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First Love

Postby HOPE REIGNS » Mon Apr 21, 2003 6:38 pm

OK Gals and guys, here is one I thought most of you could relate with or hope for or something, anyway here it goes...



~FIRST LOVE~



Life's little unexpected gifts,

are the things we hope for, for its lifts.

We close our eyes, and hug our chests.

To hope and pray, then finally rest.



To receive these gifts, are great but rare.

To kindle a spark in her vacant stare.

Friendship is grand, but love is astounding.

To look in her eyes, while my heart's busy pounding.



The basic ease of talking, becomes a chore.

To stutter, and stammer, and want much more.

To think of what to do and say.

When to ask in just the right way.



Will she give me a chance to prove it's real?

Or will it be just an unsealed deal?

Will she look in my eyes to see what I see?

Will my feelings be mutual, or is it just me?



I finally asked her what she thought and felt.

Then I looked to the ceiling, down on my knees I knelt.

I thanked god up above for what she had said.

My shaking hands together, on the floor, near the bed.



She had me stand and look in her eyes.

She placed both her hands on both of my thighs.

For the first time, I noticed the sparkle was there.

I couldn't pull myself from her loving glare.



I knew this was unique and rare.

For two women to match, and fit like a pair.

I looked at her caringly, and told her "I love you".

And, that unexpected gift came when she said "I love you too".



I then knew it would never again feel like this.

I leaned over her, held her, and gave her a kiss.

She's my baby, my honey, my pure white dove,

my friend, my lover, she's my first true love.



Thank you for reading,



Anna :heart

Thank you Amber and Alyson!!

HOPE REIGNS
 


Re: First Love

Postby SJ » Tue Apr 22, 2003 4:05 am

Great poem :read

SJ
 


New Poem

Postby SJ » Wed Apr 23, 2003 12:23 am

New Poem :bigwave



The heart is an ocean

I'm willing to swim

Drowning amongst it

The blackness within

Your love surrounding me

Pulling me down

No longer afraid

I'm willing to drown



SJ
 


Re: General poetry and short stories

Postby daydreamer777 » Wed Apr 23, 2003 1:10 am

sam, :bow :clap ::bow

i read and loved your poem.:heart

great poetry! :banana :banana :banana

will there be more? :pray

Edited by: DrG at: 4/23/03 12:13:08 am
daydreamer777
 


Re: General poetry and short stories

Postby urnofosiris » Wed Apr 23, 2003 1:17 am

daydreamer, I took the liberty of editing your post because one of your dancing bananas had turned out -uhm- wrong.

SJ, that is a really lovely poem, as is yours Hope Reigns. :) Poetry is one thing I will never be able to write. Which is probably a good thing in my case. :p

-------------------------


Coffee, Food, Kisses and Gay Love........Get it while you are hot

urnofosiris
 


Re: General poetry and short stories

Postby SJ » Wed Apr 23, 2003 1:26 am

Thanks for positive feedback :)

SJ
 


Sam's poem

Postby Mainer » Wed Apr 23, 2003 5:51 am

Hi Sam. :wave This poem was really great. Being a hopeless romantic I thought it was beautiful. You have such a wonderful talent. I hope you'll keep posting and sharing it with us. :clap





~Spencer~





"Love is like a roller coaster: When it's good you don't want to get off, and when it isn't, you can't wait to throw up."

Mainer
 


Re: Sam's poem

Postby pacou » Wed Apr 23, 2003 1:31 pm

Awww Sam, that was absolutely wonderful :sigh



I have to agree with Mainer, you have a great talent :grin



Really, so sweet... Please keep posting them :)



Take care Sam :p



:peace -Viv-

Medicine, law, banking – these are necessary to sustain life. But poetry, romance. love, beauty? These are what we stay alive for!

pacou
 


Re: Sam's poem

Postby pikescoob » Wed Apr 23, 2003 4:20 pm

That was such an amazing poem Hope Reigns, thank you for sharing :D ..........Sam! Here I am giving some feedback, I loved it and I totally agree with Spence and Viv that you have great talent! :D



**Michelle

pikescoob
 


Re: Sam's poem

Postby SJ » Thu Apr 24, 2003 12:09 am

Thanks for the positive feedback Mainer,pacou and pikescoob :bigwave

Here's another poem.



