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Chase the morning (updated: 7/7/12)

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Re: Chase the morning (updated: 4/22/11)

Postby nightmask » Sun Apr 24, 2011 1:41 pm

Author's note: the poem mentioned is "Ulalume" by Edgar Allen Poe. I highly suggest listening to Jeff Buckley reciting the whole poem it's amazing! :D

Part twenty:

Tara’s dreams did not come for a while, her mind was lost in it’s own world and her body floated in the darkness until finally her imagination opened up. She dreamt she was in her own bed, the lights were off in her room and she was under the covers. She heard a soft giggling and turned to see Willow laying next to her, sharing her pillow. The red head’s eyes were bright and full of stars her smile made Tara’s stomach flutter in false relief. Willow’s arms were wrapped around her and she felt warm, it was as if only she and Willow existed under the dark blue fabric of her blanket and that was the extent of their world. Dream Willow leaned in and lovingly forced Tara’s lips apart with her own, the bruising kiss made Tara feel lightheaded. She snaked an arm around Willow’s waist pulling her closer, her other hand slithered past the red-head’s shirt and caressed her fair and freckled skin. Tara’s fingers kneaded dream Willow’s shoulder blades and traced down the column of her spine that, but before she could reach the scars Willow’s skin turned into sand which crumbled and sifted between Tara’s fingers.

Tara opened her eyes to see an ebony gray stormy sky, the wind smelt of salt and damp plank wood. She was sitting on the beach, the ocean stretched out before her in a dark prussian blue mixed with highlights of onyx green, the tide was coming in harder each time and the wind whipped Tara’s hair in every direction. The waves called forlornly out to her, and pale foam creeped ever so closer to her toes and tickled her ankles with it’s chilling spray. The sound of the waves crashing matched Tara’s heart beat that thumped in her ears, the waves pounded violently onto the shore, in the distance Tara could hear thunder booming and yet she saw no rain. The dark looming water only miles from where Tara sat rose higher each time until it collapsed under the wind and it’s own weight, it began to scare her as it crept closer and closer to where she was.

Tara turned around and saw a naked figure sitting on a large rock not far from where she was. Tara squinted her eyes and looked closer, it was Willow, her beloved skin glistened from droplets of water that had sprayed onto her skin from the wind, it was as fair as moonlight and dappled with sun kissed freckles. Willow’s red hair looked like it was a vibrant orange fire when it was caught by the wind, and her eyes were an exquisite crystalline green that reflected the growing storm in their dark irises. She looked wild and untammed sitting perfectly still in all her glory, she did not seem to notice Tara only the ocean held her gaze. As Willow inhaled and exhaled Tara watched fixated on the red-head’s luscious neck muscles that strained as they contracted and steadily relaxed. A line from a long forgotten poem echoed throughout Tara’s mind and dreamscape it sounded almost like a whispered song.

“She is warmer than Dian: She rolls through an ether of sighs- she revels in a region of sighs: she has seen that the tears are not dry on these cheeks where the worm never dies... but Physche, uplifting her finger, said- ‘sadly this star I mistrust- her pallor I strangely mistrust:- Oh hasten!- Oh let us not linger! Oh, fly!-let us fly!-for we must...”

The words sent shivers up and down Tara’s back and drained all the warmth from her body, she turned back to face the ocean and saw a massive wave hovering over her head, it’s cold unloving shadow covered her body and blotted out the sky. Tara panicking turned back to see if Willow had noticed but she had dissapeared. She dragged her eyes back to the wave slowly descending down, she couldn’t feel her body, she coldn’t move the wave above her roared furiously and finally buried her in it’s thick blanket making her choke unable to breathe under it’s weight, and that’s when she woke up.

Tara caught her breath and heard the far off strumming beat of rain hitting the ground and against the house, cold air leaked in through the crack in the window and tickled Tara’s skin. Her forehead was drenched in sweat and her hair stuck to her face, she hadn’t had a nightmare like this since she was little. She used to always have nightmares of the ocean’s waves crashing down upon her until she was unable to breathe and became surrounded in stygian darkness. This feeling that she only experienced in her dreams had always frightened her, the idea of being unable to move or breathe was one of her worst fears. She winced as she realised she had slept in a very awkward position, her neck ached and her wrist was now very swollen and tender. Groggily she got up and felt around blindly for some sort of light source that she could use. After several minutes of searching she managed to locate a candle and a package of matches. She struck the first match and watched it spark into a tiny flame quickly, she held it to the wick of the candle and then blew out the match. The candle offered only a small amount of light, but Tara didn’t seem to mimd, she was much more concerned with finding a way to get out of the attic or a way to remove the ring on her finger. She went around the room picking up random spell books and put them in a stack before she began to flip through them looking for something useful.
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Rupert didn’t make home last night, he couldn’t face his daughter so instead he rented a room in a cheap hotel and slept on the hard floor in hopes of punishing himself even more for what he had done. It was a very cowardly and childish decision, but he couldn’t bring himself to go anywhere near his house out of fear of doing something worse.

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Willow awoke and rolled out of bed, she stubbed her toes on the frozen package of fruit that had fallen to the floor during the night. So walked into the bathroom and looked into the mirror, her left eye was purple and so swollen that she couldn’t open it, she had a big bruise on her forehead along with a few small gashes and dry blood on her lips. She leaned over to turn the sink on but was stopped by a sharp pang in her gut, wincing she lifted up her shirt and saw more black and purple bruises on her stomach and a few where her ribs were. More carefully this time she turned the sink on and gathered water in her hands and splashed it on her face, she felt like crap.

After brushing her teeth and examining the rest of her body for bruises or cuts Willow manuvered her clothes off trying not to strain any of her damaged muscles and walked into the shower. She adjusted the tempature so that it was scalding hot and made her skin turn red, she stood there and balled her hands into fists.

“I should have done something... why I am so pathetic and weak?” she thought, “Who knows what that fucker did to Tara... I need to get over there as fast as I can and come up with a plan to get these damn rings off...”

Willow scrubbed at her body until it began to hurt and then got out to clothe herself. She put on jeans and a plain black v neck t-shirt, she didn’t bother with taming her wet hair there were more important things to worry about. She picked up the frozen package of fruit and held it to her eye while she searched through her books for a potion or rune that could be preformed without the ring interfering. When she finally found something that she believed would work, Willow gathered materials she would need into a messenger bag and took an aluminum baseball bat along with her and headed out the door.

She was angry and wanted revenge on that man who called himself a “father”. Willow walked out the door determined that nothing could stop her, she stalked through the down pour of rain, the bat in one hand ready to strike, no one would ever harm Tara again. The rain made Willow’s uncovered arms prickle with goosebumps at the cold, she didn’t care she felt lethal and the freezing rain and wind only served to add to her unpenetrable mood that nothing could stop her.

She reached Tara’s door to her house and without even stopping to knock she turned the knob with a little more force than necessary and thrust the door open. The house was quiet and dark, Willow flicked on the lights and trudged upstairs eager to hit something.

Tara put down the book she was currently flipping through and focused in on the sound of someone walking up the stairs, she shivered at the thought of it being her father, but she crawled over to the door and looked through the crack at the bottom of the door and waited to see who it was. Wet and soggy sneakers squished into the carpet, they sounded much lighter than how her father’s footsteps used to sound.

She drew back as she heard a soft knocking at the door, she hesitated then answered, “Willow?... Is that you? I’m in here!” Tara listened as she heard the clicking of the lock moving and then the door creaked open to reveal a beaten up and soaked red head.

Tara looked up in horror at her lover covered in bruises, Willow dropped the bat and sunk to her knees, without hesitation she embraced Tara closely and softly cried.

“Oh gods Tara I’m so sorry I should have been able to protect you, it’s all my fault I’m so sorry” she sobbed into Tara shoulder.

Tara rubbed Willow’s back and held her close, “Willow I was so scared without you, it was so dark... Please don’t leave me ever again” she whispered.

"I promise, Tara I swear to you no one will ever hurt you again" Willow responded.

Tara stroked Willow's wet hair until she settled down, "Did you find out anything about rings or how to get rid of them?" she asked.

Willow pulled back and opened her bag and took out a large book, "I found a ritual that only uses runes to be performed it should release you from the ring's influence and then you'll be able to remove my ring, I hope it works...", she paused when she noticed Tara looking at her intently.

"What?... Do I have something on my face?" she asked nervous under the weight of Tara's stare, Tara shook her head "no" she replied, "I just missed you...".

Tara leaned in and kissed Willow, she inwardly smiled at the delicious sensation of Willow's familiar lips on hers, it made the world seem so much kinder and full light.
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Re: Chase the morning (updated: 4/24/11)

Postby Promthea128 » Sun Apr 24, 2011 2:11 pm

Dibs!

That nightmare was terrible! Well written, and dreamstate magical, but poor Tara. I seriously hpoe that they figure out how to get their rings off.
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Re: Chase the morning (updated: 4/24/11)

Postby Finey_McFine » Sun Apr 24, 2011 4:24 pm

Yay, a fast update!

I must say that your attention to detail and descriptive writing is fantastic. You can just feel the gloom and doom of this world.

Tara's dream was creepy and reeked of stress and fitful/uncomfortable sleep. On a side note...I've those giant wave dreams numerous times and I hate them too!

Anyway, Ripper really did a number on Willow, I'm surprised that she was able to move after that. So, so, so happy that the girls are back together!!! :wtkiss Maybe they can figure out this prophecy, rescue Faith and kick some vampire ass!
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Re: Chase the morning (updated: 4/24/11)

Postby Laragh » Sun Apr 24, 2011 6:41 pm

You're so desciptive, I can't even...gah! Blown away! You're awesome!

Tara's dream/fantasy and waking up, alone and in the dark...man, I feel for that kid so hard.

And Ripper/Giles continues to intrigue me. Such a tormented soul.

