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Re: FF: Milestones (Sequel to Unexpected Consequences)

Postby hopico99 » Thu May 01, 2003 10:16 pm

:)



Lisa,



I love what you create. You're an amazing writer.



thank you for this story and UC.....both are much loved and needed.



peace

WILLOW: Usually I use that time to copy over my class notes with a system of different colored pens ... but it's been pointed out to me that that's, you know, insane.

TARA: I said "quirky.

hopico99
 


Re: FF: Milestones (Sequel to Unexpected Consequences)

Postby Bookcat » Thu May 01, 2003 10:55 pm

Jesus H Christ.

Gotta keep us at the edge of our seats, don't you?

And Dawn and Bre are bleeping pissing me the bleep off. I want their crushes to be less... crushing... and more like the new word I recently came up for it, happy fantasy time.



"Come and and go to my house, ladies. Come on and go to my house, girls girls!"

"I'll look you, right in the face!"

"Haha, there's a dog! Wait, that's not funny. [everyone else cracks up]"

Bookcat
 


Re: FF: Milestones (Sequel to Unexpected Consequences)

Postby nika » Fri May 02, 2003 11:30 am

Lisa is back! :applause :clap :party :bow :bow :flower ::flower :flower

nika
 


Re: FF: Milestones (Sequel to Unexpected Consequences)

Postby Sassette » Sat May 03, 2003 8:14 am

Lisa - thank you so much for writing this story ... I'm seriously loving it. W/T have so much to get through, but together - it's so nice to see them like this. I'm going to pretty much agree with everything Tim said (except the part where he got a sneak-preview). Oh - and y'know what? It's still fun to put in the number for the next chapter and read the haiku.



-Sass

Sassette
 


Im Back!!

Postby rose of the moon 87 » Sat May 03, 2003 1:01 pm

:banana :dance :bigwave Yay!!I'm back! I can breath again! sorry i havent replied so long Lisa, computer went wonky and damnnear exploded. But im back :party *does happy dance* :party and im getting ready to read the 16th chapter. when I do I'll reply back on it. *squeek!* im so happy! i love the dancing bannana icon... thats just too funny. :banana :banana :banana :banana

ok, have to go entertain my guests and then as soon as there gone come back to read. I missed you Lisa!

love ya lots

& best wishes,

Devi

rose of the moon 87
 


Cheers

Postby Incitatua 8 » Sat May 03, 2003 1:49 pm

Bravo! :party I am just totally enraptured by W/T's relationship with each other, their daughters and all the guardians! This is some of your best writing to me because of what you have always done better than anyone else that I've read[ and the number is high] and that is portray all the intimate, affectionate, tender, loving, caring, mischievous, playful, fearful, vulnerable, etc facets of their truly breathtaking relationship...so much so that that I am actually envious of them as I read! [Willow's comments to Tara about marriage being forever and that she would never send her away brought tears to my eyes and yet in the very same scene I'm giggling over her sucking-up wooing list. ]That is great writing...so yea for the update and I will wait however long it takes you to finish this wonderful story. I know some hard time are ahead, [Tara's family for one]but I hope you will not separate these two again or their family [Brianna is terrific] ...they are sooo great together! You have certainly kept these two characters and their powerful love alive for me and I thank you for that!

Incitatua 8
 


Re: Im Back!!

Postby JewWitch18 » Sat May 03, 2003 1:52 pm

:wave lisa, lisa, lisa! it is SO GOOD to see you back in action on milestones. I cannot overemphasize the goodness that is you and pens together. here is an experimental feminist interpetive smilie expressing my feelings on the subject: :flower



sorry I wasn't back on the bandwagon sooner-- I've been pretty busy myself, as this was my final week of classes and all. now there is only one final exam and a research paper between me and my diploma. it's pretty much a rollercoaster, as I'm sure you understand, having recently done this yourself, so you can only imagine the joy it gave me to finally come back to check up on the kitty board, only to see milestones on the front page. here is another smilie installation to express my deep inner emotions:

:bounce :banana :read :dance :dance :dance :moo



...now how's that for some good cyber-lovin'?



--jenny



ps-- shit meet fan-- that's an instant classic. accompanying chapter soon?

If I am not for myself, then who will be for me?

If I am only for myself, what am I?

And if not now, when?

--Rabbi Hillel



HAPPY PASSOVER KITTENS!!

JewWitch18
 


Re: Im Back!!

Postby Momma2Kally » Sat May 03, 2003 10:52 pm

Hallo!

So, i'm one of those horrible people who usually doesn't post feedback. :( I'm sorry. Lisa, I've loved this fic for ages and should have posted to you forever ago. I love baby/child fics and the way you write them is perfect.



I also *blushes* need a favor...I can't get the page to load. it loads to all different points, but the furthest i've gotten to it is right when Willow and Tara go to get Megan from Brent's and she hasn't stopped crying. if someone could e-mail me the remainder, i'd love you forever. :) I've rebooted, deleted cookies, everything, and i can't get it to pop up.



Piper_W@hotmail.com Thank you SO much! :)



~Piper

Momma2Kally
 


Little problem

Postby Rowan24 » Sun May 04, 2003 6:15 am

Hey Lisa, just like everybody else, I wanted to thank you for your wonderful stories. I'm feeling a bit down lately, but just seeing there was an update brought a huge smile on my face. You totally rock !!!

