to her, and rapped on the door behind him three times. He waited a moment, and called "Frau Lichtermann" as he opened the door. As she entered, she noticed Eckhardt dwarfed behind his ornate and richly carved mahogany desk, peering intently at an open and very worn leather file, documents and photographs spread out before him.



"I missed you at lunch today, Helene." She knew he'd ask. He always noticed her presence, or lack of. "My apologies, Doctor Eckhardt. I did not feel well." Eckhardt finally looked up as he pushed his small coke-bottle thick glasses back up the short slope of his tiny pug nose. His black eyes raked over her body, starting at her shapely legs and up the tight fitting SS uniform, pausing briefly at her ample breasts, and finally resting at eye level. He sighed heavily, speaking seemingly to himself. "Deitrich. Please Helene, call me Deitrich." She nodded as he continued to speak, returning his attention to the file before him. "Anyway, I am sorry to hear you were not feeling well. I trust you will join me for dinner." It was not a question.



Before she could speak, a short man in a white lab coat hurriedly entered the room, visibly agitated. She noticed immediately his coat was covered in blood, and something else… something sticky.



"Herr Doctor, the lab, T4, it was conscious briefly but completely out of control. I didn't know…"



"SILENCE," Eckhardt shouted. He cleared his throat and smiled, a smile that conveyed not an ounce of friendliness or good humour. Now his voice was gentle, almost kind. "Is he … alive, Herr Deters?"



"No Doctor."



Without another word Eckhardt nodded, and silently lifted a Luger he'd purveyed seemingly from nowhere. He almost absently fired the pistol toward the little man without even taking aim. A single shot shattered the brief silence as Tara jumped, forcing back the instant need to vomit brought on by the rush of adrenaline, and the sight of the man's brains splattered on the oak door behind where he stood only moments ago. She willed herself to remain calm while a guard took a few tentative steps into the room. "Clean that up," Eckhardt snapped at him. He turned to Tara and smiled again. "I'll see you at dinner then." She nodded and left the room, fighting back the ever-increasing revulsion at this sickening hell she was trapped in, with no escape in sight.



As she made her way quickly through the corridors to her room, she tried taking calming breaths. Only a few short months ago, watching a man's brains being blown apart in before her eyes would have destroyed Tara Maclay, a simple Midwestern farm girl who wouldn't even euthanize a sick horse. For this Tara Maclay, Army Lieutenant and OSS operative posing as Schutzstaffel specialist Helene Lichtermann, PhD., it was all in a day's work. She wondered to herself how much longer she would be able to stand it.



***********



Willow and Thierry stayed in their position for another ten minutes, listening to the soldiers with the hope of getting some clue as to why they were there. After ten minutes of idle chit chat and no movement whatsoever inside the house, they decided to move. Willow knew that she and Thierry couldn't risk an encounter with the German soldiers. They doubled back through the woods where they could cross the road far enough away from the farmhouse so they wouldn't be seen. There was a real possibility that Herbert had been captured, and an even slimmer chance that Willow's cover was already blown. Still, the latter was doubtful. She knew that army cryptographers wouldn't make it easy for the enemy to decipher the documents, but still, she could not risk getting caught.



Thierry explained to her that a friend of his, a resistance sympathizer, lived a few short miles away. With any luck, his house and the surrounding area would be free of Germans. The plan was to obtain a car, disguises, papers, and head to Bastogne where Willow could take advantage of plentiful resistance resources and re-establish contact with the OSS.



They trekked through the wooded area cautiously, Thierry leading the way. The further behind they left the farmhouse, the more relaxed Willow became. For the first time, she'd noticed that it had stopped raining. Wow, she thought to herself. France really is beautiful this time of year.



"HALT! Hände auf!



Startled out of her reverie, Willow turned to see several German soldiers beginning to surround them. Thierry pulled out a revolver as she screamed "Thierry NO!" but it was too late. A short burst from a Stg 44 cut him down as she instinctively reached for her own weapon, but a voice from behind her stopped her cold.



"I would not do that if I were you, Lieutenant."