I'm so glad they're together and working on getting the rings off :) :)
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Re: Chase the morning (updated: 4/24/11)

Postby nightmask » Sat Apr 30, 2011 7:59 pm

Promethea128: Thank you!! :D

Finey_McFine: Thank you for awesome compliments! I've had so many drowning dreams this year and they've always freaked me out, so I'm a little relieved that other people have had them too and that I'm not the only one.
Willow was pretty beaten up, it was really hard to write that part but I'm glad that it came out good. Now Tara and Willow can be together and find a way to save the world :]

Laragh: Thank you ^.^ I can't write Ripper/Giles' without cracking up every now and then because the movie I'm basing the setting and world off of is from Repo and in Repo Anthony Stewart Head breaks out in song like every 15 minutes and if you pause the movie randomly you see his really funny facial expressions :P

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Re: Chase the morning (updated: 4/24/11)

Postby nightmask » Sat Apr 30, 2011 8:16 pm

Author's note: just got back from Chicago after looking at art colleges I had a great time, but I couldn't get any internet. I have my first SAT test this saturday so the next update may take awhile, but I'll try my best :]

Part 21:

Their lips slowly came apart and each gazed fondly upon the other.

“Your father doesn’t seem to be here, but I don’t want to take any chances, we should go to the top floor of my apartment building it’s abandoned and I keep some supplies and food up there, he shouldn’t be able to find us” Willow suggested, she offered Tara a hand and helped the blonde to her feet.

Tara thought for a moment, she had never been away from her house for more than a few hours. A part of her jumped at the idea of getting out of her childhood prison, but the other part was reluctant to abandon all of her memories with her father in this house. She gritted her teeth, her childhood was based on lies that the man she once called father had created. She angrily marched to her room and began to pack the essentials into a backpack, Willow picked up on Tara’s mood swing and followed behind her in worry.

“Tara, I know it hurts to learn the truth and your father may be an insane physcopath, but I think a part of him really does love you and wants to protect you” Willow said, she couldn’t believe the words that were coming out of her mouth, but as she said them she realized they must be true.

“T-That... That... man is not my f-father” Tara scowled roughly shoving books into her bag, her stutter was adding to her frustration, she needed time to think and to be away from her father and this house.

Willow tenderly took Tara’s hand in hers, “Hey, just give it some time, he had his reasons... they may have been very messed up reasons, but he raised you all by himself and was working as a watch-man half the time and that would screw with anyone’s head. Just breathe ok? I’m here...”

Tara took a deep breath and exhaled she closed her eyes and nodded, “Thank you” she whispered.

Willow nodded understandingly, she brought Tara’s hand that she was holding in hers to her lips and kissed it. Tara finished up packing and clasped Willow’s hand in hers before they set out into the pouring rain. The rain made tiny musical noises as it hit the aluminum bat at Willow’s side that was grasped firmly in her hand. Tara’s hair by now was soaked and her clothes were completely drenched. Willow looked over at Tara sheepishly and then looked away blushing, Tara noticed this and gave Willow a questioning look.

“uhhh... your ...uh shirt... it’s kind of ...wet and uh sticking to you... and is kinda distracting and see throughy...” Willow squeaked her face turning even more red.

Tara looked down and blushed, her white t-shirt was drenched and was indeed sticking to her skin, “So your a breast girl are you?” Tara asked finding the situation to be pretty funny.

Willow playfully elbowed her and began to skip in the rain feeling more lighthearted with Tara by her side, Tara giggled and skipped along with Willow linking arms with her until they began to run. It was strange to Tara, Willow could make her feel so comfortable and carefree. Even in the dismal pouring rain the red-head was able to make her smile. They raced each other to a dimly lit lamppost at the cornner of the next block, when they stopped both were breathing heavily but giggling uncontrollably. Tara smiled at Willow and felt as if she had known her for ages like they were old lovers or friends.

“Hey Tara?” Willow asked after finally catching her breath.

“Hmm?” she replied.

“I’m really happy I met you” Willow said, Tara nodded in agreement “I’m h-happy I met you too”.

Tara leaned in and kissed Willow, the rain dripped down their eyes and mixed on their intertwined lips, Willow deepened the kiss and ran her fingers through Tara damp but soft hair. The lamppost that hovered over them illuminated the heat that rose between their wet bodies, smoke like white horses radiated softly off of their heated skin. Tara soon found herself pressed up against the door to Willow’s apartment building, they had entered into a heavy make out session that left each breathless and craving more. Willow forced herself to stop before it got too intense. She had promised to take it slow with Tara and she intended to keep her word, even though her entire body screamed out to that it wanted to delight in more of the irresistible feeling of Tara’s skin on her own.

Willow led Tara up the winding stairs that eventually stopped at the top floor of the apartment building. She fumbled in her pocket for the keys and after finding it she opened the door. The room was the same size as Willow’s apartment building, it was quaint and had several pieces of furniture that looked like at one point had matched with the wallpaper before it began to peel. Willow closed the door behind them and tossed Tara a towel to dry off on, she set their bags down on a nearby off-white couch and then joined Tara in the kitchen.

“Would you like some tea?” Willow offered opening one the cabinets above the sink.

Tara nodded, “Uh Willow? Something kind of happened when I was holding the crystal ball the other day... I didn’t get to tell you because my father showed up” she started, Tara looked up and made eye contact with Willow.

“What happened? Did you see something?” Willow’s eyebrow furrowed in concern, she opened another cabinet and took out too mugs and set them on the counter.

“Yeah... I... I s-saw m-my mom... and uh s-some ghosts....” Tara replied thinking back to her weird experience.

“You saw your mom?” Willow asked still paying attention while she pulled out several boxes of tea and held them up to Tara to choose.

Tara pointed to the chamomile box and continued on with her story, “yeah only it was really this other lady at first, the o-one we saw in the orb, but then she turned into m-my mom and s-she showed me my parents before I was born and um t-there was this prophecy about my birth and about you too” she explained.

Willow was getting intrigued, “what kind of prophecy? What was it about?” she asked.

Willow quietly decided to give Tara the blue mug with the yellow stars and moons on it and filled it up with hot water before placing the chamomile tea bag into it. She then filled up her own mug which was slightly chipped and had a cartoon of Snoopy from the peanuts on it. She chose an earl gray tea bag for herself and waited for the clear water to change into an amber- brown.

The words of the prophecy ran threw Tara’s head and she recited it for Willow to hear, Willow listened and nodded her head understanding what it meant. She handed Tara her mug and set her own on the small kitchen table before grabbing the milk and honey. She poured a few drops of milk into her cup and then squirted a more than generous amount of the syrupy honey making the contents of the cup rise to the rim. She handed the milk and honey to Tara and took a sip of her tea, and afterwards set it down, she felt the warm liquid rinse down her throat and spread it's heat through her body.

“Ok so here’s what we have to do, we need to draw a protection circle and then perform the ritual so you can remove your ring, then you should be able to take off mine. Next we need to figure out where the Master is keeping the slayer, rescue her and then obey her last request. Then finally we need to recite the spell to release the sun although I think there may be more to it than just reciting it, it sounds too simple, so I’m guessing the slayer might know” Willow said, Tara nodded in agreement and sipped her tea.

Willow noticed Tara was shivering, and that the towel was not keeping her very warm, she got up and and wrapped her own towel around Tara. Tara graciously accepted it and wrapped it closer around her body.

“Why is it that recently whenever I’m around you I always manage to get wet?” Tara questioned.

Willow snickered childishly at the hidden sexual innuendo, Tara picked up on this and blushed.

“T-That’s not w-what I meant!” she whined, Willow giggled more at Tara’s adorable protests before getting up to put her empty mug in the sink behind her.

Tara got up as well and grabbed some clean clothes from her bag, “Where’s the bathroom?” she asked, Willow pointed to a door at the end of the short hallway.

“I’m gonna change too, then do you wanna start the ritual?” Willow asked pulling out some jeans and a tang top.

“Okay sure” Tara replied from behind the bathroom door.

Willow took all of her supplies from out of her bag after she finished dressing and after a few minutes Tara joined her. They each moved the furniture off to the side so that they could open a circle on the floor.

Willow handed Tara a thin piece of white chalk while she turned to the correct page in her book, Tara took the chalk and drew a very wide circle around Willow and herself on the ground. Willow got up and and pointed to the circle with a double edged dagger called an athame and then walked clockwise around the circle with Tara in the center.

“I cast this circle to create a boundary between the world of man and the realm of the divine, my circle is now cast and whole” Willow recited, she new the spell would have no effect until she drew the runes but it was from force of habit.

Tara handed Willow the chalk and Willow began to draw runes all along the outside border of the circle. As Willow was finishing up the last few markings Tara sat crisscrossed in the circle and took her shoes off, she tossed them outside of the circle and waited patiently for Willow’s instructions. Willow set the chalk aside and drew her finger under the first line of directions for the ritual. She chose different colored candles and placed them at the 4 sides of the circle to represent North, South, East and West. Tara quietly lit each of them and then looked over Willow’s shoulder to read the next step along with her.

“It says you have to draw runes on my back so I should probably t-take off my shirt ...” Tara stated, Willow grabbed a red blanket by her side and spread it out for Tara to lay on, knowing that the wooden floor would be uncomfortable and rough.

Willow politely turned around while Tara unbuttoned her blouse and slipped off her bra, she neatly folded them and set them outside of the circle. She then laid down on her stomach and adjusted herself so that she would be comfortable. Willow turned to face Tara and kneeled by her side, she uncapped the small bottle of ink and dipped the brush into it, she wiped off some of the excess on the rim of the bottle and then moved the book closer so she could easily glance at it. Willow gathered Tara’s silky hair and moved it to one side, she delicately dipped the
brush onto Tara’s skin and began to ink in the runes that the book the way the book instructed.

Tara turned her neck so that she could watch Willow work, this let Willow catch sight of how sexy Tara looked without her shirt on and her hair brushed to the side. She delighted in taking notice of every detail of Tara’s warm and soft skin, every now and then she noticed how Tara’s half-lidded blue eyes seemed to hold a dreamy bedroom like gaze.

“I’m not tickling you am I?” Willow asked striking up a conversation, she wasn’t sure if she could bare another minute of the long silence lost in her own thoughts about how much she wanted Tara.

