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Survivor: Ash Island

Postby JustSkipIt » Thu Mar 03, 2005 6:22 am

wimpy0729 – Thanks. Yes, that was a challenge they actually had during the last season. Quite amusing. I’m kind of surprised that everyone is zoning in on the suspicion thing. Interesting. Honestly, I don’t think they’ve done anything to really deserve the suspicion yet.

Irene73 – Hey, here’s a woman after my own heart. Anyone who has read many of my posts will know that I’m very pro-hygiene (perhaps to the detriment of spontaneity). Yeah: goodbye Amy. No big loss.

Watched TAR! Awesome. We love Rob & Amber and are rooting for them and couldn’t believe that little Patrick with all his nastiness. We were sad to see the hillbillies go. And I loved the brothers! It was awesome. Thanks for the awesome song.

Irishgrl3 – Oh yeah! Definitely like that. I’m glad you’re enjoying the way I’m writing the challenges. They’re hard to think of but easier than I expected to write.

DreamLover – Don’t worry. I don’t think you’re late. Anyway, the W&T stuff won’t come back to bite them (much ). Ha ha. I love Faith always! Re: Shampoo – Patience is a virtue. Thanks so much. Update soon.

Urn of Osiris – Sorry to disappoint. I have another 5-6 updates written so there won’t be a stoppage anytime soon (although I am taking some time to write another Please update). Still, sorry that I’ve only gotten this far.

I’ve thought the same thing about the glasses! Seriously, did you see Tom say that fire was a loser job? Right on – Tom! But notice that Tara succeeded! Thanks.


Title – Survivor – Ash Island

Part 6 – First? Date

Author – JustSkipIt

Pairing – Who do you think? (W/T of course)

Feedback – Oh yes.

Spoilers–None

Ratiing – G to PG

Disclaimer – I own none of these characters nor do I own Survivor. And believe it or not, I also don’t own any small islands. On the other hand, this island is fictional so let’s say I own it. I’m making no money from this fiction and intend no copyright infringement.


“Well you didn’t get voted off,” Joan said as she waited with Willow for her flight to be called. “Now the question is what’s in Columbus?”

“I told you: business,” Willow repeated with exasperation at her friend’s persistence.

“Excuse me,” a tall blonde bent down toward the redhead, “aren’t you on Survivor? Yeah, you’re the super smart one.”

“Yes,” Willow answered with a smile as she pulled a pen from her bag.

The girl pulled a card from her purse and pushed it toward Willow. “Sign this for me,” she suggested and Willow did as asked. She looked at the redhead for a moment before pushing the business card back at her. “Why don’t you keep it,” she suggested, “it has my cell phone number on it.”

Willow smiled a second before gently pushing the card into the blonde’s hand and winking. The blonde shrugged her shoulders and walked off.

“You’re in love.” Joan’s voice interrupted Willow’s assward gaze.

“The fact that I’m watching her ass as she walks away doesn’t mean I’m in love with her,” Willow argued.

“Not with her, smartass,” Joan replied, “with someone in Columbus.”

“I don’t even know anyone in Columbus,” Willow argued.

“Well it’s not business,” Joan again argued.

“Why not?”

“You’re taking one computer,” Joan replied. “You take three computers when you go home for Thanksgiving and you’re only taking one for ‘business’ in Columbus?” She put air quotes around the word business.

“Hey, they’re boarding my plane,” Willow announced a little too jovially. “Feed the cat,” she said as she kissed her friend on the cheek and handed the attendant her boarding pass.

“And I noticed that you’re flying coach,” Joan called down the skyway. “Tell her I said ‘hi,’” she yelled causing Willow to laugh.

A little over two hours later the plane landed in Columbus. Willow had spent the flight alternately working and daydreaming. The Survivor showing last night had reminded her of the early days of the game. She pictured over and over the look in Tara’s eyes as she flirted with her about the shampoo. The redhead hadn’t seen Tara in over three months and wondered how she would look. How would Willow look to her? Her mouth felt dry just trying to imagine seeing the blonde again.

After she had checked into her hotel, her cell phone rang startling her from a nap: “Wha? Hello?”

“Were you s-sleeping?” Tara’s voice asked.

“Just a little,” the redhead answered sheepishly.

“How do you sleep just a little?” Tara teased.

“Well,” Willow decided to tease her back, “I’m all alone and it’s harder to sleep that way.”

“Uh huh,” Tara answered, “something tells me that’s unusual for you.”

“It has been for the last 103 days,” Willow told her a little pointedly.

“How did you find your h-hotel?” Tara asked, quickly changing the subject.

“Oh, you know, I asked at the car rental place and they gave me a map,” Willow joked.

“Is it n-nice?” Tara persisted.

“Do you want to come see it?” Willow again joked.

“What do you want to do tomorrow?” Tara attempted to change the subject.

“I guess you didn’t take my offer to see my second hotel room seriously,” Willow continued joking.

Tara decided to latch onto part of Willow’s statement: “S-second hotel room?”

“Yeah,” Willow said, “funny story. You remember how I feel about frogs and tadpoles?”

“And horses,” Tara added.

“Well, spiders aren’t really my best friends either.”

“Spider in the tub?”

“On the pillow,” Willow corrected with a shudder.

“I seriously can’t believe you went on Survivor, Willow,” Tara teased.

“What else is the 21-year-old successful software entrepreneur to do?” Willow quipped.

“Your friends d-dared you, didn’t they?” Tara retorted.

“Speaking of which,” Willow remembered, “Joan said to tell you ‘hi.’”

“You t-told her about m-me?” Tara asked with worry in her voice.

“Actually I intentionally told her nothing about you. I told her I was coming on a business trip,” Willow explained.

“Funny,” Tara said, “that’s what you told me.”

“Er… um… various signs of hesitation,” Willow finally said.

“Willow,” Tara said in a somewhat admonishing tone, “are you here on a business trip?”

“Well,” Willow stalled, “there are computers here and I work with computers?” The redhead waited a moment before saying, “Ok. I’m not here on a business trip. I’m here to see you but I definitely think I deserve points for determination.”

“You don’t need points, Willow,” Tara said warmly.

“Good,” Willow brightened up, “when can I see you?”

“My mother is going to take Ariel to a m-movie this afternoon. Can I meet you for dinner about 5:00?”

“Oh,” Willow answered,” sure that’s fine. Do you want to meet me here and you can drive?”

“Still trying to show me that hotel room?”

“I’ll be waiting in the lobby,” Willow assured her with a laugh.

“I’ll see you then,” Tara said, “go back to sleep.”

Willow hung up the phone and smiled at it for a second before rolling back into bed, thinking about the fact that she would be seeing Tara again in just a few hours.

At exactly 4:55, the redhead rode glass-walled elevator down to the lobby. The view was tremendous, not only because the hotel lobby was nicely decorated with art and foliage but because Tara was early. The blonde stood, quite unobtrusively near a bank of pay phones on the side of the lobby. Willow simply couldn’t take her eyes off the woman whose hair shone in the light coming through the windows. She wore a long red leather coat so Willow couldn’t tell how she was dressed under it but she could see the hair clasp and matching earrings both accenting the girl’s blue eyes. The redhead’s heart felt like it was beating fast, perhaps much too fast and then suddenly felt like it stopped when Tara turned and looked at her through the glass of the elevator.

And then she smiled.

The redhead stepped off the elevator as soon as the doors swooshed open and quickly walked over to Tara smiling widely. “You look fantastic,” she gushed, “I mean not that you didn’t look fantastic last time I saw you but I really think clean and fed is a good look for you.” Her eyes twinkled as she paid the blonde the compliment.

Tara reached her hand out to softly stroke Willow’s cheek as she agreed, “You too, Will. I think I can say without reservation and without sounding too sexist that I like women with a little meat on their b-bones.”

Willow continued staring at Tara as the other woman softly stroked her face. After a few seconds, and realizing that people were starting to stare at them, Willow reached up and took Tara’s hand in her own. “So,” she whispered, “dinner? I don’t think I’ll ever say that I’m starving again but I am pretty hungry.”

Tara smiled as she began turning back toward the door. “I’m w-with you there,” she agreed. She stopped suddenly. “Did I mention how f-fantastic you look?”

