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Postby gabbles » Wed Apr 21, 2004 2:34 am

Sammi: Hey:) Thanks for reading and I'm glad you're enjoying it *G*



Rea: Im rather proud of myself for updating so fast *laughs*...too bad I dont do the same when it comes to schoolwork.

LMAO! You called Snyder a git!...sorry, I just love that word and it so applies to Snyder.

Dont worry about the reply, I'll patiently wait *bounces on seat*...well, attempted patiently. Hope all is ok XXOO



Nickole: Glad you liked:) ...got the next chater planned out...just gotta write it. More will be happening soonish.



Alcy: Im glad you're enjoying the Fuffy...i used to not be the biggest fan of Fuffy...or, actually, more just the Buffy part, too. LOL. But, watching season three, it was sooo happening ;) lol.

I LOVE how you've written Buffy in your other fics *G* haha..

I was a bit worried about the reaction to Snyder...but I needed to put forth just how different they really are...yet also the similarities they have...does that make sense?

Tara truly angry...not something thats all that easy to imagine, huh? Even in Season 6 she was more hurt then angry...





Thanks heaps for the feedback guys:)

Not exactly sure on the next update...hopefully soonish...am babysitting alot this week, so will have time to write, as the kiddies will be asleep.



*hugz*

~Gabsy

"I'm known as the fat lesbian chick on Buffy. Of course, I mean you stand me next to an actress like Sarah and I look like I'll eat her. *beat* Wait, that didn't sound right. But, you know what I mean."-Amber

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Re: Replies

Postby WintersDreamer » Wed Apr 21, 2004 8:14 am





Quote:
And last but not least...Willow and Taras father. *evil grin* i got plans...




WONDERFUL!!



(shiver of delight)



:read

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Re: Replies

Postby Grimlock72 » Wed Apr 21, 2004 3:47 pm

:bounce .. I keep finding new stories that are good, how neat..



Granted, reading about Tara thinking she's worthless and all the crap her *cough*familly*cough* puts her through makes me rather angry... I just hope that gets resolved rather sooner than later.



I suppose there's no prize for guessing who took the money from school ?? :)



I do like the differences between the Willow and Xander in this story and regular-TV. Willow being a bit more assertive isn't all that bad, although she seems to have overdone it a bit. It's of course not nessecary to dress in dark clothes during the day, so thats a choice made based on something else.



I can understand Giles' concern about getting Tara into all the troubles at Hellmouth High. He could have voiced those concerns, Willow would have listened. She still would have told Tara to look out for vamps and other critters of course. Actually I was amazed she let Tara go on patrol with them, figured she would be more worried/protective. It did make Tara feel usefull, which is worth a whole lot to her.



Grr... I so hate Tara's reasoning that her dad and Donnie can't take care of themselves so she has to stay for/with them. Based on the little information we have on them the world won't exactly be a worse place if they both died from starvation. Heck, I would pay to watch that... : -->>:



So times Tara is just to caring for her own good. Another good reason to like this more cynical Willow. Should help prevent Tara being abused by the evil outside world. If Tara lets Willow do that of course.....



Grimmy

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"You hurt Tara," Willow said too calmly. "The last one who tried that was a god. I made her regret it." -- Unexpected Consequences by Lisa of Nine

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Re: Replies

Postby ChelleKat » Sat May 29, 2004 10:42 pm

Hey Gabsy, everyone else. *smiles* Um... I thought I should post cause um... I've kinda been lurking *hides behind Gabs*. I've gotta say, this place is fantastic, I've been literally wading through all the fan fic here and I want to read it all properly and comment, etc. But this seems like a friendly place and my sis, Gabs recommends it and... so... so I'm babbling...



So, I'm the girl in the dedications on Gabsy's fic, we're such close friends we adopted eachother as sisters (although *sigh* not legally). Let me tell you, she's my inspiration for my stories too (I don't really write fic, we're talking non BtVS stuff here).



I've said it before but sis, I'll say it again. I love you twice as much... dammit, three, four, five... times as much as you love me and I say this not as a friend or sister but as a fellow writer. I love your fics and everything you write, I think they're amazing. This one in particular, you have captured Willow and Tara especially (and *coughs*Faith*coughs*). How do you do that? Really! You just seem to understand those characters better than anyone I know. I think you have this ability to get inside Tara's head and figure out her issues and motivations and bring out that hidden beauty that lies inside of her, that light that she's obviously going to spread in the world of these characters in this fic.



Oh, and can Buffy or Faith slay Tara's dad? Please? Just a suggestion. *smiles sweetly* I'm looking forward to what you do with him and the rest of the story babes, I can't wait.



Love you forever... and a day (maybe Saturday, pick a day)

Chelle

xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo

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Feedback before Update:)

Postby gabbles » Sun Jun 06, 2004 5:53 am

Grimmy: Hey:) I hate writing Tara thinking she's hopeless...she's stronger then that. But dont worry, I promise to take care of her:) And her stupid family...

I'm glad you like the differences that are there...Willow has gone a bit overbored on the clothes and stuff...and I'm hoping that the reason why will be showen in this fic...it'll be underlining, but will be addressed more and more in each chapter. Promise:)

Giles, also, is a bit different in this fic. He never had much power over the scoobies (lol), but he had respect, and he really did have much more of the authoritarian place then I think he even realised when they were in highschool....but he's sorta lost that in this reality. He has a bit less power. Did that make sense?

Thanks for the feedback and I hope you continue to like:)



Chelle: YAY! You've joined *dances around* Everyone, I would like to introduce one of the best writerers I know! She's brilliant. I love you so much babes and am so happy you've joined the Kitten! Hehe....not revealing plans for Tara's dad...*whistles innocently*





"I'm known as the fat lesbian chick on Buffy. Of course, I mean you stand me next to an actress like Sarah and I look like I'll eat her. *beat* Wait, that didn't sound right. But, you know what I mean."-Amber

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Chapter 5:

Postby gabbles » Sun Jun 06, 2004 6:01 am

Hey Kittens! *ducks from any incomming airborne objects*



Sorry about the length in time from the last update to this one...RL decided to hit me rudely in the butt, then dump lots on me and laugh as it watched. *ahem* Im not ranting..



I was gonna completely finish this Chapter (which is a loooooong one) before I posted it, but decided to break it up into two parts...Chapter 6a and Chapter 6b (i am so origninal). So, I present you with 6a, and soon (hopefully...im in the middle of exams) 6b *G*...6b will be fun....promise.



All disclaimers apply....I own nothing...'cept the bizarre world I've stuffed 'em in.



Chapter 6a:Chapter 6:



"D-Dad?" Tara stuttered out.



"What?" Her fathers harsh tone stung her ears, and Tara tried not to wince. Sumining up her courage, Tara tried to continue.



"I-I'm going t-to go to b-bed early, if y-you dont n-need anything e-else; s-schools been t-tiring."



Damn the stutter, it always got so much worse when talking to Donny or her father. Which seemed to amuse Donny, and agrivate her father even more.



