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 Post subject: Re: Fanfic - How I Met Your Mother (Update: 6 JAN 12)
PostPosted: Thu Jan 12, 2012 9:35 am 
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Willow awoke feeling groggy and felt a small finger poking eagerly into the flesh of her cheek. Then her eyes focused on Mouse breathing into her face as the little girl spoke in an awed whisper, “Look!” It was a reddish brown squirrel, not four feet from where they were laying. It gave a flip of its tail, moved a couple of feet away then it turned and froze perfectly still, sitting upright with its paws raised against its chest and its beady little eyes bright with caution.

This is an awesome opening to a chapter. I remember when I was a kid and on a country walk and I saw my first squirrel running around in the open.

Is it a ‘morning’ dove or a ‘mourning’ dove? Then she lay there for a long time, listening to the melodic calls and wondering if they were a harbinger of dawn or a cry of sorrow.

Ooh, this sounds a little ominous. Definitely a harbinger of things to come.

“Willow!” Tara called and Willow’s chin jerked up as a guilty flush stole over her face. Then Tara leaned over further, giving her a lovely view of golden tanned cleavage to let her know that she was forgiven. :drool :drool

Tara's boldness in calling Faith a 'pain in the ass' really made me smile. it's good to see our favourite reprobate is having a positive effect on Tara. There would have been a time much earlier in the story when she wouldn't have said boo to a goose. Now obviously Willow and Tara are meant to be together forever but I hope that Faith and Tara's friendship remains through the years.

Towanda straightened her arm and pointed dramatically downwards. “Down there. They have hair down there.”

“Ooooh.” Mouse was amazed. “Do they braid it and wear clips and stuff?”

:lmao you've got to love Mouse's innocence as she doesn't get 'hair down there' yet.

“Race ya!” Devola took off running, followed by the others, but got sent back to change when she showed up naked to the campfire.

Why do Devolas actions not surprise me.

I think the girls are a little too young and innocent for 'Lord of the Flies'. I'm more with Tara but going for Tom Sawyer instead.

What exactly are moist biscuits? I've heard of Grahams Crackers for making S'mores with, but moist biscuits are unknown to me.

The interaction between Mouse and Faith is so sweet and shows that the tough gal is a bit of a softie underneath.

Meanwhile Mouse had been waiting her chance, determined to find out the truth and make sure that the big girls weren’t telling lies to tease her. She turned in Willow and Tara’s direction and pointed unmistakably. “Do you have hair down there?”

Both of them turned red and Mouse was immediately fascinated. Color changes in adults always meant something big.


Possibly the funniest scene ever :rofl and once again provided by the youngest in the group, I say GO MOUSE.

Tara’s voice softened, “You stuck up for Mouse and that was the right thing to do, but let’s just forget about collecting the bet.” She sensed rebellion, “I mean it. I don’t want any more fighting and I don’t want you to get in trouble for betting.” The girls nodded reluctantly, but Devola had her fingers crossed behind her back and was already making plans.

Why do I get the feeling that secret agent Indigo Kane is going to make a reappearance.

And now a couple of big YAYs. The first to the girls for getting the chance to drive again YAY

One to Faith for getting the money back from Cordelia YAY

And an extra special one to Willow for her words of love and wisdom to a broken hearted Tara YAY YAY.

I have to agree with Azirahael, this is a very cool awesome story and is definitely one of the best that I've read from any of the fanfic sites I regularly peruse. I also love the way that you tap into the emotions between the two girls as well as between Tara and Faith.

Just a last minute thought before I post. We all know how Willow and Tara are feeling with the end of camp looming but what about the others, Veronica and Mouse, Devola, Faith cos they're all going to miss the people that they care about deep down. Even if Devola tries to be a tough gal she's going to miss someone.


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 Post subject: Re: Fanfic - How I Met Your Mother (Update: 6 JAN 12)
PostPosted: Thu Jan 12, 2012 10:44 am 
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CUUUUUUTE ending to this update.

I can only imagine what Cordy will dress Willow in. Maybe Mrs. Finch will actually come through for once with the alterations. Will Faith be able to attend the dance? I feel like Willow and Tara might need her support if they are going to look horrible. ha.

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 Post subject: Re: Fanfic - How I Met Your Mother (Update: 6 JAN 12)
PostPosted: Thu Jan 12, 2012 4:52 pm 
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Hey there! Again, so sorry missed fb on the last update. Stupid real life... But anyway, this was an adorable update. :applause Very exciting!

So Faith was so cute. Being all typically "Faith tough" and then so nice to Mouse. Such a softy, that one. When no one's watching of course. And even though there wasn't a ton of alone time between Willow and Tara, the little bit that they did have was touching. Even with just their actions, you can tell how much they care about each other. It's endearing and lovely to read since you do such a good job of writing them. Of course, even though it's kind of cruel, I'm curious and possibly looking forward to the dance. Just to see how things turn out between the awful dress and Cordelia doing... well God knows what.

As always, super kudos and a fabulous job!

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 Post subject: Re: Fanfic - How I Met Your Mother (Update: 6 JAN 12)
PostPosted: Sun Jan 15, 2012 4:29 pm 
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Matty AKA Mgraham93:
:bow HAIL DIBS-MASTER! :bow Wow, you’re almost too good, ya know!

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Mouse was just so adorable in this chapter first noticing the squirrel and then asking about the hair, in a way she sort of reminds me a little of what a younger Willow would have been like with the adorable naïveté
Good catch! :applause Mouse does share some innocent Willow-ish curiosity. Willow is also Mouse’s favorite counselor (Towanda’s too, btw).

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I loved the moment when Tara told the girls not to bet especially as both their reactions were funny Willow not wanting to and Faith having a plan in three words. "Want, take, have." I'm glad they got the money off Bitch C this time
I think you caught the essential truth of Faith’s Plan! :lmao Nice work!

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Oh God Mrs Finch her craziness is like a trainwreck everytime she shows up
Whoa, Matty! You’re three for three right now! :applause :bow :applause You ever gonna miss?

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Also Just thought thanks to the girls they have 'the Kitten' army, from Mrs Finch and Bitch C they'll get the 'bad wardrobe' and of course they are 'The Witches'.
Make that four for four! Incredible! As always, thanks for reading. :bounce :party :eatme


Maggie AKA leonhart17:
So glad you're reading - Thanks! :pinky :banana :bounce This installment was like trying to do water ballet in quicksand – delighted I survived, even if it isn’t lovely! I’ll be checking out more of your fics. Enjoy a virtual flower as a thank you gift for sharing them! :flower

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Faith being a secret softy is fun! Glad she got her money from Cordy but I hope queen bitch doesn't use that somehow to hurt them.
Cordy will not say a thing about betting to anyone. So ease your mind there! And Queen C does NOT appear in this episode at all. So enjoy!


Zampsa19752001:
Glad you liked the Finn-ish touch! :pinky :party :pinky

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I really like softy Faith, I hope she doesn't change too much when she becomes s Slayer and meets Buffy.
Big changes in store! But hopefully they will be (mostly) of the good!

Glad you liked Mouse’s ‘hair’ questions. I remember my own amazement as a child when hearing some out-of-context tid-bits!

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I'm truly worried about what Bitch C is going to make Willow wear, but Tara wearing Finchmeister's clothing abomination and Willow wearing something hideous they can spend the evening alone without interference from the boys...
And that’s exactly Willow’s point. Dress info coming up next post – PROMISE!


Richard AKA Azirahael:
First, thanks for all the loving encouragement. I got a little misty-eyed, too and also :blush so I didn’t quote them but they landed right in my heart and that counts! :love

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Ok, story stuff:
Faith is bad ass!
I abolutely love her with the kids.
I can't wait to see her in Sunnydale, we will have ourselves a time!
And i loved LOVED how she handled cordelia, sensible, mature and just threatening enough to get the point across.
Do. Not. Fuck. With. Faith.
Glad you enjoyed Faith! I love her. She doesn’t appear in this post but will be at the dance – count on it!

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Oh Willow, you are a shining light!
Glad you loved her efforts to comfort Tara and make her lover smile again. Willow IS incredibly dear and wonderful. A lot of unexpected things happen to our favorite redhead, so stay tuned . . .

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Every time i read your story I feel like I'm stepping into sunlight.
I am incredibly, deeply touched and yes, Kate (BeMyDeputy) was kind enough to point out your signature during a chat session. Really warmed my heart. Can hardly wait for your epic to start posting, :bounce hope you can still beta for me! But if you can’t, I’ll understand.

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Mmmm. Nice and snuggly and here’s a flower for you, too. :flower


Allie AKA Babbles4Twillow:
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ETA: Lookie! I'm extra-flamey! Yippee!
:banana :eatme :pinky :bounce – CONGRATULATIONS!!! (I’m ‘gay now’ big relief to my wife! :grin)

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Great chapter! The wake-up was sad and sweet. My favorite part, hands down, was the "hair down there" - hair clippy Mousy awesomeness!

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Finch should be shot - preferably with an elephant tranq gun.
This posts award for freakin’ hilarious! :rofl :lmao :laugh :lol Heyyyy, Kittens! Anybody got a spare elephant tranq gun I can borrow? :devil


Wimpy:
I’ve thought about their separation and it won’t be pretty. But this IS the KB (YAY!!!) so that should ease your mind! :grin As always, thanks for reading! :flower

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The whole celebration was just so much fun to read. Took me back to my much, much younger days of tree houses and playing in the outdoors. Those girls will take some wonderful memories home with them.
So glad you liked it! :bounce :pinky :eatme I loved tree-houses and swimming in the river and crazy swings, too. Definitely channeling some child-hood joy. Really happy it brought that up for you, too!

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Mouse learning about the hair had me cracking up, and wanting to give them hair clips for down there was just F-ing hilarious.
More Mouse-ian misadventure in store – brace yourself!

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And poor Tara and that stinky dress. Oh my. I'm sure she'll still be beautiful to Willow, but it breaks my heart because she wanted to be pretty for Willow.
Willow will NEVER let Tara forget that she (Tara) is the most beautiful woman in the world. Some bumps in the road, but happiness will ensue! Dance coming up in the next post, but read this one anyway since I believe you’ll like it and it’s based on a real-life humiliating moment: Mine!


Lexi AKA True_Love:
First off, REMODELLING ROCKED MY WORLD!!! I know you were super-busy bordering on crazy working on that post, so I’m touched you’ve taken time to f/b on mine.

Glad the foreshadowing on “mourning dove/morning dove” worked for you! I honestly felt that it was “mourning dove” as a child, because of the plaintive yet beautiful sound.

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Willow pouted and lifted her head in the direction of Bettina and Mouse, “They stole my spot!”