Tara flashed Willow a half-grin, “No, hmmm it feels nice actually” she replied, Willow swallowed nervously Tara was turning her on so much, she was sure her face was turning red.

Tara’s fingers rubbed the back of her neck while she turned it hoping to make it crack, “Does your neck hurt?” Willow asked noticing Tara’s pained expression.

Tara nodded, “Yeah, I think I slept funny” she said grimacing, last night had been terrible for her.

Willow finished the last rune on Tara’s back where her pants began, she set the brush down and moved Tara’s hand from her neck.

“want me to kiss it and make it better?” Willow asked, her fingers gently massaged Tara’s neck helping her to release the tension in her joints.

Tara replied with a soft “mmm hmm”, she closed her eyes and relaxed into Willow’s touch, Willow pressed her lips to Tara’s neck, her breath lightly tickled Tara’s skin.

She made a trail down the smooth column of skin and nipped right where Tara’s neck met her collar bone, Tara let out a soft moan which made Willow’s skin stand on end with goosebumps. That sound from Tara’s throat drove her crazy, she wanted to hear it again and again. She decided to try something new and see what other sounds she could produce from Tara, she felt the girl under her shiver as she licked up the base of her neck. Tara’s breathing hitched and she opened her eyes to find Willow’s eyes staring hungrily into her own.
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Re: Chase the morning (updated: 4/30/11)

Postby Finey_McFine » Sat Apr 30, 2011 8:56 pm

Dibbys!

Well, now aren't you just a big 'ol tease! :impatient That is just...unfair, especially on a week that you probably won't be able to update! :smash :smash :smash

In all seriousness, I really did enjoy the update. It was a very nice respite from the recent angst. I liked how you wove Willow's dream sequence from S4 into the story and with such ease. I can honestly say, that in everything I've read...that was a first. Great job!! :clap Soooo...maybe we'll get some :wtkiss in the next chapter??? Oh and some kicking ass as well!

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Re: Chase the morning (updated: 4/30/11)

Postby Laragh » Sun May 01, 2011 5:28 am

Poor Tara, I can only imagine how difficult it is dealing with the fact that her father...well, that he's Ripper. And could be such a monster.

Kissing and frolicking in the rains, so sweet :love

“Why is it that recently whenever I’m around you I always manage to get wet?” Tara questioned.


Heh

Love, love, love the 'drawing runes' bit. That particular scene is *never* (at least as far as I've seen) replicated in fanfic and I love it. Excellent!

Yay for some more body-exploration.

You've got a wonderful knack in setting the scene and giving vivid desciptions, I commend you!

Good luck with your SATs!!

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Re: Chase the morning (updated: 4/30/11)

Postby Promthea128 » Sun May 01, 2011 3:59 pm

Kissing and playing in the rain is adorable and sweet. Cool was to incorperate the "Restless" dream. Hope to see some bad ass-ness on the npart of W and T soon. Good luck on your SAT.
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Re: Chase the morning (updated: 4/30/11)

Postby nightmask » Fri May 06, 2011 2:44 pm

Finey_McFine: Thank you! Yay I'm glad you liked the last update! As promised, more Willow and Tara kissing :] The badass vampire butt kicking shall come later on in the plot :]
I have looked into SCAD, but unfortunately it doesn't offer illustration :/
So far I've only gotten to visit Rhode island school of design, Maryland institute college of art and the art institute of Chicago, but if you know any other good art colleges that offer illustration or some form of comic book making I'd be happy to hear about it :]


Laragh: Restless is one of my favorite episodes where that "drawing the rune" scene happens and I've always wondered what the runes meant and why Tara had Willow put them on her back so I kind of added it to my story :] Thank you so much for the feedback! :D

Promethea128: Thank you! :] I promise there will be fight scenes w/ vampires later on :]

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Re: Chase the morning (updated: 4/30/11)

Postby nightmask » Fri May 06, 2011 2:57 pm

Author's note: SAT's tomorrow -_- hooray for 5 hours of torture! I needed a break from homework and sat prep so I decided to update my story :D Happy almost mother's day!

Part 22:

Tara felt a cold hand on her back, the ink had dried quickly and hardly smudged, she felt a burning sensation begin to grow, but she held Willow’s penetrating gaze until tears blurred her vision. It felt like someone was holding the hot flame of a candle directly above her back, letting the wax drip and sear her naked skin.

“audite nos valde deus helios of sol solis nos es vestri vernula nos peto vestri suffragium unbind nos solvo nos permissum nostrum vox flow libere!” Willow cried out, her right hand pressed into the center of Tara’s back.

Tara’s hand begin to burn and sting, she could see white energy emanating from the ring on her finger and out of pure instinct she tore it off and flung it to the ground. She gasped for breath and looked down at her shaking hand, she could feel the earth around her again the air became more breathable and she felt as if Willow’s spirit was overlapping into her being.

She sat up and turned around to face a stunned Willow, “I didn’t think it would actually work the first time... Tara are you okay?” the red-head asked brushing a piece of hair behind Tara’s ear. Tara nodded still speechless, she took Willow’s hand gently in hers and easily removed the ring which grew cold from her touch.

“We..W-We did it” Tara smiled at their accomplishment, Willow smiled enthusiastically back at her.

“But why did you s-stop ?” Tara asked, she looked down embarassed and reached for her nearby shirt, but Willow’s hand stopped her.

“I... I didn’t want to make you do anything you didn’t want to ” Willow admitted blushing, Tara’s breasts were still uncovered, her hands twitched with longing to feel more of Tara’s hidden skin to remove more layers between them until they lay bare before each other.

Tara nervously took Willow’s hand in hers and pressed the palm of it to her left breast, they both gasped at the contact, the spark from when they had first met greeted them again with new intensity.

Willow studied Tara’s face carefully, she was unsure of what to do next, Tara watched Willow hesitate to make the next move so she leaned in and kissed Willow’s earlobe and whispered “Please... touch me”, Tara’s hand gently pressed Willow’s hand a little more against her skin.

Willow trembled at Tara’s words, nothing could have made her heart beat faster except the sound of Tara begging to be touched.

“This can’t be real” Willow thought, she cupped Tara’s soft breast in her hand feeling it’s shape and silky texture and committing it to memory. Tara breathed in sharply through her nose and exhaled shakily as Willow thumb stroked her hardening nipple while the rest of her fingers carefully kneaded Tara’s skin. Willow stared at her with such primal infatuation that it made Tara feel completely naked and vulnerable, she inwardly shook with anticipation for more. The thought excited her that she could do this to Willow, that she could feel this desirable.

Willow’s other hand Cupped Tara’s right breast, she rolled the nipple between her index finger and thumb making Tara gasp. Cupping both breasts in her hands she leaned in and kissed Tara passionately overcome with lust, Tara moaned into Willow’s mouth from the attention she was getting. She felt as if every atom in her body were vibrating and building up this tingling sensation she could feel in her shooting up into her chest and spreading to her lower abdomen and between her legs.

Tara arched her body closer to Willow’s and snaked her hands underneath the fabric of her shirt. She pressed her fingers gently over Willow’s small abdomen, and swirled them around her navel making Willow shiver. She moved further up and could feel the outline of where Willow’s ribs started, the red head hissed at grabbed Tara’s hands. Tara looked up to see Willow’s pained expression, and instantly removed her hands in worry.

“W-What’s wrong did I hurt you?” Tara asked growing afraid, Willow shook her head and lifted up her shirt for Tara to see the ugly bruises her father had left.

Tara gazed in horror at what her father had done, dark blotches of purple, yellow and black stared back at her.

Her throat tightened and she could feel tears building up in the cornners of her eyes,
“Oh Willow... I’m so sorry, this shouldn’t have happened... he shouldn’t have hurt you like this”.

Willow shook her head in disagreement, “it’s okay, I’m fine really” she said trying to reassure the blonde.

Tara was unconvinced, she took Willow’s hand in hers and gently stroked it with her thumb, “you don’t have to be strong for me, it’s obvious that your in pain... so at least let me heal you” she said, Willow didn't reply not wanting to be a bother.

“Willow... please let me do this” Tara pleaded, Willow thought for a moment and exhaled in defeat, “I just can’t say no to a pretty girl” she replied.

Tara helped Willow maneuver her shirt off so Tara could get a better look at her bruises, “Lay down on the blanket” Tara said scooting over so Willow had room.

Willow obeyed and carefully lowered her back onto the blanket, she rested her hands at her side and tried to stay still. Tara placed her right hand over the bruise on Willow’s ribs and softly chanted, Willow fidgeted, Tara’s hands were growing colder than ice and it was tickling her sensitive skin. She trembled as the cold began to burn and spread, Tara placed her left hand on her shoulder to steady Willow and to reassure her that she would be fine. Tara lifted her hand and watched the bruise become lighter in color and slowly decrease in size until only a quarter size red mark was left.

“It looks allot better now” Tara said, Willow flashed her a goofy smile and nodded and started to sit up, but Tara gently made her lay back down.

“I’m not done yet! We still have to heal your eye and the rest of the bruises on you” Tara protested.

“Can we at least move to the bed? I’m starting to feel the floor through the blanket and it’s hurting my back” Willow asked sitting up again, Tara nodded "Okay".

Willow got up and went over to the bedroom while Tara blew out the candles and closed the circle. Tara put her shirt back on, deciding to wash the ink off after she healed Willow, and wandered into the bedroom. She found Willow inside arranging the pillows to her liking, when she saw Tara walk in she got on the bed and laid down. Tara sat beside her and brushed strands of Willow’s hair away from her forehead, above her eyebrow was a purple bruise that faded into a yellow one. Tara pressed the pads of three fingers to Willow's temple and softly repeated he same incantation from before, again Willow felt the chilling cold sensation make contact with her skin, only this time it felt like it was radiating into her skull, but it didn’t bother as much as it had the first time. Tara patiently waited for Willow’s bruises to change to a healthy color before she moved her fingers down to Willlow’s badly bruised eye, carefully with her thumb she opened the bottom lid to examine the inside of Willow’s eye socket and the white of the eye ball, Willow’s iris flicked around nervously watching Tara.