"I left a-a snack on the c-counter f-for you and D-Donny when h-he gets h-home." Tara held her breath, hoping that he would just accept it and let her go. He'd gotton home at five that afternoon, and had been drinking quite heavily scince, which could be good for her...or bad. He was reaching the point of passing out on the couch, which was leaning in the way of good. However, if he decided she was been insolent, it could easily go the other way.



Her father lazily lifted his gaze from the TV, and owlishly tried to focus on her.

"Get your ass to bed then," He slurred. Tara kept her gaze to the ground and her body in defensive posture-no need in annoying him by seeming to be too confident. "Lazy bitch." Tara heard him mutter under his breath.



He wasn't too bad tonight, there had been a bit of yelling before about dinner, but all in all, he was pretty mellow.



Seeing her father turn his attention back to the TV, Tara let out an inaudible sigh of relief. Tonight he was choosing to ignore her. Thank the goddess.



Backing out of the room, Tara walked to her small bedroom at the end of the hall. Closing the door gently behind her, she walked over to her closet and grabbed out a dark long sleeved top and pulled it over the sleeping singlet she wore. Pulling off her pyjama bottoms, Tara grabbed one of her only darkly coloured skirts and pulled the slightly flowing material on.



She hated these dark clothes. Her mother and her had always dressed in lighter colours; red, yellow, orange, green, purple, blue. All light shades-they had barely owned any darker ones. Her mother had always said that the brighter colours would brighten your day....dress how you want to feel, was what she said. Not that her mother judged people on their clothes...it was just a thing with her. Their flowing skirts and simple, colourful tops were something they both took a strange pride in.



Checking her outfit in the mirror, Tara decided she just had to have someting brighter then navy blue and black. Looking around her room, she saw her mothers red scarfe. Smiling slightly, Tara picked it up, running the fabric through her fingers.



Days of magic sessions out in the woods, of her mothers musical voice, of laughter tinkling around her, of blonde hair so like her own against the sharp red fabric ran rampant through her head.

Her small smile grew into a lazy grin as she remembered the magical days with her mother.



Blinking slightly to snap herself out of it, Tara wrapped the scarfe around her neck, loving the softness against her skin, and the smell of her mother that still seemed to linger on it. Deciding that the red would have to do, Tara lightly walked over to the window near her bed and reached to slide it open.



She paused. She was about to sneak out again. She hadn't snuck out for awhile. More for the fact that Tara was too terrified to then anything. But...she was sneaking out for legitimate reasons. She was about to go out and help fight forces of darkness...be a cool monster fighter.

A wry smile crossed her lips...that so wasn't why she was sneaking out.



She was sneaking out to see Willow.



If she was caught...there would be hell to pay. Sneaking out would bring a repeat of the last time she'd rebelled. There would be anger, fists, feet, voices...oh god, the anger in the voices. The cold malice. The telling her how she wasn't worth anything; that she was below everyone.



But no, she's above all this. Her mother told her a thousand times that she's special, that her Father and Brother didn't understand what they were doing...that she mustn't believe what they say.



But her mothers gone now...insn't that proof that maybe her mother may have been wrong? Maybe she is worthless...a dirty witch with no hope or purpose but to stay home and look after her family?



Nothing but a play thing for Donny in a rage, or a venting utensil for her drunk, angry Father?



She'd only just started to be trusted to walk home alone again.



Did she really want to risk everything just to see the redhead?



'Hell yes!'



Tara slid open the window, lifted a leg over the edge and pulled herself over. She was going to do something for herself. It may not be the smartest thing she's ever done-but it was the most right feeling thing.

Some one found her worthy to talk to...maybe her mother was right...

******************

Xander walked along the now empty, silent hallway of Sunnydale Highschool. Everyone else had gone home already. Lucky them. He could be at home right now, listening to country music. The music of pain. But noooo-he was at school. At 6:30 at night. Researching demons, of all things. About to join a librarian and two slayers who couldn't keep their hands off of each other in the library. To pretend to research when really all he was doing was eating doughnuts.



Mmmm...doughnuts.



Almost at the Library doors, Xander paused.



Xander reached to his left.



Xander closed his left hand around a door knob.



In one swift movemnt, Xander stepped back, tunrned the handle and pulled.



Xander stepped over two slayers who were entwined together, shock on both their faces, who had just landed with a heavy thud on the floor.



"Shouldn't you two be patrolling?"

******************

Willow walked into the empty kitchen, looking at the calender on the fridge. Checking the box that said 'Mum and Dad Come Home' in her mothers handwriting. Willow rolled her eye's-that was written for two and a half weeks ago.



Two weeks. Over two weeks since they were meant to be back, and all she'd gotten was a measly postcard. Woo hoo.



Ah, well, she like having the house to herself. Having her parents around would just bring up too many questions of why she was out all the time. If they even noticed she was out late. But still...would it really hurt to just call her up and have a conversation with her?



Blowing a peice of hair out of her eyes, Willow opened the fridge and grabbed a bottle of water. Taking off the cap and taking a long sip, she looked to her left and saw the cork board covered in photo's.



'Christ...when was the last time I looked at those?' Walking up closer, Willow couldn't prevent the small smile that graced her lips.



In the centre was stuck a photo of her fith birthday. Xander and herself were standing in the backyard, balloons and streamers tied on everything available. Cake coverd their faces, their grins visable only just through the chocolatey goodness. Willow's pink fuzzy sweater was covered in the chocolate and also what looked like strawberry ice-cream. Hands clasped tightly together, they looked just like two five year olds should. Young, carefree, happy and covered in chocolate.



Shaking her head slightly at the photo, she remembered just how close her and Xander had been. Ever since he saved her from the terror of being in trouble for breaking the yellow crown. Best friends through and through, that was them.



Looking at the other photo's, Willow took in her as a baby, taken when she was about four months old at the day care centre; her at three years old, standing in her grandmothers kitchen, raw cookie dough covering her face, along with a cheeky, impish grin; her all dressed up, excited and nervous about her first day of going to 'big kids school' when she was 6; Willow at about 12, red overalls and all, sitting across from Xander at the Ice-Cream Bar; her parents in Bankok, smiling curtly at the camera; her parents in London, standing outside Buckinham Palace; and, stuck in the right hand corner, the family photo her mother insisted on when she was ten.

All of them dressed up to the nines, Willow sitting on a stool with her mother and father standing behind her, hands resting on her shoulders. All with fixed, fake, toothy smiles directed at the camera.



Willow remembered that photo being taken. Her parents had arranged for times when they would both be home for the holidays, taken Willow to the photo shop, and told her to smile.

Afterwards, they'd gone out to dinner to the most expensive restraunt in town (ignoring her request for a Happy Meal) and tried to hold a family conversation. They'd failed miserably. But Willow rememberd how happy she had been to be sitting there, seated between her mother and father, and having them talk to her.



The smile faded...they hadn't even really been talking to her. Ten year old Willow hadn't really noticed this-the tight lipped smiles she'd gotton for her straight A report cards every year, the money given as a reward-it had all seemed so real then.