Tara nodded, her full lips doing their best to imitate a Willow-pout, “Mine, too.” Then her lips quirked up and she allowed herself the pleasure of brushing a bit of Willow’s hair back behind her ear and stealing a touch along her lover’s cheek

You didn't write it, but I imagine Tara's hand pausing on Willow's cheek for a just a moment, feeling the delicate skin of her face against the coarseness of her finger tips. Ahhh.
Love what you added – so beautiful! Had to share that quote! :applause

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Love this! Faith thinks she is so cool and knows exactly what to expect from people, then BAM. WTF? Wasn't expecting that. Love unpredictable Tara.
Yeah, Tara telling Faith that she’s a pain in the ass is basically a friendly return to Faith calling her out over her treatment of Willow. They are truly beginning to let each other in as friends. Love how you do that so powerfully in your fic!

Biscuits ARE nummy! Roasted biscuits are an old family favorite for us. Easy to make – just get those tubes of biscuits and you just take ‘em out and make the magic. Only takes about 5 minutes which can be forever when you’re a kid, lol! Seriously, keep it in mind! We usually just use sugar and cinnamon but I like to sneak in nutmeg just because it sounds like a fun spice!

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Matty called it on Faith's attitude toward the bet. "Want, take, have." That's our Faith.
Matty nailed it, no doubt!

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I loved Willow's attempt to use humor to distract Tara from thinking about the horror of the dress. Right now the best thing those two can do is lean on one another.
Completely agree with you! And thanks for all your help and encouragement on my stuff! It really helps!


Rick AKA willowtaralover:
Great to hear from you! Looking forward to more Piratical Adventures! Oh, see post above about moist biscuits – they ARE great!!! Mmmm!

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This is an awesome opening to a chapter. I remember when I was a kid and on a country walk and I saw my first squirrel running around in the open.
Loved your response to Mouse’s excitement. I remember the same feeling when I was little and now I see squirrells alot and STILL get happy when I do.

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“Willow!” Tara called and Willow’s chin jerked up as a guilty flush stole over her face. Then Tara leaned over further, giving her a lovely view of golden tanned cleavage to let her know that she was forgiven. :drool :drool
One drool icon for each breast, eh? :wink Okay, I almost never quote icons but yours were just too funny – thanks! :laugh

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I think the girls are a little too young and innocent for 'Lord of the Flies'. I'm more with Tara but going for Tom Sawyer instead.
:bow Hail to thee, O Wise Lord of Literature! The boys in “Tom Sawyer” go naked on their island adventure, too so that’s a good catch! I went with “Huckleberry Finn” because they also go naked AND to pay tribute to a certain Finn of my acquaintance (no relation to Riley). Kudos again for the sharp eye!

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Meanwhile Mouse had been waiting her chance, determined to find out the truth and make sure that the big girls weren’t telling lies to tease her. She turned in Willow and Tara’s direction and pointed unmistakably. “Do you have hair down there?”

Both of them turned red and Mouse was immediately fascinated. Color changes in adults always meant something big.

Possibly the funniest scene ever and once again provided by the youngest in the group, I say GO MOUSE.
Stay tuned, The Education of Mouse continues in this post. :blush

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Why do I get the feeling that secret agent Indigo Kane is going to make a reappearance.
*YOINK* That idea has been officially used – thank you for solving a story problem for me! :applause :applause :applause It will come up in the next few posts so stay tuned and THANKS!!!

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We all know how Willow and Tara are feeling with the end of camp looming but what about the others, Veronica and Mouse, Devola, Faith cos they're all going to miss the people that they care about deep down. Even if Devola tries to be a tough gal she's going to miss someone.
You are dead right! I’m working on that and appreciate the reminder!


fhiwda:
Loved your “CUUUUUUTE ending to this update.” It made me dance for joy=> :pinky

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I can only imagine what Cordy will dress Willow in.
No, I don’t believe you can. It will be something unlike your wildest imagination – now you have to tell me if I’m right or you’re right. But that will come up in the next post. Stay tuned!

As to Faith’s presence – COUNT ON IT!!! And thanks so much for the feedback! :party :grin :bounce


Jessica AKA beautiful_love:
No apologies needed! Love your f/b and am always glad to get it! :eatme :banana :eatme

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So Faith was so cute. Being all typically "Faith tough" and then so nice to Mouse. Such a softy, that one. When no one's watching of course.
You nailed it! She is opening up, but there is a long ways to go and sometimes it even scares her inside and she has to pull back.

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And even though there wasn't a ton of alone time between Willow and Tara, the little bit that they did have was touching. Even with just their actions, you can tell how much they care about each other. It's endearing and lovely to read since you do such a good job of writing them.
So glad you like them in this story; I feel the same way about how you write them, so thanks! :clap For me, the biggest challenge is taking their grown up banter and trying to take it back in time. Glad it works for you! *sigh of relief!*

I hear your eagerness for the dance and I want to get there, too! The madness will begin in my next post and be in full swing by the one after that. Meanwhile, hope the title of this one catches your eye and gets you reading! :bounce


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 Post subject: Re: Fanfic - How I Met Your Mother (Update: 6 JAN 12)
PostPosted: Sun Jan 15, 2012 4:30 pm 
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Title: How I Met Your Mother*
Author: Ariel
Email: blaziak@yahoo.com
Feedback: All feedback welcomed, specific input appreciated, harsh on me via PM
Rating: PG-13 for naughty words, sex education and W/T love. Ratings will change depending on content.
Disclaimer: I don't own these characters, but I love to take them for a ride!
Summary: A/U before season 1, the summer after Willow's freshman year with a large dose of Queen Cordelia at her bitchy best and teen-aged angst.
Special Thanks to Kate BeMyDeputy: For advice on mood and finding the heart of chapter, also for personal encouragement and the example of her own writing.

AUTHOR’S NOTE: I am so grateful for the feedback I get! It honestly lights me up inside AND I get great ideas that I use and credit to others. Feedback is the life-blood to many of us KB writers. So, here is a ONE TIME ONLY OFFER – if you only have one piece of f/b in you this week then skip me and give it our newest writer, JustAKitty OR to ash for one of her stories OR Matty OR Rick OR to the New Year’s Stories OR other stories I have accidentally missed OR to True_Love who has worked her ‘moon’ off on her last couple of posts! Because a hit count on a story is only a number (and that matters, too) but it may just mean someone’s children have time on their hands and are hitting the keyboard over and over again. Feedback, on the other hand, is human. Seriously, I LOVE feedback! But share the wealth and yes, I will pray that some comes back to me. So happy reading and feedback giving on the Board!


*no connection to the sit-com of the same name


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Tara raised her head and managed a watery smile. Then Willow caught her hands and kissed them. “But Tara, it doesn’t matter. None of it matters.” Willow smiled in a kind of amazed triumph. “Because we love each other. And you’re beautiful. And no dress in the world can stop me from looking at you and loving you.” She grabbed Tara’s hands, kissed them, and raised eager eyes to meet her lover’s gaze. “We’ve won! Because we’re beautiful to each other and no one can take away our being in love.”



Part 55: Love, Lunch and when Naked isn’t Nice


The lunch bell sounded and they clutched each other even more tightly, then sighed and moved apart, still sitting on their bed together.


Willow offered Tara their stolen toilet paper roll and Tara tore off a bit and mopped up her tears. “Th-thanks, Sweetie.”


“Welcome.” Willow brushed a thumb gently over Tara’s cheek and Tara yearned towards the caress, “Are you okay, baby?”


Tara nodded, touched by Willow’s concern, and managed a smile, “I’m ready for lunch.” She paused, “I think crying w-works up an appetite.”


Willow thought that over. “Maybe it does.” She continued thinking then brightened, “So does ‘melting’!”


Tara sighed, “It seems like forever since we were together.”


Willow swallowed. “I know. Time. Willow’s Theory of Sexy-Relativity. Together time becoming an issue.”


“Do you remember at the party? How you just grabbed me by the ears and pulled me in and kissed me?”


Willow nodded at the memory and the ends of her mouth curled up in a satisfied smile.


“Um, my ears are kind of lonely.”


Willow was grinning, but her voice was solicitous. “They are? Then you may need another visit to Rosenberg’s Emporium of Ear Tickling.” Then she leaned in and attacked Tara’s ears with a sweet barrage of kisses, licks and nibbles that set Tara shivering and giggling. “How do they feel now?”


Tara ducked her head and peeked up smiling through the curtain of her hair, “Doctor, I think that they still need some pulling . . . “


Willow pretended to examine Tara’s ears. “Aaaah, yes. A clear case of anti-pull-itus! Hold on, this won’t hurt a bit.” Then she cupped an ear in each hand and tugged their faces together and their lips met in the soft press of a silken kiss. Then Willow breathed and opened up to taste the sweet glide of Tara’s tongue inside her mouth. Then she moved her tongue against her lover’s and felt Tara’s warm gasps of pleasure making her nipples tingle and igniting a slow fire deep within her. Everything stopped, there was only each other.


Then the five minute “stragglers bell” rang and they pulled apart breathing deeply, with hair mussed and lips swollen with kisses. There was another moment, the return from their world to the world of bells and duties. Then the spell was broken and Tara jumped to her feet while Willow giggled and pointed at Tara’s unbuttoned shirt.


Tara stared first at her shirt and then at her lover, “How did THAT happen?”


Willow shrugged with an exaggerated attempt at innocence. “Magic?”


Then Tara pointed to Willow’s T-shirt, which was shoved up to her neck and nodded smugly at Willow’s amazed face, “Yes. There was plenty of magic.”


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Mouse pointed, proud to be the first to see their counselors, “There they are!”


Willow and Tara hurried through the lunch line and were soon sitting with their girls.


Bettina frowned at Tara, “Where were you?”


“Um, busy.”


Bettina was still grumpy, “I missed you!”


Tara patted her shoulder and smiled at her and Bettina finally smiled back.


A moment later Carly and Jennilee walked over.


“Hi y’all.” Jennilee offered a friendly wave and Mouse began to kneel on the bench, attempting to edge closer and get within poking range.


Carly continued, oblivious to Mouse’s maneuverings, “You owe us big time. Jen and I covered the before lunch rides, so don’t even think about getting to watch the barn tomorrow night during the dance!”


Tara sighed, “Okay.”


Willow widened her eyes hopefully and Carly shot back, “Oh no! Don’t give me puppy dog eyes.” She glanced at Tara, “You are wearing Mrs. Finch’s dress-tastrophe and you,” her eyes lit on Willow, “are getting my heartfelt prayers. No idea what Queen C will lay on you, but I’m serious about the prayers.”


Willow nodded and grinned weakly, “Title for tomorrow ‘Dress-y Death’ or ‘Fashion to Die For’.” She shrugged, “We’ll get it either way.”


Carly nodded, then glanced over at Tara whose face was hidden behind her hair, and her voice softened, “Tara? I’m really sorry. I wish I could do something. Hey, want me to talk to Mrs. Finch for you?”


Tara shook her head wordlessly and Willow took her hand and squeezed it then turned to face Carly. “It’s okay. We’re going to look back and laugh at this some day.” Then she slid an arm around Tara and pulled her close, “Right, baby?”


Tara lifted her head and smiled, “W-we’ll dance together,” she said quietly, “That’s all that counts.”