I had a question though... As I was reading the feedback I realised I didn't get the complete update : in the file I read, the story stopped when Ceri goes and tell W/T that Brent wanna see them... I want more... Could somebody please help me and tell me how I can have a complete update... Pretty please :wink



Rowan24
 


Oups, made a mistake...

Postby Rowan24 » Sun May 04, 2003 6:34 am

I didn't read the post coming just before mine, where Momma2Kalli (???) said she had exactly the same problem as I do... So could someone email me the complete update as well? I'd really appreciate it...

stephparizel@hotmail.com

Thanks a lot... And Lisa, please keep going with your awesome stories... i just wish I had more time and your authorization to translate them into French so that French people could come to know your wonderful work. :clap

Rowan24
 


Wow

Postby Amymlc » Sun May 04, 2003 2:28 pm

Okay, Lisa you are extremely talented and as everyone has said already, I am at your mercy, but there is one thing that's been bugging me.



'"She’s our child." Tara met Buffy’s gaze and held it. "And we understand magic and what she needs to learn."'



Okay...Brianna is Willow and Tara's child, so why does Brent act like it all the time? Don't get me wrong, I understand she is the child's mentor, but who is she to give permission for things without the consent of her mothers....or even against her mother's. If I were in that situation I'd be furious. And hello...and why does Brianna look to Brent for things instead of her mothers? You'd think she'd have more trust in her own mother's since they are such a loving family. That's just been bugging me, and I got it off my chest now, so I'm done, for now.



Oh Man...what's up with Tara's powers and the flamey eyes....um...every time I think of that I think "dark magic" eyes. Has Tara not handed over all the power yet? Does she feel Beth coming or something? What's happening???? Has Brianna passed her powers over to her mother and actually has been called? Wait...we don't even know if Brianna will be called as the imbolic mage yet. Oh...what if it's Megan because her life was in danger during her delivery - sort of....Okay...okay, enough with my imagination. Hmmm....Have I told you that I hate long drawn out suspense? Well, I do. hehe



Oh man! You can't leave us hanging with Bre and Dawn and Brent's mother. I don't really care about Beth, but you know...I'd still like to read what you've come up with. I'll totally pay you in chocolate or cash, or chocolate cash...

I'm just kidding...not about the payment part....just the rushing you part. I'm glad everything is okay with you and congrats on everything else!.

Amymlc
 


update

Postby Grimlock72 » Sun May 04, 2003 2:29 pm

(Momma2Kalli and Rowan, check your mail:-)



Interesting update this one :D . Curious that Beth seems to be intelligent enough to do something in science at school yet doesn't realize that the demon-story is used to keep her close. I feel sorry for Donnie's wife, all the more reason to introduce Brent to Donnie..heh... (with proper knowledge of certain historical facts of course: -->>: )



Hmm... you could replace 'demon' fairly easy with 'devil' and than you have an often used strategy in the middle-ages over here in Europe. Speaking of faith, I admire Brents steadfast belief in Bridget but it's a bit to easy to just claim that "it was not your mama's task to teach". Like hell it was, Tara didn't teach Willow for a variety of reasons at the time but Bridget had little to do with that. (here we get to why an omni-potent God would let it's followers suffer part...which I'll skip)



Summers women have a tendency to strike out when they're insecure it seems. Bit of an annoying habit. If Dawn wants Bre so bad, do something about... hitting Kaley wont solve anything, really it wont. To bad Kaley had vowed not to use force, although she should have at least deflected that blow... surely she's trained for that ? It's just that I don't like Dawn prancing around like she owns the place or something.



Another mystery... why was Brent so horribly upset at Brianna wanting to take the challenge ? She herself already knew Brianna couldn't take the challenge before being called, so whats the problem ? Brianna is acting very smart/intelligent for a five year old, still telling her about the problems her parents had before she was even born... not something I would do (besides applying current beliefs on past events is hardly usefull, it's easy though). She IS only 5 years old after all, you can't possibly expect her to handle all the idiocies of the grown-up world :D .



I did like the obviously good relation between Brianna and Brent (as long as she listens to her mothers foremost). Does Brianna have several tutors or just Brent full time ?



Buffy was soooo annoying at the end, gawd. I understand her concerns, I really do, but fact remains that in the end it's not her concern, period. I would have kicked Buffy out of my house if she wouldn't stop questioning my actions. Buffy definitly lost a lot of points there.



I see several people thinking Brent's mother would have scars as a result of the attack on Tara in chapter 1; as far as we know Brent's mother wasn't on the committee since the last chapter of Unexpected Consequences at least (she likely quit earlier but thats the first reference of her having *been* on the committee). So she's like a old and wise woman, but not one with three scars and broken limbs :) .



Thats all for today, thanks for the update!



