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Re: Lyrics

Postby Sappho » Sat Oct 04, 2003 1:05 am

Ooh, that Alison Krauss song. (Yummy and heart twinging visuals of Willow and Tara kissing.) :cry Oh how I miss them!!! I look forward to them meeting in your story.

:confused Oh hey! Does anybody out there know the guitar chords or tab for this song? I've spent close to hours looking for it after the song was played on that one :tear episode. :sob But I can't find any.

~Sappho :bounce

Willow: Yeah, that’s me. Reliable dog geyser person.

***

Anya: Give me a beer. Bartender: I.D. Anya: [Looks at him w/ disbelief] Bartender: I.D.

Anya: I’m 1,120 years old!!! Just give me a friggin’ beer! Bartender: I.D. Anya: [Sigh] Give me a Coke.

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Re: Hello There

Postby hot monkey luv 66 » Mon Oct 06, 2003 4:29 pm

Hiya all!! :wave I just wanted to say that the update with the actual meeting will be up in just a few days, and right now I have a live journal on xanga! U should check it out, and leave a comment or something! thanks a bunches!! www.xanga.com/hot_monkey_luv_66



:flower Check It Out! LOL...:flirt Please...:flirt :bow :pride Thanks a bunches again! :bigwave

:flower ~~**Monkey Luv**~~:flower :dance

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Tara:"Until I realized that was her yummy face"

WILLOW: "There's something between us. It-it wasn't something I was looking for. It's just powerful."



Edited by: Warduke at: 10/9/03 8:19 pm
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!

Postby willowsgirl » Fri Oct 10, 2003 2:00 am

Hiya hot monkey love!

I came by to check if there were any updates, but there werent :(

But, I did use the link to take a look at your xanga- it made me laugh out loud! Why are parents such idiots- Im 20 and they still think Im 12!!

Anyways, the point of this reply was to tell you i love the story so far, and I also wondered if you could tell me what the song is that is playing on your xanga page? I know its the music that plays at the end of entropy, when Tara goes back to Willow and does her 'can you just be kissing me now?' speech, but I dunno what it is! Aargh!



Cheers,

willowsgirl xx

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Re: Hay There Homies!

Postby hot monkey luv 66 » Fri Oct 10, 2003 1:38 pm

:bigwave Willowsgirl!! Well, the song is Alison Krauss, That Kind Of Love, the song plays, and the lyrics are at the bottom of the screen where it normally says "page loading: or :done:, I have the lyrics, but before the lyrics come on, it says the song playing is by Alison Krauss :That Kind Of Love, lol..., and my story should be updated soon, I'm halfway done! :) :love :wave

:flower ~~**Monkey Luv**~~:flower ":dance :moo :heart

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Willow:"I'm a breast gal myself...(quieter, to Tara), but then again, you knew that..." :wink

Tara:"Until I realized that was her yummy face"

Willow: "There's something between us. It-it wasn't something I was looking for. It's just powerful."

hot monkey luv 66
 


Re: !

Postby Willster » Fri Oct 10, 2003 1:48 pm

Lovely fic.



I don't know anything about ballet but those 2 girls can interest me in anything. ;)





Willster
 


Re: Hay There Homies!

Postby willowsgirl » Fri Oct 10, 2003 1:50 pm

Oops yeah, sorry I just saw the earlier posting about it being alison krauss :rolleyes useless!

Thanks for letting me know anyway, ill be off to look for it now, he he.

good luck with the updating, know how hard it can be, takes me ages...so I should probably stop hounding other kittens to hurry up and update shouldnt I?!



willowsgirl xx

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Re: Hay There Homies!

Postby singgirl » Fri Oct 10, 2003 9:51 pm

Wow! great start! yay! willow and tara lovins!

:peace Pax! -Bev

singgirl
 


The Best Part Of Ballet… (4/??)