Then Carly and Jennilee returned to their respective tables while Tara turned her attention to Mouse, well aware of the little girl’s failed attempt to get closer to Jennilee. “Mouse,” Tara said gently, “Come sit with me on the porch for a minute.”


Veronica tensed. “If Mouse has to sit on the porch, then I do, too!”


“W-what’s wrong, Veronica?”


“It’s my fault she’s in trouble. I’m her best friend and I should’ve looked out for her.”


Tara looked into Veronica’s eyes. “Mouse isn’t in trouble, but I need to explain some things to her.”


Veronica remained belligerent. “What things?”


“Um, ‘hair down there’ and some of the things that are okay to do and some of the things that are not okay to do.”


“Oooh!” Devola was clearly fascinated, “I wanna hear!”


Debbie piped up, “Me, too!” and Connie nodded agreement while the other girls leaned in to listen.


Tara felt herself blush, but knew that it was time for a little talk. “Okay, let’s all sit on the porch after lunch.” Then she heard a giggle and saw Willow blinking earnestly at her, “Can I come, too?”


Tara grinned, “Y-you better. I am NOT doing this alone!”


In a depressingly short time later everyone was finished with lunch and hurried t stack their plates and run out to the porch while Willow slid an arm around Tara’s waist and got an answering squeeze in return.


Then they sat in a clump on the far corner of the dining hall verandah and Tara faced nine pairs of curious eyes. “L-let’s talk about ‘hair down there’ first. It isn’t long, it’s mostly short and curly. Um, Hallie doesn’t shave under her arms so it’s kind of short like that. It can be different colors and the color of someone’s hair down there is private.”


“What’s that mean?” Mouse looked questioningly at her.


Devola jumped in to help, “’Private’ means I’ll slam the door in your face if you try to come in my room without asking!”


There was nods of agreement from older sisters then Tara continued. “Right now ‘private’ means it’s your business. You don’t have to talk about it or answer questions about it.” She hesitated then used her hands to indicate her breasts, bottom and buttocks. “These are private, too. You can touch yourself but other people shouldn’t.”


Willow jumped in, “If somebody touches you there or in ways that make you feel bad or scared inside, then you should tell someone. A grown-up like your parents or a teacher, because those are wrong touches.”


Lisa, Connie and Towanda nodded, remembering talks from their own parents.


“Hey!” Heads turned to stare at Devola.


“I got a sliver in my butt,” she heard a shocked gasp from Kate, Debbie and Mouse and continued, “Okay, ‘moon’! Mom took it out. That wasn’t wrong!”


“That's true, being hurt is different,” Tara said firmly. “Your parents or the school nurse or a doctor or someone safe can help when you’re hurt. But your body is your body, it’s your special thing and you h-have to keep it safe.” She patted Mouse gently on the back, “So it’s not okay to poke someone on their breast and—“


Bettina spoke up, “My brothers say, ‘boobs’.”


Connie nodded, “And my cousin Ben says, ‘tits’ or ‘titties’.” She giggled and blushed, “And once I heard him say ‘bodacious ta-tas’!”


There were some giggles as well as some uncertain looks about all the new words.


Willow grinned at their confusion. “Those are kind of breast-y nicknames. But breasts are like your Halloween candy, just for you.”


Debbie was confused, “I trade my candy for my kid sister’s all the time.” She giggled, “I give her the yucky stuff like raisins and candy corn and take all the chocolate stuff!”


Bettina jumped in. “My brothers and I trade everything and eat it all together. It’s more fun that way!”


Willow blushed and attempted to recover, “Okay, so not with the Halloween candy analogy. Forget that part, but those places we talked about are private and they shouldn’t be poked.”


Mouse’s eyes filled, “Was I a bad girl?”


Tara pulled her onto her lap. “No, Sweetie. You were just playing.” She lowered her face so that she met the little girl’s big brown eyes, “But now you’re a big girl and we’re telling you big girl things so that you know what to do.”


Mouse’s eyes got even bigger. “Oh.” Then she wiggled happily and sat up straight on Tara’s lap. “I’m a big girl!”


Tara hugged her and kissed her forehead. “Yes you are and I can tell you another secret.”


“What?”


Tara cuddled Mouse close, grateful to hide her face against the little girl’s head. “People don’t wear clips on their hair down there and since it’s short it isn’t braided like long hair is.” She kissed Mouse again. “So now you know some big girl stuff.”


Mouse nodded proudly, “I know everything now!”


Devola had to ask, “So why did you poke Tara and Jennilee?”


Tara blushed, “We’re finished—“


“I wanted to know if they felt like jell-o.”


Bettina, Devola and a few others leaned forward curiously and Mouse answered their unspoken inquiry. “Tara didn’t feel like jell-o but she went ‘boing-boing bouncey’ so I liked it and did it again and Tara turned red and Willow always laughed and I liked making Willow laugh.”


Now Willow raised a red face to match her lover’s red face while Mouse rattled on, clearly enjoying being the center of attention.


“And THEN I wanted to see if Jennilee would go ‘boing-boing bouncey’ too.”


“Did she?” That was from Devola


Mouse pouted. “I don’t know! Everyone went crazy and the tea got spilled and Jennilee yelled and I don’t remember the poking part.”


Devola was helpful, “So try it—“


Tara found her voice, “Oh NO! We are done with breast poking, prodding, and any other sort of h-hands-on research!”


Then she saw Willow pouting and felt the laughter burst free from inside her and soon all of them were laughing together.


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Tara and Faith had come in after the first ride of the afternoon, both sweating from the heat. Faith headed for the kitchen to grab a snack and Tara met Willow in the shadowy barn.


Willow smiled, extending their favorite metal cup, and watched the muscles in her lover’s throat moving as Tara drank gratefully then handed it back. Then Willow met her lover’s eyes, turned the cup and placed her lips over the imprint of Tara’s and drank deeply.


A moment later their eyes locked: green into blue, blue into green. Silence. Dust motes, suddenly gold in a shaft of sunlight; Tara’s finger, tracing a path up the condensation of the silvery cup and caressing Willow’s neck. Willow’s shivery gasp at the cold, then Tara’s mouth warming her there and their lurching creature-like walk because they didn’t want to separate while they found a place to sit; a moment’s laughter at their combined awkwardness then sitting down on a hay-bale and sinking down into their world.


Then there were voices outside and their hands, graceful and sure in love-making, yanked at zippers and fumbled at buttons. They resumed their duties: girls and horses and encouragement, shovels and wheel-barrows and work; but they felt the pull of a subtle tide, the fearful truth that what they loved beyond anything in their young lives was slipping between their fingers, falling away, to be banished by the relentless flow of time.


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Next it was swimming and Tara endured a peculiar form of embarrassment as Mouse pointed to her breasts and announced, “I’m not poking! I’m not poking! See! I know now!”


Willow attempted to remonstrate with the little girl, but her fits of laughter made intelligible speech difficult and Tara decided that action had to be taken. She launched herself at Willow, toppling her lover into the water and stood back as Willow emerged blowing water from behind a curtain of red hair plastered against her face.


“Oooh, Tara! All with the sneaky! You are so going down! Oh no! I said, ‘going down’! Wait! Kids don’t know what means, I’m okay! Then her mind became distracted by a series of mental pictures. ’Going down’ in the water? But I’d drown and I’d miss that Tara-flavor goodness and—Never mind! Now to launch my—


But Tara had not hesitated and flung herself against Willow and brought her down for the second time.


Willow sprang up, vengeance on her mind. They circled, arms out, each alert for an advantage while their girls formed a ring around them yelping with a mixture of worry and delight. Willow rushed at Tara and they grappled. Willow tried to push Tara over, but Tara weighed about twenty five pounds more and she also had the benefit of having wrestled with her older brother. Tara tried to trip Willow, but the smaller girl was unbelievably fast and wiggled free. They began breathing hard, but were both determined to see it through and the battle raged as they splashed and struggled.


Mouse, meanwhile, became increasingly upset. She didn’t like seeing her beloved counselors fighting. Everyone else seemed to like it but she knew that fighting was wrong. She squared her shoulders, in an unconscious imitation of Towanda then yelled, “Stop fighting!” Then she used both hands and grabbed the back of Willow’s bikini bottoms to hold her back just as Willow flung herself forward in a racing dive, hoping to use the extra force to topple Tara over. Willow felt a terrifying tug in her nether regions and screamed.


Willow came up wild-eyed and sputtering while a shocked Mouse held up Willow’s bikini bottoms.


Devola pointed and yelled, “You stole her bottoms!” and a terrified Mouse flung them away from her while the whole camp seemed to pause and watch them arc into the air and splash down about ten feet away.


Willow had scrambled backwards and was waist deep in the lake, hunched over and covering herself with her hands while Tara charged through the water to rescue the bottoms and return them to her lover.


Willow snatched at them frantically then froze, meeting the stares of the entire camp.


Then Tara stepped squarely in front of Willow to shield her from view and turned her back to allow Willow privacy to change. Then Bettina and Towanda followed Tara’s lead and lined up on either side of her and the rest of the girls scrambled to join the line and support their counselor.


An instant later Tara felt a tap at her back and heard Willow whisper, “I’m okay.” Tara moved aside and all the girls gathered around Willow, feeling sympathetic but not sure what to say.


Devola tried to break the awkward silence. “You know,” she said conversationally, “’Moon’ is probably a good name for ‘em. Only maybe say ‘moons’ because they’re like two round, pale—“


“Devola!” Tara said firmly, “No discussion of moons, stars, or other h-heavenly bodies! I mean it.”


Devola looked a little hurt. “I was just going to say that nobody has to ask about what color her hair—“


“Stop right now!” Devola froze, there was an edge to Tara's voice she had never heard before. Then Devola nodded and swallowed and Tara turned away to lessen the scrutiny directed at the little girl. “Okay, everyone out of the water. Go dry off and we’ll be right there.” She patted Devola on the shoulder as she passed and saw the little girl smile again then she turned to her lover.


“Sweetie, are you okay?”


“Yeah. In a kind of humiliated, why-can’t-I-die and now I’m a flasher and I’ll-never-live-this-down kind of way.” She met Tara’s eyes and suddenly found herself enfolded in a big hug with kisses landing on the top of her head.


“It’s over, Sweetie. It’s embarrassing, but people will forget soon, you’ll see.”


Willow gulped and nodded against Tara’s neck. “Know what, baby?”


Tara gave her another hug, “What?”


“’I love you’ just isn’t enough. You know what I mean?”


Tara rubbed reassuring circles on her lover’s back, her voice tender. “I do. I really do.”


Willow sighed contentedly and felt herself relaxing in her lover’s arms. “I knew you would.” Then she straightened and the two lovers walked out of the water hand in hand.


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dibs (sorry about delayed feedback)

I really liked the structure of the chapter, love scene followed by amusing camp antics and then repeat.

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Willow shrugged with an exaggerated attempt at innocence. “Magic?”

