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Re: Survivor - Ash Island

Postby ShyCanuck » Tue Apr 05, 2005 2:56 am

Hi again,



Still hanging in and enjoying this fic. Not having really watched the show other than a few time when it first started I have a fun time trying to visualize all the challenges. Looking forward to the next update and more Willow and Tara asides. And as always, thanks for taking the time to keep us all entertained.

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Re: Survivor - Ash Island

Postby mollyig » Tue Apr 05, 2005 6:01 am

Sorry this will be a short reply. I'm supposed to be catching up on some work - bad me!



I liked Willow's reason for choosing the fish dish; she's such a charmer. Oz dog paddling made me laugh. A lot of politics going on in each camp. Richard thinks he can fool the alliance Tara is in by making them think Tara has deceived them. How naive he is. Xander is still getting things wrong in the voting. He obviously hasn't learned how to play this game.



Thanks!


You stay the course, you hold the line, you keep it all together.

You're the one true thing I know I can believe in
- Sarah McLachlan

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Survivor - Ash Island

Postby JustSkipIt » Wed Apr 06, 2005 11:24 am

Artemis – I agree that those are the strong combinations.
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So how about 'Team Jhiera', in honour of all the hot women?
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Uh oh. Now I have to confess that I’m not taking the reference. If it’s a BtVS reference then color me embarrassed and surprised. Remember that Pop Culture isn’t quite my bag. ???

meretricious – Yick. You’re right about that Queller demon. What a creepy one. Like a huge cockroach plus which it came into the house and snotted on people? Very very gross. F’yarl would be hysterical because of the whole Spike/Giles interchanges: “Like to crush. Crush now?” “Go with it!” Ampata – ruled out because I really hate that episode. IMHO it’s only saving grace is the appearance of Oz. Otherwise nearly as terrible an episode as Reptile Man (the worst!). Thanks for the suggestions: I’ll definitely add the first two to the list.

ShyCanuck – H again to you. I’m glad you enjoy the challenges. People are saying that I describe them well which really pleases me because it’s a challenge to write action well. You’re very welcome.

mollyig – Lol. I’m working right now. Can’t you tell? Charmer is definitely a word for Willow and one that will continue to pop up throughout. You’re right that the politics are reaching a fever pitch. Thanks for all the thoughts. (now get back to work! )


Title – Survivor – Ash Island

Part 13 – Meet and Greet

Author – JustSkipIt

Pairing – Who do you think? (W/T of course)

Feedback – Oh yes.

Spoilers–None

Ratiing – G to PG

Disclaimer – I own none of these characters nor do I own Survivor. And believe it or not, I also don’t own any small islands. On the other hand, this island is fictional so let’s say I own it. I’m making no money from this fiction and intend no copyright infringement.

Help needed and requested – I’m looking for a good name for the merged tribe. It can be a combination of the two existing names. Or based on their theme the name of your favorite Buffy demon. Thanks.



Tara looked at her watch again before returning her focus on the action on the field. Her phone suddenly rang, startling her and she stepped from the bleachers and walked a few steps away before answering it: “Hello.”

“Hey,” Willow said quickly.

“Are you here?” the blonde asked as she continued watching the kids playing soccer.

“Finally,” Willow answered, “there was a weather delay on my connecting flight. I’m really sorry I’m late. Did I miss the whole game?”

“Willow,” Tara began laughing, “please take a breath. The game doesn’t start for 20 minutes. Where are you?” She listened for a minute before giving Willow directions for the cab driver to find the field. Once she hung up the phone, the blonde looked up to see Ariel standing near the sideline of the field waving to her.

She walked over. “Hey, sporty,” Tara joked, “are you ok?”

“Is Willow coming?” the girl asked.

Tara bent down. “Yes, sweetie,” she explained, “her plane was delayed but she’s taking a taxi here. She just called and she’s really sorry she’s late.” Tara knew that Ariel was very much looking forward to meeting the redhead she had only seen on the television. The girl had been very disappointed that she hadn’t gotten to meet Willow the weekend before and had been hardly able to sleep last night for wanting to meet the redhead from the show.

“I thought we were going to pick her and her luggage up at the airport,” the child pouted as she kicked her toes at the lime field markings.

“We were,” Tara answered, “but her plane was late so she’s meeting us here.”

“But she’s staying the whole weekend, right?” Ariel assured.

“Baby girl,” Tara started, “it’s Saturday now and she has to leave before lunch tomorrow for a work meeting.” Before the little girl could object Tara told her, “Now your coach is calling everyone over for a huddle.”

“He’s not coach, silly,” Ariel laughed, “that’s daddy.”

“I know,” Tara smiled back, ”but he wants you to go huddle before the game.” Ariel leaned in to kiss her mommy on the cheek and ran across the field.

As she stood up, Tara saw the cab pulling into the parking lot. Willow got out of the back, pulling her bag with her and leaned in to pay the cabbie. Before she could walk across the field, Tara waved to her and met her at the lot to unlock her trunk and put Willow’s bag inside.

“Hi, Sweetie,” the blonde said, leaning in to gently kiss the redhead.

“Mmm,” Willow said as she lengthened the kiss slightly, “now that was worth the trip.” She quickly changed her focus as she took Tara’s hand to walk back toward the field. “Did I miss anything?”

“They’re just about to start,” Tara told the visitor. “How is your father?”

Willow giggled a little as she answered: “He’s doing really well. If I’m dating you or happen to run into you or anything, which I can neither confirm nor deny, he says, ‘hi.’”

“I think that at this p-point, you can confirm that we’re dating,” Tara said, “just not anything about the show.” She smiled as the two women took a seat on the bleachers. “By the way, my mom says ‘hi.’”

“Where is Ariel?” Willow asked excitedly.

Tara raised her eyebrow slightly at the redhead before pointing to midfield at her daughter. “You have an IQ of 190 and you c-couldn’t guess which one was Ariel?” she teased. “Not to mention having seen a picture.”

“Hey,” Willow argued, “we’re way over here and they’re running fast.”

Tara leaned over to kiss the redhead on the cheek and continued holding her hand as they watched the game. The game was as exciting as any soccer game between six-year olds ever is. The kids kicked and ran and celebrated and enjoyed themselves. At various points during the game, both women heard whispers around them: “Survivor… Willow… Tara… don’t know… could ask?” Willow noticed that Tara was blushing as the game and the attention when on but was relieved that no one actually interrupted them.

When the game finished both women cheered for the children and waited a few moments for the other parents to clear off before stepping from the bleachers. They met Kent and Ariel coming across the field. “Mama,” the little girl shouted as she ran to hug Tara, “I made a goal!”

“I saw,” Tara told her excitedly, “It was a very good kick.” She picked up the little girl and held her as she turned to Willow. “Ariel, sweetie, this is my friend, Willow.” To Willow she also introduced the little girl: “Willow, this is my daughter Ariel.”

“Very nice to meet you,” Willow said. Ariel mirrored the redhead and seemed to be looking closely to see what she could figure out about this woman who her mother seemed to really like.

“And this is Kent,” Tara continued the introductions.

Willow stuck her hand out to take the dark-skinned man’s hand, saying, “We met before.”

Kent smiled as he nodded, “I can neither confirm nor deny that but it’s nice to see you again.”

“Daddy,” Ariel said excitedly, “you met Willow before?”

All three adults looked at each other puzzled for a few seconds. Just as they were trying to figure out what to say, some other parents and children came up. “Are we going for pizza?” They breathed a sigh of relief as Ariel appeared to forget about her question, instead asking Willow if she was coming for pizza.

“Yes,” Willow answered.

“Do you like pizza with vegetables?” the little girl asked as they started walking toward the parking lot.

“Oh yes,” Willow told her, “and I’m very hungry because my flight was very long.”

“Ariel,” Tara interrupted the conversation, “do you want to ride with Willow and I or with Daddy to get pizza?”

Ariel stopped to think about it for a minute, then she motioned to Willow to bend down. When the redhead did Ariel whispered in her ear for a few seconds. Willow smiled and answered the girl: “That’s fine, Ariel.”

“Mommy,” Ariel said very formally, “I want to ride with Daddy.”

“Ok,” Tara agreed as they reached the parking lot and Kent took the little girl’s hand, “we’ll meet you there.”

