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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby Darth Pacula » Tue Jul 18, 2006 2:22 am

G'day, Alcy! :wave

Pardon the regrettable lateness of this feedback. Once more, life has run away with me.

I like the morbid humor with which Tara notes the freshly dead corpse in her room. It's very appropriate for anyone in law enforcement, and even more so for a world-weary ex-cop/con like Tara, especially in the world of Sin City, where life is cheap as chips.

Faith's reaction is also spot on in regards to the environment in which your cast resides. Such casual acceptance of an unexpected corpse, and even annoyance with it, is to be expected. You don't survive in such a place by staying innocent and sheltered. Even if Willow has seemed to retain much of those features.

Tara's detective work aside, I have to wonder about the shot that killed that planted cop. Was he killed earlier, and dumped in such a fashion as to make Anya think she'd killed him? Or was he shot from behind? Both options present their own problems from a ballistics point of view, but given the corrupt nature of the Bay City PD, I wouldn't expect a thorough or unbiased investigation.

At least Talbot Jr isn't like his Yellow Bastard counterpart; Jr's stuck in a car. Which just makes me wish for a rocket or grenade launcher. :devil

And isn't that just a typical declaration of love, Sin City style? At least we won't need any of Marv's methods of proving his love, such as it was. Definitely no need for vengeance here, right?

I was almost expecting the cliche of the sirens cutting out at just the right moment to make shouting redundant, but this isn't that kind of story, is it. Less with the puns, and more with the stylized violence. Which I also like. :devil

And cue the assault ...

Great work, Alcy. Can't wait for the next part!

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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby Alcy » Thu Jul 20, 2006 3:26 am

Before you all get excited this is not an update...sowwy!

It's come to the point where I actually have to do some work on my masters so I'm writing the world's most boring essay on research methodologies at the moment :sleep

I will be back to update Sin City and R & R as soon as I get it out of the way early next week.


Much love to all!

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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby JustSkipIt » Thu Jul 20, 2006 4:36 am

world's most boring essay


When I was in graduate school, I had to write a 20 page paper on evidence of leprosy in the 15th century. So while I feel for you, I'd have to really question whether your claim to the world's most boring essay is actually valid...
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby PancakesinBellies » Thu Jul 20, 2006 6:15 am

Y'know, leprosy in the 15th century sounds interesting to me. Course, that probably just says more about me than anything else. ;) I'll just have to add that to my 'reasons why I'm a medievalist' list.

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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby Alcy » Sat Aug 19, 2006 5:29 pm

Hi all! Terriby sorry again for the lack of updatedyness but sadly our little dog died last Tuesday from complications arising after her c-section to deliver her pups, 1 pup died as well and we are hand-raising the remaining pup. So it's hard work and I haven't done much writing in the past week. The chapter is coming along slowly though so it will get finished soon
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby db » Sat Aug 19, 2006 9:14 pm

Alcy -

I am so sorry for your loss.

No pressure.

Your little puppy comes first.

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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby WillowRulez » Sun Aug 20, 2006 3:18 pm

I'm sorry about your dog. I know how hard it is to lose a beloved pet.
Take your time and make sure the little pup will be a strong dog one day :smash
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby JustSkipIt » Sun Aug 20, 2006 6:37 pm

Alcy,
So sorry to hear about your doggie.
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby beanie » Sun Aug 20, 2006 6:44 pm

There's not much I can say over here, but I hope your doggie lived a wonderfully happy life. And remember dogs DO go to heaven. Only goats go to hell.

So hi Alcy's dog. Hope you're chillin like a villain. :wave
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby PancakesinBellies » Mon Aug 21, 2006 5:22 am

Oh, I'm so sorry about your dog. Everyone else is right, you just worry about your puppy. We can wait.
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby willohand » Mon Aug 21, 2006 2:56 pm

:whistle okay still trying to not go all crazy and send you a nutty reply
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby Alcy » Wed Aug 23, 2006 1:53 pm

Now for the feedback I missed out on...

ringwaldoeuvre: Hi Mary, thanks for stopping by to tell me how much you’re enjoying Sin City and making my head swell by your kind words about my other fics as well!

You might have noticed that I love dark tones and moods, one day I’ll write a straight comedy (although WYTN? was supposed to be a comedy!)
The next update will be ready in moments, sorry for the long wait.

Artemis: I have to say I was a little worried about the 'I fucking love you' s but they seem to have come across okay which is all that matters, and I’ve always thought that they did seem appropriate to the environment.
Buffy is weirdly cool isn’t she…and I neve thought I’d be saying that in relation to Buffy…ever. And Talbot Jnr will get his just desserts in the end, courtesy of one of our leading ladies I’m sure.

Tara doesn’t strike me as someone who would have ever given much thought to the future, as a cop she probably didn’t bother seeing past her current assignment, and in prison she wouldn’t have thought past surviving the current day. Now everything has changed and she is going to be forced to look at the things shes ignored all her life. Although I wouldn’t expect any prolonged planning of buying cute cottages and making babies, this is still Sin City!
Bring on the shooting!

cantbefredless: Thanks very much for reading and enjoying, glad to hear you enjoyed Sin City the movie although you are right, it’s lacking a certain couple of characters that would make it ten times better (although I did read that Angelina Jolie is going to be in the sequel!)

Darth Pacula: Hi Paul, you’re indeed pardoned for your lateness with feedback, especially given that I’m incredibly late posting the next part!

I love morbid humour, I never fail to laugh at it in a movie, I think it slots in quite well with my cynical, sarcastic sense of humour. And while the throwaway nature of life in Sin City does not need to be emphasises, events like this one do draw it to the forefront, nobody knows and nobody cares who this guy is…its just the way of it in action movies! All those redshirts! And like you say regarding Tara’s detective work, I don’t think anyone really cares about establishing exactly what happened at the crime scene…where are the CSI guys when you need them!

I don’t think any of the Ladies are innocent and sheltered, even Willow, although the others have tried to shield her as much as possible. To shield her completely would be putting her life in danger.

Yes, Talbot Jnr is pretty much wheelbound…also makes you wish for a tank or a monster truck to do a spot of car crushing!

Can’t guarantee there won’t be vengeance of some sort..as Sin City does seem to thrive on the stuff. Although you can be rest assured that no Kittenboard Golden rules will be harmed during the production of this fic!

Stylised violence is what Sin City’s all about, I hope it comes across as convincingly in the fic as it does on screen…cue the assault indeed!

And thanks ever so much to all the Kittens for your condolences about my dog, Olivia, as you can see from my avatar, she was somethin’ special.

I have managed to get the next chapter done, although please don’t be disappointed that I’ve reorganised things slightly and you’re going to have to wait for Chapter 10 for the ‘Private Dancing!’ Chapter 9 is a little shorter than I usually post, just getting it up on the boards to prove I’m still working hard!
Will post it as soon as it undergoes one last proof.

