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Re: part four

Postby Grimlock72 » Thu Nov 28, 2002 5:36 am

Strange....



Buffy told Willow to move out didn't she ? The rest of the gang knows this, right ? Whats with all the panic then when she actually HAS moved out ?



Grimmy scratches head Scoobies are strange at times, they ought to make up their mind. Bit late for that in this case though, should have realized the consequences sooner. Ah well, eventually they might learn.



What did Willow write in those letters anyway ?



Grimmy

"You hurt Tara," Willow said too calmly. "The last one who tried that was a god. I made her regret it." -- Unexpected Consequences by Lisa of Nine

Grimlock72
 


update soon?

Postby SilverWingedNemesis » Thu Nov 28, 2002 7:29 am

Hey. I'm really getting into this fic!!



As for Buffy..Suck it up! LOL she told Will to get out..and she did. *pouts* Where'd she go?? *sniffle* I need W/T goodness.. :)



please update sooN! :pray



Thanks~~ keep up the good work!



~NICKOLE~

SilverWingedNemesis
 


Re: update soon?

Postby willntlover » Thu Nov 28, 2002 10:35 am

Please say that in the next update there's Willow! So sad, but so good!



-Will

"Hear that baby? You're my always."



willntlover
 


Re: update soon?

Postby snuggle79 » Thu Nov 28, 2002 11:47 am

:hmm ....I guess the gang has a lot to read now.

Great update!

I can't wait for more :)

snuggle79 :wave

__________________

"I got so lost"

"I found you, i will always find you"





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Re: update soon?

Postby WillowPowered » Tue Dec 03, 2002 3:48 am

Hi everyone,



Thanks again for the feedback. I think it is really cool that my little humble story is making you curious as to what will happen next!!



I just wanted to let you all know that I am working on the next part but it may be up to a week before I get a chance to finish it. Work is really kicking my butt at the moment and I am trying to spend some time with my girl (as well as read all the other great fics here).



Promise to try and get it done sooooooon.



Again, thanks for reading and for the feedback.