As she let Willow into the car she asked her, “What did Ariel say?”

Willow waited for Tara to get in before explaining, “She wanted to make sure my feelings wouldn’t be hurt if she wanted to ride with her Daddy since she can spend all weekend with us but doesn’t get to spend the weekend with him until next week.” Before Tara could say anything Willow began to exclaim, “She’s awesome. I can already tell that she has your brilliance and sensitivity.” She leaned in and kissed the blonde on the lips softly at first but quickly becoming more intense as she wound her fingers in Tara’s hair. “Much better,” she whispered as she finally pulled away from the woman.

“Much,” Tara whispered in agreement. The two girls visited about their last two weeks while they drove to the pizza parlor for the weekly after-game lunch. Willow had spent four days with her parents at the hospital before helping them move her father home and staying in Raleigh for another 2 days. Finally she had to return to Atlanta to catch up on work and get ready to visit Tara and Ariel.

“Are you sure you can afford the t-time away from work?” Tara asked the redhead again.

Willow smiled at Tara as they pulled up at the pizza parlor. “I can afford anything but being away from you for so long.”

“Charmer,” Tara accused as she opened her door and met Willow at the front of the car.

“Is it working?”

“We’ll see,” Tara teased. A few children ran past her into the restaurant and two mothers called to her to say hello. Tara introduced Willow to the women who all seemed quite friendly. Once inside, the atmosphere in the pizza parlor didn’t really allow much room for conversation. They ate their pizza and continued visiting over surface topics. Kent joined them for most of the meal as did Ariel, although the girl eventually got up to play games with her friends.

“So, Willow,” Kent started, “do you want to tell me where the two of you ended up?”

Willow nearly choked on her coke as she at first misunderstood what the man was asking. “He means on the show,” Tara explained, “he can’t take ‘non-disclosure clause’ for an answer.”

“I can tell you a secret,” Willow promised the man, motioning him forward before mock whispering, “I was not one of the first three people voted off the island.”

“Or the fourth,” Tara agreed with a smirk.

“You’re no help,” Kent growled as he got up to play with the kids a little bit. After a few more minutes he came over to tell both women that he needed to go run and then study. He had already told Ariel that he would see her next weekend. “I’ll talk to you this week, sweetie,” he said as he kissed Tara on the cheek. “Nice to meet you again, Willow,” he told the redhead before leaving.

Tara waved at Ariel and told her that they were going to leave in five minutes. They did so and drove over to Tara’s house. Once there, Ariel jumped out of the car to run inside. Tara picked up Willow’s bag and led her inside the house. “Come on,” she said, “I’ll show you around.” She started in the house and gave the redhead a quick tour.

“I like your house,” Willow complimented her; “the colors are exactly like I would expect from you.”

“You didn’t think I lived in a bamboo shelter a-all the time?” Tara teased.

‘Well, you did seem quite at home,” Willow answered. “I mean to hear Riley talk about you, you were the very second coming on the Island: gatherer by day, healer by night.”

Tara leaned close to whisper in the redhead’s ear, “I remember having some better things to do at night.”

“Now who’s a charmer?” Willow retorted.

“Come on,” Tara said as she took Willow’s hand, “I want to show you something.”

“I get that a lot,” Willow smirked.

“Not that,” Tara said with false disdain. She opened the door to her garage and turned on the lights.

Willow’s eyes were immediately drawn to the large metal sculpture in the center of the room. She had no idea what it but it was the most powerful piece of art she had ever seen. She walked toward it and circled it for a few minutes before taking her time inspecting the rest of the contents of the workroom. Shelves held smaller pieces as well as various piles of scrap metal, paint, and a few welding torches. She looked at a welding mask and held it up toward Tara. “Very butch,” she winked. “Seriously,” she said, “It’s all amazing. I mean the piece in the center is just so powerful.”

“I’m glad you l-like it,” Tara said, turning off the lights to return to the house.

Ariel met them in the kitchen and asked to go over to a friend’s house. After a quick phone call to the friend’s mother, Tara agreed that Ariel could go but be back for supper. That left Tara and Willow alone for the afternoon, giving them a chance to talk more. After Ariel returned the three worked together to make dinner and played a game of Chickenfoot before Tara put Ariel to bed.

When Tara returned, she found that Willow had found both the stereo and a bottle of wine which she had opened. She had pulled the pillows off the couch and placed them on the floor so that the two women could snuggle. “I see you’ve done this before,” Tara teased as she took her glass and sat against the edge of the couch.

Willow moved closer and laid her head on Tara’s lap, enjoying the feel of the blonde’s fingers running through her hair. “How about you, Ms. Maclay,” Willow teased back, “the CD player is completely filled with ‘seduction music: Sarah McLaughlin, Joni Mitchell, Norah Jones, Enya?’”

Tara leaned over to trail her lips along the redhead’s ear: “Maybe I put it in there especially for your visit.” She heard Willow’s breath catch before the other woman reached her hand up and pulled Tara’s face toward her own. Even though they had kissed and enjoyed each other’s company during the afternoon, this kiss went beyond that exploration. When they finally pulled away both women were breathing hard and could feel their hearts beating in their chests.

Willow sat up and took a drink of her wine. “Maybe conversation…,” she said. “I want to ask you something but I don’t want to offend you, Tara.”

“How did I get Ariel?”

“Well… yeah,” Willow answered. “I mean … you don’t have to tell me if you don’t want but I mean… I get a kind of lesbian vibe off you”

Tara interrupted her, “I hope so, otherwise, I need to practice some things.”

“What I mean is,” Willow continued, “I don’t get that you used to be straight and then got pregnant or married, pregnant, and divorced and then gay… so … how?”

Tara smiled and motioned for Willow to lie down again as she was before. The blonde took a drink of her wine. “Did you go to your Senior Prom?” she asked, somewhat incongruously Willow thought.

“No,” Willow said abruptly.

“Well,” Tara explained, “Kent and I didn’t have dates. I mean not a big surprise that neither of us had a date. I was this awkward, shy, self-identified-lesbian and he was the only black guy, excuse me—African American-- in the senior class. Welcome to s-suburbia.”

“You gotta love it,” Willow agreed. She added in a whisper, “Although it’s hard to see you as awkward and shy. You’re so damn sexy.”

“And we’d been friends for years from art and drama class and everything even though he was a big jock too,” Tara continued. “So when he said we should go one day at lunch, I said sure. And it was fun getting ready to go. All the catty girls who wouldn’t consider going with him and didn’t know why I was going were so into their dresses and who was wearing what and what their guys were wearing.”

“Of course,” Willow agreed again.

“My mom made me a really beautiful dress,” Tara laughed, “and now I understand that she was really confused about why I was going with Kent because she’d always thought I was gay.”

Willow laughed at that.

“And Kent’s dad was just so damn h-happy that he had a date for the prom. I mean he didn’t know I was gay; he just saw his son being a real man and having an important date. He insisted on getting us a room at the hotel where the prom was.”

“Of course,” Willow said, “that’s what all the rich kids did.”

“Right,” Tara agreed, “and he looked damn good. And I mean damn good. He wore a gray top hat and tails. The only one at our prom.” She got up and picked up a picture from the mantle to hand it to Willow.

“Hot couple,” Willow agreed.

“The prom was like you’d expect it to be,” Tara went on, “twenty girls who had never had anything to do with me telling me how beautiful my dress was, how hot Kent looked, what great d-dancers we were together. And the guys, telling Kent what a stud he was.” Willow giggled at Tara’s impressions of her prom. “And afterward there were parties and all that in various hotel rooms.”

“De rigueur,” Willow said.

“It was probably 4:00 in the morning when we got back to our room,” Tara continued, “and my dress had all these fasteners up the back that I couldn’t get out of it myself. And we’d both been drinking but don’t take it wrong. We weren’t drunk, except maybe on the air of the night. And he helped me out of my dress and I felt goosebumps on my arms and the hair on the back of my neck stood up and he leaned forward and kissed it.”

“And it was nice,” she continued, “but there were no fireworks and no trumpets in my head.” She laughed and took another drink. “And we joke about it now,” Tara said, “about how my one and only time with a man gave me two things: Ariel and absolute conviction that I was a lesbian.”

Willow raised her glass in a mock toast, “Then I definitely thank him.”