“Thanks,” Willow responded as they walked out to find Tara’s car parked at a meter at the curb, “you know this dating away from home is kind of nice. Even obsessing before the date, I only had two outfits to choose from.”

Tara smiled as she let the redhead into the passenger side of the car and then got in on her side. “Well, then you had a much easier time than I d-did. This is the seventh outfit I tried o-on.”

Both girls started laughing. “That’s kind of funny you know,” Willow commented, “I mean we’ve certainly seen each other looking far from best.”

“Pig chasing c-comes to mind,” Tara agreed. Willow smiled at the blonde as she reached for her hand to hold it. “You flirt,” Tara tacked on with a smirk, “share your shampoo indeed.”

“Where are we going for dinner?” Willow asked eagerly.

“Do you like Italian food?” Tara inquired. After finding out that Willow did like Italian food, in fact the redhead claimed to like every kind of food she’d ever tried and some she’d never tried, Tara informed her that they were going to go to a small neighborhood Italian restaurant she knew. It was usually quiet and they could talk and enjoy the food.

They arrived at the restaurant a few minutes later and Tara parked in the lot behind the small building. After she came around the car to take Willow’s hand she led her to an almost hidden door around front and opened the door for the other girl. “I’m supposed to be doing all this romantic, drive you, take your hand, open the door for you stuff you know,” Willow teased, “I’m the one who asked you out.”

“I’ll tell you what,” Tara answered with a smile on her face, “next time I’ll a-ask you out and you can act all romantic.”

“I won’t argue with that at all,” Willow responded, “since you said that we can go out again.”

Tara blushed slightly and smiled as the hostess returned to the hostess stand. “Hi Tara,” she greeted the girl: “Ariel and your mom aren’t with you?”

“No, Karri,” Tara answered, “they went to see The Incredibles again.” She indicated Willow and introduced the redhead: “this is Willow.”

“Nice to meet you, Willow,” Karri told the girl as she started walking toward their table with their menus in her hand. Karri seated the two girls and handed them both menus as well as a wine menu. Willow picked up the wine menu and asked Tara, “Do you drink wine?”

“You’ve seen me d-drink, Willow,” Tara answered.

“I’ve seen you eat bugs too but I didn’t figure you did it a home,” the redhead retorted.

Tara laughed and admitted, “Actually I don’t eat bugs or any sentient or formerly sentient beings.”

“I hope that’s not entirely true,” Willow muttered.

“What did you say?” Tara asked with a smirk on her face. She had a pretty good idea what Willow had said and found it as amusing as hell. Now if she could just thoroughly embarrass her smart-mouthed date…

“I said maybe we could have a bottle of this red,” Willow said pointing to the menu.

“Oh,” Tara said, “I though you said you hope it wasn’t true.”

“So, red wine then,” Willow said in a high-pitched squeal just as the waiter approached the table.

“You ate bugs and meat on the show,” Willow offered.

“I went on the show to win the million dollars,” Tara explained, “I d-decided before I left home that I would eat anything, do anything, whatever it took to w-win.”

The waiter returned to the table and took the two girls’s orders for Eggplant Parmesan and Lasagna and brought them the wine. “What would you do with a million dollars?” Willow asked.

Tara laughed, “Is this the question from Juror #5?”

“No,” Willow told her seriously, “this is the ‘I’m really interested in this woman and I want to know more about her’ question.”

“Art,” Tara answered quietly. “I’d go to art school.”

“What kind of art?” Willow asked with great interest.

“I have it at my house,” Tara answered, “I’ll show you sometime.”

“Woo hoo,” Willow joked, “potential to see Tara’s lovely abode.”

“It’s not much but we call it home,” Tara answered.

“Excuse me,” a young man said as he approached the table, “I don’t mean to be rude but are you two on Survivor?”

The two girls looked at each other questioningly for a moment before Willow responded, “You know we keep getting that question.” She turned to Tara and said, “We should watch the show sometime, honey, and see if we really look like the people on it.” Tara just nodded her head.

“Oh,” he said, “sorry to interrupt you.”

A few minutes later the waiter came over with an antipasti for them. “The guy over there sent this over and said he’s sorry he interrupted you,” he explained.

Tara smiled and said, “Well now I feel b-bad.”

“Oh come on,” Willow egged her on, “you can outplay, outwit, outlast, and you feel bad for trying to get a little privacy on our first date.”

“First date, huh?” Tara asked. “I’d say this is at least our second if not third date.”

“Damn,” Willow joked, “then I’ll definitely expect some tonight.”

Tara laughed at Willow’s comment. “So what’s your house like?”

“Is that a double entendre or do you really want to know about my apartment?” Before Tara could answer the waiter brought their dinners. “Seriously,” she explained, “it’s a nice place. A loft I bought a few years ago as a tax write-off. My bedroom is upstairs and has enough room for my bed and some exercise equipment. Downstairs is my workroom and kitchen area. The light is very good.”

“Workroom?” Tara inquired.

“Computers,” Willow again explained, “Let me see, currently I have six servers and nine laptops in there. Plus which various components.”

“What have you been doing since getting home?” Tara continued the barrage of questions.

“Eating,” Willow laughed.

“Me too,” Tara agreed.

“You look spectacular,” Willow said again.

“What else?” Tara pushed further.

“Bathing regularly,” Willow said lightheartedly, “visited my family and spent time with friends. Worked a lot, and counted down the days till the premiere.” She took another bite of her lasagna and asked, “What about you? What have you done?”

“Eating, sleeping, and b-bathing have been pretty hot pastimes for me too,” Tara agreed, “I had to go back to work right away and of course spending every second I could with Ariel.” She took a sip of wine before disclosing, “I’d never been away from her for more than a weekend before.”

“Wow,” Willow said.

“She was sad for a while but she’s doing better and she’s enjoying knowing that her mommy is on a T-TV show.”

“She must be spectacular,” Willow complimented the blonde. While they visited the check arrived and Willow paid it before Tara could reach for her purse. “You can try to beat me to it the next time,” she assured her.

They drove in relative silence to Willow’s hotel, holding hands lightly. Both girls felt awkward with the situation. They were basically dating long distance after being on an island together—living together as it were. They knew that it was too soon to share intimacy but at the same time, the difficulty of coordinating a long distance relationship loomed large. Willow took a breath before asking Tara, “Your mother and Ariel are expecting you home right?”

“By n-nine,” Tara said sadly as she looked at the clock in the car.

“Well,” Willow said as Tara parked the car in the lot next to the hotel, “then I have a speech to make.”

“Really,” Tara said intrigued, “a s-s-speech?”

Willow leaned forward and looked in Tara’s eyes. “It goes something like this: I like you Tara Maclay. Really, seriously, a lot. I like you, I like your town, and I know I’ll like your daughter and mother and whoever else you love. I’m flexible and as long as I get Joan to feed Gato, I can be anywhere so…” Willow stopped her rambling speech as she felt Tara’s lips on her hand. They were so amazingly soft… The next kiss on the inside of her wrist caused the redhead to utter some sort of word made only of vowels.

“Mmm huh,” Tara seemed to agree as she leaned closer and placed the softest of feather-light kisses on Willow’s neck.

“And um I uh with the liking,” Willow tried to continue.

“Right, the liking,” Tara echoed as she began kissing a path along Willow’s jaw line. At that point, Willow apparently gave up on her speech as she turned her head to capture the blonde’s lips with her own. The kiss started slow and sensual and turned fast and sensual. It never turned anything but sensual even as lips flowed over lips and tongue met tongue.

After many long minutes spent exploring each other’s mouths and skin, Tara pulled away slightly. “It was a good speech,” she giggled.

“I liked yours better,” Willow joked back. She looked at the clock in the car and put one hand on the door handle. “I’ll talk to you this week, baby?” she confirmed.

A few minutes later Tara checked the clock as she drove over to her mother’s house to pick up Ariel, a dreamy look definitely plastered on her face.



"Most editors are failed writers--but so are most writers." - Thomas Stearns Eliot
"Censorship, like charity, should begin at home; but unlike charity, it should end there." - Chare Booth Luce
My latest story: Survivor - Ash Island
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Re: Survivor: Ash Island

Postby hidden watson » Thu Mar 03, 2005 7:16 am

You said in your replies
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I have to write the episodes (which surprisingly enough, are much easier and faster to write than the “in-between” parts)
and then you come up with an update of this quality. I'm like, no way, this "in-between" part is absolutely spectacular (seems to be a favorite word with the girls this week), it flows so easily, that is a sign of a talented writer.