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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby Alcy » Wed Aug 23, 2006 4:54 pm

Chapter 9 – “One Hell of a Party.”

I’m paying too much attention to much attention to Willow for my own safety but lady luck’s on my side and the SWAT bastard catches his leg on the corner of a chair, losing balance. It’s enough for me to lunge forward and get both my hands on his weapon. We wrestle for it. As we struggle, I look into his eyes and see the fear plain enough. I know that it’s not the fear of a man who doesn’t want to die…but rather the fear of one who doesn’t want to miss out on his spoils of victory. My face morphs into a sneer and I press forward with all my strength.

Tara felt a sickening chatter course through her body as the weapon she fought over suddenly flared into life. The cop’s finger had jammed down on the trigger in the struggle and the weapon now rained potential death in all directions. Bullets slammed into the ceiling above and plaster fell in chunks on their heads. The few intact windowpanes behind the cop were smashed outwards. In a split second, it added a whole new element to their struggle. Tara struggled to keep the muzzle from pointing not only in her own direction, but also in any direction that it could potentially hit a Lady….or Willow.

She was so close to the SWAT guy, she saw the sweat dripping from beneath his helmet and felt the heat of his breath on her face. Every sensation was condensed, her limits of awareness contained within the space which they occupied. Tara felt her muscles bulge with effort, veins threatening to burst beneath her skin.

The gun slipped in sweaty hands, its muzzle falling in an arc to punch a neat trail of bullet holes in the nearby wall. The arc continued swiftly, although it seemed to Tara as though it were falling in slow motion. She knew that if it continued to spray the room as wildly as it was, something nasty would happen. A short screech of pain a split second later told her something had. The SWAT man’s hold on the trigger instantly relaxed and the gun’s potentially lethal chattering ceased. Tara found herself with the gun in her hands only, its smoking muzzle pointed directly at the bullet hole it had made in her opponents right foot. With the guy seconds away from hoping around madly like a one-legged chicken, Tara raised the butt of the weapon and struck him soundly on his temple. With barely a further sound he slipped to the floor and landed atop the broken glass.

Tara had no time whatsoever to rest on her victory, or attend to Willow, as the gun was smashed from her hands by a well placed foot. Her next opponent was fast, his fists raised and feet planted in a combat position before she could recover from his first blow. She didn’t even have time to snatch her Berettas from their twin holsters at her back before his fist connected with her face in a powerful blow. Tara’s head snapped backwards and she stumbled until her back slammed into the wall behind her. She barely had time to get a good look at her attacker before his next blow, all she saw was a cruel face twisted into a horrible approximation of a grin.

His fists fell in a flurry, knocking her head left and right as her vision blurred. Tara managed to push herself away from the wall only to be met instantly by a firmly planted foot in the middle of her chest. The air expelled from her lungs as she went flying to land with a thud on her back.

With all the resolution of one who had too much to lose to give into a two-bit SWAT man, Tara lashed out with her own leg in a swinging kick. Although it lacked power, it was unexpected enough to take him by surprise and knock him from his feet. Tara know full well he had expected her to be down and out for the count after the flurry of punches she had sustained. She somehow found enough strength to drag herself to her feet, letting out a small groan as she did. She knelt, trying to recollect her scattered consciousness. Blood dripped steadily from her nose to the carpet below. Tara followed one drop with her eyes, watching as it fell in slow motion, bright red, before making a small splash of colour on the floor below.

From the corner of her eye she saw her opponent rise to one knee and shake his head. When he lifted his gaze, Tara met it full on. Her confident, ice blue gaze stared him down. She stood first and he followed, neither seeming to be in a hurry to pounce.

Thoughts were running through Tara’s head like wildfire. She knew full well that she could draw both Beretta’s and pump him full of lead before he could even think about unslinging the weapon from his shoulder. Although she knew full well such a move could save her life, her hands did not move a hairsbreadth towards her guns. The thought of drawing the weapons and plugging the guy in full view of Willow caused her a discomfort she had never felt before. She could see the redhead from the corner of her eye, still beneath the table as the fight raged around her. She was still safe although her eyes were wide with fear.

Tara moved, her foot planted forward as she brought her right fist up in a powerful uppercut to his jaw. His head snapped back instantly and she did not give him a moment to recover, laying into him with several further blows. On the fourth, he managed to get in a weak block, enough to throw her off and merely graze the side of his helmet. This energized him and they traded blows back and forth, moving within a relatively small space of the room as Tara did her best to keep him as far away from Willow as possible. She saw a gap and shoved her knee up hard into his groin, he groaned and doubled over slightly. It was all the time she needed to perform a spinning roundhouse kick which caught him a cracking blow on the side of his helmet. He went straight to the ground and lay in a groggy heap beneath her.

“Behind you!” Willow’s voice barely registered over the sirens outside and the sounds of fighting inside but Tara’s ears picked up the familiar sound.

Despite the warning, all she had time to do was lift her own arms as thick, burly arms wrapped themselves around her neck in a chokehold. Tara managed to get her hands between his arms and her neck which instantly rendered his hold less effective. Even so, she felt the arm muscles that held her strain with effort, tightening their hold on her until she could barely squeeze a breath out.

Tara felt hot breath and stubble on her cheek as the SWAT officer leaned in close to gloat over the prize he held, “Gonna get me a nice little bonus for your arse

I struggle against the tree-like arm effectively cutting off my air supply, legs flailing and stomping the floor rather pathetically. To add to my humiliation his free hand travels down my body and he squeezes whatever flesh takes his fancy. I try to growl but with his hand across my throat all that emerges is a pathetic squeak. From my position, I can clearly see Willow emerging from her hiding place, one thing obviously on her mind…freeing me. Fuck knows what she’s thinking she’s going to be able to do with those tiny little mits of hers. I imagine her coming at him in all her fury, balled fists striking flesh to no effect. Sorry kiddo, but I’m not going to let you play hero…this guy’s mine…

Before Willow had even made up her mind as just how she was going to stop that great brute from strangling Tara to death, she watched as Tara moved in a blur of motion. Tara grabbed the guy’s great big groping paw in both hands and wrenched it backwards suddenly. A sickening crunch and a howl of pain followed immediately. This was followed just as quickly by Tara’s body moving in a twisting motion beneath his weakened grasp as she brought herself face to face with him.

One side of Tara’s lips curled upwards into an amused, lopsided smile when she saw the expression on her attacker’s face. His features were contorted in pain, eyes squeezed like a child struggling not to cry. Tara’s grin slid from her face to be replaced by a mask of business-like efficiency as she went to work on him. Her knee came up hard, ramming straight into his groin. Before he even had time to clutch his balls in agony, her fists were pounding into his face. The blows knocked him left and right.

