Willow and Tara Comic

[TaraBaby77]

Leah -



WOOHOO!!!! First off, bad me for not reading this sooner. What creativity you have. I'm totally impressed and can't wait to see more. GREAT JOB, keep it up!!! =)

Aaron

'TaraBaby77'

[chronic]

I’m glad you managed to solve all the technical problems, I wouldn’t have wanted to miss this! I like the style of your artwork, quite stark and striking, and it really suits the dark nature of the story.



I loved the end of chapter 2, it left me not knowing whether to be sad at the irony of vamp Tara realising she was human after all, or happy at her embracing her new existence, and her father and brother getting their comeuppance. Can’t wait for the next update.



And definitely looking forward to seeing spicy Tara

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Morning Amnesia – Nature’s way of keeping you from waking up screaming

[Foxfire141]

Update!



Title - Still no title. Any ideas?

Author name - Leah

Email Address - foxfire141@hotmail.com

Rating - I'm going to have to say PG13 for now... It's nothing more than the show would deplict.

Disclaimer - Well, there's the obviousness of some girl on girl kissy action. Not a lot of angst - yet. Oh, and it takes place in the world of The Wish, but other than that, it's AU.

Feedback- Feedback is always appreciated.

Summary- The Bronze. Some vampires. A few human hostages. Willow's POV.

Notes - I love going back through the old Buffy episodes and seeing which characters I can mess with THIS time. (sorry about the tiny printing... it's a bit hard to read)



Chapter 3



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[mxgirl314]

Hey foxfire141 I love ur comic its so good. Can't wait till next update hope its soon

[allykat]

Oh, excellent update! I'm loving this so much! Did the Master say what I thought he said... This is great!!!!

[xita]

Ok, now i had to reread because of your comment allykat. I can be slow sometimes. I do believe the master did suggest that. Very interesting! And who was he talking about? I will guess Tara, but maybe both



Great stuff, I am not an art critic, but your stuff looks pretty good to me!

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"Hard work often pays off after time but laziness always pays off now!"

[WebWarlock]

Oh this is fun!



First off I love the comicbook format, a real change from other fics. I like new things.



Also I am really into this story. I said it before, I don't like vampire-Tara stories, but someone allways comes around to make me a liar. This is a good one.



Of the Master is talking about soup. Tara has soup, she makes the best in all of Bizzaro-Sunydale. Willow did say she didn't like to share.



But seriously, wow Vamp-Willow is a bit of a killing machine huh.



Can't wait for more.



Warlock

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Web Warlock

Coming Soon to The Other Side, The Netbook of Shadows: A Book of Spells for d20 Witches

"Does anybody remember laughter?" - Robert Plant, "The Song Remains the Same"

[Tempest Duer]

Wow, Leah. Just... wow. This is absolutely fantastic. Your artwork is beautiful... it's not quite sparse but it's not overly lush. It's very inkeeping with the story.



It's nice to see someone who does comics, they don't come along very often. And since you don't have a title as of yet, I'll mull it over for a while, I can be good with titles now and then.



Once again, this is a wonderful piece of work, and I'm glad I got the chance to see it in progress.

Willow: Hey Buff. One more thing. Buffy: Yeah? Willow: I’m gay. Buffy: Okay, Will. Xander owes me ten bucks.

~Remember to Breathe by Yellow Crayon

[BabyJune]

foxfire have you read Strangers in Paradise? Your newly-garbed Tara reminds me a bit of Katchoo during her times with Darcy. The baggy shirt and long hair bit I guess. Anywho, you kind of remind me of Moore's style.

[TaraBaby77]

WOO HOO!!! AWESOME!!! I really really like this comic. More please ??? =)

Aaron

'TaraBaby77'

[ambersagoddess]

Hmmm, I've heard excelent things, so I thought I'd take a peek. Nobody lied, this is great, brilliant drawings. Can't wait to read/see more.



-Rei

Edited by: maudmac  at: 1/24/04 6:54 pm

[MellindraX]

I have many many questions, but honestly I've never been good at comments. Suffice to say this is very cool and I want to see more!

I’ve never purposely gone out to take somebody out. Well, maybe, in elementary school I once did try to trip somebody. –Amber Benson

I'm an idiot. Ask me how.

[allykat]

I'm so loving this!

Great update! I liked the way you drew Faith. Maybe you could color her hair?(I mean, if she's a brunette in your story?)