So, third date, hmmm. Makes me wonder when and how the first two dates went, presumably they were on the island? Away from prying eyes? Secret meetings?



There certainly was plenty of heavy duty flirting going on, Willow trying hard to get Tara to visit her hotel room, the easy reference to their time on the island, finding out more about their lives outside the island. Their flowing conversation and mutual ribbing just shows how strong their connection is already, they must have had chances to talk on the island during "down" time and gotten to know each other a little? Have they admitted they are in love with each other yet? Cos there's no question that they are very much so. Actions speak louder than words. Oh, this is so great. And the speech and the kiss at the end, makes me very very happy indeed.



Not to forget about Joan, I love this Joan. Wow, Willow has, what, six servers, nine laptops and peripherals in her workroom, and she brings 3 laptops with her when she goes home. A girl after my own heart.



What else? There's so much to say. A mention of winning the million dollars. I also love how you threw in the pig challenge and others (eating bugs, drinking wine, without revealing what happens in the episodes we haven't seen yet.



If you can see me now, I'm sighing happily and dreamily. In a second I'm going to read the update again, I'll probably read it several times today, it's so spectacular.

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quiet thoughts

hidden watson
 


Re: Survivor: Ash Island

Postby stillrunning » Thu Mar 03, 2005 8:30 am

WEEE we have smoochies! I love WT smoochies!! Especially smoochies of such wonderful caliber as those were. I like how you're interspersing the 'during the show' updates with the 'after the show' updates as well. Kind of letting us see how the relationship progressed on the island, as well as how it's going now that they're off.

"Heaven's not a place that you go when you die...it's that moment in life when you actually feel alive"

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Re: Survivor: Ash Island

Postby MissKittys Ball O Yarn » Thu Mar 03, 2005 8:41 am

Wonderful chapter Debra. It was so sweet when they met at the hotel... but I can't believe that Tara declined Willow's invitation to visit her...um...in the hotel room... I so would have... but then again I'm smutty mcsmutterson...so never-mind. :laugh I loved the whole dinner scene...and then with Willow's adorably cute speech in the car...ending with um...smooches... yeah...that's the stuff... :D



more soon please. :peace



xoxo

Emms

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Re: Survivor: Ash Island

Postby littlecrazy80 » Thu Mar 03, 2005 1:14 pm

Amazing update! :D I liked Willow´s speech. But Tara´s was :luv



*lil´c*

"I am S-E-X-Y" Amber at the FedCon



SweetAmber ~~~ SweetAmber group ~~~ Sam´s melody

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Re: Survivor - Ash Island

Postby WillowRTaraM1 » Thu Mar 03, 2005 1:28 pm

:luv Ahhh!!! that was so sweet. I loved it!!



You have me curious to the point of dazing off at work thinking about WHAT happened on that island!! hahaha



Willow and Tara kisses = Very Good!! :banana :banana



I love your writing as always Debra



<3 Jackie

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It's astonishing how much energy some people waste worrying that someone else might be enjoying life in ways that they dont approve of- Kevin Michael Vail

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Re: Survivor - Ash Island

Postby amazonaa » Thu Mar 03, 2005 4:09 pm

That was great. I loved Willow's attempt at the speech and Tara's counterpart. It was great.



More soon, please.





brittney







~Good friends help you move. Real friends help you move the body.~

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Re: Survivor - Ash Island

Postby Artemis » Thu Mar 03, 2005 9:35 pm

Lovely update :heart I liked Willow's speech. Of course, just like Willow, I liked Tara's too :wtkiss It gave me a dreamy look too, and I wasn't even the one being kissed.



(And Ariel is an Incredibles fan, yay :D )



Some things they said (Willow and Tara, not Ariel and the Parr family) during their first/second/third date got me thinking. I'm thinking Tara managed to put on a decent showing on the island, not getting voted out soon, as Willow said she could 'outwit, outplay, outlast' - so I'm guessing we have much more Survivor Tara goodness to look forward to. On the other hand, her question was 'what would you do with a million dollars?', which kind of implies that she didn't win it... and I wonder if Willow didn't either, otherwise she might be kind of embarrassed to raise the topic... Then again, is the final voting between the last contestants revealed on the island, or is the result held back from everyone - even the contestants - until the show goes to air, and they're told who won in the studio? :hmm



As an aside, yay for women with curves :applause

Chris Cook

Through the Looking-glass

A Willow and Tara for every world.

Smut Bunnies!: Saving the world, sexily!

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Re: Survivor: Ash Island

Postby Irishgrl3 » Fri Mar 04, 2005 7:59 am

That was a nice business trip. Hee-hee. The reference Willow made to sleeping alone for the last 103 days has me wondering about her sleeping time on the island. :blush The date was very nice as was Tara's response to Willow's speech. Tara appears to be a just a little hesitant with things but I can see that with the fact she has a daughter and also that they live far apart, long distance is tough. Wonderful update!

-anna

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Re: Survivor: Ash Island

Postby FireFlyofDust » Fri Mar 04, 2005 12:46 pm

:applause

Don’t forget, we are the people that can have dreams for which we don’t yet have words. Maybe my accomplishment has been to find some of those words.- Harry Hay

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Survivors

Postby wimpy0729 » Fri Mar 04, 2005 2:53 pm

Hi Debra,



Loved their date, with the debate over who should be doing the romantic stuff. Seems they're both willing and able to oblige the other. That was all very sweet.



Loved Willow's teasing Tara about seeing her room, but understand why Tara is hesitant. I have a feeling she knows what would probably happen and she's trying to be cautious. It would be hard not to give in to Willow's charm.



Of course, Willow's speech was adorable and I can't blame Tara for responding like she did. Sometimes words aren't necessary to show how you feel.



So, another date on the way eventually, and maybe more clues as to how they did in the contest. Can't wait to see what happens.



Wimpy

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Survivors

Postby DreamLover » Sat Mar 05, 2005 3:58 pm

This update was great especially the in between hints. You know the ones I mean. You are letting us think that we know who it will be but then you write a part that sends us the other way around. I so love that in your writing style. It gives that little extra flavor to it. And then you are slowly revealing the whole surprise..... when the time is right. Your so good :devil :devil



Willow and Tara are so dancing around each other in this update. I'm glad that they did kissed and that Willow told Tara what she felt. That scene was so perfect. I really can't wait for more.



Henny

DreamLover
 


Re: Survivor: Ash Island

Postby meretricious » Sat Mar 05, 2005 4:27 pm

looks like i missed feedback last chapter, stupid real life. i of course enjoyed the shampoo flirting as everyone else did, you also made me remember something i haven't thought of in 15 years. one of my college roommates would chat a guy up for a few minutes, and then say she had a friend the guy should meet. of course he would ask who, and she'd say "mr.bubble". of course, any line would work on a 19year old guy,and i don't think she even owned any mr. bubble....

anyway, the date chapter was very sweet. i like how you always set writing challenges for yourself with a new fic, it's interesting that you're having more trouble with the in-between parts, but it doesn't show. i also like the teasing allusions to what has happened/will happen, it's intriguing without slipping into any annoying iknowsomethingyoudon't traps.

i'm thrilled with how quickly you've been posting this, so glad you've found a way to squeeze this much time out of rl. i don't supppose you've got any nearly finished chapters of "please" lying around, do you?~mary

you're dangerous, 'cause you're honest
you're dangerous, you don't know what you are U2

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Re: Survivor: Ash Island

Postby tarawhipped » Sun Mar 06, 2005 8:17 pm

Another excellent update Debra! I've reread this one three times scouring it for clues, and several interesting tidbits stand out.

1. Tara asking if Willow's question is from Juror #5 would imply that Willow was voted off 6th from the end, assuming that Willow IS said juror, which may be totally wrong.

2. The last time Willow saw Tara, the latter was not clean and fed, so following assumption #1, that would imply that they did not spend time in the resort together, and since Tara asked the above r.e. a jury question, that would seem to say that Tara was one of the final 2.