“Two and half weeks later,” Tara continued, “I’m sitting in my AP English final exam and suddenly I feel as nauseous as I’ve ever felt in my life. I barely made it to the bathroom. I told Kent that he didn’t have to do anything about it but he was actually excited in a ‘God, I hope this doesn’t fuck up both our lives way.’”

Willow laughed and poured both women another glass of wine. Then she leaned back against the couch and indicated that Tara could lie on her lap. Tara continued: “We both went to school in the fall. I stayed with my mother and Kent did too so that he could bond with Ariel. We lived there for two years.”

Tara took another sip and kissed Willow on the forehead. “My turn now,” she said. “When did you come out?”

“A coming out question?” Willow teased, “you can’t do better than that?” Tara raised an eyebrow and gave a pointed look at the redhead.

“Well, funny you should mention Senior prom,” Willow explained. “I didn’t go to mine.”

“You said,” Tara said.

“Well,” Willow said, “I was only 15 and everyone else was 17 or 18. My best friend in school was a girl who was a junior--Tami. She was older than me but we lived next door and were in the same 5th and 6th grade before I skipped 7th.”

“So you asked her?” Tara tried to guess.

“Patience, Tara,” Willow teased.

“I have tremendous patience,” Tara answered.

‘I’ve noticed that,” Willow pouted, “maybe too much. Anyway, Jeff Rhodes asked Tami. And she was really excited because she was only a Junior and he was this big sports star. Of course, I wasn’t invited. I mean who wants to take a 15 year-old to prom? I had an eleven o’clock curfew!”

“Sounds like your parents were very strict,” Tara said.

“Not strict,” Willow clarified, “they had this one little rule. Other than that I was mostly on my own. Anyway, Tami bought this really outrageous dress. It was pink, of course, and low cut and she looked great in it. I went over to help her dress and every time she would mention Jeff, I felt this lump in the pit of my stomach. I said I didn’t feel well and went home.”

“You seem to have gotten over it,” Tara teased.

Willow laughed. “I went home and lay on my bed wondering, ‘why did this bother me so much?’ I was still thinking that when there was a knock on my balcony doors an hour and a half later. Tami was standing there. She had actually climbed up the trellis wearing that pink monstrosity. At first I was scared that she was hurt—that Jeff had…” Tara stroked the redhead’s fingertips as she told her story. “I let her in and was about to ask what happened,” Willow explained, “and she said she would rather be with me.” She took a breath. “And then she kissed me. I think we were both shocked about it for a second. It was like everything in my whole life clicked in those seconds. I finally got why I’d never felt right in high school. Not because of my intelligence or my age. This was it. I kissed her back and… well let’s just say we really enjoyed the two weeks until I left for college.”

“And you’ve been enjoying the clicks ever since,” Tara teased, sleepily.

“I’ll be there first to admit that,” Willow said, “but Tara…” she waited for the blonde to answer. “I I’ve never felt this way about anyone. I mean when I first saw you on the island, I just thought you were hot. I was thinking conquest, like I always have. I was thinking notoriety. But then I got to know you. And then three months of nothing.” “Dumb agreement,” she muttered, “No seeing you, no talking to you. I would go out and talk to other girls and all I could think was that I wanted to be with you. Now that I’m here, I can’t think of any place I’d rather be.” She waited a few seconds for Tara to say something, anything.

“Do you get it?” She waited, heart pounding in her chest for Tara’s response. What would be the blonde say? “I love you, too?” “I get it?” “What makes you think it’s real?” Seconds dragged on and still she waited heart on her proverbial sleeve. Finally she leaned over to look at Tara’s sleeping face and chuckled to herself. “Well, I’ll just consider that the dry run I guess,” she laughed before placing both wine glasses aside, pulling a blanket over them both, and wrapping her arms around the blonde.

They were awakened in the morning by Ariel coming into the living room in her pajamas to turn on cartoons and ask for pancakes. “Mama,” Ariel said brightly as she shook the blonde, “are you going to make pancakes for me and Willow?”

Tara sat up suddenly as she realized that she and Willow had spent the night on the floor of the living room. “Oh, um, yes,” she answered with a blush as she looked at Willow. “I guess we’re destined to never sleep in a bed,” she teased the redhead.

“Never, like always, is an incredibly long time,” Willow answered with a smirk. “Now, I’m thinking pancakes sound very good.”

While Tara made pancakes, Willow took a shower and repacked her bag. Her flight was leaving before noon, giving them very little time together. Once Tara served the breakfast, they all enjoyed it, with Willow telling the blonde sincerely that they were the best pancakes she had ever had. Ariel watched the two women with great interest, finally addressing Willow. “Willow,” she said, “I have a question.”

Willow prepared herself for a hard question on the nature of her relationship with Ariel’s mommy or why they woke up on the living room floor. “Yes, Ariel,” she answered.

“Did you pick the fish because you wanted to eat the fish or because you wanted to sit with mommy?”

Willow smiled and told her honestly, “I wanted to eat with your mommy. And she was nice and shared her vegetables with me too.”

“And you shared your wine,” Ariel said.

“Yes,” Willow agreed.

“And you’re a lesbian which is a mommy who likes mommies too, right?” Ariel confirmed.

Willow smiled as she answered, “Yes sweetie, I definitely like one mommy in particular.”

“Mine?” Ariel concluded.

“Definitely yours,” Willow said, “now can I ask you a question?”

“Ok,” Ariel agreed.

“What’s your favorite subject in school?” Willow asked.

Ariel seemed to breathe a sigh of relief as she answered, “I like music and art and recess but my favorite is reading. Mama and I read every day and when she was gone Grandma and Daddy read with me.”

“Well, that’s a good choice,” Willow said seriously, “because most other subjects require you to read too.”

“That’s what I said,” Tara agreed.

Once breakfast was finished, Tara took her shower while Willow and Ariel played in the backyard. Then it was time to take the redhead to the airport. At the security station, she hugged Ariel who announced that she wanted Willow to come back and hugged Tara, giving her a light kiss. Just as she was about to go through security she felt Tara’s hand on her wrist. The blonde pulled her back for a deep kiss before letting go and winking at her as she went through the checkpoint.


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Awww!!!!!!!!

Postby Missocki » Wed Apr 06, 2005 11:47 am

That is soooo cute! With the little 6 yr old running around in her little soccer uniform! I love kids in soccer uniforms, they're are just the cutest little things on the face of the earth!



And with the 'how' of Ariel, that makes plenty of sense, and fits well with Tara, methinks.



And the kiss at the airport? :clap



Another well written update in the books for you! I can't wait for the next 'episode'!





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Re: Awww!!!!!!!!

Postby Artemis » Wed Apr 06, 2005 12:26 pm

Wait a moment, I'm just having a metalworker Tara 'Flashdance' mental image... :drool



Okay, I'm back now.



So, the big mystery - now that the Genesis of Ariel has been explained (I still say it involved TPTB conducting experiments in cuteness enhancement, even if there is also a rational explanation for her. That'd be just like TPTB, though, wouldn't it, taking advantage of a real-world event to aid in their ethereal machinations? I can just picture them sitting up on their clouds going "Okay, so we've got this human soul, and you (pointing to whichever Power That Be likes doing weird experiments with souls) have given it the equivalent cuteness of over two dozen kittens. Now what are you going to do with it?" And they'd think, "Well, I dunno, can we sneak it into the queue to be born as a human? I bet no-one'd mind..." Hey, this tangent just keeps going, huh? I'm like that, 'specially at 4am)... where the hell did this sentence start? Oh, yeah... how did Willow and Kent meet? Having weighed up all the options and discarded the ones that are outright silly, did Kent maybe meet Willow when she and the other survivors were let out of their Sequesterville, or whatever Survivor has, and he was there to meet Tara? Hmm :hmm



And Tara 'having better things to do at night'? That sounds promising - you could teach CBS a thing or two about making people eager to tune in to future episodes :D



I liked both Tara's and Willow's storytelling moments, especially how naturally it led into Willow making her big declaration. And I laughed out loud when it turned out Tara had slept through it :lmao



Jhiera was from the Angel episode 'She', the one with the demon women who when they get hot, they get really hot. Seemed an appropriate name for a combined tribe which will certainly include Willow and Tara, and likely Buffy, Faith and Kendra as well, and to judge by the ads I've seen for Survivor, not generally wearing a lot of clothing...