End Chapter One

badkitty
 


Re: The rest of Chapter One

Postby sabina » Tue Oct 19, 2004 3:48 pm

Hi there :wave



Yes... well... you are right I should be updating the artifact :ashamed But I have been writing so it shouldn't take that long for me to post the next chapter :kgeek Thank you for asking :eatme



I too looked for the beta readers' thread and I couldn't find it either. Then I decided to go read the PENS FAQ because I had a vague idea that there was a link to the aforementioned beta readers thread there... and well there was but it didn't work :lol Maybe the thread was moved somewhere :hmm



Now about your story. The plot is thickening... I was under the impression that Tara's cover had been blown. Good thing I was wrong and she is just unable to communicate with the Allies... not that that is a good thing but it is better than being discovered by the Nazis. :paranoid

Willow's situation isn't looking very good... I hope she can babble her way out of the German officers sight. :bounce



I'm really curious to read more of your story :bounce





ETA: I got to be the first one to reply again... eh :banana :bounce




"I know I was born and I know that I'll die.

The in between is mine.

I am mine!" - Pearl Jam

Edited by: sabina at: 10/19/04 2:49 pm
sabina
 


Re: The rest of Chapter One

Postby sacinema » Wed Oct 20, 2004 12:38 am

:applause :applause :applause



You did very well. Thank you for bringing Tara in and making clear that she is alright - in a way - and her cover is not blown. Maybe Willow will be arrest at the same place Tara is pinned? Okay I'm waiting patiently for a surprise.



Only a few advices: PhD in Germany means Doctor of Philosophie and is written Dr. Phil. Wonder wich subject she studied. And "Hands up" is correctly translated as "Hände hoch".



Here is the Link to a really good German dictionary engl-germ. It goes both ways. Sometimes you also find idioms there. Dict Leo

sacinema
 


Re: The rest of Chapter One

Postby amazonaa » Wed Oct 20, 2004 3:56 pm

Oh man, oh man, oh man.



Great job. Can't wait to see what will happen next.





brittney







~Good friends help you move. Real friends help you move the body.~

amazonaa
 


Re: The rest of Chapter One

Postby The Rose24 » Wed Oct 20, 2004 8:53 pm

Geez. This story is intense.

Tara: My heart doesn't stutter.


Tara: Willow, I got so lost.

Willow: I found you. I will always find you.


The Rose24
 


Re: The rest of Chapter One

Postby xita » Wed Oct 20, 2004 10:02 pm

Sabina, you have a good memory, unfortunately, I had no updated that link. I tend to forget all the places these things are listed. The beta thread by the way is linked in the ask any question thread for pens. It is now updated in the FAQ and here it is as well:



p081.ezboard.com/fthekitt...1457.topic

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"Trust is a risk masquerading as a promise."


xita
 


Re: The rest of Chapter One

Postby Artemis » Thu Oct 21, 2004 1:03 am

Eeek! Willow at gunpoint - that can't be good. How will she escape?



And that glimpse into Tara's present situation - well, good to know she's okay, but it's hardly encouraging. Stuck in a castle with a horrible homicidal Nazi trying to chat her up in between random executions... not Tara's idea of a good time.



The closing of that section, contrasting Tara as she was a few months earlier with what she's now doing, was very effective. That's another example of what I was saying before, the characters are still themselves at heart, even if their different circumstances lead to them behaving in different ways. War is hellish, and even good, gentle people often have to learn to become hard and ruthless to get through it. It's good to know that the real Willow and Tara are still there, beneath the layers of cool professionalism they've had to develop to do what needs to be done. Even if, such as in Tara's situation, her revulsion at what she's surrounded with is problematic in terms of maintaining her cover - she has to struggle to seem unaffected by it.



Thanks for permission to host this on Looking-glass :bounce

Chris Cook

Through the Looking-glass

A Willow and Tara for every world.

Artemis
 


Re: The rest of Chapter One

Postby tarawhipped » Thu Oct 21, 2004 5:35 pm

Yikes, I can't decide who's in a worse situation. Willow may be cut off from her contacts and surrounded by Nazis (if they are), but I think Tara's predicament is somehow worse (unless the Nazis are aware that Willow's Jewish). I like that you show Tara struggling and working at maintaining a cool exterior around the Nazis. I was so caught up in the moment I almost missed that little bit about something in the lab being dead. Kinda made me think of Adam...hmmm...



Can't wait to see where you take this next, and how the girls will meet up.



:peace -Cameron (yes, please call me that)



What should I be but just what I am? - Edna St.Vincent Millay

tarawhipped
 


Re: The rest of Chapter One

Postby alysagoddess85 » Fri Oct 22, 2004 9:30 am

still totally loving this fic...i feel so bad for both girls...although being i never really thought willow looked jewish(sorry i know its stereotypical but i know lots of jewish people and they agree too..i always thought she looked more irish) and yea i know shes gay but the nazis dont know that either!! so im thinking taras got it a little worse...but im still feelin bad for both of them...cant wait for more!