He managed to get in one poorly timed swing which she ducked beneath effortlessly. She moved around his body where she delivered several short punches to his ribs. The SWAT man was no lightweight but by this stage he had dropped to his knees in front of Tara, a dazed ruin of his threatening self. Tara grabbed his head with both hands and held him upright, sneering at him in contempt,

“How do you like this piece of arse now?” she drawled.

She didn’t wait for a reply. Her knee rose once again, although this time it caught him full beneath the jaw and snapped his head back brutally. He was unconscious before he hit the floor.

Tara gave the crumpled heap of a man no more regard than a pile of steaming shit as she turned and searched out the one person she did give a damn about at that moment…Willow. No sooner has she spun around, than she found Willow. The young woman stood in the middle of the carnage, glass and bodies flying behind her and yet she was oblivious to everything except Tara. She stood awkwardly, the reason for this being the gun cradled in her hands and pointed in the general direction of Tara’s fallen assailant.

She had obviously retrieved the fallen weapon but her uncertainty was written plainly across her face. As soon as her eyes met Tara’s she threw it to the ground as though it were about to explode in her hands. She was still staring at the weapon when Tara tackled her bodily and threw her back against the small section of wall between the windows behind her.

“I told you to stay put!” Tara hissed angrily in Willow’s ear, running her hands over the redhead’s body to check for bullet holes or any other wounds. All she could find was a small cut on Willow’s neck from a piece of flying glass.

“That guy was strangling you to death!” Willow replied defiantly, green eyes flashing.

Tara glared in return, determined to have it out further with Willow but she was all too aware of their situation. She turned to face the chaos once more, shielding Willow with her body as she desperately searched for a way out for the redhead.

******

Police Captain Brewer listened intently to the melee of his men’s voices sounding through his earpiece. From where he observed the storming of the Palace on the street outside and listened to the chaotic reports from his SWAT team on the scene, events seemed to be proceeding less than satisfactorily. Those goddamn whores were putting up too much resistance, even in the face of his elite SWAT team. Brewer ground his teeth in frustration, wishing he could just set fire to the whole place and damn the consequences. Hell, he’d burn all of Old Town without blinking an eye and the cops would just have to find a new place to party.

Brewer felt a chill run down his spine, instinctively he looked over his shoulder. A shape moved behind him and he spun around to find Glory’s pet assassin bearing down on him. He sneered mockingly, to him characters like Spike had no place in law enforcement…even in Basin City. His gaze travelled over the peroxided hair, the white t-shirt and down over the leather coat billowing about his legs. Who the hell was he trying to impress?

Mocking thoughts of a similar vein continued through Brewer’s mind right up until the moment he died. Spike advanced on him, barely pausing in his stride as he reached out, grabbed Brewer’s head and snapped his neck. The pale assassin tossed the corpse into the gutter and continued to the tinted rear window of the black merc parked a safe distance from the fray.

The window punctured and shattered beneath his fist as it smashed straight through its centre. Even as glass showered the passenger inside, Spike was reaching through the opening to grab him by the front of his expensive wool suit and drag him effortlessly out. The weedy little man howled indignantly in protest as he emerged and was slammed back up against the car behind him. Spike sneered, his face just inches away from the other man’s.

The guy was skinny, even the expensive cut of his wool suit could not hide the fact that it hung on his frame. There was also something odd about his legs. Even though Spike held him a foot from the ground, they dangled at an odd angle and did not look as though they could support his insignificant weight.

He would have been handsome if not for his sagging, limp skin and hollow cheeks. Black hair hung in limp strands down to his shoulders. His delicate but sallow features were torn between an expression of outrage and one of terror.

“Little Tommy Talbot playing cop with the big boys now are we?” Spike spat in his face, his tone condescending and mocking.

“Goddammit Spike, this is my show…fuck off!” Talbot squeaked in a valiant effort to sound like he had balls.

Spike let out an irritated grunt and without warning released his hold on Talbot’s clothing. Talbot landed hard on his spindly legs and they instantly collapsed beneath him. His accompanying cry was ear piercing…clearly Talbot was unused to being treated like a piece of trash. Spike’s hand shot out once more and his fingers closed around Talbot’s jaw, keeping him pressed in a pathetic, crab-like pose against his merc’s car door. Tears of humiliation and pain ran down the face of Glory’s son.

“You damn well know that your mother handed the reins of this horse to me, Tommy! Do you or do you not understand that to be the way of things?”

Spike watched Talbot’s adam’s apple as he swallowed several times before he mumbled a reply, “I might have received a text message to that effect.”

Spike jammed his thumb further into Talbot’s throat, displeased with the answer, “I know for a fact your mother called you into her office and extracted a promise from you that you would leave this Maclay business to me…and don’t lie you little piece of cock-sucking shit because I listened in on that conversation and heard you say ‘yes mummy’ like the good little boy you are.”

Talbot sniffed and his eyes narrowed angrily, he succeeded in meeting Spike’s glare equally despite the disparity of their body positions.

“Tara Maclay is mine, my mother had no right to hand this over to you…I want that bitch flayed alive for what she did to me and then I want to claim what is rightfully mine…Willow Rosenberg!”

Spike glanced over his shoulder and up at the windows of the Palace. Smoke gushed from one and from another fell the flailing body of one of Brewer’s elite SWAT cops. The cop crashed down onto the roof of a squad car in a shower of sparks and glass.

Spike turned back to face Talbot, “Nice to see you’re doing such a bang up job, Tommy! Plant the body of a dead cop on the premises did you? Not personally of course because you aren’t even capable of climbing on top of a real woman.”

Talbot tried to lash out with his fists but was quickly stilled when Spike’s thumb dug in even harder.

“So what if I did,” he squeaked, “The cops are all greedy sons of bitches anyway…they didn’t even need the dead cop as motivation, I just flashed the cash!”

“Well call one of those greedy sons of bitches over here and get them to call off this fiasco…and I wouldn’t make it Brewer, you’ll find he’s not up to taking orders right now.”

Talbot began to stammer but Spike was deadly unsympathetic, “Do it you little fucker, otherwise your legs won’t be the only part of you that doesn’t work properly!”

******

Tara found herself clutching her upper arm as blood seeped from a bullet wound. Behind her she could hear Willow breathing heavily in either panic or terrified exhilaration. She gritted her teeth and stared down the barrel of the still smoking weapon that had torn a hole in her flesh. It’s owner, was anonymous beneath his helmet and goggles. Tara knew that would make killing him that little bit easier on her conscience but she had to get the drop on him first, he obviously had no problem with pumping her full of lead at the slightest provocation.

“Don’t fuckin’ move bitch, or I’ll put another bullet hole between your eyes this time!”

Tara doubted that, his superiors would probably shoot him if he took he out. Her death was most likely a pleasure reserved for a much bigger fish that this grunt.

“I’m unarmed,” Tara replied smoothly, there would be no begging from her.