Then Tara pointed to Willow’s T-shirt, which was shoved up to her neck and nodded smugly at Willow’s amazed face, “Yes. There was plenty of magic.”
There's so many types of magic in this fic their love, the camp magic with riding midnight at midnight and witchey magic

They handled the body talk really well. Mouse was completely adorable at the end with "I know everything now." and then her reasons for the "hands on research" were even more adorable.

Then Willow's response to Tara stopping the kids carrying out further research was just great.

but they felt the pull of a subtle tide, the fearful truth that what they loved beyond anything in their young lives was slipping between their fingers, falling away, to be banished by the relentless flow of time.

Mouse trying to stop the fighting and the was extremely funny though poor Willow.

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Hi there! Well, another fun, and very educational update. I really loved the way Tara talked to the girls about the grown up stuff, but on their level. She's so good at that. I remember having the "bad touch" talk with my son when he was little, oh, about a million times.

And let me guess, the de-pantsing was the real-life incident you spoke of. Oh, you have my sympathies buddy. I can relate, as I learned the hard way not to wear a 2-piece suit when going off the diving board. Although, I gotta know - did someone actually make the "moon" and "hair" comments when it happened to you?

Stolen moments in the barn are nice, but our poor girls need some way to get some serious alone time soon. Can you please fix that for us soon? Pretty, pretty please?

Can't wait for the next update!

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Julie,

You are such an incredibly kind and generous person. Karmically speaking, whatever you give out will undoubtedly come back to you. So watch out for a ton of goodness coming your way. :)

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Tara stared first at her shirt and then at her lover, “How did THAT happen?”

Willow shrugged with an exaggerated attempt at innocence. “Magic?”

Then Tara pointed to Willow’s T-shirt, which was shoved up to her neck and nodded smugly at Willow’s amazed face, “Yes. There was plenty of magic.”

Hmm, hinting at something maybe...sequelish. Nice use of cannon.
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Tara looked into Veronica’s eyes. “Mouse isn’t in trouble, but I need to explain some things to her.”

Veronica remained belligerent. “What things?”

“Um, ‘hair down there’ and some of the things that are okay to do and some of the things that are not okay to do.”

“Oooh!” Devola was clearly fascinated, “I wanna hear!”

Debbie piped up, “Me, too!” and Connie nodded agreement while the other girls leaned in to listen.

Tara felt herself blush, but knew that it was time for a little talk. “Okay, let’s all sit on the porch after lunch.” Then she heard a giggle and saw Willow blinking earnestly at her, “Can I come, too?”

Tara grinned, “Y-you better. I am NOT doing this alone!”

Ugh, having the "Private Parts" discussion is the worst. No matter how you prepare, they always hit you up with unexpected questions. Tara was gentle, age appropriately informative, and mature throughout the discussion. Willow on the other hand, I'm not so sure that Tara wouldn't have benefitted having the conversation without her. She was like one big kid. Hilarious. And Devola, little devil, "So try it-" followed later by the announcement and description of Willow's bare nether regions in the water. Tara managed her temper well. Not so sure that I would have.
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“Sweetie, are you okay?”

“Yeah. In a kind of humiliated, why-can’t-I-die and now I’m a flasher and I’ll-never-live-this-down kind of way.” She met Tara’s eyes and suddenly found herself enfolded in a big hug with kisses landing on the top of her head.

Perfect characterization. Great job.

Looking forward to the dance in the next post. Keep up the great work.

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Aww, lots of embarrassment for them this time! Little kids are funny though, thinking they know everything! :D

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Yay for great update-y goodness... I'm glad that Tara did the private parts talk to the girls... Poor Willow for her unintentional flashing... I truly hope that they manage to have lots of quality alone time despite what Finchmeister & Bitch C throws at them...

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Poor Mouse. I mean...yeah Embarrassing for Willow, but she'll get over it. Mouse has to feel horrible. Luckily she has the most understanding "counselers" at the camp. W and T will listen and work through with the little girl, but still. I hate seeing that horrible look on the youngsters faces.

I love how you randomly throw in things that are definite possibilities at a camp.

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Hey Ariel! Loved the update!

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Willow’s Theory of Sexy-Relativity.


Now with theories like that, I might have enjoyed science more back in the day. There unconscious semi-disrobing was quite cute. Those pesky hands, having a mind of their own... tsk tsk.
Tara's discussion with the girls was quite well written too. You know, I know I've said before how well you write Willow and Tara but I don't think I've ever told you how well you write the campers too. It's been a long time since I've been around a large group of little kids but if memory serves, you're dead on in your descriptions of them and their actions. It's pretty amazing.

The middle portion of the story after the riding and before the swimming was just... I don't know how to even put it into words. Incredibly well written with very little actually said but an incredible amount of context. It was almost haunting and I love it.

Of course in the end I felt so bad for poor Willow. Damn bikini bottoms. They really are a huge water hazard. But Tara's protectiveness made my heart beat just a little faster and actually say 'Aww' out loud. So sweet. And then to end on this:

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“’I love you’ just isn’t enough. You know what I mean?”


Tara rubbed reassuring circles on her lover’s back, her voice tender. “I do. I really do.”


Willow sighed contentedly and felt herself relaxing in her lover’s arms. “I knew you would.” Then she straightened and the two lovers walked out of the water hand in hand.


Bravo. Stupendous job.

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Then Tara pointed to Willow’s T-shirt, which was shoved up to her neck and nodded smugly at Willow’s amazed face, “Yes. There was plenty of magic.”


Do you hear that? That's the sound of my mouth foaming. I agree with True_love in hoping this might be..implying things, and that the combined power of our wishes will actually do something.

As for the no-no touches talk, I'm glad that these girls could get it from someone they respect and adore, if not from their parents. Or say, a teacher that you REALLY hate. Eugh. I love that, given how young W/T are in your story, there is a sense of maturity here in that they know what is appropriate, know what needs to be done, and can agree on something as a team. They love eachother so much and it's so gah cute!

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Another stellar update!
I'm downgrading you to 'Stellar' from 'tore my heart out of my chest and blew up the galaxy' :)

Everything i could say has already been said, but i'll add my bit: visual poetry, with words!

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A moment later their eyes locked: green into blue, blue into green. Silence. Dust motes, suddenly gold in a shaft of sunlight; Tara’s finger, tracing a path up the condensation of the silvery cup and caressing Willow’s neck. Willow’s shivery gasp at the cold, then Tara’s mouth warming her there and their lurching creature-like walk because they didn’t want to separate while they found a place to sit; a moment’s laughter at their combined awkwardness then sitting down on a hay-bale and sinking down into their world.


i feel terribly inadequate in your presence, much as i would in the presence of Mozart. and no wonder!

So i'll say something different: I feel sorry for Xander.

Poor baby! all the time he's known Willow, she's doted on him, the lovely but dim man.
and now with Tara in the picture, it's going to be like an eclipse of the sun.

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they felt the pull of a subtle tide, the fearful truth that what they loved beyond anything in their young lives was slipping between their fingers, falling away, to be banished by the relentless flow of time.

Man, i FELT that, the dawning of loss. Terrifying.

and when she gets back from camp without Tara, she's going to be a mess.
it would be like losing a limb, or your heart.
we need not fear, blue eyes will meet green again, as inevitably as the sun rises, but it's still going to be heartbreaking to witness.
I hope Xander shows a flicker of wisdom and is there for Willow to lean on, and not act like a clueless spod.
This is his chance to be the rock she needs to lean on, to be a real friend. i hope he doesn't blow it.

Keep up the good work!
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“Welcome.” Willow brushed a thumb gently over Tara’s cheek and Tara yearned towards the caress, “Are you okay, baby?”

Hate to be nitpicky right at the start of this feedback but are you sure about Tara yearning towards the caress and not lean???

I'm just loving the cuteness of Willow here. First there's Willow's Theory of Sexy-Relativity then we get Rosenberg's Emporium of Ear Tickling. How do you do this Ariel, even in stories like 'Wedding Bells' I never made her as cute as this.

Willow pretended to examine Tara’s ears. “Aaaah, yes. A clear case of anti-pull-itus! Hold on, this won’t hurt a bit.” Then she cupped an ear in each hand and tugged their faces together and their lips met in the soft press of a silken kiss. Then Willow breathed and opened up to taste the sweet glide of Tara’s tongue inside her mouth. Then she moved her tongue against her lover’s and felt Tara’s warm gasps of pleasure making her nipples tingle and igniting a slow fire deep within her. Everything stopped, there was only each other...

...they pulled apart breathing deeply, with hair mussed and lips swollen with kisses. There was another moment, the return from their world to the world of bells and duties. Then the spell was broken and Tara jumped to her feet while Willow giggled and pointed at Tara’s unbuttoned shirt.

Tara stared first at her shirt and then at her lover, “How did THAT happen?”

Willow shrugged with an exaggerated attempt at innocence. “Magic?”

Then Tara pointed to Willow’s T-shirt, which was shoved up to her neck and nodded smugly at Willow’s amazed face, “Yes. There was plenty of magic.”


Ah, sweet love.


Bettina frowned at Tara, “Where were you?”

“Um, busy.”

Bettina was still grumpy, “I missed you!”


Why do I get the feeling that Bettina could cause trouble if she learned that Willow and Tara were in a relationship, out of jealousy.

How cool a character has Veronica become. A figure of much dislike and mockery right at the start now she's become someone who is willing to take a share of the blame for believing that Mouse is in serious trouble. Hard to believe she's related to Cordy. I'd really like to see Veronica being dragged into one of Devola's madcap schemes.

I have to genuinely give respect to Willow and Tara for willingly talking to the girls in their care about their bodies. I especially like the way that they don't try and dumb it down for Mouse but talk to the girls as adults. I and the good Cap'n salute you Ariel for an amazing piece of writing in this scene.

I adored the cuteness of Mouse as she explained why she poked Tara's boobs, especially when she said it had made Willow laugh and she liked making Willow laugh. Just so sweet and nice.

Mouse, meanwhile, became increasingly upset. She didn’t like seeing her beloved counselors fighting. Everyone else seemed to like it but she knew that fighting was wrong. She squared her shoulders, in an unconscious imitation of Towanda then yelled, “Stop fighting!” Then she used both hands and grabbed the back of Willow’s bikini bottoms to hold her back just as Willow flung herself forward in a racing dive, hoping to use the extra force to topple Tara over. Willow felt a terrifying tug in her nether regions and screamed.

Willow came up wild-eyed and sputtering while a shocked Mouse held up Willow’s bikini bottoms.

Devola pointed and yelled, “You stole her bottoms!” and a terrified Mouse flung them away from her while the whole camp seemed to pause and watch them arc into the air and splash down about ten feet away.


Ha ha ha ha ha ha, :rofl Oh poor Mouse worrying so much about her counselors fighting so to stop it she removes, accidentally of course, Willow's bikini bottoms. No offence to my favourite redhead but I assumed that Willow would be too embarrased by her body to wear a bikini and go for an all in one, though she does have a yummy tummy.