~mel:kdevil

'The Cat in the Hat' is fine, just not during sex.--Alyson Hannigan

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the rest of chapter one

Postby AquarianSky » Thu Nov 11, 2004 5:42 pm



As a lurker I rarely post, but fear that this story has been abandoned spurred me to get off my butt and say something.



I was not particularly fond of AU-fiction, in the general sense, when I first got into BTVS & began reading Willow/Tara fiction (based fan fiction I'd read from other shows). However, over the past year or so that I've been reading all the wonderful stories here, I've found myself enjoying the stories set in different historical periods immensely! Secrets & Spies, Red Ace, Hellebore, Lesbian Fairytale (the story within the story, anyway), etc., etc. WWII/40's was always one of my favorite periods of study (I majored in History), so I've always loved movies & stories about that era in particular.



So....when I happened upon the first chapter of this story several weeks ago, I was SO excited! Not only because it's a WWII-period piece, but because it is (or starting off, anyway) as an exceptionally well-written one!! Gail, as others have noted, you've done a wonderful job creating an atmosphere of danger and intrigue, and I love that you've managed to incorporate magic.



I waited eagerly on the edge of my seat for more......I realize life is very busy, so you just may have other things on your plate, but I began to worry a bit......so I just wanted to throw in my 2 cents and say: This is a GREAT start!! Please, please, PLEASE continue it!! :)

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If you aren't completely appalled, then you haven't been paying attention.



AquarianSky
 


I'm still here!

Postby badkitty » Thu Nov 11, 2004 6:03 pm

AquarianSky (and everyone else who posted wonderful feedback):



I'm still here! I'm working on chapter two right now. I had some computer issues, then Bush won the election again and I momentarily lost faith in humankind, but I'm getting back on track. I've not abandoned the fic. It's just really hard to write, because writing doesn't come easy to me, I have the attention span of a gnat, the world went nuts last week, I'm contemplating a move out of state, and I'm entirely too anal retentive to get the history stuff wrong so I spend a LOT of time researching. So there are my excuses. I really DO want to update more often, but since this is my first fic, I guess I was probably a little too optimistic thinking I could do it weekly. But I shall endeavor to do so, because being a fan of the fanfic myself, I know that waiting sucks.



Thanks again for noticing I sorta disappeared. I'll try to get that update posted at some point over the weekend (fingers crossed).



gail :boot

badkitty
 


re: I'm still here

Postby AquarianSky » Fri Nov 12, 2004 1:33 am

Oh, goody!! (bounces happily in chair)



I really wasn't trying to be a noodge about updating. I certainly empathize with computer woes (mine crashed a couple months ago), and I think we're all suffering from varying degrees of P.E.S.T.S. :shock (Post Election Stress & Trauma Syndrome)....So NO hurry! Just glad to hear you're staying with it and one is coming someday. :)





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If you aren't completely appalled, then you haven't been paying attention.



AquarianSky
 


Chapter 2, Part 1

Postby badkitty » Tue Nov 23, 2004 8:00 pm

TITLE: Behind Enemy Lines (AU)

AUTHOR: badkitty (gail)

DISCLAIMER: Joss & his Mutant Enemaites own Willow and Tara and whoever else from BTVS that may appear in this story. Everything else is the product of world history, legend, and my overactive imagination. This is just a fanfic - I'm not making any money off of it, and no copyright infringement is intended.

RATING: Most chapters will probably be R, but I'm going to give this an overall NC-17 for the inevitable blood, gore, violence… and of course the eventual hot girl on girl action. Ratings will vary for each chapter, and I'll try to give a heads up beforehand. But I'm also forgetful about stuff so I might not.

SUMMARY: Lt. Tara Maclay is an agent for the Office of Secret Services (OSS), working for the Allies and deep under cover within the Nazi party in Germany. When the OSS loses contact with Agent Maclay only weeks before the planned D-Day invasion, they send the equally talented and deadly Agent Willow Rosenberg to find her.

SPOILERS: None. This is totally AU.

FEEDBACK: Yes Yes Yes! Please.

