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Re: *sigh*

Postby TemperedCynic » Sat Apr 03, 2004 3:22 am

Hey! I want torture like this! No fair * pouts*



Anyway, that chapter is even more adorable as mutual feelings blossom into physical attraction. Oh yes and the torture will continue, because I'm sure you will take your time with the girls.


More than any other time in history, mankind faces a crossroads. One path leads to despair and utter hopelessness. The other, to total extinction. Let us pray we have the wisdom to choose correctly. Woody Allen (1935 - )

TemperedCynic
 


Re: *sigh*

Postby Grimlock72 » Sat Apr 03, 2004 5:22 am

Weeeeee.... :bounce



Well that was sweet, Willow trying very hard to get over her horse fear. She might have to do that a bit slower though, fainting wouldn't do much good riding an ATV :) Of course Tara had to get the biggest horse of the bunch, figures... :-)



The deer-thing was mostly a scare, takes an hour or so to get all the adrenaline out of your system. At least she missed the deer, Amber wasn't that lucky last time she visited NY (Moonlight Rising).



Poor Willow, having Tara's breasts poking in her back... heh... how ever will she survive :lol .



Grimmy

--
"You hurt Tara," Willow said too calmly. "The last one who tried that was a god. I made her regret it." -- Unexpected Consequences by Lisa of Nine

Grimlock72
 


Re: *sigh*

Postby wimpy0729 » Sat Apr 03, 2004 2:28 pm

Hey WF!!



Okay, let me gather my thoughts --



OH MY GOD! Bump ... bump ...

with the kissing ... and the warm pressing of the ... and the ... oh my ...

This was amazing!



You truly are living up to your name -- giving us a little fever! Thanks!!



Once again, can't wait for more (bump ... bump -- weee!)



Wimpy





wimpy0729
 


Re: *sigh*

Postby Stroke of Luck » Sun Apr 04, 2004 2:58 am

:shock :heart ME WANTS BUMPS LOL wow that was a ride hehehe i wonder what they will do when they are back and the horse is in the stall etc. :hmm haha maybe smoochies???:pray



CU:wave

SoL/Natti

Even in death Baby, i´ll never leave u!

Stroke of Luck
 


Re: *sigh*

Postby Washi » Mon Apr 05, 2004 3:51 am

I want the torture. pouts I'm seriously loving this one. Great job! :grin

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"See? I've mastered this tact crap." Anya in Tears Of The Goddess by Lisa



The course of love doesn’t always run smooth, especially for the neurotic and accident-prone. ~ LadyB



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Re: *sigh*

Postby WillowFever » Mon Apr 05, 2004 11:49 am

hello all you cute little kittens...:bigwave



Well....thank you all so much for all the kind words...I knew you would be wanting the torture...lol...me too....:heart



Hopefully, I will be able to add the next update later today...it is in the works and if all goes well...you should get it soon....



Okay.....I'm on my way to type..type..type....:kgeek



XOXOXOXO

WF

:peace

WillowFever
 


Re: *sigh*

Postby shuyaku » Mon Apr 05, 2004 12:18 pm

Yes - please get to :kgeek I missed my morning fix and just like a morning without coffee - I'm all discombubulated :D



-shuyaku

Oh God, Willow—you’re giving me the gift of Karen Carpenter. Just when I think I grasp the full extent of your love." - Tara

"Why do birds suddenly appear? It’s because, you are queer…" - Willow (Gods Served and Abandoned by AntigoneUnbound)

shuyaku
 


Part 11

Postby WillowFever » Mon Apr 05, 2004 4:56 pm

My goodness....I definitely don't want you to be discombubulated.....lol......so with that thought in mind.....here ya go.....





I think I'm gonna make the rating on this one R...just in case..nothing to drastic...but....so ya know...probably nothing past a PG13 actually.....





Thank you.....thank you......thank you....

To everyone.....



I hope to write a some more tonight at work...so hopefully there will be another update very soon tomorrow....



Okay....on with the story.....



WF











Wild Horses

By

WillowFever







Part:        11        Waiting





Willow was grinning from ear to ear as the 4-wheeler came to a stop.



Breath….breath….breath….



She felt the blonde give her a little squeeze before unwrapping her arms.



“Thanks Willow…”



Willow just continued to grin and nod her head.