Postby hot monkey luv 66 » Fri Oct 10, 2003 10:35 pm

EVERYONE! THANKS FOR THE COMMENTS, I THRIVE ON THEM, THEY PUSH ME TO WORK, OTHERWISE I PROCRASTINATE, AND NOBODY LIKES A PROCRASTINATOR! i'M GLAD YA'LL ARE READIN THIS, AND i DID HAVE PERSONALIZED SHOUT-OUTY THINGUES, BUT I ACCIDENTALLY PRESSED MY MOUSE WIERD OR SOMETHING, CUZ IT DID THIS WEIRD SCROLLY THING, AND WHEN I PRESSED BACK, THIS WAS BLANK!! RRG!! WELL, HERE WE GO :) :love :moo :dance :bigwave



The Best Part Of Ballet… (4/??)



Author: hot_monkey_love_66

Email/Feedback: monkeyluv662003@yahoo.com I would love feedback, seeing as this is my first fic, yes… I know! Aah! So, if you would, feedback on how to further the story/make it better/or stop now and run away, that’d be great! Thanks!

Disclaimer: The characters have been created by Joss Whedon, Mutant Enemy, and its affiliates. I do not own them in any way, although I’d like to… This story does belong to me, but if you’d like to put it in a different archive, ask, and ye shall receive… This story is solely for entertainment purposes, and I expect no money or anything else from them… I think that covers it. And it happens to be about a f/f relationship, if you don’t like that, well… leave quickly now!

Spoilers: None except the characters, but that’s not a spoiler… so none…

Angst: None really, possibly a tiny bit later on, but it all depends on how it goes…

Summary: Willow’s a famous dancer who lives in N.Y.C.; Tara’s a dance instructor for beginners in the city. Willow must go back to the city to supervise a beginner’s dance class and it just so happens to be Tara’s…

Ratings: PG-13~NC-17 ~**probably**

Author’s Notes: The characters appear as they do in season 6, Faith from Season 7, and everything else (changes) will be explained. Other than that, it’s all AU. And the ABC is the American Ballet Company.



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“Okie dokie guys… I’m gonna head out, I’ll see ya’ll in about three hours or so…kay?” Willow asked her friends as she gathered up her things for the ballet class that she would not miss. “Will, you do know that you still have about an hour before the class actually starts, right? I know that you wanna get there early, but, geez!” Xander asked her with a sarcastic grin on his face. “Yeah, Red, it’s like yer the energizer bunny or somethin’… never stoppin’” Faith told her. “I know, but I told you, I need to stretch and warm up before the teacher and students get there, so I don’t mess up or embarrass myself in front of the students, then they’ll always think ‘oh, that’s just the assistant, Willow, don’t worry about her, she’s a ditz, and can’t dance’ and then I’ll be a ditz and no one will want to hire me and I’ll be out of a job, and end up poor and on the streets, and no one wants that!” Willow told her friends in one giant breath. “We got it Will, have fun, kay?” Xander replied with his goofy half-smile. “Geez Red, next time take a breath!” Faith replied laughing. “Sure Faith, next time, but I gotta run…er…dance” Willow told Faith while grabbing a lemon PowerAde out of the fridge and heading out the door.



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Tara and Buffy were finishing up their lunch at the California Pizza Kitchen, when Buffy told Tara that she still had an hour left before her class, and if she wanted to do anything before it started. “I don’t know Buff, I want to, but I don’t want to be late for class.” “Yeah, right hun, you wouldn’t be late for class if your head was on fire” Buffy told her, knowing that Tara loved dancing as well as teaching, no matter how difficult the students could be. “Well, I guess we could make a quick walk around the Barnes ‘n’ Noble down the street for like 35 minutes.” Tara told Buffy, being unable to resist the pout that Buffy was unrelentingly giving her. “Yippee!!” Buffy said, already juiced up from the 2 cups of coffee she drank in the past four minutes.



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Willow had arrived in the Art Of Ballet dance studio a full 50 minutes early for class, and had already had time to change into her leotard, and begin warming up before her alarm on her watch told her there were only 45 minutes left before the dance class. “Oh, shoot! I’m late! I should’ve been here early, but NO! Had to take a looooong shower! Stupid tempting pulsating showerhead.” The redhead inwardly cursed letting Faith buy that, but only for a second. “It’s okay; I’ll get into shape twice as fast!” Willow told herself, mad that she let herself be an entire five minutes late.