Tara kept her gaze fastened securely on the SWAT grunt, determined to protect Willow with her own body if he opened fire again. As she watched him, she saw his head cock to one side as though he was listening to something coming through his earpiece. Tara risked a glance sideways and saw something odd happening with each of the cops. They were backing off and exiting via any aperture they could find, window, door, hole in the wall. She turned her full attention back to the cop in front of her to find he was also backing away. Once he had reached a door at his back, he turned and bolted.

The Ladies were left standing on the battlefield, surrounded by debris and bodies, some of which were still trying to crawl away. Faith reached down, grabbed one cop by the seat of his trousers and helped him out a nearby window. His scream was cut off by a dull thud into the pavement. The Lady wiped her hands before surveying the scene with a grief stricken expression. Several of her friends lay dead or wounded at her feet. She met Tara’s gaze across the room and the two hard women shared a brief moment, Faith’s eyes reassuring the ex-cop that she should not blame the deaths on her involvement with the Ladies.

Tara turned to face Willow.

“You’re bleeding,” was the redhead’s immediate and redundant statement, eyes fixed on the wound in Tara’s bare arm.

The ex-cop did not even spare the bullet wound a glance, “A scratch,” she replied abruptly, more concerned for the cut on Willow’s neck.

Willow noticed her looking and her reply was just as stoic, “A scratch.”

Tara would have smiled at the redhead if not for their present circumstances. As it was, she reached out and laid a gentle reassuring hand on Willow’s upper arm. She then moved to the window, peering cautiously around the ruined frame at the scene below. The cops were indeed falling back, it had not been her imagination. In the midst of it all however, she saw something that made her fingers itch for a Beretta. Standing, staring up at her window was the peroxided thug who had accosted Willow in the alley behind Kitty’s. It was as though he had been expecting Tara to look down and see him. Her eyes narrowed in rage as he lifted one hand in a lazy salute. He then spun on his heels and strode in the opposite direction, offering Tara a clear shot of his back. While it was an extremely tempting target, she knew better than to let her emotions get in the way of good sense. She wanted to speak to him face to face…again. Although next time she wouldn’t be so nice


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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby PancakesinBellies » Wed Aug 23, 2006 5:09 pm

Awesome. Once again I am highly impressed by your narrative capabilities. The flow, of both the dialougue and the action, is wonderfully natural and the characterization of Tara....well, reminds me a bit of canon Faith, y'know, if she wasn't so potentially crazy and all. I enjoyed this immensely, and can't wait until the next update. Private Dancer indeed! :)
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby db » Wed Aug 23, 2006 5:39 pm

oooh.

That was just... riveting.

Tough-as-nails Tara who kickes *everyone's* ass in hand-to-hand combat is just... yummy.

The fight scenes were excellent - I liked how each assailant was different and had a different fighting style... and I liked the way you kept my thoughs always veering toward Willow (just ;ike Tara's were)... plus our girls totally kicked ass.

More than a little curious about Spike and what he's up to though...

Not to mention the fact that I am kinda sorta (more than a little) looking forward to reading a chapter titled "private dancer". Sounds, um, thrilling.

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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby watty » Thu Aug 24, 2006 4:08 am

That was like watching Alias. :lol Tara is so tough and a fantastic fighter. Very realistic fight too, and you kept the attention tight on Tara's pov. Textbook fight-scene writing. :clap

And the story moves on too. What's Spike up to? Stupid Tommy. What next for the Ladies? And will Tara and Willow get some private time?

I'm fervently hoping that your studies give you more spare time to focus on this story. Damn real life and its priorities.
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby WillowRulez » Thu Aug 24, 2006 2:52 pm

I made a few mental notes that I wanted to include in the feedback but the title of the next chapter just washed all that away... ok, back now... i hope :P
Who the hell was he trying to impress?

You know, I always asked myself the same thing. For a sec there I thought you were also describing him with the hollow cheeks. Gosh, I hate that sucking in he does.
Really enjoyed him telling off Talbot though. Talbot's such a pervie mama's boy. When he said he wanted WIllow because she is supposed to be his it made my skin crawl. Icky-Factor 10 :x
As you can tell, great update.
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby Willow Watcher » Thu Aug 24, 2006 5:17 pm

Oh Oh Oh...Wow and Wow! Fantastic chapter. Had me on the edge of my seat the whole time. Damn SWAT team! And Spike that no good son of a BITCH! Tara should have shot him in the ASS just for good measure. Please update soon.
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby willow.tara » Thu Aug 24, 2006 5:19 pm

I really like this story! Please put another chapter up soon.

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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby willohand » Sat Aug 26, 2006 11:49 am

words fail me.... :shock
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby JustSkipIt » Mon Aug 28, 2006 7:22 pm

Hmmm. Well, I'm pretty sure that I noted in my last fb that Chapter 9 was going to be Private Dancer. But it wasn't. Dissapointing but still very impressive. I must say that this update was very tension filled and wonderful for that. It was almost overwhelming to read which really lends to understanding the intensity of the action. I don't know if that makes sense. I guess if it was a comic book, I would say that the pages are very filled with color and action. Anyway, it's quite fantastic to read. Interesting that Tara is so much more accomplished with her hands than any of the SWAT guys. I love the intense love and concern she's showing for Willow too.

Now Spike... Not thrilled but trusting. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby Guppy » Mon Aug 28, 2006 7:25 pm

watty wrote:That was like watching Alias.

No wonder I love this story so much! Yet another awesome chapter. Every chapter gets more intense. I love the tough, protective Tara and seeing it all from her POV. The next chapter's title sounds quite promising!!!
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby Artemis » Tue Aug 29, 2006 3:40 am

I love how you write action, it's exactly what I think of as 'Sin City' - tough, punishing on both sides, but with a strange kind of raw flair, almost a hint of artistry in the brutality. Normally I'd be a bit hesitant to adore tough ass-kickin' Tara so much (well, I wouldn't, but I'd pretend I would), but it works - she's so much a part of her environment, so grounded in Sin City and the way she works as a human being surviving there, that she doesn't come across as nasty or cold.

I'm having conflicted feelings about Spike - on the one hand, he's a grade A asshole who needs a good kicking, preferably from Tara (with liberal applications of her new trademark Maclay Groin Buster). On the other hand, it's a lot of fun seeing Spike beat up on Talbot.

So next chapter, we get back to the other kind of action you write so well? :D Willow may be a bit out of her element in a pitched battle, but once she gets on her dancing gear (or off, as the case may be), watch out Tara :blush
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby Darth Pacula » Sat Sep 02, 2006 5:28 pm

G'day Alcy. First off, sorry about your dog. That sucks.

But on a more pleasant note, yay for more Sin City, and with plenty of Tara kicking arse! Even though she was fighting hand to hand, which from a tactical point of view is a strategic failure. If you have to fight someone hand to hand when you could have shot them, you're doing something wrong. Still, it's certainly fun to read about Tara kicking SWAT arse.