Tara took her thumb away and smiled at Willow reassuringly, ”There’s no blood on the inside of your eye which means he cause any serious damage, so I should be able to heal it, it just may take a while and it’ll feel a little uncomfortable” she explained.

Willow nodded, and took Tara’s free hand in her own “I trust you” she replied smiling up at the blonde.

Tara grinned back and covered Willow’s eye with the palm of her hand, she could feel Willow’s eye ball moving around from behind her eye socket, it tickled the inside of Tara’s hand while her eyelashes gently brushed against Tara’s wrist. Willow felt the cold sensation once more, this time it vibrated into the side of her head which reminded her too much of a migraine. She instinctively grasped Tara’s hand tighter and squeezed her other eye shut, it was like having a killer brain freeze only worse.
It pained Tara to see Willow endure the effect of her healing spell, so she concentrated harder trying to end it quickly. A few minutes later she replaced her hand with her lips and kissed Willow’s eyelid which was now only slightly red. Willow gave a deep sigh of relief as the coldness subsided.

“Just one more and then I’m all done” Tara said adjusting her attention to a black and blue bruise three inches above her navel.

Willow sat perfectly still and observed Tara working and learned to ignore the cold sting of the healing spell. About three minutes later Tara removed her hand and seemed pleased with the result.

“All done” Tara proclaimed.

“Great now get over here!”Willow replied grabbing the belt loop on Tara’s pants and pulling her girlfriend over to her side.

Tara happily obliged and let Willow snuggle up to her warm body, Willow kissed Tara’s forehead and draped her arm over Tara’s waist, staring into Tara’s bright blue eyes. Tara’s eyes meet Willow’s and they both smiled at each other, their bodies bathed in the comfortable warmth they offered each other. Willow slowly drifted off and fell asleep curled up against Tara. Tara however could not sleep, she looked over at the dirty window by the side of the bed and watched a tree’s branches sway from the wind and tap up against the glass. Outside she could see the rain had come to a lazy drizzle making the quiet in the room only louder in contrast. Tara suddenly got the urge to use the bathroom, so she kissed the top of Willow’s head and quietly got up and crossed the room to the door.

Her socks brushed against the wooden floor and made soft pitter patter sounds as she walked. After several minutes of emptying her bladder Tara reemerged from the bathroom and went into the kitchen for a blanket to bring back with her. She paused holding the red blanket under her arm when she heard a dull scratching from outside the front door, she turned the knob of the door and looked out into the hallway and to the staircase, she looked down and saw a soaked black kitten rubbing up against her leg.

Tara picked the kitten up and brought it inside, closing the door behind her. She found a towel and wrapped the small animal in it, “What were you doing outside Kitty?” she asked, cradling the bundled up kitten in her arms.

She walked back into the bedroom where Willow still slept and placed the kitten in-between her and Willow, she then sat down and unfolded the red blanket to cover both herself and Willow. She stroked the kitten’s matted and damp fur to comfort it, she didn’t see a collar or any sign of identification. The kitten purred and rubbed his cheek against Tara’s hand affectionately, Tara wondered if it did indeed have a master but decided to worry about it after their nap.
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Re: Chase the morning (updated: 5/06/11)

Postby Nenyath » Sat May 07, 2011 1:38 am

Dibs? Off to read but will be back to write more, it is high time I complimented you on this story!
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Re: Chase the morning (updated: 5/06/11)

Postby Nenyath » Sat May 07, 2011 1:39 am

Back to offer feedback.

First of all, thank you for sharing this story! Because of my work I have 8 hours of public transport a week and much of this time is spend reading fics from this forum, including this one!

You have created a world which is dark and threatening and yet you have let the stars remain to shine hope which gives a great balance. After all, stars are also suns, they are just farther away but even evil great enough to black out our nearest star cannot touch the myriad of light. While Willow's life is hard here, it is Tara's life which really made an impression on me. To be locked up with that love, guilt and horror! So sad to have to see her father as Ripper, you have really portrayed him as a most anguished and ruthless character. I hardly know whether to pity, fear or hate him! I'm not looking forward to the day Tara realizes who killed Willow's parents..

Good work with the incantation and the healing. I do have a feeling that snuggling will have a good healing affect as well!

I will try and add feedback to every chapter, but if I don't, please know that I still read and enjoy it!

Thanks again!
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Re: Chase the morning (updated: 5/06/11)

Postby Laragh » Sat May 07, 2011 5:52 am

Hey,

The writings Willow put on Tara's back in 'Restless' were a Sappho love poem, 'Hymn to Aphrodite' :)

You know, I've never enjoyed an AU story built up with such an atmosphere on intense mystery and action before. I write the boring, mundane stuff and that's what I normally like to read, but this is just...wonderful.

I loved the healing. It was obviously needed but still had an air of intimacy.

Love the addition of the kitty, looking forward to seeing if they can keep her and more story! :D

Good luck on your SATs (not just the studying and stuff)!

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Re: Chase the morning (updated: 5/06/11)

Postby Finey_McFine » Sat May 07, 2011 4:42 pm

Hey! :wave
So, how was the SAT? I hope all went well! ;-) I took it twice (many moons ago) as well as the ACT...15 hours of my life I'll never get back! On the college front...Full Sail, in Florida, is also an excellent school. I don't know about comic book illustration, but I do know that they have a really great animation program.
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So happy that you were able to update and with a little :wtkiss thrown in!

“We..W-We did it” Tara smiled at their accomplishment, Willow smiled enthusiastically back at her.
“But why did you s-stop ?” Tara asked, she looked down embarassed and reached for her nearby shirt, but Willow’s hand stopped her.
Big yay for getting those stupid rings off. Now maybe they can work some mojo to get Faith back. Ahhh, such a sweet moment! :kiss1

The healing was much needed and I'm glad that Tara was able to see first hand what her father is capable of. This will be important later when Giles tries to manipulate her...just my best guess. :-p

I'm hoping that they are semi safe in the apartment they're currently hiding in. Although, I'm worried about this mystery cat. Is it really just a cat????????

Great update and some awesome writing!! :peace
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Re: Chase the morning (updated: 5/06/11)

Postby Ariel » Sat May 07, 2011 7:37 pm

Nightmask,

Wow, the magic is so powerful and the chanting really works for me.

Then the other magic, even more powerful . . .
Willow studied Tara’s face carefully, she was unsure of what to do next, Tara watched Willow hesitate to make the next move so she leaned in and kissed Willow’s earlobe and whispered “Please... touch me”, Tara’s hand gently pressed Willow’s hand a little more against her skin.

Willow trembled at Tara’s words, nothing could have made her heart beat faster except the sound of Tara begging to be touched.

“This can’t be real” Willow thought, she cupped Tara’s soft breast in her hand feeling it’s shape and silky texture and committing it to memory. Tara breathed in sharply through her nose and exhaled shakily as Willow thumb stroked her hardening nipple while the rest of her fingers carefully kneaded Tara’s skin. Willow stared at her with such primal infatuation that it made Tara feel completely naked and vulnerable, she inwardly shook with anticipation for more. The thought excited her that she could do this to Willow, that she could feel this desirable.

Willow’s other hand Cupped Tara’s right breast, she rolled the nipple between her index finger and thumb making Tara gasp. Cupping both breasts in her hands she leaned in and kissed Tara passionately overcome with lust, Tara moaned into Willow’s mouth from the attention she was getting. She felt as if every atom in her body were vibrating and building up this tingling sensation she could feel in her shooting up into her chest and spreading to her lower abdomen and between her legs.

This whole scene is tender, vivid, utterly hot and very moving at the same time. I love the phrase “primal infatuation” and Tara’s excitement that she could affect Willow so powerfully. This is love, the discoveries and the newness and the raw power and sweet vulnerability.

And of course them healing each other; lovely metaphor for their love and magic together.

And finally, the cat! I have to agree with Shelby/Finey McFine – is it a cousin to Miss Kitty or an intruder? I’m a little worried, too!

Keep writing! :kgeek :kgeek :kgeek

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Re: Chase the morning (updated: 5/06/11)

Postby nightmask » Tue May 10, 2011 9:29 pm

Nenyath: You have no idea how happy it makes me that people are actually reading my story :D

Your comment about how Tara is like a light of hope actually reminded me of this page in a comic book called "The sandman" by Neil Gaiman, where The Sandman and a demon were having a battle of who could come up with the better idea that would defeat the other.

So during the battle the demon says, " I am anti-life, the beast of judgement. I am the dark at the end of everything. The end of universes, gods, worlds... of everything".

And the Sandman responds by saying "I am hope" and it kind of dawned on me then when I was reading that, that hope can't die and nothing can defeat it, because even in the worst situation hope only grows stronger. :]

For Rupert I like writing his character, I kind of have a thing for making up stories about guys with multiple personality problems, because it's very interesting to paint people in shades of gray and to encompass the conflicting negative and positive thoughts into one person.

The whole time I was developing the healing and incantation scenes I was flipping back and forth between the "Restless" episode and Wiccan rituals and various other references so I'm happy it came out good :]

Thank you so much for commenting :D


Laragh: Thank you for telling me about the Sappho love poem!! I've been wondering all year what the markings meant after I had first seen "Restless".

Thank you so much for the awesome compliments ^.^ and for the good luck :D


Finey_McFine:

My SAT actually went pretty well considering it was my first time taking it, the english I feel I did pretty good on, the math I omitted allot. Towards the last hour I felt like everything kind of got jumbled together and I had no idea what I was doing my brain pretty much turned to mush lol. -Shrugs- It's okay there's always next year to take it again if I don't like my score and now I kind of know what to expect. I'll definitely look into Full Sail and ask my art teacher if she knows anything about it :]

I promise the cat is just a cat, but it does have a purpose in the story :]
Thank you for the feedback :D

Ariel: Thank you I enjoyed writing that scene :D
I'm not sure if I intend yet to make this mysterious kitty related to Miss kitty, but I'm pretty sure I'm not going to make her an intruder, if anything she'll probably assist Willow and Tara in their quest. :]

Next update directly below! :]
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Re: Chase the morning (updated: 5/06/11)

Postby nightmask » Tue May 10, 2011 9:46 pm

Author's note: song mentioned is called "Bad Love" By The White Lies. I took creative liberties with Rupert's past.