Willow had been working out for twenty minutes and was already working up a sweat, as she reached for her PowerAde and gulped half of it down in one giant sip. “Ok, Rosenberg, you’re not quittin’ now! Nuh-huh, we are still workin double time!” Willow told herself to keep her energy up, even though she was already getting tired. She got back to work and was pushing herself just as hard as she could.



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Tara still had about five minutes before she had to get to the studio, and was in line at the bookstore purchasing a Strawberry PowerAde and a romance novel that Buffy was to busy getting flirted with by one of the sales-people to buy for herself. Buffy hadn’t been out with anyone in some time, and Tara was beginning to get worried for her. Buffy just didn’t seem interested in the guys around NYU, the college where Buffy was currently enrolled, and attending, when she didn’t skip out on classes. Tara dragged a thankful Buffy away from a leechy, losery, Trekkie looking guy, as she told her, “Do I always have to save you from guys like that?” “As long as they keep on hitting on me, and I wish they would just stop, seriously, it’s getting on my last nerve, well not the last one, but just it’s annoying.” Buffy told her with a laugh. “Well, Buffy, here’s the book, and I’m sorry, but I have to get to class now, gotta be there early, set up, you know, the usual pre-class rituals that I tend to do.” “Alright Tare, have fun at class, I hope your supervisor, assistant-y person, or whoever’s supposed to be coming today, and give me a call later? Lemme know how it goes, kay?” Buffy asked as she was walking back towards Starbucks. “Alrighty then, see ya Buff!” Tara yelled at the retreating figure of the blonde. Tara still had fifteen minutes before the class would start and decided to walk casually, and not in a hurry like she usually would.



Tara opened the side entrance in the alleyway to the left of the studio, seeing as that would be easier because of the direction she was walking from. She headed into the individual room where she taught 5 days a week to students who needed each and every minute of the practice. As she walked into the room, her gaze first landed on the large mirror that covered the wall facing the window. In it, she saw the beautiful redhead she had been seeing so often, or yet it seemed like it, eyes closed in a look of pure concentration as she struggled with her 5th position turnout, a thin sheen of sweat covering her leotard clad body, a few copper strands clinging to her forehead, and the blonde thought that she was positively beautiful, and couldn’t look sexier.



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Willow was struggling with her 5th position turnout, deep in concentration, seeing as she had been trying for a good twenty minutes on and off, but still could not perfect it as she had done just less than a month ago. She noticed a presence in the room, and opened her eyes to find that “blonde dancer” of her dreams, literally, standing across the room from her, looking more beautiful than one person should without looking like it took any effort at all. Her breath was taken away as the two continued to gaze into each others eyes, not quite sure of what to say next.



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Tara was so caught up in staring at the sexy redhead, that she didn’t realize that she hadn’t yet spoken a word. “Um… can I help you?” She asked tentatively. She knew that no one should have been using the room, as it was hers and only for her or her classes use, but somehow, she didn’t think that she could ever possibly get angry at the redhead. “oh… yes, I’m Rosenberg, Willow Rosenberg, I was supposed to supervise this class, starting yesterday, but uh….something came up, and I’m sorry, but I’m here now, and this is the room for the beginners dance class right?... Cause if it isn’t, I’m sorry, I thought this was the room, and I thought I should’ve come in early to get warmed up, and I did, and that was way to long for an ordinary human being to comprehend wasn’t it?” Willow told the blonde that she still was so captivated by, that she couldn’t bring herself to look away from her eyes. Tara laughed a laugh that was so sensual, that Willow thought that she could hear it every day for the rest of forever and never get tired of it. “Um… well, first of all, this is the class that I teach, I’m Tara, Maclay (she held out her hand and Willow took it immediately, and gripped it tightly, for some reason never wanting to let go), I thought you got lost (she said with a teasing smirk, earning a blush from the redhead), this is the beginners dance class, though it doesn’t start for another few minutes, so yeah, you’re in the right place, and it’s fine that you come in early, the rooms specifically used for this class, I leased it from Mr. Giles, the owner, and a family friend, and if that shouldn’t be comprehendible by ordinary human beings, I guess I’m not normal, ‘cause I get it.” Tara told Willow with another throaty laugh. “I’d say extra-ordinary” Willow said with a wink, already becoming very comfortable with the blonde, still not letting go of her hand, as the blonde was not showing any feelings that she wanted to, at least not anytime soon.