Jill

~~~~~~~~

Willow - Say, you all didn't happen to do a bunch of drugs did ya?

Willow - I'm a blood sucking fiend, look at my outfit . . . .

WillowPowered
 


Re: update soon?

Postby RalSt31 » Tue Dec 03, 2002 3:39 pm

Real interesting story. The present tense threw me for a little while but now I'm just anxious to find out what she wrote in those letters and what will happen in San Francisco :D



RalSt

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Re: update soon?

Postby WillowPowered » Sun Dec 15, 2002 1:21 am

Ok here is the next part - I am so sorry for taking so long to get it posted but that annoying little thing called life keeps getting in my way, distracting me from my writing.



Thanks to everyone for your continued support and feedback, Hope you enjoy.



Jill





Title: Expensive at Half the Price – Part Five.

Author: Jill (A.K.A. – WillowPowered).

Email Address: willow_powered@yahoo.com.au

Distribution: If by some miracle you want to pass this on please ask me before doing so. Just drop me an email at the above addy.

Rating: I have given this an R rating based on the fact that there is probably going to be some violence later on and some Willow and Tara goodness (coughcoughsexcoughcough).

Disclaimer: Willow, Tara and any other characters that appear in Buffy the Vampire Slayer are the property of Mr Joss and Mutant Enemy etc. etc. etc. No breach of copyright is intended by me, I am just a fan expressing my ummm fan-ness.

Feedback: Are you kidding, bring it on whether it’s good or bad. If bad please try and be constructive though, don’t just put it sucks ;-)

Comments: This starts during Season 6, a few weeks after Willow has hurt Dawn in the car accident while driving under the influence!!

Note: I don’t really have any set plot for this yet. I’m kinda just going to see what pops out of my head and hope it all comes together and makes sense. Hope you enjoy.



Characters thoughts are in Italics.



~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~



Standing in the living room Xander, Anya, Tara and Dawn look towards the stairs as they hear rapid footsteps coming down them. Buffy stops just short of where the others are standing, “she isn’t up there, she’s gone.” They all stand in stunned silence for what seems an eternity.



After several minutes Tara sits down heavily on the couch holding her head in her hands, trying desperately to catch her breath and fight back tears. This is so wrong, it feels just so wrong “oh god no Will, please no.” Dawn sits down next to her and puts a comforting hand on her shoulder. “It’s ok Tara, I bet she just moved out early, she won’t have gone far.”



Buffy starts to pace as her thoughts leave her lips, “I know I told her to leave but why would she leave and not tell us? Why would she go in the middle of the night? You know Will, she’s big on the tell someone where you are going before you leave the house thing. She is the official Scooby safety girl.” Looking around at her friends Buffy can’t stop the panic rising from the pit of her stomach. Finally her gaze falls on Xander as he begins to turn even paler than he was when she first came down the stairs.



Xander waves the two letters around and looks at Buffy, “we found these on the coffee table, one is addressed to Tara and the other one is addressed to the rest of us.” His voice breaks as he finishes, “they’re from Will.”



Buffy takes the letters from Xander and sits on the couch on the other side of Tara. The others move to sit either on the floor or on chairs. Tara looks up as Buffy holds out the letter addressed to her. She takes the envelope but doesn’t open it. Oh god Will no, please, please don’t leave me. Don’t leave me here alone.



Turning the other envelope over in her hands Buffy hesitates before finally ripping it open. She swallows hard before starting to read out loud.





To my family,



Well by now you have figured out that I have left. I know writing a letter is a pretty lame way of saying goodbye but if I had to see you all in person to do it I wouldn’t be able to go through with it



Without even realising it I have turned into someone or should I say something that I don’t recognise. I know you all want to help me get back some semblance of who I used to be but it is something that I need to do by myself, you can’t do it for me.



I’m not leaving because I hate you guys, I love you all dearly and I know you all love me. I am leaving because I just can’t handle being here where everything I see and touch reminds me of what I have done. I guess it is karma that the place I feel the most loved is also the place that I feel the most dangerous both to myself and to all of you. Unfortunately I had to hurt Dawn to realise that.



I don’t know where I am going yet but I guess I will know where I am meant to be when I get there. Whether or not I will come back I can’t say, it will depend on whether or not I can slay my demons and be Willow again.



There is one thing I ask of you all and that is for you to take care of Tara. She is the best thing that ever happened to me and I love her with all that I am. The only way that I can bring myself to leave is the knowledge that you will all take care of her and that she will be loved and protected.



Please don’t hate me for leaving, I hope one day you can all understand that it is for the best for everyone.



Love,



Will





Having held her tears back while reading the letter Buffy struggles to hold them in once she is finished. Oh Will you didn’t have to leave. This is my fault, I made you go. I made you feel that you have to get away from here. What am I going to do without you here? Looking around at her friends, Buffy’s gaze falls to Tara who is silently crying on the couch next to her. What is Tara going to do without you here?



As each of the five friends find a release through their tears Tara clutches her letter from Willow to her chest. She is afraid to open it in case she finds blame in its words. At the same time she is desperate to open it, to read what Willow has written, to imagine in her head the sound of her lovers voice as she says those words. I can’t stay here I need to be somewhere else. I need to be with Will, where I can get lost in her warmth, in her essence.



Before anyone else can move Tara stands and makes her way to the stairs. The others guess her intention. Dawn tries to say something, to make Tara come back and sit next to her so that she can hold the older girl and tell her it will be all right. But she is stopped by Buffys hand on her shoulder. “Just let her be for a minute. She just needs a minute, we all need just a minute.”



* * * *



Trying to sound enthusiastic and failing miserable the hotel clerk rattles off the features of the hotel, “and we have room service which operates twenty four hours a day in case you get hungry in the middle of the night.”



Having lost interest within thirty seconds of the clerk opening his mouth Willow smiles politely, “all that sounds great but I would really love to just you know go to my room and relax for a bit . .” and escape your company “. . it’s been a terribly long night and err day and I could use a little sleep.”



The clerk stops mid sentence and actually looks relieved, “oh that is no problem, you are in room 411, do you need help with your luggage?”



“Um no thanks I have one of those little trolley thingies so I’ll be fine.” That’s if I can figure out how to drive this thing.



As soon as Willow had arrived in San Francisco she had found the nearest hotel and booked in. When the clerk had asked her how long she was planning to stay, after a long silence she had said a week. A week should be long enough for me to get my bearings around here and decided what I am going to do next. The hotel wasn’t that expensive so her savings would well and truly cover it with plenty left over.



* * * *



Tara closes the door behind her and surveys what was once the bedroom she shared with Willow. It is not only filled with clothes, shoes and other belongings of her lovers, it is also filled with the smell and warmth of her. Briefly Tara closes her eyes and lets her other senses be bombarded with the thing she holds dearest, Willow.



Slowly Tara moves to the bed and lays down, gently moving the items that are sitting on it to one side. For a moment she is lost in her thoughts, thinking of all the times they had spent in the house and more specifically in this room.



Absently Tara picks up the closest thing to her, which happened to be one of Willows pyjama tops. Holding it to her face she feels the texture of the material and breaths in deeply, filling her lungs with Willows scent. She can’t help but smile as she remembers that last time she saw Willow wearing it.



They had been studying together downstairs when they had both been suddenly consumed with an urgent need to be together, to feel the others skin against their own. Leaving a bemused Dawn behind they had bolted up the stairs, slamming their bedroom door as soon as they had entered the room. What followed was a night filled with love mixed with pure lust and desire.



It had often been that way. They would be doing normal everyday things when they would both be consumed with the need to touch each other, to express their love in the most physical way they could. On this occasion their desire was so heated that Tara had ripped the pyjama top off Willow sending several buttons flying.



Thudding back to earth with the thought that she may never see, let alone touch her lover again Tara stares at the envelope with her name on it. Slowly she turns the envelope over and opens it, removing the letter while her heart seems to be beating a million miles an hour.





My Tara,



This is the most painful thing I have ever had to do in my life, say goodbye to you. Tare you are my love, my always and yet I know that I do not deserve to be the same to you. While you have brought me great happiness all I have done to you is bring you pain and sadness, for that I deserve to suffer.



Looking back with a newfound clarity I can see that you tried, tried to save me from myself and I didn’t see. I was too busy being Willow the wonder Witch to even notice that I was destroying everything because of the fact I was wrapped up in my own importance and power.



Unfortunately I had to hurt those that I love more than anything else in the world before I realised.



I don’t want to go. In some ways leaving seems to be the cowards way out but I know that if I am to become Willow again I have to do it on my own. Plus my desire to stay is far outweighed by my fear of physically hurting someone, especially you.



I desperately want to come back to you, but I can only do that if I have myself back, please try to understand that. Please don’t be mad or hate me. That I couldn’t stand.



No matter where I am I will always be thinking of you, remembering everything about you and us. The way you smell and taste, the way it feels to make love with you and the joy of waking up in your arms. I ask you to remember all the good things and try not to think too much about the bad.



Love always,



Will





Tara folds the letter and puts it back in the envelope, her tears falling unchecked. Laying back on the bed she grabs one of the pillows and hugs it close to her body breathing in Willow with every breath. Slowly her tears diminish until she is no longer crying, she knows. I know you are going to be fine baby, I don’t know how, but I know it. One day you will come back to me and I will wait for as long as it takes.



* * * *

~~~~~~~~

Willow - Say, you all didn't happen to do a bunch of drugs did ya?

Willow - I'm a blood sucking fiend, look at my outfit . . . .

WillowPowered
 


Re: update soon?

Postby willntlover » Sun Dec 15, 2002 3:25 am

:grin :grin :grin



Update!!!!!



:thud Poor Tara! At least she does have the Scoobs to help with her sadness. Willow unfortunately is on her own. Thanks for putting abit about her in :)



-Will



I forgot about Buffy. Dude, there is the Buffy I love! Worried about her friends.

"Hear that baby? You're my always."



willntlover
 


Re: update soon?

