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Re: Part 17

Postby DreamLover » Sat Sep 04, 2004 12:38 pm

Yeeeeeeeaaaaaah :banana :banana :banana :banana :banana



Thank goddess you got rid of that creep. Send him to the moon, send him to the underworld, send him somewhere but don't let him come back. NOW ON WITH THE :kiss2



Can't wait until the next update :bounce :bounce :bounce

DreamLover
 


Re: Part 17

Postby WickedReds » Sat Sep 04, 2004 1:22 pm

Oz got his ass kicked... Oz got his ass kicked!!!.... nice one jeanne.. Buffy's got a mean protective streak i wouldn't want to be in the war path of that... now on to some willow/tara lovin... :banana *runs to kevin and give him a big banana squeeze*



-reds:willow



my banana dances for smut :banana

Tara in a wet shirt, Tara in a wet shirt. Tara in. A. Wet. Shirt. “Of course.”-Willow From Remember to Breath By Yellow Crayon



Now that just sucks- me

WickedReds
 


Re: Part 17

Postby YMKA » Sat Sep 04, 2004 9:24 pm

Aha!!! It was OZ :p

Now....i have a question....Oz is warewolf...and Willow is a witch...What does that make the girls?.....:confused



Keep it up!!! Good job;)



:peace :heart

M.

YMKA
 


Re: Part 17

Postby Sheba » Sun Sep 05, 2004 1:33 am

I love the way this fics going...please keep writing!

Sheba
 


Re: Part 17

Postby Stroke of Luck » Sun Sep 05, 2004 3:40 am

YAY got his punishment!:boot WAs about time, just sorry to hear that Buffy had such a hard time. Thinking about what could have happen to those lil girls and her best friends.



I just wanna see Oz leaving Sunnydale and never come back. I doubt he can be in control of his anger when Tara is around, so i doubt he will ever see his kids, but do they really wanna meet their dad again? :hmm They don't really know him, so what?!



Buffy has to call Willow and tell her what happened...maybe she will come to her house and talk to Oz and tell him that he has to leave her and never come back, that he isn't a part of her life anymore!



Cu:wave

SoL/Natti

"I wish that you were here or that I were there, or that we were together anywhere!"

Stroke of Luck
 


Re: Part 17

Postby Irishgrl3 » Sun Sep 05, 2004 9:52 am

Damn... go Buffy! So happy Oz didn't make through the door, that could have been disastrous all the way around. Especially for the little ones. Thanks for getting Oz out of the way. :D

Irishgrl3
 


ahem..

Postby photographer02 » Sun Sep 05, 2004 10:02 am

Ahem ahem...

I know I have to be proper (house rules) but...at this stage for this new chapter...

WOOOOOOOOOOOOHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!

YOU GOOOOO BUFFY!!

KICK OZ'S BUTT AND SHOW HIM WHO'S THE BOSS!!!

(cough cough cough) *trying to calm down*

Great work! I love it! And I mean it! I'll print out this story once it's finished!

Please continue as soon as possible!



photographer02

photographer02
 


Re: ahem..

Postby Shy One » Sun Sep 05, 2004 10:47 am

Yay!!!! :bounce

Thanks for having Buffy beat the crap out of Oz! :punish

That was great! It's about time someone told him what

a selfish ass he is.



Now........on with the hot steamy lovin'!!!!!! :kiss2

:pinky



Shy One

:shy

Shy One
 


Re: ahem..

Postby veiled isis moon » Sun Sep 05, 2004 11:05 am

Naughty Oz I'm so glad it went that way rather than, Willow and Tara get interupted from their lovin and ripped to pieces! This way is so much better! You wrote the fight stuff very well, i'd probably say just add a bit more about where and how they were being hit and what kinda damadge it was causing, their feelings and stuff, just to bulk it ip a bit more. More please..........



Michelle.x

veiled isis moon
 


Re: Part 17

Postby tarawhipped » Sun Sep 05, 2004 5:57 pm

Jeanne-



Did you do okay? Well, DUH! That was great, and the action was excellent. My favorite thing though, was that you didn't have Oz speak at all. I'm sure in his twisted mind he has a reason for what he's doing, and that it'll be revealed, but whatever it is, there's no excuse for his behavior, and I'm glad that you didn't have him try to explain here. Showing it all from Buffy's POV, and how much her friends' well-being means to her, well that was just wonderful.