Now she didn't even get the tight lipped smiles. She got the money though. Willow Rosenburg would never have any problems with money. Hell, she even had a pretty hot car sittting in the garage. Not that she ever used it.

She didn't even have her lisence...couldn't be bothered with it. Not that her parents knew that.



Sighing, Willow walked away from the corkboard, and, looking at the clock, realised she only had twenty minutes to get to the cemetery. Turning on her heel, she ran back up the stairs to her room, opened her wardrobe door and pulled out a black bag. Willow opened it and pulled out a stake and a couple of vials of holy water.



Stepping onto the sidewalk a few minutes later, Willow took a deep breath of non-graveyard air, and turned to make her way for patrolling with a bounce in her step that made her cringe.



'Ok...why am I so excited to go patrolling. I mean, it's not as if I've never done this before. Done this many times, frequently. In fact you could call me a frequent slayer. Well, not slayer, Buffy and Faith are the slayers...I'm a side kick. I'm a frequent slayers sidekick. Their witchy frequent slayer sidekick. Along with witchy frequent skayer sidekick Tara now, too, of course. Ooo....Tara'll be there, I get to see Tara.'



Willow halted on the sidewalk. 'Ok.....weird.'



She was excited about slaying 'cause she got to see Tara. Huh...well it makes sense. Tara's a new freind. A friend she likes, and wants to get to know better. Much better...why wouldn't she be excited about seeing her? Willow started walking again.



'Tara's quirky, and nice, and sweet and when she gets a bit of confidence is rather funny, she's good to talk to, and she's beautiful, and sexy and.....woah'.



Willow halted again.



'Huh...'

***************************

Bringing her knee up, Buffy slammed it into the vampires stomach, grinning as she flew into a headstone several metres away. Now this is fun.



Buffy watched and smirked as the vampire stood up, only to be kicked in the side of the head by a boot worn by Faith.



"Good move, B." Faith grinned at Buffy, before turning back to the vamp that had stood up and growled, "What, that's supposed to be intimidating?" she directed at the skanky vamp. Twisting her body, Faith delivered a right hook into the vamps head, followed by a kick that sent her towards Buffy.



"See, Vamp Skank," Buffy began, sending an uppercut to her face, "Chosen Two here..." another punch, this time to the vamps stomach.



Faith came up and grabbed the vamp from behind, holding her arms behind her back. "You don't wanna screw with us." Faith watched Buffy from over the vamps shoulder, "Never works out well." she threw Buffy a sultry look, "Unless it's us screwing with each other..."



Buffy smirked again, then faster then the vamp could follow, whipped a stake form the inside of her jacket and plunged it into her chest.



"Screwing with each other, huh?" She asked, sauntering up to Faith and wrapping an arm around her waist, "I beleive that always goes very, very well..."



Faith grinned, spun Buffy around and pushed her up against the gravestone.



"Wait....what about Willow and Tara," Buffy asked, making Faith pause in the movement she was making towards Buffy's neck, "Did any vamps get them?"



Faith frustratedly pulled back and stepped away from Buffy. They both looked around, only to see the two witches standing about ten meters away, talking. Completely oblivious to the fact that there had been a vamp attack.



"They wouldn't notice if they had, B." Fath threw a smirk Buffy's way. "Now, where was I?" Buffy grinned as Faith pushed her up against the headstone again, a hand half lifting her up by her ass.



"Faith, Buffy!"



With a frustrated growl, Faith stepped away from Buffy, spinning around she aggresively yelled, "What!?...oh, fuck!"



Eleven vamps had encircled Tara and Willow between them, manic grins on their faces. Two easy tragets.

However, they'd failed to notice the two slayers pushed up against the gravestone, attempting to make out.



And now those slayers were pissed at being interupted.



Buffy and Faith stepped forward into the moons light, and in view, of the vamps.



"Hello, Boys..." Faith grinned.



All eleven vamps turned their attention to the two pissed of slayers.



Tara's heart was pounding in her chest-she felt terrified beyond beleif. The vamps she'd met last night had come upon them one at a time....they'd all been very non terrifying and had only mainly attacked the slayers. Now there were eleven blood bent fiends circled around them. Terrified about summed it up. Taking a deep breath, Tara tried to concentrate.



"Ignis incente!" She muttered, directing the spell to the vamp to her left.. Nothing happened. 'Shit'

She was too paniced to do any good. Hell, on a good night, when she'd had time to focus, and become controlled, and wasn't so terrified she could swear she could hear her heart racing, she'd probably only be able to only burn two of 'em...too bigger a spell, and too bigger a thing to burn for a witch at her level. The ball of energy she'd conjured last night had been a fairly simple spell...one that used up a fair amount of energy, but was simple to do. She needed her energy, and the spell she was trying now to burn something from the inside out took more concentration, but used less phyical energy.



Willow was slightly scared. Eleven (22 fangs!!) vamps was a bit intimidating. Just a bit.

Hearing Tara mutter something sounding like a spell, Willow turned to look at the blonde and saw her face become frustrated when it didn't work. Suddenly, Tara's eyes were on her.



"Willow, do you trust me?"



Willow didnt hesitate, "Yes."



"Concentrate on your magics..." Tara grabbed her hand, feeling the buzzing connection run between them, and, trying not to get distracted by it, turned her attention to the vamps.



All this had taken about 6 seconds, in which the vamps circled behind them had moved foward to face the slayers. They were being vertually ignored.



Willow pulled the elements into herself, and channeled them towards Tara. She'd felt the connection charge between them, and couldnt help but be distracted for a few seconds. Trying to gain her focus, Willow closed her eye's.



Tara felt Willow let her magics flow into herself, and tried not to gasp. The feeling was exquisite. She could feel Willow...it was amazing, beautiful, shocking....and a little arousing.

Squeezing Willow's hand, Tara looked at the vamp on the left, thought the incantaion in her head, and before she could say it, he burst into flames, and the next second dust was everywhere.



Tara gaped. Willow, eye's now open, gaped. Buffy gaped.



Faith grinned, "Wicked cool!" and launched herself at a vamp who was busy staring at the spot in which his friend (comrade? fellow vampire?) had exploded into dust.



Buffy's face broke out into a full blown smile, and dodged a kick from a vamp who had recovered from his shock and attacked the closest thing to him.



Tara watched as the now ten....nine (Go Faith)...remaining vamps attacked the slayers. They weren't even paying attention to the two witches. Looking at Willow, Tara noticed the other girl had her eye's closed again, concentrating on the magics. And good goddess did she look hot. 'Tara, now is sooo not the time.'



Tearing her eye's from Willow, Tara kept their hands linked and moved so her body was in front of Willow's. She didnt feel scared, or terrified, or worried, or unfocused any more...she felt strong, confident, in control...and that damn aroused feeling would not go away.