3. The "this is our 2nd or 3rd date" remark...and the one about the wine...I'm really hoping this means that our favorite duos got one of the coveted private rewards alone together for one of those dates (and the possibility alone has me giddily waiting for each future update)



LOVE your dialogue as always...I was LMAO at this in particular:
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The fact that I’m watching her ass as she walks away doesn’t mean I’m in love with her


:lmao -Cam



What should I be but just what I am? - Edna St.Vincent Millay

Edited by: tarawhipped at: 3/6/05 7:18 pm
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Re: Survivor: Ash Island

Postby Irene73 » Mon Mar 07, 2005 1:52 pm

:wave :laugh :blush :bigwave :p :pride :happycry :luv2 :wtkiss



*Clears throat...ahem...*



"WHEN THE MOON HITS THE SKY LIKE A BIGA PIZZA PIE...THAT'S AMOREEEE...A SMALL SIP OF WINE WHILE GAZING INTO EACH OTHERS EYES...THATS AMOREEE..RING DINGA LINGA LING DINGA LINGA LING...PAY THE BILL AND HEAD TO YOUR COCHEEE... (that's Spanish for car)...REMEMBER THE TIME, THAT I SAAAACRIFICED, MY HYGIENEEEEE...COME TO MY ROOM, WE'LL STARE AT THE MOON...THHHHHAAAAATS AAAAAAAMMMMMMMOOOOOOORRRRRRREEEEEEEEE!!!":crazy



Darling I will be here patiently anticipating Updatey Goodness.



Saluting you while holding up a glass of ANY kind of Red Wine,

Irene:pride



Fantabulous Update...You Go Debra...AWHOOOWHA, ARIBA!!!:D

Irene73
 


great story

Postby cperrins78 » Mon Mar 07, 2005 10:07 pm

I just love this story. I especially love the moments between Willow & Tara after the show. I can't wait for an update.







Christina

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Re: great story

Postby JustSkipIt » Tue Mar 08, 2005 6:25 am

hidden Watson – Thanks for your kind words re the flow of this update. As I said, writing the Survivor parts is very very much easier than these parts. I think the first two dates will definitely be explained although not exactly in those terms.. perhaps.



The flirting is definitely a continuation of their time on the lsland. I’ve continued thinking about it and this is a very interesting writing structure for me. There’s the show which we know is heavily edited. Then there’s the “what happened on the island 24/7” which I’m obviously not showing. Then there are the “in-between” parts that I’m writing and lots of “in-between” parts that I’m not writing. Basically you can infer much of the rest of their relationship. Which is a strange way to write.



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and she brings 3 laptops with her when she goes home. A girl after my own heart.
I took my laptop on my weekend at the in-laws and of course didn’t turn it on… but just in case. Thanks so much for your thoughts.



stillrunning – Yep, definitely smoochies. Glad you like the structure and yes that’s exactly what I’m going for.



MissKittys Ball O Yarn – Hey, let’s get our kitten minds out of the gutter! Ok, who would want to do that? Seriously, Tara was pretty time constrained so it makes sense to me that she wouldn’t visit the hotel room. Glad you liked.



littlecrazy80 – Thanks. Yes, Tara’s was definitely great.



WillowRTaraM1 – Well I hope you don’t work as a brain surgeon or airplane pilot. Otherwise, daze away. What did happen on that island? Interesting questions. Thanks.



amazonaa – Thanks. I’m glad you liked both.



Artemis – Ahhh. Dreamy looks. Incredibles is one of the three movies I’ve seen since Ash was born. I liked it less than Monsters Inc (my fav) but better than the other Pixar movies.



I’m not saying that you haven’t done good detective work but I will say that “outwit, outlast, outplay” is the motto for the show. I don’t necessarily think that claiming to do it makes you the winner.
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Then again, is the final voting between the last contestants revealed on the island, or is the result held back from everyone - even the contestants - until the show goes to air, and they're told who won in the studio?
Ok, to explain. It goes to the final two on the island. The 7 jurors make their votes. Then Jeff Probst (he of the identical safari shirts in different colors) takes the votes and leaves the island in some cheesy way. Then the network cuts to show him hanging from a helicopter or riding a U-boat or “walking through the jungle” until he shows up at Madison Square Garden or wherever and he walks in traffic in through the studio doors and onto a stage which contains all 16 (or 18 or 20) contestants (all cleaned up, plastic surgeried, etc.) but on a cheesy fake tribal council setting. Then he reveals the winner on live TV.



Irishgrl3 – The sleeping will definitely be revealed as the Island goes on. I agree that Tara is hesitant over the relationship and I don’t mean to make it seem like she doesn’t trust Willow. I think that it’s the combination of being a single-mother, having gone on a show like Survivor, not being 100% out, and general maturity causing her to want to go slow. Also, Willow’s so obviously a player that I think there’s a tiny part of her mind that wonders what Willow’s motivation is (as if that isn’t obvious).



FireFlyofDust – Uh? Ok? :confused



wimpy0729 – Thanks. Yes, they are both quite romantic. And yes as I said above, Tara is somewhat hestitant but more so, time constrained. Yes, there will be more dates and more clues. Both.



DreamLover – Glad you like the hints and misdirection. It’s harder than I expected to write this part and not give away the other parts. Very challenging. Thanks.



meretricious – That’s lol about your friend and mr bubble.
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i like how you always set writing challenges for yourself with a new fic,
It’s not something I expect but everytime it happens, I really enjoy it so much. Glad it’s appreciated.



Actually I’m working on a Please update but it will surely take a while. I can write this at work but not Please (gee, I wonder why?). Anyway, it’s in progress.



tarawhipped – Hey Cam, Well first I must say that I don’t appreciate your looking so closely. :grin . Seriously you’ve made some good assumptions and some less good ones in your reasoning. Keep in mind the easy banter the two girls share. It’s entirely possible that their teasing is just that: teasing and not a true reflection of the outcome. Or it’s possible that your conclusions are 100% and you can stop reading right now because you know it all.



Regardless, thanks for liking the ass remark. I always love when someone points out one of my favorite lines.



Irene73 – Love it! Thank you.



cperrins78 - :wave Welcome. I’ve never seen your screen name before. Thanks for reading and for the comments. Update will be in the next few days. Thanks for your patience.

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Survivor - Ash Island

Postby JustSkipIt » Wed Mar 09, 2005 6:18 am

Excuse the double post but it's separated by a day.

Title – Survivor – Ash Island

Part 7 – Week 3

Author – JustSkipIt

Pairing – Who do you think? (W/T of course)

Feedback – Oh yes.

Spoilers–None

Ratiing – G to PG

Disclaimer – I own none of these characters nor do I own Survivor. And believe it or not, I also don’t own any small islands. On the other hand, this island is fictional so let’s say I own it. I’m making no money from this fiction and intend no copyright infringement.


Survivor – Ash Island

Akathla Team – Day 6
We see Willow and Oz picking Plantains together. Neither says much but it is apparent that they are friendly. “Mac may be dangerous,” Oz warns Willow.

“We’re four strong,” Willow answers, “we have the numbers. And right now we need his strength.”

“You’d know,” Oz jokes back.

The scene shifts to where we see Xander and Buffy standing waist deep in the water. “Try this,” she suggests and sweeps her hand under a fish. The two continue trying to catch a fish with no equipment.

Confessional Caption – Buffy – College Student
“Honestly, I don’t know what we’re going to do if we don’t start to catch some fish. I mean I feel like I can feel myself shrinking. Look at this.” She pulls up her shirt and points to some ribs that are beginning to show. “Between the hunger and the bug bites,” she slaps at her skin and we can see various bite marks on her arm, “I can see why 39 days is so damn hard.”

MFashnek Team – Day 6
The MFashnek team is also attempting to catch fish. Robin and Riley take turns swimming, chasing the fish toward each other but to no avail. Meanwhile we see Tara and Joyce gathering an array of berries and roots. “You know a lot about plants?” Joyce asks.

“My g-grandmother and mother showed me,” Tara explains.

Faith and Kendra meanwhile are gathering fire wood while Richard and Darla straighten up the area. “Have you talked to Robin?” Darla asks Richard.

“I think he will be with us when he needs to be,” Richard tells her.