Now get to the smoochies!:punish

-Cameron



What should I be but just what I am? - Edna St.Vincent Millay

tarawhipped
 


Re: Part 17

Postby alysagoddess85 » Sun Sep 05, 2004 7:59 pm

YAY!! its like a dream come true!! lol...I KNEW IT!! haha...wow i feel smart...lol...or lucky..probably lucky...anyways great update...you did just fine on the fight scene..couldnt we have maybe just killed him though?? nooo...maybe not...lets let willow do that...ooo that would be fun!! hehe...ok patiently awaiting the next update!



~mel:kdevil

'The Cat in the Hat' is fine, just not during sex.--Alyson Hannigan

alysagoddess85
 


Re: Part 17

Postby barnabasvamp » Mon Sep 06, 2004 6:07 am

You just had to deal with Oz first, didn't you? :laugh Well it was interesting how you had Buffy talk him back as opposed to having to beat him up. Nice update.



Now, back to our girls?? :pray



BV

It's the passion in a kiss that gives to it its sweetness; it is the affection in a kiss that sanctifies it.

barnabasvamp
 


Great fic!

Postby Willow85 » Mon Sep 06, 2004 6:21 am

Okay, since I decided to not just lurk around here, but actually post, I'd like to tell you that I really love this fic.

I read lots of storys so far and yours will certainly be one to remember!

Oh and, please send Oz back to where he came from. Wherever that may be..



Willow85

Love in the past is only a memory

Love in the future is only a fantasy

True love just lives in the here and now

Edited by: Willow85  at: 9/6/04 5:22 am
Willow85
 


Replies

Postby kindagay » Tue Sep 07, 2004 12:00 pm

Hello beautiful, sweet kittens :wave



Thank you all so much for reading, enjoying & leaving feedback to my creation - your words warm my heart & encourage me to write more :flower



Emms: Buffy certainly did kick that ass - I felt it was well deserved too.

Yep, Bufy will be telling Willow what happened & Willow will, most probably, be telling Oz to take a long walk off a not so long pier.

Aww, I'm sorry things aren't working out so well with Bob :fit2 I did worry that his anger would be become a problem - better to end things now, before anything too, dire happens.

Thank you for your sweet words & yes, the next update is much longer :)



DreamLover: Yep, got rid of the creep. Uhm, sent him to Buffy's basement for now, but he won't be interrupting the smoochies - I promise. :)

Next update very soon



WickedReds: I take it you enjoyed the Oz ass-kicking? :) Buffy certainly is very protective of Willow & the twins & no, I wouldn't wanna be in the war path of it either.

Yep, Willow/Tara lovin' next - I have a feeling Smutty's :banana gonna enjoy the next update



YMKA: Hmm, Oz is a werewolf, Willow's a witch - the girls are.... :hmm were-witches? Whatever they are, I don't think it'd be a good idea to get them angry :no



Sheba: Glad you're liking & I most definitely will keep writing :)



SoL: Yep, Oz got his punishment, bad Oz :punish Don't worry, Buffy'll be okay - he's the slayer, she's built to deal with stuff like this.

Hmm, Oz won't be sticking around long, but, I think the kids might be a little bit curious to meet their dad.

Buffy will be calling Willow, but, not 'til the morning, & everything will work out how it's supposed to - with Will & Tara together & happy :heart



Irishgrl3: Yeah, there was no way Oz was getting in that house - :no not in my fic! So, I had to get rid of him somehow & I think Buffy did a pretty good job, didn't she? :)



photographer 02: :lol Hey, don't feel like you have to be proper on my account :) In fact, I love the enthusiasm, the more enthusiastic the better - it lets me know that I'm doing a good job :D

Thanks, again, for saying you're gonna print this out - it's such an amazing compliment :) :flower



Shy One: Glad you enjoyed the ass-kicking. I just had to get rid of Oz before I could get on with the steamy lovin' - which is coming up very soon :)



veiled isis moon: Hmm, yeah, I think my version was much better than that other scenario you mentionned. I can promise you right now - nobody will be getting ripped to pieces in my fic. :no

Thanks for the pointers about the fight scene - That was the first one I've ever written, so, I wasn't quite sure about it. If I write another, I'll keep in mind what you said :)

More coming soon



tarawhipped: Glad you liked it - Thanks for saying I did great :D

I think Oz is kinda, too busy with his own thoughts to offer any kind of explanation just yet. His reasons will be revealed in future updates - but I agree, there's really no excuse for his actions.