A grin spread over Tara's face, and she put her focus on a vamp that had co-ordinated with three others to gang up on Buffy. Willing her magics, Tara levitated him, then threw him across onto a protruding tree brach, watching him burst into ash. 'Cool'



The magic was everywhere around her at once, and Willow had never felt anything so amazing. Her body was tingling all over, and she could swear she could feel Tara somehow. She could feel what Tara was doing to the vamp and she couldnt help the sly grin on her face. Together they were kicking ass.



The vamps were down to six, and Buffy was having a blast. She couldn't wait to get these last ones dusted so she could hit the Bronze and shock the party goers there with Faith. It was a favourite past time of theirs....though, unfortunately, people were getting used to them. Some even anticipating it...but, oh well. At the moment she couldn't care less...some power seemed to be entering her body, and she felt turned on beyond beleif. Her hormones were going haywire. Something was radiating heat and it was making her hot...and it seemed to be comming from the two witches. Taking a quick look at the redhead and blonde, Buffy could see the power radiating them. But who cares...she just now wanted to jump Faith there and then. Buffy grinned as the vamp she was fighting burst into ash.



Suddenly the five remaining vampires stopped what they were doing. Throwing furtive looks at each other, three ran one way, and two ran the other.



"Damn pussies!" Faith cried...though her face was covered in a grin. She felt hot and ready to slay something...then she wanted to jump Buffy.



Tara looked after the retreating vamps in confusion. 'Pussies is right...'



Willow opened her eyes, sensing a change from confident to slightly confused from Tara. She was greated by the sight of five vampires backs. Quickly making a decision, Willow yelled out, "Buffy, Faith you take the three...Tara and I will take the two."



"Sure thing, Will!" Buffy grabbed Faiths hand and took after after the group of three vamps that had raced the other way from their two buddies.



Tara threw a look at Willow, and the both took off as fast as they could after the two vamps, adreniline ('And that damn arousal!') pumping through their veins.





TBC



Questions....comments...more airborne objects?





"I'm known as the fat lesbian chick on Buffy. Of course, I mean you stand me next to an actress like Sarah and I look like I'll eat her. *beat* Wait, that didn't sound right. But, you know what I mean."-Amber

Edited by: gabbles at: 6/6/04 6:55 am
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Re: Chapter 5:

Postby sam darls » Sun Jun 06, 2004 6:42 am

Hehe..no airborne objects flying from me :p ..I loved the update, so lovely. Love sam xx

"Sometimes things happen between people that you don't really expect. And sometimes the things that are important are the ones that seem the weirdest or the most wrong. And those are the ones that change your life." - Jessie Sammler (Evan Rachel Wood)

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Re: Chapter 5:

Postby CEsgirl13 » Sun Jun 06, 2004 10:33 am

really awesome story here. hoping for an update soon.

When you choose to hold the rose you are also agreeing to bleed.

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Re: Happy Updateyness

Postby BurningWhiteRose » Sun Jun 06, 2004 9:13 pm

WoooHOOO!!



Tara was watching Willow's butt. Thats always a very good sign.



AlWaYs!!



Much Kudos,

:flower BWR

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Re: Happy Updateyness

Postby ChelleKat » Mon Jun 07, 2004 8:46 am

This is going brilliantly. I have a problem though babes, a very serious one I am afraid... every time you update your fic I have this desire for more! Grr arrgh! ;)



I vote for more Tara butt watching. And more Faith action. *coughs*



You have this great combination of action, romance and a deeper and serious/dark storyline going on here I think is really well done. Very Josslike in its ability to make us sigh, gasp, cry and laugh, all in the space of 5 minutes.



Updateyness = extreme happiness. :)



Love ya,

Chelley

As this ink fades so shall I, its imprint a reminder...

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Feedback

Postby gabbles » Wed Jun 09, 2004 4:10 am

Sam: Phew... lack of airborne objects a good thng;) Glad you liked the update:)



CEgirl13: Glad you like the story...update'll be comming soonish



BWR: LOL...glad you liked the butt wacthing!! Thanks for reading and replying:)



Chelley: :flower Hehe...like to leave you anticipating babes;)

I solemnly promise more Faith action, just for you....and, since it was so highly received, more Tara watching Willow-Butt.

Extreme happyness hopefully comming soon;)



Thanks everyone for the feedback:)



*hugz*

~Gabs





"I'm known as the fat lesbian chick on Buffy. Of course, I mean you stand me next to an actress like Sarah and I look like I'll eat her. *beat* Wait, that didn't sound right. But, you know what I mean."-Amber

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Re: Feedback

Postby Grimlock72 » Thu Jun 10, 2004 4:18 pm

I liked both girls looking back on their childhood. What is worse; neglected by your parents or adored by one and abused by the other ? I found the part of 10 year old Willow going onto a ease-our-consciense diner particulairy sad :cry .



Interesting to see Willow look at pictures of herself in colorfull clothers. Might be usefull later on :)



I'm suprised only one vampire burned to dust when Tara did that spell with Willow for the first time. Such a huge increase in power, Tara must have truly practised a lot of control. Even when she was slightly distracted at 'feeling' Willow, heh.



Oh yeah, also liked how Willow kept stopping and wondering about why she was so glad to go patrolling. That was fun. I'm still surprised Willow wants Tara to go with on patrol though, it's not like it's a very safe way to pass the time. Compared to staying at home it might be though.... idiotic father and brother.



Both better hope/pray that Willow never hears how they treat Tara. For some reason I can't see that going over well for the male MaClays, till that time Tara will have sneak in reaaaally carefully. Which worries me quiet a bit.



Grimmy

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"You hurt Tara," Willow said too calmly. "The last one who tried that was a god. I made her regret it." -- Unexpected Consequences by Lisa of Nine

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Re: Feedback

Postby KiwiAlcyone » Thu Jun 10, 2004 10:20 pm

Man, is there anything cooler and more sexy than Willow and Tara taking on vamps together with there magicks? Well, I can think of a few things :D but the taking on vamps thing is pretty cool :P



The action sequences were masterfully written and definitely very exciting.



I also really like your take on the Buffy 'absent-parent' them. I think it came across as very sad and heart-wrenching in Willow's case...and in made me mad in Tara's.



Keep up the good work because I always look forward to an update to your awesome fic,



:peace Alcy

Reality continues to ruin my life - Calvin and Hobbes

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More Feedback:)

Postby gabbles » Fri Jun 11, 2004 3:49 am

Grimmy: Thats one of the things that I'm trying to put across...your whole question on what's worse: absent parents, or being adored by one and abused by the other...it kinda shows that theres many degrees to abuse/neglection etc.

I like writing 'look-back' kinda situations...expect some more of those.

Ten year old Willow and her parents...Im glad I made you feel something there...there was meant to be some sadness there.

In my reality (the joy of AU's :) ;) ), Tara's gonna be a very big Wicca girl...which will be shown later...big with the control of her magics and stuff (though she was in Buffy, too).

Willow with Tara going on Patrol...it should come up later, but what I'm going for is it doesn't really cross Willow's mind as all that dangerous...she's been doing it since she was in her early teens...kinda hard to explain...will put it through later:)

I'll give you one hint....Tara will get away from the Evil family....lol.