They might have received a temporary reprieve from Spike of all people, but I don't see it lasting long. And when the full wrath of Glory Talbot descends upon them, I don't see things going quite as well.

Somehow, I don't see Tara taking Spike out quite as easily as she did those SWAT wankers. Though if I was her, I'd shot Spike in the back given the chance. She may come to regret that decision.

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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby Barlimo » Wed Sep 06, 2006 1:29 pm

After lurkingly reading your fic for quite a while I thought it was about time I left you feedback cause your writing is brilliant!

First off thou I wanna say how sorry I am about your dog
I hope you're feelin better now and the pup is strong and healthy

Thank you for writing this fantastic fic! :bow
Tara is one damn sexy gal, protecting her Willow and teachin those SWAT guys a lesson (nobody messes with her girl!)
She kicks ass!!
I love reading about this rough, tough Tara - so different from the sweet, gentle Tara we know and love but at the same time just...wow!
As for the next chapter - bring it on! Oh yeah!
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby Alcy » Wed Sep 06, 2006 6:47 pm

highlandlass25: Thanks so much, I’m sure I don’t impress people very often so it’s always nice when I can manage it!
Flow is one of the things that really bugs me about reading fic, if something doesn’t flow well then it’s damned hard to read and enjoy, even if the story is good.
And yes, Tara is quite a lot like Faith without the knife wielding psychotic antics. I hope you enjoy the next one as much…action of a different sort!

db: Definitely yummy, I’ve always love that in film so it’s great to be able to incorporate that into my fics.
I get worried that in writing one big fight scene that it’s just going to come out and be really repetitive so I like to try and change it up.
Spike’s evil and nasty…and that’s all you need to know!
The next chapter has been much promised, I hope I can deliver the thrills!

watty: Can you tell I really like Alias…well at least I did until the storyline became incomprehensible and I missed too many episodes to keep up to date…but you get the general idea.
Not gonna let on what Spike is up to but let’s just say there’s a lot in store for both him and the Ladies…and stupid little Tommy, people that stupid really don’t deserve to last long in Sin City. And the much-awaited private time, it’s a coming, just around the corner.
Damn studies, but the university year is almost over, just a couple more assignments to get out of the way. At least I finally have a thesis topic in mind for my proposal.

WillowRulez: Whoops, sorry for wiping your feedback notes but I did promise a chapter titled private dancer so I have to deliver !
I guess I have to amp up the icky factor in Sin City because it’s not all hugs and puppies of course, and we’ve got to have really nasty villains. Although this of course means that when they do eventually get their just desserts it will be all the more satisfying!

Willow Watcher: Just as long as you didn’t fall off your seat and do yourself some harm, I would have loved to have been able to let Tara shoot Spike in the arse just for comic effect but we can’t take out our villain this early in the piece! Update promised in the near future, at least it’s half done now.

{b]willow.tara:[/b] Thanks very much for enjoying and a new chapter is in the works now, not too far away I hope.

willohand: Hopefully words fail you because it was a good chapter, I’ll be cheeky and assume that it is…so thanks very much!

JustSkipIt: This is my apologetic tone (if you can tell!) I did promise Private Dancer, but while writing the chapter events became more drawn out than I had intended to the point where I had to call it quits and bump it back a chapter. I assure you that it is the next chapter and hopefully I can do it justice,
Intensity of action is exceptionally hard to convey on a page because as you say, its overwhelming and leads to far too much description and you lose your original focus. I was going for descriptive action, but still keeping it mostly within a narrow focus on Tara and a lesser extent on Willow. Just wait for the intensity of this chapter to continue through into the next one!!!

Guppy: Another Alias fan! Although Alias did always seem a little too clean, Sin City is just plain dirty. Writing things from her POV is tough, but I hope it adds a lot to the narrative. Thanks very much!!

Artemis: thank you very much for your praise about my action writing Chris, it was nicely put! I’d hate for Tara to come across as cold, although there is the potential for her to be if certain buttons were pushed…
Kinda nice writing a character that has multiple facets and you can hate their guts but still really enjoy them. Spike is the perfect example of this…but no matter what, he needs his arse kicked.
Next chapter, definitely a shift in focus to another sort of action…and hopefully it will be written well!! I’d say that Tara had better watch out no matter what! Willow’s had the hots for her for a long time!!

Darth Pacula: Gidday to you too Paul and thanks, we miss Olivia like crazy but little Badger make sup for a lot of that just with his cuteness. I’ll have to post some photos up on my myspace for everyone to see just how cute he is!!!
But of course, yay for more Sin City! I did need a good solid dose of arse kicking. Although I do have to point out that the reason she didn’t shoot the SWAT guys was the fact that she couldn’t bring herself to plug them in front of Willow. Although of course her reasoning is flawed in that willow saw Tara shoot Tommy and his goons when she was a kid, and Willow is a Sin City native too…she’s tough enough…and goddammit, I just wanted to write some good old fashioned hand to hand arse kicking okay?
I don’t see the reprieve lasting long at all, and its not a reprieve, more like a postponing of the inevitable…and undoubtedly it will be far nastier than an all out raid on the Palace.
And yes, Tara may come to regret her decision…but what a great fight it will be!!!!

Barlimo: Well firstly thank you for de-lurking, it’s always nice to have someone that’s been reading all along come forward and say they like the fic…and even nicer when the comments are extra kind
Thanks for your kind words about my dog, she was really something special, but the puppy is doing great and is three and a half weeks old now.
You don’t need to thank me for writing the fic, thank you for reading! I thoroughly enjoy writing and damn all the real life priorities that take me away from my fic writing!
And yes, this is one tough Tara, different in order to adapt to her environment, but the same where it counts the most…an overwhelming love for Willow.

Thanks very much for your patience everyone, I've been putting a lot of effort into this next chapter so I hope the finished product is worthwhile!!
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby Alcy » Thu Oct 12, 2006 3:16 pm

Chapter 10 – “Private Dancer.”

My muscles are tense and I’m poised, a split second away from throwing myself out of the window and running down that leather coated bastard. I can see it all clearly playing out in my mind, me placing one hand on the windowsill and throwing both legs over…brutally ignoring Willow’ pleas for me to stop. I drop to the ground as a bird of prey stalking a rodent. He turns just as I hit the ground and immediately starts running, leather coat billowing behind him. He’s not fast enough and I catch him. I wrestle him to the ground and scrape the skin from my bare forearms in the process but I couldn’t care less. He’s in my grasp and I lay into him with my fists. I tell myself I’m softening him up before I ask the questions but really I just want to smash the crap out of him. When he’s dazed and bleeding, then I’ll ask him what the fuck he has to do with all of this business. My mind will process his answers, I’ll decide if he’s letting the truth and whether he needs more ‘softening’ up. However, the whole scenario is just a thought and a small hand resting on my shoulder snaps me out of it. It’s Willow, somehow knowing exactly what I’m thinking and she just shakes her head slowly. I turn away from her, not an easy thing to do, and see that the fucker has disappeared already.