Mouse must really hate herself though but she has Veronica to help comfort her and her counselors will be very forgiving and help her and understand why she did what she did. THEY were the one's having a toy fight after all.


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I must say I really enjoy your story :)

I love how sweet and cute Willow and Tara. You captured what I would expect their relationship to be like if they met as teenagers. You turn them from being completely hot with each other to being so loving and sweet with just a few sentences. Kudos :)

I also love the girls. I love how all of them have a different personality.

Tara explaining things to them was just how you would expect it to be. There is a girl I grew up around who is younger then me and is basically like a sister and talks like that with her were always awkward. So I know how Tara and Willow felt.

Mouse pulling off Willow's bathing suit bottoms. Oh gosh how embarrassing. Good thing she had Tara. I know if that were to happen to me, I'd feel the same. Especially in front of the whole camp.

Overall I am really enjoying reading and I can't wait until the next update :)


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Bravo, Julie. I love this so much. You have the ability to have me laughing out loud at one moment, then almost in tears the next. You keep writing and I'll keep waiting at the edge of my seat for updates! Kitten love, ttyl. Mayhap we can catch each other and stop playing messenger tag, lol.

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:bow :bow Hail to thee, Dibs-Master! :bow :bow <=Hey, you’re too good at the dibs-ing! All this bowing makes my back hurt! :wink

Matty, thanks for seeing the chapter structure better than I did! Good insight, appreciate it! :applause

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Willow shrugged with an exaggerated attempt at innocence. “Magic?”

Then Tara pointed to Willow’s T-shirt, which was shoved up to her neck and nodded smugly at Willow’s amazed face, “Yes. There was plenty of magic.”
There's so many types of magic in this fic their love, the camp magic with riding midnight at midnight and witchey magic
So is it magic? Or simply hands of the ‘Roman’ variety? Opinions abound. Glad you enjoyed Mouse’s motivation for “hands on” research and Willow’s pout. Yes, ‘Adorkable’ all the way around for those two!

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but they felt the pull of a subtle tide, the fearful truth that what they loved beyond anything in their young lives was slipping between their fingers, falling away, to be banished by the relentless flow of time.
Thank you, glad it worked. :flower (see note to Jessica, for more info if interested)

Glad you could laugh at Mouse’s attempt at pacifism while sharing Willow’s em-bare-ass-ment! Take care! :grin


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And let me guess, the de-pantsing was the real-life incident you spoke of. Oh, you have my sympathies buddy. I can relate, as I learned the hard way not to wear a 2-piece suit when going off the diving board. Although, I gotta know - did someone actually make the "moon" and "hair" comments when it happened to you?
Well . . . I shared the story in a Kitten Thread – Most Embarrassing Moments in a fit of insanity. Happy to say it dropped off page 1, but it is there and yes, a ‘moon’ comment was made! The top half exposure is when I hit my face doing a backflip off the board and came up with one boob waving ‘hi’ since I was thinking more about pain and a bloody nose coming up the ladder. :blush Thanks for asking! :wink

Yes, had the ol’ bad touches talk with my boy about a million times, too!

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Stolen moments in the barn are nice, but our poor girls need some way to get some serious alone time soon. Can you please fix that for us soon? Pretty, pretty please?
Yes, indeed! A “Pretty, pretty please” almost always gets rewarded! And thanks for your humor and your feedback both! :bounce :lol


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Thanks for the kind words – deeply appreciated! :flower

In reference to their state of surprising semi-undress you said:
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Hmm, hinting at something maybe...sequelish. Nice use of canon.
Perhaps . . . the jury is still out as to whether that was love-magic or witch-y magick! Stay tuned . . .

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Ugh, having the "Private Parts" discussion is the worst. No matter how you prepare, they always hit you up with unexpected questions. Tara was gentle, age appropriately informative, and mature throughout the discussion. Willow on the other hand, I'm not so sure that Tara wouldn't have benefited having the conversation without her. She was like one big kid. Hilarious.
I hear you on having “the talk” I’ve been down that road myself a few times! And yes, Willow struck out on the ‘Halloween Candy’ analogy but she brought up two key points that Tara didn’t: the term and definition of “wrong touches” AND the necessity of reporting them to trustworthy adults. It’s significant that Tara didn’t bring that up, but understandable given her background of concealing abuse. That’s not to say Tara wouldn’t want them to report, just that she honestly didn’t think of it for her talk and Willow did.

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And Devola, little devil, "So try it-" followed later by the announcement and description of Willow's bare nether regions in the water.
And the astonishing thing about Devola is that, in this case, there is absolutely no malice involved. She has almost no filter between thinking and speaking. Camp, and having more real friends than she has ever had, is responsible for the progress she has made but it’s a long road ahead!

As to Tara keeping her temper, part of that is a tremendous empathy so that she feels Devola’s embarrassment and the other, sadder part is that she equates anger with violence and therefore evil, and suppresses it almost automatically within herself.


Maggie AKA leonhart17:
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Aww, lots of embarrassment for them this time!
Ohhh, yeah! :blush (see note to Wimpy for gruesome details!)

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Little kids are funny though, thinking they know everything!
They sure are! Thanks for reading and am enjoying your stuff, too! :bounce


zampsa19752001:
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Poor Willow for her unintentional flashing
I think we can all share her pain, either by experience or imagination! :blush :wink

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I truly hope that they manage to have lots of quality alone time despite what Finchmeister & Bitch C throws at them.
Hey, if you and Wimpy both want it, who am I to say ‘no’? Time coming up! :grin


Erika AKA fhiwda:
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Poor Mouse. I mean...yeah Embarrassing for Willow, but she'll get over it. Mouse has to feel horrible.
Wow, how touching and imaginative that you see Mouse’s perspective! She DID feel terrible, but the good news is that she (mostly) lives in the moment and she won’t be punished or hurt to make her feel bad again.

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I love how you randomly throw in things that are definite possibilities at a camp.
What? ‘Random’ you say? My brilliantly crafted epic is ‘RANDOM’? Okay, put ‘em up! Put ‘em up! (in the words of Bugs Bunny) You realize, of course, that this means war! Serious fun, Erika! Thanks for reading and feedback AND writing, too! :bounce


Jessica AKA beautiful_love:
On Willow’s theory of Sexy-Relativity you wrote:
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Now with theories like that, I might have enjoyed science more back in the day. There unconscious semi-disrobing was quite cute. Those pesky hands, having a mind of their own... tsk tsk.
Hands? Or magic? Thanks!

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The middle portion of the story after the riding and before the swimming was just... I don't know how to even put it into words. Incredibly well written with very little actually said but an incredible amount of context. It was almost haunting and I love it.
Kate BeMyDeputy, actually suggested trying to capture that melancholay sense of time flowing away from them. She didn’t beta for me, but her input definitely helped! Glad it worked for you, too!

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Of course in the end I felt so bad for poor Willow. Damn bikini bottoms. They really are a huge water hazard. But Tara's protectiveness made my heart beat just a little faster and actually say 'Aww' out loud.
Yeah, the irony is that Willow has a one-piece suit as well, but wanted to show off her new bikini – never again! But thank you for loving Tara’s kindness, she was right there for her girlfriend just like a lover should be! Yay, Tara! :bounce

Thanks for reading and giving feedback AND for “An Everyday Life” – love your work!!! :flower :love


Starr AKA faolan228:
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Then Tara pointed to Willow’s T-shirt, which was shoved up to her neck and nodded smugly at Willow’s amazed face, “Yes. There was plenty of magic.”

Do you hear that? That's the sound of my mouth foaming. I agree with True_love in hoping this might be..implying things, and that the combined power of our wishes will actually do something.
A kind of happy hydrophobia? Romantic rabies? Fun froth? You’re scaring me, girlfriend! But your feedback, as always, rocks my world! Thanks!!! :pinky :party :pinky


Richard AKA Azirahael:
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Another stellar update! I'm downgrading you to 'Stellar' from 'tore my heart out of my chest and blew up the galaxy'
:cry How come a downgrading from you is like a hug and a glass of champagne! :grin

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So i'll say something different: I feel sorry for Xander.

Poor baby! all the time he's known Willow, she's doted on him, the lovely but dim man.
and now with Tara in the picture, it's going to be like an eclipse of the sun.
That’s true, good insight – I hadn’t thought of that, so thank you! I see all the relationships changing and the new relationship dynamics will have a profound impact (or not sometimes) the challenge of figuring out which is which is exciting! Your input will be greatly appreciated!


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Man, i FELT that, the dawning of loss. Terrifying.

and when she gets back from camp without Tara, she's going to be a mess.
it would be like losing a limb, or your heart. we need not fear, blue eyes will meet green again, as inevitably as the sun rises, but it's still going to be heartbreaking to witness.
I hope Xander shows a flicker of wisdom and is there for Willow to lean on, and not act like a clueless spod. This is his chance to be the rock she needs to lean on, to be a real friend. i hope he doesn't blow it.
Xander is an amazing mix of compassion, courage, and cluelessness – I look forward to find out what comes up in this instance! Again, good insight (see above) :flower

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Of course i'll be your beta! i would be honoured! if i lose Internet, i'll walk 20 miles though the snow, to get to an internet cafe to beta for you. there's no snow round here, so it'll be a really long trip, 'cos i'll have to go find some snow, but then i'll walk through it!
With a beta like you and Matty, I can’t go wrong! Thank you! :bow :clap :applause :clap :bow


Rick AKA willowtaralover:
Glad you enjoyed their talk with the girls about “bad touches” as well as Mouse’s explanation for her poking sprees! You warm my heart. :love

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Bettina frowned at Tara, “Where were you?”

“Um, busy.”

Bettina was still grumpy, “I missed you!”
Why do I get the feeling that Bettina could cause trouble if she learned that Willow and Tara were in a relationship, out of jealousy.
Just you wait! Willow has a rival now, stay tuned for this post!

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Then she used both hands and grabbed the back of Willow’s bikini bottoms to hold her back just as Willow flung herself forward in a racing dive, hoping to use the extra force to topple Tara over. Willow felt a terrifying tug in her nether regions and screamed.

Willow came up wild-eyed and sputtering while a shocked Mouse held up Willow’s bikini bottoms.

Devola pointed and yelled, “You stole her bottoms!” and a terrified Mouse flung them away from her while the whole camp seemed to pause and watch them arc into the air and splash down about ten feet away.