Thanks for the feedback...I always like yours, there so well detailed:)

Alcy: Hehehe....Willow and Tara with the sexy and the magics and the taking on vamps..glad you liked;)

Im glad you like the action sequences...I've never written them before and was pretty hesitant to...they're hard to pull off. Good to know you liked it:)

Absent parents...something that I think they should have delt with a bit more in the show, and I plan on doing it in my fic:)

Im glad you're enjoying Alcy, and thanks for the feedback:)





Thanks to all:)

*hugz*

~Gabs

"I'm known as the fat lesbian chick on Buffy. Of course, I mean you stand me next to an actress like Sarah and I look like I'll eat her. *beat* Wait, that didn't sound right. But, you know what I mean."-Amber

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Chapter 6b

Postby gabbles » Mon Jun 14, 2004 9:57 am

Notes: Well, I got this finished quicker then I thought I would:) it's not as long as my other updates-but being part B, I figure I'm excused;) lol

I'm not sure how long my next update will be-probably not too long. Oooo! And in three weeks I have a three week holiday-which means lots of fic writing time!

Also, this hasnt been Beta'd at all...all errors (Which there will be some!;) are allll mine:)



Discaimers apply (of course)



Anyhoo...onto the update:







Chapter 6b:





Faith and Buffy let go of each others hands, running faster after the vamps, who seemed to be drained and slow. Buffy flashed Faith a grin and jumped a heavy set vamp from behind, and the two tumbled to the ground.



Faith almost laughed at her girlfriends antics. Grabbing a stake out of her jacket, she threw it at the vamp furtherest in front, staking him and grinning as he burst into dust. Faith then reached out an arm and grabbed the jacket of the third vamp, yanking him backwards.



The vamps didn't stand a chance.



Faith was dusting off her clothes when I blonde headed someone pushed her back to the ground and straddled her.

*********************

Tara and Willow slowed down-they'd lost sight of the vamps.



Breathing hard, Willow looked across at Tara, and felt her breath catch and her stomach flip. Tara's hair was windblown, her cheeks flushed a brilliant pink. Her skirt was blowing around her legs in the slight breeze and her eyes were a deep shade of blue, darkened from adrenaline...'or something else?'



Taking a step forward, Willow held Tara's gaze. They were just a step a part, and her heart was pounding in her chest. Their magics felt as if they were still were connecting them, swelling up in her body, swirling, making her skin tingle and cry out for touch. Touch from Tara.



Tara could hear her own heart pounding in her ears, could hardly control her breathing as Willow took another step forward so that they were standing so close she could feel Willows warm breath wash gently over her own flushed skin. Willow's lips were mere inches from hers, and Tara's mind was a haze of desire and magics. She couldn't think straight, all she wanted was for Willow to touch her.



Willow subconsiously licked her lips, her eyes still stuck on Tara's never ending blue. Slowly, ever so slowly and not even realising she was doing it, just knowing she needed to be closer, Willow lent in towards the blonde.



"Oof!" Willow felt herself be yanked backwards, and thrown to the ground. "What the fuck!?"



"Willow?" She heard Tara's hesitant voice reach her ears. Looking up, she saw the two vamps they'd been chasing. One standing above Willow, the other holding Tara.



"Well, well," The skinny runt holding Tara said, "Not only do we got some witches on our hands...we got witches into each other...this could be fun."



Willow felt herself get pissed at this runts words. He was wiggling his eyebrows, then she saw his hand start to creep to the hem of Tara's shirt.



"Let. Her. Go." Willows voice was eerily slow and calm. She slowly stood up, the other vamp, just only slightly bigger then his runty companion, looked her up and down, yellow eyes glinting. Willow slipped her hand into her pocket and pulled out the holy water quicker then could be followed, throwing it forcibly at the vamp that had Tara. She hit him perfectly in the face.



Taras heart had been hammering in her chest when the vamp had grabbed her, and thrown Willow. She's had to fight vomiting when its cold, clammy hand had touched where her skirt and shirt met. She'd experienced alot of things, thanks to her father and brother, and she could deal with alot of things...but the feeling of being held and touched was not one she wanted to know, nor did she know, and not one she'd agree with lightly.



When Willow's holywater hit the vamp in the face, she kicked backwards, catching the vamps in the shin, then bent slightly, sending her elbow back and connecting with his groin.



A grins spread across her face when she did this, the vamp in pain in three places, skin hissing from the holy water and grunting from her hits.



Willow saw Tara take some hits to the vamp, and grinned. The slightly larger vamp scowled, the growled, and took a step towards Willow.



"You're gonna regret that..."



Willow gulped, "Tara take that one!" and threw a stake to Tara, just as the vamp lunged at her. "Shit!"



Willow kicked out like Buffy had taught her, catching the vamp in the gut. She pulled out her spare stake and threw another kick, hitting the vamp in the side.



Tara caught the stake, panicing slightly. 'Stake...right...I can do this!'



Tara turned to see the vamp that had grabbed her in alot of pain, still clutching his face and hissing. Putting the stake up in 'Staking Posture', Tara pushed the stake into the vamps chest and pulled it out, waiting for him to go 'poof'.



Nothing happened. He just hissed some more, the pain from the holy water too much to make him take in much around him. Tara was confused as hell...he should be poofing right now. Yet he wasnt. Then it clicked. Hearts more to the left, not to the right....she laughed at herself. Lunging again, she caught the vamp in the right spot and watched him burst into dust.



'I made him go poof!' She smiled proudly.



Willow's eye's widened as that vamp lunged forward, tackling her to the ground and straddleing her legs, pinning her down. 'I can't go like this!'



"Hold still, Witch, it won't hurt much." And with that he started towards her neck



Tara turned towards Willow, all proud, still pumping from adrenaline. What she saw made her heart skip a beat. Willow on the ground. Willow on the ground being pinned by a vampire. The vampire heading for her neck.



Thanking the adrenaline in her blood, Tara lunged forward, stake in hand, and landed on the vamp, staking him through the back. The vampire exploded and Tara felt gravity take hold and she fell downwards.



Willow blinked as the vamps teeth got closer to her neck, and in that fraction, her blinking, when she opened her eyes again...there was only vamp dust, and blinking agian, there was Taras face an inch in front of hers and Taras weight pressed brilliantly against her. And all thoughts left her body, she could only feel.



Taras breath carressed her lips; Tara's body was pressed into hers; Tara's leg had slipped between her own and was pressing into her. All she could feel was Tara.



Tara kew she should move. She was probably squashing Willow. But she found she couldn't. She could feel Willows body beneath her; she could feel Willows leg between her own; she could feel Willows heat on her thigh that pressed between Willow's own legs; she could feel Willow breathing. Everything was Willow.

******************

Buffy jogged through the cemetary, Faith right behind her. Faith re-buckling her belt as Buffy pulled her top back over her head. 'Hope Wills and Tara are ok...'