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A Willow and Tara for every world.

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Re: Awww!!!!!!!!

Postby cperrins78 » Wed Apr 06, 2005 5:05 pm

Thanks for the explanation of Ariel's existence. I love the sweet interaction between Ariel and Willow. I am so looking forward to more of this wonderful story.







Christina

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Re: Awww!!!!!!!!

Postby ExtraFlameyWT » Wed Apr 06, 2005 7:16 pm

Alright, I just started reading this last night, and when I finished it was too late for me to think well enough to leave a response. I love the way you write the characters...I have loved all your other stories, as well, but this one I wasn't expecting to like as much (because of the whole Survivor aspect). I like the story you have behind everything, and I really enjoy reading the parts that we would see on the show. I thought Oz dogpaddling was hilarious! I was surprised both times that Xander picked Buffy...he's so stupid sometimes. I like that you have them alluding to things that happened, even though we haven't seen (or in this case, read) them yet. I can't wait to read more...this is really wonderful.



Aimee

"Pope John Paul today confirmed his opposition to gay marriages, said they're unnatural. Gay marriage is unnatural. Then he put on a pointy hat, his dress, and returned to never having sex at all." -Bill Maher

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Re: Awww!!!!!!!!

Postby ringwaldoeuvre » Wed Apr 06, 2005 9:34 pm

Hey-



So I've recently delurked, and I wanted to let you know how much I dig your stories. All of them, actually. I've been a fan for a while, and figured I should give where credit is due. You have a compelling, clear style, with a good balance of humor and compelling drama.



Also, I totally dig your signatures that supported the Human Rights Campaign and MoveOn.org. As a recent employee of the now-defunct America Coming Together (ACT) during the election, I have a soft spot for the 527s and other non-profits that tried to get that man (sorry, I don't use his title) out of office. I have other words for him, but I won't share them here.



Keep up the good work. This story is great, and has almost convinced me that reality television is not one of the harbingers of the apocalypse.



~ringwaldoeuvre

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Re: Survivor - Ash Island

Postby Irishgrl3 » Thu Apr 07, 2005 5:41 am

Sorry, a little behind on update replies.

The "moms" chapter was hysterical, nothing like a little ribbing from your mom about your new girlfriend. Too bad about Willow's father, although had I know she was in Raleigh I would have gone to visit. I'm fairly close to there. Ha-ha :lmao

Anyway...



Too bad about Oz, I was hoping for Richard or Mac to get the boot. The dog paddle reference was very funny, poor guy had to do his second water challenge. And Willow and Tara with the food sharing, how sweet.



Loved the chapter where Ariel meets Willow. And Tara's story of Kent and the prom, thanks for answering that question. I know so many people were wondering how that fit together. But I am curious as to when Kent might have previously met Willow. Hmmm... W&T seem to be getting closer or possibly reacquainted as we don't quite know what their relationship consisted of on the island. I like Willow's thoughts of Tara's sculpture, she's not quite sure what it is but likes it just the same. What was that center piece anyway? :D

Looking forward to what's next!

-anna

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Re: Awww!!!!!!!!

Postby mollyig » Thu Apr 07, 2005 6:18 am

It's funny you said in your disclaimer about not owning your own island. I was reading on a website about a new venture where some developer has constructed man-made private islands and the whole ensemble looks like a map of the world. I want Ireland!



I think it's typical Willow to be panicking about being late, even though the game hadn't yet started. She probably had a timetable mapped out in her head, and the delay messed up her plans.



Willow's dad's comment If I’m dating you or happen to run into you or anything, which I can neither confirm nor deny, he says, ‘hi.’ was funny, and shows that he has the same insightful intellect as his daughter.



Ariel seems to have taken a shine to Willow. The child has sense!



Lovely update, thanks!


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RE

Postby MissKittys Ball O Yarn » Fri Apr 08, 2005 8:17 am

Debra, I meant to leave feedback after I read this update the other day, but I found myself running late (which seems to be happening a lot lately, what with all the good updates being posted out here :lol ) Anyway... I think that was your best one yet (they are all wonderful) But I'm a sucker for family scenes. Ariel is just adorable, and it is very real, the way you write her. She is very much a child, but she still has that compassion that I'm sure any child of Tara's would have. The part when they were leaving the pizza place and Ariel really wanted to ride with her daddy but she didn't want to hurt Willow's feelings was really well written. It's wonderfully refreshing to see such a "real" moment.



I can't wait for the next update.



Ps... I had a lot more that I wanted to say.... there was this whole part about the dynamic between Tara and Ariel's father....but once again...I find myself running late. :lol



xoxo

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Re: RE

Postby Willster » Fri Apr 08, 2005 4:42 pm

This is definitely one of the best fic ever!! ;)



I am enjoying myself os much while I read this. This is so cute and sweet and I just wanna fill all the blanks.



I'm a huge Survivor fan and this is just better than any past season cuz well let's face it, the characters are the best!



Awesome story, continue your greta work please!!!

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Re: RE

Postby stillrunning » Fri Apr 08, 2005 5:22 pm

Ok so I just caught up on the last couple of updates and I must say...still loving it! I especially like the 'after' parts, what with the Willow and Tara smoochies and good stuff like that, but the island scenes rock too. And I'd really like to hit Xander with something hard...like a rock, or a coconut or something.

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Re: RE

Postby littlecrazy80 » Sat Apr 09, 2005 7:55 am

Thanks for this great update. :D

Ariel is so cute, just like her mommy. The explanation how Tara got Ariel was nice. :)



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Re: RE

Postby willlovestara » Sat Apr 09, 2005 8:03 am

:bigwave Great update! I love how you mix the chapters so we get bits of the jungle and bits of after. Did that make sense? :crazy Finally we know how Ariel came about, Kent seems really nice too. I'm looking forward to the next part! :) Hannah.

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Re: Survivor - Ash Island

Postby tarawhipped » Sat Apr 09, 2005 4:29 pm

I just loved this update, Debra, especially how we're getting to know Willow and Tara's histories along with them. Tara's explanation of how she conceived Ariel was especially sweet, knowing how well it has seemingly turned out (she and Kent friends; both raising Ariel). It's too bad Tara fell asleep during Willow's heartfelt declaration, but Tara's own boldness at the airport seem to show that she's gotten over any doubts about Willow's playgirl past. Ariel's favorable opinion of Willow is no doubt helping things along.



The bit about Willow and Kent having already met was interesting, too. Sounds like one of the challenges where contestants' family/friends participate? As usual, I'm anxiously awaiting more.



:peace -Cam



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Re: Survivor - Ash Island

Postby JustSkipIt » Sat Apr 09, 2005 7:39 pm

Missocki – Yeah: Soccer is definitely one of the cutest sports for little kids. Also the one that I think they are the most able to play at early ages. Tennis, Baseball, & basketball are just too darn hard and Football is barbaric for kids.



Glad the “whence Ariel?” question was answered sufficiently. Yes, the airport kiss quite the thing. Thanks so much.



Artemis – Tee hee. Flashdance. Lol. What are you dojng up at 4:00 am??? Get some sleep man: yes everyone the answer of how Chris writes so much! He doesn’t require sleep. Interesting theories on where Willow and Kent met. I’ll leave it up to the brilliant Kittens to figure out.



Lol: CBS and eager to turn in.



Aside: Re Survivor – Palau – Stephanie rocks! In the rockinest rocky kind of way. She’s the best player ever on the worst team ever! Really! She should win the $1,000,000 and then get some more just for being so awesome! Now she’s in a camp by herself? Unheard of! I can’t even imagine how she got the outrigger back to camp.



Glad you liked the storytelling. Well, it would be pretty premature to have any good “I love yous” right now wouldn’t it? I couldn’t do that so fast.



Oh, I get it about the tribe name. Not really an Angel fan. I only watched it when Faith was coming back through there. Thanks for the suggestion.



cperrins78 – You’re so welcome. I’m glad you enjoyed Willow and Ariel: I wondered if there was enough of them.