“Any time…” anywhere…any place…any how…Bad Willow!!



“I better go check my mail….make sure business is going smooth…”



“Okay….maybe I’ll see ya later…”



“I’d like that…”



Tara gave Willow a quick peck on the cheek and headed for the stalls. Herbie needed a good rub down before Mr. Davenport arrived and Willow took off for the house. She needed to put a little distance between her and the blonde goddess before she did something really stupid and embarrassed herself and possibly Tara.



I love 4-wheelin…





The redhead checked her in-box and noticed that her boss from DBG had sent her a reply.





Willow:



So glad you are getting settled in and look forward to the meeting. I spoke with the client a little while ago and they had nothing but praise for you young lady. If all goes well you may need to fly out and meet in person with them.



I noticed you haven’t picked out a vehicle yet. Moving is a slow process though…no worries…get you something nice. We’ll talk soon.



Sincerely,

Mr. Thomas A. Paine







Willow had all but forgotten about getting a vehicle. Somewhere in the back of her mind she had made the decision that she didn’t need to leave the farm because that would put distance between her and Tara. And she didn’t want distance between her and Tara.



She decided that she would need to get some camping gear for the camp-out and knew that she needed to get a vehicle. She searched the kitchen for a phone book and looked up local Taxi services. A soft knock on the door halted her search.



Tara smiled as she saw Willow walking towards the kitchen door.



She’s so cute…



“Hi…”



Tara blushed and gave a sheepish grin as she stood outside the door.



“Hey…Ummm…..Doug is going to brush Herbie down for me….so I thought I would…just…come and say thanks again…for everything….”



Willow smiled and opened the door wider. Can she get any more beautiful…



“Would you like to come in for a while?”



“I don’t want to interrupt you…”



Tara eyed the phone book and Willow quickly tossed it onto the island. There would be time for taxi’s later.



“You’re not….interrupting I mean. Please…come in.”



Tara stepped into the kitchen and Willow closed the door. The silence that hung between them was comfortable. They were both just thrilled to be in the other’s company.



“Tea?”



“Yes.”



The blonde nodded her head excitedly and Willow went to work. Before long the girls had their tea and were sitting on the sofa in the living room.



“Willow…I need to tell you something…”



The red head furrowed her brows and sat her glass down on the coffee table. She turned to give Tara her complete attention and waited patiently.



“Today…when we kissed…I…”



Here it comes…it was a mistake…she didn’t mean to….she only wants to be friends….brace yourself Willow…don’t lose it till after she breaks your heart and leaves…



Tara seemed to be having trouble finding the words. She just didn’t know how to express how it made her feel to kiss Willow. Slowly, she reached out and took the freckled hand into her own. She could feel Willow shaking.



Tara looked into those eyes of deep green and could have lost herself forever.



“I…had no idea…that kissing you that way would…make me feel like this…”



Willow squeezed her hand.



“It’s okay Tara…I understand…if you just want to be friends that’s fine.”



“What? No….no…I mean yes…”



Willow felt confused and Tara knew she needed to make Willow understand.



“Willow…since we kissed…”



Tara let out a deep sigh…



“That’s all I’ve thought about…on the ride home….I just wanted to make you stop and kiss me all over again…Willow…I don’t ever want you to stop kissing me…”



Willow felt her heart do a little dance which immediately woke up the butterflies in her tummy.



“You make me feel things I’ve never felt before….it’s scary…but it’s nice….I just don’t know what to do…”



The red head lost her heart completely. Tara had somehow reached in and put her mark on Willow’s very soul. The innocence in her blue eyes showed the fear that lurked just underneath the surface. They also shone bright with curiosity and desire and Willow couldn’t wait to help Tara tap into those hidden desires.



“Tara….you don’t have to do anything…I like taking it slow and finding out who you are…there is still so much I want to know about you.”



Tara smiled and dipped her head, allowing a few blonde locks to fall in view of her face. Willow just couldn’t have that. She reached out and tucked the strands behind a very cute ear.



“Willow…would it be wrong of me to ask you…to…kiss me again?”



The red head leaned into the blonde, a breath apart.



“Kissing you…could never be wrong…”



Slowly, both girls leaned into each other. Their lips touched and the fire came to life. Willow tried to be gentle and soft, she didn’t want to make Tara uncomfortable but it was all she could do to take it slow.