I'm a big fan of Strangers in Paradise also, it's one my favorite comics. It's written and drawn by Terry Moore, who also drew "Wannablessedbe", a Willow and Tara comic.Have you read that one? This W&T comic is in color, but SiP is in black in white. It's really awesome! Your comic reminds me of SiP a lot! Great work!

Edited by: allykat at: 1/25/04 12:33 pm

[Foxfire141]

Mmm... Tara soup...



Anyone else go to a strange visual place?



Anywho, BabyJune: I can't say that I've read it. I've heard of it though... it is a comic book, right? For someone who likes comics as much as I do, i really don't know a lot about the titles that are out there....



A comment about the comic: this story is - so far - open ended. If you have ideas or something you think would make for interesting story plots, let me know and I'll see if I can work them in.



Title - Still titleless...

Author name - Leah

Email Address - foxfire141@hotmail.com

Rating - I'm going to have to say PG13 for now... It's nothing more than the show would deplict.

Disclaimer - Well, there's the obviousness of some girl on girl kissy action. Not a lot of angst - yet. Oh, and it takes place in the world of The Wish, but other than that, it's AU.

Feedback- Feedback is always appreciated.

Summary- Willow settles into her role as the new big bad vampire boss.

Notes - Faith is one of the hardest characters to draw and keep consistant... please be gentle.



Chapter Four



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[mxgirl314]

Hey, great update I thought you drew Faith pretty good. I really looks like her. Can't wait till your next update.

[ambersagoddess]

heh heh heh, sooooo Tara's got a soul, eh? Willow couldn't let such a tasty thing just go away, nope nope. Good stuff man, good stuff



-Rei

There were only first days following one another.The third was the first,the fourth was the first,the seventy-first was the first.The first day was the three thousandth.-The Fixer

[Ginner WTluv]

Okay, need to be careful about what i say here.... mainly cuz it's Faith and i don't want you getting mad at me But yes.... i must admit... i do especially love this chapter, mainly because i love the way you drew it all... the characters, and yes, Faith Plus, vamp Will gets all playful and butch... which, c'mon, is always fun.... but i really do love the way you draw Faith.... as hot as she is in 'real life'. *Flees the board* heehee...



~ Jen

Helen - Oh please Nikki, be serious!

Nikki - I want to make love you to all night long... is that serious enough?

** Helen and Nikki in "Bad Girls" **

[TaraBaby77]

WOOHOO!!! I love this comic, but....... and a big but it is...... BUT, I wish there was more!!! So, can we have more please??? Great work, keep it up. =)

Aaron

'TaraBaby77'

[Tempest Duer]

Cool update... with Faith and all... yeah, really cool.



So Tara has a soul... can't say I'm really surprised, but hey.



This is totally cool. But, like Aaron, I wish there was more. Oh well, I'll wait.

Willow: Hey Buff. One more thing. Buffy: Yeah? Willow: I’m gay. Buffy: Okay, Will. Xander owes me ten bucks.

~Remember to Breathe by Yellow Crayon

[TexanZeppo256]

Great update! I love the style and imagry, though I didn't immediately recognize Faith (it was the hair - i was expecting it to be a lot darker than it was).



One question though: Who said anything about a soul? "She's like Angel" doth not a souled Tara make. Besides, if Tara had a soul, then I'm fairly sure that she would have some compunctions against killing people, which I have yet to see from her.



However, Tara isn't nearly as violent or spontaniously cruel as Willow is, and I wonder why that is: Is it the fact that her personality prior to being turned was so introverted that it tempered the demon that inhabited her body? Is it because she has half of a soul that fights a full demon? Or is it something else?



I don't know, but i really wanna!



Great job Foxfire! You're doing such a great job that you've got me making random speculations like I did with BtVS back in the day



Adiosy!

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There she is! There she is... Ahh... Not so wounded as we were led to believe... So much the better. --Khan, "Star Trek II: WOK"



From The Land of Tolerance,

---The Texan Zeppo

[Fuzz WT]

ooh, I like this!!!



Willow's so cruel and evil and unbelievably sexy!!! Hee hee,



I don't know anything about art but hey, I love what you did with the light and ratio. The one where the shadow placed about the half of Willow's face was pretty good.I mean,( maybe it's just me...) it gave a feeling about good and evil that separated in herself, ya know...



Anyway! I love the story and now hmm...Faith said something disturbing...