ExtraFlameyWT – Welcome. :wave Honestly, I think that many readers are in agreement with you on the “survivor aspect.” This story getting well less than the amount of feedback my stories usually get so either 1. the Kitten board is having some attrition through people finding other interests 2. More lurkers or 3. Fewer readers. That said: the feedback that I do get is always wonderful and encouraging and very much so appreciated. So welcome to reading and commenting.



Really? You like the show best? That’s kind of surprising but I’m glad to hear it. Glad you like the dog-paddling snark. Yes, Xander is particularly stupid. Thanks for all you comments.



ringwaldoeuvre – Welcome! :wave I’m really pleased to hear that you’ve been reading my writing and enjoying it. I like to imagine that there are hundreds of lurkers out there enjoying my writing even if they don’t comment. Your feedback is particularly appreciated because I would say that clarity and humor are two of my highest priorities.



Well thank you for your work too. I find the entire political thing so depressing at times and this is one of those days. I can’t believe the way that this country seems to be heading and Tom Delay wants to get rid of judges! Do you think he skipped that high school Civics part about the “balance of powers?” Arggghhh!!!



Thanks for your thoughts.



Irishgrl3 – Don’t worry about being late. It happens to us all. Glad you liked the “mom’s chapter.” Lol about visiting Willow’s father.



Re: Oz vs. Richard or Mac. The game never works exactly like we would like.



I’m glad you liked the Ariel & Willow meeting and getting Ariel’s story. W/T are very very definitely getting closer. Thanks.



mollyig – We got the new Lands End catalog yesterday and apparently they are selling islands too. I don’t know if it’s the same project or a different one. Hmmm… a map of the world? But relatively flat I’d guess unless the model is “life-sized”. Tee hee.



I think that she was just worried about making a bad impression plus which wanting to be with Tara for as long as possible on such a limited visit. Thanks so much for all your comments.



Emms – Sorry about the running late. I hate that: makes me feel “off” all day. Fortunately I’m generally a person who is ready and wherever I’m going early (maybe that’s not so much fortunate as carefully planned). Wow, what a ramble. Really: the best yet? Then you’ll like some of those yet to come. I’ve written about the next 6-8 updates and I think they get cuter but I’ll let you be the judge. Glad you like Ariel’s realness.



Yes: Tara and Kent are very very close friends. He’s probably her very best friend and since they co-parent they really respect each other.



Willster – Thanks! :clap :clap :clap (I love using an emoticon that I have memorized). Glad you’re enjoying it and yes, I guess filling in the blanks is a good way to put it. Really: you love Survivor too? Then don’t you agree that Steph rocks! (I think I might have mentioned that earlier). Thanks.



stillrunning – Welcome back then. So that’s one vote for the “after” parts. I think you will like the “during” parts even better soon too. What a tease I am… Hmmm… maybe throwing coconuts at Xander could be a challenge. I’ll take it under advisement. Thanks.



littlecrazy80 – Thanks. Glad you liked Ariel and the explanation.



willlovestara – Yes, that makes perfect sense. I’m glad it works for you. Initially I was just going to write the jungle part but then got the brainstorm to mix them and I like it so much better. Yes, Kent is awesome. Thanks.



tarawhipped – Hey Cam, Exactly! I am trying to introduce the reader to W/T and their history as W/T learn about each other too. Of course they “may or may not” have had some interaction on the island but still… I always worry with something like the explanation that it can’t be too explicit or it violates rules but it was necessary to explain. I think Tara is definitely over her trepidation about Willow’s past. She’s pretty much head-over-heels too.



Interesting theory about W meeting Kent. We’ll see… (insert Bwah ha ha laugh here).

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Re: Survivor - Ash Island

Postby DarkWiccan » Sat Apr 09, 2005 9:03 pm

Okay.. I've waited far too long to say something... so now I'm saying it... THIS FIC TOTALLY ROCKS!!!



I hate reality TV with a passion heretofore unseen... but I am totally loving this storyline!



I feel so bad for Team Akathla, they are so getting their asses kicked.



Meanwhile, M'Fashnek is totally benefitting from Tara's crunchy granola goodness.



And the interplay between W/T post-filming is awesome! Ariel is just plain cute!



As for a demon name for the combined tribes.... hmmmm....let's see... there's the "Bezoar" from "Bad Eggs", ... then there's "Kulak" from "Homecoming", ... then there's "The Sisterhood of Jhe", from "The Zeppo", though I guess if you were to use that, you'd have to cut it down to just the "Jhe Tribe"... then "Balthazar" from "Bad Girls", ...then the "Mok'tagar" from "Living Conditions"... (can you tell yet that I don't have a life?)...hmm... then "Gachnar" the leeetle fear demon from "Fear Itself"...then "Vahrall", from "Doomed"... "Polgara" from "I in Team"... "Toth" from "The Replacement", ... "Lei-Ach" from "Family" ... (let me know if at any point I become annoying) ... aaaand... that's all I can think of right now.



I'm just tossing these out for you... I'd have to say that my faves as far as tribe names go would be "Mok'Tagar" or "Lei-Ach".



Well.. happy choosing!



Cheers

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Re: Survivor - Ash Island

Postby Tempest Duer » Sun Apr 10, 2005 12:27 am

This fic rocks my socks. I can't wait to see what has so surprised everyone that they all have shocked expressions on their faces and gasp.

I got bitten by a drunk lesbian! Does that mean I'll turn into one?



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Re: Survivor - Ash Island

Postby hidden watson » Sun Apr 10, 2005 8:57 am

Hiya, I'm back from vacation. So much to catch up, so many updates, yippee! Sorry sorry, not usually behaving like a 12 year old, but I want to preserve what's left of my vacation feeling until I have to face work and hundreds of emails waiting for me tomorrow, yuck.



What can I say that the other readers haven't said already? You know, I'm normally lucky enough to catch an update soon after you post so I can get my comments in early, but reading the others' comments re-affirms something for me -- this format of interlacing Episodes with post-Island progression of their relationship really really works. It's like a jigsaw, a mosiac, where I know there's a whole picture eventually, but different parts are revealed a little at a time, the anticipation level is very high. It's not easy to write like that, but you've done it.



The getting to know each other Q&A, reminds me of Paths, in Willow's hotel room, when they had the funny hat, that brought them a step closer too. That was so sweet.



Still hints and asides about what happened on the island. Interesting to note T's mention of a bamboo shelter, "having some better things to do at night", even W having met Kent before, all intriguing morsels you've left for us to chew over.



And of course copious amounts of smoochies that made me very very happy :) I had been wondering how their sleeping arrangements will be, the first time one of them visited and stayed overnight. Willow's heartfelt confession to a sound asleep Tara, and then simply sleeping on the living room floor, that took any awkwardness away, but felt so natural, so sweet. Did Tara hear any part of Willow's speech, I wonder?



Finally, I'm glad Willow and Ariel bonded. Ariel is a total cutie, so no surprise there.

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Re: Survivor - Ash Island

Postby NicTacToe » Sun Apr 10, 2005 1:10 pm

Just wanted to let you know that I have been enjoying this story. I've never seen a whole episide of Survivor, but I've seen enough clips to know you're doing a great job recreating the atmosphere of the show. Very well written! Looking forward to more!



-Nik

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Survivor - Ash Island

Postby JustSkipIt » Sun Apr 10, 2005 7:33 pm

DarkWiccan – Hey There! So I’m finally getting feedback from the famous DW? I don’t think I’ve ever seen your sig in my thread before (or I missed it which doesn’t bode well for my credibility). Anyway, I guess I need to ask naming questions to hear from you. Thanks for posting and your kind words. I thought I would hate Reality TV but actually… I don’t. I find it kind of fascinating. It’s like, you know how you feel that your own life is interesting and exciting and engrossing? Well Reality TV is proof that everyone thinks that (and that they are all right). For me: Amazing Race and Survivor are my favorites and The Apprentice is rising up the charts with a bullet these days.



Yeah: Akathla really sucks but I don’t feel sorry for them because they’re so darn self-destructive. And yes, MFashnek definitely enjoys Tara’s unique skill set.



Your demon name suggestions are great. I particularly lean toward Toth because of the entire conversation in the MB: “swept majestically out… indifference…” “Toth: it means like idiot. No, Toth, as in Toth.” (Obviously not going back to the scripts but I love that entire interchange). Actually right now I’m leaning toward a non-demon name. My hint: AH says it in my favorite BtVS episode.