Postby deixs » Sun Dec 15, 2002 5:49 am

:bounce :bounce :bounce :bounce :bounce :bounce

Update!!!

:cry I was cyring reading those letters!!!



Stef :p

deixs
 


Re: update soon?

Postby Grimlock72 » Sun Dec 15, 2002 7:09 am



aaaww.... Tara being afraid of being blamed in the letter. The letter to Tara was definitly needed, poor girl blaming herself. Willow sells herself short when saying she only caused bad things though.



Seems Buffy finally realises Willow actually left, didn't think very far ahead did she ? :) I'm wondering how they'll deal with evil Sunnydale without Willow around. I hope Tara wont be put in danger :( .



Hopefully the scoobies are smart enough to actually let Willow fix herself and wont go after her. Being away from the hellmouth in and of itself will be good for Willow for starters. She can't stay in hotels for long of course, bit expensive. She might need to get a job and a nice rental-appartment. At least there's no Angel in SF, heh... good thing that :D .



Good luck with 'Life', try to keep it from intruding too much :)



Grimmy

"You hurt Tara," Willow said too calmly. "The last one who tried that was a god. I made her regret it." -- Unexpected Consequences by Lisa of Nine

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Re: update soon?

Postby snuggle79 » Sun Dec 15, 2002 8:30 am

awww... :cry :cry :cry

this is so sad. :(



__________________

"I got so lost"

"I found you, i will always find you"





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Re: update soon?

Postby SilverWingedNemesis » Sun Dec 15, 2002 8:47 am

OH GOD!



:cry



That was SOO sad...but you wrote it SOO good!! :paranoid



I am SOO loving this fic! I just can't wait for an update!! MORE MORE MORE!! *GRINS* Sorry, Impatient Gal, here...





KEEP up the GREAT work!! :bounce :bounce :clap :clap



*sits and tries to wait patiently for an update*



~NICKOLE~

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:tara :love :willow

SilverWingedNemesis
 


Re: Fan Fic - Expensive at Half the Price

Postby Cindy Lou Who » Tue Dec 17, 2002 8:29 pm

I'm trying to decide whether to be a little mad at you for making me cry or shower you with endless praise for the exquisite writing in this fic - the last part in particular.



I opt for the latter of the two above. In fact I kinda like that you made me cry...because I count on you to make it all better eventually...right? Please tell me I'm right. :pray



Soooo gooood! TY~~~suse

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Re: Fan Fic - Expensive at Half the Price

Postby WillowPowered » Thu Dec 19, 2002 9:12 am

Oh wow I made people cry (grins happily)!! Actually I feel sorry that I made anyone cry but at the same time I am glad cause it means that what I wrote was half decent.



Again thank you to everyone for the amazing feedback, you have been wonderful - really boosting my confidence over here.



Thought I would post this next bit even though it is kinda small. It isn't exactly how I wanted it to turn out but I'm putting it up anyway because I can't quite put my finger on why I'm not satisfied with it (shrugs). I'll put it down to the fact that I also have a couple of new ideas for some Willow/Tara fictiony goodness.



Anyway, hope you enjoy and please let me know what you think.



Jill





Title: Expensive at Half the Price – Part 6.

Author: Jill (A.K.A. – WillowPowered).

Email Address: willow_powered@yahoo.com.au

Distribution: If by some miracle you want to pass this on please ask me before doing so. Just drop me an email at the above addy.

Rating: R - Even though most of it is pretty tame there will probably be some violence and some Willow and Tara goodness (coughcoughsexcoughcough).

Disclaimer: Willow, Tara and any other characters that appear in Buffy the Vampire Slayer are the property of Mr Joss and Mutant Enemy etc. etc. etc. No breach of copyright is intended by me, I am just a fan expressing my ummm fan-ness.

Feedback: Are you kidding, bring it on whether it’s good or bad.

Comments: This starts during Season 6, a few weeks after Willow has hurt Dawn in the car accident while driving under the influence!!

Note: Plot, what plot?? I have kind of figured out where this is going to go. It may take me a while to get there but please be patient with me and I will try to make it a good story. Hope you enjoy.



Characters thoughts are in Italics.



~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~



Willow has a look of complete shock on her face. Holy cow this place is huge. As she looks at the piece of paper and then at the house number her jaw drops open. Yep this is the right place and boy is it huge. There must be at least twenty bedrooms. Well ok, maybe not twenty but there must be lots of them. After several minutes of looking at what is the biggest house Willow has ever seen she finally manages to convince her feet to move. Slowly she makes her way up the stairs to the front porch.



Having rang the doorbell Willow patiently waits, having finally managing to close her mouth and get over the shock. Suddenly the door swings open revealing an attractive blonde woman several years older than herself. “Hello, can I help you?”



Willow tries several times to speak before she finally manages to reply with her voice barely above a whisper, “hi, my name is Willow. Rupert Giles suggested I look you up.” Well done Will, you might as well hold up a sign that says dork alert on it.



A look of recognition flashes across the woman’s face and before Willow can make another attempt at introducing herself she stands aside and motions for Willow to enter the house. “Hi Willow, my name is Samantha but you can call me Sam if you like.”



Glancing at the piece of paper again Willow looks up at Sam who is smiling at her. Oh she is waiting for me to say something, DUH. “Err hi, hello again. Is Jade here cause Giles said she was the person to see.” That’s it Will, impress her with your verbal skills.



“She sure is sweetie. Why don’t you follow me into the living room and I’ll go and grab her for you.”



Sam moves off in the direction of the living room without waiting for a reply. Willow gently closes the door and follows close behind. As she makes her way through the house Willow is suddenly aware of a feeling of great power. This place is kinda creepy. Big and creepy. Do you feel that power? It seems to be flowing through the house. Ok now who the hell are you talking to Will? Get a grip girl before this woman calls the men in white coats.



As they enter the living room Willows thoughts move to the blonde woman in front of her. You know from behind Sam reminds me of Tara. Yeah right Will, you miss her so much you thought the doorman at the hotel reminded you of her and he’s six foot tall with a pot belly..