NOTE: This fic deals with Nazis. They were/are not nice people. Some of what they do or say might be disturbing to some people. So I'm just giving a heads up there.

UPDATES: Well, obviously the "weekly" thing didn't quite work out, did it? I work slowly. I accept that, and apologize for it. I'm still shooting for weekly, but realistically, it'll be more like two. I'm actually feeling very productive, so I might just get it done.



Behind Enemy Lines - Chapter 2 - Part 1



A convoy of Wehrmacht motorcycles and staff cars, flanked front and rear by Halftracks, entered Bastogne at twilight on 4 May, 1944. There had only been one brief stop in a small hamlet near the France/Belgium border, then several hours of driving through the Belgian countryside toward Germany. A redheaded woman sat in the back seat of a Kübelwagen, sandwiched tightly between two German soldiers who hulked over her and stared silently ahead. She couldn't see too well beyond either one of them to take in the surrounding countryside. She feared that they might be heading straight on into Germany, but much to her surprise and relief they stopped in the very town where she was originally headed. Now, she only needed to figure out how to escape from her captors and find the resistance fighters Thierry had spoken of.



The convoy made its way through the narrow cobblestone streets of the town, past ruins of buildings and small groups of soldiers, some Waffen-SS, and some Heer or regular army. It was much like a ghost town; other than military personnel, signs of civilian life were fleeting. She thought grimly to herself that the vast majority of Bastogne's civilian male population must have been either dead, in hiding, or absorbed into the German military after the annexation of Belgium.



The convoy finally stopped before a majestic building in the town center and Willow was prodded out of the car with the business end of a Stg 44 at her back. Her two escorts led her into a smaller building to the left of the larger one, where she was led up two flights of stairs and down a long hallway. Every so often she passed an open door where soldiers were huddled around tables, studying maps, eating, or playing cards. They proceeded through a series of doors and mazelike connected rooms, until finally she was shoved into a small windowless gray room that contained a single chair. She watched as her captors shut the door, effectively blotting out any light or sound from the hallway outside the room. Now the only source of light came from a dim, flickering bulb hanging from a wire through a small hole in the ceiling.



Willow methodically took stock of her surroundings. A room with one door. No windows. No fireplace. No closet. One American girl, dressed in plain dark olive green slacks and shirt. No gun, as she'd been relieved of her gun back in France, and her coat once they'd arrived here. Now all she had to work with was several hairpins, a leather belt, shoelaces, and a small Swiss army knife hidden in a well hollowed out of the sole of her left boot.



Clearly there was no way she'd be able to overpower so many men. It was imperative that she make it out of there without raising alarms, else half the German army would be after her in a heartbeat. Night had just fallen, so darkness would give her cover. She guessed they'd only put one guard at the door, since she hardly appeared to be a threat. But then again, she didn't know how much they knew about her, other than that she was an American Army Lieutenant caught skulking about the French countryside with an armed Frenchman who was now dead. She stood quietly by the door for a moment and listened. Other than voices in the distance, it was quiet.



After a few minutes of waiting, she tapped lightly on the door. "Hallo? Kann ich bitte etwas Wasser haben?" she whispered through the door. She stepped back, and waited for the door to open. It was a simple request - she'd only asked for some water. If they obliged her, she could get a look outside the door to size up her captors - how many, how big, how old, rank, SS or regular army… any details to help her formulate a plan. After several minutes, the door opened and a matronly woman entered the room holding a tray with several glasses of beer and water, and a plate with bread and cheese slices. Before she could reach Willow, the soldier standing near the doorway grabbed her arm. "Nein! Nur Wasser!" She nodded to the soldier, and tentatively stepped toward Willow. As he spoke, Willow noticed that he was a younger and smaller version of the men who escorted her into the building. He was also only an SS Shütze, or Private. Removing only the glass of water from her tray, she handed it to Willow with her head bowed. She looked up quickly and gave Willow a fleeting smile, and quickly left the room. The guard shut the door.



Willow placed the water on the table. There was something about that woman…. but she couldn't think about that right now. She was right - there was only one guard at the door. The beginnings of a plan began to grow in her mind.