Tempest Duer – Cool: rocked socks. I have my next update ready to post but to tell the very self-absorbed truth… A friend is hosting a new Ashvatar for me and I’m waiting to post the story with the new Ashvatar.



hidden Watson – Hey. Welcome back (not to here of course but back to your area). How was vacation? Austrialia right? Hope it was great and I don’t envy your e-mails. Arggghhh!



You’re right that it’s very different to comment first or last on a story.
Quote:
this format of interlacing Episodes with post-Island progression of their relationship really really works.
You can’t believe how relieved I am that that is true. When I had my inspiration I really had no doubts but that usually results in either genius or madness, you know? I’m glad that it works so well. I’m trying to not make the entire thing a puzzle but not give away too much either. I think that most assumptions can be made well and pretty accurately from the “after” pieces.



Interesting note about Paths. I certainly didn’t intend it like that but I guess it makes sense. I guess any “getting to know you” kind of works like that. Unless you’re a person who launches into long personal stories (because otherwise I don’t know what to say), you kind of have to ask questions to fill the spaces.



Yes, you’re right about the morsels and I think you picked each of them up. Well done. Sorry to say Tara heard nothing but there’s plenty of time for heartfelt confessions. Yeah: Willow and Ariel are great together. Thanks for your feedback.



NicTacToe – Cute name. :wave Welcome. I’m glad you’re liking the story. More to come. Thanks.

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Edited by: JustSkipIt at: 4/11/05 4:15 am
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Re: Survivor - Ash Island

Postby ExtraFlameyWT » Sun Apr 10, 2005 8:16 pm

Ooh Ooh...a hint! Now...all you have to do is tell is what your favorite BtVS episode is! ;)



Aimee who is now going to sulk because she thought there was an update... :D

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Survivor - Ash Island

Postby JustSkipIt » Mon Apr 11, 2005 5:29 am

Aimee – No more sulking. Here’s the update plus…


Title – Survivor – Ash Island

Part 14 – Week 6

Author – JustSkipIt

Pairing – Who do you think? (W/T of course)

Feedback – Oh yes.

Spoilers–None

Ratiing – G to PG

Disclaimer – I own none of these characters nor do I own Survivor. And believe it or not, I also don’t own any small islands. On the other hand, this island is fictional so let’s say I own it. I’m making no money from this fiction and intend no copyright infringement.

Mad Props – To Washi for creating and hosting the new Ashvatar! Thank you so much.



Akathla Camp – Day 15
The four remaining Akathla members drink water and eat a bit of rice in the morning. “I wonder when the merge will happen,” Mac muses.

“Can’t happen soon enough?” Willow snaps, her sensitive nerves making evident the toll the game takes.

“I’m just saying,” Mac tries to defend his comment, “that we’re down to 10 players. That’s about when they usually merge the tribes.”

“Plus which you want to get your scheming self out of here?” Xander asks.

“I’m not sure I’m the schemer around here,” Mac says. Frustrated he stands up and walks off. Xander the does the same leaving Willow and Buffy sitting at the fire.

Confessional Caption – Willow – Software Startup Owner
“The ranks are definitely breaking down around here,” she smiles. “What I can’t believe is that I didn’t think of turning Mac on the other two. I mean who would have thought Buffy had the scheming in her. Makes me very glad I’m in her alliance rather than the other side.”

Confessional Caption – Buffy – College Student
Buffy is ostensibly gathering wood but she talks to the camera as she does so. “Well, I don’t want to toot my own horn but that went really well. Oz never knew what hit him. Xander cut his own throat with Mac and Mac helped the two of us get rid of a weak link.”

MFashnek Camp – Day 15
Richard and Kendra gather firewood. “Kendra,” Richard tells her sweetly, “I think you’re walking on the wrong side of this thing. You could come with us and we’ll take you to the final four.” Kendra looks at him but doesn’t say anything.

Faith, Tara, and Robin use the fishing hooks to try to catch fish. They have about 4 small fish piled on a rock and are using berries as bait. They work in silence as Joyce can be seen tending the fire.

Confessional Caption – Tara – Medical Receptionist/Aspiring Artist
“I really w-wonder who Akathla voted off. “ She seems to show some upset and worry about the question. She takes a deep breath and says, “I never expected this to be like this. I’m r-really tired. I could use a day off.”

As if Tara’s wish has come true, we see that the teams do, in fact have the day off. We see various shots of competitors lying around their shelters, swimming or bathing, or even napping throughout the day.

Night falls and we see the MFashnek team eating their rice and beans as they sit around the campfire. Of all things, they appear to be playing Charades. Robin motions with his arms and pantomimes running across the sand, picking something from his feet, and shooting. “Butch and Sundance,” Joyce screams; “Terminator 1,” Kendra calls out; “Die Hard,” Faith yells. When Robin indicates that she is right, she slaps high fives all around before taking her turn at acting out the next clue.

Confessional Caption – Joyce – Art Gallery Owner
We see everyone else asleep in the shelter or around the fire. Joyce whispers to the camera. “For a day that started so badly, this ended up well. I think we really needed this, not only for the break from the ‘game’ but for the chance to reconnect.”

MFashnek Camp – Day 16
“We’ve got mail,” Tara and Kendra call as they carry the mail back from the tree. The two girls lay down pieces of a small boat puzzle. Once assembled, the boat has a message written on it in black ink.

Akathla Camp – Day 16
“Teamwork and strength may guarantee that you are safe for the day at least,” Willow read from the puzzle.

“Why do you think it says ‘may’?” Willow asks.

“I really don’t know,” Xander says thoughtfully.

MFashnek Camp – Day 16
Confessional Caption – Faith – Personal Trainer
“I’ll tell you this. I’m not thrilled that the tree mail said may. I mean what does that mean?”

Confessional Caption – Richard – Small-Town Mayor
“I’ll tell you what. Everyone over here is wondering what this tree mail means. I don’t really care what it means. We have the strength and the smarts over here. We’ll win this tree-mail and then pick off the Akathlas,” he sneers the name, “one by one.”

Immunity Challenge
The Akathla and MFashnek teams enter simultaneously to take their places on their mats. Jeff takes the immunity idol back from MFashnek and holds up a canvas bag. “Ok,” Jeff says, “today up for grabs are these two items.” He holds them up. “I think you all know the immunity idol.” The players of course all nod their heads.

Jeff continues, “This bag contains a reward that could and probably will change the game in a very important way. Today we will have two races. The first is for team immunity. The second for reward. The winner of reward will put him or herself in a position of power which will be very important in this game.” The competitors look around somewhat confused at the statement and finally nod their heads.

Jeff points to the water. A few hundred feet out two rafts are tethered in place, one for each team. Also in the water are 12 floating shapes, six for each team. “The six pieces you see, when assembled, will form a boat. One at a time, players will swim from the raft to bring a piece back. Then you can assemble your boat,” he explains. “Because Akathla has only four players, two of you will retrieve two pieces.” Everyone nods their heads.

“Once the boat is assembled,” he continued, “you will use the paddles to row toward the shore. MFashnek, two members of your team will not row but will stay on the raft. Which two members will not row?”

Again, Richard and Joyce raise their hands.

“The first team who has the four rowers reach their mat will win the challenge and the chance to win the reward,” he says.

Next we see the team members all standing on their rafts waiting for Jeff to shout his “Go!” At his shout, it becomes apparent that the teams have decided on different strategies. Joyce is the first person into the water for the MFashnek team, while Mac goes first for Akathla. She swims to the closest piece, quickly unclipping it and pushing it back while he swims for the farthest.

“The two teams employing different strategies,” Jeff comments, “Joyce is returning with the first MFashnek piece while Mac is still swimming to his.” Joyce pushes her piece to the raft as Kendra dives off, swimming for a far piece. She passes the older gentleman on her way and he pushes his piece to the Akathla raft as Buffy dives off to get the next farthest piece. Akathla’s strategy of allowing Buffy and Mac to swim first so they can rest appears to work well for them as they are slightly in the lead following Willow and Xander’s swims, in comparison to Joyce, Kendra, Tara, and Robin’s swims.