Her thoughts are interrupted as Sam speaks, “make yourself at home sweetie, I’ll just go and get Jade for you.”



See Sam called you sweetie, just like Tara does. And they have similar builds too. I mean no one has curves like Tara, especially her delicious hips and the way her butt . . Willow is pulled from her thoughts by approaching footsteps. Get a grip Rosenberg. Focus, you need to focus.



Sam re enters the living room followed by a brunette who Willow assumes to be Jade. The woman smiles broadly trying to make her visitor fell more at ease. “Hi Willow, I’m Jade, nice to meet you.” As Willow greets Jade in return she is again filled with a sense of great power filling the house. Making eye contact with Jade her stomach does a somersault. It’s not the house it’s her. Oh my god, breath Willow don’t forget to breath.



Sam and Jade share a quick glance as a look of panic spreads across the face of the redhead. Jade quickly covers the distance between herself and Willow, gently pushing their visitor back until she gratefully sinks down on the couch. “It’s ok Willow the feeling will pass, just try to relax and don’t forget to breathe.” The poor girl, it looks like her head is about to explode.



Kneeling in front of Willow, Jade continues, “Giles called me a couple of days ago and explained everything. I think I know why you are here and if you let us we will help you in anyway that we can. Ok?”



Willow simply nods while desperately trying to catch her breath before she crosses the line between breathlessness and hyperventilating.



* * * *



It has been a week since Willow left and the Scoobys have been doing it tough. Luckily for them they have spent the greater part of the week fighting the latest big bad who actually turned out to be more of a big sad.



The gang are at the Summers residence relaxing with some movies and take out. On the day that they had discovered that Willow had left they had all had a long discussion on what to do. Buffy and Xander had been all for tracking Willow down and bringing her home. In the end Tara had been the one who made them see sense.



She had told them that even if they knew where to start looking, bringing Willow home against her will would only make matters worse. So in the end they had all decided that they would let Willow do what she felt she needed and for them to carry on with their own lives until she came home.



While each of them missed Willow terribly they all agreed that she would return when she was ready. At first Xander, Buffy, Dawn and even Anya weren’t too confident they would see their friend again but Tara’s confidence that Willow would come home rubbed off on them.



Out of everyone surprisingly it is Tara who has coped the best, or so it appears to the others. Since that first day none of them have seen her cry. Sure she has been sad but she also has an incredibly optimistic outlook on the whole thing. Tara had even been the one to call Giles and tell him the news. At first she was thrown by the fact that Giles already knew to which he explained that he had spoken to Willow just prior to her leaving. Needless to say when Tara filled her friends in on the details later on Buffy had been about to call Giles back and give him a piece of her mind.



It had taken Tara a good ten minutes to explain to Buffy that this would do no good and that Giles had just been complying with Willows wishes that he not say anything until she had had enough time to leave town.



As the friends sit in the living room watching the first movie the girls are mentally kicking themselves for letting Xander pick which one they would watch first. Watching Star Wars again was not high on any of their lists of things to do before they turned thirty. Xanders incredibly bad imitations of Darth Vader were also wearing a little thin.



Not quite halfway through the movie Buffy has had enough, silently motioning to Tara for her to follow as she stands. As Tara enters the kitchen she sees Buffy pouring them both a drink. Handing the orange juice to Tara Buffy quickly appraises her friend before speaking. “Are you doing ok?” The two women look at each other before Tara finally answers, “to be honest I’m a mess.” Smiling weakly at Buffy she continues, “not having her here, not being with her is all kinds of bad.” Wow way to use those verbal skills Tara. For my next trick, talking and breathing at the same time. “I mean I’m sure that she will come back when she is ready but I want her here now, not in a month, or a year. I want to see her now, to hold her and share her life.”



Buffy listens to Tara, nodding in silent agreement, feeling her own pain for her best friends absence burn brightly in her heart. Putting down her drink the slayer quickly moves forward and hugs Tara to her. “Tara, Dawn and I have been talking and we want you to move back in.” Seeing that her friend is about to reply Buffy continues to speak, cutting Tara off, “we both miss you and want you here so we can all look out for each other.” Ok Summers that sounded like the most lame excuse for getting her to move back in that I have ever heard, way to go.



Tara is lost in thought for a moment, thinking of how much the sisters have come to mean to her since they first met. One thing about the Scooby’s, once you are friends you are friends for life. Leaning in to hug Buffy tight Tara answers, “I would love to move back in. Being in our room again will be kind of weird without Will but being near you guys would be good for me.”



The girls finally break their embrace, smiling at one another. Buffy reaches for her drink as a serious look appears on her face. Turning towards Tara Buffy grabs her by the hand, pulling her towards the living room, “come on Tara we had better get back or Dawn will send out a search party for us. And if Xander doesn’t stop with the stupid Darth Vader impressions I am going to have to kick is ass from here ‘til next week.”



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Willow - Say, you all didn't happen to do a bunch of drugs did ya?

Willow - I'm a blood sucking fiend, look at my outfit . . . .

WillowPowered
 


Re: Fan Fic - Expensive at Half the Price

Postby deixs » Thu Dec 19, 2002 9:57 am

Update!!!:bounce :bounce :bounce

Yeah, Willow should come back when she thinks she is ready for it. She better be ready soon!!!!



Stef :p

deixs
 


Re: Fan Fic - Expensive at Half the Price

Postby funkyasian » Thu Dec 19, 2002 10:17 am

i'd just like to give my share of the compliments for this fic...i actually had tears in my eyes when they read willow's letters...great work, can't wait for more.



~steph

Nothing can cure the soul but the senses, just as nothing can cure the senses but the soul. ~ Oscar Wilde

funkyasian
 


Re: Fan Fic - Expensive at Half the Price

Postby Grimlock72 » Thu Dec 19, 2002 12:47 pm

Well it seems Willow is at least in capable hands. Way better then staying over at the Summers' house, that wouldn't help her much. I do wonder exactly why Buffy wants Tara to move back in, for Tara or for herself and Dawn ? (she did scold herself for the reasons she told Tara after all).