Grimmy

--

She(Tara) knew that she was Willow too. If she knew that then why hadn't Willow herself? That wasn't fair. She was Willow. she should have known that first. -- Willow in _Sidestep Chronicle_ (part 80)

Edited by: Grimlock72 at: 5/4/03 1:44:21 pm
Grimlock72
 


RE:UPDATE

Postby peggy of sunnydale » Mon May 05, 2003 10:08 am

yay i say yay



im so happy its back im jumping for joy yes lisa u are a goddess i swear



by the way this is very cute



Willow:its ok i dont need snuggles

Tara:vixen

thank you

peggy of sunnydale
 


Re: Update

Postby Wicked Willow » Mon May 05, 2003 9:40 pm

Since a lot of newbies posted I thought I'd report for duty. First, I have to say I agree with Grimlock, I don't think Buffy ever pissed me off as much as she did in this chapter. I hope she's not thinking that being the slayer gives her the right to interfere on how Willow and Tara chose to raise Brianna or whatever.



Also, Lisa you write so well I always get the feeling I'm watching a movie, I'm sure the kittens agree and have probably said this already but I actually spend my time thinking about an actress to play Brent!

Now that I know there's something to know, I can't not know, just because I'm afraid somebody will know I know. You know? ~ Willow, Buffy Vs. Dracula

Wicked Willow
 


Re: Update

Postby Shinnen » Tue May 06, 2003 7:11 am

Hi lisa! i was just wondering... since i saw someone mentioning about who could play the characters from Unexpected Consequences and Milestones, I'd like to know who you'd want to portray your incredible characters if it was made into a movie or a mini series. :p

CheerZ

Shinnen



Who cares how tall your lover is ... height doesn't matter in bed



For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it

Shinnen
 


on this most evil of nights...

Postby Lisa of Nine » Tue May 06, 2003 5:44 pm

Hey everyone,

first off, sorry I got lost. Seems the goddess in her wisdom has decided to assist in my writing. I have a scene coming up soon that involves illness. I haven't been really sick for some time. Yeah, well, I am now. :-(



I was so bad that while sleeping on the floor- not wanting to be too high from the ground- mind you... my beloved cat came over and pronounced death. She used her paw and tossed my covers over my head. On the bright side, I am newly reminded of all the aches and such I will soon write about.



Now, on this most evil of nights, would you all like a chapter preview so you have something GOOD to read instead of the THING on TV?



If so, let me know. I only have part of the chapter done, but I thought in light of the evil descending upon us, you might like an early bit. Tim has seen the scene and I think it made him smile.

email me. If I get 3 yes, I will post a short snippet in the thread! Otherwise, I will assume you'd rather wait for the completed chapter. Either way is fine. Now, if my cat will stop trying to bury my body, I will be happy. She is worse than a squirrel.

Lisa



lcountry@quiknet.com

Lisa of Nine
 


Re: on this most evil of nights...

Postby darkmagicwillow » Tue May 06, 2003 5:49 pm

I'm sorry to hear that you're sick, but your story about your cat is great. Mine just sleeps on me when I'm sick. As for the preview, I'd love to see it.

--

"Omnia mutantur, nihil interit." -- "Everything changes, but nothing is truly lost."

darkmagicwillow
 


Re: on this most evil of nights...

Postby Domaris » Tue May 06, 2003 5:51 pm

*votes for the early bit*



I need my dose of Lisa's writing! :grin



:eatme <-- i find new funny emoticons every freakin day.. ;)



Domaris :bigkiss



PS: oh and take care of yourself.. sick is :evil :|

"Rock my world!" - Gia

"Before you criticize someone, walk a mile in their shoes. That way, you'll be a mile from them, and you'll have their shoes" - Somebody

Edited by: Domaris  at: 5/6/03 4:52:47 pm
Domaris
 


Re: on this most evil of nights...

Postby Puff » Tue May 06, 2003 5:54 pm

1 email sent for yes and I hope you feel better soon.



Cheese. It's milk that you chew.

Puff
 


Re: FF: Milestones (Sequel to Unexpected Consequences)

Postby LeatherQueen » Tue May 06, 2003 5:58 pm

I, too, am voting for an early scene. :)



I've even come out of my school-induced lurkdom to ask for one.



Get better soon, Lisa, and be sure to take care of yourself. It sounds like your cat needs you muchly. *L*



~LQ



PS: Puff... *LOL* LOVE the sig line!





------------------
"Just a chicken giving lip service, kittens like you make me nervous." - The Delilahs

LeatherQueen
 


Re: FF: Milestones (Sequel to Unexpected Consequences)

Postby EyesLie » Tue May 06, 2003 6:20 pm

OMG!!!!! Milestones is back????!!? :thud I really don't know how I missed this.... I'm deliriously happy Lisa:dance :applause :banana :bounce :dance , Thanks a Million!!! Will be back soon to post feedback. *giggles happily & runs off to read Chp. 16*

bye now :wave

"Oh, I'm never really nice," Anya replied matter-of-factly. "I'm just the voice of truth in a world of artifice and social convention -On Second Thought, by AntigoneUnbound

EyesLie
 


preview!

Postby Lisa of Nine » Tue May 06, 2003 6:22 pm

Okay,

here is a preview. Enjoy. I actually had fun writing this one.

Extra credit if you guess who Brent's mother is going to pal around with. (This should be EASY!)

