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Needs a Title Suggestions?

Postby guardian146 » Tue Aug 09, 2005 7:45 pm

Ok I'm posting this cause I found it today while cleaning out some old school stuff. It was between pages of calculus and physics so that probably tells you how utterly bored I was in those classes. Anywho I'm posting this without my beta seeing it so I'll probably get beat later, but oh well.

Title: The titles up for suggestions if you have a suggestion let me know.
Disclaimers: I don't own anything, I'm just a poor college student the only thing you would get out of me is my thousands of dollars in debt that I owe the government for school.
Summery: Don't know its really kinda short, so not much need of a summery.

Feedback is greatly appreciated. Us poor starving college students must live off of something.

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There was a flash of bright light, a thud and then unbelievable pain. In the background screaming could be heard. It was the same nightmare she had every night since the accident that had claimed her sight and almost her life. She had been crossing a street when all of a sudden a truck sped around the corner hitting her. Despite all she had been through in the past and all the powers she possessed it almost killed her.

Waking up from the dream she opened her eyes to the darkness that greeted her. *I’ll never get used to this*

Getting out of bed she stumbles in the direction of the bathroom. Yelling out as she starts to fall, but being pleasantly surprised when a pair of strong arms encircle her waist stopping her decent to the ground.

“I will always be there to catch you,” a soft voice whispers in her ear. “Why won’t you let me help you?”

“Because I don’t want to be helpless…..I can’t see…..I’m scared and I don’t know what to or if I can help you guys…..its scares me how much I need you.”

“Don’t be afraid I love you and no matter what I won’t leave you.”

She turns around in the embrace and buries her head in the soft shoulder she finds.

“I just don’t want to be a burden. What happens if an enemy comes and you need my help but I can’t give it!”

“You will always be a help, you’re needed, I need you. You taught me how to love again and you’re not getting away that easily.”

She feels soft lips touch hers and she melts into the touch.

“Just remember that I will always find you.”

As they kiss she can feel herself being led back towards the bed. When they reach the bed she can feel her lover pull away. She whimpers at the loss of contact.

“Let me show you how much I love you.”

A chill passes down her spine as she hears what her lover has said. A tingle of anticipation starts and she cannot wait to find out what her lover has in store for her. She feels hands tracing patterns on her back as they move lower down until they are on the hem of her shirt. She silently wishes for the caresses to contintue without the clothing barrier. Her lover senses this stripping her of her shirt. As she feels hands touch her bare skin the spark that arcs between them causes her to arch her back and moan in pleasure.

“What do you want me to do baby, tell me what you want.”

“You…..I want you to touch me.”

The rest of their clothing was gone in seconds, as both lovers tangled together. Hands roaming and lips meeting until both were dizzy with desire. Her lover was all of a sudden in her sending her over the edge; she came crashing down to earth in her lover’s arms.

“Oh god baby, I love you so much.”

“Even if I can never see you again?”

“Even if…you made a promise to me once about being mine, just believe in me and everything will be alright.”

“I love you, Willow!”

“I love you too baby, don’t ever forget that.”

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If it can go wrong it will go wrong ~ Murphy's Law
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Re: Needs a Title Suggestions?

Postby Darth Pacula » Tue Aug 09, 2005 11:50 pm

G'day,

It's kind of corny, but what about 'Love is Blind'?

Please do feel free to mock me mercilessly. :-D

Bye,
Paul.
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Re: Needs a Title Suggestions?

Postby CrazyTaraWitch » Thu Aug 11, 2005 9:29 pm

I really like this so far, Will's such a sweetheart, but I hope Tara can learn to trust her more!
this a good start, and i hope that you can find a title soon!
"To days to come."
"All my love to long ago.


I hope, we'll have more happy ever after
I hope, we can all live more fearlessly...

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