Ha ha ha ha ha ha, Oh poor Mouse worrying so much about her counselors fighting so to stop it she removes, accidentally of course, Willow's bikini bottoms. No offence to my favourite redhead but I assumed that Willow would be too embarrased by her body to wear a bikini and go for an all in one, though she does have a yummy tummy.
Another good catch! Willow DOES have a one-piece suit, check out her response to that very question AND take an invisible cookie for reminding me to put that in! Another idea from the *YOINK*-master! :clap :applause :clap

Glad you notice and enjoy Veronica’s growth as a person, more to come on that in later posts! It all comes to T/W love! AND so happy that you like Willow and Tara’s cuteness, they are just rampagingly cute! :bounce

Now re-write that bit so we have more of Cap’n Red! :kgeek :whip


wildmind:
First, welcome to the KittenBoard! :pinky :bounce :party :eatme You’ll find a friendly and amazing community. Check out “Kitten” and “The Inward Eye” and the “Completed Fics Archive” and basically everything! Feedback is treasured by us writers, so thanks for taking the time to share it with so many of us!

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I love how sweet and cute Willow and Tara. You captured what I would expect their relationship to be like if they met as teenagers. You turn them from being completely hot with each other to being so loving and sweet with just a few sentences. Kudos
:bounce A balance between poetry, pratfalls, and passion – not always easy!

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Tara explaining things to them was just how you would expect it to be. There is a girl I grew up around who is younger then me and is basically like a sister and talks like that with her were always awkward. So I know how Tara and Willow felt.
Really appreciate that it worked – feel free to share any advice you have on that!

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Mouse pulling off Willow's bathing suit bottoms. Oh gosh how embarrassing. Good thing she had Tara. I know if that were to happen to me, I'd feel the same. Especially in front of the whole camp.
Yeah, big huge :blush! But at least Willow knows how much Tara loves her. It’s when you’re embarrassed in front of everyone that you know your true friends, girlfriend, etc. And Willow knows!


Allie AKA Babbles4Twillow:
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You have the ability to have me laughing out loud at one moment, then almost in tears the next. You keep writing and I'll keep waiting at the edge of my seat for updates!
That compliment goes both ways, Allie! Love RtL, so as far as the edge of the seat sitting, I’m there for you, too! Thanks for the encouragement – love it!!! :love AND thanks for your story – keep writing! Already read your latest update twice! F/B coming! And keep writing :kgeek


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 Post subject: Re: Fanfic - How I Met Your Mother (Update: 15 JAN 12)
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Title: How I Met Your Mother*
Author: Ariel
Email: blaziak@yahoo.com
Feedback: All feedback welcomed, specific input appreciated, harsh on me via PM
Rating: NC-17 for W/T love. Ratings will change depending on content.
Disclaimer: I don't own these characters, but I love to take them for a ride!
Summary: A/U before season 1, the summer after Willow's freshman year with a large dose of Queen Cordelia at her bitchy best and teen-aged angst.

*no connection to the sit-com of the same name


Thoughts are in italics.


Part 56: Sweet Surprises


They received a few good natured laughs and cat-calls as they left the lake and headed to their cabin, but Willow kept her head up and maintained a fixed grin while Tara walked with her arm around her lover’s waist.


“Why did you wear the bikini, Sweetie?”


Willow was breathless from the fast walk she had led them into, “Never had the nerve ‘til today.” She blushed, then grimaced, “Wore it for you. I thought I was all sexy-girl.”


Tara’s voice was tender, “You were and you are.”


Then Willow smiled back in that heart-stopping way of hers and it was Tara’s turn to feel breathless.


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Faith spotted Willow in the dinner line and her face lit up, “Red! C’mere!”


Willow flinched, fearing a variety of flasher jokes, but Faith’s grin was more triumphant than teasing so she took a cautious step closer.


“T, serve for me, wouldja?” Then she tugged Willow into the kitchen. “Got it!”


Willow hesitated, still fearing a joke, “Got what?”


Faith reached into her pocket and fished out a roll of cash, “Your bet money off Queen C!”


Then a dazed Willow held out her hands while Faith counted out four hundred dollars. Faith was exultant, “Got mine too, Red! Spent some already on pants for tomorrow!”


Tara bustled in carrying an empty serving tray and Willow jammed her winnings in her pocket, determined to avoid a discussion with Tara on the evils of gambling.


Tara watched Willow rush by then hurried over to Faith. “Do you h-have it? Willow’s present?”


Faith grinned, “Smuggled it in with the food for the dance.” She bent down and fished out a paper bag from under the sink. “Got Carly’s donuts, Jennilee’s Ho-Ho’s and Harmony’s Ding-Dongs.” She searched the bottom of the bag, “And Willow’s present.” She handed it to Tara with a flourish.


“Faith Lehane!” Mrs. Finch had, as usual, seemed to appear out of nowhere.


Faith’s eyes went wide and she shoved handfuls of contraband inside Tara’s shirt where most of it settled into the space where her work shirt tucked into her jeans.


“There is a line full of hungry campers and staff, please return to your duties at once!”


Faith relaxed. “On it, Mrs. F.!” Then the director left and Faith reached unceremoniously down Tara’s shirt to retrieve her smuggled treats.


“H-hey!”


“Sorry, T.! Just trying to stay out of prison!”


Tara pretended to frown, “Then don’t smuggle.”


Faith leered, “Could say the same, T.”


Tara blushed and reached down her shirt to retrieve her own bit of contraband.


“Tara?” Mrs. Finch had re-entered the kitchen, “A word, please.”


Tara’s hand froze and she hurried out.


“It’s about the private riding lessons. Would you call them a success?”


“Um, yes. Y-yes I would.”


Mrs. Finch looked intently into her flushed face. “Willow, in particular, does she know how to ride?”


Tara’s mind skittered frantically for some kind of answer that wouldn’t consign her to Hell for lying, and raised her head, “I’ve s-seen her ride.”


Mrs. Finch looked skeptical, “Are you sure? It’s important.”


Tara swallowed and nodded. She rode that night when I led Midnight around for her and when she rode Arrow. Mrs. Finch hadn’t asked how well Willow could ride, so technically Tara felt that she was still telling the truth. Tara lifted her chin, “I’ve seen her ride more than once,” she said confidently.


Mrs. Finch smiled and seemed strangely relieved. “I’m delighted to hear that.” She moved away and Tara walked dazedly over to their table.


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The children had been particularly irrepressible, still in high spirits from their celebration as well as anticipating the dance.


Willow and Tara were asked dozens of questions about the festivities and they could only shrug; it was their first year and they didn’t know what to expect either.


Finally bodies were washed, teeth scrubbed, and night clothes on. The girls had been tucked in and Willow and Tara were finally alone together in the privacy of their room.


Willow glanced sideways at Tara on the bed, as she pushed their one chair under the door-knob and tested to see that it held.


Then Tara walked slowly over to open the drawer and then shut off the lamp. Willow heard the sudden scrape and flare of a match, a nimbus of illumination against the encroaching darkness, until the dancing glow of candle light filled the room and pushed the darkness back far enough to be romantic rather than frightening. An instant later Tara blew out the match and walked back over, moving with a slow sensuality that caused Willow’s breath to catch in her throat. Then she waited silently, knowing somehow that speech would break her lover’s magic and saw Tara sit on their bed then lean against the wall. Willow lay down on her back, her gaze still on Tara. The air seemed to thicken between them, resonating with the low hum of their mutual longing.


When Tara finally spoke, her voice was a husky whisper “I h-have a present for you.” She glanced down shyly and reached between her breasts to pull out a chocolate bar that she had concealed during dinner. Tara’s face was suddenly dismayed, “Willow, I’m sorry! It, it must have m-melted during dinner and I couldn’t take it out in front of the kids because I w-wanted it just for you.” She smiled anxiously, “It’s a Cadbury Carmello bar. I was going to feed it to you.” She blushed, avoiding Willow’s eyes, “H-happy Anniversary. It’s a day early but I didn’t know how tomorrow would work out.” She dropped her eyes, “I’m r-really sorry it melted.”


Willow pulled Tara into a hug then smiled. “Well I’m not, doofus. I like chocolate, melt-y or unmelt-y.” She licked her lips, “But I still want you to feed it to me.” Then she opened her mouth like a baby bird, confident of being fed.


Tara peeled the wrapper, hesitant at first to dip her finger into the soft chocolate then she scooped a dollop of chocolate and put her finger in Willow’s mouth.


Willow’s moan was scarcely above a whisper as she began slowly licking chocolate from Tara’s finger and it was Tara’s turn to gasp with pleasure. Their eyes met, locked, and they knew exactly what they wanted. Dreamily, Willow scooped chocolate onto her finger and fed it to Tara, getting love licks in her turn and tiny nips on the sensitive pads of her fingers. Then Tara painted Willow’s mouth with chocolate and bent down for a long, slow ravishing of Willow’s tongue and lips.


Then Willow sat up, scooped more chocolate and swirled it over the pulse point on Tara’s neck, then bent her teeth to the task of nibbling the treat in front of her while Tara’s breathing intensified into a low throbbing exhalation like a big cat’s purr.


Willow felt herself heating up, loving the new sound as she painted Tara’s nipples and bent her neck to the task of cleaning the smooth chocolate, feeling the sweet press of each nipple against her tongue as she pulled it in deeper to graze with her teeth. Then Tara was trembling, pushing herself even deeper into Willow’s mouth while her fingers wove themselves into Willow’s hair.


Then Willow finished, laying kisses in the moist warmth of Tara’s cleavage and finally rocked back slowly on her heels and waited for Tara.


Tara smiled her lopsided smile, somehow both shy and sensuous. She gestured for Willow to lie down on her stomach then she pushed Willow’s pajama bottoms up to mid-thigh. She drizzled a chocolate trail up Willow’s calves, using the edge of her fingernail and drew a sunburst on the back of each knee, before continuing the trail half way up Willow’s thigh. Then her tongue tip was a honeyed feather as it traced its way up the sweet path, nibbling and sucking the sensitive skin behind Willow’s knees until she felt Willow tense and shudder beneath her. Then licking began again up to the softness of Willow’s thighs and Willow whimpered, feeling the warm swell of her sex and knowing that there could be no relief.


Then Willow moved off the bed and indicated that Tara was to sit on the edge. Willow took the chocolate wrapper in her hand then broke the moment to grin and snatch her pillow off their bed to put under her knees. Another moment passed then she met her lover’s eyes, intensely blue, heavy lidded with arousal. Willow swallowed then spread Tara’s legs apart and imitated her lover’s use of the edge of a fingernail to paint the inside of her lover’s thighs. Willow leaned in closely and her warm panting breaths seeming to pulse against Tara’s thighs. She painted symbols and letters, hieroglyphs of her desire to make a pure offering and please her lover. Then she bent to the curved ivory of Tara’s thighs and began the work of tongue and teeth and lips, feeling the fevered limbs trembling between her teeth. She thrust her nose against Tara’s track shorts seeing the muscles clench while she smelt the hot flow of warm musk which sent a fever singing through her veins. She plucked at the edge of Tara’s track shorts, moving it aside so she could look at the warm folds, rosy with desire. She could reach them, she knew she could. Taste the nectar covered flesh, glide her tongue into Tara’s secret place, suck the slick rosebud into her mouth to tongue and kiss.


Then Tara’s hands were in her hair, weak at first and neutral as to intent, but as Willow leaned forward they resisted. Willow looked up and their eyes met again, both aroused but Tara’s alight with anguish.