Lucky for him…

I turn back to the redhead and sigh in defeat…she’s going to make me go soft.

Later, when the carnage is cleared and we’ve done what we can for our wounded, me included, she leads me back to her room. I follow unquestioningly…and as I stare at her lovely arse I’m having an inkling that being soft is going to be fucking fantastic.


******

Willow’s fingers closed on the door to her room. She paused briefly before she turned the handle and swung it open, ushering Tara in before her. The reason for her hesitation was made apparent when she and Tara stood awkwardly in the middle of what was obviously her own personal sanctuary. For just a moment, she felt as though Tara were an intruder. However, when Tara turned and delivered one of her trademark smiles, the moment passed and she belonged.

Tara did indeed feel as though she stood out like a sore thumb against Willow’s scholarly abode. Books were crammed into almost every available space in the moderately sized room, along with a solid wood writing desk that looked as though it has been sourced from the hotel manager’s office in the Golden Palace’s heyday. A bed was squeezed in almost as an afterthought. It was too large for the space it occupied and the end extended out past Willow’s wardrobe. The wardrobe therefore had no door and Tara could see a neat row of what was obviously dancing costumes hanging in the space. She was confronted by an array of sequins and tassels in various bright colours. She turned back to face Willow and one side of her lip curled up into a small smile.

“I know what not to get you for your birthday,” Tara commented dryly, “Books.’

“Don’t knock it till you’ve tried it,” Willow retorted immediately, feeling the immense weight that had been bearing down on her shoulders lift somewhat as a result of Tara’s unexpected joviality, “Although the street is an efficient teacher, I prefer the freedom and solitude of books...you’re not forced to learn like you are on the street.”

Although Willow’s words were world-weary, she tried to keep her tone as light as Tara’s. She knew the blonde needed no reminder of what had just happened. Willow was pleased to see a twinkle remain in Tara’s eyes.

“Solitude?’ Tara arched an eyebrow, “Because I can go and leave you to your books if you’d like, I know where I don’t belong.”

Willow surprised herself by gliding across the floor to stand in front of Tara without a moment’s hesitation.

Tara had to admit that she had never known anyone to move as gracefully in jeans and Converse sneakers as Willow. She remained still as the redhead slipped a pair of thin arms around her waist and fitted their bodies together like two pieces of a puzzle. Her own arms then snaked around Willow and she squeezed tightly. The movement brought a sudden stab of pain from the bullet wound in her arm which she stubbornly ignored…it was little more than a graze anyway.

Willow tilted her head upwards until she was gazing up into Tara’s eyes. She trued to keep the rapt adoration from creeping in such close proximity to the woman of her dreams. What she definitely could not do, was resist the urge to place her hands around Tara’s neck and pull her close enough for their lips to touch. The sensitive skin had barely met before they both surged forward with a pent up intensity that didn’t allow any space for breathing. As Willow met Tara’s tongue in a fierce thrust she tasted the residue of battle, metallic and tangy. Even as Tara’s hands travelled down her body to hold her hips firmly, hesitation returned.

Tara immediately sensed Willow’s reluctance and drew back smoothly, a slight furrow to her gorgeous brow.

“Too fast,” Tara immediately came to a conclusion, “Will, I’m sorry…”

Willow silenced Tara with a brief but passionately angry kiss, she drew back with a determined expression on her face.

“Don’t you dare say you’re sorry Tara Maclay…or I’ll begin to think you don’t want me badly enough,” Willow kept her face serious as she reached down to boldly cup Tara’s sex and received an immediate reaction when Tara’s breath caught and she thrust her hips forward insistently. A small smile played across Willow’s face when she withdrew her hand and Tara’s eyes opened slowly, she whispered in the blonde’s ear, “Which would be nothing short of a lie.”

“Lying doesn’t trouble me in the slightest,” Tara breathed, the apex of her thighs the source of a fierce, insatiable heat, “Hurting you does.”

Although even as the words left her lips Tara knew full well that Willow was not an innocent for all her girlish looks. It was about time she realised this, especially after seeing her perform on stage.

“I look like shit,” Willow whispered, “And you really look like shit…I’m sorry but I’m worried that I’m not put off by the thought of fucking you covered in grime and blood.”

Tara’s eyebrows almost shot off her forehead at Willow’s casual tone and the decidedly evil glint in her eyes. She was also worried by the first thought that passed through her own mind…she didn’t care about the blood and grime either. It would be so easy to manoeuvre Willow to the narrow bed, Tara knew she wouldn’t mind, and fight the clothes from her body.

“A shower then,” Tara suggested gruffly, struggling to keep the desire from taking hold of her voice.

“My thoughts exactly,” Willow replied, a little too promptly for good manners.

******

I’m standing, my feet are freezing to the bathroom tiles but the goosebumps all over my naked body have nothing to do with the cold. I can barely hear the cascading water in the shower. While I stripped my own clothes off as fast as humanly possible in order to avoid having second thoughts, she’s waiting for me to remove hers as well. The thought of it has my knees quivering and my lips parted in anticipation. Her sweater and t-shirt are stripped off over her head as she lifts her arms for me. Her head emerges from beneath the layers of clothing, hair askew about her face and there’s a hint of a nervous smile on her lips. I try to act nonchalant as my hands rove down her body over her naked waist as I crouch before her. Squatting at her feet I remove her shoes, she steadies herself with one small hand on my shoulder. Converses tossed aside, my attention is directed towards her jeans and removing the remaining barriers between my skin and hers. The buttons pop one by one beneath my fingers, all the while I keep my gaze fixed on hers. I can see she’s nervous as hell. Most people would find that strange considering she strips near naked almost every night in a room full of strangers but I know what we’re doing right now is so fucking different it should be taking place in other universe. I slide the jeans down over her arse, feeling the silk smooth skin of her legs as I continue downwards. They’re tossed aside like the shoes and I’m standing again, my arms securely around her waist. I caress the skin on her back as my lips pick out a trail across her shoulder to the curve of her neck. I try not to rush but before I know it my hands find her bra clasp and the garment is off and on the floor. Her tits are right in front of me and I exhale slowly. I don’t want to touch them but at the same time both my hands are on those tender mounds of flesh, squeezing and caressing to reassure myself that they’re really there and she’s given then to me. I’m leaning down to stuff one in my mouth while at the same time my fingers are yanking down the last piece of clothing on her body. Her knickers slide from her body and she’s buck naked in my arms. I have to stop eating her tits for a moment, just so I can step back and get a full eyeful. Her arms are a little awkward at her sides but she’s still poised like a dancer, lithe and sexy as hell. Her small tits thrust out towards me, still red and moist from my earlier ministrations. My eyes travel downwards to bury my gaze at the apex of her legs and the strawberry coloured mound of pubic hair that nestles there. She’s so fucking gorgeous. Some part of me tries to say her name but I’m having trouble breathing let alone speaking. My vision starts to go black around the edges and I smile. Since when has Tara Maclay ever fainted at the sight of a naked woman?

