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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby WillowRulez » Fri Nov 24, 2006 5:25 pm

For once I actually liked Buffy and then you go and kill her :smash
What is it with you and Buffy? :party
Anyway, great update! Loved the raw emotions between W&T. I felt just as torn as Tara.
Cant wait for more!
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby venusoracle » Thu Nov 30, 2006 11:43 pm

I loved the movie and I love this version even more. Dark and gritty... gotta love it
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby cantbefredless » Sun Dec 03, 2006 11:15 pm

omg i love it.. sorry i havnt replied in a while... :dance
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby Alcy » Thu Dec 14, 2006 7:31 pm

Thianne: Congrats on the dibs! And yes, I freely admit to killing Buffy and kidnapping Willow…and I’m not sorry about it because it makes for good story-telling!!! (although I don’t want to be the death of you!)

diamond forever: Well, I can leave everyone like that…there’s this wonderful little thing called suspense which works really well in chapter-based writing.
Thanks for your kinds words, you’ve managed to sum up the feelings that I always hope to convey throughout Sin City. More brutality is promised! (Although in a nice fan-ficy sort of way of course!)

highlandlass 25: I will tell you the next chapter is due today!

Dianneswillowtree: I think Tara could probably use your help to kick Glory’s arse, given what she’s up against! Glad your computer still works!

Kloefrost: An evil cliffhanger? Excellent! I promise to deliver you from the evil soon

Spells42: All updates have to come to an end eventually although I do sympathise with you as I know how it feels to want more of something!

Darth Pacula: G’day to you too Paul, although you’re lucky I don’t have you lined up against a wall and shot ‘Sin-City’ style for missing an update!
There’s nothing tender about Sin City, it’s all dark and rough. I am glad to have spared you the spontaneous combustion issues because therein lies real trouble!
I could never cut Willow out of the action either, but it did serve to set up the coming war even more nicely now that Tara is really, really pissed off!

'Nothing good lasts forever’ was a bit morbid I have to admit! And then I go and lull people into a false sense of security with some hot gay lovin’ before throwing shit straight at the proverbial fan like I’m aiming right at it (which of course I am!) ;
Glad you side with Tara…although Willow is hot and she can dance really well…I think such attributes will be more of a hindrance in the upcoming fight.

And I’m glad you were expecting things to go all pear-shaped, because that’s just the sort of thing I would do…and killing ninja-Buffy is also the sort of thing I would do…although in doing it two fics in a row people are quite rightly thinking I have some sort of hate on for Buffy! Her death scene will definitely be further expanded on in the upcoming chapter which you will have to wait for to answer all your queries as to who is alive and who isn’t so lucky!

HalfCamel: Well, I’m doing my best to turn all the Kittens into quivering, anxious wrecks while reading Sin City! No really…I’m just trying to tell a good story which I hope I am. Again, I do like killing my Buffys but this Buffy was particularly indestructible which should have aided in her survival. And I like the way you sum it up when you say “killing her off brings a new level of expected brutality for the coming fight because if Buffy couldn't make it, then who is?”

Won’t torture you too long with the update so you can find out who lives!

Willow Watcher: Sorry the update wasn’t faster but it is coming really soon I promise! Thanks for reading.

Db: I agree in that Tara should have talked over her decision with Willow but I think she knew in advance that Willow would never, ever agree to getting send somewhere to safety. Forcing Willow to go was her only option. But what happened next does call into question her decision making skills. Whether Tara is filled with remorse remains to be seen, but she will most definitely be mad as hell with Glory and her goons which leads to one of my favourite scenarios to write – hot, pissed off Tara going medieval all over the bad guys to save the girl she loves. Who doesn’t love that?!

watty: I think that Sin City is a world of extremes, and in this case it is the extent to which Willow and Tara love each other. Tara risked everything, especially Willow’s love, to send Willow away and now she’s going to have to risk even more to save her. It just keeps getting worse before it gets better.

The fact that Buffy is dead does spell serious trouble for the Ladies and also bodes ill for Tara’s own personal vendetta against Glory. It seems as though she is up against the whole world, which she might as well be. But you can be rest assured that Tara would crawl naked over broken glass to get to Willow…and of course she’ll do it as fast as possible. (although I can’t say the same for the speed of my update!)

sacinema: You’ve forgiven already, as long as people read and enjoy the fic then I’m happy (although its great when people let me know what they love about it so I can deliver more)
Sexy and compelling Willow is my favourite and I can definitely agree that she is one hot mamma yamma in this story.

I agree with you about Evie as I really enjoyed writing her, it was kinda cool to write a movie star character, similar to Angelina Jolie or someone like that. You will have to wait and see whether she makes it out of this alive!

You’re allowed to be upset with me about killing Buffy as she was a cool, strong character in this fic and I did love writing a little bit of ninja action. But you’ve read Captain Red and you know how I kill off my characters! It’s not that I enjoy it…well maybe I do! Anyway, next chapter coming. Thanks!

Guppy: Nicely summed up! Thanks! I’m glad no one feels sorry for Mandy, although given she did put Willow and Dawn’s lives in danger, it’s not surprising.

JustSkipIt: Hi Debra, It’s at times like this that I’m reminded why I don’t like making plans! It just goes to show that I love throwing good intentions out the window and throwing everyone into situations which make for great writing opportunities on my part.

There’s nothing like a hot, quick, dirty sex scene to set the pace and tone of a fic. And it would have been all too palpable for Tara and Willow as you point out when they came downstairs. Both would have reeked of the other, for Willow it would have served to remind her exactly why she wanted to be with Tara, and for Tara, just how badly she wanted to get Willow away to safety…so I hope that scene played out okay despite the obvious little bit of yuckiness.

Buffy said just the one word in the entire fic, I’m quite proud of that…and yet I think she was still a pivotal presence throughout the story.

Thanks for reading along and I hope the conclusion is satisfying!

Auriam: I promise to update very soon, the next chapter is almost finished! I promise you that there will be much arse-kicking to come from Tara and Faith!! Thanks for reading Auriam!

Willohand: Nice reaction! Hopefully you’ve recovered enough in time to read the next chapter!

Artemis: Yep, damn the poopie! I’m not at all sorry that I knocked Buffy off, you’re right in that it makes things scarier by killing someone who was seemingly indestructible. It raises the inevitable question that I’ve been playing with in regards to this fic is, in the face of Buffy’s failure, can Tara actually beat these guys? Which is what this whole fic is about anyway, one person up against insurmountable odds…gotta love it!!

Yeah, if I were a bad guy right now I wouldn’t be resting on my laurels, I’d be worrying about what Tara would do to me. The scene has been set for one almighty showdown and it makes me realise exactly why I love writing fan-fic so much!

WillowRulez: I specialise in killing off Buffy, she was moderately likeable in Captain Red and I killed her in that one too – Maybe I’m just trying to make up for the fact that the show was so focused on the Buffy character when we would much rather see more of Willow and Tara! I think Sin City is all about raw emotions, its so blatant and in your face so I’m glad that comes across in my writing.

Venusoracle: Glad you like my take on the Sin City story, I love it too and can’t wait for the sequel to come out!

cantbefredless: Hi Stef, thanks for dropping me a line to say you’re still enjoying Sin City

Hi everyone, the next chapter will be up today. I managed to have a little writing spree yesterday as I’ve sprained my ankle and have had little else to do except sit in front of a computer!! Stay tuned!!
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby Alcy » Thu Dec 14, 2006 8:04 pm

Chapter 12 – “Into the Fire.”

Tara’s foot slammed heavily on the pavement as she emerged from the car, as though she needed to remind herself that she was actually awake and not walking into her worst nightmare. She didn’t close the door behind her as she moved away from the Oldsmobile and towards the two stationary vehicles in the middle of the road. She studied the scene laid out before her and saw violence everywhere. At her feet were bodies missing hands, arms…and heads, and she knew that Buffy had been at work here. Her boots crunched on shattered glass, spent shells. Sprays of red blood covered the pavement in dreadfully beautiful patterns. For someone who was both an ex-cop and an ex-con, it should have been relatively easy to stomach. However, the thought of Willow at the heart of it all made Tara sick to her stomach. She saw the violence through the eyes of someone unused to such careless disregard for human life. Tara staggered closer to the cars, moving in an awkward gait as she stepped over and around bodies.

As she approached Evie’s Jag her heart pounded against her chest, the solid vehicle looked as though it had been torn open with a can opener. She saw a slender body in what was once a pristine white suit propped up against the rear wheel. Tara scrambled across the last few metres that separated her from Evie and fell to her knees beside her ex-lover. Blood had seeped outwards from several bullet holes in the movie star’s body, ruining her suit and leaving her near death. The corners of her lips curled upwards into an approximation of a smile when her gaze fell on Tara.

“Sorry, Tara,” her voice was cracked and barely audible, “It was a good plan…”

“And I can’t thank you enough for agreeing to it in the first place,” Tara stared into Evie’s glazed eyes, “You’re a brave woman…”

“I had to be to date you!” Evie scoffed, wincing in pain with the effort of speaking but she knew exactly what Tara wanted to hear most of all, “They took your girl.”

“Willow,” Tara breathed, her teeth clenching and grinding in rage.

Tara heard footsteps fall behind her but did not look over her shoulder as she knew it was Faith. The brunette placed a hand on her shoulder, squeezing firmly once in reassurance.

“They’ve long since cleared out, there’s no one else here,” Faith reported in a tone of disappointment as though she had wanted to find someone she could beat to a pulp, “No one alive anyway.”

“It was a mess,” Evie recalled, her breathing harsh and laboured, “There were so many of them…”

“Evie…” Tara began to silence Evie for her own good even though she knew there was nothing she could do to save her life.

“Don’t you dare try and shut me up…Tara Maclay,” Evie was just as strong willed as ever, “There were dozens of them…they must have known I had my boys with me….it went on forever, smoke and bullets flying, so much noise…Willow and Dawn were so calm, terrified, but calm…she’s an incredible young woman Tara, I’m happy for you…”

“Dawn’s gone too,” Faith added as Evie trailed off.

Evie held Tara’s gaze, her vision seeming to clear for a moment only to fog again but this time it was with unshed tears. Tears for an old lover, for the past, and for a future that she would never see. Tara reached out and picked up Evie’s limp, bloody hand and held it tenderly, it was all she could do.

“They took Willow and Dawn…that little woman died trying to defend them, she came out of nowhere…’

“Buffy,” Faith added in a heavy tone.

“Buffy…she’s a serious piece of work,” Evie wheezed, “Carved her way through every guy they sent against us, even after Cruz and his boys were dead….it wasn’t until that white-haired bastard showed up…”

“Him I’m familiar with,” Tara replied in a low voice, “You really shouldn’t speak…save your strength.”

Evie let out a macabre chuckle, “Ha, I’m done for babydoll and you know it…never was one to shut up though, perfect really…because you never said anything…the whole time we were dating, it was like being with a stone wall at times…”

“I’m sorry,” Tara mumbled, although there was absolutely nothing she could have done to change the way she was and they both knew it.

“Don’t be…” Evie let out a racking cough that shook her already weak frame, blood bubbled from her lips and flowed freely down her chin, “Conversation…was always never on my mind when I was with you…”

Tara smiled for Evie’s benefit, gently caressing the skin of her hand with her thumb as her body sagged further and her eyes glazed over once again.

“Never did stop loving you…”

“Bullshit,” Tara whispered quietly, drawing a strand of blood soaked hair away from Evie’s face.

“I’m fucking dying T…it’s what I’m supposed to say…”

With the last quip still on her lips, Evie let out one last weak breath and her eyes slid closed, her hand slipping from Tara’s grasp. Tara bowed her head as though she was offering up a prayer when in actual fact she was struggling to keep from screaming aloud at the top of her lungs. All her rage, her anger and burdening sense of injustice seethed beneath the surface of her skin, straining to be released. It took all her strength to contain it, harness it until it was time to unleash it on those who had done this.

When she eventually rose to her feet her expression betrayed nothing except a steely calm. Faith moved to stand at her side.

“They’ve got Willow and Dawn” the brunette stated the obvious.

From the ashen expression on Tara’s face, Faith realised it didn’t need restating. It was foremost on Tara’s mind.

“Yes,” Tara growled, “At least I know exactly where she is.”

Faith nodded, “The Talbot mansion…they’ll be expecting you.”

Tara turned to face Faith, “I wouldn’t have it any other way, I want them to know exactly who it is standing in front of them when they die, Glory and that blond bastard especially…my smiling face will be the last thing they see.”

******

Willow’s eyes opened to meet nothing but darkness. Her head searched frantically but her eyes fell on nothing that showed the slightest glimmer of light of any kind, there was just an endless sea of black. She could have been a room that stretched for eternity, or one where the walls were closing in on her. Willow squeezed her eyes shut once more and forced herself to draw shallow, even breaths to calm herself. As her heart’s thudding slowed gradually, she gathered in a sense of her surroundings. Her wrists were tied above her head at a height that made it almost impossible for her to stand flat footed on the ground, her shoulders were already screaming in agony at the unnatural position they were forced to assume.

Dozens of emotions surged through her body. There was pain of course, not only from her position but from blows that she had received during her journey and the searing one to her cheek which she knew had knocked her unconscious. Someone had removed the thick woollen coat she’d donned in Evie’s car and she was left clad in the same satin nightgown she’d worn marching down the stairs after Tara at the Palace. Willow was freezing and she was terrified, as terrified as she’d been when their small convoy had been ambushed by dozens of armed men, their guns spitting fire and death in all directions...

The road had been blocked by a fiery obstacle, forcing the convoy to halt and lie almost defenceless in the face of an ambush. Willow had watched as the bodyguards, seemingly tough and invulnerable men, had been torn to pieces by a hail of bullets as soon as they stepped out of their vehicles. Those who had managed to squeeze off a few rounds did so as a final act before they too joined their comrades in pools of blood.

From being frozen for those first few moments, Willow had been jolted into action as a bullet slammed into the bullet-resistant glass just beside her head. She threw herself over Dawn’s trembling body even as the cacophony continued to sound in her ears. As her breath came in gasps into Dawn’s hair, she squeezed her eyes shut and waited for her world to end in the searing heat of an explosion. As the seconds wore on a more rational state of mind returned and she realised that she would probably not be destined to die on this dark street.

This was all about Tara, and as such they were here for her…all these strangers were dying for her. Willow raised her head and saw Evie Abernathy, once Tara’s lover, looking down at her with an ashen face. Willow could tell she didn’t want to die but there was no trace of accusation in her eyes.

At that point, Evie slid a slim, deadly looking gun from a bejewelled holster at her hip. She swiftly cocked the weapon even as she delivered a tight-lipped smile in Willow’s direction.