Willow pulled back and joined her lover in bed. Their kisses were a wet fire, unstoppable. They kissed every inch of available skin, turning their bodies into a love knot of frustrated desire.


Then finally they subsided, defeated by their own promise, with only tenderness between them.


They put on their clothes slowly, candlelight enchantment making their heated flesh glow golden.


“Baby,” Willow sighed.


“Willowhand,” Tara breathed back.


Their kiss became a shared breath, finally a yawn, and then they slept, still entwined in each other’s arms.


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Tara awakened in the darkness to hear the soft sound of Willow’s breathing, and sighed with contentment as Willow burrowed her cheek further into the softness of her shoulder. Tara smiled, as she brushed a stray lock of hair back behind Willow’s ear. Then she felt Willow’s arm curve sleepily across her belly, and she enfolded Willow into another embrace.


Sometimes they slept on their sides in a tangle of legs and slept breast to breast in a full body embrace. Other times they ‘spooned’ in their sleep, one laying on her side with an arm around the waist of the other whose back snuggled into the other’s front and they decided who would be ‘big spoon’ in the back or ‘little spoon’ in the front.


Tara drew another deep breath and marveled, yet again, at how easy it was to sleep with Willow; how right they were in each other’s arms.


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Tara was dreaming, hearing her mother’s voice ”She pricked her finger and three drops of her blood fell upon the white snow.” Tara’s eyes shot open and she gasped, staring at the three crimson shapes on her pillowcase.


“Tara?” She recognized Willow’s voice. “Happy three week anniversary, baby!”


Then she shook her head, as if to shed her dream and shuddered involuntarily at the flowers, bright as blood against the whiteness of her pillowcase. Then Tara felt her consciousness returning and she smelled their scent at last. Then she shook her head, as if to shed the final fragments of her dream. Three flowers; and when she brings the fourth, she’ll leave me. She inhaled sharply then raised her eyes to Willow’s, “They’re beautiful, Sweetie.”


Willow smiled happily, “I’m glad I got to surprise you! I was all with the ‘tippy-tippy-toe’ walking back in here.”


Tara grinned at hearing Willow use one of Mouse’s expressions. Then she hugged Willow hard and the strangeness of her dream receded.


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Devola glared, “I don’t know why we have to dance with a bunch of stupid boys!”


Connie stared at her, “Boys aren’t stupid!”


Devola stared back at her, too disgusted to speak.


Lisa shrugged, “They’re okay. Some of them are, anyway.”


Debbie smiled, “Are they cute?”


Tara fought a smile, “Um, we h-haven’t had a chance to check them out.”


Kate looked at Willow, “Is your boyfriend coming?”


Willow blushed, “Xander is back at home.”


Towanda looked confused, but Connie grinned with excitement and pointed at her counselor’s face, “Wil-low is blushing! Wil-low is blushing!”


Tara ducked her head, feeling a strange urge to cry, then felt Bettina’s small hand curl around her fingers. “I got a present for you, Tara. I made it all by myself!” Tara looked at Bettina, at the brown eyes staring up at her adoringly, and was touched enough to offer a smile.


“I’d l-love to see it.”


“Now? Can I show you now?”


Tara nodded and Bettina jumped up eagerly, “Go out on the porch and I’ll be right there!”


Tara got up, avoiding the sight of Willow being questioned about her boyfriend, and hurried out to the porch.


Bettina came panting up, flushed with excitement and carrying a crayon drawing of two stick figures holding hands, one with yellow hair and the other with black hair. Since the yellow-haired one was nearly twice as tall, Tara knew that the drawing represented her and Bettina. Then she noticed the words printed in the space above the figures,


“Roses are red
Vilits are blue.
I love you.

xox Bettina A.”


Tara smiled.


“Do you like it?” Bettina asked anxiously.


Tara hugged the little girl close, “I love it. Thank you so much.”


Bettina was wiggling like a puppy, “I wrote it all myself, but it’s partly from some candy my Daddy gave my Mommy, the poem part. But I printed it, see!” Then Bettina pointed proudly to the letters that she had worked so hard over.


“You did a w-wonderful job and your writing is so good!”


Bettina hugged her again. “I’m glad you liked it! Devola said it was dumb but she doesn’t know how it is when you love someone.” Then Bettina took a deep breath, “Can I kiss you now?”


“W-what?”


Bettina felt her courage ebbing at Tara’s obvious surprise and re-thought her request. “On the cheek! Just on the cheek! Like you’ve done before, I promise!”


Tara looked at the earnest little girl who was blinking quickly, as if preparing for tears, and kindly leaned over to offer her cheek while Bettina stood on her tip-toes and puckered her lips.


“Tara!” Tara turned her head towards Carly at the very moment that Bettina leaned in to kiss her cheek, accidentally landing the kiss squarely on Tara’s lips.


Tara gasped with embarrassment while Bettina’s eyes went wide and her face turned red.


“Tara,” Carly said again, “Counselors’ meeting!”


Tara turned, delighted to race inside, while a dazed Bettina leaned back to swoon against a support post, a blissful smile on her little face.


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Mrs. Finch eyed Tara and Carly’s late entrance with disapproval, then continued. “So the afternoon camp activities are cancelled so that we can get everything set up. Carly, I’ll rely on you to handle the sound system and your father will be playing for the square dances, I believe.”


Carly grinned, “Dad’s looking forward to it.”


Mrs. Finch looked closely for further traces of sarcasm, but Carly just blinked innocently at her and Mrs. Finch continued. “Fine! So our guests will arrive at approximately 6:30 or so and we’ll start out in the main yard with an hour of square dancing for everyone.”


Cordelia looked horror-struck and she wasn’t the only one, “’An hour’!”


Carly frowned, “We’ve only done about three dances in all the years before! Why an hour?”


Mrs. Finch smiled tightly, “The children seemed to enjoy it and the new camp director over there is quite an aficionado. He has generously offered to do a little demonstration and call the dances for us.”


Cordelia glowered, “Does he yodel and call hogs, too?”


Mrs. Finch glared in her direction then glared around the circle for good measure and the mutterings subsided. Then she smiled, “So, Lawanna why don’t you plan to watch the barn for the night of the dance.”


Carly looked desperate, “Lawanna, you can let me cover it if you don’t want to miss—“


Lawanna grinned, “Forget it, Carly! Save a ‘do-si-do’ or two for me.” Then she shook her head, “Actually, please don’t!” Then Carly responded with a good-natured groan and Mrs. Finch continued.


“So following the square dance, the counselors will continue in one half of the dining hall and the eleven and twelve year olds in the other half while the younger children are supervised outside to watch movies and play games.” She sharpened her glance, “Let me stress, again, the necessity of avoiding I.T.E.’s”


Jennilee smiled, her sense of humor getting the best of her, “And what is an I.T.E again, Ma’am?”


“Inappropriate Touching Experience,” Mrs. Finch intoned solemnly.


Jennilee nodded, barely managing to conceal a smile. “Thank you.”


Faith couldn’t resist, “Got an ‘itty’ on my titty!”


A few of the girls were shocked while the rest clamped their jaws shut to stifle their laughter.


Mrs. Finch gestured to the red-faced counselors, “Faith, you’ve embarrassed these poor girls. Shame on you!”


Faith attempted a show of contrition since she actually wanted to dance. “Sorry, Mrs. F.”


“Wait!” Cordelia spoke up, “That total skank gets to go, too?”


Mrs. Finch said stiffly, “If Faith finishes her work then she is allowed to attend the dance.”


Faith sighed, “Cinderella deal. Bust my butt. Dance for ten minutes.”


Tara brightened, “L-let me sit out and w-work in your place! Then you can dance the whole time!”


Cordelia smirked, “We just couldn’t let you make that kind of sacrifice, Tara! After all, you’re going to be ‘The Belle of the Ball’ and everyone is just dying to see you in your dress!”


Tara ducked her head and Jennilee spoke, her soft drawl kind, “Tara, how about we get together for some girl time and I do your hair and make-up for you?”


Tara looked over at her, touched by the older girl’s gesture. “I-I’d l-like that, thanks.”


“And that’s all you’ll need to look good!” Cordelia grinned mockingly, “Delusional, much?”


Jennilee smiled, “You’ll see.”


Carly looked at Jennilee. “Okay, let’s make a deal. No more than three guys hanging around you at one time. If a fourth one comes over, then you have to cut one loose for us.”


Jennilee shrugged, “I’ll do my best.”


Cordelia’s eyes narrowed, “Why would they be interested in her?” Cordelia glanced at Jennilee’s breasts, “Unless they’re dairy farmers or something!”


Carly held up her hands, “Don’t make her mad, Cordelia, you’ll be sorry if you do. She’s like some kind of boy-Hoover, just sucks ‘em all her way!”


Cordelia fluffed her dark hair confidently and stared at Jennilee. “Please. You’ll have some real competition now!”


Jennilee smiled and dismissed her, “’Competition’? Honey, I don’t even play in the same ball-park.”


Carly was exasperated, “They why do you flirt so much and grab all the guys?”


Jennilee shrugged good-naturedly, “Flirting is fun and a girl has a right to have a little fun, doesn’t she?” Then she smiled at Carly who shook her head and smiled back in spite of herself. It was hard to stay mad at Jennilee.


A moment later, Mrs. Finch dismissed the meeting and Willow headed for Tara’s side until Mrs. Finch called her over and asked her to print a variety of signs and notices for the dance.


Tara walked out by herself and was grateful to be too busy to do much more than ride.


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After an early dinner, Tara and Willow took turns at having a shower then combined forces in attempting to get their girls into a state of acceptable hygiene. The ones who were excited and wanted to dress up were Connie, Debbie, and Kate. Lisa was willing, but not too particular about clothes while Towanda, Bettina and Veronica chose comfortable clothes that they liked wearing. Devola wasn’t sure what to do and felt more nervous than she wanted to admit while Mouse seemed to think it was a costume party and mourned leaving her “princess dress” back at home.


There was a knock outside the window and Lulu Ballard called in to tell Willow that her dress was ready and to come to Cordelia’s cabin. Willow left while Tara looked sadly after her.


Meanwhile Debbie admired Connie’s make-up bag and the fact that Connie could put on lipstick without making a clown mouth.


Connie accepted her friend’s admiration. “I do ballet,” she explained, “So my mom taught me how to do my make up for the recitals and stuff.” Then she pressed her lips against a piece of toilet paper and yelped as Devola snatched the lipstick. “Devola! You’re such a pain!”


But Devola was too busy drawing a series of red lines diagonally on her cheeks to notice. Then she jostled her way to Connie’s mirror and grinned delightedly. “I’m on the warpath!” She bared her teeth, smiled once more and knew that she’d have fun now. “You know, Connie” she said seriously, “I like make-up!”


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“Willow!” Cordelia beckoned impatiently from her cabin’s porch, “In here!”


Willow walked timidly up the steps, then paused to take a final breath of free air before entering Cordy-World.