I will list a short cast list at the end of this piece. SInce it's fan fic, I can pick actresses who are young and age progress them to play roles. ;-)

Lisa





CHAPTER SEVENTEEN



The sanctuary looked like a military base preparing to deploy several divisions into battle. Everyone had been on edge before, waiting for the other Keeper shoe to drop, but they had not expected this. To make matters worse, Brent was doing something she had never done before- she was whining. Brave warriors faced with their fearless leader whining tend to get nervous.



Brent paused at the entrance to the sacred flame room. It was the most mystically secure place on the grounds, and Emily was guarding the entrance to the main cavern with the most intense mystic barrier Brent had ever seen. Of course, the fact that ten of the Imbolc guard were stationed along the cavern to the flame room also added to the room's security. Willow and Tara and their children were safe. Nothing could harm them.



Brent was now ready to face her mother… okay, she was willing to go face her mother… well, she was going to face her mother, even if she wasn't going to like it.



Ceri stood vigil at Tara's side, watching the young mother with her infant. Even with her eyes full of love, Ceri was still able to have an aura of protective menace.



"Ceridwen, you are responsible for Lady Willow and her family," Brent said. She knew Ceri still held a sacred oath to defend Willow, and she always gave assignments with that in mind.



Ceri nodded. She was on edge, like everyone else, but she was glad that she was staying with Willow and Tara and the children. She hated having them out of her sight. Ceridwen had given her pledge to Tara during the brief time that Tara had carried the mantle of Brigit. Ceridwen had the honor of being the only guardian in a thousand years to make a sacred vow to the Imbolc mage. She lived her life with that covenant always in her mind and heart. Only one thing could circumvent that oath, and that was Brianna's safety. As the future mantle of Brigit, Brianna's life came before anything else.



Ceri was unsettled more than scared. Brent was nervous about seeing her mother, but Brent didn't think her mother posed any physical threat. Still, a nervous Brent made all the guardians off their games.



The guardians standing watch in the caverns all reported to Ceri. She was an exacting leader. She led by example and used humor as one of her main tools. The other guardians liked her. She had been one of the prime candidates to become Mistress at some distant time after Brent and Brigan were both long gone, but that had changed with Ceri's oath to protect Willow. The Mistress of the Imbolc guard swore to protect the lives of her sacred cadre above everyone and everything except the Imbolc mage. Ceri could not do that without breaking her vow to hold Willow's safety above everyone except the Imbolc mage.



Ceri rested a hand on Tara's shoulder and studied Megan. "Looks like little miss fussy-pants missed her mama," Ceri said.



Tara nodded. "I hated being away from her." Her brow crinkled. "This time in her life is so important. She's learning to bond with us. Willow and I both want to spend every second with her we can."



"Since you won't be leaving these caves for while, she should get quite a bit of family time." Ceri ruffled Megan's hair. "Where did she get this cowlick?" She traced the curly pattern on the side of Megan's head.



"Willow has one just like it." Tara smiled, not even aware that her face lit up every time she said her wife's name. "But Will's is on the other side." What she didn't add was that she loved to trace the pattern in Willow's hair with one finger after they finished making love.



Brent moved closer and smiled at Megan who was cooing happily in Tara's arms. "Well, it seems our little miss only needed to bathe in the warmth of Brigit's flame to soothe her temper." She kissed Megan's cheek and chuckled. "Just like her big sister."



"We should have thought of that sooner," Tara said. She ran her hand over Megan's head. "I remember how much Brianna loved to feel the warmth of this fire." Tara felt blessed that she and her children had open access to the sacred flame. The council of elders that governed the Imbolc guard around the world had decreed that Willow, Tara, and their children were to be afforded every privilege of the Imbolc guard. It was not a privilege they invoked often.



They generally would visit the flame on Imbolc and on other days sacred to Brigit, but for the most part, they left the flame to the Imbolc guard. Of course, when Brianna had been an infant, Tara had brought her to the flame room often. Sometimes the flame was the only thing that had seemed to settle Brianna's colicky stomach. Tara used to pace in front of the flame, letting the warmth and the peaceful atmosphere calm them both. She sometimes thought a child's colic could be caused by its parent's stress. Babies picked up on those things, especially a child with Brianna's ability to see auras. Then again, maybe Brianna just liked the flame room. Apparently that was true for Megan as well.



Willow had been on the other side of the room with Brianna, watching Brigan prepare wood for the flame. She saw Tara and the others talking and left Brianna with Brigan, knowing her oldest daughter would be enthralled by the task for some time. She joined the others and wrapped an arm around Tara's waist.



"She won't be able to sense Brianna here, will she?" Willow looked at Brent expectantly. "Your mom?" She was not looking forward to meeting anyone from the witches' committee. She stood next to Tara and glanced to the far side of the cave. There had once been a doorway there, but after Tara's challenge, the entrance to the sacred pool was now kept hidden. Brent knew how to open the stone door, but she only did so on rare occasions. She didn't want Brianna wandering into that particular place.



"No, she won't," Brent swore. She smiled as she watched Brianna study Brigan. Brigan was Brent's second in command, and though she didn't spend as much time with Brianna as Brent did, the young child had stolen Brigan's heart as well. Brigan was kneeling in one corner, carefully using a razor sharp hatchet to cut pieces of oak into small chunks to feed into the sacred flame. Brianna was standing at Brigan's shoulder, watching every move with keen interest.