She moved away from the door sat in the lone chair, and quickly untied her left boot. She reached into it, carefully pulling back the rubber insole and removing the knife. She then pocketed it, and put her boot back on. She looked up at the light hanging from its cord, grabbed it, and gave it a gentle tug. To her surprise, there was plenty of give. She quietly pulled the cord as far out as it would go, and walked with it over to the door. It reached with a few inches to spare. She unscrewed the bulb and, in total darkness, removed the socket assembly from its housing and put it aside. She closed her eyes in the darkness, as if it would somehow allow her "see" better with her hands. She worked slowly and deliberately. Being careful not to touch the wires together, she used the knife to remove several inches of the protective rubber insulation from the two wires. She then wrapped one wire around the doorknob, and wrapped the other around a pin she'd culled from her hair, and placed it hanging only millimeters from the inside of the knob. Once the knob was turned, the metal hairpin with the second wire wrapped around it would come in contact with the metal knob, completing the circuit. For good measure, she took the glass of water and poured it out on the hardwood floor just inside the doorway.



She tapped lightly on the door again, took a few steps back, and stood in the darkness and waited.



***



Tara sat in the darkness of her room, quietly contemplating her next move. She'd never imagined she'd be in Wewelsburg Castle, the SS headquarters itself, so soon. It had almost seemed serendipitous that she'd been sent here only two weeks after beginning her tenure at Eckhardt's Institute of Racial Studies in Berlin. At the time she'd had no idea how deeply the doctor's feelings, if that's what you could call them, had run for her. She thought if she could only bring herself to fake interest in him, she might just be able to gain his trust. But she also knew that the misanthropic doctor had a pathological distrust of humankind, and she didn't see how it'd be any different with her. Besides, pulling off the whole sociopathic, cold-blooded Nazi intellectual elitist was one thing; appearing to have the slightest romantic interest in one of them, one who happened to be a toad-like, socially retarded, half blind monstrosity, well that was just asking the impossible. She'd just have to find another way.



Lately the doctor had taken to writing her little notes and having them delivered by one of his guards. Most of the time they were thinly veiled orders; lunch at noon, tea at 4. Sometimes he would want to see the latest draft of her thesis on Darwinism and Aryan Supremacy. Those were the most palatable conversations they'd have, usually over a meal, or tea. A few times she tried to steer the conversation toward the work he was doing within the Castle, but he never answered. He'd simply change the subject.



Now she pondered his latest note. Party dignitaries would be in attendance tomorrow evening for a special meeting, including many high-level officials within the Reich. There would be a tour of the facilities, followed by the evening meal, and lastly a closed meeting. The note said nothing of her attendance at the meeting, only the dinner. From what she guessed, it seemed that Eckhardt expected her to be some sort of hostess for the affair. This is just great, she thought to herself. I should be in that meeting, only Richard the Third has me serving dinner like I'm his wife. Ugh. Somehow she would have to get the attention of someone in the party, someone higher up than Eckhardt. Someone who would listen to her theories, and recognize that she deserved to be playing a more important role within the Reich. It seemed to be her only way out.



She rose from her chair and turned on the small table lamp at her bedside, which cast an eerie reddish glow in her chambers. It was a glow that could be seen throughout most of the castle. Above the lamp and to the left, centered over her bed, hung a sizeable red flag, in the center of which was a black swastika inside a white circle. Such flags adorned the entire castle, along with portraits of Hitler and Himmler, and of course SS flags, insignias, iron crosses, and other various symbols Himmler used to enhance the mythos of the SS. As she sat on her bed, Tara couldn't help but think it all quite brilliant. So many young men, the best the German military could offer, were chosen for service in the SS. Once chosen, they were indoctrinated into quasi-religious mystic ideology that promised a new heroic Germany where present day soldiers modeled the Aryan Teutonic Knights of old. But there was more to Himmler's methods than simply using mythology and symbolism to motivate young soldiers. It was the madness of his vision that proved simultaneously fascinating and terrifying to her. The idea of raising the dead, for one thing. She had also heard rumors about the "Spear of Destiny," said to be the very spear used to pierce the side of Christ by a Roman soldier, as he hung dead on the cross. It was said that the spear was imbued with mystical powers, and whoever wielded it would have the power to conquer the world. Preposterous, she thought, stifling a yawn. I have been around these people way too long. Deciding she'd had enough for one day, she removed her uniform and donned a flannel nightgown. She slipped under the heavy blankets, and fell immediately asleep.



Her sleep was fitful. Her dreamscape was dark and roiling, as she was besieged by images ancient wars and clashing swords, of the dying and the undead, innocents perishing at the hands of evil, light engulfed by night. She dreamt of dark cloaked figures performing mysterious rituals in strange languages, on a far away and rocky, snow-covered island surrounded by dangerous seas. When she awoke the following morning, she felt stifled by a sense of dread that weighed down her heart and mind. She felt exhausted.