Part 23:

Tara woke up a few hours later and discovered it was mid-day around lunch time, she sat up stretching her arms and yawned. She looked out the window and saw that the rain had finally stopped leaving in it’s wake a thick swirling fog. She looked down and noticed a warm bundle on her lap, the tiny black kitten was cuddled up on top of the blanket breathing deeply in and out. Tara ran her hands through it’s inky fur, it was dry and silky. She stroked the soft creature until it began to rouse. The silvery eyes of the kitten blinked and looked fondly up at Tara purring, Tara smiled back at the kitten and gently picked it up so that she could get out of bed. She placed the kitten down on her warm indented pillow next to Willow’s head and left the room, the kitten immediately jumped off the bed and followed her.

Tara wandered into the kitchen and opened several empty cabinents before finding one with mugs , glasses and various plastic cups. She choose a glass for herself and filled it with water, then raised it to her lips and took a long gulp refreshing her dry throat. The kitten rubbed it’s head up against Tara’s ankle and purred softly, Tara set her glass down in the sink and looked down at the kitten. It looked up at her and licking it’s lips and turning it’s head on angle as if to say it wanted food.

“Are you hungry kitty?” Tara asked, she bent down and a patted the kitten’s soft head, the kitten gave a soft “meow” as it’s answer.

Tara opened another cabinet and took out a blue plastic bowl, setting it down on the counter, then she opened the fridge and popped open the milk carton, she sniffed it’s contents to make sure it hadn’t gone bad and poured some into the bowl. She set the bowl on the floor before the kitten and watched as it eagerly lapped at it. Tara put the milk carton back in the fridge and yawned again, deciding to take a shower and wash the ink off of her back. She walked down the hallway and opened the bathroom door.

Willow began to stir in the bedroom, slowly her senses came back to her as she was pulled out of her dream world. She could feel the cool sheets underneath her, a warm blanket covered her body in a perfect cocoon, and her head sunk deep into the squishiness of a feathery pillow. The far off sound of water droplets hitting glass and floor tiles woke her, the lingering smell of Tara’s shampoo left on her side of the bed enticed Willow to get up and locate it’s origin. She walked out the door dazed and sleepy, she noticed the sound was coming from the end of the hallway where the bathroom was.

“Tara must have started a shower” Willow thought to herself, she was about to turn and walk into the kitchen not wanting to disturb her girlfriend when she heard the door creak open slightly.

Tara’s head stuck out, “Willow? I thought I heard you get up” she said opening the door more, her hair was still dry and she had a white towel wrapped over her torso that came down to her knees.

“ how was your nap?” Willow asked cheerfully.

“It was good, my neck is actually allot better now, but I still have to wash the ink off ” Tara explained.

Willow nodded, “That’s good, do you uh... need any help at all?” Willow asked trying her luck.

Tara blushed but gave a nod, “S-Sure... I mostly need help with washing my back” she replied.

“Can I wash your hair after?” Willow asked, if she washed her hair Tara’s intoxicating scent would be left all over her hands and she would be able to breathe in that smell whenever she wanted.

“okay” Tara said opening the door fully so Willow could enter, the bathroom was steamy from the hot water running, it fogged up the mirror and smelt of scented candles.

Tara drew back the shower curtain and tested the water with her hand, she turned her back to Willow and removed the white towel from her body letting it drop to the floor.
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After several hours of sleeping on the floor and mentally beating himself up, Rupert got up. All of his muscles ached and the back of his leg throbbed painfully where Willow had kicked him the day before. Slowly he got dressed concentrating deeply on each button of his shirt, each buckle strap on his boot until he could proscrastinate no longer. He needed to see his child, he needed to explain years of lies and unanswered questions, but most of all he needed to accept that his little girl probablly hated his guts and wished he were dead.
He silentley checked out of the hotel ignoring the saunturing prostitutes from the whore house next door who called to him. When he reached the front door of his house, he began to shake, he felt like he didn’t belong in this house anymore. The door knob was icy in his hand as he turned it and forced the door open.

As he walked in his breath hung in the air before him is puffs of gray carbon dioxide, someone had turned off the heat, and that wasn’t the only thing; Someone had turned off all the lights as well. The unclear shadowy furniture before Rupert frightened him, they took on shapes of horrible creatures. The floor creaked beneath his feet. His heart pounded wildly, what if the creatures heard him come in? He could feel imaginary dark figures watching him closely, he held his breath and crossed the room.

As soon as he came to the stairs he bounded in panic, each step he took lasted half of a second, helping him go higher and higher, gravity pushed down on him making one foot fall in front of the other. Fear propelled him up the stairs, fear controlled him. He was afraid the ghosts would catch him, and devour his brain, torment him with images of all that he had done and all that he was going to do.

The upstairs hallway glowed white from the portraits of Alyson staring peacefully down at him, this made him unsteady. He felt like his dead wife’s calm and kind eyes were mocking him and would at any second turn into a horrible corpse that would reach out and grab him. Every pair of her eyes stared down at him grinning, there were so many eyes, so many black pupils focused on him. The horrid eyes made his blood run cold, shivers ran threw him as he wrapped his arms around his body and walked faster until he came to the end of the hallway. There the storage room door stood before him, he went to turn the door knob, but it creaked open, it wasn’t locked.

Rupert began to have an anxiety attack, he flung the door open and scanned the room, Tara wasn’t there. He stood in the doorway breathing heavily, he felt like his lungs were closing up, he resisted the urge to cry. He ground his teeth together making the hammering noise rose louder in his ears, it sounded like a monster beating on a metallic screen door with both fists. He felt like screaming at the top of his lungs with all off his frustration, but he had no time, he needed to find Tara he needed to see his baby girl and find a way to somehow make it all better.

He sped down the stairs once more ignoring the the ghoulish portraits of his dead wife, he couldn’t breathe he felt like something was crushing his windpipe. Something invisible was choking him making his gag and gasp frantically for air that only made it worse. He pushed past the front door not bothering to close it and ran into the street, a car honked noisily at him as he crossed to the sidewalk just barely avoiding getting hit. He slowed his pace to a walk, and breathed in the cool foggy air which lowered his anxiety levels and pumped cleaner oxygen threw his brain making his thoughts more clear.

“Think Rupert god dammit! How could she have gotten out without using magic when the door was locked? Where could she have gone?” he thought to himself, “... Willow ...” he thought answering his own questions.

Someone parked their car nearby and left the engine running, the headlights brightened the fog around the car making it swirl like golden dust. The windows were rolled down all the way and radio was turned up obnoxiously high so that it echoed through the empty streets and filled Rupert’s head with it’s lyrics. First the music started out in a steady drum beat with cymbals following, after several beats the guitar and bass began to pick up and a deep rich voice directed the noise into a structured melody.

“I was waiting in the back-seat of the car
When I knew I'd given up
Down one of the back-streets by the park
So sick of the taste of blood

I'm gonna write your girl a letter
It'll make everything better”

Rupert’s boots clicked as he walked down the street, he walked at a slow pace. He did this for two reasons, one he wanted to give himself time to mentally prepare himself for what may happen when he found Tara and what she might say to him. The other reason was the song blaring in the distance sounded familiar to him, he could have sworn he had heard it before as a teenager, he wanted to hear the rest of it.

“Screaming down the phone-line to your mum
She said 'Honey ain't home right now'
I bought a tuxedo and I bought a gun
And wore them all around this town

Nobody dares to lift a finger
They can see my heart is down and injured

If I'm guilty of anything
It's loving you too much
Honey, sometimes love
Means getting a little rough

This is not bad love
This is not bad love”

It made him inwardly laugh at how the song fit so well into his life, perhaps it was a sign or a coincidence. He thought about how much he loved Tara and the fact that he’d kill for her, that he only wanted to protect her no matter how rough he needed to get. He still knew deep down that he could not justify his actions, he knew he was a monster and that what he did was wrong, but this was the only way he knew how to love. He couldn’t help it.

“I've been going to church but I don't believe
I'll ever be clear this pain
Walk like a ghost through the streets
Soaked from the pouring rain

And I won't ask your God for mercy
My spirit is low, my soul is dirty

If I'm guilty of anything
It's loving you too much
Honey, sometimes love
Means getting a little rough
This is not bad love
This is not bad love”

He thought back to the days before Tara existed, Alyson used to be his reason for living, and yet looking back on their relationship he treated her terribly. Then again from a very young age he had always been horrible to the ones he loved. Fragments of his childhood began to appear:

when his mom and dad would have fights in the kitchen, he would always sit in his room listening and wishing they’d both die just so the noise would stop.

His first friend he had pushed away after others teased him for being friends with a girl.

Up until his late teens he would wake up every other hour never getting a full night’s sleep, he would become covered in sweat by the morning and would only be able to recall dreaming in black and white.
When his parents confronted him about his sleeping disorders, he blamed them for it, he told them it was there genetics that made him this way.

When he was in high school and his parents died, he had been sent to live with his uncle. He never opened up his feelings to his uncle, he never thanked him for any of the selfless sacrafices that man had made for him.

He could only think about himself and getting out of this world and away from all of his problems bubbling over in his fucked up body.

When Alyson came along she took all off his shit and never complained, she would instead patiently try to soothe him out his angry fits. He didn’t deserve Alyson, he didn’t deserve Tara and yet he couldn’t bare being without them even though he knew it was selfish. He didn’t know how to change, he had never had a normal life. He didn’t know how to treat human beings without them getting hurt by him in the end. So onward he marched unable to fix himself, he hummed along with song stuck in his head, sticking his hands in his pockets, keeping his eyes on the ground, and scuffing his shoes on the street.
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Re: Chase the morning (updated: 5/11/11)

Postby Laragh » Wed May 11, 2011 4:27 am

Dibs!

Lol, gotta love Willow. Any opportunity to get a naked, wet Tara. :wink Can't blame her in the slightest.