"She's so grown up," Willow whispered and then leaned against Tara.



Brent and Ceri nodded. They had matching proud smiles as they watched Miss Brianna.



Tara turned her head and they all took a silent moment to study Brianna with Brigan.



Brianna was transfixed by Brigan's work. She held as still as a statue, not wanting to interrupt Brigan's divine effort. She took in each movement, storing every detail in her whip sharp mind.



Brigan glanced at Brianna, then at a small stone shelf a few feet away.



"The oil?" Brianna asked excitedly. After Brigan nodded, Brianna reached up and lifted down a chalice of sacred oils. She carried it back, balanced with the utmost care in her tiny hands. She held it out for Brigan and waited.



Brigan dipped her fingers into the oil and began anointing each small log. "The goddess wouldn't mind if I had some help, young miss," she said quietly. She rarely called Brianna by her name. Part of her was still mortified that the guardians couldn't call her "Our Lady." Calling Brigit's chosen one by her first name just felt wrong, and the few times she had done so, she practically looked over her shoulder to make sure lighting wasn't going to strike her.



Brianna didn't smile. She scrunched her brows together and her expression was tense and earnest. She used both hands to put the chalice onto the ground and then dipped her fingers into it. She whispered a blessing, as she had seen the guardians do many times, and then touched each log. The tip of her tongue poked out one side of her mouth as she concentrated on getting just the right amount oil the logs.



Tara turned her attention to the others. She watched as Willow and Brent studied Brianna. She couldn't blame them; her child was adorable. "She'll be fine," Tara whispered into Willow's ear. "She and Brigan will be so busy they won't even notice anything is going on."



"She won't take a bath tonight. We'll have to wrestle her into the tub." Willow smiled. "She loves smelling like the sacred oils."



Brent put a hand on Tara's arm and guided her toward the exit and paused at the arched doorway to the caverns. "You know, you could get some of the oils and add them to her bath."



"Yeah, but where's the fun in that?" Willow asked. "I think she loves the smell of the oil as much as she loves helping with the flame." She was almost giddy as she watched Brianna. "Oh! And her little hair gets that charcoal smell," Willow said. She walked a few steps toward Brianna. "She calls it Brigit's campfire." She thought Brianna's allegiance to Brigit was precious, but there was pride as well, pride that her child seemed to have a genuine faith in the goddess and a sincere devotion. "She's the cutest thing ever!"



Tara frowned. She enjoyed watching Brianna as well, but now was not the time to be giddy with excitement. Willow's mood was not normal. Brent's mother was waiting at the main gate, Brent's mother, former member of the witches' committee. Normal behavior for Willow would be barely controlled panic.



"I have to go," Brent said. She took one last look at Brianna and then gave Willow and Tara her full attention. "You'll be safe here, though I'm sure my mother won't try anything."



"Is she dangerous?" Tara asked. She didn't like the idea of hiding in a cave while Brent faced a member of the witches committee.



"To me? No," Brent said and then actually chuckled. "If the committee wanted to send a Judas into our fold, they wouldn't send her."



"But she worked for them," Tara said. She shifted her weight and moved Megan to her shoulder and patted the child's back to burp her.



"My mother spent her life serving the committee," Brent said. "But she is what they should be, the best of them. She spent fifty years trying to drag the committee's policies into this century. She was instrumental in changing some of the worst policies." Her voice was full of pride. "She served them, but she did it with integrity." She rolled her eyes. "Of course, she's also stubborn and obstinate and unwilling to bend when it comes to her beliefs."



"Sounds like someone we know." Willow smiled at Brent and waggled her eyebrows.



"Yes, but I serve Brigit, not the committee," Brent said. "My mother served one of the most powerful organizations on the planet, and she's a powerful witch who isn't above using her magic to get what she wants."



"I can see why that would make you do the wacky," Willow said.



Brent tilted her head to one side and studied Willow. The young witch was practically glowing with energy and she looked more carefree that she had in weeks. "Are you feeling all right?" Brent asked.



"Me? I'm great." Willow scampered over to Tara and hugged her. "Locked up with my honey and our babies. How cool is that?"



"Have you felt any mood swings?" Brent asked.



"Nope." Willow used one hand to push Tara's hair behind one ear. "But Tara's been a little grouchy and protective like a mama lioness."



"Willow, you have been moody," Tara said. "You just haven't had angry outbursts." She remembered her own mood swings and shivered. "Which is a good thing." She balanced Megan with one arm and reached out for Willow's hand. "But, honey, you have been a little too … peppy."



"Since when is being peppy a crime?" Willow said angrily. "Okay, so I'm suddenly a little bit crabby. I'm just going to be quiet now, okay?" She leaned against the wall and tried to figure out why she was suddenly so angry. She didn't like mage-o-pause one bit.



"Mood swing," Brent said happily. "I feel better leaving you now." She suddenly realized where she was going and who she was going to see and her smile fell.



"When did you last see her?" Tara asked. She had never known Brent to visit her mother, in fact she had assumed Brent's mother was dead.