TBC

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:flower ~~**Monkey Luv**~~:flower :dance

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Willow:"I'm a breast gal myself...(quieter, to Tara), but then again, you knew that..." :drool

Tara:"Until I realized that was her yummy face"

Willow: "There's something between us. It-it wasn't something I was looking for. It's just powerful."





Sorry abt the mistake in Tara's last name, I put capital L... :hmm don't know y, judt a little mistake... sorry!

Edited by: hot monkey luv 66 at: 10/11/03 11:51 am
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Re: The Best Part Of Ballet… (4/??)

Postby intricate mirage » Fri Oct 10, 2003 11:37 pm

Willow babble... Tara babble... Cute! Great :read !

~ Cas



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My fountain of strength that never runs dry

You are the shooting star across the midnight sky


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Re: The Best Part Of Ballet… (4/??)

Postby Grimlock72 » Sat Oct 11, 2003 5:38 am

Heh, Willow stressing just because she's five minutes late (though she was already training when the alarm sounded so I'm not following her timing really). Are those warm-ups standard ? Since Tara seemed to recognize Willow being busy with her 5th warm-up. Maybe Willow needs a tiny bit oh help getting back into the rythm... Tara will gladly help of course :)



This has to be the story where it takes the longest in a while for Tara and Willow to meet. Got me all impatient here :-) Hopefully they'll be able to concentrate on teaching their students anything and not only look at each other, heh.



Grimmy

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"You hurt Tara," Willow said too calmly. "The last one who tried that was a god. I made her regret it." -- Unexpected Consequences by Lisa of Nine

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Re: The Best Part Of Ballet… (4/??)

Postby The Rose24 » Sat Oct 11, 2003 11:02 pm

At last, they meet. We will see if our two ladies will be able to concentrate on the classes. :lol

Tara: My heart doesn't stutter.


Tara: Willow, I got so lost.

Willow: I found you. I will always find you.


The Rose24
 


Re: The Best Part Of Ballet… (4/??)

Postby bluewillowwitch » Sun Oct 12, 2003 2:49 pm

:bigwave hot monkey luv 66 :flower ,

I so :love this fic! :clap :bow Much :heart to you. I thought that the first meeting between :willow and :tara was so adorablly cute! :heart I can' wait to :read more and see what happens next. Update soon, please? :pray :pray :pray :pray







bluewillowwitch :glasses :flower :fallen :peace

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"Fate keeps on happening."--Anita Loos

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so...

Postby Ittybittykitty » Sun Oct 12, 2003 9:29 pm

You are gonna get to the hot nakkidness right? I mean great story and everything, but I'm a big fan of hot sweaty girls:) .

"Well, if you blew a hundred bucks, we'd better make it worth your while," Tara said dragging Willow back into the laundry room and closing the door.-Happily Ever After



Ittybittykitty
 


Re: so...

Postby sam darls » Mon Oct 13, 2003 5:22 am

Yay..they meet at last. So great. Thanks. Love sammi xx

sam darls
 


Re: so...

Postby xita » Mon Oct 13, 2003 8:04 am

I am still trying to get used to the notion of willow and tara as graceful dancers, :lol . Sorry but really, it's an AU, I can buy it! And they finally met, though I wasn't minding the lusting from afar. Thanks for the fic!

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-Me & Bobby
McGee

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Replies...

Postby hot monkey luv 66 » Mon Oct 13, 2003 6:12 pm

:wave hey ya'll, not an update yet, but I'll probably get started on it tonight! :) cuz I feel a muse! lol, right. I decided to reply to the oh-so-kind kittens that leave me replies!