Good. I'm glad Giles hurts. He hurt Willow a lot more. But wow he has so many demons floating around. He needs like, serious therapy. Eek I'm worried/intrigued what he's gonna do when he finds Tara (and Willow). Probably best for all parties if it's not them in the shower together :P

Awesome chapter :)

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Re: Chase the morning (updated: 5/11/11)

Postby Finey_McFine » Wed May 11, 2011 6:17 am

Laragh wrote:Lol, gotta love Willow. Any opportunity to get a naked, wet Tara. Can't blame her in the slightest
I wholeheartedly agree!

Interesting little insight into the mind of Giles. Now it's got me wondering exactly how his parents died. Did he kill them? Was it vamps? Lot's of mystery surrounding 'Daddy Dearest.'

For a second I though, "Oh shit! Not while they're in the shower!!" Then I remembered that is't a different apartment...Willow's secret hiding place. Hopefully Giles won't find them. They seriously need some non-angsty time together.

Great update!
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Re: Chase the morning (updated: 5/11/11)

Postby nightmask » Sat May 14, 2011 8:32 pm

Laragh: Willow + wet Tara = very enjoyable bath :D
lol aww poor Giles everyone hates him... I kind of can't blame you though I made him out to be a total douche bag :P Thanks for the feedback I hope you like the next part! :]

Finey_McFine: In my little back story I made up Giles' parents died from being attacked by a group of vampires when they were out buying food one night and Giles was at home experimenting with black magick with his friend Ethan Rayne who was sleeping over that particular night. If you want I can include more of a background story in one of the next updates on the story about Giles' childhood and what happened with Ethan, Alyson and him?
I hope the next update doesn't come off as too angsty I meant for it to be more steamy but i'll let you be the judge :]
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Re: Chase the morning (updated: 5/11/11)

Postby nightmask » Sat May 14, 2011 9:07 pm

Author's note: My house is currently being invaded by ants and I had to write a research paper, so despite the current distractions I'm happy I was able to write more to my fic this week :]
Warning: things heat up (not like what happens when you put tinfoil in the microwave like me and my wacky friends do on accident, the other kind of hot) :D

Part 24:

Tara turned to face Willow feeling suddenly confident when she saw the undeniable lust in Willow’s eyes. Willow took in Tara’s lovely naked form, her skin was like painted flesh on a canvas that glowed from it’s radiance. Her breasts lightly rose and fell from each quiet intake of air, he peaks had redened and longed to be touched. Tara shyly looked down and crossed her arms over her stomach which tingled and felt funny. Willow seemed astonished that a beauty as enchanting as Tara would hide herself and feel embarrassed. Tara felt a warm hand on her cheek, and she looked up with only her striking blue eyes. Another hand fell to the dip of her waist and brought her closer.

“Do you have any idea how amazingly beautiful you are?” Willow whispered so that the only Tara would hear her, the only person that mattered in this world to her.

Willow felt weakened and overwhelmed by Tara’s beauty, they both shivered as Willow’s hand left Tara’s waist and traced down the path between her shoulder blades and into the valley where her spinal column disappeared into the lower part of her back. Tara felt dizzy in a good kind of way, she could feel her veins pulsing and something hidden throbbed between her legs. Willow’s body grew closer and closer to hers, she found herself slipping her hands around Willow’s back and pushing her shirt up. Willow grabbed her shirt at the bottom and whipped it over her head, eager to please.

Tara’s fingers took their sweet time slowly undoing the two hooks that held Willow’s bra in the back, she drew the straps towards herself and lifted them away from Willow’s body. The red-head’s breasts were smaller in comparison to Tara’s, but still they enthralled Tara. She covered Willow right breasts with her open palm, feeling the tender peaks of the skin tighten until the nipple hardened and began to protrude. She pressed the pad of her thumb over it and gently stroked it making Willow melt and shudder. Breifly Tara withdrew her fascination with Willow’s breasts and made eye contact with her again.

“I’ve never been this close to a person before, and gods Willow it’s driving me crazy... every time you touch me... I can’t explain it... I just know I want to be with you” Tara said, her voice was rough and full of raw emotion, she pressed the the crest of her lips to Willow’s in a passionate kiss.

Willow felt her eyes close, colors flashed before the inside of her eyelids, the feeling of Tara’s lips on hers was like a drug she couldn’t get enough of, she needed more. She pressed harder into the kiss, she felt something animalistic growing inside of her body, she arched herself closer to Tara, so that their breasts touched and rubbed against each other. Tara moaned earnestly humming against Willow’s lips. The hand on Tara’s lower back moved further down past Tara’s butt and to her thigh, her fingers gripped the tops of Tara’s legs and forced it to slowly come apart from it’s pair that held Tara steady. The scent of the room became musky with the smell of arousal which only turned Willow on more.

Willow began to rub her own thigh against Tara’s wet opening making her tremble and bite down on bottom of Willow’s lip. When their lips parted Tara was panting desperately arching into Willow’s teasing ministrations, desperate for more friction. Something deep inside Tara flickered, a sensation she was so sure she was close to feeling, Willow’s thigh caressing her innermost desires made her helpless. Her breathing hitched as Willow slightly increased the pressure, but then the red-head drew away. Tara looked up her heart pounding and her pupils dilated with arousal.

Willow was looking at her with a very serious and concerned expression, “I’m afraid I won’t have anymore self control if we continue Tara... I want our first time to be special and I don’t want to rush into things out of lust. It’s your decision...” she said.

Tara hesitated, she wanted Willow to touch her so badly, she wanted to experience what she had only read about in stories, but Willow was right. If they ventured too far today it would be out of lust, their love for each other had only just begun to blossom but was not complete yet. They would have to wait just a little longer, when they felt the time was right only then could they commit the final act of devotion and seal their love for each other. On the other hand, Tara’s body was burning for release, she could feel fluids gathering between her legs. Tara thought hard for a moment and finally came to a compromise.

“Willow, can I at least touch you for now? And if I go too far we can stop?” she asked taking Willow’s hand in hers.

Willow looked down at the hand that took hers, “Tara... I... I’m not sure, I can stop myself from touching you” she replied, temptation breathed down her neck urging her to give in, but she remained steadfast and would only give in at the consent of her lover.

“Well then let’s play a game... I touch you, but if you touch me I’ll stop... How does that sound? Besides if you don’t join me we’d be wasting water” Tara replied smiling.

Willow swallowed, goosebumps formed on her arms and back, she quietly nodded her head in agreement. Tara smiled, she had won. She looped her thumbs into the elastic waistband of Willow’s pajama pants and tugged them down to her knees, Willow stepped out of them her eyes never leaving Tara’s. Willow was left with only black underwear to protect her modesty which Tara pulled down with painstakingly slow precision. Willow could feel the air ventilating through the room caress the wetness between her legs. Once they were both rid of any clothing Tara took Willow’s hand in hers and led her to the bath tub, she got in first letting Willow admire her from behind. Willow joined her soon after, this game was going to drive her insane and she knew it.

The tub was meant for only one person, so to compensate for room Tara moved closer to Willow so that she faced her and she rested on Willow’s lap, water pooled over the rim of the tub and became more displaced with every movement of the lovers. Willow for precautionary measures crossed her arms behind her back and waited for Tara to tease her to death.

Tara ran her hands through the tangles of Willow’s copper and unkept hair, she gently pulled it down so that Willow’s neck was offered to her. Her chin arched up in an almost 90 degree angle towards the ceiling. Tara pressed hers lips to Willow’s salty skin, her tongue crept out to taste Willow. Tara’s knees rested on either side of Willow’s waist, her center was pressed against Willow’s stomach. She trailed down Willow’s neck with her tongue until she reached her shoulder.

She eyed the scar on Willow’s neck that had been left from Drusilla’s bite, she suckled on the sensitive flesh and pondered her next move while Willow desperately fought the urge to reach out and touch Tara. She could feel Tara's center grinding against her flesh, Willow pressed her own thighs together in hopes that she could sate her desire, it didn’t work it only made it worse. Tara nipped at Willow’s shoulder and finally bit down, making the red-head gasp she hadn’t expected this.

Willow shivered she had been bitten before by Drusilla, but not like this, the pain never had felt this good. When Tara released Willow’s skin she looked down at the mark she had left. It was a purplish-red with bite marks around it, Tara gently kissed the damaged flesh soothing it’s sting. She looked up to see Willow reaction and was satisfied with what she found, Willow eyes held a pleading stare in them and her nipples had become very erect to the point where it began to hurt.

Tara sat back further to get a better view of Willow’s breasts, she then lowered her head and licked one of Willow’s erect nipples. Willow hands immediately went to the back of Tara’s hair and ran her fingers threw her damp tangles, resisting the urge to push down. Tara got the hint and took Willow’s nipple into her mouth, Willow breathed heavily feeling Tara’s tongue swirling around her sensitive bud. Tara gently bit down with her teeth, Willow flinched and squeezed her eyes closed, panting. Tara’s hand cupped Willow’s other breast increasing Willow's pleasure. Willow absent mindedly went to Tara’s waist and began to travel lower but was stopped by Tara releasing her breasts and gently placing her hands on Willow's shoulders. Tara offered her a concerned look knowing that Willow desperately wanted to touch her more intimately and that she wanted her too but she resisted.

“I want you so bad I can’t stand” Willow whispered in a raspy voice, Tara pressed her forehead to Willow’s and closed her eyes, “I know, I want you too...” she replied.

Tara wanted Willow and this frightened her, she didn’t know how to touch Willow or if it would hurt, it would be the last inch of her being that no one had ever touched before and she was reluctant to share it, she had been alone for so many years she didn’t know if she was making the right decision.

She opened her eyes and looked into Willow’s, she felt it, Willow’s heart open to hers trusting her without doubt, in an unwavering devotion. She wanted to be able to do the same but she was embarassed, she didn’t know how her body would react if Willow touched her there. What if she wasn’t good at sex? What if she didn’t like it and it made her feel dirty? She trembled with fear from uncertainty, Willow noticed this and gently moved out from under Tara’s body.