When the two strongest members of Akathla have to take their second swims, they begin to fall behind as first Richard and then Faith retrieve their pieces. MFashnek is slightly in the lead as they begin assembling their boat. Once again, Willow’s puzzle-solving ability comes in useful as her team returns with all their pieces approximately ten seconds behind the MFashnek team. Because of the difficulty the MFashnek team has assembling their boat and disagreements between Richard and Faith over which slats to slide in place first, both teams complete their boats simultaneously.

As soon as the boats are complete, Robin helps Tara onto the MFashnek boat followed by Kendra and Faith before pushing the MFashnek boat out from the raft and leaping to the back of the boat. At the same time, Mac helps Willow onto the boat before Buffy, Xander, and he take their positions. Joyce and Richard cheer from the MFashnek raft as the eight players on the boats begin to row.

Both teams row hard for the shore as Mac and Robin use their position to keep them on target. About half-way between the raft and the shore, MFashnek pulls slightly ahead, spurring both teams to row harder. However, the greater strength of the MFashnek team is just too much for Akathla. The stronger team reaches the shore and stumbles to their mat, collapsing in exhaustion. The Akthala team valiantly finishes the race, collapsing on their mat about ten seconds behind the MFashnek team.

As both teams recover from their energy expenditure, Jeff waits for Joyce and Richard to swim to the shore and hands Robin the immunity idol. After giving MFashnek time to recover. Jeff announces that it is time to compete for the reward.

He points to the six small boats on the shore and explains that each participant will race their boat. They will row to the raft, go around it, and return to shore. Each participant has a flag on a pole behind the MFashnek mat. The first person to return and raise his or her flag will win the challenge and gain the powerful reward. He holds up a canvas bag and indicates the key to the reward is in the bag.

At his command all six MFashnek players run to their boats. Robin and Kendra reach theirs first and begin pushing them into the water, jumping in and starting to paddle. Faith is next, followed by Tara, Joyce, and finally Richard. All six begin paddling their hardest with Robin taking a slight lead. Kendra is right behind him and Tara surprisingly passes Faith to move into third place. By the time they are half-way to the raft, it is apparent that Richard has no chance and he stops paddling to float in the water. The other five players race furiously toward the raft with Robin and Kendra reaching it first with Tara close behind. While Kendra smoothly negotiates the turn-around by reaching her hand out to pivot on the edge of the raft, Robin has more trouble. The front of his boat hits the edge of the raft, knocking him off course. He is passed by Tara who sees Kendra’s technique and similarly uses the raft to turn around.

Although Robin recovers to quickly overtake both Faith and Tara again, he can not catch up to Kendra who has gained a few precious yards of lead. Kendra reaches the shore ahead of Robin, Faith, Tara, and Joyce and jumps from her boat to raise her flag before again collapsing on the mat. The others follow quickly and also collapse in exhaustion.

Jeff allows the participants to recover before he congratulates Kendra and asks her to join him. He holds up the canvas bag and instructs the players to, “Drop your buffs.” Everyone is obviously shocked but does as he says.

He hands Kendra the bag and announces, “I told you this bag contained a reward for the person who won it.” She reaches into the bag and pulls out five buffs of each color. “You can distribute those however you want,” he says.

Kendra looks at the buffs now in her hand and then looks up at all the players. Quickly she ties the MFashnek buff around her arm and walks over to hand the next two buffs to Tara and Faith simultaneously. Both girls breathe a sigh of relief. “A familiar group,” Jeff comments.

Next she takes a step back and looks at the remaining players. Quickly she walks over and hands two Akathla buffs to Mac and Xander before again surveying the group. Returning to the MFashnek mat she hands a MFashnek buff to Robin and an Akathla buff to Richard.

Confessional Caption – Robin – High School Principal
“I was pretty worried about what Kendra would do with her day of power. It’s getting close to merge and she could easily have cut me loose. I’m impressed that she kept me around but suspicious that she just wants to work me until they vote me off.”

Confessional Caption – Willow – Software Startup Owner
“It was nerve-racking, let me tell you, waiting there for Kendra to decide who would be on which team. I mean on one hand, if she puts me on the MFashnek team, they’ll get rid of me as soon as they can but on the other hand, my time may be running short with Akathla.” She smiles sweetly: “Plus which, being on MFashnek would give me a little time to get to know Tara.”

Taking a deep breath, Kendra walks over and hands a MFashnek buff to Willow, leaving Akathla buffs for Joyce and Buffy.

“Welcome to your new teams!” Jeff announces. “Akathla, I’ll see you tonight at tribal council.” The teams walk toward their camps.

We see both teams walking back to their camps. “Thanks, Kendra,” Willow tells the young woman before dropping to walk next to Tara. “Maybe you can show me around your camp,” she says flirtatiously, “your shelter, where you eat, where you sleep.”

Tara blushes at Willow’s intimation but nods that she can certainly be the redhead’s guide.

Akathla Team
The team walks back to camp quietly. The tone is obviously uncomfortable and suspicious until Buffy apparently decides to welcome the new team members. “Welcome to Akathla camp,” she says before showing the newcomers the camp and offering to let them use the bathing products.

Confessional Caption – Richard – Small-Town Mayor
“Well, I’ll tell you what. This little girl, Kendra, really messed with me and Joyce. I think this will come back to bite her though when those others turn on her. In the meantime, Joyce and I just need to get one of these kids on our side.”

We see Richard approach Mac and Xander on the sand to talk to them. “Buffy seems like a threat,” he tells them openly.

“She’s strong,” the two men agree.

Joyce drinks water at the fire. She stands up and walks toward the woods and Buffy follows a few minutes later. As soon as the two women are sure they aren’t being watched they embrace in a long hug. “How are you?” both ask simultaneously. They have an obviously joyous reunion, followed by whispering.

We see Richard approach Joyce as Buffy, Xander, and Mac fish. “Joyce,” he says, “the guys are with me. We can vote off this girl: Buffy tonight.”

Joyce nods.

Akathla Tribal Council
The new Akathla team enters and takes their seats. “Welcome,” Jeff intones. “So how are things at camp?”

“It’s nice to see the new camp,” Richard reports, “we’re hoping to make some friends to add to our existing friends.”

“Buffy,” Jeff asks, “do you think everyone would have tried harder if you had known how important this challenge was?”

“Jeff,” Buffy answers seriously, “I think we all worked to exhaustion out there today. Nothing could make us any stronger than we are, no matter what the reward. The chance to avoid tribal council is enough of an incentive to give 100%.”

“That sounds like you think your head is on the block,” Jeff says.

“There are only five of us here,” Buffy answers, “everyone is in danger.”

“What about you Mac?” Jeff directs his next question, “are people thinking about merge and your strength in winning individual immunity?”

“They could be,” Mac answers non-committally, “but I’d think we’d be thinking more of our team loyalty.” We see Richard and Joyce frown at that statement.

“Let’s just see,” Jeff says, “Joyce you vote first.”

Joyce votes and we don’t see her vote. Buffy is next and she writes down “Richard” and addresses the camera: “Richard, you can’t just come in and try to get rid of me. Bye.” Xander, Mac, and Richard follow the blonde.

Jeff gets the bucket and returns with the ballots. “I’ll read the votes,” he declares. “First vote: Buffy.” No one looks surprised at the vote nor at the following one for Richard. “One vote, Buffy. One vote, Richard,” Jeff recaps. “Richard,” he reads and Richard looks a little surprised. When he reads another vote for Richard, it is clear to the man that Joyce sold him out and that Mac and Xander both lied to him. He has his torch snuffed out and leaves the area. The Akathla team returns to their camp.

Parting Words – Richard
Richard looks at the camera as he speaks: “Well, Joyce, I thought we were in it until the end. I don’t know why you sold me out but you did. You’re still my wish to win it all so good luck!”

Next week on Survivor – Ash Island
Voice-over – “New friendships start.” A shot of Tara and Willow talking as they pick plantains.

Voice-over – “Alliances questioned.” Faith asking Tara, “Are you still in this alliance?”

Voice-over – “Tempers flare.” Robin telling the four girls in MFashnek: “I don’t want to just work hard and let you win the challenges. I want a chance to win it.”

Voice-over – “And secrets at Akathla.” Xander telling Joyce and Buffy, “You two are not telling us something!”