She felt Tara’s tongue tenderly ask for permission to enter and so she conceded. Tara’s hands rested on Willow’s shoulders and the red head felt intoxicated by the sweet kiss. They parted briefly to take in air, blue eyes burned with want and Willow saw no reason to deny Tara anything.



She quickly claimed the blonde’s lips in a passionate kiss. Tara let out a whimper as those lips pulled away again, but then gasped and closed her eyes as she felt them descend upon her neck.



Willow slowly pushed Tara back on the sofa. The blonde smelled so good and tasted even better. Tara followed Willow’s lead and soon found herself lying beneath the gorgeous red head, powerless against her lips…her touch…the weight of her body…



“Ohh…Willow….”



Tara’s words were swallowed by hungry lips. Willow gently sucked on her bottom lip and Tara arched her back. Her fingers running up the back of Willow’s neck and tangling in her red hair.



“Mmmmmm….Tara….you’re making me crazy…”



Willow felt the blonde’s body press up into hers. Those firm breasts that had so lovingly rode against her back earlier were now begging to be touched. She cupped her hand over Tara’s left breast and both girls moaned at the touch.



Both girls stared lovingly at one another as Willow slid her hand under the cotton t-shirt that kept her from feeling Tara’s warm skin.



“Is this okay?”



“Oh yes…”



Tara ran her hand down Willow’s back and slowly began sliding under the red heads shirt. Willow’s skin was so soft. It was like nothing she had ever felt before. And she wanted to feel all of it….every inch of it….



“Willow….wait…”



Willow was so close she could feel the silky lace on Tara’s bra, but she came to an instant stop at the blonde’s request.



“What is it….Oh my God! It’s me…I went to fast…I shouldn’t have done this…I’m so sorry….”



“Willow…



“I knew I was going to fast….I mean…you need time…and to take advantage of you right here on the…”



Tara seized the red head’s lips; it seemed to be the only way to get her attention.



“Willow…calm down…I’m fine….you’re fine…we are fine. It’s not to fast…I just….I’ve got to take care of Mr. Davenport…”



“Who?”



Willow felt totally confused. She had just left earth and went to Taraville and wasn’t sure what was going on.



“Mr. Davenport…Herbie…”



Realization dawned on the red heads face and she slowly untangled herself from the blonde.



“I heard his truck pull up…Doug doesn’t know where the papers are for him to sign…he would have interrupted us…I didn’t want him to see…”



Willow smiled and nodded her head.



“I understand…”



Tara stood and straightened her clothes. Her heart was still pounding in her chest and the look on Willow’s face left no doubt that she felt the same. Tara smiled and kissed Willow one last time before heading toward the door.



“Let’s finish this later…okay?”



Willow nodded.



“Tara….I…”



A soft fingertip stopped any other words from spilling from Willow’s lips.



“Later…when we have more time…”



“Okay…”



Tara stepped out of the doorway and made her way back over to the barn. Doug was loading Herbie into the horse trailer and talking with Mr. Davenport. However, the blonde’s thoughts were still back in the house, swirling around a certain red head that had stolen her heart completely.



Tara Maclay…I think you’ve went and fell in love….



A goofy grin covered her face as she climbed the stairs to the office to gather Herbie’s paperwork. She couldn’t wait to finish what she and Willow had started.









Tbc…





WillowFever
 


Re: Part 11

Postby shuyaku » Mon Apr 05, 2004 5:05 pm

Woo Hoo!! :dance --- is that a happy dance? Well, it's close enough and probably a relatively good approximation of me doing a happy dance :D Lots of kissage and almost to 2nd base. I'm feeling so much better now :bounce



-shuyaku

Oh God, Willow—you’re giving me the gift of Karen Carpenter. Just when I think I grasp the full extent of your love." - Tara

"Why do birds suddenly appear? It’s because, you are queer…" - Willow (Gods Served and Abandoned by AntigoneUnbound)

shuyaku
 


Re: Part 11

Postby ApplesauceHorsies » Mon Apr 05, 2004 6:31 pm

Oh, *squeal*. Please give them time. Give them vast, vast expanses of time. Lots and lots of time during which they will not be disturbed. :pray



Did I mention I love this fic?