Buffy and Xander are kinda stupid aren't they ? First Buffy tells Willow to move out and now she wants to go find her and take her back ? Make up your mind before opening your mouth next time, sheeeeesh.



I can so picture Willow being all small in front of the big house :D



Grimmy

"You hurt Tara," Willow said too calmly. "The last one who tried that was a god. I made her regret it." -- Unexpected Consequences by Lisa of Nine

Edited by: Grimlock72 at: 12/20/02 12:34:52 pm
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Re: Fan Fic - Expensive at Half the Price

Postby Cindy Lou Who » Thu Dec 19, 2002 6:14 pm

Jill:



Wow and holy cow! You've got my emotions all over the board now. From the tears of the "letters" chapter :cry to the grins big and small of this last installment. :laugh I especially liked the:
Quote:
You know from behind Sam reminds me of Tara. Yeah right Will, you miss her so much you thought the doorman at the hotel reminded you of her and he’s six foot tall with a pot belly.


and:

Quote:
Luckily for them they have spent the greater part of the week fighting the latest big bad who actually turned out to be more of a big sad.
Oh and of course Xander's impressions of Vader...perish the thought!



I agree with the ever-perceptive Grimlock - it seems like Willow might have found a safe place in which to heal.



A thought on why Buffy might want Tara back in the house: Not only would it be good for both her and Dawnie but Willow's letter DID ask that the Scoobies look out for and take care of Tara. What better way for the Buffster to do that than with Ms. Maclay under the same roof.



Not sure about your misgivings...I so no flaws in the last update. The humor offset the intrigue of Willow's new surroundings quite nicely IMO. And like any good novel it alternates the heart or gut wrenching with strong exposition.



Thanks for the update and the fic~~~Suse

Edited by: Cindy Lou Who at: 12/19/02 4:24:20 pm
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Re: Fan Fic - Expensive at Half the Price

Postby SilverWingedNemesis » Thu Dec 19, 2002 7:50 pm



*GRINS*



That was great!! *SIGHS* awwww poor Tara....



>>AND poor Will..she has to be frightened to be alone and in a house with a woman who apparently has "all kinds of power"



I loved how tara said that.. "all kinds of bad" hehe.. sounds like me! LOL



I am SOO loving this! I can't wait for the next update!!



Keep up the great work!!



~NICKOLE~

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"She practically had 'genuine molded plastic' stamped on her ass!"-Tara I was made to love you

SilverWingedNemesis
 


Re: Fan Fic - Expensive at Half the Price

Postby WiccansIllusion » Thu Dec 19, 2002 10:41 pm

This fic is actually quiet good, but I might recommend a beta reader, they can be lifesavers :)

Tara nodded in agreement "She has magic fingers." TheWisdom of War, Chris Golden



You dont really think this is like, Psycho Buffy Cheer Squad central, do you?-Xita ala Julia "Lessons Parody"



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Re: Fan Fic - Expensive at Half the Price

Postby AWillowAndTaraFan4Ever » Sun Dec 22, 2002 8:22 pm

oh man, I can't stop crying!!!!! :cry poor will, she's all alone, and tara's trying to be strong even though we know she's totally heartbroken. *sniff*



update soon though!

"In my world, there are people in chains and we can ride them like ponies"- Vampire Willow



"Hear that baby? You're my always"-Willow to Tara

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Re: Fan Fic - Expensive at Half the Price

Postby WillowPowered » Thu Dec 26, 2002 3:53 pm

Ok, first another big thank you as always for all the feedback and to everyone who bothers to read my fic.



Hope everyone had a happy and safe Christmas and that the New Year brings you all continued happiness and good health.



Today is my birthday (turned the big 30 today - funny how I still feel like I did when I turned 20) so I thought I would get off my butt and post the next part of my fic.



With this next part I could have gone in a few different directions but in the end I think it turned out pretty good the way it is. I have kind of settled on what is going to happen later on in the story so I have cut alot of what I had written out in order to get to the main plot sooner.



I hope you enjoy and that you aren't dissappointed that I haven't explored certain points a little further.



Jill







Title: Expensive at Half the Price – Part Seven.

Author: Jill (A.K.A. – WillowPowered).

Email Address: willow_powered@yahoo.com.au

Distribution: If by some miracle you want to pass this on please ask me before doing so. Just drop me an email at the above addy.

Rating: R - Even though most of it is pretty tame there will probably be some violence and some Willow and Tara goodness (coughcoughsexcoughcough).

Disclaimer: Willow, Tara and any other characters that appear in Buffy the Vampire Slayer are the property of Mr Joss and Mutant Enemy etc. etc. etc. No breach of copyright is intended by me, I am just a fan expressing my ummm fan-ness.

Feedback: Are you kidding, bring it on whether it’s good or bad.

Comments: This picks up 2 years after part six.

Note: Plot, what plot??



Characters thoughts are in Italics.



~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~



Two years later



Ok this is really trying my patience. Buffy is pacing between the window and a row of uncomfortable airport seats where Anya, Dawn and Xander are seated all staring off into space.



Tara makes her way back to the group after checking with the counter staff, “they said the plane is making its final approach now so it shouldn’t be much longer.” Heck it is only an hour late, what is a few more minutes of plastic chair torture.



As if confirming what Tara had been told, an announcement is made over the airports PA system that the flight has landed. Despite being tired and a little grumpy the Scoobys jump to their feet at the news and make there way to the gate.



Giles sees his welcoming party before they see him. Well actually he sees the large sign with Welcome Home Giles painted on it first, it was impossible to miss. Good lord.



His friends all seem to see him at once and they instantly converge on him as one. As he is engulfed in a group hug Giles suddenly knows what a sheep must feel like when being hunted by a pack of wolves. Good lord. “Hello everyone, it is good to see you all.”



It is the first time since before Willow left that they have seen each other, a fact that is not lost on any of them. After exchanging greetings they all head off to collect the rest of Giles’ luggage.