“Stay in the car kid, don’t want you getting caught in the cross fire, you’ll be safe here…” Evie’s words trailed off, the actress failed to even convince herself with her lies.

Willow stared incredulously at the movie star, hardly looking the part of gun-toting saviour despite her weapon and confident pose. Clad in her white pants suit she was, as always, the epitome of sophistication and sensual perfection. She opened the door and her lithe leg emerged, she planted her heel firmly in a pool of blood.

Faced only with a view of her back, Willow could not see the look on Evie’s face when the first of three bullets hit her. She could count them because she jerked violently with each one that slammed into her frame. Evie then slumped to the ground motionless without ever having fired a shot. Willow watched through the open door as figures emerged from the shadows, evil men with their weapons trained on the two young women huddled in the rear seat. Despite the proximity of the advancing thugs, Willow’s gaze was drawn back into the shadows behind them. In the gloom she picked out the shape of a tall man clad in a billowing coat, his profile lit faintly by the hot red glow of his cigarette. He took a step forward and Willow instantly knew that she was staring at true evil, far more so than the hired thugs who were stretching eager hands into the car to claim their prize. It was the peroxided man who had spoken to her in the back alley at Kitty’s. Although there Tara was just metres away to step in…here she had no one.

Willow shrank away from the closest fingers but even as they moved to close on her forearm, the body they were attached to was suddenly headless. The body fell, revealing Buffy posed with her bloody katana in a post strike stance. The petite blonde met Willow’s eyes for a scant moment before whirling to dismember a second thug before he knew who or what he was up against.

Dawn looked up sharply in time to see Buffy move in a blur and out of the path of a hail of bullets that were centred on her previous location. Willow immediately felt the girl’s body relax as though she knew they would be safe with the arrival of the petite blonde assassin. Through her limited view, framed by the open car door, Willow saw glimpses of Buffy as she carved a bloody path through her attackers. The air around her was thick with gushing blood as she carved off limb after limb.

Willow too felt that their ordeal would shortly be over and she would be able to give Tara a piece of her mind regarding their enforced separation. There were many things she wanted to say to the blonde, most of them would be words fuelled by anger and she was determined to make them as ugly as possible…before they engaged in an enthusiastic bout of make-up sex.

However, as the thugs stopped falling onto Buffy’s blade, the coat-clad stranger took his position on the chopping block as though he too were eager to die. Even as Buffy moved to strike him down, Willow could see that this was no clear cut contest. He dodged Buffy’s blade in an apparently effortless move, distracting her with the swirl of his leather coat which hindered her movements as it disguised his own. If she were surprised by her initial failure, the deadly little assassin did not show it, she kept up a relentless barrage of attacks as they danced across the ground, moving in and out of Willow and Dawn’s line of sight.

“We’ll be okay right, Willow?” Dawn’s urgent voice sounded from beneath her, “Buffy can beat this guy can’t she?”

“Yeah, of course Dawnie,” Willow replied in what she hoped was a fervent voice, “Buffy’s never lost to anyone.”

There was a violent thud and the stationary car rocked on its wheels, followed by a second that was much more discreet chasing the first. Willow glanced up at the cars roof even though she could see nothing through the thick exterior. In that impossibly small space, the two combatants danced as though they were on a football field. Willow and Dawn listened to the sounds of combat, hearing manly grunts punctuated by further thuds and the deadly whistle of Buffy’s katana as it sliced through the air. It was the only sound that came from the assassin and her footfalls barely made a sound on the metal as she moved.

While both girls lay in wait, hoping to see a peroxided head fly through the air, the sound that chilled them to the bone was that of a female’s voice crying out in pain not once, but twice.

Willow’s eyes were wide with fear as the scuffling above them ceased. A thin trickle of blood began running from the lip above the open car down from where it had gathered on the roof. She watched with a fascinated horror as the life liquid continued to flow, even as she was watching she saw something fly through the dark air to land several metres away from the car in a mangled heap. Willow saw a flash of blonde hair and the glint of shining metal as Buffy’s own katana protruded from her back. She lay motionless on the ground.

“Buffy,” Dawn whispered in a strangled gasp even as Willow’s fingers closed over her eyes in an effort to keep the sight from her.

Dawn wrenched Willow’s hand away and then struggled violently to be set free from her weight which lay atop her body. Willow struggled to keep her in the car but the young woman was hell bent on getting out and reaching the side of her fallen sister.

“Dawnie, no!” Willow was forced to watch as she fell out the car door and struggled awkwardly to her feet.

She watched in horror, expecting to see bullets slamming into the girl seconds after her exit from the car. However, none were forthcoming and Dawn fell in a heap at Buffy’s side. No sooner had she done so though, black suited men were surrounding her and dragging her to her feet.

“That’s not the bird we’re here for,” Willow heard a voice above her speak in a gruff tone, “We want the redheaded one.”

“She’s in the car!” someone yelled.

Willow’s heart raced, she hardly expected to be able to remain hidden in the car but to know they were coming for her and to be powerless to do anything about it was something else altogether. She frantically searched for a weapon, anything to use rather than just let herself be dragged away like some defenceless child…like she had been eight years ago. In the front seat, still lying in the hand of the dead driver, was a pistol. Willow darted forward and snatched it up, fear rendering her oblivious to its blood smeared grip as she held it in her shaking hand.

A sneering face appeared in the doorway, an expression wiped a few moments later when faced with the cold, merciless barrel of a pistol. Even though it was it the hands of a young woman who was shaking with fear at the thought of pulling the trigger, it was a force to be reckoned with. The thug hadn’t the time to back out of the car, in a surge of emotion and adrenaline, Willow pulled the trigger.

A single click emitted from the weapon. In frustration, Willow pulled the trigger repeatedly but her attacker grinned at his luck and crawled forward to drag her kicking and screaming from the car. She was hauled out and dragged unceremoniously to her feet in front of the man who had just dispatched Buffy as though it were child’s play. Although determined to defiant no matter what, Willow felt weak and helpless in his presence.

“What’ll we do about the spare, boss?” a surviving thug shoved a terrified Dawn forward, still sobbing over her sister’s death.

Willow had glanced to the girl and then back to Spike with an urgent look on her face as she demanded, “She stays with me!”

Spike’s gaze travelled across to Willow’s and she did her best to hold it, despite the piercing stare. She saw a cold, calculating presence behind his eyes, one completely devoid of compassion and immune to pleadings. Willow lifted her chin defiantly, daring him to challenge her…despite the fact that she held no cards whatsoever. He finished searching Willow’s face, leaving her feeling dirty and crawling before nodding to the man that held Dawn. Willow was able to breathe some small sigh of relief as they were both moved towards waiting cars. As much as she wanted to be able to reassure Dawn, no words would come.

It was now, after the violence of her kidnapping, that Willow found herself in darkness and in pain. Despite the appalling nature of her current circumstances, Willow sensed whatever happened next would quite probably be worse. She was almost content to leave her eyes shut and loose herself in thoughts of being somewhere else.

The door opened with calculated violence, slamming against the wall behind it with a ferocity that sent tremors through the chains that held Willow’s hands. Her eyes opened and she had to squint at the bright light that surged through the door. As her vision gradually returned, a figure emerged at the centre of the searing light.

“Little Willow Rosenberg,” the figure’s voice drawled lazily, confidently.

The voice was exactly the same, just as everything else about him had changed over the preceding eight years. Willow remembered a femininely handsome face, although it had seemed terribly wicked even to a small girl. His body had been trim in a well-tailored suit with his grip possessing a vice-like quality.

“Tommy Talbot,” Willow whispered, instantly feeling twelve years old once more.

She could see him in perfect clarity now as her eyes adjusted to the light. The first thing Willow noticed was his gait, a crab-legged scuffle with knees at odd angles. One bony hand gripped a black walking stick which shook as he leaned heavily upon it. Tommy saw the direction of her gaze and his saggy, hollow face twisted into a cruel smile that was anything but friendly.

“I have your friend, Detective Maclay, to thank for my ill-favoured appearance…starting with my legs which she cruelly crippled, leaving me to waste away to a pathetic approximation of my former self.”

Willow noticed that he had literally wasted away. His suit appeared to hang from a skeleton rather than a still living and breathing man. The thin, lank hair that hung from his head was nothing like the dark, lustrous locks that Willow remembered so vividly. However, as his body had wasted, his arrogance and cruelty had been bolstered and magnified, it was etched into every crease of his face.

“Well I’m sorry she didn’t put you out of your misery,” Willow tried to manage a rough growl but her voice emerged as a frightened squeak, “She’ll be back to finish the job.”

Tommy laughed and Willow didn’t blame him, her threats sounded pathetic even to her own ears.

“I’m counting on just that…I’ve got a little surprise waiting for Maclay, a visit from an old friend that I think she’s going to enjoy very much,” Tommy pursed his lips together thoughtfully as he looked Willow up and down, he nodded as though reassuring himself of some important fact, when he resumed speaking his voice had taken on a petulant, high pitched whine, “While we’re waiting for her to arrive, I don’t see why there’s any reason we shouldn’t finish what I set about to do eight years ago…a right that was mine, and that fuckin’ bitch stole it away from me!”

Willow almost gagged. Tremors of revulsion shook her frozen frame as she recognised that look in Talbot’s eyes. A wave of nausea took hold of her at the thought of that perverted freak touching any part of her body. Talbot watched her conspicuous reaction with immense satisfaction, feeding off the fear she emanated from every pore of her body.

“And I’m going to take back those eight years she stole from me out of your flesh…she robbed me of my prize and now I’m left with you…old and disgusting…you’re the one that’s going to pay for what she stole, and it’ll be just as good!” he squealed, his excitement rising with each word.

With a superhuman display of courage, Willow forced her fear back inside her body rather than let it erupt in a display of abject misery and uncontrollable sobbing that she knew Tommy would feed from greedily. She forced herself to remain calm in the face of his obvious excitement.

“Whatever you want from me Tommy, you’re not going to get it,” Willow swallowed the bile that had risen in her throat, “So you can just keep your foul hands to yourself or I’ll rip them off with my teeth!”

He threw back his head, revealing his scrawny chicken-like neck, and cackled loudly for some moments. Willow watched him through narrowed eyes, wishing fervently that Tara would appear behind him and snap his neck like a twig. However, her lover was nowhere near her at that point in time and she was alone with the monster in front of her. She channelled her fear into anger and hate, despising the man thoroughly. When he had ceased laughing and wiped away the tears that had trickled from his eyes, he found himself looking at a girl whose gaze spelt out her hate in vivid detail.

Tommy snorted, somewhat ruffled that Willow had not been reduced to a quivering wreck. He attempted to straighten his crooked frame to appear even more menacing.

“I’m going to want you to dance for me,” he announced.

“Like hell I will,” Willow replied, this time her voice did emerge as a growl, angry and firm, “You take these chains off me and I’m going straight for your scrawny little throat!”

Tommy cackled again, “Brave words from a little girl…but I think you’ll find we have just the right incentive to change your mind.”

He gestured with an inclination of his head and Willow watched with a sinking feeling as Dawn was dragged into the room, kicking out with her heels the entire time. She managed to jab one hell into the toe of the man holding her and he grunted loudly. He responded by whipping a knife from his boot and grabbing her in a headlock, the knife went to her throat.

“Dawnie!” Willow hissed urgently, she jerked her gaze from the defiant girl back to Tommy, “Don’t you dare hurt her you…you…”

He lunged forward and made a silencing sound deep in his throat, “That’s quite enough from you little Willow Rosenberg, I’ll make this nice and simple for you so it’s real easy…you don’t dance for me, and I start carving up your little friend here…piece by piece…Lenny, I believe a demonstration is in order…”

The thug holding Dawn grinned as though Christmas had come early. He shoved Dawn to the ground and held her wrist to the ground, with one vicious downward slice of his knife, he sliced her little finger off just above the knuckle. The scream that followed seared right through Willow’s soul and she squeezed her eyes shut as though that would make the heart-wrenching sound stop.

Her chin suddenly felt as though it were caught in a vice. When she tried to wrench it away, the grip only tightened.

“Open your eyes!” it was Talbot’s shrieking voice, Willow tried again to twist away from him but he forced her to stay put, “Open your eyes and look at what you’ve done!”

Willow opened her eyes, at first no more than a mere slit through which she saw only blood. Her eyes fully open, she met Dawn’s anguished gaze as she clutched her bloody hand to her breast.

“Don’t do anything, Willow,” Dawn hissed through gritted teeth, pain choking her voice.

“Continue the demonstration please, Lenny,” Talbot was clearly enjoying himself.

“No!” Willow heard herself yell, twisting her body urgently as though she suddenly thought she could wrench herself free from her bonds, “Leave her be! I’ll dance for you goddammit, I’ll dance!”

Tommy Talbot’s face lit up, “Excellent…Lenny, we need to find our little stripper here a stage on which to do her work…and it better be good, or else the little lady here will have trouble using a knife and a fork tomorrow.”

******

For once in her life, Faith was at a loss as to what to do. She knew exactly what she would do under any normal circumstances. She would gather together her Ladies and they would take justice straight to the Talbot clan…of course, many Ladies would be killed but that was the way it ran in Old Town. The Talbot’s couldn’t do this without expecting major retribution of the bloody and violent kind. However, this particular situation was thrown upside down by the fact that Tara was in charge, this was her party and Faith was just a guest.

And if Tara chose to party alone…

“You’re planning on going in there alone aren’t you,” Faith narrowed her eyes as she cornered Tara in the supply room.

“Of course not,” Tara replied much too smoothly as she slammed another shell into the shotgun in her hands.

The weapon fully loaded, she tested its weight and grunted with satisfaction. She threw it over her shoulder and picked up the bag at her feet which was already packed full and straining at its fastenings. Faith stared after Tara with narrow eyes as the ex-cop turned and exited the room without a further word. She grunted and followed the blonde.

“You won’t get further than the boundary fence alone, Glory’s goons will riddle you with bullets and her dogs will tear your bloody carcass to pieces” Faith cautioned vividly, “And besides the fact that you’re a grumpy bitch who’s fucking a girl I think of as my little sister I would hate for your story to end like that…not to mention Willow’s story. She’s counting on you to get her out of this…not get yourself killed.”

Tara glanced back at Faith over her should as she paused at the top of the stairs, with a slight grunt she continued on her way. Faith followed once more, feeling as though she was trying to draw blood from a stone. She reached out and grabbed Tara’s upper arm to halt her walk.

Tara turned glared at Faith, her trigger finger twitching above the shotgun’s trigger.

“What do you want from me?” Tara demanded, “Because right now you’re just slowing me down.”