Faith smirked to herself....the cemetary was such a convenient place for two slayers.



Rounding a corner, Buffy said in her normally over loud voice, "You think they got the two vamps?

******************

Without realising it, Tara had slowly lowerd her lips. Willow's bottom lip just grazed her own, and it took all her self restraint not to claim her.



Willow looked into the endless blue above her, and felt desire settle low in her belly as Tara lips only just grazed her own. It couldn't even be described as brushing...but a tingle spread from her lowers lip all the way through her body due to the slight touch.



"You think they got the two vamps?"



Tara blinked. Willow blinked. Jumping up, the stood and looked at each other owlishly, just as the two slayers rounded the corner of the crypt they were next to.



"So, you got the vamps then? Great-we ready to Broze it?" Faith didn't give them a chance to answer. She wanted music. Dancing. Buffy.

****************

Entering the Bronze, Faith, Buffy, Willow and Tara took in the scene before them. Being a school night, and at eleven thirty, the club had mainly adults, and not too many of them at that. A few teenagers were spread through out the place, some non schoolies and some just trying to gain a break form school. No band was playing, yet the music was good, as it always was-strong, and clear.

Faith, grabbing Buffy's hand, dragged Buffy onto the dancefloor, whispering something in her ear that made Buffy flush and smirk. Normally the two didn't have many public displays, waiting for times like the cemetary and the janitors closet to let go and have their passion consume them. However, the Bronze was, especially after slaying, a place where they let loose and became imersed in each other. Alot of late nighters of the Bronze were rather used to the two hot girls in leather pants, who seemed to love leaving every person in the club hot after just dancing with each other

.

As a new strong, sensual beat took over the speakers, Buffy and Faith moved together. Buffy's hand slung itself over Faiths waist, Faith's hand clasped at the back of Buffy's neck, their spare hands resting at their sides, forheads resting together. Slipping her thigh in between Buffy's leg, Faith started the dance the two were so well known for.



Willow and Tara still stood in the doorway, watching the two dance. Their bodies were humming, well aware of the closeness of the others heat.

"They always l-like this?" Tara asked.

Willow smirked, knowing full well what the two slayers were feeling. From past experience and her present one.

"Yeah. Those two always turn up here after slaying. They both get really worked up." Willow was struggling not to look at Tara and give her feelings away. After what happened in the cemetary, Willow still felt the desire and their connection running through her body, consuming her and fogging her mind.



"Hmm..." Tara knew the feeling. Since they'd been interupted in the cemetary by Faith and Buffy, Tara was restraining herself from pushing Willow against the wall.

The beat of the music was overtaking the two girls, and along with the strong desire, they were beyond aware of each other, bodies tingling and minds lost.



Willow once again looked to the two Slayers on the dance floor. Their eye's were locked onto the other's; hands clasped each other tightly as the rocked to the sensual beat.

Taking a deep breath, Willow finally managed to tear her eyes from Buffy and Faiths extremely arousing display. Looking at Tara, she decided to do it.

"Tara...wanna dance?"









T.B.C...



"I'm known as the fat lesbian chick on Buffy. Of course, I mean you stand me next to an actress like Sarah and I look like I'll eat her. *beat* Wait, that didn't sound right. But, you know what I mean."-Amber

Edited by: gabbles at: 6/14/04 9:05 am
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Re: Chapter 6b

Postby wimpy0729 » Mon Jun 14, 2004 12:34 pm

Oh my, I think that got my adrenaline pumping too!



Excellent update! Lots of action of all kinds. Faith and Buffy are just well, hot and horny.



And now Willow and Tara are feeling the desire pumping through them too. :heart Oooh this is really starting to heat up! Great job!



Can't wait for more!



Wimpy





"I like being in complete and utter control. I like to dominate!" ~ Amber on her favorite thing about the making of 'Chance'.



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Re: Chapter 6b

Postby sam darls » Mon Jun 14, 2004 1:20 pm

Awww, wonderful update :heart . Love sam xx

"Sometimes things happen between people that you don't really expect. And sometimes the things that are important are the ones that seem the weirdest or the most wrong. And those are the ones that change your life." - Jessie Sammler (Evan Rachel Wood)

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Re: Chapter 6b

Postby her BRIGHTeyes » Mon Jun 14, 2004 1:40 pm

ooh. tension.



sexy dance soon?? :drool

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Re: Chapter 6b

Postby BurningWhiteRose » Tue Jun 15, 2004 12:19 am

HOOPLAH!!



Willow and Tara are gonna dance...cause Faith and Buffy are dancing and making the two even hotter! So yeah...Thats gonna be good.



CoNtInUe SoOn!!



Sincerely,

:flower BWR

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Re: Chapter 6b

Postby veiled isis moon » Tue Jun 15, 2004 5:16 pm

Hey!! No fair, you can't stop there!! What with the near kiss and all those feeling rushing through the both of them, and now they're gonna dance, which will lead to more naughty activities like...........Hey! no fair! Man, tease much???



Interesting approach on the story. Willow and Xander fighting before Buffy came along. It's hard to see Willow and Xander and the rest of the scoobies all with the doom and gloom, I hope Tara helps them all enjoy life and have some fun, bring back their quirky personalities. I can only dream!!



Great fic.



Michelle.x

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Feedback

Postby gabbles » Wed Jun 16, 2004 7:12 am

Wimpy: Good to know I got your adrenaline pumping;) Faith and Buffy are, as you put it, plain hot and horny! LOL. Kinda going with the whole "Hungry And Horny" after a slay thing...figured two slayers together would be ten times worse then just one alone. Hehe. More heating up to come:)



Sam: Glad you liked Sammy:) More to come soon.



Bright Eyes: *whistles innocently* I decided to not let them dance, and send them back to Boysland on an express train. Mwahahha...no, JJ. Hehehe....dancing soon. Maybe. If I'm feeling charitable;) lol Thanks for reading:)



BWR: OOO I earned a HOOPLAH?! *feels special* lol. Dancing's a possibilty...hehe. Continues Soon, promise:)



Michelle: Hehe-I'm a tease? OO YAY! *coughs* I mean, bad, bad me. LOL.

I'm glad you like my approach...I wanted to try something a litle different....hope I'm pulling it off! lol. Writing all the doom and gloom isn't all that fun-though it is interesting, lotsa diving into the characters heads. How can Tara not have a positive impact on our Wills?







Update almost done Kittens-and have been in a BIG writing mood-muse hit me on the head....hard....so they'll be not too far apart for awhile.



Thanks for reading, I always appreciate feedback:)

*hugz*

~Gabs





"I'm known as the fat lesbian chick on Buffy. Of course, I mean you stand me next to an actress like Sarah and I look like I'll eat her. *beat* Wait, that didn't sound right. But, you know what I mean."-Amber

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Chapter 7

Postby gabbles » Sat Jun 19, 2004 9:31 am

Notes: Um...look at that...my updates weren't that far apart. Go me *G* Ok, hope you like the update. It's kinda short....but they should get longer:)



Enjoy Kittens



*All discalaimers apply blah blah blah*









Chapter 7:



"Tara...wanna dance?"