-AH

Et je saigne encore, tout ce rouge sur mon corps, je te blesse dans un dernier effort

ApplesauceHorsies
 


Re: Part 11

Postby TemperedCynic » Mon Apr 05, 2004 6:33 pm

Well, that was deliciously cruel. Infatuation has become passion, as one kiss leads Tara to confess her feelings for Willow. Asking for another kiss, awwwww! The afterburners kick in and our girls are ready - only fate and a trick-sy writer prevented more W/T goodness. Want more, now!!


More than any other time in history, mankind faces a crossroads. One path leads to despair and utter hopelessness. The other, to total extinction. Let us pray we have the wisdom to choose correctly. Woody Allen (1935 - )

TemperedCynic
 


Re: Part 11

Postby wimpy0729 » Mon Apr 05, 2004 7:33 pm

Hey WF!



So loving this more and more! Two words -- totally YUMMY!

And yes, please give them lots more uninterrupted time.



I have my goofy grin on now and am going back to read it again and again and again.



Thanks for doing a great job!



Wimpy

wimpy0729
 


Re: Part 11

Postby Mikaelah Braenna » Mon Apr 05, 2004 7:47 pm

Ahhhhhh... Interruptions always seem to come at the worst times ... Hopefully, everything works out better next time ...



Great update...Can not wait for the next one!:bounce



~Mikaelah

Willow: "Where would you go? If you felt lost and alone? ..."

Tara: "To You..."


~~Truly and Forever~~

Mikaelah Braenna
 


Re: Part 11

Postby Stroke of Luck » Tue Apr 06, 2004 10:28 am

Heehe that guy is kinda like Buffy, always interupting in the worst moments:p Hmm do they get their snuggle time? Kisses here and there but i hope they wont rush into anything...they have so much time...and i see a romantic time ahead...Tara gives Willow riding lessons, than they are having a picnic:heart GEEZ that is so mushy but so lovely too;)



Cu:wave

SoL/Natti

Even in death Baby, i´ll never leave u!

Stroke of Luck
 


Re: Part 11

Postby littlecrazy80 » Tue Apr 06, 2004 11:03 am

Please give them enough time in the next part for snuggles and smoochies. :pray



*lil´c*

"Okay, we’re here, we’re queer, let’s kick this shit into gear," Five by Five (Taras Shadow)



SweetAmber

littlecrazy80
 


Re: Part 11

Postby WillowFever » Tue Apr 06, 2004 1:50 pm





-shuyaku



I'm so glad you are doing the happy dance and feeling better....I hope you keep on groovin.....thanks....





ApplesauceHorsies



I just love the way you squeal...and time is on the way...no disturbances....it will be here soon...





Did I mention I love this fic?



Yeah!!! and I'm so glad you do.....



TemperedCynic



You know Mike....I gotta keep it interesting...

Glad you are liking the story....





wimpy0729



Wow!!! I got a Yummy.....I'm impressed....WooHoo!!!!!



thanks Wimpy...you are a sweetie....







Mikaelah Braenna



Ya know those interruptions do seem to come at a bad time...but they are great for cliff hangers....lol....Thanks...glad you are still liking the story...







Stroke of Luck



Well....there is lot's of goodness to come....glad you are liking the story...thanks....







littlecrazy80

There are smoochies and snuggles in large quantities just around the bend....even though they may come after this update.....









Thank you all so much....it means a great deal to me to come here and find such wonderful comments....it really keeps me going....and speaking of going.....here we go.....



I hope you enjoy...









Wild Horses

By

WillowFever





Part 12:        Moments Like This









Tara stood outside the stall trying to comfort the latest arrival to the farm. The chestnut horse had been abandoned after the owners found out that she was ready to foal. The horse was dehydrated and severely under weight, but with a little tlc and a thorough check over from the vet Tara knew that the mom to be would be fine.



The blonde looked up and saw Doug carrying in some more fresh straw for the stall and could see the exhaustion written all over his face.



It had been a long day. After Mr. Davenport left with Herbie the call came in concerning the chestnut and just like that Tara and Doug were on the road. They had driven almost two hours before finding the horse but it had been worth the drive.