Some four hours after first arriving at the airport a weary Scooby gang enter the Summers house. They had brought some take out on the way home so after Giles has put his luggage upstairs they all sit down to eat.



The next thirty minutes is spent making small talk and picking at the food. No one is eating that much, well no one except Xander who never seems to have trouble eating.



Everyone at the table is skirting around the one issue, the one person that they really want to talk about, Willow. After leaving she has stayed in contact with Giles, all be it irregular contact.



Giles would fill Willow in on everything that had happened to her friends. He had heard the relief in the redheads voice when he had told her that Tara had moved in with Buffy and Dawn. He also heard the concern in her voice whenever he told her about the latest big bad that they were fighting.



In return Giles had told the rest of the Scooby gang any news that he had about Willow. Early on he had had to gloss over some of the details and on some occasions down right lie because initially Willow had struggled hard.



Giles had not passed on some of the details as he feared the affects such information would have on her friends, especially the pain that it would cause Tara.



Once approximately six months after leaving Willow had even called her friends. Unfortunately no one had been home as everyone was out fighting vampires so Willow had left a brief and what she hoped was a reassuring message on the answering machine.



After hearing Willows voice her friends had been on cloud nine for weeks. For Tara it had also silenced the aching loneliness she felt inside, well for a little while anyway. For the next few weeks following the phone call Tara had dreamt about Willow even more so than usual. Mostly her dreams consisted of vivid memories, images of her and Willow talking, touching, making slow lingering love and having hot needy sex.



As everyone listens to Giles describe his flight Anya rolls her eyes and decides to jump in with both feet. “Ok excuse me Giles. While your flight sounds exciting I think what everyone here really wants to talk about is a certain redhead.”



All eyes are on Anya as she slowly looks around the table, meeting each person’s gaze as though challenging them to deny it. “Oh come on, you all are dying to ask him, don’t tell me you aren’t.”



Everyone is silent as five pairs of eyes turn to focus on Giles expectantly. Removing his glasses and starting to polish them Giles once again understands the feeling of a sheep being hunted by a pack of wolves. Good lord. Finally Tara asks what they all want to know, “Giles have you talked to her? How is she?”



Putting his glasses back on Giles can’t stop a small smile appearing, “well actually yes I have spoken to Willow. We have spoken several times over the last three months.” Ok now Rupert be careful what you tell them, you promised Willow you wouldn’t give too much away.



Without waiting for anyone to reply Giles continues, “you should all be proud of her, she is doing well, very well indeed.”



As Giles looks around the table he sees looks of pure joy on the five faces before him, even Anya seems remarkably happy at the news.



None of his friends ask him to elaborate they are all lost in their own thoughts for a moment. Not surprisingly each persons thoughts have a common theme. If Willow is doing good that must mean that she will be coming home and hopefully soon.



* * * *



“Gee Will, how much stuff have you got in here?” Jade is struggling to lift a large suitcase into the back of the car. “I seem to remember you moving in with a lot less stuff than this Willow Rosenberg.”



As Willow throws her backpack into the back of the car she can’t resist teasing her friend. “Hey what can I say, retail therapy has played a big part in my recovery.”



Moving towards the front passenger side of the car Sam can’t help but laugh at her lover and friend. If these two were anymore alike I’d have to say that someone out there is cloning humans. “Now Jade honey if I’m not mistaken you actually helped Will buy most of that stuff so don’t go complaining now.”



Jade rolls her eyes “well I hope you don’t expect me to unload all this stuff for you when we get there.” Willow just flashes Jade a you bet I do smile as she gets into the back seat and closes the door.



Jade looks at Sam and shakes her head as they both climb into the front seat “great, hi my name is Jade Thomas removalist extraordinaire, no suitcase too big or too small.”



The three women crack up laughing as Jade starts the car and reverses out the driveway. “You better just hope this new place of yours doesn’t have too many stairs to walk up or else I’ll be charging you extra.”



* * * *



Tara and Dawn are putting the finished touches on a picnic basket when there is a knock at the door. Buffy races down the stairs answering it before Giles has a chance. “Hey Xander, come in.”



“Hey Buffy, Giles. Are you guys ready to get this show on the road? Anya is waiting in the car and you know how she gets if she has to wait.”



Before Buffy or Giles can answer Dawn and Tara appear from the kitchen carrying the basket between them. “Oh food, excellent. Anya and I brought some blankets for us all to sit on and I also packed some games to keep us busy and to work off some of that picnicy goodness.”



Shortly after Giles had arrived he had suggested that the gang go on a picnic. The Scoobys had been excited by the idea, setting a date for the following Saturday. They all saw it as a chance to relax and break away from their usual existence of research and bad guy fighting.



Arriving at the park just before noon the gang secure a nice spot under a rather large tree, not far from the playground. Everyone helps to get set up and before long they are all settled on the blankets, passing around food.



For the tenth time since arriving Giles checks his watch, an act that doesn’t go unnoticed by Xander. “You know Giles, looking at your watch every 5 seconds isn’t going to make time go any faster.”



Giles simply smiles at Xander as he sees a car pulling up in the car park next to where they themselves parked. The group look at Giles as though he has just grown another head as he stands and faces them, a very un Giles like smile plastered on his face.



Buffy can’t resist “what’s the matter Giles, you sit on an ants nest? I can’t remember the last time I saw you move so fast.” The rest of the gang can’t contain their laughter as they see the shocked expression on the ex watchers face.



Giles quickly recovers and addresses the group, his tone very serious “Now everyone, the reason I wanted to have this picnic is because I have a surprise for you all.” Now don’t get too excited Rupert.



Everyone’s attention is on Giles as their curiosity gets the better of them. “I want you all to close your eyes and don’t open them until I say.”



Buffy and Anya groan their frustration, Anya also putting hers into words, “come on just give us the present and cut the boring eye closing stuff.”



Giles stands his ground. “No, you have to close your eyes or it won’t be a surprise.”



Seeing that Giles won’t back down, the group close their eyes and wait patiently, surrounded by silence. The only sound that is heard is the distant opening and closing of car doors.