"Ten years ago." Brent ran her hand over her hair. It was an unconscious act, born of nervousness. "I went to see her when she retired from the committee." She scowled and smoothed her hair with both hands. "Does my hair look okay?"



The question was so out of place that both Willow and Tara opened their mouths to respond but could not find their voices. They stood, looking like twin fishes gasping on the deck of a ship.



"Does it look that bad?" Brent asked.



"It's as beautiful as ever," Ceri said. "If I didn't have a soulmate you'd have to chase me away with a stick."



Brent raised one eyebrow and gave Ceri a skeptical stare.



Tara and Willow managed to close their mouths, barely. Brent was not a slave to fashion, in fact she always wore her gray hair in a braid down the middle of her back, and she never asked about her appearance.



"Now who has the mood swings?" Willow asked. "I may be starting my mage-o-pause, but you're acting like an adolescent."



Brent sensed their confusion. "Lady Willow, you know how your mother always points out how you don't follow Judaism?"



Willow nodded.



Brent tugged at her braid and smirked. "It looks frumpy," she explained, using her mother's words.



Tara smiled and cleared her throat. "Brent's nervous about seeing her mommy."



"My Lady?" Brent asked sweetly. It was a term of endearment only Brent used.



"Yes?" Tara shifted Megan in her arms and looked into Brent's eyes.



"Shut up." Brent softened the comment by reaching out and cupping Tara's chin with one hand. "Be careful." She pressed a kiss on Tara's cheek. "This should take a few hours. Then I'll send for you."



Tara nodded. She knew Brent wanted to make sure everything was safe.



Brent stepped to Willow's side and kissed her cheek, then moved her lips to Willow's ear so she could whisper. "My hair really looks okay?" she asked.



"You look fine," Willow said. She understood the stress mothers could cause. Sheila wasn't a former member of the witches' committee and she could cause an epidemic of ulcers with one visit.



"Okay." Brent straightened her shoulders. Despite being the leader of the Imbolc guard, her eyes looked like a nervous teen's. "I'll call you when I see what she wants."



"Maybe she just wants to see you." Willow smiled hopefully. "It's been ten years. She must miss you."



"Perhaps," Brent said, though her eyes revealed that she had her own doubts. She turned and walked out of the room, steeling her courage as she went. Her mother was the one person who could make her feel like a helpless, awkward child. The timing of the visit was certainly suspect, and Brent had a sneaking suspicion the committee had asked her mother to intervene. The committee tried to keep the peace between the Imbolc guard and the Keepers, but that peace was now shattered.



*****

The tension level was palpable. Brent groaned as she Brigh pulled the car to a stop just inside the front gate.



"Mistress?" Brigh asked. She turned off the car and turned toward Brent.



"I'm fine," Brent said. "Let's get this over with." She reached for the door handle.



"Wait." Brigh grabbed Brent's arm. "Let me get the door, please?" When Brent turned toward her she explained. "I think it makes a statement." She blushed.



"If it makes you happy." Brent knew the show of respect would not impress her mother, but it might make Brigh a bit less nervous.



Brent waited as Brigh got out of the car and went around the vehicle and then opened Brent's door. "Mistress," she said as she stepped back for the elder to exit.



"Thank you." Brent nodded and headed toward the front gate.



"You're welcome, Mistress." Brigh moved alongside Brent. Her body was poised for any attack, though Brent had sworn that wouldn't be necessary.



They waited as three more members of the Imbolc guard joined them and then the electronic gate hummed and rolled open. A slender, petite woman with close-cropped, yet stylish shock white hair was leaning against a bright red Mercedes convertible. She had eyes as black as pitch that were sparkling with mischief.



"Oh, my, that's quite a harem you have there, Cathy," the woman said as she pushed off the car and walked toward Brent.



"Mother…" Brent gritted her teeth.



"That's the name I gave you," Brent's mother said as she shrugged. "What, no hug?" She held out her arms.



"Mother, how are you?" Brent stepped into the embrace and squeezed the older woman.



Brigh was in shock. She retained her composure even though she wanted to drop her jaw and stare at Brent. Mistress Brent did not look like a 'Cathy.'



"Fine," her mother said when they stepped away from each other. "How are you, Mistress Brent?" Sarcasm was one the older woman's favorite tones.



"I'm curious," Brent said.



"Always straight to the point. Doesn't your Brigit let you have any fun?"



Brigh's body tensed and she took a step closer. No one maligned Brigit without Brigh taking action.



Brent shot Brigh a warning glare and held the young guardian in place. Nervous or not, Brent could order her guardians with one quick glance.



"This one's fiery. I like her. What's your name, sweet cheeks?" Brent's mother waggled her eyebrows at Brigh. "And more importantly, what do you think of older women?"



Brent groaned. It was starting already.



Brigh took a huge step back. She would never falter in the face of battle, but the hungry sparkle in the tiny white haired woman's eyes scared the daylights out of one Brigit's most faithful.



"She's harmless," Brent said as she rested a hand on Brigh's shoulder. "Brigh, this is my mother, Morgan." She blushed, knowing it would only get worse. "Mother, this is Brigh."



"Brigh?" Morgan rolled her eyes. "Doesn't it get confusing with all these names starting with bee?" She looked up and down Brigh's curvy frame. "I'll just call you sweet cheeks." She leaned to one side, making it clear she wasn't talking about the cheeks on Brigh's face.