She spent the day almost in a daze. She kept to her room, working at her small desk, reading and writing more of the outrageous and unsubstantiated theories of Aryan purity and superiority. When she first began her "work," she would often make herself laugh with the absurdity of it all, and wondered how she managed to get through presentations of her theories to others without breaking down in laughter or in tears. Often she thought of the prisoners who labored outside the castle walls, who were trucked in early in the morning, and worked without a break until nightfall. The prisoners in striped black and white clothing that hung like rags off of their gaunt bodies. And the yellow star pinned to their chests, emblazoned with a single word. Juden. She allowed herself to think of these horrors only when she had to, to keep herself focused on her mission - to end this madness once and for all.



A light tapping on her door brought her out of her reverie. "Frau Lichtermann?" It was a guard, probably one of Eckhardt's men with another note, she thought to herself. She rose and opened the door. The guard nodded as he handed her the note, then turned on his heel and disappeared down the hallway. She sighed, opened it, and read:



Helene:



Please be present in the Great Hall at 5:00 to assist me in greeting

our distinguished guests. Among them will be Reichsführer Himmler,

and Obergruppenführers Wolff, Heydrich, Greifelt, and Muller. I am sure

several others who have not confirmed will also be in attendance. This

is an important occasion, Helene, therefore I suggest you be punctual

and attentive to your appearance.



Deitrich




Immediately her alabaster skin turned red with ire, as she crumpled up the note and threw it across the room. When the hell have I ever not been attentive to my appearance?! she thought angrily. Pompous ass! She took several deep breaths to center herself, then moved to the bed and flopped down with a long sigh. Goddess help me, she thought. Just help me through this. Help me do my duty, help my country. She wished that she had just a simple candle, or incense, anything to help her pray to the Goddess for a blessing. She thought of her altar at home, her athame and spellbooks, and knew it was too much of a risk to have anything like that here. As she continued to take deep breaths to find her center, she chanted to herself: I am peaceful, I am strong / though this dark seems so long / day must follow every night / darkness overtaken by light / I am always safe from harm / the Goddess holds me in her arms. A few minutes later, she opened her eyes and noticed the clock on her dresser. 4:15pm. It was time to get ready.



She made it to the Great Hall at exactly 4:58. She wore her dress uniform, and had her hair up in a tight bun. Not a hair was out of place. As she arrived, Eckhardt once again allowed himself the pleasure of raking his eyes over her body. She noticed with some surprise that he was dressed in a very nicely fitted and probably very expensive suit, which was a change from his everyday lab coat. She noted that rather than looking like a rat in a lab coat, he looked more like… a rat in an expensive suit. This thought amused her to no end and caused her to smile widely at him, which of course gave him a great sense of personal satisfaction.



Only moments later the entourage of dignitaries arrived, led by none other than Reichsführer Himmler himself. Tara stayed back as the men made each other's acquaintances, preferring to wait until Eckhardt called her forward for introductions. It was a sizeable group, and each man had a woman on his arm. Now she understood what her purpose was. She was to entertain the female guests while the men discussed matters of state. Before she could spend even a moment being disgusted at that particular turn of events, Eckhardt materialized at her side, holding her right arm. "Reichsführer Himmler," he said, "allow me to introduce my esteemed and lovely colleague Dr. Helene Lichtermann." She offered her hand and Himmler took it, bowing slightly. "A pleasure," he stated. He gently pulled the woman on his arm forward toward Tara. She was slightly taller than Tara, wearing her blonde hair in a stylish coif, and entirely too much makeup. Her skin was pale, which offset her dark red lipstick and black mascara. The woman looked at Tara, and an almost strange sense of familiarity struck both women at the same time. The woman held out her hand, and inhaled sharply when Tara took it, her mouth frozen in an "O." Then Himmler smiled at his companion, and turned back to Tara. "Dr. Lichtermann, allow me to introduce… a friend, Anyanka Weitzel. Anya, may I introduce Dr. Helene Lichtermann."