Damn, I'm just starting to like that bad Tara girl...





*Fuzz*

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Hey! You're gonna back off! She said no and that's it. ~ TARA

[chronic]

So Vamp Tara has a soul? How did that happen? How come she and Willow haven't noticed when it seems everyone else can see it? Why am i asking so many questions?



To echo everyone else, your drawing of Faith is good, its just the light hair that seems slightly un Faith-like. Still, her cleavage makes her immediately recognizable!



So Angel is still around, presumably leading the white hats. I wonder what he'll make of another vampire with a soul, who at the moment seems happy enough to kill. I'm really enjoying this, can't wait for the next chapter.

[Foxfire141]

Um... Wow... this was just supposed to be a three page mini story with no meaning... Now it's getting longer i'm afraid that I still won't be able to actually give you any answers to all the questions. Eep!



allykat: The reason I haven't filled in her hair is that I still have hopes that one day I'll be able to get this comic coloured. By me, or if I can convince someone else to do it. Colouring just gets so repetiative... ick.



And yes, I've read the Wannablessedbe comic. Excellent comic. Good story, great art. I really wish he'd done some more.



Jenny: You're officially banned from all things Faith. :P Evil Faith, corrupting my girl...



Aaron: I promise, you'll get lots more. Although I'm running out of finished (inked) pages... I do have an ever growing pile of uninked work. So one way or another, I'll keep giving you guys updates.



TexanZeppo256: You said that if Tara had a soul, she might have some problems with killing. That's one thing about Buffy that I never really understood. No soul = killing machine, and a soul gaurentees that you won't want to kill someone.... Yet they had characters like Faith who, even though they had a soul, didn't mind the occasional kill. And that was just me thinking outloud... maybe it's best to ignore me when I do that.



To answer the rest of your questions though... uh... I have absolutly no idea.



chronic: I'm so glad that if the faces of the characters are unrecognizable, people can figure out who they are by the cleavage ratios. As to your questions, I think I'll actually be able to answer them in the next few chapters.



That's all for now

Shade!

Leah

[Ginner WTluv]

Ban me? From Fath? Ban me from Faith?! You just can't do that to a girl!! I'll never survive!! She isn't corrupting me!! ....i was already corrupt when i met you, you just didn't know it straight away. But still... you can't just ban me like that!! ahem.... luv ya heehee.



~ Jen

Helen - Oh please Nikki, be serious!

Nikki - I want to make love you to all night long... is that serious enough?

** Helen and Nikki in "Bad Girls" **

[Foxfire141]

Here's another chapter.



Title - Still titleless...

Author name - Leah

Email Address - foxfire141@hotmail.com

Rating - I'm going to have to say PG13 for now... It's nothing more than the show would deplict.

Disclaimer - Well, there's the obviousness of some girl on girl kissy action. Not a lot of angst - yet. Oh, and it takes place in the world of The Wish, but other than that, it's AU.

Feedback- Feedback is always appreciated.

Summary- A jail break.

Notes - The next couple of pages are a cross of running out of ink and laziness, hense the very poor use of paint shop to do the leather jackets.



Chapter Five



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[Washi]

Vampire Willow's gonna be soo pissed now. hehehe, as always I love it! I didn't even notice the use of photoshop at first. It kinda looks like a highlighted charcoal or something, you know? But, how could I know? I can't even draw a straight line with a ruler.

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[xita]

Oh no they took Tara. Willow is not happy. I am not happy. Hate to be cheering against the white hats, but hey it's Tara and she has a soul!

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"Hard work often pays off after time but laziness always pays off now!"

[eveningstar845]

Great update!

Willow's bad and sexy.

Beautiful drawing on Faith. She's hottttt!



Dee

[justin]

That was a great update This stories really getting interesting.



I take it that the white hat's took Tara with them rather than just staking her becuase she has a soul. The question is what's Willow going to do about it?



Looking forward to reading more.

Postel's Prescription: Be generous in what you accept, rigorous in what you emit.

[RoseWitch]

Hey!!!

Love this comic and the art... And if you still need someone to color in the art for u...I can do it!!!



I'm just a bored college kid looking for something to do..



I love reading ..but the comic caught my attention ..so yes...one volunteer here to color the comic for u..

alright...nuf blabbering..hehe



-Muse

Edited by: Warduke at: 2/8/04 10:09 am