Suddenly we hear screams from the water. Robin is dragging Riley from the water with blood running down the athlete’s leg. His screams attract his teammates who all come running. Although she’s not the first one there, Tara doesn’t hesitate to pull off her buff and press it onto the badly bleeding wound. “What h-happened?” she asks.

“He stepped on a sharp piece of coral,” Robin explains.

As everyone watches she turns and pulls a root she had been digging with Joyce from the pile and hands it to the woman. “Wash this,” she instructs before turning back to the wound. Seeing that she appears to know what she’s doing, the others drift away uneasily.

Akathla Team
Confessional Caption – Willow – Software Startup Owner
“We didn’t have tree mail so I guess we have a day to rest and try to catch fish.” As she talks she walks along the tree line. Suddenly she also screams and her team comes running. Rather than springing into action like the MFashneks, however, they laugh as they realize that she has scared a frog from its hiding place and is afraid of frogs.

“You came on Survivor and you’re afraid of frogs?” Xander asks disbelievingly.

“Just a little,” Willow pouts playfully. The younger team can been seen relaxing for the remainder of the day.

MFashnek Team – Day 7
We see most of the team sitting around the fire sipping water and eating some berries. They pass around a cup with a paste in it and each rubs it on his or her face.

Confessional Caption – Richard – Small Town Mayor
“These young people are pretty amazing. I mean Tara isn’t but 25 years old or so but she seems to be a regular Grizzly Adams. I don’t know if she went to school with Ernest Hemmingway or what. She helps Riley’s leg, finds us food, and now she made a paste that seems to keep the bugs from biting. I’d hate to be on the other team. Now if we could just catch some fish.”

“We’ve got tree mail,” Robin and Joyce call as they hold out a small canvas sack. Written on the sack are the words:

“Launch me well and you’ll be rich.”

Reward Challenge
As usual the MFashnek team takes their place on the green mat first. The MFashnek team inspects the Akathla team to see who is missing. No one makes any obvious reaction when they see that Amy is gone but Tara seems to smile slightly at the redhead who she has found is named Willow when she sees that the girl is still there. Willow, in turn, winks at the blonde who immediately blushes.

“Ok,” Jeff greets everyone, “you see the new Akathla team. How is everyone doing?”

“We could use some more food, Jeff,” Robin answers lightly.

“Today’s challenge will give you the opportunity for that,” Jeff explains. He walks over to show the players six straw baskets. Signs on the sides identify them as containing rice, dried beans, coffee beans, spices, nuts, and beef jerky. Sitting on top of each basket of food are two burlap sacks. The sacks vary in size so that the rice and beans sacks are larger than the spice sack. The others range between those. About ten feet from the baskets stand two towers with a basket on top of each. At the bottom of those towers a plank lies across a log, creating a lever.

“One by one,” Jeff starts to explain, “a player will run to a basket. Fill your sack with as much or as little of the food as you wish. When you’ve filled it, tie it closed.” As he explains he walks to the baskets then to the lever to finish: “Place the sack on the lever end and stomp on this end to launch it into the basket. When you’ve finished, return to the starting line so the next person on your team can go. It’s up to you how much of an item you fill your bag with but only the first team done will keep what is in your basket.”

The teams are obviously listening closely to the explanation, and figuring strategy for the bags. “MFashnek, what two players are sitting out?” Riley and Tara raise their hands and take a seat on the mat.

“Ok,” Jeff raises his hand “Survivors ready. Go!”

Joyce and Willow are the first two players to rush to a basket. Joyce chooses spices while Willow, surprisingly, goes for nuts. Each fills her bag and then ties it shut while her teammates shout encouragement. MFashnek particularly advises Joyce to fill the bag enough to weight it a little. The two women finish tying the bags nearly simultaneously and rush to set them on their levers. Joyce stomps hers and the bag hits the tower but does not go in the basket. Willow, miraculously, manages to get the bag of nuts in her basket immediately and rushes back to her mat. Joyce makes her basket on the next try and returns to the mat to allow Kendra to take over. By the time Kendra reaches the coffee, Oz is nearly done filling his bag with beef jerky. Both tie their bags and Kendra catches up to Oz when the young man still hasn’t made the basket on the third try. Kendra puts MFashnek ahead when the coffee lands in the basket.

Darla next fills a bag half-way with beef jerky and ties it while running toward the lever. She is able to make the basket on the second shot, while Andrew is still filling a bag with spices. Richard, seeing the lead they now hold, fills the nut bag nearly full as he places the bag on the lever. Andrew is just running back to the Akathla mat. Richard takes three tries to make the basket but still returns to the mat to hand off to Faith before Mac ties off the bag of coffee.

Again noting their lead, Faith fills her bag very full of dried beans. She carefully ties it, not wanting to lose any, and places it on the lever as Mac stomps on his lever for the fifth time. His goes in just as Faith is taking her second shot with the beans. When her third makes it, she is running back toward the mat just as Buffy picks up a bag and begins loading it with the beans.

Robin runs to the bin of rice and begins loading it. Seeing the lead he has, he holds up the half-full bag to show his team and takes their advice to fill it even fuller. Tying it he runs to set it on the lever before Xander has reached the rice basket. Although it takes Robin five tries to make the basket, he still finishes the challenge and runs back to the mat before Xander succeeds in launching his much lighter bag. The MFashnek team celebrates loudly over their bounty.

Jeff congratulates the winning team and informs them that they can climb up to get their reward. Kendra quickly walks over to the tower, climbs it, and begins pulling bags out and dropping them to Robin. As she drops the bag of spices she yells and pulls a small burlap folder from the basket, dropping it also into Joyce’s waiting hands. The woman quickly unties the bag to reveal four shining fishing hooks with a small roll of fishing twine. The MFashnek team cheers loudly at the find and then confers for a moment. After a few seconds talking, Joyce walks over to the shocked looking Akathla team and hands Buffy one hook and a small piece of line. “Thanks,” the blonde whispers as she cradles the hook like riches. MFashnek then gathers their bounty and heads back to their beach.

“Who wants coffee?” Darla calls and the others laugh before all yelling their agreement with the first order of business.

Akathla Team – Day 8
Again we see Buffy and Xander attempting to fish. This time they have the hook and line and we see that they have caught four small fish.

“We’ve got tree mail,” Mac calls as he and Oz return from getting the small slate board.

“Luck and knowledge,
Knowledge and luck…”

is all the mail says. The teammates sigh as they realize they will get no further clues.

MFashnek Team – Day 8
We see the MFashnek team reacting to Darla’s reading of the tree mail. “Maybe it won’t be a physical challenge?” Joyce suggests to Riley who sits with his leg gently on a log. As they talk and read the tree mail we see that they are sharing bites of three fish they apparently caught with their winnings.

Confessional Caption – Riley – Pro-Triathlete
“I don’t know what she did, but this Tara girl really helped my leg. It stopped bleeding as soon as she put that plant on it and the plant killed the pain too. I can almost walk normally. Plus she gave me a different plant last night to take for the pain. I owe her big time.”

Challenge
Both teams enter to take their places on the mats.

Jeff explains, “This is not a physical challenge.” He continues, “and there’s a little twist today.” Everyone waits for him to continue. “There are going to be two tribal councils tonight.” The players all gasp at this revelation. “You are playing for individual immunity today. If you win, you’ll go visit with the other team. Then you go to your tribal council and theirs. At their tribal council, you can give the immunity necklace to someone from their team.” He doesn’t even bother to ask if the reward is worth playing for.

He directs everyone to take a seat on two logs which form a V-shape on the sand and to reach behind the log for the slate boards and chalk they will use to write down their answers. “Ok,” Jeff starts, “some of these answers you will know if you’ve visited with your teammates and some are from the other team.”

Jeff starts: “Question One: Which contestant speaks 7 languages fluently?” The players reveal their answers. Tara, Kendra, and Faith of course all reveal the answer to be Kendra. Joyce also gets the answer right as do Buffy and Willow.

“Which contestant was valedictorian of his or her high school class.” This time Darla and Willow write down Darla correctly. Everyone else guesses Willow.

“Which contestant has run a 5 minute mile.” All the MFashneks as well as Willow and Oz are correct in writing down Riley. The others, however, guess Robin.

“Which contestant volunteers for Habitat for Humanity?” This time all the Akathlas get the answer of Xander right but only Tara guess correctly for the MFashnek team.

