first poem

[kiwi6969]

Hey kittens!!

This is my first every poem,so if you have anything to say please be gentle, cause I bruse easy, feedback would be great







Night mare.....



to feel to love

to want can't wait

to see you

to smell you

to hold you

and to love you

this is what my nightmares are full of

to want you,not to have you

I can't get you

It's to late





thanks for reading



kiwi 6969

[pacou]

Hey Teresa



Welcome in the Kitten poetry club I hope you'll enjoy it



That was an very interesting poem



Short but you could still feel the desperation



Hehe, maybe you wanna share more, if you ever feel like that, you know, there's a board called the Kitten



Thanks for sharing



-Viv-

Medicine, law, banking – these are necessary to sustain life. But poetry, romance. love, beauty? These are what we stay alive for!

[kiwi6969]

Viv



thanks for your feed back,every little bit helps...

I'm just starting out with the poems, and I'm sure they will only get better..









kiwi 6969

[SJ]

Good poem

[Repost Moderator]

Originally posted by kiwi6969



Ok kittens, here are two more,



Feedback.......yes please



no titles as yet...



Should I speak my mind

tell everyone the secret I have

risk loseing them,hurting them

haveing them not loveing me

to turn from me

To tell the truth

or to keep this lie

Do I want to hurt the ones I love

or do I just want to hurt me??







Greener Grass.......



Greener grass

not to be walked on

not to be crossed over

It can be sowen

It can be mowed

It's so enviting

But I want to be

where the grass is greener

just it can't be crossed over..



Thanks for taking the time to read these..



Cheers kiwi6969

[SJ]

Like those poems

Keep writing and thanks for sharing

[kiwi6969]

Thanks SJ..



For reading them.









Cheers kiwi6969

[pagnmickie]

Hey Kiwi!



Great poems. Keep 'em coming! Maybe we can see them turn into HAPPY new beginnings...



*hugs*



-Mickie

One word frees us of all the weight and pain of life: That word is love.
-Sophocles

[kiwi6969]

Hey Mickie...



Thanks for reading, and in my future I can see many happy poems coming from this kitten..



Thanks Mickie for everything...*hugs*





cheers kiwi6969

[kiwi6969]

Hey there I have no idea what I'm doing so....anyway



Still no titles..



It was an instant attraction

two souls had joined

only where there was one

Our two hearts beating as one.

We feel each others pain,lust,hate and wanting

We knew what the other was thinking

finished each others words,quotes and sentances.



It was an instant attraction

fate said it was ment to be

the only two in this world

Just you and me..

One heart,one soul

and one spirit

It was ment to be

just, and only you and me...







cheers kiwi6969

[SJ]

Sweet poem

[pagnmickie]

Love the poem sweetie!!! Very sweet indeed...



*HUGS*







-Mickie

One word frees us of all the weight and pain of life: That word is love.
-Sophocles

[wolfwynd]

Great poems Kiwi, keep up the good work and keep em coming!



Keep the love alive.... + =



Wolfy

"Ohana means family. It means no one gets left behind or forgotton"

[Shinnen]

Very emotional poems. I particularly like the latest one. keep up the good work.

CheerZ

Shinnen



Who cares how tall your lover is ... height doesn't matter in bed



For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it

[EyesLie]

I loved these poems. They certainly do get better as you go. I especially liked the second one, it was dark & uncertain, & that kinda stuff really gets to me. As for the last one, hey the happiness is seeping in I see as this one was all goodness and light!

"Oh, I'm never really nice," Anya replied matter-of-factly. "I'm just the voice of truth in a world of artifice and social convention -On Second Thought, by AntigoneUnbound

[kiwi6969]

Hey kittens

I would reply to each of you...but I'm too lazy for that hehe,so I'll say to you all thank you for reading my poems and giving me feedback on them..







So anyway I wrote another one...hehe



My essance...........