“This better be good Giles or I’ll use my slayer strength to kick your butt.”



Giles watches the approaching figures and smiles. As the others have their eyes closed all they hear is approaching footsteps. Buffy turns her head towards the sound, her slayer instincts automatically kicking in. Three people coming this way.



As the visitors pass the group heading towards where Giles is standing Tara smells a subtle and familiar scent. She draws in a deep breath as a series of memories are triggered by the smell. Oh Goddess that smells just like her. I must be going crazy but oh god it smells just like her.



Mere seconds pass in what feels like an age for the Scooby gang before they finally hear Giles speak. “Ok everyone, open your eyes.”



Five pairs of eyes snap open. As they slowly adjust to the bright light of the day they see two strangers one standing either side of Giles. Also standing next to Giles, in between the new comers is someone they all know very well. Willow.



Moving almost as one the Scoobys stand, their shock obvious on their faces. No one speaks as the realisation of what is happening sinks in.



Willow looks at each of her friends in turn, her eyes finally falling on Tara who returns her gaze. Almost losing herself in pools of blue Willow finally manages to speak, saying the only thing that her brain can come up. “Surprise!”



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Willow - Say, you all didn't happen to do a bunch of drugs did ya?

Willow - I'm a blood sucking fiend, look at my outfit . . . .

WillowPowered
 


Re: Fan Fic - Expensive at Half the Price

Postby Cindy Lou Who » Thu Dec 26, 2002 5:31 pm

:party :bounce :party :bounce :love :bounce :party :bounce :party :bounce :party



Happy B-day to YOU!!!!!!!!!!



Personally I admire your approach to 3-0. I was quite "Garbo-esque" on mine...then I realized the many advantages. Still young enough to be crazy but old enough to be taken seriously when necessary.



I DID NOT see the big surprise coming...no how no way! No doubt anything important that was "cut" will be explained in retrospect...which can be nicer in fact.



Thanks for the update...I so dig this ficula! ~~~Suse

Cindy Lou Who
 


Re: Fan Fic - Expensive at Half the Price

Postby SilverWingedNemesis » Thu Dec 26, 2002 5:43 pm

AHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!





*DANCES AROUND THE ROOM EXCITEDLY*



MORE MORE MORE!!



*GIGGLES* aren't I terrible!! I just can't WAIT to see what happens next! I LOVE THIS FIC!!



Please keep up the great work and update soon!!



Thanks!!



~NICK~

SilverWingedNemesis
 


Re: Fan Fic - Expensive at Half the Price

Postby barnabasvamp » Thu Dec 26, 2002 6:12 pm

Great update, and the suprise was wonderful!



Nice to see the gang being supportive of Giles and Willow.

BV



"In front of total strangers won't you kiss me, Flowers for no reason but you miss me - OOH, I wanna be in love"

Melissa Etheridge-Skin

barnabasvamp
 


Re: Fan Fic - Expensive at Half the Price

Postby deixs » Fri Dec 27, 2002 2:15 am

HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!!:bounce :rollin :bounce :rollin :bounce

What a wonderful surprise!!!!!



Stef :p

deixs
 


Re: Fan Fic - Expensive at Half the Price

Postby Grimlock72 » Fri Dec 27, 2002 6:08 am

:bounce happy birthday to uuuuuuuuuuu :D :bounce



I have to say I did see the surprise coming, after all Willow had to be travelling somewhere and Giles suggesting a picknick :)



You skipped two years forward, hmm... I do wonder how Tara and Willow managed during those two years. Must have been hard on both of them; Tara for missing Willow and wanting to help and Willow for dealing with controlling magic.



I suppose some of that will come up when they talk to each other, they have a lot to talk about. What did Tara do in those two years ? Finish school, study magic more ? She had to stand in as resident-witch since Willow was not available I guess.... yep, lots of things to talk about for sure.



Is Jade going to stay around ?



I did feel a bit sad when Willow worked up the courage to call and there was no-one there to answer it :(



Grimmy

"You hurt Tara," Willow said too calmly. "The last one who tried that was a god. I made her regret it." -- Unexpected Consequences by Lisa of Nine

Grimlock72
 


Re: Fan Fic - Expensive at Half the Price

Postby pikescoob » Fri Dec 27, 2002 6:23 am

Happy Birthday!!!! :grin Thanks for updating! Yay Willow's home! :bounce Can't wait to see what happens next :D



--Michelle

pikescoob
 


Re: Fan Fic - Expensive at Half the Price

Postby WillowPowered » Sat Jan 18, 2003 3:29 pm

I just realised that I haven't posted anything since just after Christmas - where have all the days gone??



Thanks as always for all the feedback, I'm glad you all like my humble little story so far. The next couple of sections may be a little slow and quite frankly a little on the boring side but I am trying to tie up some loose ends and set everything up for the main action!!



Again thanks for the support and as always I hope you enjoy.



Jill







Title: Expensive at Half the Price – Part 8.

Author: Jill (A.K.A. – WillowPowered).

Email Address: willow_powered@yahoo.com.au

Distribution: If by some miracle you want to pass this on please ask me before doing so. Just drop me an email at the above addy.

Rating: R - Even though most of it is pretty tame there will probably be some violence and some Willow and Tara goodness (coughcoughsexcoughcough).

Disclaimer: Willow, Tara and any other characters that appear in Buffy the Vampire Slayer are the property of Mr Joss and Mutant Enemy etc. etc. etc. No breach of copyright is intended by me, I am just a fan expressing my ummm fan-ness.

Feedback: Are you kidding, bring it on whether it’s good or bad.

Comments: Willow's back!!

Note: Plot, what plot??



Characters thoughts are in Italics.



~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~



Everything seems to fade as Tara and Willow appraise each other. They both explore the other with their eyes, noting the changes that have taken place since the last time they saw each other.