“I want you to stop and think about what you’re doing for at least a second!” Faith growled

The bag in Tara’s hand dropped to the ground and landed with a thud, the shotgun left her shoulder so it was pointed at the ground.

“All I can think about is Willow in the hands of that family!” Tara replied, her voice threatening to break, “I can’t wait around for you to gather your troops, to plan, to choose our weapons…I’m going in now.”

“I’ll come with you!” Faith insisted.

“You know as well as I do that Glory wants me…if I go in there with a pack of Ladies armed to the teeth, all guns blazing, she’ll kill Willow and Dawn without a qualm…I can’t let that happen,” Tara said firmly, her fingers clenched around the shotgun in her hand, “Even if things turn to shit I can count on the fact that she’ll let them go if she has me.”

“This is Glory we’re talking about…”

“I know, I can’t guarantee anything,” Tara sighed, retrieving her fallen bag, “But you can promise me one thing…when…if I get Willow out, and Dawn, you’ll get them out of town?”

“Of course,” Faith replied quickly, mesmerised by the heartfelt expression on Tara’s face, “But you still don’t have to do this alone…”

Her bag back in her hands and the shotgun over her shoulder, Tara continued walking. Faith felt compelled to follow but couldn’t say whether or not Tara would pull the shotgun on her.

“Yes I do,” Tara stared straight ahead.

“Why? It’s suicide you crazy bitch!”

Tara paused for a moment and replied, “Because I am always going to be alone without her.”


TBC: in Chapter 13 – “A Party with Friends.”
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby PancakesinBellies » Thu Dec 14, 2006 8:44 pm

Dibs!

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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby diamondforever » Thu Dec 14, 2006 9:02 pm

Oh Dawn's poor pinky finger...(this phrase just reminded me of Fight Club, which I love)

Buffy killed by Spike - how ironic! Sadism to the max here...but still holding true to the story. Tommy Talbot is one sick sick creature. Tara is a gun-toting babe that we are all rooting for. I don't know how you're going to pull this one off without her at least losing a limb, but...waiting anxiously!

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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby Guppy » Fri Dec 15, 2006 7:41 pm

Ahhh!! This is torture of the best kind. Poor Willow and Dawn. Tara is going to rip Tommy apart. Take charge Tara is so incredibly hot! Damn!
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby db » Fri Dec 15, 2006 11:03 pm

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Alcy!

Now, see here missy. You've gone and made my chin all wobbly.

I love that Willow is a spitfire and that she pulled out her bravery during the battle,and with Tommy the toad... she was so brave! Andt she fired that gun even though it had no bullets and she protected Dawn, and is planning on protecting her still. Little Dawnie. That evil piece of shit cut off her pinkie finger!

I *hate* the Talbots.

I want Faith and Tara to frickin kick their horrible evil asses... but but but I don't Willow to dance for that disgusting pedophile. Please, please don't make her dance for him!? His plan is to rape her, probably to torture her and I don't think Willow will ever be able to dance again or live with herself if she does this. It will destroy her and it makes me wanna barf.

:pray

Please please please let Tara and Faith and the calvary of people-against-the-evil-Talbots (who are surely planning a shower of moltov cocktails and ass kicking) arrive swiftly and invoke furious vengence and smite them down -- or at least rescue Willow... right away!

What can I say? This is a fabulously engrossing, freakishly frighting and desperately disturbing update.

You are *so* going to have to update soon, (please?) 'cause now my belly's all in a twitter and my chin is still wobbly.

*wah*

*wanders off muttering something about suspense and mean-i-tude*

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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby Darth Pacula » Tue Dec 19, 2006 12:04 am

G'day Alcy! :wave

Well, unlike some people :p I managed not to get wobbly chinned, but blimey that was some fun violence!

As I suspected, Evie's hired muscle turned out to be about as much use as a jetski in the Sahara. Sure, they might have looked pretty, but she'd have done better to have some profession killers, rather than just muscle for hire.

I'm glad that we got to see Buffy's last hurrah. Not that she got killed that is, but that we got to see what happened. This Sin City version of Spike you've created is one mean customer, and doesn't he just fit in perfectly?

Evie? Well, she was just about as useless as her flunkies, if not more so; she didn't even get a shot off! But at least she went down fighting .... well, intending to fight. There's that pesky need to pull the trigger before you get mortally wounded ...

So, Dawn survived, even if she is in a bad place and sans a finger. That's good news ... the survival bit that is. Not so much the severed digit.

Ahh Tommy ... there's a cheese grater I want to introduce to your groin. But, failing that unlikely opportunity, lets hope that Tara turns up post haste to dispense lethal retribution. With any luck, Willow will be able to play for time. I can't imagine that she's in the best shape of her life, given the uncomfortable position in which the bad guys have been keeping her.

Even if things turn to shit I can count on the fact that she’ll let them go if she has me


Ahh Tara? Are you delusional? That bitch ain't gonna let any of you walk away ... so I guess you'd better just kill the cow instead.

Bring on the Party!

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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby JustSkipIt » Sat Dec 23, 2006 5:03 pm

Wow, Alcy.

I read this when it first came up but I haven't had a chance until now to comment. It's brilliant in a truly twisted way. I won't say that my mind doesn't have scenes like these run through it occasionally but to write them all down and put them all in one update is a little overwhelming but in a really fantastic way. It's all very primal and tangible. Does that make any sense? It's like being overloaded on these violent an unimaginable scenes (except that they are imaginable) and just wallowing in them. We are completely immersed in the horror and brutality of it.

One aspect of this horror that I find most interesting is that this is an AU fic. We're somewhat used to the horror and bloodshed in the cannon or off-cannon fics because demons/vampires, etc. But this is just...

Wow and also wow. I can't wait for more.
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby WillowRulez » Sun Dec 24, 2006 2:15 pm

Oh boy, I wouldnt wanna be Tommy right now (or ever) with Tara coming for him. And poor Dawn! Hopefully they will get to them in time and maybe be able to save the finger? Maybe I am just being too positive :D
Great update... as usual :pinky
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby Artemis » Sun Dec 31, 2006 4:09 am

That was a great, bloodthirsty chapter. I liked the battle especially - it had a very real, immediate feel to it, much more present and tangible than the typical cops-and-robbers gun battle where none of the main characters actually get shot. This felt deadly, and I wasn't at all surprised when Evie bought it in no time - this isn't the kind of story where anyone being heroic gets a free pass, just because (even knowing her fate already from the Tara half of the chapter).

Tommy is a slimy little bastard - but y'know, in with all the loathing of him for his own sake, there's a little bit of disgust at what a clueless, pitiful creature he is. He doesn't get it at all - he can make Willow dance by threatening Dawnie (ouch!), but she's not dancing for him, and even the lowliest drunk who stumbles into the Club when she's on stage is still higher up the ladder than Tommy. Willow likes dancing on stage - no matter what Tommy does, he can't make Willow like dancing for him, not even as much as she does for her random audience members. As for as much as she likes dancing for Tara - forget it, he's so far out of the race it's not even worth considering. In conclusion, the sooner Tommy gets what's coming to him, the better. At least Spike, loathesom as he is, can stand up to his enemies one on one, instead of hiding behind hired goons. Tommy's a weak little wimp.

That aside, I'm very much in the Sin City zone now - all the violence is working the way it's meant to, kind of horrifying but also just kind of there, part of the scenery, and I'm looking forward to seeing the good guys out-violent the bad guys, rather than resolve things in any kind of enlightened fashion. Tara's upcoming one-woman (if she gets her way) assault should be one to remember - and I expect Faith won't keep away either, being that they've both got friends and loved ones to rescue and avenge.
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby sacinema » Fri Jan 05, 2007 12:23 am

That's one fine peace of fic. Primal and enthralling. Only three sorts of people exists: The Good, The Bad and The Ugly. Last ones are mostly the same. At least this goes with Tommy and Glory Talbot (who hasn't made an appearance in a long time by the way - I suspect she'll cut in at the worst moment). Only Spike's bad but not ugly. Like someone said before at least he is daring in being truly evil. He is not hiding in the dark like this shitty bastard Tommy. I so love fics in which we are able to hate people. It's so easy to be with the good ones. It really digs for primal feelings.

Tara go one and kick that Tommy Talbot ass - hard, fast and brutally. Rescue your girl. By knowing Captain Red this won't be anything less than messy. Yes, you are really evil. And there will be more deaths of the good ones I'm truly sure about that. Won't dare to guess who it will be.

Evie's ending was worth her being in the story. Sure I "hate" (please forgive me) you for letting her die too. She was one of my favorites. Maybe you feel like writing a prequel (not on the kittenboard I know) some day? Must have been a firework of good quotes the relationship between those two. May Evie rest in peace.

And Willow the little spitfire? Pathetic her words may be. But she's not. She is damn brave and wins all the points against the scum Talbot even if he thinks he is in charge now. He won't win. Because he'll never get what he truly wants and needs - love. Poor substitute raping innocent little girls and being a big meanie who tries to overpower people. Willow already has what he is lacking. Tara loves her unconditional.

Even if I'm not a Dawn fan I really felt with her in this. Poor girl loosing a finger. But she's brave too. Oh and one thing I nearly forgot: Normally I don't like fighting scenes because they are often long and without suspence. Not in your fics. And this one was a good one. I liked how you made us wait till Willow remembering to know what truly happened.

It would be really nice to read an update soon. Thanks. Sorry for not leaving FB before. I wanted to write it directly after reading the update but RL came inbetween.
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby Alcy » Tue Jan 09, 2007 8:38 pm

highlandlass25: Why thank you, thank you very much!

diamond forever: While your pinky finger is probably the limb you can most afford to lose I would still hate to lose mine (not to mention ouch!!!!)
I spend my days dreaming up ways to kill Buffy…well, no I don’t…but if I did, having Spike kill Buffy was probably the most unimaginative scenario I could concoct…but definitely the most fun!
And you can trust me when I say that Tara will not be losing any of her limbs.
Thanks for your concern about my ankle but it’s still not healed dammit! I haven’t been able to go for a run for a month and its driving me nuts (hence the lack of writing lately, I think its sapped all my creative juices)

Guppy: Torturing Kittens (in a nice way) is one of my favourite pastimes and you may be right about Tara ripping Tommy apart…but I should imagine there are some other people that would tackle that job eagerly as well.

db: My sincerest apologies for making your chin all wobbly but I’m also pleased that I managed to rile you up to the point where it could go wobbly as that means I’ve done a good job with this chapter! Judging by your anger towards Tommy and his goons I think you’ll enjoy the climax of this story immensely as the nasty little men always get their comeuppances in my fics. Trust me, the cavalry is on their way (and what hot cavalry it is, Tara could come rescue me anytime!!!)
Thank you very much for being engrossed, frightened and disturbed by this update…I might have to write a nice fic with puppies and pom-poms next…

Paul: I commend your for your stoicism in the face of what was a rather violent chapter (hopefully you will hold up as well with the last two chapters!)
I have watched many episodes of Star Trek and other such shows to know that ‘redshirts’ are exceptionally incompetent and the same goes for Evie's hired muscle. But let’s face it, do you want to see men in black suits win the day or a gorgeous blonde in leather pants and a white vest…hmmm, let me think about that…
I had to give Buffy a bit of a send off, I did enjoy writing a wordless Buffy and will take my experiences with her into account when I am writing future Buffys…lesson learned, the less words Buffy speaks, the more everyone seems to like her! And Spike is pure evil, just like he was supposed to be.
And yes, Evie was as inept as her ‘redshirts’ but I like to think that she died with some dignity, and that Dawn will retain her dignity in upcoming chapters sans pinky finger.
I will take into account your suggestion of a cheese grater as the method for killing Tommy, although it might be difficult to write one into the plot given that people in Sin City don’t really have much time for cooking.

Regarding Glory, I think Tara will take your warning to heart and just kill the cow instead, I think many people would be upset if I let her go with a smack on the arse. The Party is coming. Thanks very much Paul!!!
JustSkipIt: ‘Brilliant in a truly twisted way’ is as nice a comment as I would ever want regarding this chapter so thank you very much! I don’t think the chapter was overwhelming to write in the first instance, but in subsequent revisions and editing I did realise that this chapter has set up some truly difficult storylines to grapple with and actually write. I think what comes next will be even more primal and violent…and yes, you don’t need demons and vampires to create horror and bloodshed, people can do it quite capably on their own. I knew when I was starting out that this fic would go to dark places but its gratifying to know that it doesn’t distract from the ability to still enjoy reading it.

WillowRulez: I think Dawn’s pinky finger will be the least of their worries in the coming chapters, although it would make a nice epilogue perhaps! Nothing wrong with being positive, especially in the face of rather overwhelming odds! Thanks very much!
Artemis: Thanks very much Chris. I’m glad the action felt deadly, I’m forever annoyed with movies when their villains are completely inept and couldn’t hit the side of a barn while the good guys mow them down with crack shooting. It was unrealistic for Evie to combat roll from the limo and take out a dozen of Talbots henchmen with her teeny weeny gun before sinking to her knees after being shot a dozen times and continuing to fire off parting shots with wry quips coming from her bloody lips...that sort of exit is reserved for the major heroes and villains, not a pampered movie star.
Tommy the slimy little bastard will definitely get what’s coming to him, and without the privilege of Willow really dancing for him. As far as villains go, he is among the least likeable and most pathetic because he has no power of his own…but sometimes these are the villains that are the most powerful simply because of their manic desires.
Very glad you’re in the Sin City zone, cue cool music and sexy, dark voice overs from our blonde anti-heroine.
sacinema: I love writing fics where characters are actually hated, it’s a real challenge to write someone like that, much harder than writing characters that we like and love. And yes, this fic promises to come to a more brutal conclusion than Captain Red, while not quite on the same massive scale. Although I am running out of ‘good-guys’ to kill…I suppose I might actually have to start killing off some of the bad ones!
Very glad you liked Evie, I did enjoy writing her and while I don’t think I could bring myself to ever write a Tara/Other fic, there are definitely some cool and nasty images to take from Sin City.

I think Willow knows that she can’t really do much against her captors besides never surrender who she is no matter what Tommy does to her.
Hopefully I can deliver an update soon, although as I said a little earlier I’m feeling a bit bleh at the moment given my stupid injury and resulting lack of exercise. And New Zealand is currently experiencing one of the worst and coldest summers on record, its pouring with rain outside when the sun is supposed to be shining so I think the whole country is a bit down in the dumps at the moment. But I should stop coming up with excuses and just write! Update soon everyone!
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby dlline » Sun Jan 21, 2007 8:43 pm

I'm jumping in to comment for the first time ever.