Tara’s mind was brought back to the present Willow was staring at her with a worried expression, “What’s wrong? You got all with the quiet... you know you can tell me anything right?” the red-head questioned.

Guilt washed over Tara, she was being selfish and making Willow wait to have sex. She didn’t know what she was supposed to do, should she give in to her desire and see where it took her? Or hold on to it and let it grow until she was completely sure of her emotions?

“Willow... I think your right, w-we should wait... I don’t want to rush into things, but I don’t want to go too slow either. I’m... I’m... just kind of... afraid... I m-mean does it...h-hurt?” Tara asked she pulled her knees to her chest and wrapped her arms around herself.

Willow picked up a bar of soap and held it under the water, “It... It’s different for other people I think, and uh it kind of depends on what you prefer” Willow focused her attention on the bar of soap that grew soft from the water, she turned it over in her hands and studied it.

“W-what do you p-prefer?” Tara asked, her face grew red from embarassment, her father had never given her “the talk” he had left her to find out on her own, when she grew curious enough, from books and the internet.

It was Willow’s turn to blush, “uh turn around so I can wash your back and I’ll tell you” she replied.

Tara nodded and turned around so that the somewhat faded ink on her back was presented to Willow. Willow took a white wash cloth that Tara had folded at the side of the tub and rubbed the wet soap into the cloth building up a lather. She then set the soap down and wiped at the first few markings at the back of Tara’s neck, with each wipe the color began to fade, Willow was careful not to rub too hard.

“Uh... so I’ve never been touched by anyone there before, unless you count with clothes on... but I kind of know what I like from what I’ve tried... but there are still things... things that I haven’t done... and would like to try” Willow replied sheepishly.

Tara raised her eyebrows, Willow had vaguely answered her question, but instead made more questions form inside her head.

“What did she mean with clothes on? Who had touched her before? How much experience did Willow have?” Tara timidly asked these questions and waited for Willow’s response.
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Rupert approached the door to Willow’s apartment building, he knocked twice and waited, noone opened the door. He knocked again and when no reply came he took out an all access skeleton key from his jacket pocket and shoved it into the lock, he turned it and the door sprung open letting him in. He stepped in, and looked around, the bed was unmade and clothing was thrown askew. He opened the closet and found only clothes and shoes, the bathroom was empty as well. He pressed a finger under the nozle of the sink and a drop of water appeared on his fingertip, someone had been here recently.

He opened up the drawers to Willow’s desk and flipped threw various pieces of paper in hopes of finding a clue to where his daughter was. After a long time of looking he finally concluded that there was nothing more to look for in Willow’s room so he closed the door and eyed the door across from her’s. The number plate on the door was 13, but didn’t include the name of the resident like Willow’s door did.

Rupert knocked twice on the door with his knuckles and waited, a shadowy old-aged man opened the door and looked shocked to see him. Rupert studied the shrunken old man, he wore moth eaten slippers and a wrinkled blue button up shirt with gray pants, the top of his head balding and the rest of his remaining hair was a snowy white. His nose was long and sharp in contrast to his soft and tiny black eyes.

“W-W-What do you want?” he asked trembling at the sight of Rupert, Rupert looked down at his own uncovered arm realizing that while searching Willow’s apartment he had pushed up the sleeves of his jacket which left his Watch-men tattoo open to the public eye, this seemed to frighten the man before him.

“Your neighbor, Mrs. Rosenberg have you seen her lately?” he asked.

The man’s black watery eyes shifted nervously and he shook his head, “N-No I haven’t seen her since this morning, I think she went out” he replied quickly, the old man's room smelt of warm peppermint and october leaves, the smell of fall the nearing of winter the death of nature.

“Are you sure? It is very very important that I find out where she is” Rupert said in a slow and intimidating voice.

“Y-Yes I’m... I’m sure” the man said, his eyes looked frantically everywhere he seemed unnerved and terrified.

“Do you know anyone who may know where she is?” Rupert pressed on, eager for any information.

“Uh... M-Mr. Rainy m-might k-know” he replied pointing a crooked and gray finger with jagged fingernails at the door next to Willow’s.

Rupert nodded his head and the old man quickly retreated back into his shadow filled apartment and slammed the door. He turned and read the name card on the apartment door the old man had pointed to. It said “Eric Rainy #14” Rupert knocked on this door, a muffled reply came from inside the room which he couldn’t dechiper. He knocked again and the door whipped open.

“I said Sod off!”

The man who appeared before Rupert this time was infact not “Eric Rainy” but instead “Ethan Rayne”. Rupert grew rigid as soon as he recognized his old friend’s face, his mudering decitful face. The face that he should have smashed in after having rescued Willow three years ago from the destruction he had created. Ethan Rayne, a former watch-man, the man who Rupert had grown up with, the man who killed Willow’s innocent parents in that fire, that man stood before him with the same shocked expression on his face. Rupert seized Ethan by his arm and rolled up his sleeve, where a watch-man tattoo once was a jagged scar remained in it’s place.

Rupert released Ethan’s arm and glared at him hatefully, “Murderer” he spat.

Ethan had cut the tattoo from his very skin and had been hiding out right next to the girl who’s life he had destroyed for three years and no one had known. It made Rupert sick.

Ethan scoffed and flashed him a wicked grin before finally replying, “Speak for your self “, Rupert was just as much of a killer as he was.
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Re: Chase the morning (updated: 5/15/11)

Postby Laragh » Sun May 15, 2011 5:18 am

Dibs!!!

Woo and hoo, an update! :D :D

The way you describe Willow being so in awe of Tara's beauty, it's wonderfully written. So descriptive, I can really feel it.

I love that they want to wait to be a full act of love. This is so sweet and great, I love this story :blush Washing Tara's back was adorable.

Eeek, I hope Giles doesn't catch them!!!

Ethan Rayne is never a good thing. Can't wait to see what happens next!!!

Love this so much!! :D :D

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Re: Chase the morning (updated: 5/15/11)

Postby Finey_McFine » Mon May 16, 2011 11:32 am

Update...yay!!! :banana

This chapter is really beautiful. The way you described them discovering each other for the first time was really something. I actually went back and read it several times. :-p You really captured that innocence and awkwardness that comes with a first love...great job!

I’ve never been this close to a person before, and gods Willow it’s driving me crazy... every time you touch me... I can’t explain it... I just know I want to be with you”
It's not that I didn't realize it before, but when Tara said that first sentence, it really hit home exactly how isolated she'd been and the lack of human contact that she'd received. It's really a miracle that she is even able to be with anyone at all, even Willow. I think it really shows how she feels about Willow and how wonderful Willow really is. :luv


The appearance of Ethan Rayne...I find it odd that he was living next door to Willow and did not know. I don't see how this can be a mere coincidence, but stranger things have happened. Hopefully, he knows nothing about the secret lair. We definitely do not need Giles interfering right now!!!

I'm excited to see where you go with this. I haven't seen the movie, so it's all new. I keep fighting the urge to order it on Netflix! lol
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Re: Chase the morning (updated: 5/15/11)

Postby Ariel » Fri May 20, 2011 8:14 pm

Hey,

Wow, so vivid! So fresh and new and powerful. Love their forays into discovering sex and the tub. mmmmmm.

Then their fear/arousal/love and choices. Touching!

Then Rupert and Ethan Rayne . . . where is THIS going to go!

Thank you for your amazing imagination!

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Re: Chase the morning (updated: 5/15/11)

Postby nightmask » Sun May 22, 2011 8:04 pm

Laragh: Yay I'm glad your enjoying it! :D Thanks so much for the feedback :]

Finey_McFine: Thank you so much :] I would definitely suggest seeing the movie, even though looking back on my story it kind of doesn't follow the plot and is more centered around the Repo environment that's established throughout the movie :]
The guy who plays Giles is actually in the movie which is a musical so it's pretty funny to see Giles sing :P
I think there are a few clips on youtube of the movie's musical numbers, the one's with Giles are, "Night Surgeon", "Legal Assassin", Everyone's a Composer", "Let The Monster Rise" and "At the Opera Tonight".
The basic idea/ theme of the movie though is allot like Gattaca if you've ever seen that movie, so it's pretty interesting. :]

Ariel: Hey! It's so good to get feedback from you again! :D I actually have a very vague idea of where I think the plot is going to go so I have to work on that some more, but I'm glad you like and understand the story so far :]

next update directly below :D
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Re: Chase the morning (updated: 5/15/11)

Postby nightmask » Sun May 22, 2011 8:43 pm

Author's note: I was inspired to write the scene where Willow wakes up to Rocky Horror by the clip on youtube of Amber Benson singing "Touch-a Touch-a Touch me" <3

Part 25:
“Willow what did you mean when you said ‘with just clothes on’ ? Have you ever... b-been with someone before?” Tara asked, she brought her knees into her chest and focused on the feeling of the warm wash cloth on her back.

Willow closed her eyes and sighed, “... Drusilla in the past... repeatedly groped me... but so far only with my clothes on. I’ve never been with anyone before but when I was about 14 I got kinda got curious about my body and well I tried... stuff...” she admitted hoping Tara would understand what she was getting at by ‘stuff’.

“What do you mean? Like what?” Tara asked confused as to what Willow was referring to, she started to feel like a prude.

Willow blushed profusely, “You mean you’ve never tried...?” she asked.

Willow had never really talked to anyone ever about masturbation, it was kind of a private topic and embarrassing as to how she discovered it. A couple of years ago she remembered most of the guys in her class had been very comfortable about talking about self pleasuring they were very open about it when they were with their group of guy friends. She had often overheard them and one day decided to do a little research on the topic.

Several times she had slammed her laptop closed out of shock or embarrassment from what she found out. There was so many different ways to explore she was hesitant at first and somewhat disgusted to even think of attempting them. Eventually she warmed up to the idea as her mind matured and she was more comfortable with her body.