Next Week on Survivor – Ash Island


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Survivor - Ash Island

Postby JustSkipIt » Mon Apr 11, 2005 5:30 am

Part 15 - The Early Show

Harry stands by the Survivor Early Show set with Richard next to him. The older man is dressed like a typical politician in a suit and is smiling into the camera. “Welcome, Richard Wilkins,” Harry greets the Survivor cast-off and shakes his hand.

“Hi, Harry, glad to be here,” Richard answers.

“We’re here with the seventh cast-off from Survivor – Ash Island,” Harry intones. “Richard, how was it being on the island?”

“Well, Harry,” Richard says, “it’s harder than I can describe. Not just because you’re on an island with no shelter or food. It’s also harder because you’re there with a bunch of people you don’t know and who will cut your throat for a dollar.”

“That’s quite an attitude,” Harry responds.

“It’s the truth,” Richard tells him.

“It’s no secret from watching the show so far that you didn’t really get along with Faith,” Harry says.

“You know, Harry,” Richard responds, “when you go on this type of show, you are presented with a lot of different people. Some are people you can get along with and respect and some are less respectable.”

“That sounds like a very nice way to say you don’t like her,” Harry jokes.

“You could say that,” Richard agrees.

“Yet it was Kendra who manufactured your exit,” Harry suggests.

“Those girls think with one brain,” Richard says, “if Kendra did it, Faith and Tara were behind it.”

“Did you have any inkling that you were going to be voted off?” Harry asks. “It seemed like a surprise for you.”

“Harry,” Richard answers, “it was a complete surprise for me. I had no idea that Joyce and Buffy knew each other at all, let alone that they are mother and daughter.”

“And it wasn’t a pleasant surprise for you,” Harry leads.

“You know,” Richard answers, “going on one of these shows, you expect people to lie to you. I was just caught way off guard about this particular one.”

“Ok,” Harry says, “that’s Richard Wilkins, the seventh person voted off Survivor – Ash Island.”


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Re: Survivor - Ash Island

Postby hidden watson » Mon Apr 11, 2005 8:24 am

Hey, nice to be back. Yeah, it was Australia for vacation and it was really great, despite the long flight. And of course nice to be back at my early commenting perch.



What an episode, the Producers (that's you :) ) outdid themselves: a team IC followed immediately by a cut-throat personal challenge and then the corporate reshuffle! Did you work in a large, impersonal, political organization in a past life or something :P (no? I do.) Richard really played his cards wrong this time and I'm full of grudging admiration for Joyce. She's the scheming one isn't she? I know she is probably aware that eventually she'll be in danger cos of her age and physical fitness level, I guess she'll be actively trying to pave the way for Buffy.



Well, Xander survives another tribal council, honestly I can't wait for him to leave, he's quickly becoming extraneous. Richard, on the other hand, is one bitter dude and the bitterness spills over to the Early Show Interview, even though it takes place many months after he got booted. Good-bye Mayor Wilkins, don't come back as a giant snake, okay?



The F/K/T alliance holds strong, but how long can they last? Will the addition of Willow upset the balance, as her budding relationship with Tara becomes clear to Faith and Kendra, I have a feeling four's too many for that camp.



No W/T smoochies, but like Bogey said in Casablanca, "I think this is the beginning of a beautiful friendship."



Edited to add: how faboulous is the new Ashvatar?! He's sooooo cute. Is he walking steps already?

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Edited by: hidden watson at: 4/11/05 7:53 am
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Re: Survivor - Ash Island

Postby Still Waters T » Mon Apr 11, 2005 10:10 am

YES Richard's OUT! :banana That guy was soo annoying. Talking and scheming behind almost everyone's back, thinking he was all great for the team, doing his bit to win the challenges, blah! :sigh Annoying. Good riddance. :stop :D



Quote:
“Thanks, Kendra,” Willow tells the young woman before dropping to walk next to Tara. “Maybe you can show me around your camp,” she says flirtatiously, “your shelter, where you eat, where you sleep.”


lol nice going of Willow the player, making Tara blush and all :p Too cute - a blushing Tara. :D Hope Willow will fit right in with the group. :) Even though she's not of the best physically; with her brains, she could make the team stronger.



I'm kinda sad to see Willow and Buffy on competing teams now, but YAY Willow and Tara on the same team finally! :smug So I'm happy about that, and I'm also glad Buffy and Joyce can be on the same team now. :)



Asher is so cute! :D And I just came home from a neighbour's. She has a little 5 month old boy - he's soo cute too. :) Kids are just awww, aren't they? :D



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Re: Survivor - Ash Island

Postby ExtraFlameyWT » Mon Apr 11, 2005 10:35 am

Woo hoo! I was so excited that I had this waiting for me when I got up this morning...it actually made me late to class. :D I don't care though...it was worth it. Thanks so much for updating. And I agree with Still Waters...NO MORE RICHARD! *does little dance of happiness* Alright, thank you again!



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Re: Survivor - Ash Island

Postby stillrunning » Mon Apr 11, 2005 11:26 am

Woot for Richard getting booted. That makes me happy:) As does Tara and Willow being on the same team! I almost did a little dance for that!! Can't wait for more.

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Re: Survivor - Ash Island

Postby Artemis » Mon Apr 11, 2005 12:03 pm

Okay, I'll admit it, you got me - I'm not just in it for the Buffy characters anymore, I'm on the edge of my seat with all the politicking and scheming :D



Willow being switched to the other team is an interesting development. On the one hand, she's vulnerable - she's an outsider, and with the already-formed 3.5-member alliance in MFashnek (Tara, Faith, Kendra, and sort of Robin), one more is too much if there's voting to be done. No surprise to see from the preview of next episode that Robin's worried about his position. However close Willow and Tara become, Faith and Kendra aren't going to keep Willow just for her sake. On the other hand, it's easy to see why Kendra chose Willow - her problem-solving skills. This episode wasn't the first time Willow's put the Akathlas on an almost-even footing with their more physically proficient opponents in a puzzle-type challenge - Willow's a valuable gal for whichever team (or alliance, after the merge) has her. Though if that's what Kendra had in mind, it might have been a risky move - good for the team, but not so much for Kendra herself perhaps. Faith's got her gung ho leadership (now that Dick's not there to dick around) and physical skills, Tara's got her elite shamaness skills, and is fit and smart in the physical challenges too, and Willow's got the brainpower - if I were Kendra, I'd be worried about being seen as Faith's back-up - disposable. From all but Tara's point of view, bringing Willow in may have looked smart, but it could cause trouble in the long run.



On the other side of the fence, you absolutely had me on edge trying to guess what would happen in the new Akathla team. I had two possible scenarios in mind - one, which happened, Joyce was double-crossing Richard - yay! :D The other was that Joyce would immediately bring Buffy into the alliance with herself and Richard, and clear out Mac and Xander with weight of numbers. I was worried for a moment that, with Buffy following Joyce's lead, Richard might have been around to bug me longer.



However Joyce is one smart woman - I guess she knows that there's not much room for slowpokes, and Richard was obviously not pulling his weight physically in the challenges. And he'd antagonised the other MFashneks - had she stuck with him, they might both have been ousted once the merge happened. Easy to see where Buffy gets her scheming from. They're a dangerous pair, then, and I wouldn't bet on Xander or Mac against them.



I still think that Joyce and Buffy might be in a difficult position come merge time though. Willow knows Buffy's a schemer, Tara knows the same of Joyce - if word reaches them, through Max or Xander, about how she did over Richard, and her bond with Buffy (will they discover it, or just suspect?), the slightly unwieldly Faith-Kendra-Tara-Willow-maybe Robin group might close ranks long enough to oust both of them.



Or will Joyce go but Buffy remain, and rejoin Willow? If Kendra looks vulnerable, or she and Faith get leery of Tara spending time with Willow, Tara may side with Willow and Buffy after the merge, and they might offer Robin a better deal than he's been getting from Faith, which could spell doom for Faith and Kendra :hmm Lots to think about... I know Richard said Faith, Tara and Kendra think with one brain, but how much longer will that be the case?



See, I can't help myself, you got me... If this were on TV I'd definitely be taping every episode. Now more than ever, with the prospect of prolonged Willow/Tara time :heart CBS's editorial policies be damned, bring on the smoochies!



Cute Ashvatar, too :)

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