Waves crash

all around me

Your love is like the stormy seas

Your presence is intoxicating

Has the power

To bring me

To my kness

Your energy is mesmerizing

The ability of just one stare

Has the power

To confound me

Bound by magic

I know not where



SJ
 


Sam's poem

Postby Mainer » Thu Apr 24, 2003 8:09 am

:wave Hi Sam, me again. :) This is another amazing poem. It's so lovey and romantic, perfect for someone like me. :love Inspiration seems to have struck you, and I for one, couldn't be happier. :banana :dance





~Spencer~





"Love is like a roller coaster: When it's good you don't want to get off, and when it isn't, you can't wait to throw up."

Mainer
 


Re: Sam's poem

Postby pacou » Thu Apr 24, 2003 12:43 pm

Hey Sam :banana (OMG isn't that the cutest new one? well, next to this one: :moo Sheesh, love them :sigh , oh the poem, erm...:blush )



I really, really enjoyed the last one, it was great cos you could feel the love but also the doubts and insecurities... VERY nice :p



Thanks Sam, keep them coming :p



Quote:
Your presence is intoxicating

Has the power

To bring me

To my kness




Loved that :grin



:peace -Viv-

Medicine, law, banking – these are necessary to sustain life. But poetry, romance. love, beauty? These are what we stay alive for!

pacou
 


Re: Sam's poem

Postby pikescoob » Thu Apr 24, 2003 4:14 pm

Sam! I read your newest poem...very nice! :grin



**Michelle

pikescoob
 


Re: Sam's poem

Postby SJ » Fri Apr 25, 2003 12:18 am

Thanks Mainer,pacou and pikescoob,glad you liked the poem :D

SJ
 


Re: Sam's poem

Postby SJ » Fri Apr 25, 2003 3:52 am

Another poem :bigwave



Swept away by your stare

Moonlight shines upon your hair

Glistens on your milky skin

Flames of desire lie within

Ready to engulf my soul

I once was empty

But now am whole



SJ
 


Re: General poetry and short stories

Postby daydreamer777 » Fri Apr 25, 2003 8:23 am

hey sam:bigwave

wow, another love poem:clap

i think you're in luv:hmm

you're an amazing poet:bow

i hope you post more poems soon:pray

daydreamer777
 


Re: General poetry and short stories

Postby pikescoob » Fri Apr 25, 2003 10:20 am

Sam! That was amazing! I could imagine that whole scene and the feelings you described...very beautiful :grin



**Michelle

pikescoob
 


Re: General poetry and short stories

Postby SJ » Fri Apr 25, 2003 10:44 am

Thanks for the great feedback :grin

Here's another two poems.



You make me giddy with desire

When you touch my skin

My soul's on fire

Yearning for you with every breath

Not only in life

But also in death



Imagine my surprise

When I saw your face

Across a crowded room

I felt your warm embrace

Your eyes pierced my soul

Unlocking secrets to my heart

Words never to be spoken

Love never to depart





SJ
 


Sam's poem

Postby Mainer » Fri Apr 25, 2003 11:00 am

:wave I have to agree with Michelle this poem was absolutely beautiful. I loved it. :love You're writing about the kind of love that everyone hopes to find someday. I can't wait to read more. :read



You really listen to your fans, I say I want more and before my feedback is even posted, there are two more poems. :lol Just like all your other poems, these two were superb as well. I'm so happy that you're sharing all these wonderful poems with us. Keep up the great work, Sam. :clap





~Spencer~





"Love is like a roller coaster: When it's good you don't want to get off, and when it isn't, you can't wait to throw up."