At this point Jeff announces that Willow has 4 correct, Joyce and Tara have three,

“Who lives in New Orleans?” While Tara misses the correct answer of Oz, surprisingly so does Willow. Only Oz, Xander, and Riley get this answer right.

“Who lives in Boston?” Tara, Joyce, Faith, and Kendra easily answer the question correctly and Mac and Xander guess correctly that Faith lives in Boston.

Jeff announces that Tara and Willow have four correct answers; Joyce has three; and Kendra and Faith have two.

“Ok,” there will be a final question to determine which of you will get the individual immunity. Both girls have watched each other interestedly ever since Jeff announced the scores and continue to do so. “The person who gets the most correct answers on this question will win the challenge: Which five players have children?”

Both girls take a few seconds to write their answers. Willow reveals her guesses: “Riley, Joyce, Richard, Mac, and Darla.” Tara’s lip quirks upward as she reads the redhead’s answers and reveals her own: “Joyce, Richard, Mac, Xander, and Tara.”

Jeff reads the list with a smile on his face. The correct answers are: “Joyce, Richard, Mac, Oz, and Tara,” he explains. “That means Willow got three of five but Tara got four of five.” Faith and Kendra both cheer as they lean over and hug the blonde. Willow looks across the logs at the blonde with a look of disappointment that she didn’t win the challenge but with a friendly smile too.

Jeff hands Tara the immunity necklace which she puts on. As the Akathla team turns to return to the camp she takes a minute to whisper with Faith and Kendra and then joins the younger team.

MFashnek Team
Confessional Caption – Faith – Personal Trainer
“Well Girlfriend got herself some immunity but I wouldn’t have been worried for her anyway. This is our first tribal council and I don’t think there’s going to be much trouble over who is expendable.”

“How’s the leg,” Kendra asks Riley as she approaches him at the water’s edge.

“Much better,” he answers.

Darla, Richard, and Robin sit at the fire drinking water. “Tara gives the other two the brains they need,” she comments.

“Don’t worry about it,” Richard tells the lawyer, “Joyce will be with us.” Later we see Joyce and Richard talking by the water’s edge. Kendra approaches them and talks with them for a moment.

Confessional Caption – Joyce – Art Gallery Owner
“I hope Tara is enjoying herself over there. For her, I’m not sure this is a reward. I mean she’s so shy she might be really upset about being there.”

We see shots of different conversations: Faith and Joyce, Riley and Robin, Riley and Richard, Darla and Joyce.

Akathla Camp
The Akathla team is showing Tara around their campsite. “Here’s our shelter and our fire pit,” Xander explains proudly. “We hang our water bags here and stack the fire wood here,” he continues.

“Very n-nice,” Tara tells the carpenter.

Andrew makes rice and they share it with their visitor. “So who v-voted off Wesley and Amy?” the blonde asks.

Everyone raises their hands to both questions and Tara raises an eyebrow. “So who will you vote off tonight?” she bravely inquires.

Everyone looks at each other and laughs uncomfortably. “Would you like to borrow the shampoo?” Buffy offers in an attempt to lighten the mood. Tara nods and takes the bottle, walking away from the group at the fire.

Next we see shots of different combinations of people talking. Andrew and Mac are talking to Xander by a clump of trees. “Look, son,” Mac tells the construction worker, “you got me, Andrew here, and Oz voting together. We’re voting out Buffy or Willow, whichever doesn’t have the necklace tonight. If you don’t vote with us, you’ll tie the score.”

Xander looks puzzled. “Oz is voting against one of them?”

“He swore it standing right here,” Mac tells him.

“I’ll think about it,” Xander tells them.

Confessional Caption – Mac – Retired Military
“The way I figure it, it’s outwit, outlast, outplay. Not tell the truth tell the truth tell the truth. If this Xander guy isn’t smart enough to check out my story, that’s his problem.”

Confessional Caption – Buffy – Student
“So Oz came to me and explained that Mac is trying to get he and Xander to vote off me or Willow. Since she’ll probably have the necklace, I’d say they’re intending to vote off me. But Oz says he’s with us and Xander won’t turn.”

Tara stands in waist-deep water enjoying the shampoo and the feel of the sun. She appears slightly startled by Willow’s nearly silent arrival. “I didn’t want to startle you,” the redhead tells her.

“That’s o-o-ok,” Tara tells her. “Will you be v-voted off tonight?”

“If I am, it will be a surprise to me,” Willow tells her honestly. “Can I help you with that?” she offers pointing to the shampoo.

Tara looks at the redhead for a minute before smiling. “Only if I can do your hair too,” she finally says.

Willow takes the bottle slowly, allowing the two girls’ fingers to brush together. “You know I’m not sure it was entirely fair that you won by knowing that you have a child,” Willow teased. Tara merely smiled back. “Is she, or maybe he because nothing says that you would have to have a little girl just because you’re a girl I mean everyone who has a child is a woman but obviously all babies aren’t girls…,” Willow pauses for breath, “is your child with … your husband?”

Tara giggles a little bit at the question, “I’m not married, Willow,” she answers, “Ariel is six and she’s with my mother. She sees her f-father every other weekend.”

As the blonde takes the bottle from Willow she asks, “How about you? Anyone waiting for your return?”

“I think my cat probably misses sleeping in the middle of my bed all day while I’m working,” the redhead says jokingly, “but, no, I don’t have a girlfriend.”

“Hard to imagine,” the blonde tells her teasingly as Buffy swims up to the pair and put her hand out for the shampoo.

“You left the men to scheme?” Willow asks the new arrival, shrugging her shoulder at the shoreline.

Confessional Caption – Xander – Construction Worker
“So Mac and Andrew want me to vote off Willow or Buffy, whichever one doesn’t get the necklace from Tara. Which would put the men in the lead but would definitely make us a weaker team than voting off Andrew. They say Oz is with them but Oz says he’s with us.”

MFashnek Tribal Council
The MFashnek team enters the tribal council to find Tara sitting on the log waiting for them. Each of them comes over to hug and greet her as if they haven’t seen her in weeks rather than the 6 hours it has actually been. In the meantime, they all take in the look of the tribal council area and the torches behind Jeff. Jeff instructs each team member to come up and get their torches and place them behind their spots.

“So this is your first visit to tribal council,” Jeff starts, “how is the game going so far?”

Darla speaks up first: “Well it’s hard. Harder than I expected to be here.”

“What’s hard about it?” Jeff asks Robin.

“The hunger, the tiredness, sleeping on the ground,” the principal starts, “and trying to work as a team is a challenge.”

“Why is it a challenge?” Jeff asks.

“Jeff,” Richard starts, “some people want to be leaders but they maybe don’t know enough to lead well yet.”

Jeff smiles at this answer and we see the look on Faith’s face as she hears Richard’s dig at her.

“Tara,” Jeff says, “you have the immunity necklace. Anyone you want to give it to?” The blonde shakes her head and he directs her to vote first. She does and we do not see her vote.

Next Kendra votes secretly also and then Faith. Faith writes down “Darla’s” name and addresses the camera: “Sorry about this but we need one less person for Richard to conspire with and you’re the most expendable.” Everyone finishes voting and Jeff retrieves the container.

“Once the votes have been read the decision is final,” Jeff recites as always, “the person voted off will have to leave the area immediately.” He pulls the first vote from the jar: “Darla.” No one seems surprised at the vote. The next vote says “Faith,” and Darla looks around with a smile on her face. By the time Jeff reads the fifth vote for Darla, her smile is gone, replaced by a look of confusion. Jeff extinguishes her flame and she leaves the area. Then Jeff directs the MFashnek team, without Tara, to leave the tribal council area.

The Akathla team enters and takes their seats. “So, Akathla team,” Jeff starts, “you’ve had a visitor all day. How has that been?”

“Tara seems like a nice girl,” Mac says.

“Do you feel like you’ve found our more about the MFashnek team or she’s found out more about you?” Jeff next asks.

“I don’t think we were trying to pump her for information,” Willow explains, “I think we just wanted to get to know her better.” She smiles at Tara who blushes and looks at her feet.

“Ok, Tara,” Jeff directs, “please give the necklace to the person you have chosen.”