Cordelia gestured wordlessly to Harmony who walked closer, holding the dress up high so that it seemed to float in the air, bearing down on Willow who stood paralyzed.


Willow’s face blanched and her green eyes seemed to get bigger with every step closer that the dress came. She swallowed, gasped and her lips moved soundlessly while she tried to find the breath to speak.


Cordelia smirked, “What do you think?”


Willow’s jaw had dropped so far that she felt it pop back into place as she closed her mouth then opened it again to speak, “Unbelievable!” Clearly stunned, she forced her eyes away from the dress to look at Cordelia, “It’s beautiful!”


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The chocolate scene was hot. All of that frustration poor girls. Although it was a very good way to celebrate. Then the dress. A beautiful dress from Cordelia for Willow. Wow. Wonder what the angle is? Seems to good to be true.

Cant wait for more.

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Yeah, i'm wondering about cordelia's deal with the dress.
I have two theories:
She wants to rub in how awful Tara looks by having a pretty Willow as contrast.
Or, given that there are going to be boys everywhere, she wants to bury Willow in boys to hurt Tara. possibly she might even bring Xander up for extra pain/awkwardness.

I feel kinda bad about the downgrade comment, i guess what i meant was that even the best story cannot be ALL high points and WOW scenes.
And even your 'boring filler' chapters are very good. :kiss1

Now i'm torn.
On the one hand i can't wait for the next chapter, same as always. :bounce
And on the other hand i don't wanna see the pain and misery that cordelia is going to try and unleash. :sob
I fucking hate that petty small-minded bitch.

Keep up the good work sweetie.
This story is purest magic i swear.

People died at work today.
And i come home, read another chapter of How I Met Your Mother,
And suddenly everything is sunshine. :kiss1

How do you do it?
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Oh yays. Cordy has something up her sleeve and its making me nervous. First scene, with the chocolate...yummy. great update!

*scampers off to go find chocolate*

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Yay for excellent update-y goodness... I really loved the chocolate-y goodness scene... Now I'm really really worried about what the Bitch C is planning with the pretty dress for Willow... I kinda hope that Willow & Tara "accidentally" fall on mud in their "beauty & the beast" dresses so that they can wear normal clothes instead and not be bothered by inapproriate youngsters...

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I'm nervous for Willow... And personally, dancing for an hour sounds like a nightmare! :P But of course, for me, any party where I have to wear a dress is a nightmare! Can't wait to see how it all turns out!

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Well...Bettina is going to have her first heart break...That's sad...or is she just going to end up crushing on someone else and forgets about her crush with Tara? Intriquing...

Quote:
Tara ducked her head and Jennilee spoke, her soft drawl kind, “Tara, how about we get together for some girl time and I do your hair and make-up for you?”


I can't wait to see how they both look.

And Jee Golly Wiz! ubada ubada...WHAT?! The dress is beautiful?! I'm guessing Cordy is messing with Willow and that really isn't her dress...ooooor...she has some other scheme up her sleeve.

I didn't mean random as in insulting random...in a way they aren't random at all because they open the characters up to us even more. What I meant is...Your thought process seems to be a bit random. Like Mouse pulling Willows bottoms off when swimming. I just don't see where that came from, but I LOVE it! I really do enjoy this fic and I cannot wait to read more.

and BTW...I think this has turned into the longest feedback I've ever left. I usually like to keep it simple. You should feel special

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Julie,

You know I love me some Faith. Great that you are showing the growing comfort between her and Tara as their friendship moves forward. Even as bold and brazen as Faith can be, I really can't see her casually reaching down anyone elses shirt except for Tara's. On the flip side and can't see Tara letting anyone else, but Faith, and Willow of course, doing it.

Hmm, the chocolate scene, had to skip it. PTSD moment. Let's just say sexy chocolate time during the summer in Arizona...not so much fun. *ahem* Moving on...

Loved the different descriptions of them sleeping together. Too cute.

So sad that Tara is already focused on Willow leaving. Instead of each rose being seen as another week together, it's seen as that much closer to being apart. *sniff*

Aww, Bettina. Has to be my favorite part of this update. I remember have crushes on the big girls. Hopefully, however you break the crush it won't be too bad for her. My heart kinda breaks for that little girl and her big heart.

Hope Jennilee smacks down her Cordy competition. We all know Cordy is up to no good with Willow. Glad Jennilee is looking out for Tara. Hopefully, she will help bail Willow and Tara out of whatever hellishness is on the way.

Great job. Looking forward to the dance.

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Okay you just took a chapter and went from OH DAMN :wink to Aw to Oh no that can't be good.
Nicely done :)

I can only imagine how hard it is for Willow and Tara, while they do get alone time they have to be very careful it and very careful with what they do.

Bettina seems so sweet, poor kid. Having a crush on someone older is always hard. I remember when I was freshman I had the biggest crush on my English teacher, I even gave her a Christmas present. I was so heartbroken when she got engaged, but when I was senior I went back to see her after not seeing her for a couple years and she still had the frame with a picture of husband and herself in it, I felt special :) It's sad to see the kid get heartbroken, but it happens and she'll get over it :)

Hearing the girls ask Willow about Xander must be hard. Tara knows Willow loves her and cares about her, but the idea of the love of your life being with someone else is never a pleasant one.

I can't wait to see how Tara looks :) But I'm kind of concerned about what Cordelia might have up her sleeve. I mean she's been mean and rude throughout the whole story, maybe she has changed, but I have a feeling that that is not what's going on and something tricky is.

Such a cute story, I can't wait for more :)


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Finally read this through during my study hall and loved it!

The chocolate scene was absolutely lovely, and this is coming from someone who absolutely hates melted chocolate. At least it was Cadbury.

Bettina's little crush on Tara is downright adorable. Ah, to be like, 7 and have your first crush..

Big uh-oh on the Cordelia front, though. That girl makes me nervous.

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:thud the scene with the chocolate was great!

but i do hate seeing the girls miserable :((

really great update, looking forward to more!!!! :applause

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Willow was breathless from the fast walk she had led them into, “Never had the nerve ‘til today.” She blushed, then grimaced, “Wore it for you. I thought I was all sexy-girl.”

Tara’s voice was tender, “You were and you are.”


Willow, you will always be sexy, whether you know it or not. :drool


“T, serve for me, wouldja?” Then she tugged Willow into the kitchen. “Got it!”

Willow hesitated, still fearing a joke, “Got what?”

Faith reached into her pocket and fished out a roll of cash, “Your bet money off Queen C!”

Then a dazed Willow held out her hands while Faith counted out four hundred dollars. Faith was exultant, “Got mine too, Red! Spent some already on pants for tomorrow!”


YAY, once again Willow and Faith outsmart Dogdelia and come out ahead. I have to admit I do like stories where Faith and Willow are friends, especially after season three of Buffy.

Mrs. Finch looked intently into her flushed face. “Willow, in particular, does she know how to ride?”

Tara’s mind skittered frantically for some kind of answer that wouldn’t consign her to Hell for lying, and raised her head, “I’ve s-seen her ride.”

Mrs. Finch hadn’t asked how well Willow could ride, so technically Tara felt that she was still telling the truth. Tara lifted her chin, “I’ve seen her ride more than once,” she said confidently.


Uh oh, sounds like some hilarity ahead as Willow is forced to face her fear.

Seriously, intensely sexy scene between Willow and Tara in the bedroom with the chocolate, especially on Tara's nipples sigh :drool.

Tara awakened in the darkness to hear the soft sound of Willow’s breathing, and sighed with contentment as Willow burrowed her cheek further into the softness of her shoulder. Tara smiled, as she brushed a stray lock of hair back behind Willow’s ear. Then she felt Willow’s arm curve sleepily across her belly, and she enfolded Willow into another embrace.

Sometimes they slept on their sides in a tangle of legs and slept breast to breast in a full body embrace. Other times they ‘spooned’ in their sleep, one laying on her side with an arm around the waist of the other whose back snuggled into the other’s front and they decided who would be ‘big spoon’ in the back or ‘little spoon’ in the front.

Tara drew another deep breath and marveled, yet again, at how easy it was to sleep with Willow; how right they were in each other’s arms.


Such an awesome moment of sweet cuteness.

Then she shook her head, as if to shed her dream and shuddered involuntarily at the flowers, bright as blood against the whiteness of her pillowcase. Then Tara felt her consciousness returning and she smelled their scent at last. Then she shook her head, as if to shed the final fragments of her dream. Three flowers; and when she brings the fourth, she’ll leave me. She inhaled sharply then raised her eyes to Willow’s, “They’re beautiful, Sweetie.”

Wow, amazingly descriptive writing with the flowers, then that tinge of sadness at the end from Tara as she knows that hers and Willow's time as counsellors is coming to an end, which is in contrast to Willow's joy at their anniversary. Once again I tip my hat to you Ariel and your excellent writing.

Kate looked at Willow, “Is your boyfriend coming?”

Willow blushed, “Xander is back at home.”

Towanda looked confused, but Connie grinned with excitement and pointed at her counselor’s face, “Wil-low is blushing! Wil-low is blushing!”

Tara ducked her head, feeling a strange urge to cry


Awww, poor Tara. Is she going to be put through the ringer again, She always seems to suffer the poor girl.

Bettina hugged her again. “I’m glad you liked it! Devola said it was dumb but she doesn’t know how it is when you love someone.” Then Bettina took a deep breath, “Can I kiss you now?”

“W-what?”

Bettina felt her courage ebbing at Tara’s obvious surprise and re-thought her request. “On the cheek! Just on the cheek! Like you’ve done before, I promise!”

Tara looked at the earnest little girl who was blinking quickly, as if preparing for tears, and kindly leaned over to offer her cheek while Bettina stood on her tip-toes and puckered her lips.

“Tara!” Tara turned her head towards Carly at the very moment that Bettina leaned in to kiss her cheek, accidentally landing the kiss squarely on Tara’s lips.


Oh I sense a universe of badness coming from this

“And that’s all you’ll need to look good!” Cordelia grinned mockingly, “Delusional, much?”

Seriously, why is Cordelia not being reprimanded for this, especially during a counsellor session where FInchy is ever present. Even if her dad is going to pay for new facilities.

Cordelia’s eyes narrowed, “Why would they be interested in her?” Cordelia glanced at Jennilee’s breasts, “Unless they’re dairy farmers or something!”

Carly held up her hands, “Don’t make her mad, Cordelia, you’ll be sorry if you do. She’s like some kind of boy-Hoover, just sucks ‘em all her way!”

Cordelia fluffed her dark hair confidently and stared at Jennilee. “Please. You’ll have some real competition now!”

Jennilee smiled and dismissed her, “’Competition’? Honey, I don’t even play in the same ball-park.”


Sounds like there's going to be some fun at the dance with these two. And what's wrong with breasts anyway??? :drool

Can't wait to hear about the dress dog-girl has chosen for Willow, from the description of Willow looking at it, it does sound godawful.


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