Intricate Mirage: I'm glad you like the babble... :) do you think it's good, I'm trying but I don't think it's as good as it could be... hmm... :hmm lol Thanks 4 reading!! :heart



Grimlock72: I'm trying to make Willow quirky, lol, she wanted to be like an hour early, it took her 5 min's to get ready and that was just a waste of precious time, lol! No, they're not standard, well the different positions are specific, 1st, 2nd, 3rd, 4th, 5th and I'm not sure how high the # gets... hmm :hmm sorry ur impatient, but I thought it'd be fun!@ :lol



The Rose 24: I think that they'll be able to think about the class, just with A LOT of concentration! :wink thanks for the props! :clap go you!



Bluewillowwitch: thanks for reading and your opinion on the meeting! updates as soon as i can! :flower



ittybittykitty: of course the hot nekkidness will come! :blush I haven't written anything like that b4, and this is my 1st story so it might be horrible, and you'll have to stone me, but it's Nc-17 4 a reason, U'll just have to wait for that fateful day... lol, there'll be a lot of romance b4 tho... lol :bigkiss



sam darls: thanks for the comment sammi! :love I'm glad ur likin the fic!! :D



xita: ahh, the last comment, last but not least eh? lol :wink they could be dancers, u never kno, Tara looks graceful enough, and Willow has practiced for a while, so you know, it took a lotta work! lol but Tara's gonna help Will get "into shape" ;) if things go the way I'm plannin :D I tried to keep the lusting from afar as a buildup, so that they'd be nervous, and having lusty thoughts constantly whenever near eachother! lol :lol



Okie dokie!!, I don't know how long it will take for an update, but hopefully soon! I'll probably work on it for like 20 mins tomorrow, but then I have a big paper to work on, so... I don't know, well I'll be back



:flower ~~**Monkey Luv**~~:flower :dance

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Willow:"I'm a breast gal myself...(quieter, to Tara), but then again, you knew that..." :drool

Tara:"Until I realized that was her yummy face"

Willow: "There's something between us. It-it wasn't something I was looking for. It's just powerful."

hot monkey luv 66
 


Re: Replies...

Postby Sappho » Wed Oct 15, 2003 12:49 am

Cool. :glasses

~Sappho :bounce

Willow: Yeah, that’s me. Reliable dog geyser person.

***

Anya: Give me a beer. Bartender: I.D. Anya: [Looks at him w/ disbelief] Bartender: I.D.

Anya: I’m 1,120 years old!!! Just give me a friggin’ beer! Bartender: I.D. Anya: [Sigh] Give me a Coke.

Sappho
 


Re: Update note thingy...

Postby hot monkey luv 66 » Sat Oct 18, 2003 12:04 am

:wave hey guys, I'm probably gonna get the update up by the end of the weekend, I meant to have it done sooner, but I've got 2 major papers due Monday, :( :eek , I know, it's been like 8 days, and I'm really, really, NOT trying to be one of those people who ONLY update once every one or two months, but hopefully, ::crosses fingers:: it will be a good update, :) continuing with the first dance class...(together) :wink who know's what kind of dancing will occur after the class? lol :bigwave

:flower ~~**Monkey Luv**~~:flower :dance

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Willow:"I'm a breast gal myself...(quieter, to Tara), but then again, you knew that..." :dance :heart :bounce :drool

Tara:"Until I realized that was her yummy face"

Willow: "There's something between us. It-it wasn't something I was looking for. It's just powerful."

hot monkey luv 66
 


Re: Update note thingy...

Postby musicmad10 » Fri Jul 23, 2004 4:11 am

Update! How long does it take you to update? :eyebrow Well please!



Luv Hannah

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Re: Update note thingy...

Postby sharleen711 » Fri Jul 23, 2004 5:16 am

UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! ......

Pleeeeeeeeeease !!!!!!!!!!!!! Can't wait more....

~ Sharleen ~

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Re: Update note thingy...

Postby VixenyTarasHot » Fri Jul 23, 2004 2:38 pm

Bah dude... I saw this on the thread and was like freakin out cuz I though it was updated... so I check it out and alas.. no update :cry

So dude, this is like an awesome story, and an update would be muchly appreciated by many!!

Having said that, have a good day.. lol



Ashleigh

"...A-and I'm gonna make it up to you. Starting right now."

(Starts to smile)"Right now?"

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Re: Update note thingy...

Postby xita » Mon Aug 30, 2004 2:53 am

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