I'm glad you liked seeing it all from Buffy's POV.

Smoochies coming up next :)



alysagoddess85: Aww, a dream come true? Really? That's so sweet :heart I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

Kill Oz? Hmm, :hmm can you imagine trying to explain that to the twins?

"Jules, Lydia, your daddy tried to get in the house and attack us all last night, but, your aunt Buffy beat him to death." - Maybe not

As much as he probably deserves it, Oz won't be being killed in this fic - sorry

Thanks for waiting patiently - update soon :)



BV: Yes, sorry, I had to deal with Oz first. I couldn't concentrate on the gay love with Oz stood outside getting all angry. Glad you enjoyed it.

Yes, back to our girls now :)



Willow85: Hello :wave , glad you're enjoying my fic :) Thanks for your sweet, kind words :flower

Send Oz back to where he came from? :hmm I'll be sending him somewhere, far, far away, but, not where he came from.





Okay my lovely, loyal & most gracious kittens, I have much kisses & gay love for you in a matter of minutes, stay tuned



Hugs

Jeanne

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Tara: “Let me guess – you want me to lie on your lap while you feed me grapes, but my sweet, shy, precious, honey you’ve been too shy to ask – yes?” - GROWW by WannaFriendsBe

kindagay
 


Part 18

Postby kindagay » Tue Sep 07, 2004 12:05 pm

Okay, now, who wanted some gay love?



____________________________________________________________________________



The two women quietly made their way upstairs to Willow’s bedroom. They stood at the foot of the bed and gazed longingly at one another. The redhead took a step towards her love and gently reached out to cup the blonde’s face, running her thumb over delicate lips.



“Are you sure?” Willow asked needlessly, quietly.

Blue eyes radiated nothing but pure love as Tara nodded and whispered a gentle

“Please darling, love me.”

Willow closed the remaining gap between herself and the other half of her soul and captured already bruised lips in a searing kiss.



Lips smashed and tongues duelled. Willow’s fingers worked up to entwine in Tara’s soft golden tresses. Tara’s hands reached out to Willow’s waist and pulled the redhead even closer.

Legs weakened with the intensity of the kiss and the two women fell to the bed.



Five smooth, creamy buttons were slowly, reverently unfastened, revealing velvety white skin. Hungry lips breathed a trail of fire over quivering stomach muscles. Nimble fingers snapped open the front-fastening bra and pushed the powder-blue lace away from full, curvaceous breasts.



“Oh god Tara…” Willow breathed as she took in the sight of the other woman’s naked breasts. “So, beautiful…”



Hands, lips and tongue devoured the blonde’s breasts. Teeth grazed gently over dark, taut nipples. Nibbling, suckling, biting.



“Wil…low.” Tara groaned, breath catching in her throat.



Tara’s fingers tangled in soft, red hair, urging Willow’s warm mouth away from her nipple and up towards her own hungry lips. Willow kneaded and massaged Tara’s breasts as their tongues fought for supremacy; battling from one mouth to the other. The blonde discarded her unfastened blouse and bra then gently rolled Willow onto her back. Pulling away from the kiss Tara lightly straddled the redhead’s hips and began to gently scrape her rounded finger nails across Willow’s stomach, pushing the soft pale pink top up and eventually over Willow’s head.



“Why Ms Rosenberg, have you been out all day with no bra on?” Tara scolded playfully when faced with Willow’s pert, naked breasts.

“Hmm, and you’re not at all pleased about that, are you?” Willow raised her eyebrow questioningly,

“Well, I’m certainly not gonna complain.” Tara grinned affectionately.



The blonde ran eager fingers over Willow’s breasts, up to raspberry nipples which she gently tweaked, pulled and rolled between her fingers. The redhead arched into Tara’s touch, gasping and moaning at the attention being paid to her sensitive nipples.