You are my essance the air I breath

The wind in my hair

The sun on my face

The rain that caress my skin

The light that fills my night

The nights I dream of you

You give my life meaning

And you give me hope

You make me feel love,joy and happeness

You are my essance

And I breath you in every day..





and to this I bid you all a good day





cheers kiwi6969

[AbbyQT]

Hey Kiwi baby keep up the good work....you know I love your stuff.

[Shinnen]

Very nice calm poem. I like the feeling of it

CheerZ

Shinnen



Who cares how tall your lover is ... height doesn't matter in bed



For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it

[pagnmickie]

Fantastic poem sweetie!! *happy sigh* Very lovely...



Keep them coming!



*HUGS*







-Mickie

One word frees us of all the weight and pain of life: That word is love.
-Sophocles

[kiwi6969]

Hey guys....I had a bit of a bad day......so you all know what that means??? ...yes you do now suffer



Ok here we go....



ROCKY ROAD...



A rocky road is all I see

our friendship had meaning

I just wish I could let it be

and start acting like I want to be

to be trusting of your loyalty

to contain my self from the lusting

I wish that sometimes we never meet

and then right now we wouldn't be upset

to understand that I feel regret

my emotions are nearly spent

If only you could see what I ment

I wouldn't be sitting here in a mess

Just remember our friendship that was

And now I think its time to move on

Down this rocky road called life..









cheers kiwi6969

[kiwi6969]

Sorry all bad..bad...bad day



I'm hurting it cuts like a knife

the pain runs so deep

I just want to fall into the deep

lock my-self away forever

Not to have contact to see or speak

I can't hurt any-one

I'm feeling lost and confused

I wonder what to do? Oh I know

I'll leave you to it,to do best

I'm going to blow like the wind

I'm hoping some-one is listening

cause tomorrow I'm going to sin....







ok going now to drown my sorrows .......



kiwi

[SJ]

Thanks for sharing those poems

[Shinnen]

Two very emotional poems. Feel better kiwi. Great poetry.

CheerZ

Shinnen



Who cares how tall your lover is ... height doesn't matter in bed



For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it

[wolfwynd]

great poems Kiwi, keep up the good work **sniffles** you write very well



Keep the love alive... + =



Wolfy

"Amo il Corridoio di Alice Hall"

[kiwi6969]

Aww guys *pulls all into a tight hug* thanks



Thanks so much for your feed back and support...



I don't know how I would get through this....



A special hi to abby...thanks hon I know you love my work *hugs*



This was written for a special girl I meet online 2 months ago..



Todays the day I chatted online

Todays the day I made you mine

Through the heart ache we will endure

For only our friendship is pure....



And you know who you are.........

[pacou]

Hey Teresa



Great poems, there were nice and happy and dark and gloomy ones but I liked them all



Please, keep writing the poems and... most important... share them



Thanks



-Viv-

Medicine, law, banking – these are necessary to sustain life. But poetry, romance. love, beauty? These are what we stay alive for!

[pagnmickie]

Hi Terri!



Wonderful poems sweetie. So full of emotion. Thank you so much for sharing with us. *HUGS*



-Mickie

One word frees us of all the weight and pain of life: That word is love.
-Sophocles

[kiwi6969]

Hey!!!

Thanks all for reading *hugs* It means alot to me



Well since there are still people reading I'll keep writting...



Jealousy..............

It's only one word

It has a meaning

and it's own colour

It has its own emotion

So why am I afraid of it

Why cant I say it

What am I afraid of....



all for now*blows a kiss to all*

we are all lips in life sucking on one big nipple ~ kiwi6969

[pagnmickie]

Great poem Terri!



Jealousy is a nasty little critter! Keep up the great work!



*hugs*







-Mickie

One word frees us of all the weight and pain of life: That word is love.
-Sophocles

[Stroke of Luck]

Hi Terri



Wow beautiful poems but they were so sad too... i hope to see more of them



Cu

SoL/Natti



This is a duet, Amber! You need to sing!"- Tony