This story is just riveting. I haven't seen the actual movie, but it couldn't possibly be as good as this story. I love Tara with attitude, and if Willow wanted to private dance for me, I'd never leave the room.

This fic is just too good. Hoping for an update soon.

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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby Alcy » Thu Jan 25, 2007 3:16 pm

dlline: thanks very much for jumping in to comment and I'm glad you are enjoying the characters. An update follows!!



Chapter 13 – “A Party with Friends.”

Faith was wrong. The Dame’s tough, there’s no doubt about that, but as I drop soundlessly into Glory Talbot’s backyard I know that she underestimated what I’m capable of. My boots hit the dirt, I lay down my bag of goodies and a split second later I dive into a roll to come up a mere foot from the closest guard. My hands grasp his head and before he has even felt my touch I snap his neck. Even as he falls to the ground I snatch his knife from his vest and fling it into the face of his buddy standing on the other side of a carefully manicured rose garden. With a slight gurgle he goes down in slow motion.

Yes, Faith was wrong. Two men dead in as many seconds and I’m not even warmed up yet.

The night is pitch black, not a trace of a moon. I pause for a few seconds and smell the roses so to speak, along with fresh cut grass and rich, dark soil. For a city cop so used to gutters and garbage cans it’s like a foreign country. It’s all too perfect to be real, further ruined by the fact that I know monsters live here. The whole scene is eerily still with a hint of moisture in the air and that sense of foreboding that lingers in the air before a thunderstorm. Conditions perfect for the foul things I have to do tonight. There’s killing to be done…a lot of it. I don’t have time to dwell on it but I know by the time dawn breaks and sheds light on this evil world my hands will be stained with blood.


Tara retrieved her bag in a firm grip and continued towards the house, the shotgun held firmly in her other hand although she knew she dared not fire it at this point. One single blast would alert the entire household to her presence. In the shadows ahead she heard the low throated growl of an animal and she froze, remembering Faith’s warnings about t the guard dogs.

There’s a mutt in front of me, one of those great big things people tend to breed for the purpose of ripping other people to pieces. Shit like that makes me angry. Another one joins the first, both look as though they weigh as much as I do…great big things, could probably tear me to pieces in less than a minute, making enough noise as they went to bring goons running. They don’t…for some reason dogs have never bothered me, probably because I don’t bother them. I go down on one knee and they bound up, eager tongues lapping at the palm of my hand. I grin slightly, probably more in anticipation of what is to come but at the same time I’m thinking I should get Willow a puppy…yeah, something cute and fluffy, and I can spoil the hell out of it when she’s not looking.

Tara wiped the smile from her face as soon as she had left the dogs sitting on their hind quarters, swishing their tails back and forth across the grass as though they expected her to return for them. She was determined that her imagined future of hugs and puppies was going to come true. Dying a violent and bloody death trying to rescue Willow was not how this was going to end.

She moved swiftly from the manicured lawn onto terracotta tiles but the scent of roses remained the same. There was the house looming a head of her, she was close now and her state of vigilance reflected this. Her eyes darted everywhere, watching in advance for the one mistake that could end everything instantly. Tara dashed across a small courtyard before disappearing into the shadows of a covered walkway. She heard footsteps rounding the corner ahead of her. With nowhere to go, she put the weight of her shotgun to good use, smashing its butt into the face of a guard as he rounded the corner in front of her. He collapsed instantly with blood spurting from a smashed nose. She dragged and shoved him beneath a stone seat, hoping his unconscious body would remain undiscovered for the time it took to complete her work…which she hoped would not be long.

Tara moved ahead, feeling a light sheen of sweat begin to develop on her forehead. A door ahead clicked, as though someone had unlocked it with a swipe card and she moved into the shadow of a garden statute moments before the door opened and a black-suited figure moved directly across her path. He heard nothing as she slipped behind him and ducked inside the door before it closed and locked itself.

Even as the door slid shut behind her, shutting her inside the Talbot residence, Tara was moving. She remained wary as she moved ahead through the lair of her enemy even though the halls seemed cold and empty.

Tara had been in the house for less than a minute when she heard the rap of high heels on marble tiles and quickly folded herself into the nearest cover, a shadowy alcove created by a grandfather clock. The heels sounded closer, strong steps, each one ringing out the sound of power and merciless intent. Tara smelt the woman before she had even laid eyes on her. It was a thick, heavy, cloying scent that wafted through the air and assaulted her nostrils. She felt herself transported back in time eight years to that hospital bed with Glory standing over her broken and helpless body, forced to listen to her when all she really wanted to do was reach out and wrap her mits around the woman’s porcelain neck. Now, eight years later, she was almost as close again. She wasn’t surprised that they would come so close to each other moments into her mission, she had half been expecting Glory to be standing waiting for her when she entered the house, laying out the welcome mat.

From her concealment, Tara saw a flash of red hair, curly and brassy where Willow’s was natural and straight. She found her fingers curl unconsciously around the grip of one of her Berettas and before she knew exactly what she was doing, she had drawn it and was staring down the sights at Glory’s head. While the encounter seemed to take an eternity to play out, it reality it was a mere split second. Even so, Tara had time to agonise over her target, to debate whether or not to pull the trigger. If she did, Glory, scourge of Basin City, would be dead but every goon in the mansion would be up in arms. Tommy Talbot would kill Willow and Dawn the moment he found out his mother had been shot dead and her rescue mission would be over before it began. Tara chose to spare her...for now. As she reholstered her weapon, feeling a sensation akin to pain as she did so, her target disappeared through a door.

Tara pressed herself against the wall behind her and let out a slow breath, trying to dispel the tension that had built up in her body. She had a job to do. With satisfying images of a single bullet ploughing into the back of Glory’s head playing through her mind, Tara moved on quickly and quietly. Her booted feet barely made a sound on the marble tiles as she moved from shadow to shadow through the ground floor of Glory Talbot’s house. She found her first destination easily, kitchens in these places were always tucked away at the back of the ground floor.

The kitchen was oddly deserted as Tara moved amongst the ranks of stainless steel appliances. She remained tense and moved quickly as someone could pop in for a snack at any time. Her boots barely sounded on the tiles beneath them as she moved behind a stack of crockery and placed her bag down. Tara knelt and slowly opened the zip on the bag of tricks in front of her. She felt like licking her lips in anticipation as she lifted the first one out.

After that she worked quickly, efficiently. She was in the kitchen for a mere thirty seconds before moving onto her next destination. After twenty minutes of moving stealthily throughout the lower level of the Talbot home, Tara’s calling cards were safely stowed and she turned her attention to the matter that had not left her mind throughout the whole process. This was as much a rescue mission as it was about vengeance. As Tara moved like a hungry wolf through the shadows, she knew she had to remember that lest the vengeance overwhelm her.

******

Although the shackles that had held her arms above her head in a painful, unnatural position had been removed minutes earlier, Willow’s shoulders felt as though they were dislocated. She sat in an awkward heap on the floor of the tiny room which was her cell, her captors having left her alone for a few moments at least. Even with all her limbs free, Willow knew there was no chance of escape. Although left switched on, the light shone ineffectually and gave her skin a sick glow that matched the way she felt inwardly. It also illuminated the solid walls that surrounded her, broken only by the dark wooden door with its heavy, and most certainly locked, handle. She briefly contemplated banging her fists on its surface in a blind rage while cursing her captors like the cowardly motherfuckers they were. While it would accomplish nothing, at least it was something to do.

Instead she sat in misery, her mid dwelling on her upcoming performance. Willow danced…she was good at it, and despite the leering gazes directed at her near-nude body, she enjoyed it. Being intelligent was one thing, but being able to win over an entire crowd simply by the way you moved your body was another. All too often she had stared out into the crowd as she moved across the stage and seen the rapt faces staring back, faces of men who could think about nothing except the beautiful woman they were watching. Her eyelids slid shut as the lock rattled, she knew what she had to do…although the thought of doing it made her blood run cold. Willow was shivering when she opened her eyes once more. The door slammed open and eager hands reached for her body, dragging her to what would no doubt be the performance of her life.

Even as she was half-dragged through a featureless maze of corridors Willow attempted to compose herself into something approaching the state of mind that she usually held before dancing. She had immense difficulty finding the sensual, exuberant state of mind needed due to her fear and chilled, cramped limbs. Her legs did not want to walk let alone dance and her fragile arms ached with each tug. Dragged through yet another door, Willow had to squint as she met bright lights.

“Your stage awaits little whore,” one of her captors propelled her forward with a firm hand.

Willow stumbled, barely avoiding a humiliating fall to her hands and knees. As her eyes adjusted to the sudden fury of light, shapes of men standing around her and hemming her in gradually formed. She blinked a few times and realised that it was not only the lights, but the very walls themselves that dazzled her senses. Light reflected off period-style gilt decorations, framing large friezes showing images from another era, half a world away. It was a ballroom no doubt, a beautiful venue and yet Willow felt far from comforted.

Cruel faces stared at her, some merely outlines beneath the lights and others she could see clearly with their leering, eager expressions that made her sick to her stomach. Briefly she contemplated lashing out but there were a dozen men, and more, in the room. She was prodded forward through the crowd, a prize for all to ogle. The throng parted and Willow once again had to lay eyes upon that pitiful specimen of a man, Tommy Talbot.

Talbot wore an exceptionally self-satisfied smile as he stood at the head of his goons. Willow noticed his white-knuckled grip on his walking stick indicating just how much effort it required for him to stand upright for any period of time. She had to resist the urge to lunge forward and swipe it out from beneath his weight to send his bony carcass crashing to the floor. Instead, she had to stand helplessly and bear the humiliating scrutiny of Tommy and his men.

“I hope you’re ready to dance, Willow,” he began, a slight cackle following his words, “My men and I have high expectations for what we hope will be a very revealing show.”

Willow felt more than a little clammy, her stomach continuing to do somersaults but she kept her chin high when most in her situation would have long since been reduced to quivering wrecks.

“I don’t do nudity you fucking pig,” Willow replied in a resolute voice.

A cacophony of boos and hisses erupted, Tommy’s cackle sounded above it all. Willow knew it was a futile gesture but it had to be said anyway.

“I’m sure when the time comes we won’t have any trouble ripping that flimsy, little garment you’re wearing off your body,” Tommy eyed her up greedily, “It will warm you up for the games I have planned for you later this evening. I don’t want you going all shy on me when I finally get you alone. I have been waiting for you for eight years after all.”

Willow was dead scared and yet she felt a sudden surge of anger that momentarily pushed fear aside. Her lips curled into a snarl as she surged forward before her minders could stop her to stand nose to nose with the loathsome toad known as Tommy Talbot. Her expression was one of disgust and contempt.

“If you make the mistake of getting your pecker out anywhere near me, I’ll rip your balls off!” Willow hissed, “Whether it’s with my hands or my teeth!”

She the spat in his face, watching her own spittle hit him between the eyes and run down his nose. His spindly fingers shot out and wrapped themselves around her neck. Willow expected to wrench away easily but he held her with the uncanny strength of a madman, nails digging into her flesh.

“I’m going to be the only one doing any ripping of flesh, Willow,” he replied, his voice straining with effort, “Now dance, before I decide to skip this part and go straight to dessert!”

He released her with a slight shove backwards, the back of her calves hit the low stage and she did finally fall. However, even as she lay sprawled on her backside she had the satisfaction of watching as Tommy’s goons rushed to support their boss into a waiting chair. The exertion had proved too much for him as his weak little legs gave out.

Someone at the back of the room turned on a sound system. Loud, clear music came through with an insistent, rhythmic beat that sounded like a porno without the images.

“Dance for us Willow, we’re all waiting,” Tommy lent forward eagerly in his chair.

Willow awkwardly clambered to her feet and faced the wall behind her with her back to the crowd. Desperately, in the last few moments she had before the dance became unavoidable, she looked for an avenue of escape. The stage had wings and a curtain but it was blocked by two men on one side and a single, but exceptionally large man on the right. All stood with their arms crossed over their chests.

“We’re waiting, chica,” the one on the right spoke to reveal herself as a woman, “Give me a little taste of the sugar you give Maclay.”

Willow stared at the butch woman for a few moments, the familiarity in the way Tara’s name rolled off her tongue indicated that she probably knew her. She shuddered to think where from. She had to draw her gaze away after those few moments, it was almost as bad as looking into Tommy’s eyes…worse, because there was something that this woman knew and she was enjoying the fact that she knew it. When Willow cast another quick glance in her direction she licked her lips in a languorous manner that made her blood run cold.

******

Tara pressed her shoulder against the door in front of her and, with one last glance over her shoulder to confirm the coast was clear behind her, she pressed her ear against the cold wood. Her fingers moved to the handle and gripped it tightly. She heard the muffled, angry voices and knew there were at least two men on the other side. She felt the bulge of her shotgun inside her coat and her Berettas at the small of her back. While she itched for them to be kicking in her hands she knew that the situation called for something a little quieter.

“I’m not missing this fucking show!” someone whined as though he was a small boy denied access to an X-rated movie, “If Talbot thinks I’m staying here while the fun goes down...”

“What you gonna do about it?” Another sneered without sympathy in his voice, “You gonna go tell Mr Talbot that you’re not happy with his orders? You never know, he’s in a good mood so he might not rip you a new set of lips across your neck.”

“How the hell is the girl gonna get out of there anyway? She doesn’t need a guard. Little whore is probably sitting in there crying over her missing finger!”

Tara heard her teeth grind audibly. If anyone was going to rip new sets of lips it was going to be her.

“Boss isn’t worried about her getting’ out, it’s that bitch Maclay you better be on the look out for, now stay put!” the voice said with an air of finality just on the other side of the door.

Tara felt pressure on the handle beneath her fingertips as it began to open from the other side. Without a moment’s hesitation she jammed her own hand down on the handle and slammed it inwards. There was a startled grunt from the other side and the sound of someone falling backwards. Tara moved quickly through the door and straight in the direction she had heard the second man’s voice. He had watched startled as the door flew in on his buddy before meeting Tara’s fist with his face. He immediately tried to duck beneath her roundhouse swing but she caught him high on the temple and he went crashing against the wall beside him.

The first goon was already rising to his feet after the door had caught him on the forehead. Tara was on him before he could rise completely, a swift elbow to the face snapped his head back and a spinning kick sent him back to the ground. Tara planted her foot hard on his neck and heard a sickening crunch as it snapped.

Before she had time to swing around to finish the other guy off, an arm went around her neck and he threw her against the wall. Tara’s face smashed into the glass of a picture frame and she felt a sharp stab on her cheek. With his body weight thrown against her, the goon held her against the wall. One hand gripped a fistful of her hair savagely.