Tara stands and walks over to Willow, gently lowering the immunity necklace over her head and allowing her fingers to brush the redhead’s collarbones as the necklace settles in place. “Why did you give it to Willow?” Jeff asks.

“S-s-she came the closest to earning it h-h-herself,” Tara explains. Jeff tells Tara that she can rejoin the MFashnek team and she waves to Akathla who also waves at her.

“You can’t vote for Willow,” Jeff unnecessarily states, “Willow, you vote first.” The redhead does and she writes down “Andrew.” Next Buffy and Xander vote and we don’t see their votes. We see Mac’s vote for Buffy and don’t see Andrew or Oz’s votes.

Jeff returns with the jar and begins to read the votes. “Andrew,” the first vote reads. The next also reads “Andrew.” “Two votes Andrew,” Jeff reads before “Buffy.” No one is surprised by that vote or the next one for Buffy. “Two votes Andrew, two votes Buffy,” Jeff recounts. As Jeff pulls the next ballot, “Buffy,” we see Xander look away as if ashamed of his vote. Buffy and Willow both look at the young man in shock. Jeff reads the final vote: “Andrew.” And Xander’s head snaps up as he looks at Oz in even greater shock.

“Three votes,” Jeff says in mild disbelief. “Ok, so you know how it works in the case of a tie.” He puts five stones in the jar: 4 white and one black. Willow, you are immune but everyone else has equal chance to leave the game.” Each player reaches into the jar to take a stone and holds it in their hands. “Ok,” Jeff instructs, “open your hand.” They all open their hands to reveal that Andrew has the black stone. Mac gulps before patting the young man on the shoulder. Jeff extinguishes his torch.

Next week on Survivor

Voice-over -- Fallout from tribal council
Shots of the Akathla tribe walking back to camp. “Well how in the Hell did that happen?” Willow asks.

“Maybe you’d know if you weren’t so damn busy with Tara,” Xander nearly yells back.

“Don’t blame Willow because you were suckered,” Oz yells.

One player plays through the pain
We see shots of Riley attempting to run on his bad leg.

And one team has a big surprise
A pig runs by the campfire

All next week on Survivor


"Most editors are failed writers--but so are most writers." - Thomas Stearns Eliot
"Censorship, like charity, should begin at home; but unlike charity, it should end there." - Chare Booth Luce
My latest story: Survivor - Ash Island
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Re: Survivor - Ash Island

Postby hidden watson » Wed Mar 09, 2005 7:06 am

Yay, I'm first again. It's always lovely to be one of the first ones reading a new Survivor episode.



The Reward Challenge was very challenging, and it seemed quite hard, some of them took, what 5 tries. Must be time consuming and physically draining too, considering they're nearly half starved.



Didn't see any backlash when Joyce gave the fishhook to Buffy. On the other hand, they got 4 hooks, so sharing one with the other team is generosity they can more than afford. Still waiting for the moment the J/B relationship is revealed.



Not surprised at all that Willow did so well in the quiz. Pleasantly surprised that Tara came out as winner, she seems so shy. But what do they say about the shy ones? They observe and absorb information that way. Tara won't be one to be voted off so early (a hint that she goes far, like final two far?) because of how helpful she's been with the herbology.



Tara visiting with Willow, the beginnings of slight flirting, it all ties in very well with the after-show updates we've been blessed with so far. So sweet, so sweet. And Willow pretty much making her intentions known:
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“but, no, I don’t have a girlfriend.”
I'd be interested to know what Tara's reaction to that was, especially since she's not totally out. Was that the moment? Or was it earlier?



Can't believe the older folks want to vote Willow out, perhaps they consider her too much of a threat in the mental challenges and want to cull off the threats first. Now, I'm trying to figure out who voted who out:



Willow - Andrew

Andrew - Buffy

Buffy - Andrew

Xander - Buffy

Oz - Andrew

Mac - Buffy



Yes?



What was Xander thinking? He totally misread the situation, I think the "scooby" alliance may kick him out, and he's left on his own, cos Mac won't want him. It's interesting, this speculation.



As for MFashnek, the Tara/Faith/Kendra alliance seems solid. Faith's logic about voting out Darla makes sense, but perhaps they could have tried to swing a vote against Richard, may be next time they lose an IC.



Oh wow, that was a long ramble. You know this, but I want to say it again, I love this fic, a lot better than normal Survivor (though Palau has redeemed itself somewhat lately --- mmmIan and Tom...), and I'm almost stalking the

thread to catch updates :D .

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Yay Updatey Goodness!

Postby WillowRTaraM1 » Wed Mar 09, 2005 7:32 am

:applause :applause :applause



Another wonderful update!! Im sick and staying home from work but that effectivly cheered me up ;)



I was so excited to see Tara getting a chance to go over and visit Willow's camp.. the flirting was very cute..and it leaves me wishing there was a merge of the tribes right now!! Haha.



Im loving this story.. I can't wait to read the next "in-between" part!



:bigwave Jackie

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Re: Yay Updatey Goodness!

Postby stillrunning » Wed Mar 09, 2005 8:44 am

Yay! I find myself visualizing all of this....my own little TV show in my head! I thought the interaction between Willow and Tara was really cute, as well as the interaction between Tara and Buffy. It's nice to see that, though they're on different teams, they can still be nice to each other. I do feel bad for the Akathla team though. They just can't seem to get a break. And Xander's just....grrr. Aggravating man with his easily manipulated brain!

"Heaven's not a place that you go when you die...it's that moment in life when you actually feel alive"

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Re: Yay Updatey Goodness!

Postby ravenousgrape » Wed Mar 09, 2005 9:15 am

Hi, Debra.



Both chapters (the first date and the most recent one, since I never got to reviewing the former) are wonderful. You've still got me wondering about how Tara came to have Ariel- yes, yes I know: patience is a virtue. So here I sit, drumming my fingers on my desk, bobbing my head to a tune in my head... fidgeting with an empty coffee mug... feeling the effects of the morning mocha set in... with my left eye twitching involuntarily every few minutes... ever so patiently waiting for the truth to be revealed. No pressure on you though; the anticipation is sweet and you have built it up rather masterfully.



Oh dear. Poor Xander has really screwed himself over this time hasn't he? Right now, with exactly five people left on the team, it's really not a good idea to break an important promise and make enemies. I'm seeing a significantly shortened game-expectancy for Xander and a much better chance for Oz, as it looks like he may have taken Xander's place with Buffy and Willow. Xander hasn't been particularly close with Mac, and with his upcoming altercation, he'll have alienated Willow, Buffy and Oz. I predict that he'll be the next to go on his team- which is really fine with me, since I never liked Xander much to begin with.



I'm definitely not surprised about Darla being voted off first for MFashnek. This is definitely not in Joyce, Robin and Richard's favor, I don't think; if Tara were to ask Riley to join her side right now, he probably would. I don't know why, but I get the feeling that Mfashnek is about to lose a few of the next immunity challenges. Either Joyce or Richard is probably about to be ousted. I hope it's Richard; he rubs me in the wrong way.



Thanks for not booting Faith. Right now I'm rooting for her and Joyce. For the other team, I'm rooting for Oz; this dogpaddler has come a long way.



I'm really liking this fic. Thank you for writing it.

Do not misunderestimate the intellectial brilliantliness of religious fundamentalistics.

ravenousgrape
 


Re: Yay Updatey Goodness!

Postby MissKittys Ball O Yarn » Wed Mar 09, 2005 9:17 am

Debra, I must say that I really loved the Willow/Tara interaction in this one. And it's so interesting to read the Survivor episode parts...it's just like watching an episode of the show... It's like.. as an audience member I'm getting all caught up in these people and the dynamics between them....especially the Willow/Tara dynamics... :D I can totally see them getting closer and closer each update.



Somehow I would have thought Buffy would've been more skilled at catching a fish... :p



Great update.



xoxo

Emms



To the smut!

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Re: Yay Updatey Goodness!

Postby Artemis » Wed Mar 09, 2005 10:02 am

Awesome! I was on the edge of my seat during the challenge, wondering if the Akathla team would finally get a break. But no... close though. Nice of the MFashneks to give them a hook and line... I wonder though whether, when/if they find out that Buffy is Joyce's daughter, some of them might think in hindsight it was favouratism, even if at the time they agreed with the choice? Hmm :hmm



Willow and Tara are so sweet :heart And Tara's really showing her quality as a survivor - healing and food-finding, she's a valuable girl to have around. It's nice that Riley is particularly realising that (I guess having someone help you when you go step on a sharp thing will do that).