“Mmm, you look so delicious; I think I’ve forgotten how good your breasts taste.” Tara subconsciously licked her lips.

“Well, uhm, feel free to, to refresh your memory.” Willow stumbled over her words, too caught up in the moment to concentrate on speaking.

“Mmm, don’t mind if I do.” Tara murmured, her voice sultry, as she slowly leaned forward to taste the soft, sweet breasts that she had missed so much.



Willow almost came the instant the blonde’s warm breath caressed her skin.



“Oh… my… god.” The redhead gasped as hard teeth grazed lightly over her left breast.



A warm, wet tongue was brought into play and it was all Willow could do to not pass out from the overwhelming sensations of pleasure coursing through her veins.



The redhead’s hands travelled down Tara’s sweat-covered back and slipped under the waist-band of her skirt, effectively pushing it down over Tara’s hips. Thin, pale blue lace panties cupped Tara’s ass-cheeks; Willow dragged her nails along the soft fabric causing the blonde to suck and pinch harder on tender, dark nipples.



Willow slowly inched Tara’s skirt down and off her legs, tossing it to the floor, and in a frantic, passionate tussle the redhead pushed Tara onto her back and knelt between her legs; fingers drawing lazy patterns over supple thighs.



“These…” Tara indicated Willow’s jeans by grabbing the pockets and pulling herself up, “…just have to go.” She instructed as she wrapped her legs around Willow’s back.



She leaned forward to run her tongue over strawberry lips, the action causing their breasts to rub together lightly, sensuously. She slowly explored the curve of the redhead’s hips and waist with her fingers; raising goose-bumps along warm, porcelain skin. Finger tips journeyed along the waistband of fitted, stonewashed jeans; the silver-grey button popped open, the zip slowly pulled down. Hands travelled under denim to squeeze soft, firm cheeks encased within red silk panties.



A minute later, Willow’s jeans and both girls’ panties joined the pile of discarded clothes and Tara leaned back on the bed, her love’s body laid upon her. Skin touching skin. Lips pressed against lips. Thighs captured between thighs, rubbing slow and hard against soft, wet curls. Bodies rocked gently together in a dance once abandoned, but never forgotten.



Pressure increased. Rhythm increased. Intensity increased.



“Together.” It was both request and agreement, both women breathing the word at the same moment.



Mouths collided in a powerful, desperate kiss as thighs pushed harder into throbbing mounds.



The lovers clung to one another for dear life as their orgasms shook through their bodies and their collective juices coated one another’s thighs.



Before Tara had chance to catch her breath Willow moved down her still trembling body and began cleaning the blonde’s thigh of their combined release.



“Oh god, we taste so good.” The redhead proclaimed, savouring their flavour.

“Kiss me.” Tara demanded softly, desperate to taste her lover.



Willow crawled up Tara’s body, her eyes roaming over the shapely woman beneath her, until her gaze locked with cobalt blue. She leant down slowly, her warm breath tickling and exciting Tara’s full lips. As emerald eyes fluttered closed and Willow’s lips parted, Tara lifted her head off the pillow to seize Willow’s mouth. She swirled her tongue around the inside of her sweetheart’s warm mouth desperately. Devouring, re-learning and delighting in their own unique ambrosia.



Placing her hands gently against Willow’s shoulders she pushed the redhead onto her back. She pulled away from the kiss; their lips parting with a satisfying pop; and gazed adoringly, for endless seconds, into her baby’s eyes.



Tara showered her sweetheart’s face in gentle butterfly kisses. Forehead, cheeks, eyelids, the tip of her nose, then from the gentle slope of her chin, up along her jaw-line to briefly nibble on soft ear-lobes. More kisses trailed down over her love's sweet neck, down along the valley between soft, petite breasts to a taut stomach, muscles trembling with desire and excitement. Venturing lips met soft, damp curls and journeyed a little further to swollen lips. She inhaled her lover deeply as she tentatively reached out her tongue to finally claim her sought after treasure.



“Oh gods Tara… Please, taste me, take me… Oh baby, I’m yours. It’s all for you… only for you.”



Tara needed no further encouragement.