Tara felt like everything was spinning. Looking at Willow, Tara saw something she hadn't seen in the redhead before. A slight....apprehension.. The redheads eyes, which always seemed at least slightly guarded, conveyed something that plainly said 'I know your gonna say no', and they also showed...was that desire?



Tara felt her heart thudding in her chest as she slowly nodded her head and let Willow take her hand. Feeling the soft skin slide against her own, Tara could swear sparks danced across their joined hands.



Willow felt their joined hands clasp together, and felt a sensation run through them that went straight to her centre. Swallowing, she looked up and gazed into the bluest eye's she'd ever seen, and slowly led Tara onto the dance floor.



The beat of the sensual music reverberated in Tara's mind and body, consuming her. She was already swaying, and she could feel Willow moving gently to the music already as well. Tara gently tugged on Willows hand, urging her to stand closer to herself.



Willow felt the gentle tug, and moved forward so she was standing close enough to Tara for skin to occasionally brush. Hands joined, they moved gently to the beat, not entirely dancing together, yet definitly not apart.



Taras heart was thudding in her chest, her face flushed gently as she felt Willows thigh brush her own. She closed her eye's, letting the sensation of music and Willow wash over her. She felt Willow's unjoined hand rest softly on her hip, felt the heat radiate onto her skin. Moving forward slightly, Tara almost moaned as her swaying form came into contact with Willows own, and she slipt an arm around her neck. The sensations were overwhelming.



The two girls swayed together, sensuality and arousal drifting off them, only to surround them hazily, causing their own world to take them over. They swayed to the beat of the music, arms holding tight, legs shifting, sliding.



Willow felt lost in all things Tara. Her hand rested on the blondes waist where her shirt had ridden up, and she could feel the silkyness of her skin. Heat radiated between them, and Willow let her hand slip from Tara's hip, round to her back, resting under the material of her shirt, effectvely pulling them closer together. Tara's arm rested around her neck, their forheads resting together as they moved to the music, lost in a haze of each other. Willow moved her head so their cheeks brushed together, feeling the softness of Tara and pulling her in tighter with her arm. Letting her head drop, Willow allowed herself to rest in the crook of Taras neck. Her lips lighty carresed the blonded skin, and Willow felt arousal shoot through her body, clouding everything.



Tara's breathing was increasing, the feeling of Willow's breath washing over her neck making her pull the girl closer still. Soft lips barely grazed her skin and she barely registered the hand now resting on her back. Tara had never felt more desire pulsing through her blood then she did at this moment.



Willow pulled her face away from Tara neck, once again slowly grazing her cheek along the other girls. Resting their forheads together again, Willow stared into Tara's eyes, allowing herself to get lost in the other girls intense gaze. The darkened blue stared into her own eyes, making breathing harder then it already was. Willow let the feelings Tara evoked wash over her-Tara's skin on her hand; Tara's body swaying to the music against her own; Tara's warm breath washing over her lips; Tara's arm wrapped around her neck, holding her close; Tara's heat radiating onto her.



Without counsciously been aware of what she was doing, Tara's arm slowly slipped down from around Willow's neck, until just her hand held the soft skin, not wanting to seperate them. As she looked into Willows eye's, she slowly felt herself moving her lips forward, wanting nothing more then to crawl inside this girl.



"Wills, Tara, group of vamps, ten o'clock." Willow felt a hand grip her elbow, and give it a tug, pulling her away form Tara.



Willow blinked, trying to clear her mind. Vampires. In the Bronze. Must deal with vampires. Right.



Tara heard a voice, but tried to ignore it. Feeling her and Willow being seperated, Tara blinked, her mind a haze of Willow. Looking to the left, she saw Faith. Right. Faith slayer. Vampires. Need to deal with said vampires.



Faith and Buffy were already heading toward the back exit, where four vamps had somehow talked a group of girls to go with them.



Looking across at Willow, Tara held her gaze before they both mutually gave a squeeze of their still linked hands and turned, then walked behind Buffy and Faith to the back exit.

*********************

When Willow and Tara ran through the back exit, they were just in time to be pushed aside by a group of girls, all looking confused and scared. Still clinging to each others hands, minds still hazy, Willow and Tara looked into the ally that the Bronze's back door led into in time to see one of the vamps burst into dust, all due to a Slayer duo team effort. Willow and Tara threw each other a look before stepping in to help out the slayers. Hands still linked, Tara felt their connection run strong, and focused her attention on one of the vamps heading towards Faith's unguarded back. Using her mind, she pulled him backwards, holding him against the wall.



Faith loudly exclaimed, "Dude!" before turning to the two vamps that had stopped fighting Buffy. They took one look at their fellow pinned against the wall and took off.



"What's with the wimpy vamps tonight, damn it!?" Faith asked, pissed-she'd hoped they'd deal with these quickely, so she could get back to dancing with her girl.



"Guys, we'll get them-you two deal with that one?" Buffy asked, gesturing to the vamp struggling against seemingly nothing against the wall.



"Sure, Buffy." Willow watched the two slayers take off after the retreating vamps.



Tara was still staring at the vamp at the wall, not wanting to break her concentration too badly.



Willow watched Tara, trying to restrain herself from pushing her up against the wall and kissing her madly. Their connection seemed to have doubled as the flow of magics and desire seemed to flow between them, making her feel so connected to Tara it was exhilerating. Tara's face was flushed, her lips parted slightly, breathing heavily. Willow had never seen anything so sexy. Her mind was too clouded to even consider what this meant.



Tara was getting distractred. Willow was staring and it was hader to ignore then the desire that had just been nicely doubled by doing a spell with Willow. Their hands still clasped, seem to glow from their joined magics.



Willow shifted closer to Tara, needing to be nearer. That was all it took. Tara looked at Willow, her face only inches form her own, breathing heavily, she felt like she was about to burst. It was too much-the magics, the cemetary, the dance, more magics...



Then she realised, "Willow the vamp!" Whipping her head around, Tara saw the last remenants of the spell release, and the vamp fell from his position of a metre or so from the ground.



The vampire whipped it's head up angrily, eyes glinting and fangs bared. Before Willow or Tara could react, the vamp jumped up, and was infront of them in an instant. Willow flinched as he grabbed her by the scruff of her shirt, shoving her backwards into the harsh brick wall behind her, forcing her hand out of Tara's in the meantime.



Tara felt her stomach squirm in fear as the vampire shoved Willow backwards into the wall, forcing their hands to part. The vampire turned around to her and threw her backwards into the other wall, then turned back towards Willow. Tara felt her back connect with the wall and grimaced as old bruises made contact with the bricks.



Willow paniced as the vampire leant into her, holding her arms behind her back with one hand, pushing her head to the side with the other.Trying to kick with her legs, Willow found herself completely pinned to the wall. 'Well, shit!'