“Tara?” a small, insistent voice broke through Tara’s haze, “Are you okay?”

Tara blinked once and her eyes focused on Willow’s rather worried expression. She had to shake her head, not quite deciding whether the shake was to completely do away with the fluff in her head or reassure herself that this was not merely a good dream. She nodded rather clumsily in reply to Willow’s question.

In response, Willow sighed as though Tara were some sort of playful torment. She placed one hand on Tara’s chest and gave her a gentle shove back towards the shower box, following her close as she stumbled beneath the stream of water.

Tara stood beneath the water, feeling its warmth flow down over her naked body. It stung the wound in her arm fiercely but she stoically ignored it, instead concentrating on the naked woman standing not a foot away from her. Willow’s wet hair was plastered to her head, giving her the appearance of a wet kitten. Tara reached down to pluck a wayward strand from the young woman’s eye.
Willow’s eyes roamed over Tara’s body, picking out the numerous scars and unhealed wounds. Her hands went to the heavily taped wound in her side, tracing it gently and wondering how Tara managed to keep walking, let alone display the spectacular power she had against the cops.
It was an inhuman effort to keep her eyes from devouring every inch of her body…and licking her lips as she did so. Instead she managed to assume the nonchalant air of one who had seen it all before.

She simply stated, “You’re filthy.”

Tara didn’t reply, she couldn’t. If Willow could pretend she wasn’t standing breast to naked breast with the woman of her dreams, Tara most definitely couldn’t.

As Willow soaped her body, washing away the accumulated blood and filth, Tara watched and felt her hands keenly. Every touch, every movement to the point where it became impossible to control her urges any longer. The fact that she hadn’t been laid for over eight years meant that her body was practically screaming at her with a very need for contact. She was scared at her own urge to grab Willow and throw her bodily against the tiles of the shower wall behind her. Her eyes slid closed and her fingers clenched into fists at her side in a vain effort to keep herself under control.

As I stand in that shower like a fuckin’ plank of wood, I know she wants it as badly as I do…she wants me to thrust her back against the shower and fuck her brains out…but I can’t use her like that, now matter how she feels…fuck me for having a conscience.

With that thought, Tara felt nimble fingers move over her nipples and a sharp tug in her groin that was almost painful. She realised Willow had lost the soapy sponge and was now working over her breasts with skilful and practised hands. Already weak at the knees, Tara gritted her teeth in the face of touches that were definitely not those of a kid.

Of their own accord, her fingers unclenched at her side and a she half growled, half sighed low in her throat as if in defeat. She then moved even faster than she had fighting the cops, sweeping Willow up off her feet with two firm hands under her butt cheeks, spreading her legs in the process. Despite Tara’s ferocity, Willow not only responded to the kiss with just as much passion, her legs wrapped around Tara’s back and squeezed as though she was expecting to have to hold on for a wild ride.

As the water beat down on Tara’s naked back, she thrust her body hard against Willow’s. So firmly they were pressed together, the skin of the two women melded together as one. No movement was possible save for tongues thrust deep in each other’s throats and Willow’s hands moving across Tara’s back. Both felt the thud of the other’s heart through the skin of their chests.
Willow ripped her head away from Tara’s and one hand reached up to grab Tara by the hair. She yanked Tara’s ear closer to her mouth.

“I want you to fuck my brains out,” Willow hissed in Tara’s ear before biting savagely down on her earlobe, teeth sinking into flesh.

There’s something in her words that brings me back to my senses and without any warning I yank away from her. She’s staring at me in confusion with those big green eyes and I know she’s wondering what the fuck I’m on and what sort of game I’m playing, whether I want her or whether I don’t know what the fuck I want.

I know I should speak before she gets the wrong idea, tell her I want her so bad it hurts...and I do, I want her, but not like this. It’s too brutal and she deserves more of me, not just the sex starved ex-con who would take her in a heartbeat to satisfy her own lust. I’m not fast enough, and something akin to anguish passes over her features just before she throws herself out of the shower. I hear myself calling out for her to stop and it’s only when she’s well and truly gone that I reflect on the absurdity of Tara MacLay pleading with a woman to come back to her.


Tara was left standing in the shower, the water beating down on her naked back suddenly seeming cold in the aftermath of her own folly She stood watching the water run down her naked legs to swirl at her feet and lost herself in the constant motion. Her head turned slightly and she met her own accusing, blurry gaze in the badly fogged mirror. The distorted face that stared back at her was partly a result of the mirror and partly her own features twisted into an anguished scowl. She had to fight the urge to leap out of the shower and smash her fist into that face. Instead she pounded her knuckles against the tiles in front of her repeatedly until they were purpled and the skin close to breaking.

“Fuck you Tara Maclay,” she whispered, “You’re a goddamn fool.”

With an angry wrench, Tara shut off the flow of water and emerged from the shower. She wrapped one of the available towels around her body, tucking it firmly between her breasts.

She returned to Willow’s room full of determination to find that the redhead was not there. While she seriously contemplated tearing the hotel apart searching for her, she heard the door she had left open, close behind her. Tara spun on her bare feet and found Willow without any effort. At that point in time she didn’t give a damn about her pride, she was prepared to fall to her knees and beg profusely for Willow to forgive her mixed signals.

Willow didn’t give Tara the chance to even open her mouth. She took a determined stride forward and planted both hands on Tara’s chest to give her a violent shove backwards. Taken by surprise and unbalanced, Tara stumbled backwards until her movement was halted by a desk chair into which she fell awkwardly. Clad in only a plain white towel with her dripping hair falling limply about her face, Tara watched Willow with an expression of bewilderment and a feeling of complete helplessness. If Willow wanted to tie her into the chair and beat her to a pulp, she’d have taken every blow.

However, the only blow that followed was one to her senses.

Willow turned her back to Tara, her posture defiant. With one deft tug she pulled the ties that held her bathrobe closed and let the flimsy satin garment fall from her slim shoulders to pool like water at her feet. The blow packed more of a punch that any number of physical strikes. Tara’s eyes were assaulted with the sight of Willow’s creamy white skin. Tara’s eyes automatically trailed down her back, moving down to her arse and the backs of her thighs before straight back to her arse again. The complete picture was broken only by the scanty black lace of Willow’s bra across her back and the g-string nestled on her hips. Tara barely managed to stay upright on the chair

Willow spun on her heels, her body twisting in a simple movement that was undeniably sexual. Her hips undulated in a slow arc as she moved her arse in a slow, seductive sway while she turned. The scene unfurled in slow motion before Tara’s eyes until she was struck again. Although this time it was the sight of Willow standing facing her with a smoldering green-eyed gaze that left no mystery as to what less than pure thoughts were running through her mind. Her gleaming wet red hair lay motionless about her shoulders and down over her chest. Willow smiled secretively before tossing her head and sending her hair cascading around her in a fiery arc. The movement flowed from her head to the rest of her body as she tossed it about in a series of graceful twirls across the rooms short length.