They had no trouble loading the horse and the trip back had been a quiet ride. Both, Tara and Doug knew that it would take about another hour and a half to get the horse settled in after they got back to the barn. They resigned themselves to the fact that it would be a long night. And now here they were finishing up.



Doug looked at his watch.



“Well Mac….it’s only 1:30 in the morning…what do ya say we go ahead and muck out the stalls?"



Tara tried to laugh at Doug’s attempt at humor but she was just too tired.



“Doug….why don’t you head out. I just need to lock up everything upstairs then I’m outta here.”



“Are you sure?”



“Yeah…get going…I’ll see ya tomorrow…how bout around noonish…”



Doug nodded his head. It would feel good to sleep in.



“You got it Mac….be careful…”



“You too Dougie…”





Tara watched Doug leave then turned her attention back to the expecting horse.



“Well…you are a beauty…what are we gonna call you?”



Tara stepped into the stall and ran her hands down the side of the horse. She could easily feel her ribs and the little one inside moving about.



“Won’t be long….”



The horse stepped closer to the blonde and laid its head over Tara’s shoulder. It was such an act of trust from the horse and Tara felt as if she was getting a big horsie hug.



“I know baby…but don’t you worry…you’re gonna be all right….both of you…I promise.”







Willow stood in the kitchen making a cup of hot chocolate. The air felt really crisp to the red head and some hot chocolatey goodness sounded like the perfect fix for her chills.



Willow thoughts drifted to Tara who was still in the barn. She couldn’t help but wonder if Tara might like some hot chocolate as well.



Well….she is working…and it’s late…I shouldn’t bother her…but…it would be a nice thing to do…and it is cold out…she has had a long day…



Willow continued to talk herself into going out to the barn.



Maybe I should just step out there and ask her…especially before she leaves…



Willow grabbed a jacket and stepped out in to the cold night air. She walked toward the barn, with Dusty following close beside her. She noticed that the windows on Tara’s truck were covered in a heavy frost and wondered if that meant snow was on the way.



She felt a little excitement at actually seeing a lot of snow. Maybe it will stay for a while…





Tara heard the barn door open and turned to see Willow walking in.



“Hi…you’re up late…”



Willow smiled as she eyed the blonde teasingly.



“Hi yourself…and you should talk…”



Willow stood with her back against the door. Even with Tara close by, she still felt nervous around the horses. She put her hands in her jacket pockets and watched as Tara stepped out of the stall.



“Well…we had an extra special gal we had to go get…didn’t we…”



Tara scratched the chestnut horse on the nose and drifted in to baby talk. Willow just smiled as she took in the scene. She wanted to fill her life with moments just like this. Tara was so graceful…so beautiful…and…



“You look tired.”



Tara looked over and nodded her head.



“I’m very tired…I think I could ball up in a pile of hay and go sound to sleep.”



Willow ventured a little further into the barn.



“Well…how bout a nice cup of hot chocolate and a warm bed instead?”



Tara’s eyes went wide at the invitation and Willow thought of how cheesy she must have sounded.



“I meant….you’re welcome to stay here tonight…it’s late…it’s cold….I’ll sleep on the couch…”



Oh you’ve done it now you smooth talker you…



“Actually…that sounds nice…as long as you throw in a hot shower and maybe an extra set of pj’s to sleep in.”



“One hot shower coming up and I’m sure I’ve got something for you to sleep in…”



My arms for example…



Tara nodded and felt a wave of relief wash over her. She had contemplated sleeping in the business office but Willow’s offer was just to good to pass up.



I’m spending the night with Willow….maybe we can cuddle….





“Okay then…I’ll just go fix up some hot chocolate and get you some clothes…”



“Willow…wait…”



Blue met green and Willow stood frozen in place.



“Yeah…”



“Come here….”



Willow swallowed hard. Here…meant over there…where the horses were. Tara could see fear in her eyes.



“It’s okay…I promise.”



Willow slowly made her way over to the stall where Tara was standing. The chestnut horse walked up to the gate and got a good sniff of the red head. The horse just stood there staring at fearful green eyes.



“You can pet her if you want…she’s very gentle natured…and she is expecting…”



Willow looked at the blonde.



“She’s expecting me to pet her?”



Tara let out a small giggle.



“No…she’s expecting a baby…she’s pregnant. Though it’s hard to tell since she’s so malnourished.”