Edited by: Mainer at: 4/25/03 11:58:36 am
Mainer
 


Re: Sam's poem

Postby pacou » Sat Apr 26, 2003 2:03 pm

Awww Sam :)



Those were great, I enjoyed especially the second one :D



Sam, keep posting :D



And thanks for the greeting card :lol



:peace -Viv-

Medicine, law, banking – these are necessary to sustain life. But poetry, romance. love, beauty? These are what we stay alive for!

pacou
 


Re: Sam's poem

Postby pikescoob » Sat Apr 26, 2003 5:19 pm

Sam!! Loved both of them :grin And yeah, what Spence said about it being the type of love people look for, that was nice so I'll agree with her :p



**Michelle

pikescoob
 


Re: Sam's poem

Postby SJ » Sun Apr 27, 2003 12:10 am

Mainer,pacou,pikescoob :bigwave

Your comments are always appreciated,I'm glad you liked the poems :grin

SJ
 


Re: Sam's poem's

Postby Wytchi Grrl » Sun Apr 27, 2003 9:34 am

Hey Sam, Great poetry! Really lovely and very cute. I love it!:banana

Take Care

Wytchi x




Toujours, Pour toujours, Élément essentiel - Saule et Tara

Witchcraft Grrls

Wytchi Grrl
 


Re: Sam's poem's

Postby SJ » Mon Apr 28, 2003 1:09 am

Thanks Wytchi Grrl :grin

Glad you liked the poems :)

Another poem



With every sweet caress you make

I yearn for you once more

My head is filled with stars

For you

I truly do adore

Burning with a passion

Coursing through my veins

This desire that I have for you

I hope will not cause shame



SJ
 


Sam's poem

Postby Mainer » Mon Apr 28, 2003 9:25 am

:wave Hi Sam. You did it again. Another great poem. I'm glad you've been so inspired lately. I've really enjoyed reading them. :read I hope you post some more real soon. :pray





~Spencer~





"Love is like a roller coaster: When it's good you don't want to get off, and when it isn't, you can't wait to throw up."

Mainer
 


Re: Sam's poem

Postby pacou » Mon Apr 28, 2003 1:30 pm

Hey Sam :bigwave



Great poem as alsways, it rocks a lot :moo (I'm sorry, I just love it)



Keep posting and like Mainer said, it's good that you're having such a great inspiration lately :p



Thanks for sharing :banana



:peace -Viv-

Medicine, law, banking – these are necessary to sustain life. But poetry, romance. love, beauty? These are what we stay alive for!

pacou
 


Re: Sam's poem

Postby Wytchi Grrl » Tue Apr 29, 2003 12:48 pm

Hi Sam,

I really love the last poem it beautiful. I did post some feedback the other day but it was accepted? or has been yet anyhow. keep up the good work. It's really good.

Wytchi :flower




Toujours, Pour toujours, Élément essentiel - Saule et Tara

Witchcraft Grrls

Wytchi Grrl
 


Re: Sam's poem

Postby pikescoob » Tue Apr 29, 2003 4:42 pm

Sam!! I loved this poem :grin I especially loved the first two lines cuz yeah...touching and yearning for more...mmm :p Thanks for posting!



**Michelle

pikescoob
 


Re: Sam's poem

Postby SJ » Wed Apr 30, 2003 1:59 am

Mainer,pacou,Wytchi Grrl and pikescoob :bigwave

Glad you liked the poetry :D

Another poem



In your arms I find such bliss

With every motion I feel your kiss

Basking in your afterglow

I fall

You catch me

I just let go

With every rhythmic pulse you make

My body shivers

And quells my ache



SJ
 


Sam's Poem

Postby Mainer » Wed Apr 30, 2003 7:51 am

You were right Sam your poem is thuddable. :thud That was great. Not only thuddable, but very sweet and romantic too. :love I'm a sucker for romance. I'm glad that you're writing so many poems these days, that means I get to read more. :applause I was gonna say keep them coming, but in light of your latest creation I think I'll just say I hope you post more real soon. :D





~Spencer~





"Love is like a roller coaster: When it's good you don't want to get off, and when it isn't, you can't wait to throw up."

Mainer
 

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