Tara pushed herself off the cold brick, and reached forward, grabbing the back of the vamps jacket, pulling him back with as much strength as she could muster. The vamp was effectively pulled back, and Tara reached forward and grabbed Willows hand.



"Y-you ok?"



"Yeah...but vamp, now looking pissed!" Tara whipped her head around in time to see the vamp standing up, shaking his head. She'd managed to make him stumble and hit the ground. 'Go me'



Willow caught Tara's eye's. Her expression said it all: 'Lets Do This'. Tara nodded once, squeezed Willows hand, and they both turned their eye's to the vamp.



Taking a step forward, the vamp held a cocky look in his eye. "So, Girlies, you wanna go together? I can make it fun...for all of us."



"No thanks," Tara pulled on Willows hand so the two were standing as close together as possible. Closing her eyes and breathing deeply for a second, Tara put her concentration on the air around the vamp. A small smile made its way to her lips. She could already feel their connection running strong. Since doing the first spell with Willow in the cemetary earlier, she'd been in a complete haze of desire and arousal. She had no idea what was causing it, but all she could think about was the redhead next to her. The smile turning into a smirk, Tara sent the magic towards the vampire, watching him fly back a few metres and hit the wall, effectively pinning him there.



Willow felt the magic run between herself and Tara, bringing back the feelings from the cemetary. Again, it was as if she could feel Tara. Her hand tingled where they touched and a small smile curled her lips as she felt Tara's grip tighten as the vamp flew back against the brick wall.



As one, Willow and Tara stepped forward, hands still linked, seemingly glowing due to the magic flowing between the two. A peice of broken crate floated up from the ground, slowly rotating as it became eyelevel with the two witches.



Tara felt Willows amazement at the rotating peice of jagged crate. She herself was quite amazed at the fact that they were managing to hold the vampire (who looked like he was about to wet his pants) and float the makeshift stake at the same time. The connection between the two ran stong, and Tara felt like they were One.



With a flick of her wrist, Tara sent the stake spinning towards the vampire, watching it embed itself in its chest.



It took only a second to turn into dust.



Tara swallowed hard as their combined magics turned the vamp into dust. Breathing hard, she turned and looked into Willow's eyes.



Willow couldn't help but breath heavily as the vamp turned to dust. 'Wow. That was powerful...' Turning, she found herself looking into blue eye's. Willow felt her stomach flip as desire suddenly poured itself into her blood. Flashbacks of the cemetary and their dance played in her mind and Willow did the one thing she could do.



She backed Tara up against the wall and kissed her with a passion that would have shocked the Slayers.











TBC

Feedback is good:)







"I'm known as the fat lesbian chick on Buffy. Of course, I mean you stand me next to an actress like Sarah and I look like I'll eat her. *beat* Wait, that didn't sound right. But, you know what I mean."-Amber

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Re: Chapter 7

Postby wimpy0729 » Sat Jun 19, 2004 12:07 pm

Loved it! So much action -- all kinds of action. Yay!! Much blood pumpage and, oh, the arousal. I'm surprised they could stay focused long enough to get the vamp.



And ooh, kissage, kissage, kissage! :D Verry nice. I could just feel the passion -- okay, now I have to focus.



I have a sneaky suspicion that there will be much more to come! :eyebrow



Great job! Can't wait for more!



Wimpy

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Re: Chapter 7

Postby Grimlock72 » Sat Jun 19, 2004 4:34 pm

I know I worry too much, but eventually Tara has to go home and pretty much come down from her current 'high'. I think we can definitly call it a high at least :) . The 'old bruises' part served as sooooo not wanted reminder.



Makes for another question to; what attracts them to each other.. is it just magic ?? <> Tara and Willow need to talk/be together someplace where there aren't so many annoying vampires intruding on private-time. Them dancing was a good start, good for Willow being assertive and actually asking Tara.



Their magic abilities are indeed somewhat amazing considering their age. It's doubtfull Tara's mother tought her this kind of spells, fighting vampires and such... nah... :lol



Grimmy

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"You hurt Tara," Willow said too calmly. "The last one who tried that was a god. I made her regret it." -- Unexpected Consequences by Lisa of Nine

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Re: Chapter 7

Postby cutie pie » Sat Jun 19, 2004 9:05 pm

:thud :thud :thud :thud

THAT DANCE!!!!

woah....ehem..yes...sorry about that. lol.

GREAT FIC!

so living every bit of it!

cannot wait to read more.:D .

aww please say Tara doesn't get caught coz she snuck out . pleeeeeeeeeeease?*begs*

Hope to read more soon:D .

Great fic!:dance :banana :dance :banana :dance :banana :dance :banana :dance :banana :dance :banana





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Feedback:)

Postby gabbles » Sat Jun 19, 2004 11:49 pm

Wimpy: Hehehe-glad you liked:) Me having much fun with our adrenaline pumped witches:)

Thanks for the feedback!



Grimmy: Ah, Grimmy, Grimmy, Grimmy. I can always rely on you to pick up on the little things:) Sorry for the non wanted reminder. You don't worry too much...seriously, you're very perceptive. Go you:) Ahh.....and I thought it would be you who would see the magic connection thing...promise all this stuff is gonna be addressed:) Thanks heaps for the feedback Grimmy-always look forward to your replies.



Cutie Pie: LOL...glad you're enjoying this:) Thanks heaps for the feedback and hope you continue to enjoy:)



Thanks all for reading-update shouldn't be too far away. Am having way too much fun to want to stop. lol



*hugz8

~Gabs

"I'm known as the fat lesbian chick on Buffy. Of course, I mean you stand me next to an actress like Sarah and I look like I'll eat her. *beat* Wait, that didn't sound right. But, you know what I mean."-Amber

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Re: Feedback:)

Postby veiled isis moon » Sun Jun 20, 2004 8:51 am

Ahhhhh, man, you've done it again, you big tease! Very sexy update with all that passion and tension

Nice to see Willow and Tara's power seems to be growing more and more intense and powerful.

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Re: Feedback:)

Postby sam darls » Sun Jun 20, 2004 11:45 am

That was so incredibly hot..I loved it:heart . Love sam xx

"Sometimes things happen between people that you don't really expect. And sometimes the things that are important are the ones that seem the weirdest or the most wrong. And those are the ones that change your life." - Jessie Sammler (Evan Rachel Wood)

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Re: Feedback:)

Postby amazonaa » Sun Jun 20, 2004 11:37 pm

that was great. i want more.





please update soon.





brittney





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Kiss this axe, bitch!---Tara "Bargaining part 2"


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Re: Feedback:)

Postby ChelleKat » Wed Jun 23, 2004 8:05 am

This fic is on fire, babes. Seriously. I was all tingly and hot all over reading it! Ooh. The descriptions, the magic between W/T (no pun intended) and B/F... you know I love Faith... ;) Very well done. Your... *coughs* work is done here...



I am loving it and dying for an update.



*hugs* and love always,

Chelley

As this ink fades so shall I, its imprint a reminder...

ChelleKat
 

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