Tara’s thoughts are racing a million miles an hour. Oh Goddess she looks so good, so healthy and . . well . . sexy. Last time I saw her she looked so thin and sick. Her hair is shorter than before, it is almost the same length it was when we first met. And oh she looks so beautiful I want to touch her. I want to hold her close and feel her against me. Tara feels herself blush but she doesn’t care because Willow is back.



Willow notices Tara blushing. Oh god she looks so beautiful. Her hair is longer and oh Goddess she is oh so sexy and curvy.



Willow is brought out of her thoughts by Giles who has moved to stand in front of her. “It’s so good to see you Willow.” Looking into the former watches eyes Willow sees his love and affection for her. “It’s good to see you too Giles.” Before she has a chance to finish the sentence Giles wraps his arms around her and hugs her tight.



This opens the flood gates as Xander, Buffy and Dawn all rush forward to come together in a tight group hug, with Willow in the middle.



Feeling very much like the meat in a sandwich Willow savours the warmth of her friends embrace. Taking a deep breath her stress and anxiety leave her body as she exhales. They don’t hate me, thank god they don’t hate me.



As the friends step back from the hug each of their faces shows their pure joy at being together again.



Seeing her chance Anya steps forward and hugs Willow tightly for several seconds before stepping away and moving next to Xander who puts an arm around her.



Lastly Willow turns to face Tara. She looks so beautiful and sexy and huggable. Swallowing hard she takes a tentative step towards her ex lover.



Blue eyes look into pools of green seeing compassion, love, wisdom and longing. That is not all she sees, Tara also sees the person that she first fell in love with – her Willow.



As the two women gaze into each other’s eyes they close the distance between them, seemingly unaware of the movement until they are standing several inches apart. While the others know they are intruding on a very private moment by watching, no one can take their eyes away from the blond and red head in front of them.



After what seems like forever Tara tilts her head to the side and flashes Willow one of her famous crooked smiles, her eyes sparkling.



Willow can’t stop a beaming smile from appearing on her face as the two women move at the same time to embrace. “It’s so good to see you Will, I missed you so much.” “I missed you so much too Tara.”



Both women cling to each other, savouring the smell, touch and warmth of the other. Finally they break their embrace and turn to face the others. Jade and Anya are both looking at the two of them with huge smiles plastered on their faces while the others all seem to be concentrating on the same blade of grass.



Gently taking Tara’s hand Willow leads her over to where Jade, Sam and the others are standing. “Everyone, I would like to introduce you to the people who have been helping me while I’ve been gone.”



Indicating each person in turn Willow begins the introductions. “Everyone, this is Sam and Jade. Guys this is Dawn, Buffy, Xander, Anya and you already know Giles.” Taking a step closer to Sam and Jade to bring Tara closer to them Willow completes the introductions. “And this is Tara.”



After greetings are exchanged Giles moves to Jade and Sam and hugs them both warmly. “It is so good to see you both again.”



As both women smile fondly at the ex watcher Sam answers for both of them, “Thank you Rupert, it is great to see you again, you are looking very well.”



Willow smiles to herself as she watches the three of them, “hey Giles, you won’t believe the trouble I had convincing Sam and Jade to come back with me. In the end I had to resort to using emotional blackmail and even begging.”



Jade rolls her eyes sureee before answering. “Yeah Giles you should have seen it, it wasn’t a pretty sight. But in the end we couldn’t resist coming to see you again and to meet Will’s family.”



After a brief silence Dawn suggest that everyone sits down and has some lunch. Sitting in a circle around the food everyone takes a moment to get comfy and to collect his or her thoughts and emotions.



Looking at the food Jades mouth begins to water. “Wow this all looks so good.” Sam and Willow share a look and begin laughing. Jade looks from one to the other. “What?”



The rest of the Scooby’s look on bewildered, although the sound of Willows laugher is music to their ears.



Sam places a hand on Jades knee, “sweetie, I know the picnic looks great but I think it would be a good idea to leave some food for everyone else.”



Seeing an opportunity to tease her friend Willow can’t resist. “I swear Jade eats more than Xander on a good day. I can’t believe you manage to stay so thin.” Jade blushes bright red as she munches on a chicken sandwich, throwing part of the crust at Willow in way of revenge.



Tara watches the exchange and can’t help but smile. Goddess Willow is home, my Willow is back.



Watching the interaction between Sam and Jade, Anya’s curiosity gets the better of her as she directs her question to the women. “So are you two orgasm buddies? Xander and I are orgasm buddies.”



Jade stops eating mid chew, her mouth open. Sam can’t fight back her laughter, partly at Anya’s directness and partly because of the look on Jades face. Meanwhile the rest of the Scooby’s merely roll their eyes letting out a collective groan.



Jade recovers quickly. “Well yes we are . . um . . orgasm buddies.” And I thought Willow was kidding when she told us about Anya.



Anya leans slightly towards Jade I knew it!!. “And you are a witch too right? I mean I can feel the power absolutely pouring off you and I know it’s not Sam.” Everyone is still, waiting for Jade to answer.



Willow and Sam share a glance and look at Jade waiting to see how she will respond. “Well yes I did practice magic but that was a long time ago. I don’t really cast anymore, mainly just to maintain my control.”



Tara blinks several times and then concentrates on Jade. She had been so caught up in the fact that Willow was back that she hadn’t felt and seen what was now so obvious. The amount of power that was coming from Jade was almost overwhelming. At first Tara had thought that the power she felt was Willow but now she could see that she was very wrong. The redhead was powerful but what Tara was feeling makes Willow seem like a lame beginner.



Inhaling a deep breath Tara manages to suppress the uneasy feeling that was beginning to grain control. It will be ok. If Giles knows her and trusts her then it must be ok. She also helped Will so it will be just fine.



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Willow - Say, you all didn't happen to do a bunch of drugs did ya?

Willow - I'm a blood sucking fiend, look at my outfit . . . .

WillowPowered
 


Re: Fan Fic - Expensive at Half the Price

Postby SilverWingedNemesis » Sat Jan 18, 2003 5:49 pm

WOW



Thank you so much for updating!!



I can't wait to see where you go with this fic!!



~NICK~

SilverWingedNemesis
 

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