"What do you want, mother?" Brent asked impatiently.



"Oh, please, Cathy, I'm not going to seduce your little amazon." Morgan sighed.



Brent cringed.



"I mean … Brent." Morgan smiled and winked at Brigh. "Wanna ride with me, sweet cheeks?" She nodded toward her flashy red convertible. The personalized plate read "HOTSPELL."



Brigh looked at Brent for rescue.



"Leave the poor woman alone, mother. What are you here for?" Brent asked.



"Fine, spoil all my fun." Morgan walked back to Brent. "I need to talk to you, officially." She nodded toward the gate. "Let's get to the casting so you can bind my powers and we can go inside to have this conversation."



"You're out of retirement?" Brent asked.



"I'd hardly call teaching retirement." Morgan smiled and patted Brent's arm. "But if you mean is my sabbatical from frying renegade witches over-"



"What do they want?" Brent interrupted.



"All business, I see." Morgan frowned and then cleared her throat and waved her arms in an intentionally overly dramatic flourish. "Mistress Brent, in the name of the witches' committee, I ask to enter your sanctuary." She bowed, and then curtsied, and then waved her arms dramatically again. The sarcastic smirk never left her lips. "Pretty please with a hedonistic amazon on top?" Morgan believed you should always spice up your prurient comments with a bit of refined language. Otherwise, it was just crude.



Brent took her mother by the arm. She barely managed to keep from flinching as their power mingled. She guided the older woman aside so Brigh and the other guardian's couldn't hear.



"My goodness, your energy is mess," Morgan said. She turned and placed both hands on Brent's shoulders. "See what following that muddy little river nymph has gotten you?"



"Brigit rules water, mother. She is not a river nymph," Brent whined.



"Stand up straight. Do you always slouch in front of your beguiling little amazons?" Morgan poked at Brent's hair. "Cathy, Cathy, Cathy, would it kill you to crop this braid and maybe use some mousse?"



"Mother! I need to talk to you. This is serious." Brent ran her hand over her hair and felt a blush on her cheeks.



"Yes, dear." Morgan crossed her arms over her chest. "Have no fear, I will cooperate with the binding."



"Mother, just shut up for two minutes, please?" Brent was getting desperate. Her mother was the one person she couldn't order around. One minute with her mother and Brent reverted to the insecure child she had once been. With her luck, she'd probably start getting pimples again.



Morgan nodded. "Go ahead, Cath- Brent." She used Brent's Imbolc name- and she didn't say it with a thick dose of sarcasm, which meant Morgan was actually being serious. As much as she teased Brent, she did respect her role. It was just so much fun to yank her uptight daughter's chain.



"While on the grounds, there are restricted areas. You have to respect those." Brent took both of her mother's hands. "Please, I don't want my guardians chopping you into little pieces," she added with a smile.



"Ugh!" Morgan rolled her eyes. "You and your little amazons are so draconian." Morgan squeezed Brent's hands. "I will honor your sacred space."



"And, mother, there's something else." Brent had to release her mother's hands. Their energy was mingling and Brent was feeling a bit nauseous. In fact, that energy was one of the things that Brent was most worried about. "Mother … mom, your energy … please do not touch Lady Tara … not for any reason. Please, mother, I'm begging you."



"Ah, the Wiccan formerly known as the Imbolc mage." Morgan nodded. "So it's true? She's a sensitive?"



That question unnerved Brent. "Yes…" she said slowly. She hadn't realized the committee knew that fact.



"Just like her mother," Morgan commented as she glanced up and to the right, remembering something she'd read. She let out a disgusted sigh as she remembered the details. "That whole Maclay incident was a colossal cluster fuck."



"What are you talking about?" Brent asked. Her voice was strong and dangerous. Her mother might be intimidating, but Tara brought out Brent's formidable fire. "Tell me," Brent demanded.



"Catherine?" Morgan studied Brent for a brief moment. "Oh, my god." She shook her head. "You're practically glowing." She nodded at her daughter. Morgan wasn't an accomplished reader of auras, but she could read her own child. "It's positively … maternal."



"Yes, it is." Brent wouldn't deny her love for Tara, and right now, that love was turning the elder into an angry mama bear. "What do you know?"



"Meg Maclay died of magic poisoning along with her sister," Morgan said.



"And?" Brent's voice raised.



A few feet away, Brigh and the other guardians were getting antsy. Not a good thing when the antsy women were armed to the teeth.



"And none of your business," Morgan said flatly. "Matters of the committee are none of your concern." Her eyes narrowed. "And events that we dealt with thirty years ago and sealed should stay in the past."



Brent wanted to push. She really wanted to push, as in grab her mother and throttle her until she told her what she knew. But, she knew her mother would not tell her the committee's private information. With the added stress, Brent's mind didn't calculate the math of the situation. Tara's mother had died less than twenty years earlier, not thirty.



"Fine," Brent said between gritted teeth. "Let's do the ritual and get inside." She didn't like standing outside the gate- exposed if the keepers decided to retaliate.



"The keepers have been told to stand down," Morgan said casually.