“Boss is gonna give me a private show of my own for this!” he squeaked excitedly, no doubt already licking his lips in anticipation, “You’re not even that tough Maclay…just another girl, although a fucking hot one at that…”

Tara could feel and smell his greasy breath on the back of her neck, his breath reeked of olives and pasta sauce. She felt his lips close on her ear and squeezed her eyes shut fiercely as he clamped down on it hard with his teeth. With one hand on her hair, keeping her face jammed against the broken glass, he moved the other beneath her jacket. As he pawed at her flesh Tara felt his grip slacken and she smirked. He should have plugged her straight away.

“Fucking little whore aren’t cha,” his foul breath came in pants, “Gonna have me my own private show…”

Tara wrenched herself sideways, feeling the glass tear across her cheek as she did so, and twisted out of his slack grip. She came face to face with the scumbag and closed her fist around the bulge in his pants, jerking it with all the force she could muster as her fingers closed around his neck. She squeezed his windpipe between her fingers and thumb.

“Open that door for me!” she growled, “Or I’ll rip your tiny little dick off!”

“Okay, okay,” he stammered in a high pitched voice, trying not to move within her grip.

Tara slammed him against the electronic key pad beside the door, still retaining her hold on his balls. He squealed as his tender organ was yanked savagely once again. With trembling fingers, he punched in the numbers and the door clicked open.

“Thank you,” Tara whispered sweetly, retaining her hold on him as she peered into the dark room revealed behind the door.

Although she could make out little at first, she eventually saw the outline of a small figure crouched against the far wall. A pale face stared out at her and it was with a mixture of relief and regret that she saw just one girl in the room…Dawn. As the light flooded the little room, Tara saw the girl was naked and she had both her hands tucked beneath her armpits. Her face was streaked with tears.

“Hey…Dawn,” Tara whispered gently, “I need you to come up out of there now okay?”

The terrified girl shook her head at first but made to get up slowly, hugging her arms around herself. As she moved out into the hallway, Tara thrust the goon she held into the room with such force that he was thrown headfirst into the opposite wall. He collapsed into a pathetic heap without a sound and Tara shut the door, locking him inside the very cell he had been assigned to guard.

Tara turned her attention to the trembling girl in front of her. In a few seconds she had whipped the jacket from her own shoulders and thrown it around the girl. Dawn clutched the garment tightly about her and it was then that Tara saw the little finger of her right hand was missing, the stump was a ruined and bloody mess of broken bone and flesh. The young woman quickly tucked the hand back beneath her arm when she saw Tara staring.

Without a second thought, Tara folded Dawn into her arms, wrapping them around her like a protective cocoon despite their need to get moving and find Willow. She felt Dawn shudder and as her face was buried in Tara’s shoulder, muffled sobs emerged. Tara let her cry for a few moments, awkwardly smoothing her matted hair back.

“Dawn, did you see where they took Willow?” Tara asked, the gentle tone of her voice failing to mask her urgency.

The felt Dawn shake her head quickly as she continued sobbing. Tara pushed the girl away and held her at arms length, keeping a firm grip on her shoulders in reassurance. Dawn choked back more tears but managed to stop beneath Tara’s gaze.

“You have to pull yourself together…for both of us, and Willow,” Tara had to resist the urge to shake the girl back to her senses, “We have to find her before something happens to her…can you help me do that?”

Dawn nodded, dashing her good hand across her nose, “Yeah, but I can’t help…I don’t know where they took her. She wouldn’t dance for them…she refused…until they did this.”

Dawn held up her hand with the missing finger and studied it as though it no longer hurt. She glanced back up at Tara whose lips were pursed tightly together.

“Tommy’s making Willow dance?” Tara asked and received a quick nod in reply, she furrowed her brow, “A large space then…unless he wants her to dance just for him…”

“No,” Dawn replied quickly, “She’s dancing for all of them…the guys in suits, please Tara, we have to find her…they could be hurting her!”

“We’ll find her before they have a chance!” Tara replied as though it were a promise to Dawn, herself and Willow…wherever she was.

“I’m coming with you?” Dawn asked urgently, fearing more than anything that Tara would leave her alone again.

Tara turned to look at Dawn, her pale face almost shining in the poor light and she nodded firmly in reassurance, “Yeah kid, you’d be as safe with me as you’d be anywhere else in this place…but I have to ask you to do exactly as I say, keep quiet and don’t try anything stupid.”

“Willow’s my friend!” Dawn said bravely.

“Well, don’t go shooting unless I say so,” Tara whipped a small pistol from her boot and passed it across to Dawn, “And I’m going to need you to turn out the lights when I give the signal.”

Dawn held the weapon gingerly in her hand and furrowed her brow, “We won’t be able to see anything.”

“Neither will they…and we’ll be expecting it,” Tara replied calmly, arching a single eyebrow at the expression on Dawn’s face, “Or have you got a better plan?”

“Well, no,” Dawn replied, turning her attention to fastening up the coat Tara had given her, “But we’ve got to have something better than charging in there and turning off the lights!”

“Dawn, what did I say earlier?” Tara asked testily.

“Err, do as you say, keep quiet and…” Dawn began sheepishly.

“Exactly!” Tara interrupted, “We’re moving out, stay close!”

I desperately want to wrap the poor kid up in cotton wool and bundle her away somewhere safe while this business goes down but I know I can’t afford to do that…especially with the surprises I’ve got in store for later. She’s right though, my plan stinks and it has more holes in it than fuckin’ swiss cheese. I check both my cannons and the shotgun which is tucked beneath my webbing, it’s nestled against my back and I feel it dig into my flesh reassuringly. I’ve got a few cards to play, I can only hope my hand is good enough…

*******

“Can you hear the music?” Dawn whispered.

Tara cocked her head and nodded in response to Dawn’s question. It was echoing through the walls, distant but close by. She had both Berettas in her hands as she inched forward cautiously. The sound led them to a small door, almost hidden which Tara hoped was a side entrance of sorts. She heard a sharp intake of breath from Dawn behind her as she placed her hand on the door handle and pushed it inwards. No alarms sounded, no goons rushed to meet them with raised weapons. Both women could now distinctly hear the throbbing, sexual beat that emanated from somewhere inside. Added to this, were men’s voices raised in raucous shouts. While most were fused into an undecipherable cacophony, a few vulgar comments could be made out.

Dawn found herself rushing to keep up with Tara as the ex-cop practically ran into the darkened room behind the door. She glanced around, noting a switchboard to one side which was no doubt the lighting system for the room beyond. They emerged in a sort of backstage area with light streaming up ahead from the stage itself. She only caught partial glimpses of the person on the stage, but she knew in an instant that it was her friend Willow. Instinctively, she reached out a hand to restrain Tara and felt the older woman’s muscles tense beneath her touch.

Tara was aware of nothing besides the fact that she could see Willow…only flashes of her, white skin and red hair whirling. With the realisation that she was being forced to dance, Tara felt a white hot rage surge in her. Despite the fact that she could see very little of what she was up against besides the two men blocking her path to Willow, she charged forward, oblivious to Dawn’s restraining hand as it fell from her shoulder. In one swift movement, the hilt of a knife rested in her palm and in another she brought it up to slice swiftly across the neck of the one standing nearest her. There was a brief spray of warm blood as he crumpled to the floor. His partner turned to face the movement he saw from the corner of his eye, just in time to see Tara’s knife plunge into his chest. She buried it up to the hilt and was staring right into his surprised, bulging eyes as blood entered his lungs and bubbled from his lips. He staggered once and clutched at the stage curtain for support. It tore beneath his bulk and both he and the curtain went fell out on the stage. He lay wrapped in his death shroud even as Tara stepped over his body, drawing both Berettas and brining them immediately to bear on the man whom she knew would be sitting directly in front of the stage.

“Tommy Talbot, you slimy little fuck,” she spat, aiming for his pale forehead.

Tara did not waver an inch even as every other weapon in the room was drawn in unison…the only difference being that they were all pointed towards her. It was her two against twenty, but Tara liked those odds just fine.

The music continued to sound in the background, although Willow was no longer dancing. Her attention was focused on her lover standing to the left of the stage. A look of overwhelming relief mingled with absolute horror was fixed on the redhead’s face. While it was the salvation she had been constantly dreaming throughout her day of horror…now that Tara was here she wished more than anything that she had not risked certain death coming into this snake pit. Although Tara did not take her eyes off Tommy, Willow felt the depth of Tara’s attention as from the corner of her eyes she tried to determine if she had been hurt, to reassure her despite the situation she had now put them both in.

Tommy remained sitting in his chair, the look of immediate surprise on his face had not been replaced, it had merely morphed slightly into one of pleasant surprise. He pursed his hands together in front of him as a man praising someone for his good fortune.

“Well, well, if it isn’t the former detective Tara Maclay…you haven’t changed since the last time I saw you, when I was sprawled in agony on that rain soaked street after you shattered both my knees completely…bitch!” Tommy spat, “Prison was less than you deserved!”

“You’re the bitch that should have gone to prison,” Tara replied coolly, her head cleared enough for her to take stock of the situation.

She regretted charging in like an angry fool but there was little she could do about it now, she was up against it no doubt about that. While she kept her gaze fixed on Talbot, she surveyed the room. She saw the small sea of suit-clad shapes, the metal of their gun barrels pointing in her direction. They were all in a state of dishevelment, ties loose and shirts coming undone as they had moments ago been revealing in their wanton lust. They were a bunch of dangerous, pissed off men and anyone of them could have a jumpy trigger finger.

Tara also knew Willow was just behind her…and that was bad. If the situation deteriorated, which seemed inevitable, there was no way she could protect the kid save throwing herself in front of a hail of bullets. Someone had to break…or take a chance.

What happened next threw the ex-cop completely…

“Speaking of prisons…I think you’ll enjoy meeting up with one of your old friends, someone I believe you know very well indeed,” Tommy threw out one arm in the direction of stage right, as though he were introducing a new character to a play.

“Hello, chica, I miss your sweet cheeks so very much,” a deep voice rumbled from the stage wing, a figure emerged from the shadows in a single, confident stride.

An immediate change came over Tara. Her shoulders tensed and the Berettas in her hand trembled. Both Dawn and Willow felt shivers run down their spines as they saw the solid rock in the plan start to crumble at just the sound of a voice.

I feel everything magnified a thousand fold. The coat of cold sweat that covers my body, the sting of the gash on my cheek from where that sonofabitch rammed my face into a mirror and the blood caking on my face. Willow whispers my name urgently but it just makes things worse. The shakes start in my gut, a pit of queasy fear. Above the trembling barrels of my Berettas, I see Tommy’s ugly mug. He’s laughing at me but my fingers are too stiff to jerk a trigger and wipe the smug smile off his face. It’s the same frozen fear that I felt eight years ago…my first night in prison when that fuckin’ dyke jumped me. I can’t see her…but I know she’s there…she’s staring at me with those piggy little eyes of hers…all six foot, two hundred and fifty pounds of her…

“Baby Dedara,” Tara growled through gritted teeth.


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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby JustSkipIt » Thu Jan 25, 2007 3:36 pm

I'll dibs it but who knows when I'll get fb posted...

ETA: I guess today.

Wow, what a brutal and horrifying chapter. I mean that in the best possible way. Your descriptions of Tara's movements are incredibly fluid and natural. She seems totally made for this type of killing and mayhem. I mean she's killed what 6 men since she entered the grounds? And most of them without a sound? She truly has no conscious about those things does she? I'm not saying that she should; these are thoroughly bad people but it's strange to read of this Tara. Also very impressive that she retained all this physical agility and strength in prison for 8? years.

The interactions between Tara and Dawn were excellent. Dawn wasn't a complete whimpering idiot even though it may have been excused in this case and she was able to listen to Tara who reasoned that she had to take Dawn with her.

Likewise the interactions between Willow and Tommy. You portrayed Willow's inner strength but her abject humiliation and helplessness too. The portrait of the room full of men is terrifying completely. My mind can only imagine what they plan and it's not pretty.

Tara's arrival is of course impressive but I'm of course concerned now about BD. The next chapter's title was impressive to me but I can't remember it now.

Wow and also wow if I hadn't said that before.

Also, I'm just wondering: given the incredible breadth of your writing, what are you planning next?
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby PancakesinBellies » Thu Jan 25, 2007 3:51 pm

Amber have no words...
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby diamondforever » Thu Jan 25, 2007 5:02 pm

If you wanted to make my insides crawl, you've done it. Not that it's a bad thing -- I love your writing, and this is completely necessary. Sad to hear that we're near the end, but I suppose it was inevitable. Great job with this chapter. You're playing me like a violin!
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby Willowtree252 » Thu Jan 25, 2007 6:15 pm

:pinky :wtf boy that sure came out of left field :kdevil
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby dlline » Thu Jan 25, 2007 9:11 pm

Alcy,

You made me scream. I scared the the hell out of the entire house, but you made me scream. I'm hanging here now.....

Like the others, this update is so visceral. I could smell the roses and Glory's scent, even though I was disappointed that Tara didn't plug her right then and there.

And this:
I’m thinking I should get Willow a puppy…yeah, something cute and fluffy, and I can spoil the hell out of it when she’s not looking.

OMFG! Amid the broken necks, smashed facial features, and eviscerations, Tara wants to get Willow a puppy. I loved it.

I can't wait for the end, although I don't want it to end. Your work is inspiring. I've actually started writing again, thanks to you. Keep up the good work.

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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby watty » Sun Jan 28, 2007 6:01 am

Chapter 13 – “A Party with Friends.”

With friend like these ...

The way Tara worked was breath-taking. She was a one person killing machine, coiled for action, single-minded in her fury. But of course
this was as much a rescue mission as it was about vengeance.

Even the guard dogs saw that and backed down. She was almost clinical in her dispatch of the guards, and laying the traps (what's up with those?). The moment with Glory in the sights of her gun was significant though, I would feel how she itched to get rid of her enemy just like that. The old Tara might have done it but she had more to think about now.
Dying a violent and bloody death trying to rescue Willow was not how this was going to end.

No surprise how thoughts like these can completely focus oneself.

Aaaaand that was my last thought before getting caught up with the breath-stopping action. The cruelty of the Talbot clan was out for all to see, how Tommy still wanted Willow, how intent he was to humiliate her. Yet meanwhile Tara was rescuing poor frightened Dawn.
I desperately want to wrap the poor kid up in cotton wool and bundle her away somewhere safe while this business goes down but I know I can’t afford to do that

Yet again with Tara's single-mindedness.