She dove into her lover. Teeth grazed over Willow’s throbbing clit. Tongue buried deep within Willow’s velvety warmth.

A contented sigh escaped between the blonde’s lips as she became re-acquainted with being inside her beloved. This was where she belonged. This was the place she would always call home.



Willow’s hips bucked wildly against Tara’s eager mouth; her incoherent gasps and moans filled the air around them.



Tara’s hands reached up to knead Willow’s breasts keenly as she curled her tongue up slowly to locate her lover’s sweet spot. She rolled the tip of her tongue over Willow’s g-spot whilst pulling and tweaking at hard, dark nipples.



“Oh… My… Tara, baby… Oh god… Oh my god… Yes, god yes baby… Oooohhhhh… Taaaaarrrrrrrrrraaaaaaaaa…” Willow called out barely audibly; her breath catching in her throat as her body shook uncontrollably.



Tara caught every drop of Willow’s release; sucking, licking and swallowing fervently. Her red haired lover filled her very soul, her every sense excited and overflowing with the essence of the gentle spirit that was kindred to her own.



“Mmmmm.” Both women practically purred in satisfaction.



Tara moved to lay her head on Willow’s stomach; the redhead lazily stoked her fingers through tousled golden locks.

“God I missed you. Missed the things that you do to me, the way you make me feel. Tara baby, I love you so much.”

The blonde lifted her head and smiled up at the other half of her soul. She moved to lay by Willow’s side, her body pressed tightly into Willow’s, her arm resting lightly over the redhead’s stomach.

They laid together in silence for a few minutes, basking in the contentment and completeness of finally being together again.



“Are you sleepy?” Tara asked of her lover, breaking the silence.

“Not even a little bit.” Willow smiled devilishly, rolling onto her side to face her darling.

“Will, sweetie? What are you…? Oh god baby…”



Willow’s hand stroked down the length of Tara’s body, as she slowly eased two fingers into her girl Tara gave a drawn out, spine tingling moan.

“Ohhh my sweet angel… I love you, so much… Please don't stop...”



And for the rest of the night, neither of them stopped.



_____________________________________________________________________________



Hmm, is it just me, or is it getting kinda hot in here?



Hugs

Jeanne



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Tara: “Let me guess – you want me to lie on your lap while you feed me grapes, but my sweet, shy, precious, honey you’ve been too shy to ask – yes?” - GROWW by WannaFriendsBe

kindagay
 


Re: Part 18

Postby WickedReds » Tue Sep 07, 2004 12:34 pm

Holy shit Jeanne!!! i think u broke me... AND look smutty is going nuts :banana :banana :banana :banana :banana :banana :banana :banana :banana :banana :banana :banana ... that was fucking great... i love smut....oh yeah i almost choked on my lunch..



-reds:willow



my banana dances for smut :banana

Tara in a wet shirt, Tara in a wet shirt. Tara in. A. Wet. Shirt. “Of course.”-Willow From Remember to Breath By Yellow Crayon



Now that just sucks- me

WickedReds
 


Re: Part 18

Postby Irishgrl3 » Tue Sep 07, 2004 1:00 pm

Wow, what an HOT Update! Ditto on the "broke me" and the "hot in here"! :thud



I've been left speechless, what more can I say. :D



Irishgrl3
 


Re: Part 18

Postby Willow85 » Tue Sep 07, 2004 2:00 pm



Since I'm kinda out of words right now, I'm just gonna say WOW, great update.



More soon, I hope. I'm really wondering what happens next..



Willow85

Love in the past is only a memory

Love in the future is only a fantasy

True love just lives in the here and now

Willow85
 


Re: Part 18

Postby DreamLover » Tue Sep 07, 2004 2:19 pm

Ooooo my goddess I need a cold shower right now that was so fucking HOT.



More please :grin

DreamLover
 


Re: Part 18

Postby shuyaku » Tue Sep 07, 2004 2:27 pm

It's not just you. I so need a cold :shower . That was excellent :bounce



-shuyaku



ps: I just found this :spam I think he's so cute for some reason...