Willow wanted to pet the horse. She wanted to show Tara that she could overcome her fear but her arms wouldn’t move. Finally, Tara reached out for Willow.



“Here give me your hand…put it on top of mine…”



Willow placed her hand on top of the blondes and gave a weak smile. Tara reached out and scratched the horses’ nose. Willow could feel the soft fur and thought it tickled.



“See…that’s not so bad is it?”



The red head smiled as Tara’s hand slipped out from beneath hers. I’m petting a horse…a real horse….and it’s not biting me….



It was a small step but it felt like a major hurdle to the red head.



“Not bad at all…”



Tara smiled as she watched the horse and Willow interact. She felt another piece of her heart get lost to the red head.



“So…I think you were saying something about chocolate….hot showers and warm beds?”



Willow nodded her head and motioned for the door.



“After you…”





The two girls entered the house and instantly felt the warmth of the room envelope them. The fireplace was crackling and the lights were low. And as beautiful and romantic as the moment could have been, Tara felt the exhaustion of the day taking over her body.



She fell down on the couch and closed her eyes. She just needed to rest them for a second. She heard Willow in the kitchen and thought it felt wonderful and strange to not be alone this late at night.



Willow poured the hot chocolate and gathered up the two cups and made her way back into the living room.



“Here ya go….one hot chocolate for the lady…”



Willow sat the cup down and couldn’t help but smile at the sight that greeted her. Tara had kicked off her shoes and curled up on the couch under Willow’s jacket and was fast asleep.



The red head went upstairs and brought down two extra blankets and pillows. She tucked the blonde in and sat on the floor in front of the couch. The crackling of the fire filled the room as Willow softly ran her fingers through Tara’s hair. She caressed her face and committed to memory every dip and curve of the blonde’s features.



She leaned forward and planted a soft kiss on Tara’s forehead. Everything about the moment was perfect. Willow pulled her shoes off and lay down in front of the fire. She opted to sleep on the floor because that would keep her closer to the blonde and Tara would be the last thing she saw before drifting off to sleep.



Willow pulled her blanket up close around her and watched Tara sleep as long as she could. After she closed her eyes, visions of the blonde danced in her head and Willow happily drifted off to sleep. She couldn’t wait to wake up again…





Tbc…







I promise smoochies and snuggles are on the way...





WillowFever
 


whoohoo!

Postby ApplesauceHorsies » Tue Apr 06, 2004 3:01 pm

I come back from an excruciatingly dull astronomy laboratory, and I have this waiting to greet me. Oh, I am such a lucky Kitten. :) You know, hot chocolate is one of my 'methods'. LOL. It has a good track record; yay for Willow! And awwww, I'm a sucker for expectant mares. :) Yay for update-y goodness!



-AH

Et je saigne encore, tout ce rouge sur mon corps, je te blesse dans un dernier effort

ApplesauceHorsies
 


re: Part 12

Postby BFR from Paris » Tue Apr 06, 2004 4:06 pm

Awww so cute :)

BFR from Paris
 


Re: Part 11

Postby TemperedCynic » Tue Apr 06, 2004 4:43 pm

Don't rush the smoochy goodness! Romance for our girls is too important. Let them burn for each other a while. When they do come together, that bonfire will have some stiff competition! Wonderful, Rachel - keep going!


More than any other time in history, mankind faces a crossroads. One path leads to despair and utter hopelessness. The other, to total extinction. Let us pray we have the wisdom to choose correctly. Woody Allen (1935 - )

TemperedCynic
 


Re: part 11

Postby ophelia11 » Tue Apr 06, 2004 5:38 pm

This just gets better and better. I'm really enjoying your slow pace and the sweet interaction between Tara and Willow.



Of course it also makes me want to run out and snuggle with someone. LOL. Keep up the great work. Can't wait for more!

ophelia11
 


Re: part 11

Postby Mikaelah Braenna » Tue Apr 06, 2004 6:50 pm

Willow finally taking the steps to get over her fear to be closer to Tara ... how sweet...:heart



Looking forward to the next update...

Is it time yet?! :flirt



~Mikaelah



Willow: "Where would you go? If you felt lost and alone? ..."

Tara: "To You..."