Incredible tension. Enemies old and new. Stacked odds. Gonna be a mother of a ride to the end. Can't wait.
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby tarawhipped » Wed Jan 31, 2007 9:27 pm

Hiya Alcy! You know, I never read the graphic novels, and didn't get past the first ten minutes of the movie, but I just love this fic. It's so raw and gritty...you really put the reader into this chaotic world. The format you're using is great as well...the perfect amount of Tara's narration and actual action...very noirish.

I'm a pacifist, but I was seriously rooting for Tara as she killed off the Talbot goons without breaking a sweat. But the ending! Tara can't freeze up now, right? :paranoid I have tummy rumblings. Update soonish, 'k?

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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby Alcy » Fri Feb 02, 2007 8:37 pm

JustSkipIt: Sin City is brutal and horrifying…and I for one feel like writing a ‘nice’ fic next! In terms of Tara retaining her physical condition after 8 years in prison I would think that prison is the place she would want to retain every bit of her speed, strength and fighting ability…especially with the type of experience she had to go through in there. If anything, I think prison made her even meaner.
The interactions in this chapter were interesting to say the least and a real change in direction from writing simple W/T (not that W/T interaction is all that simple).
I toyed with the idea of writing the Tara/Dawn stuff differently but rather than put too much focus on that, I really just wanted to get through to the climax of the chapter and the showdown between Tara and Baby.
What am I doing next? Well, I always seem to have more ideas in my head than I have time to write but I’m enjoying developing my next fic and I think it’s going to be a lot of fun, I won’t say too much but its an AU action/adventure in the spirit of Captain Red drawing inspiration from a little story by a guy named Stoker.

Pancakesinbellies: Don’t worry if you have no words Amber, I’ve got plenty!

diamondforever: Well, I sure hope your insides don’t crawl too far away! And yeah, I always feel a little funny wrapping up a fic and Sin City is my shortest one to date, hmm…I may be wrong but it definitely has the least amount of chapters. I can’t play the violin mind you!

Dianneswillowtree: I love surprises can’t you tell!

dlline: I hope you didn’t scream too loudly, someone might have dialled 911 thinking you were in trouble!
I had to throw in puppies somewhere, I was just thinking that I haven’t written a fic where Willow and Tara have a dog…although a fluffy puppy is a little bit at odds with the tenor of Sin City! I should’ve dedicated this chapter to my puppies….Justin the Boston Terrier and Perry the Pug!
Glad to have helped you back on the writing wagon! It sure is fun (although frustrating at times!)

watty: I do kinda feel a little weird writing Tara as a one-person killing machine, you have to admit that it sits at odds with canon Tara…but that is what AU is all about and I’m glad that it does come across as a readable approximation of the characters that we know so well. In this chapter we get to see this version of Tara in her full glory, and she’s just getting warmed up for the next chapter.
I hope you enjoy the ride watty!

tarawhipped: Hi Cam, I’m kinda glad you haven’t read the novels or seen the film, this way my Sin City can be your definitive version! I’m a little wonky on using first-person narrative but people seem to be enjoying it so I’m relieved! I don’t think I’d be able to write a whole fic in that tense but its really fun to play with it and I think it is the best way to get across Tara’s POV.
I hope I haven’t put you off with so much violence! The update will come very soon I promise, although I always get tummy rumblings with final chapters…they’re so like final…y’know?
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby Guppy » Sun Feb 11, 2007 2:00 pm

excellent chapter again. Tara seems to have charged in a bit too quick. Can't wait to find out how she gets out of this one safely.
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby Artemis » Thu Feb 15, 2007 6:58 am

Eep! (This story seems to contain a lot of 'eep!' moments.) I was thinking now that Tara was well on the road to the big showdown it'd be her vs Spike, but this is something else entirely. Spike may kick arse (less so than Tara, I bet, but there's no denying he's got skill), but he's no-one to Tara, just an enemy. This is different - it looks like Tara, no matter how tough she is, actually feels fear of Dedara, and that puts her in a dangerous position. Then again, Tara's here to save Willow (and poor Dawnie as well), so it's not like she needs any more incentive to clean house - Dedara may have the psychological upper hand in one way, but I'm betting she, like Tommy (oh I can't wait for that one!) will find there's no upper limit to the amount of arse Tara can kick. In that grim Sin City kind of way I was talking about in an earlier bit of feedback, I'm so looking forward to this.
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby Alcy » Sun Mar 04, 2007 7:32 pm

Guppy: Thanks very much, given that Willow is the one who’s in danger, I don’t think that Tara could have charged in any less quickly! Although a better play would have been a good idea I think!

Artemis: Hi Chris, I think ‘Eep’ moments are great moments to have in a fic! There is definitely no denying that Spike has skill…but will Tara be the one to take him down? I’m thinking there’s someone who has more beef against him than Tara…
As tough as Tara is you’re very right, she does feel fear when it comes to her prison nemesis – for reasons more fully explained in the final chapter. There’s are quite a few arses that need kicking so it’s going to be a very grim chapter! Thanks!

Last chapter should be up in a few days, it's proving to be quite difficult to write, but last chapters always are!
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby cantbefredless » Tue Mar 06, 2007 3:53 pm

The Bitch is back, wow great little twist!!!! Cant wait for the next update..... :kgeek :kdevil
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby Alcy » Sun Mar 11, 2007 8:10 pm

cantbefredess: Yes she is back! It will make for a great showdown I promise!


Willow and Tara’s Sin City

Note: I haven’t usually paused to assign ratings to individual chapters because Sin City is NC-17 all the way. It of course follows that the final chapter will be more of the same - warnings for violence with guns, fists, knives and fire pokers, death, implied rape and mucho bad language. It’s not pretty, but I hope you all will enjoy the final chapter of this ride…


Chapter 14 – “Three Big Fat Kills.”

Suddenly the ballroom went pitch black as Dawn flipped the master light switch behind the stage without waiting for any signal from Tara. The little Lady stood trembling in the dark, wondering if she had done the right thing until she felt something heavy slam into her. She was about to scream when a hand clamped over her mouth and she felt hot breath near her ear.

“Quiet! Out the way we came in now!” it was Tara speaking in a low and urgent voice.

Dawn was making for the tiny slit of light ahead of her when the shooting started, they were blind shots fired in the spot Tara and Willow had been standing just mere seconds before. She burst through the door, almost tumbling head on into a man who had been about to enter and she barely suppressed the scream she wanted to let out. Even as she watched him level his own handgun at her, she knew she ought to fire her own first. Dawn was frozen, unable to jerk her trigger finger forward to fire the weapon in her hand. There was a small eruption from behind, the guy’s head jerked back with a single hole in his forehead and he toppled to the floor. Dawn glanced over her shoulder to see a thin plume of smoke coming from the barrel of one of Tara’s Berettas. She looked behind Tara and saw a pale Willow clutching her lover’s hand tightly.

There was no time for reunions of any sort, Tara prodded Dawn forward with the handle of the Beretta, “Straight ahead and then right, continue down the hallway and take a left into a foyer…the glass door at the end is our way outta here…stay close, it’s gonna get dark again!”

Dawn had started forward when she heard a muffled explosion which jarred the substructure of the house around them. It was immediately followed by the lights above and on the walls winking out in an instant. Tara prodded the young girl forward once again and Dawn stumbled blindly down the passage, trying to remember Tara’s directions. She slammed into several walls before emerging in the glass foyer Tara had mentioned, it was dimly lit by the glow of the city beyond the gardens. Before she could even get close enough to try the handle, there was a painfully loud bang as Tara blew the lock off with her shotgun.

The blonde ex-cop pushed past Dawn, shouldering the door open with a powerful shove of her shoulder. All three of them escaped out into the night. Tara surging forward ahead of the two girls, her shotgun raised. A goon came from the right, Tara pumped the gun once and fired, sending him crashing backwards straight into an imitation Grecian stature. White shards of marble flew out in a cloud around his body. A bullet slammed into brick inches from Tara’s head and she whirled, pumping again before dispatching the second goon before he could loose off a second shot. He went crashing through a window, shattered glass falling around him.

“The fence, both of you…keep low!” Tara hissed, pushing both Dawn and Willow forward.

Willow paused, reluctant to be separated from Tara as the blonde turned to scan for pursuers. Tara sensed Willow’s lack of movement and glanced over her shoulder with an angry scowl on her face. She saw Dawn making a cautious but swift path straight for the wall while Willow was poised on the edge of movement but held fast by her fright and concern for Tara.

******

As she made her way towards the wall, expecting a bullet in her back at any second, Dawn kept her head down like she was told. There was movement ahead and she saw a figure moving atop the wall, this time managing to lift her gun to shoot whoever it was. She was about to pepper the shape with bullets when she recognised a welcome and familiar face.

“Faith!” she gasped, reaching up for the hand that was offered.

With one strong pull, the brunette pulled her up atop the wall and Dawn scrambled up to lie flat next to Faith. She turned and saw both Willow and Tara still next to the house, her eyes opened in horror as she had expected them to be directly behind her.

“Fuck! Maclay couldn’t organise her way out of a paper bag!” Faith growled angrily, watching the two figures in the distance as they both turned towards the wall.

Faith could only watch as another figure emerged from the house while Tara’s attention was focused on Willow. A warning was on her lips as the large figure strode towards her friends. She was about to spring down from the wall when Dawn screamed once beside her and disappeared from the wall, dragged backwards by her ankles by someone unseen on the other side of the wall. Before Faith could move, she felt vice-like grips around her own ankles and she too was hauled down from her perch with an angry snarl.

******

Willow watched over her shoulder as Dawn disappeared over the wall but she did not follow. She knew she should do exactly as Tara said and get the hell out of that garden but as long as Tara stayed, she stayed. Willow wasn’t even sure why Tara had to stay behind, they had no immediate pursuers. The blonde just stood in a tense stance, watching the house as though she were waiting for something…or someone.

Tara knew she should run. She had nothing to gain by staying in the garden but she was compelled to face the one aspect of her past that she could run from no longer. If she ran again, she would always be running. The coast was still clear and she cast a quick glance over her should to discover Willow stubbornly standing right on her heels, a determined expression fixed on her face. Tara gave an exasperated grunt.

“Go! For fuck’s sake, Willow!” Tara urged with a wave of her hand, “I’ll be right behind you!”

“No!” Willow shot back, just as forcefully as Tara, “You’ll be right beside me!”

Willow’s hand shot out to latch onto Tara’s wrist and she tugged insistently in the direction of the wall. Tara tugged out of Willow’s grip with one swift jerk of her arm but her face had already softened slightly.

“You stupid girl…” Tara whispered, “I have to stay and do this.”

“What can be more important than getting the hell out of here?” Willow demanded.

Tara’s attention was focused on Willow when she heard solid footsteps on the marble tiles behind her. She spun on her heels, drawing both her Berettas as she whirled about. The barrels of her guns were levelled directly at the face of Baby Dedara who was marching towards her in a confident stride. Although the con carried no visible weapons she was rubbing her palms together in anticipation, not in the least bit disturbed by facing Tara’s Beretta’s.

Tara instantly knew why the bitch was so confident and her guts turned to stone. Keeping her guns on Dedara she glanced over her shoulder just as she heard a strangled gasp from Willow. Even as she swung one Beretta around to face Willow’s attackers, black suits swarmed the redhead’s small frame, manhandling her quickly into submission despite her valiant struggles. In a few seconds she was caught in a headlock with a pistol pressed firmly against her temple. Tara was standing with one gun trained on Dedara’s forehead and another in the general direction of the thugs bunched around Willow. It was impossible to keep an eye on both directions at once.

Although the situation was decidedly not in her favour, Tara remained composed. She shifted her gaze between her targets and kept up a reassuring façade for Willow’s sake.

“Us ex-cons can see well in the dark eh, chica?” Baby stopped a few metres away from Tara and commenced flexing her knuckles with great enthusiasm.

“Tell those goons over there to let the girl go,” Tara was straight to business, “Or I’ll drill a hole straight through your forehead…it’s a pretty big target so I won’t miss.”

Baby laughed, “You always were a pretty funny lady, Maclay,” she then inclined her head slightly in Willow’s direction, “Your girl’s pretty…would be a shame to blow the side of her head apart, I don’t think she’d look so pretty with half her face missing, no?”

It was a stalemate. Tara knew she could blow Baby a new air hole and possibly even plug the guy holding Willow and one of his buddies, she also knew that as she squeezed off a fourth shot, bullets would slam into either her own body or Willow’s, probably both.

Willow kept up her struggle against the thug holding her but his trunk like arm held fast around her neck. With it struggle it grew tighter to the point where she could barely breath. The barrel of his gun felt as though it were breaking the skin at her temple. Although she was hardly an expert in such situations, Willow could clearly see that Tara had very few options, all of which would end up messy.

“This isn’t going to get us anywhere,” Baby grunted impatiently, “What you say you get rid of those cannons, just you and me Maclay, just like the old days.”

“Yeah, just like the old days,” Tara replied sardonically, “Just you and a gang of thugs to back you up if something goes wrong.”

“You always were a spoil sport…I promise okay, is that enough for you?”

“I kick your arse and Willow and I are out of here?” Tara asked warily.

“On my honour,” Baby placed her fist against her heart.

Tara arched an eyebrow as though disputing the essence of that statement. She remained motionless in her same position for some moments with one weapon pointed unwaveringly at Baby’s head.

Willow’s attention was riveted on Tara’s body as she expected the blonde to move at any second and she knew she would have to be prepared to move as well. When Tara finally did move it was slow and deliberate. She slowly raised both hands and flipped her Berettas so the barrels were facing her palms. She then dropped the guns to the ground and kept her hands in the air. Willow’s felt her heart thud against her chest and hoped to god that Tara knew what she was doing as she stood unarmed in the midst of a gang of ruthless thugs. She heard her captors murmur in anticipation before roughly dragging her further away in order to give the two women more space.

“We’re on, puta!” Baby slapped her hands together excitedly before taking up a loose fighting stance with her huge mits out in front.

Tara’s body remained still in the face of Baby’s posturing, an expression born of boredom and contempt displayed plainly on her face.

Dedara is dancing around like a prize-fighter in the ring. It sickens me but that’s not the worst of it…it’s the fact that I know it’s not all posturing. She’s built like the bull dyke she is, six foot, two hundred and fifty pounds of muscle. I know from experience that trying to drop her is like trying to drop an elephant with an air rifle. I’m aware of Willow looking on and a part of me wishes they would take her away because I know that it would destroy her to see Dedara beat me to a pulp. That’s not something I’m especially keen to see happen either…but I can’t rule it out. I remember all too clearly what happened the first time she caught me alone and unprepared eight years ago. I remember how much it bloody hurt, both physically and mentally. There’s nothing more degrading, nothing that leaves so big a scar as having as loathsome and cruel an individual as Baby lay their hands on you…it makes me sick to look at her now…

For all Baby’s size, she moved like lightning. Her first right-handed jab shot out straight at Tara’s temple like a piston with a follow up blow from the left swinging around to catch her as she tried to duck. Tara just managed to weave to one side as she felt steel-like knuckles graze the side of the head and then ducked low to miss the second swing.