****

End Part 1













Edited by: badkitty at: 11/23/04 7:04 pm
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Re: Chapter 2, Part 1

Postby onyxsundrops » Tue Nov 23, 2004 8:38 pm

Is this a wish-verse, 'cause Anyanka's appearance is rarely a good thing. Regardless, I'm very much enjoying this story. I'd like to see how Willow will escape. Also, Tara (Helene) has gotten herself into a serious position, I only hope she's not in too deep. I know that she can't just up and walk away, but hopefully there's a way out somewhere. Thanks.



Yvonne:peace

Edited by: onyxsundrops at: 11/23/04 7:41 pm
onyxsundrops
 


ooooo

Postby EasierSaid » Wed Nov 24, 2004 1:56 am

Yay, you updated! I meant to reply earlier because I really like the setup you have going here. (I think you hooked me with the 'Return to Castle Wolfenstein' comment!) This update was great; Willow's much-cooler-than-MacGyver moves with the light socket were very intriguing and Tara meeting Himmler... wow, she's gotten herself into an interesting spot. Your attention to detail and care for historical accuracy is great too. Even though you have a fantastical plot in the works, it's still very much set in a certain time, place, era. (Kind of reminded me of Hellboy, in a way.) Anyway, very glad to see you updating and great work.



ETA: Something I forgot to mention earlier, was the appearance of Anya to Tara (a confusingly familiar face) and this:



Quote:
There was something about that woman…. but she couldn't think about that right now.




Who was the matronly woman who gave the fleeting smile to Willow as she delivered Willow water? I'm trying to think, can Halifrek be described as 'matronly'? :laugh Very intriguing...



Edited by: EasierSaid at: 11/25/04 6:06 pm
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Re: ooooo

Postby Artemis » Wed Nov 24, 2004 3:13 am

I'm with AquarianSky, we need a P.E.S.T.S. support group.



Anya's appearance has got me thinking. She and Tara realised something when they met, but it wasn't recognising each other, at least I didn't think so... which rules out my first thought, that maybe Anya was another undercover agent. Was it realising they're both magical (in one way or another)? Then it all depends on where Anya's loyalties lie - correct me if I'm wrong, but no-one in Castle Wolfenstein knows Tara's a witch, and that'd raise questions if it came out. Tara does not need questions to be raised, when she's stuck among paranoid maniacs.



I love the attention to detail, the authenticity, like EasierSaid said - all the small things, the types of vehicles, the make of guns the guards carry, the snippets of German dialogue, it all makes it seem so authentic. It's like the difference between an old TV show with wooden sets and studio lighting, and a movie that's spent hundreds of thousands of dollars going on location and dressing their sets to match the period and everything - in short, awesome, well done :bow

Chris Cook

Through the Looking-glass

A Willow and Tara for every world.

Artemis
 


Ch.2

Postby AquarianSky » Fri Nov 26, 2004 1:01 pm

Yay, Gail! What a nice little Thanksgiving treat -- an update to my new favorite story! As mentioned by others, your attention to detail is most impressive. And I'm *always* happy to see Anya appear. Can't wait to find out what her connection to Tara is. Great update! :clap



On a somewhat related note for those who enjoy WWII period films, I recommend a movie called "November Moon" which I discovered a couple months ago. It's about a lesbian couple in WWII Nazi-occupied France, one of whom is Jewish. While neither is a spy, one lover does cozy up to the Nazis so they won't suspect that she is hiding the Jewish lover. So, there is a fair amount of suspense/intrigue...and you know, pretty heavy on the angst (as one would expect). Have a tissue handy. It's in German with English subtitles, so people who just can't get into subtitles might not care for it.....



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If you aren't completely appalled, then you haven't been paying attention.



AquarianSky
 


Re: Ch.2

Postby glendaofoz2004 » Mon Nov 29, 2004 11:20 am

This is a great idea for a story. It is very interesting the way that all the characters are shown. I can't wait to see what happens next.



You have a great writing style. I love the way that you allow the reader to totally visualize the story by the awesome detail that you use to describe what is going on. I can see myself there with the characters and doing what they are doing. That is very rare to be able to do that. Thank you!!!!

glendaofoz2004
 


Re: Ch.2

Postby WillowMaclay » Mon Nov 29, 2004 12:47 pm

This is great! I've been looking for a good fic, and I found a great one! I am very interested, but I am a little confused about Willow's magicks and all. Is she the all powerful witch, because if I had uber powers I would just let loose and not hotwire a trap (even though Willow hotwiring a trap in the dark is pretty cool).



Waiting for an update. Thanks!

WillowMaclay
 

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