Skip to content


Wandering Star

Post your original creative efforts here. Fan art IS allowed in this forum. Absolutely no fanfic!

Wandering Star

Postby fakhra » Mon Sep 20, 2004 7:58 am

Wandering Star



Pangs of guilt were devouring me

Like a termite in timber

Stuck in timelessness

The future,

I could not see

The will to survive was

growing dimmer



For my fault was kindness,

Modesty: The biggest crime

My honesty turned against me

My cry for nature;

An amusing mime



Know yourself oh wandering star

You are lost, she told me

Don’t care and love but yourself

Know what sets you free



I found myself drifting into darkness

To a world strangely unknown

I feel music;

Heaven and hell in unison

Beautiful like a flower, cold like stone



I embraced modesty, I embraced kindness

I left everything behind

All that’s left is me and only me

Memories no longer haunt my mind



I see triumph lying at my feet

As humanity questions my existence

I have learnt to make ends meet

I savor my bitter independence



A new beginning is near

That will lead me to my destiny,

Destiny;

Should I hope for or fear?

Closer to the end of my tyranny?



Hi, I'd like to introduce myself. I don't know who I am or what I am doing here but one thing's for sure, with Tara and Willow around, this place is bound to be fun. The poem above is my own, a result of the coming-out-of-the-shell experience.



I hope you like it.



I feel great! How are u all?



fakhra
 


Re: Wandering Star

Postby Wired vixen » Sat Nov 13, 2004 9:34 am





Well done! :clap :clap :clap



That was great stuff! i'm all great! really great!! how are you?!



you gonna post more?? Want more!



Stace xXx

"Um...dont mean to ruin the sexcapades...but we need the chips out there. Xanders being a chip whore." -She's my always by spikeizmine87

Wired vixen
 


Re: Wandering Star

Postby onyxsundrops » Sat Nov 13, 2004 9:54 pm

Welcome to the Board! and I enjoyed the poem very much. If I'm not completely forgetful, I think you said the poem was about your coming out? Regardless, it's appropriately titled and well-written. Thanks.



Yvonne:peace

onyxsundrops
 


Re: Wandering Star

Postby SJ » Tue Nov 16, 2004 2:12 am

Great poem,thanks for sharing :read

SJ
 


Re: Wandering Star

Postby fakhra » Tue Nov 16, 2004 9:14 am

Thank you, thank you :)



I am glad you like, dedicated to all the beautiful stars out there, shine on!



Shall post some more.



Thanks again :)

fakhra
 


Return to Board index

Return to The Inward Eye

Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users and 6 guests


Powered by phpBB The phpBB Group © 2000, 2002, 2005, 2007
Style based on a Cosa Nostra Design