From that moment the fight was on, with the two women moving across Glory Talbot’s lawn at a frenetic pace that did not appear to let up for a moment. Baby relied mostly on her brute power as she sent crushing blows towards Tara’s face and body, any one of which would have sent Tara reeling.

In the face of Baby’s brutal attacks, Tara had to reply on her speed and the hope that eventually Baby would tire. The con was a large woman with dense muscle packed onto her frame. It gave her brute power but at the same time sapped her staying power. Tara was lithe and fit which of course meant she could tough it out for longer. Staying power combined with her hatred meant she could tough it out as long as it took to bring the bitch down.

She ducked beneath another of Baby’s right punches; it missed her by a mile. Too late Tara realised that it had been a feint with the sole aim of putting her directly into the path of her left. The meaty fist crashed into Tara’s jaw and sent her spinning sideways, senses disappearing into blackness. She came to with blades of grass pressed against her cheek and the smell of earth and cut grass filling her nostrils. Her limbs felt oddly disconnected from her body as she struggled to make them work. Tara planted both palms in the dirt and dragged herself upwards. Despite the ringing in her ears and persistent double vision that gave her four hands, Tara knew she had mere seconds before Baby pressed home her advantage.

Tara rolled onto her back just as a heavy boot thudded into the earth where her body had lain. Her double vision led to the awful nightmare of two Baby Dedara’s standing over her with their arms drawn back, about to strike again.

“Hasta la vista, chica,” Baby grunted as she let loose on the seemingly helpless woman beneath her.

At the moment the fists came crashing down, the two merged into one and Tara lifted her own hands to catch the grapefruit sized hunk of flesh and bone before it could pound into her face. She stopped the punch cold and lifted her leg to ram her foot forward into Baby’s hefty gut and drive the wind right out of her. Baby fell backwards along with her fist.

“Cheese, Dedara,” Tara sneered at Baby’s clichéd comment as she sprang to her feet, her own banter disguising her inability to stand properly, “You know it’ll take more than one of your bitch slaps to keep me down!”

Angered by Tara’s taunts, Baby unleashed a growl from the back of her throat and threw her bulk forward. Tara was reminded of a charging bull, complete with bared tusks, as Baby came crashing towards her. She had all the time in the world to avoid Baby’s charge, diving easily beneath her outstretched arms and spinning to face her broad back. Baby then turned into Tara’s fists before she had time to straighten out. Tara unleashed a right, left, uppercut combo which snapped Baby’s head from side to side and then jerked her chin backwards sharply. She then brought her knee up into Baby’s chin before she could even shake off the last blow. Each blow struck Baby’s flesh with a satisfying crack. The big woman stumbled backwards beneath Tara’s furious blows, shoulders sagging. As Baby stood, half-hunched, Tara brought her leg in a sweeping roundhouse kick aimed at her midsection. Baby saw the kick coming and, far from finished, she twisted slightly to catch Tara’s leg in her form grip. She then used the leg as leverage to lift and hurl Tara through the air like a log of wood.

Tara spun several times before she crashed into the ground once again. Although dazed, she quickly sprang to her feet and was ready to meet Baby as she charged once more. Baby approached more cautiously, resorting once again to her fists rather than using her whole body weight. Tara was forced to concentrate for all she was worth, watching each blow, judging the timing and staying wary of the feint. She managed to sneak in several blows of her own to Baby’s head and gut although none appeared to have much of an effect.

“Slowing down, Maclay,” Baby taunted as Tara danced away from her latest punch, the two women faced each other out of arms reach.

“Not in the slightest,” Tara hissed in reply, trying to keep the exhaustion from sounding too clearly in her voice, “Why, are you?”

“Maldita puta!” Baby spat a bloody gob onto the ground in front of her, “Baby won’t slow down until she’s finished you off good and proper…should’ve done it eight years ago.”

Baby bounced lightly on her feet, flexed her neck from side to side and threw a couple of air punches to prove that she still had more than enough left to cause Tara considerable grief.

“You’re a fucking pussy,” Tara replied contemptuously, lightly stepping in a semi-circle around Baby, forcing the other woman to keep moving to face her, “You didn’t have the balls to do it then, you wouldn’t have even dared touch me if it hadn’t been for your posse backing you up. You couldn’t lift a finger to wipe your arse without them.”

Tara laughed as Baby came at her once again in the heat of anger, missing by a mile with her badly timed swings. She was content to duck and dance around Baby as she swung and tired herself without so much as managing to hit a hair on her arm.

“Let’s not forget why you took a shine to me in the first place,” Tara commented, planting a few of her own punches on Baby’s face, feeling the satisfying crunch as he fingers pounded Baby’s flesh back against her skull, “Your Mommy ordered you to take care of me didn’t she? Taking orders, that’s all you do. Glory Talbot owns you, Baby.”

“Eh, Maclay, you gettin’ on my nerves, want me to tell your little whore over there about our first night together in the joint…maybe we could swap bed stories eh?” Baby paused and glanced over to where Willow was being held to direct her next words to her, “She didn’t tell you did she Willow? She didn’t tell you that Baby is one mother-fucking hot lover!”

Willow had felt her fists clench instinctively with each sound of flesh striking flesh, each blow that Tara took felt as though it had been delivered to her own body. The latest blow sent her reeling more than any other…and it had been mere words. Across the short distance that separated then, she watched the red flush of exhaustion drain from Tara’s cheeks to be replaced by the while pallor of terror. A lump was jammed in her throat as Tara turned to look at her with those blue eyes of hers shining with unshed tears. Willow stood, frozen in place, the lump threatening to choke her as she tried to process the myriad of feelings running through her mind, the thousand and one thoughts that she could not express all at once. Willow herself was scared, cold and hurt but her gut ached most of all for Tara.

Her eyes were riveted on her blonde lover and she had never seen her appear so vulnerable despite her leather clad thighs, ripped biceps and bloody clothing. Willow knew she had to make it to Tara’s side and protect her from Baby Dedara. She turned her attention to the other woman, a gloating, self-satisfied expression on her face that made Willow clench her fists and strain against her captors.

Tara was somewhere else…

It shouldn’t happen like this, not now, but I’m drawn back to that night. My first night in hell, I was already on laundry detail. It was stinking hot, steam filled the air and the sweat ran in rivers down my body, soaking my clothes to my skin. I didn’t even know what hit me really, but there were five of them and they caught me by surprise. I was thrown forward against the metal table, face first into the dirty laundry…

With Tara’s attention drawn away from the fight at hand and buried within her own private terror, Baby caught her with a powerful right hook on the jaw. Tara’s head snapped sideways and she crashed to the ground. Once again she tried to struggle to her feet but only got as far as her hands and knees before one of Baby’s steel caps thudded into her gut. Tara was thrown onto her back by the force of the kick. She crumpled as Baby continued to boot her, a look of malice and determination creasing her face.

Willow watched forced to watch in horror. Despite the fact that it was already clear Tara would not be leaping to her feet in a hurry, Baby planted one foot on either side of her body, grabbed the front of her shirt to lift her up from the ground and being laying into her with repeated jabs to the face. After several blows she threw Tara back to the ground and wiped her hands.

“Eh boys, show’s over,” Baby turned her head and called out to the men who held Willow, she waved them towards the house, “Better take the girl inside, Mr Talbot will be waiting for her…I’ll finish up out here.’

Focused solely on Tara’s motionless body, Willow was blinded to everything else that was going on around her. The sight of Tara’s bloody face filled her vision and she wanted nothing more than to move forward. When hands tightened even further on her already bruised arms and attempted to drag her backwards, away from Tara, Willow snapped out of her terrified trance. She unleashed a sudden and violent struggle against the arms that held her, twisting every which way as she tried to extract herself all the while calling out desperately for Tara.

“Tara!” Willow yelled as she kicked out with her legs, trying to catch one of her attackers, “Tara! Lemme go you big brutes!”

Willow struggled so furiously that she managed to escape their clutches altogether. However, she barely managed to break into a run before they tackled her and dragged her to her feet, still lashing out.

“You sack of shit!” Willow yelled in Baby’s direction, “Hot lover my arse…you’re a coward! A great big coward!”

One of the ‘big brutes’ grunted in annoyance and reached down to fumble for the holster at his waist. In one swift movement he drew his pistol and brought it crashing down on the side of his captive’s head. The struggling ceased immediately and she sagged like limp sack of potatoes. He grunted once more, obviously pleased to have shut her up, and with very little effort tossed her over his shoulder. The pair moved inside with their unconscious prize, leaving Baby to put an end to the bloody and broken woman at her feet.

******

Dragged unceremoniously from her perch on the wall Faith was then dumped on the ground. Indignant that she could have succumbed to such treatment she bolted to her feet, angry and impatient to kick the arse of whoever was responsible. She stood straight into the path of an incoming right hook which snapped her jaw to the side and sent her spinning to the ground where she landed with an audible thud.

Faith’s ears rang as she lifted her face from the gravel. More than a few stones remained embedded in the skin of her cheek as she did so. She heard the crunch of boots behind her and feigned a more serious injury. When her attacker was within striking distance she lashed out with her boot and caught both legs in a sweeping kick. He grunted as his body struck the gravel hard, more from surprise than pain as he bounded lightly to his feet. Despite his speed, Faith had time to kick herself to her feet. In a split second she was standing with her feet firmly planted and a wicked looking knife in her right hand.

It was in that moment, as she faced off against her attacker that she could see just who she was up against. He was a lean man with an angular face, his body clad in a leather jacket that hung to the tops of his combat boots. A pair of piercing eyes bore through the darkness and into her own.

The two warriors faced one another in the shadow of the wall. Their battlefield was an expanse of gravel and lawn, a sharp line down the centre where shadow and streetlight met. The quiet was only broken by the sound of the girl, Dawn, scrambling across the gravel on all fours to a spot behind Faith. Her eyes were wide with terror at the sight of the man she recognised all too clearly.

“Faith, be careful…he killed Buffy!” Dawn called out, having witnessed the blond killer’s considerable strength in the fight with her sister she knew just how dangerous he was, and she also knew full well that her words would incite the brunette with a desire to revenge her friend’s death.

Faith’s eyes immediately narrowed as she felt hate and a desire for revenge surge through her body.
Her grip tightened on the haft of her knife.

“Name’s Faith,” the brunette hissed clearly, “Just so you know who’s going to rip your fucking throat open and laugh as you gurgle away your last few moments of life!”

“Spike,” he drawled casually in reply, a small smirk creasing his face as he drew his own blade from inside his coat and ran his thumb along the edge, “Your girl Buffy was a right little spitfire…she was good, are you sure you’re better…because if you’re not…I’ll be the only one doing any ripping here tonight.”

“Am I better?” Faith growled, further incensed by his mention of Buffy’s name, “Why don’t you come over here and find out?”

Their banter over, Faith and Spike surged forward at the same moment both searching to make the first strike. Faith was faster on her feet, and she received a grunt of surprise from her opponent as he had to twist his body and grab at her knife arm to avoid being run through.

With her wrist ensnared in a vice-like grip, Faith delivered a swift kick to Spike’s knee even as he brought his own knife up towards her body, he crumpled slightly and the sharp blade narrowly missed her arm instead of plunging beneath her rib-cage. They then began a dance, trading delicate jabs and swiping knife blows as their feet moved across the gravel beneath them. Unlike a fist-fight, it was all too quiet. The only sounds being the crunch of small stones and the barely audible swish of metal through the air. Every so often Faith or Spike would grunt in frustration as yet another blow went wide or was blocked.

The pair was evenly matched. Both Faith and Spike knew that inwardly, although neither would admit it in any way. They traded blow after blow with a few hits striking and even fewer actually taking a toll on the opponent. Faith was bleeding profusely from a deep gash along her forearm but she stoically ignored it. She had managed to swipe Spike across his chest, ripping open his shirt and leaving a trail of red.

After their evenly matched contest, the conclusion was almost an anti-climax in its finality and apparent ease. However, the actual execution of it concealed the difficulty of learning and understanding the way your opponent moved which culminated in the ability to predict the next attack. Faith did just that, she knew Spike favoured his right side while the left was for little more than defence. He went in high, aiming for the throat with many of his swipes. Faith suspected that he craved the sight of a person’s life-blood pumping out of their severed jugular.

It was almost simple, Spike’s left crashed into Faith’s shoulder and she used its force to spin around her opponent. She ducked beneath his awkward swipe as she moved around him and deftly spun her knife mid-twirl so it lay face down in her palm. He was already moving to face her once more but she was fast, driven by the need to finish this fight. She leapt and slammed the weapon downwards between his shoulder blades. Spike let out a long groan and slumped forwards. Before he could fall or stumble Faith had moved completely behind him and wrapped her left arm around his body to prop him up. As she cradled his body, feeling hot blood from his wound soak into her own clothing, she wrapped her right arm around his body and brought the knife straight down into his chest and twisted savagely.

“I guess I am better,” she whispered in his ear as blood gushed from the second, fatal would.

With a grunt of disgust, she released his dying body from her hold and took a step back to allow him to slump to the ground. He fell face forward into the gravel and an ever-widening pool of blood began to form beneath him. Spike gave one last spasm before he died. Faith stood over his body feeling little emotion other than anger.

“That’s for Buffy you nancy piece of shit!” Faith contemptuously spat blood onto the corpse at her feet.

Faith turned away from the corpse and found Dawn standing a few metres behind her, a small half-smile creasing her face. She reached out her arm to the girl and Dawn came running forward. She flew into Faith’s body with a dull thud and wrapped her arms tightly around her waist.

“I know it’s not going to bring your sister back,” Faith remarked dully as she stared at the body lying before her and stroked Dawn’s hair, “But it sure as hell makes me feel a damn sight better!”

Dawn looked up at Faith and nodded in agreement as she stated simply, “She’d have been impressed.”

Faith glanced back towards the Talbot mansion and was deeply disturbed by the silence and absence of either Willow or Tara. She glanced back to the Oldsmobile parked a ways down the street and checked her pocket to find the keys still there. They jingled in her hand as she ran her fingers over them, lost in thought for a few moments.

“I think it’s high time we found out what the fuck has been keeping Maclay,” she announced resolutely.