~~Truly and Forever~~

Mikaelah Braenna
 


Re: part 11

Postby Footman311 » Tue Apr 06, 2004 7:15 pm

This fic just keeps getting better and better and I love it:applause :applause :applause



Love the interaction between W/T and hope for some serious smoochies soon:banana



Hoping for another update soonish???:bounce :bounce

Lifes a bowl of punch G'head and spike it-Nick Hexum

Footman311
 


Re: part 11

Postby wimpy0729 » Tue Apr 06, 2004 7:28 pm

Hey WF! How are you?



This is just adorable. Just picturing Tara comforting the new mom-to-be with Willow watching, who wouldn't just melt at the sight.



I love the girls thoughts. Willow's "in my arms" is so cute!



And Tara falling asleep curled up under Willow's jacket, Willow staying close, just the sweetest thing!



I'll have to give you a major "Aww" factor for this one. Just loved it.



Can't wait for more!



Wimpy



Quote:
You should ride with me sometime. I guarantee safety and fun! (Tara)


Edited by: wimpy0729 at: 4/7/04 2:04 am
wimpy0729
 


Re: part 11

Postby shuyaku » Tue Apr 06, 2004 7:41 pm

That was so sweet. You write them very well and it is so easy to picture everything that is happening. I need an update soon - I'm all off schedule now :glasses



-shuyaku

Oh God, Willow—you’re giving me the gift of Karen Carpenter. Just when I think I grasp the full extent of your love." - Tara

"Why do birds suddenly appear? It’s because, you are queer…" - Willow (Gods Served and Abandoned by AntigoneUnbound)

shuyaku
 


Re: Part 11

Postby singgirl » Tue Apr 06, 2004 8:04 pm

hey, I really like this fic, I think AU fics are fun anyway, but I really like this one, it's sweet. I also like that you update often! ;)

:peace Pax! -Bev

singgirl
 


Re: Part 11

Postby Stroke of Luck » Wed Apr 07, 2004 10:27 am

WOW a miracle, Willow touched that horse:party And when comes the next part of "getting used to horsies"? hehe cant wait for that...and the part with Tara falling asleep on her couch was just too damn cute. Hmm i hope Willow wont have a stiff neck in the morning, and maybe there will be some snuggles too:D



Great update, i cant wait to :read the next one



Cu:wave

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Even in death Baby, i´ll never leave u!

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Re: Part 11

Postby littlecrazy80 » Wed Apr 07, 2004 12:03 pm

Cute update! :heart

And Willow is finally overcoming her horsefear. :bounce Can´t wait for the smoochies.



*lil´c*

"Okay, we’re here, we’re queer, let’s kick this shit into gear," Five by Five (Taras Shadow)



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Re: Part 11

Postby Grimlock72 » Wed Apr 07, 2004 4:01 pm

So sweet, almost cuddling before the fireplace... nice and warm too :) Hardly surprising Tara fell asleep when she lied down in a warm home, coming from the cold.



Speaking of which, are those stalls heated?? I suppose they are somewhat 'cos otherwise the horsies would be very cold. Still it's probably colder then your average home with a bonfire :)



Grimmy

--
"You hurt Tara," Willow said too calmly. "The last one who tried that was a god. I made her regret it." -- Unexpected Consequences by Lisa of Nine

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Re: Part 12

Postby sam7777 » Wed Apr 07, 2004 6:14 pm

I love the way you have set this up. I'm also learning a bit about horse rescue. It's shocking what happens to the horses. The interaction between Willow/Tara is cute sex and utterly believable. It seems that Tara is the less experienced of the two so it's fun to see Willow take the lead. Great AU!

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Re: Part 12

Postby shuyaku » Thu Apr 08, 2004 4:45 pm

Um... I'm all kinds of discombubulated :D I hope everything is okay in RL. I just love this fic and since I'm totally addicted, I wanted to be proactive before I went into withdrawals ;) So this is just a little nudge for an update. Not even a nudge really. More like a half a nudge. A nu even...



-shuyaku

Oh God, Willow—you’re giving me the gift of Karen Carpenter. Just when I think I grasp the full extent of your love." - Tara

"Why do birds suddenly appear? It’s because, you are queer…" - Willow (Gods Served and Abandoned by AntigoneUnbound)

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