Oh God, Willow—you’re giving me the gift of Karen Carpenter. Just when I think I grasp the full extent of your love." - Tara

"Why do birds suddenly appear? It’s because, you are queer…" - Willow (Gods Served and Abandoned by AntigoneUnbound)

shuyaku
 


Re: Part 18

Postby Arwen276 » Tue Sep 07, 2004 4:09 pm





OOH-LA-LA

that WAS SO HOT!!



:)



I CAN'T wait for more, and thanks for making Oz Dissapear for the moment!



~Arwen

Hear That Baby? You're My Always... Willow

Arwen276
 


Re: Part 18

Postby barnabasvamp » Tue Sep 07, 2004 4:21 pm

Well, I must admit I'm glad you got Oz out of the way first!!



Definitely warm in this thread! :thud

Willow/Tara lovin'- always good.



BV

It's the passion in a kiss that gives to it its sweetness; it is the affection in a kiss that sanctifies it.

barnabasvamp
 


Re: Part 18

Postby veiled isis moon » Tue Sep 07, 2004 4:24 pm

Hey......erm......that......with.......and......they......tongue.....hot......i.......you........killed.......erm......huh.....me...

...............nevermind!!!

veiled isis moon
 


Re: Part 18

Postby tarawhipped » Tue Sep 07, 2004 7:20 pm

*pulls on shirt collar, steam escapes*



Well, when you stop with the teasing, you REALLY stop with the teasing! I uhhhh.....:thud



-Cameron (who'd like to say more, but has totally lost the ability to form words)



What should I be but just what I am? - Edna St.Vincent Millay

tarawhipped
 


Re: Part 18

Postby MissKittys Ball O Yarn » Tue Sep 07, 2004 7:35 pm

Wow Jeanne...That was...well...beyond words comes to mind. In-fact...I think for once i am left speechless...weird huh? That was probably the most amazing love scene I've read in a long time.....:shock ......My brain isn't working right now and its all your fault...cause with the....lovin'.....So I'll have to come back later and leave more feedback when my brain is up and functioning again.....







xoxo

Emms

The people I'm furious with are the womens's liberationists. They keep getting up on soapboxes and proclaiming women are brighter than men. That's true, but it should be kept quiet or it ruins the whole racket.----



Anita Loos

MissKittys Ball O Yarn
 


Re: Part 18

Postby alysagoddess85 » Tue Sep 07, 2004 7:36 pm

wow...ya know i was almost kinda upset that oz wont be killed in this fic...but then i realized your logic...and you sooooooooooooooooooooooooo made up for anything else with this update...i think u made my computer all foggy...VERY nice!!



~mel:kdevil

'The Cat in the Hat' is fine, just not during sex.--Alyson Hannigan

alysagoddess85
 


Re: Part 18

Postby YMKA » Tue Sep 07, 2004 10:20 pm

:thud :thud :thud :thud



:peace :heart

M.

YMKA
 


....

Postby willowhanded » Tue Sep 07, 2004 10:38 pm

-ker-blink-u-



-coughs.-



i.. and then .. the .. w. .w .. s.. :eek :thud :thud :thud :thud :thud :thud :thud :thud :thud :thud :thud :thud :thud :thud :thud :thud :thud :thud :thud :thud :thud :thud :thud :thud :thud :thud :thud :thud :thud :thud





yahh .. coherent ..





r..reply ..





mm..maybe .. uh .. later?





-ummm.. oh. kristi

willowhanded
 


Re: ....

Postby wimpy0729 » Tue Sep 07, 2004 11:37 pm

DAMN...that was so worth the wait!



That was...um...mind numbing, but for some reason other parts of me are wide awake! Hmmm...



Great job. Nice and steamy. :thud



Oh, can we have more please?



Wimpy

"There was plenty of magic." ~ Tara

wimpy0729
 


Re: ....

Postby Stroke of Luck » Wed Sep 08, 2004 4:52 am

WOW, great loving part. they were horny as hell eh?;) but nice to see that they didnt "rush" into sex....some smoochies before etc.:D



Their morning will be like this: both are exhausted, hungry and thursty and tara might make pancakes get gets the drinks! and willow well she looks pretty and stays in bed:p



Cu:wave

SoL/Natti

"I wish that you were here or that I were there, or that we were together anywhere!"

Stroke of Luck
 

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