(Then again, if someone asked me "Hey, what's your opinion of being stuck on a deserted island with someone who looks like-" (holds up pic of Amber) "-this?", my first question wouldn't be "Can she find food?" :p )



Xander, Xander, Xander, what are we going to do with you... he got suckered. But he checked with Oz, so I'll come down on the side of he-should've-known-better. If the Akathlas have to vote off someone else next I think it looks grim for him... on the other hand, if they get a reprieve and the voting-off goes to the MFashneks for a bit, maybe he could regain some goodwill from the other Scoobs. Provided he cuts right back on the yelling at Willow just because he's been made to look foolish.



Thanks for the update :bow Wonderful 'viewing' as always. And thanks for the clarification on how the final two places are revealed. So in the 'extra material' timeline of Willow and Tara dating and such, the final live show where they find out who won hasn't happened yet? Hmm... I wonder if by then they'll be close enough that they'd attend the show as a couple? :heart That'd definitely be a great way to end the season.

Chris Cook

Through the Looking-glass

A Willow and Tara for every world.

Smut Bunnies!: Saving the world, sexily!

Artemis
 


Re: Yay Updatey Goodness!

Postby littlecrazy80 » Wed Mar 09, 2005 12:45 pm

Wonderful update. :D :D :D



Willow and Tara are cute together. :heart Can´t wait to see who wins the show.



*lil´c*

"I am S-E-X-Y" Amber at the FedCon



SweetAmber ~~~ SweetAmber group ~~~ Sam´s melody

littlecrazy80
 


great update

Postby cperrins78 » Wed Mar 09, 2005 3:48 pm

I was so excited to see that the story was updated. I really love the interaction between Willow & Tara. I can't wait till the next update.

cperrins78
 


Re: Survivor: Ash Island

Postby Tempest Duer » Wed Mar 09, 2005 11:04 pm

Fantabulous!

I got bitten by a drunk lesbian! Does that mean I'll turn into one?



~my friend Mary

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Re: Survivor: Ash Island

Postby JustSkipIt » Thu Mar 10, 2005 5:46 am

hidden Watson – Either we’re on similar schedules or you get up way too early. Of course I guess you maybe in California or Hawaii and you read the updates while getting your morning coffee break in. I agree about the reward challenge but I also think that the challenges are getting harder and harder on Survivor since All-Stars. The IC on last week’s Palau was fantastic. I want to use it myself but haven’t figured out the logistics. Anyway, I don’t think the RC here was that physically demanding; just precise?



I think that everyone sees the hook thing as an even trade for the matches earlier. Also, everyone keeps in mind that these people (or some of them) will eventually be on your team after merge and will eventually form the jury. So good graces, etc….



I think you’re making good guesses re: Tara’s skill but keep in mind the difficulty of going to the final two if you don’t win individual immunity challenges.



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Tara visiting with Willow, the beginnings of slight flirting, it all ties in very well with the after-show updates we've been blessed with so far.
Thanks. My only regret is that when I wrote this part, I hadn’t decided to do the “betweens” so this was not only when Willow got the surprise that Tara had a child but when the reader did too. I liked that better.



Quote:
I'd be interested to know what Tara's reaction to that was, especially since she's not totally out. Was that the moment? Or was it earlier?
I’d say you can assume she had a very good reaction. And I’m not sure that you could classify her as “not totally out.” She’s not swinging the flag like Willow but that doesn’t mean she isn’t out. On the other hand…



I think they want to vote off Willow because she’s not strong enough to help them win challenges and so smart that they’re scared of her. Yes, you are right about who voted against who (Xander is an idiot).



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What was Xander thinking? He totally misread the situation, I think the "scooby" alliance may kick him out, and he's left on his own, cos Mac won't want him. It's interesting, this speculation.
Believe me when I say that team is trashed as far as trust and alliances go.



Totally agreeing with you about Tom on Palau and Rachel thinks Ian is adorable. I think Jeff wants to be a underwear model.



WillowRTaraM1 – Sorry you’re sick. I am too a bit but need to work anyway. I went to the Dr. yesterday for a scrip so hopefully I’ll feel better soon. Hope you do too. Lol about merge. Patience is a virtue… Glad you love it.



stillrunning – I can’t really visualize in my head so that must be very cool. Actually I can picture lines and figures and stuff but not people or things. Yes, Buffy’s nice and Willow and Tara are all with the flirting (so yay!). Mostly Akathla is stupid and that is their current downfall. They are lucky (literally – I randomly drew a number) that Andrew drew the black rock or they’d be even weaker.



ravenousgrape – How Tara came to have Ariel will definitely be explained in a later update (I think it’s about 6 away?). In the meantime, I’d just enjoy these updates as they come and set your patience in front.



Yes, Xander is a moron! You’re right that Richard has lost an important piece in Darla but also keep in mind that he voted her off too so he must have a plan.



Thanks for letting me know your favorites. Anyone else?



MissKittys Ball O Yarn – Thanks. Yes, the interaction is hard to write because there’s so little of it. It can’t be too blatant or CBS wouldn’t show it and it can’t take long because of rapid-fire-editing. Thanks. I think catching a fish is pretty darn hard.



Artemis – Honestly, this sounds stupid but I haven’t written the “B/J connection discovery” yet and am not sure about the backlash. I can tell you that people will be mad that they were mislead. But I don’t think they will care about the hooks.



Tara’s survivor qualities are why she went on the show. She knew she wouldn’t kick butt physically but she hoped that her skills would make her valuable. With Riley’s injury they are paying off even more than she hoped. (not to say that she wanted him to get hurt).



Glad you liked.

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And thanks for the clarification on how the final two places are revealed. So in the 'extra material' timeline of Willow and Tara dating and such, the final live show where they find out who won hasn't happened yet?
Yes, exactly. Everything but the final live show has happened before the “home” updates.



littlecrazy80 – Thanks. Glad you like.



cperrins78 – I’m glad you liked. It will be a few days before the next update.



Tempest Duer – Thanks.

"Most editors are failed writers--but so are most writers." - Thomas Stearns Eliot

"Censorship, like charity, should begin at home; but unlike charity, it should end there." - Chare Booth Luce

My latest story: Survivor - Ash Island

Edited by: JustSkipIt at: 3/10/05 4:48 am
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Re: Survivor: Ash Island

Postby Still Waters T » Thu Mar 10, 2005 8:55 am

Hey :wave



I'm really bad at regularly giving feedback to my fave writers :spin but every now and then I can't help myself and not give feedback. :D Be sure to know that every time you're starting or "just" updating a fic, I'm doing a mental jump for joy! :bounce :banana You have an incredible talent for writing fics :bow and always manage to leave the reader craving more, anxiously waiting for the next update to dig into it. :clap



I don't watch reality shows very often, but it's fun occasionally. I totally love this reality show fic you have. :D The "inbetweens" is a great big bonus, which gives us more insight into Willow and Tara, and also more Willow and Tara goodness :bounce so I'm glad you decided to write the "inbetweens." And like it's already been said in feedbacks, the Willow and Tara interactions are very cute! :pinky Poor confused Xander lol, hope he wisens up a little in the near future.



Will it be long before Willow gets to meet Ariel? Willow's days as a player seems kinda over after she met Tara, cos well she's not interested in anyone else now...right? But does Tara really know this yet? :eyebrow I really like how you've made Willow and Tara both secure, confident, women, who know what they want and go after it - Willow more obvious than Tara, who's more subtle about it, and brings a bit of mystery to her. :glasses



Liv :kitty

Still Waters T
 


Re: Survivor: Ash Island

Postby mollyig » Thu Mar 10, 2005 9:06 am

I don't watch Survivor but know the format, and was interested in how it would read. I must congratulate you on a great job. Despite the restrictions you have with trying to keep the dialogue to the way it would be broadcast in the show, you still manage to imbue each character with definitive personalities.


You stay the course, you hold the line, you keep it all together.

You're the one true thing I know I can believe in
- Sarah McLachlan

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