She remembered that night specifically when she first touched herself. She was just getting over a bad fever in late October and her parents were out on a date, she remembered waking up from a very vivid and suggestive dream. She couldn’t seem to sit still as soon as she woke up, the TV in her room had been left on and was playing horror movies specials. The Rocky Horror picture show was playing the scene when Janet encounters Rocky and sings “Touch-a touch-a touch me”. Willow sat up in bed the chills from her fever still in effect made her shiver and ache for warmth that her blankets couldn’t provide. Half awake she slid one hand up her shirt and lazily brushed her fingers over her nipple. A warm sensation spread threw her body and then died quickly, so she did it again rolling the nipple between her fingertips arching into the exquisite feeling.

Her other hand traveled down her stomach sending shivers up her spine her mind was buzzing with excitement and all she could hear was the sound of Janet singing to Rocky. Her index finger slowly crept down past the waistband of her underwear, immediately she shuddered as she applied the lightest touch to her center. She flipped over on her stomach and buried her face in her pillow to muffle her sighs and deep gasps for air.

Tara’s eyes lit up as she suddenly understood what Willow was getting at, “Oh! That... kind of... s-stuff” she replied, it was her turn to blush thankfully she wasn’t facing Willow.

Willow dunked the cloth back into the water and wiped more at the ink on Tara’s back, Willow smirked at Tara’s flustered reaction she was too cute. She pressed her lips to the back of Tara’s neck lovingly and continued to wash her back.

Tara laughed softly and whispered “That tickles”.

Willow spread more soapy water over Tara’s skin, then dunked the wash cloth back into the tub gathering water inside it. She pulled the cloth out of the water now heavy with dripping liquid, she pressed it to the back of Tara’s neck and squeezed it so that it released the water it had gathered and spilled down her back in rivulets erasing the soapy lather and left over ink from her skin. Tara held up her hair in a scrunched and messy bun so that Willow could get better access.

“So you’ve never...?” Willow asked again raising an eyebrow, she wiped the rest of the soapy lather off of Tara’s back so that no ink remained.

“N-No...” Tara replied, she felt somewhat at a disadvantage because of this, Willow knew more about her own body than she did.

The thought of Willow touching herself, made Tara bite her lip, fuzzy images of the gorgeous red-head pleasuring herself almost made Tara loose all train of thought. Willow was busy enjoying the embarrassed reactions she was getting out of Tara, it was so adorable and naive, it just made Tara seem so much more pure and innocent than she already appeared to be.

“Well you should give it a try sometime” Willow casually suggested in a joking tone, “But only if I get to watch”, she added in a low seductive voice, she felt Tara’s body shiver under her fingertips.

Tara turned her head around looking shocked at Willow’s suggestion, her face was completely red, Willow giggled at how she could tease her girlfriend.

“I was kidding!” she quickly replied, Tara’s mortified face slowly relaxed but retained it’s red flushed color.

She turned her body around so she could sit infront of Willow.

“I-Is the ink all off?” she asked, Willow nodded, she set the damp wash cloth in a bundle on the side of the tub, steam lightly rose from it as it made more direct contact with the air conditioning in the room.

Tara let her hair cascade over one of her shoulders, Willow reached out to lovingly run her fingers threw it, “Want me to wash your hair now?” she asked.

“Okay” Tara said grinning, she turned to grab the shower head and pulled it so that the metal coil it was connected to extended, she turned the middle knob and water sprinkled out of the shower head.

Tara handed the showerhead to Willow, who held it over Tara’s head making sure the spray was gentle before making a circle motion with her hand so that it got all of Tara’s hair wet. Tara closed her eyes and waited patiently while Willow spread the water over her head.

After a while Tara blindly reached out and took the shower head from Willow and opened her eyes moving the spray away from her face. Willow closed her eyes while Tara held the spray over her hair, it spread out and veiled her face in coppery wet strands. Willow jerked back suddenly and pushed the hair in her face away and sniffled, she brought a hand to her nose and pinched it, her face contorted. Tara quickly turned the shower head off and returned her attention to Willow.

“W-What’s wrong? Is it to h-hot?” She asked panicking.

Willow shook her head no, “ Waber imb by nobe” she replied in a muffled voice.

“You got water in your nose?” Tara asked gently moving Willow’s hand away, Willow squeezed her eyes shut and waited for the uncomfortable pressure working up into her sinuses to fade.

Tara brushed strands of Willow’s slippery wet hair behind her ear and caressed her cheek with her thumb. Willow slowly opened her eyes and sniffled some more.

“Better?” Tara asked, Willow nodded then closed her eyes again pausing and leaning back, she brought a hand to cup the front of her nose and sneezed.

“Ok, now I’m good” Willow said relaxing, she wiped at her nose and smiled, she dipped the hand that had caught most of her sneeze into the bath to clean it.

Willow looked to her side and picked up a shampoo bottle and squirted a generous amount in her hand. She worked the syrupy liquid into Tara’s hair making it turn into white foamy suds. Tara closed her eyes and relaxed while Willow massaged the shampoo into her scalp.

Her father had only helped her wash her hair when she was very young, when she turned four it became expected of her to be able to wash her own hair. Her father got to see her less and less as she grew up so she was used to taking showers or baths without assistance, she inwardly admitted to herself that it was nice to experience the comforting feeling of someone taking care of her again. She quickly made herself stop thinking about her father to avoid the knot that was threatening to tighten in her stomach. She re-adjusted her attention to Willow’s soft breathing.

No one noticed the small streams of water slowly creeping down the side of the tub and dissapearing threw the cracks in the floor.
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“Can you please explain to me why the bloody hell your living next to Willow Rosenberg? You realize your the one who killed her parents and burnt her home to the ground, I have no idea how she hasn’t noticed it was you by now” Rupert growled at Ethan.

Ethan stuffed his hands in the pockets of pants, he wasn’t wearing any shoes or socks so his feet stuck out the bunched up cuffs at the bottom of his pants, his toes were somewhat hairy and his toe-nails were short and cut at odd angles.

He sneered at Rupert and explained why he was there, “After I burned down that house an killed ‘er parents the Master ordered me to stay close to her and keep a close eye. You see he heard about this prophecy, the one about the two chosen ones who will release the sun from the Master’s curse and revive the slayer. It turns out that she’s one of the chosen ones. I’ve been her neighbor for two years at least and she’s never recognized me as the man who killed her parents. When I casually asked about her parents, she told me the whole story and supposedly she never saw either of our faces it was too dark, she only saw our tattoo’s though, so when I heard that part I immediately cut the tattoo off of my skin for precaution so she’d never find out by accident. I have her convinced that I'm her friend and that she can tell me anything”, Ethan snickered at his cunning deception.

Rupert frowned, he heard of the prophecy from the Master as well, and he secretly knew his daughter was the other chosen one. When he first found out he began to give her medecine to mask her aura from other Watch-men or vampires who would have been able to tell immediately just from looking at her that she was one of the chosen. Now that she had taken off he had grown very concerned that she was more vulnerable without it. That was another reason he had kept her locked up all these years incase anyone found out about her destiny, they would have brought her to the Master and have taken her away from him. Thats what had happened to Willow when she was employed by the Master, she had unknowingly trapped herself within their clutches. This was why he was originally ordered to look for her. Willow and Tara would eventually need his help and he was ready to give it if only they would accept it.

Rupert studied Ethan’s tired looking face that had with no doubt gotten older looking. He glanced inside Ethan’s apartment taking note of the mess. Clothes were thrown everywhere in piles, plates of half-eaten food lay around while mounds of books and scattered papers lay amuck. Something moving caught his attention, water was dripping down from dark blots in the ceiling and making puddles on the floor. The only problem with that was it was no longer raining, so why would water be dripping?

“Um Ethan... why is your ceiling leaking?” Rupert asked pointing up at the ceiling.

Ethan turned around looking confused and looked up at the ceiling, “Shit, someone’s probablly using the bathroom on the top floor. They must’ve forgotten to lay down towels on the linoleum before running the bath” he mumbled.

“Who lives on the top floor?” Rupert asked out of curiosity, who would be bathing in the middle of the day?

“Well no one does, but Willow goes up there sometimes to practice spells” Ethan replied lazily, he scratched his head and looked around feeling bored.
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Re: Chase the morning (updated: 5/15/11)

Postby Finey_McFine » Sun May 22, 2011 8:46 pm

DIBS!

Really love the continuing bath tub intimacy :luv Their talk about the 'stuff' was fraught with innocence and Tara's reactions were adorable. :blush I love Willow teasing her with asking to watch if she decides to try it. That's our Willow...always the vixen!

I had a feeling that Ethan knew exactly who he was living next to and unfortunately, he knows about the upstairs apt. I just hope that they're out of the tub and dressed before Giles barges in on them. Awwwwkwaaaaaaard! lol The only hope is that Giles can stay Giles and help the girls fulfill the prophecy. Because if he changes to his Ripper persona...I can see them combining powers and frying his ass before he has a chance!

Great update and as always...looking forward to the next!
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Re: Chase the morning (updated: 5/23/11)

Postby Ariel » Sun May 22, 2011 9:54 pm

Hi,

This story is totally pulling me in! :bow :bow :bow

Loved the sensuality of the bath, I'm big on water and hair washing, too! :love

Then Ethan Rayne and his creepy machinations, then another layer to Giles' plans and motives.

Willow's touching herself was well described and Tara's growing sexual awakening is very sweet. :flower

I think part of what is powerful for me is the combination of darkness: their situation, their environment and light: their love, their power together. The tension between the two is compelling and beautifully done.

Thanks!

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Re: Chase the morning (updated: 5/23/11)

Postby Laragh » Mon May 23, 2011 3:30 am

First off, that video is awesome. I remember the first time I saw it and I was like :drool :D And Anthony Stewart Head = Best. Frank-N-Furter. Ever!!!

Several times she had slammed her laptop closed out of shock or embarrassment from what she found out. There was so many different ways to explore she was hesitant at first and somewhat disgusted to even think of attempting them.


Haha. Oh poor Willow, I feel you, I do. My friends are all vocal about sex and stuff as well and I'm just like 'well I'm gonna go blush in the corner'

I love their continued bath time :) Super sweet.

Ruh row!! Are they gonna collapse in all their naked glory on top of Giles and Ethan? That's gonna be...awkward to say the least lol.

Can't wait for more!!

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