"Stop doing that!" Brent whined. She knew her mother was not a mind reader, but the older woman had always been able to read Brent's face and figure out exactly was she was thinking. It made sneaking out as a child extremely difficult.



"Cathy, you're whining. What's sweet cheeks gonna think of that?" Morgan waved a hand toward Brigh. "Suck it up and take me inside so I can gawk at all your other pretty amazons."



Brent rolled her eyes. She knew her mother was mostly heterosexual, but Morgan loved making people squirm. The idea of her mother hitting on young, nubile guardians definitely made Brent squirm, which meant Brent could look forward to off-color sapphic comments for the duration of her mother's stay. She could have gone another ten years without seeing her mother and been perfectly happy. She turned to Brigh. "The herbs?"



Brigh brought over a small satchel and opened it as Brent calmed her nerves to begin the binding spell for her mother.



*****

Brent- played by a gray haired Kate Jackson now in her early 60s. Added a few pounds of muscle, but in great shape and has the voice.



Morgan- played by a much older (78 year old) Mia Sara.

Her hair is now shock white and her eyes are still full of fire and she is in disturbingly hot shape even at 78.





Edited by: Lisa of Nine at: 5/6/03 5:33:09 pm
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Re: preview!

Postby LeatherQueen » Tue May 06, 2003 7:36 pm

Oooh, Lisa, that was a great preview!



And gee... I have NO idea who Brent's mother will hang with. Hmmm..... ;)



More intrigue with Tara's mother. Interesting...



Intrigue and innuendo... you know it's a Lisa story.



Thanks for the update/preview, Lisa! Get better soon.





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"Just a chicken giving lip service, kittens like you make me nervous." - The Delilahs

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Re: preview!

Postby bluewillowwitch » Tue May 06, 2003 7:45 pm

Hey Lisa,

Just read the preview and it was great. Can't wait t read th whole thing. This is a gret story.



bluewillowwitch

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Edited by: bluewillowwitch  at: 5/7/03 4:40:25 pm
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preview!

Postby ange04 » Tue May 06, 2003 7:59 pm

Lisa, i just wanted to tell you -- you so totally ROCK!:applause



i love Morgan hitting on Brigh!:rofl i want to be Morgan when i grow up -- i want to hit on a "sweet cheeks" when i'm her age and be able to pull it off.:pride



thanks for the update, Lisa!



ange

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Re: preview!

Postby Puff » Tue May 06, 2003 9:08 pm

Ok that was awesome I am SO looking forward to reading the whole chapter. This was so much better than what is currently on TV and I thank you that you post it so I don't have to pay attention to the programme :D Brent's mother is a real piece of work. I imagine she is going to have some fun with Willow and Tara as well. And interesting that Morgan know's all about Tara's family. Very interesting.



Cheese. It's milk that you chew.

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Re: FF: Milestones (Sequel to Unexpected Consequences)

Postby WiccansIllusion » Tue May 06, 2003 10:34 pm

Lisa,

glad to know I wasn't the only one with a crush on Mia Sara LMAO.



Anyways thanks for the tuesday night update or part of it. No I just need Bre and Dawn and I'm happy..





WI :pride



"love is touching souls" surely you touched mine 'cause part of you pours out of me in these lines from time to time-Joni Mitchell 'A case of You'

“Oh yeah,” Tara sighed in Willow’s ear. “I’m your bitch. I’m your girl. I’m your everything,” she panted. “Don’t you ever fucking forget it."- CN Winters

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Re: FF: Milestones (Sequel to Unexpected Consequences)

Postby Domaris » Wed May 07, 2003 12:49 am

Okay don't ask me how but i did something STUPID and erased my account. So I'm a newbie again :sob



Lisa.. I LOVE YOu! :flower :lol

Well.. not in the loving love way but.. I totally love all your fics :read , it's like sex! the more i have the more i want! lmao :grin



I really hope you'll be feeling better.. And that your :kitty won't bury you lol.



Tho :tara 's mood swings are worst than :willow 's. :hmm it's nice to see :tara angry tho sometimes. it's a new "facette" of her that we rarely see! nobody's perfect, and she's adorable even when she's destroying everything :flirt



So I say, :joss :boot , viva Lisa's fic!



End words: :banana :applause :dance :eatme and :moo



Domaris

"Rock my world!" - Gia

"Before you criticize someone, walk a mile in their shoes. That way, you'll be a mile from them, and you'll have their shoes" - Somebody

Edited by: Domaris at: 5/6/03 11:50:49 pm
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Re: FF: Milestones (Sequel to Unexpected Consequences)

Postby tasha » Wed May 07, 2003 3:40 am

oo more Milestones :D



Great preview... I wonder what Brent's mother's real intentions are :hmm



Hope to see more from Milestones soon :bounce



tasha

tasha
 


preview

Postby Yvette » Wed May 07, 2003 4:03 am

I may be new here but I did read the whole story :devilish :p



It's a great story. I like the fact that you keep using names from the Celtic mythology. Or something like this:

Brigh - Brigandu - Brigit etc.

Ok ok I know not the best explanation I can give but I think this isn't my day to write in English :smash just hope you get it :wink



Anyway...Love the preview! *can't wait to read the rest* :p



Yvette
 

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