******

Willow Rosenberg regained consciousness with her last memory being her lover lying senseless on the manicured lawn as Baby Dedara kicked her repeatedly in the stomach. Combined with her pounding headache it was not a good way to wake and it put her in a decidedly angry frame of mind. She moved her limbs experimentally but soon felt heavy metal cuffs encircling her wrists. Willow lifted her head to find herself manacled on her stomach to the headboard of a large bed. She twisted her head awkwardly and found herself in a sumptuously appointed room with rich furnishings and a marble fireplace. There was no doubt in her mind as to why she was there. At any moment, Tommy Talbot would swagger into the room and find his long-awaited and much-fought over prize lying spread-eagled on the bed for him.

The thought of lying helpless on the bed as Tommy made his triumphant entrance made Willow sick to her stomach. She pulled experimentally at the cuffs that held her by the wrists and found them to be poorly tightened, although not nearly enough for her to slip out of them. Willow took a deep breath, gritted her teeth and then jerked her hand backwards, trying to tear herself free from the metal cuffs. There was no way her hand was going to come free without breaking her skin but Willow was desperately determined. There was no rescue coming now…she only had her anger to get her out of this.

Willow bit her lip to stifle the inevitable scream as her right hand tore free from the cuffs. She glanced down at the swollen, bloody wrist to find that it was not as bad as she had prepared herself for. It stung like hell...but strengthened her resolve to rip the second hand free. Ignoring the pain in her wrists, Willow swung herself from the bed and padded quickly across the floor to the heavy door. She gently pressed down on the handle but found it securely locked. She was about to growl in frustration when she heard shuffling footsteps outside the door. Willow looked around frantically for something…anything that she could use as a weapon. Much to her annoyance the dominant furnishing in the room appeared to be cushions. She then glanced across to the fireplace and found the perfect tool…

Tommy entered the room to find his captive laid out on the bed in front of him, satin night dress barely concealing the mounds of her buttocks. He took a few steps into the room and closed the door behind him. As he approached the bed he licked his lips in anticipation, feeling confident enough to toss his cane to one side. A little awkwardly, he began stripping his clothes from his body before he joined the unconscious girl in bed. He stopped when he was down to his white shirt and boxer shorts, leaving him a rather pathetic specimen of manhood as he clambered up on the big bed. He greedily took in the sight of Willow’s flesh laid out before him and although he itched to tear the only item of clothing from her body, he also wanted to draw things out as long as possible…several days at least.

“Wakey wakey, Willow,” he whispered, hunkering down behind her.

It was then that Tommy saw the blood staining the bed covers, he paused in a kneeling position behind Willow. His gaze travelled up her body, expecting to find that his men had injured her in some way but instead he saw the bands of red around her wrists. A lump formed in his throat when he saw the bloody, empty cuffs dangling from the headboard.

“What the…”

It was all he had time to say before Willow moved in a blur, rising from her face down position and bringing her right arm swinging around. The fire poker in her hand caught Tommy Talbot a glancing blow on the side of his head and he toppled backwards off the bed. Willow followed, poker in hand. She watched him for a few moments as he tried to raise himself into a crawling position and felt a cold contempt for her would be rapist.

“Goodnight, Tommy,” Willow whispered, feeling an odd hollow feeling in the pit of her stomach as she raised the poker above her head.

******

Tara was dimly aware of the dull thud of something hard into earth. She recognised the sound all too well; it was the sound of someone digging a hole. If there was one thing a con doing hard time knew about, it was digging holes. Tara had dug enough of them in her time to know the familiar thud of the shovel striking earth - soft earth in this case - a booted foot forcing it further into the ground, the squelch as it was levered upwards with its load and the swish just before the earth spattered into a pile. In conjunction to the sound, she felt the vibrations through the earth as she lay face down, her cheek turned to one side. She was aware of all this before she could even open her eyes.

Tara forced her eyes open but she could only manage small slits, enough to see who’s boot it was that was doing the digging…Baby. Someone else who had plenty of practice digging holes. She must have seen Tara’s eyes open because she stopped digging and tossed her shovel down onto the large mound of dirt at her side. Baby hunkered down to place herself within Tara’s line of sight.

“Digging you a nice little grave here, Maclay,” Baby inclined her head towards the hole, “Figured Ms Talbot would enjoy the thought of you pushing up her roses.

Tara didn’t reply, she couldn’t get her mouth to move. All she could do was lie and stare at Baby. She closed her eyes fairly quickly and found herself in agony not because of the battering her body had taken, but because she had let Willow down. Her beautiful, surprisingly innocent girl was in the hands of that sick little monster because she had let the sadistic pig squatting in front of her get to her.

Baby was apparently enjoying the occasion with the intention of savouring it and drawing it out as long as possible. She grunted as Tara refused to open her eyes and look at her, returning to her digging. As she shovelled, she continued talking. Tara ceased to listen, she blocked the guttural sounds out and willed herself to sink into unconsciousness. It was all she could do as she’d already tried to move her limbs and felt nothing but excruciating pain. There was no way she could drag herself to her feet unaided.

A few minutes later Tara was aware of fingers curling around her ankles. Her legs were raised and someone tugged, dragging her deadweight body across the grass. Tara felt the blades of grass scrape against the skin of her cheek. Any second now and her body would be shoved into the hole Baby had lovingly prepared for the purpose. She imagined her face thudding into the soft, cool earth. That same earth would then begin to land on her body as Baby refilled her hole. At first it would just be a splattering, barely any weight at all. However, all too quickly it would cover her completely and the weight would become intense and suffocating. Tara had always imagined her death coming in a hail of bullets, even though someone had already tried that. Bbeing buried alive was a hell of a way to die…

A sharp crack suddenly sliced through the night air. Tara immediately recognised it as a shot from a Beretta, her own tool of the trade. The grip on her ankles disappeared. She heard a thud, the sound of a large person falling several feet into soft earth. Moments later came the barely audible sound of bare feet striking grass, growing louder as they drew closer. A weight hit the ground directly beside her and she felt gentle but insistent hands on her body. Then came the sweetest sound she’d heard all night…

“Please tell me you’re not dead!” Willow’s voice pleaded, her voice sounded close as she was obviously leaning directly over Tara.

“Just about,” Tara heard herself reply, the words squeezed out between clenched teeth.

Willow choked out a laugh of relief and she manoeuvred behind Tara, hooking her arms beneath Tara’s armpits. She strained to pull Tara upright with some urgency. At the sudden reappearance of her pain, Tara’s eyes snapped open. Willow was behind her so all she could see of her was strands of red hair fluttering past her face.

“We gotta go, baby,” Willow huffed and puffed as she managed to get Tara into a sitting position, “They would’ve heard that shot for sure.”

“What?” Tara asked dimly, feeling an overwhelming rush of blood throughout her body as Willow moved her about roughly in her haste, even though she was trying to be as gentle as possible.

“I shot the bitch,” Willow replied simply.

It was then that Tara realised she could see her would-be grave. For a few moments she had the eerie sensation of looking down at herself in death before her mind registered that it was in fact Baby Dedara, a single bullet hole through her forehead. Her piggy little eyes stared sightless at the night sky.

As I lay in Willow’s arms I reflect on the fact that Baby didn’t deserve such a merciful end…especially after the bitch was going to bury me alive. Still, I am able to enjoy the irony of her lying dead in the grave that she dug for me, that alone feels pretty fucking fantastic…

“Well done,” Tara murmured, almost oblivious to Willow’s efforts to try and move her limp body.

Willow grunted with superhuman effort but could not lift Tara to her feet. She could not bring herself to dwell on Tara’s bloody face. The brief glance she had already caught was enough to confirm that Tara had taken a brutal pounding.

“Tara, baby, you’ve gotta help me here, I can’t carry you outta here…can you just try a little for me?” Willow pleaded.

“Sure,” Tara whispered.

She willed her legs to move, they jerked a little before working slowly to try and gain a foothold on the ground as Willow continued to lever her upwards. It wasn’t so much that her legs weren’t working, it was the connection between her legs and her brain that had been completed fried…in fact, the connection between her brain and absolutely everything was fried. Leaning heavily on Willow to the point where she was almost forcing the girl to her knees, Tara finally managed to stand. She was standing in time to see almost a dozen Talbot goons tearing out of the mansion, guns in their hands and faces twisted with fury. They were yelling and cursing as they made their way towards the two women struggling to move. A woman’s voice joined them and Tara awkwardly lifted her head to see Glory Talbot standing on a second floor balcony, gripping the railing with both hands.

“You fucking little bitch!” Glory screamed, her voice carrying with its power and fury, “I’m going to make you wish you were never born!”

“Will…what did you do?” Tara asked as Glory’s shrill voice rung heavily in her ears.

“I bashed Junior’s head in with a poker,” Willow admitted quickly, even as she realised they were never going to be able to move fast enough to get over the wall.

Something even louder than Glory’s threats drew Willow’s attention, a grinding of metal, exploding masonry and screeching of tires. She turned as best she could with Tara in her arms and saw Faith’s Oldsmobile being driven straight through the wrought iron gate that protected the entrance. The carnage continued once the car was through the gate as Faith pulled herself out the passenger window and opened up with two guns blazing. Dawn was at the wheel, driving straight towards their friends on the grass.

As the bullets started to fly I know I am going to die with many regrets…but I also know that Dedara and that snake, Tommy Talbot have not outlived me. They’ve both gone to the hell they deserve.

While Willow could clearly see the Oldsmobile screeching towards them, it took both Tara a few moments to realise that they weren’t the ones being shot out. When the first of their attackers flew backwards with a bullet in his chest she looked in the same direction as Willow to see a familiar and welcome sight. It was the very same car that had so brazenly held up the prison bus what seemed like an eternity ago. A wild Faith, hair streaming out behind her, had guns in both hands and was plugging goons left, right and centre. Behind the wheel, Dawn steered the car directly in front of Willow and Tara.

The Oldsmobile ground to a halt, carving wide grooves in the manicured lawn. Faith continued to shoot until the last of their pursuers had been hit and was either dead or lying on the ground writhing in pain. She turned to face Willow and Tara, hair wild about her head and fire in her eyes. Holstering her guns, she slid out of the car window and ran to Willow’s side. She took Tara’s weight from Willow, moving her swiftly towards the back door of the Oldsmobile. Willow opened the door, as she did Faith glanced up and gave her a brief smile.

“I thought Maclay was supposed to be rescuing you?” she asked Willow archly.

“She did rescue me,” Willow replied as Faith moved Tara onto the back seat, “Then I had to rescue her…”

Lying back on the leather of the Oldsmobile’s back seat, Tara lifted her head at the sound of Willow’s words and smiled. Willow went to climb into the back seat with Tara but stopped when she lifted her hand towards her. She was grasping a small cylindrical object which she tried to press into Willow’s hand. Accepting it, Willow glanced down to find a small button on top.

“We gotta go!” Faith slammed the flat of her hand down on the roof of the car, she leapt back through the passenger window as several more guards came running from the house.

“Will, sweetie…give that button a jab will you?” Tara whispered.

Willow stood just outside the car and looked from the device in her hand back to the house. Her eyes moved from the rushing goons up to the balcony where Glory Talbot stood, screeching for her dead son. A small smirk crossed Willow’s face and with a feeling of immense satisfaction she jammed her thumb down hard on the device’s button.

******

At that same moment, within the depths of the Talbot mansion, the devices that Tara had placed earlier that evening picked up the trigger that Willow had pressed. Each device gave off a solitary high-pitched bleep, an all too late warning of the fury to follow.

******

Glory Talbot watched with a manic sort of rage as her men rushed to intercept the car full of whores before they could make good their getaway from right beneath her nose. Already they were firing on the car, bullets pinging off the metal and one shattering the side window. She watched the little redhead bitch duck behind the door and her white-knuckled fists clenched even tighter as she willed the bullets to strike her.

She suddenly felt hot air at the nape of her neck and looked over her shoulder just in time to see a wall of fire cascading towards her. Glory Talbot didn’t even have time to scream before the explosion blew her off the balcony and sailing out over her garden.

******

Willow felt the intense heat even as she stood behind the Oldsmobile. She watched in gruesome fascination as the Talbot goons were swallowed up within the hungry depths of the fireball and as a single dark object went sailing out from the second floor balcony and came crashing down on the lawn. Although she found it difficult to tear her gaze away, she dimly heard Faith screaming at her to get in the car. She lowered herself on the backseat next to Tara. Faith had taken over from Dawn behind the wheel and she jammed the stick into reverse and gunned the engine.

The Oldsmobile reversed at speed and its occupants felt a sudden jarring as the tyres hit something in their path. Faith then put it in gear and drove forward, a second bump followed before the car went careening out of the gate and off into the night.

“Next stop…home!” Faith announced as she floored the pedal with great gusto.

As we pull away from the fiery inferno that is the Talbot mansion, I lie back on the leather set and watch the red hot glow of the flames reflected on Willow, her hair, her skin, everything is golden. She must sense me watching and she turns her head to meet my brazen gaze. I can see she’s exhausted but she flicks me a little smile that makes me forget my own injuries. The glow fades as the mansion is left far behind us, left to burn itself to the ground and all the pain it holds within it. I know that the cops will arrive pretty damn fast…as soon as they find out their number one source of funding has just gone up in flames. They’ll find a smoking, gutted ruin, with the lady of the house lying blackened and very much dead on the front lawn, tyre marks ingrained into her flesh. Baby Dedara will be lying in her grave, a single shot through the head and they’ll probably never find anything of little Tommy.

“You’re a mess,” Willow whispered as she edged across the wide back seat of the Oldsmobile to kneel on the floor beside Tara’s bruised and bloodied face, “What you did…”

Tara’s hand darted out surprisingly fast and she pressed a finger to Willow’s lips, “Don’t even start to thank me kiddo, we’re even and that’s the end of the story okay?”

Tara let her hand drop to leave Willow free to reply.

“Okay,” Willow nodded.

“And those things that Dedara said…” Tara began awkwardly.

“Forgotten already,” Willow nodded again.

Tara shook her head insistently, “No, not forgotten…kept between us.”

“Okay,” Willow felt her voice catch slightly, she reached out and took Tara’s hand in her own.

“I want you to know me completely…” Tara whispered as her other hand reached out to cup Willow’s cheek and brush away the tears that were welling at the corner of her eye, “Does that scare you?”

“I think maybe that it should,” Willow replied, “But I love you…so no.”

I hear those soft words from her lips and I close my eyes, wanting to hold onto them for a little longer before I realise, possibly a little presumptuously, that I’ll be hearing them repeated for a long time to come. It’s strange concept, making plans for the future but I know I’m not letting this girl go…and planning starts with a nice little hotel somewhere far away from Basin City. I imagine me, Willow, a hot-tub and no clothes in sight…

“Right back at you, Willow.”


THE END
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