Tara watched the redhead’s limbs moved, transfixed by the simple grace she displayed. There was nothing flamboyant or technical to Willow’s movements, she simply moved as though she were aware of every inch of her body. As though she knew the effect that each movement would have on her audience…in this case, her audience of one.

Having watched Willow perform at Kitty’s more than once, Tara immediately realised that this show was something altogether different. It was raw, intimate and revealing. Literally so when Willow’s right hand drifted to the clasp at her back and with a quick movement, she cast the black bra aside. It was as though Tara were seeing Willow’s breasts for the first time, despite having been pressed fiercely against them just minutes earlier in the shower. She watched the perfect shapes move towards her as Willow advanced. She was tantalisingly close, and yet it seemed to take an eternity for her to come close enough for Tara to touch her. When she was finally within reach, Tara did not move a muscle towards her. She knew that Willow would allow touching on her own terms.

This seemed to be foremost on Willow’s mind as she moved in front of Tara, each movement taking her within scant distance of Tara’s body yet keeping a huge chasm between them. Placing her hairs on either side of the chair, Willow lent in close until her breasts were right up in Tara’s face.

“I’m feeling a bit warm,” Willow purred in Tara’s ear, “I think I have too many clothes on.”

Tara’s eyes moved down to the g-string Willow was wearing which was hugging her undulating hips and barely concealing her sex. However, Tara viewed that tiny piece of fabric as she would the heaviest coat, completely concealing despite that fact that almost all of Willow’s body was laid bare.

“You want me to help you with that?” Tara asked, unashamed at how uncertain and youthful her own voice sounded.

“Fuck yes,” Willow breathed, sliding her hips a little further towards Tara’s body.

Tara reached up with trembling hands and hooked both her thumbs beneath opposite sides of the stringy garment. With a delicate tug, she began to slide it downwards, over the creamy skin of Willow’s arse. The fabric covering her sex moved down, revealing the perfect red curls that nestled there. Tara continued sliding her hands down over Willow’s skin, her thighs, all the while her head moving closer to Willow’s sex, so close that she could smell the strong, intoxicating aroma that made her own loins clench out of sheer need.

When Tara had the g-string at Willow’s knee, Willow stepped out of it herself. The fabric was flicked away on the end of her toe and quickly forgotten. Willow saw the hungry look in Tara’s eyes and smirked, whipping her sex away from the reach of Tara’s tongue which had been licking her lips in anticipation.

She moved her completely naked body in a slow dance, far enough away from Tara to give her room to move each limb to its fullest extent. With each new movement, Willow opened herself further to Tara’s gaze, leaving nothing to the imagination, and nothing concealed. Her hands roamed over every inch of her body, she cupped her own breasts and teased the nipples as if they weren’t already budded and rose red. Firm hands moved down over her stomach and to the apex of her thighs where she pressed the flat of her palm hard against her sex as though concealing it once more. However, she slid her fingers apart and with them, the folds of her mound. All the while she kept her eyes tightly locked with Tara’s, her gaze as intimate as her movements.

The dance was so intimate that Tara felt as though her hands were already on Willow’s body even though they were in actual fact clenched into fists as they rested on her thighs. Her breath was hot in her own ears to the point where she was sure she was panting with barely concealed desire. Willow’s dance was the stuff of torture for someone who had been without intimate sexual contact for eight years. So as Willow moved closer, Tara once again unconsciously licked her lips.

Willow turned, displaying her completely bare arse blatantly. She backed up to the point where she was practically sitting on Tara’s lap, her legs forcing Tara’s apart. She then bucked her hips, moving further downwards until her bare flesh was rubbing against the towel that barely covered Tara’s own skin. In fact, it began to bunch up significantly until her thighs were completely bare.

Tara growled as Willow’s arse began to move between her thighs and her hips instinctively moved until she was grinding her sex against the smooth white flesh. She had to fight to keep her hands from reaching out to grab Willow’s waist and pull her down firmly into her lap.

“Touch me,” Willow commanded in a whisper.

Tara didn’t need to be asked twice, her hands moved to carry out exactly what she had been dwelling on her mind, She drew Willow downwards as she bucked her hips insistently. With Willow firmly in her lap, Tara’s hands roved up over her taut stomach muscles, feeling the smooth skin slide beneath her fingers before their tips touched her breasts. They closed eagerly over the firm mounds and squeezed, gently at first, then more insistently as Willow increased the pace of her hips moving against Tara’s body.

Willow twisted her neck around until her mouth was pointing in the direction of Tara’s, the ex-cops breath felt hot and fast on her cheek just seconds before she claimed her lips once again in another searing kiss. The awkwardness of their positions did not hamper the intensity of the kiss. Willow brought her hand up to clutch at Tara’s cheek, feeling it sweaty beneath her touch.

Somehow, at some stage during the kiss, Willow managed to swing her leg over Tara’s head as she swiveled to face Tara. They broke their kiss and their eyes met for brief moments, blue melting into green. The look ended when their lips magnetically closed together once more. Willow cupped Tara’s cheeks with both her hands, exerting her own kind of dominance over the older woman. It was her hands that moved to the towel tucked securely between Tara’s breasts and savagely yanked it open. The offending piece of white cloth was tossed aside and the blonde was naked beneath her bucking body. A smile crossed Willow’s face at the sight of Tara’s breasts heaving beneath her.

Tara hands cupped Willow’s arse firmly as she moved on her lap. Their kiss continued and did not break even when Tara moved one hand to where Willow’s thighs met, grasping urgently for her downy mound. She cupped it fiercely and Willow responded by bucking faster, a growl sounding from her throat that might have been a word. Tara didn’t wait for any further words as she gently but firmly slide two fingers upwards into Willow’s already moist passage. Willow’s response was to grind her hips forward and bite down savagely on Tara’s upper lip, catching it with her teeth.

As Willow ride Tara’s pumping fingers, she eventually broke the kiss, her head tilting backwards so her unseeing eyes stared up at the patchy ceiling above her. Although she was acutely aware of Tara’s fingers moving deeply inside of her, what consumed her thoughts was the fact that the moment she had dreamt about since Tara had purchased her freedom so violently eight years ago was finally becoming a reality. She felt hot tears burning at the corner of her eyes, they were streaming down her cheeks by the time she lowered her gaze to look Tara in the eye once more.

Seeing the tears, Tara did not stop as she might have done in the past. She knew exactly what they were for and had she not been so intently focused on the feel of her fingers in Willow’s hot cunt, she might have found the will to cry her own. Instead she pressed her cheek against Willow’s heaving chest and managed to croak out a few words that distinctly sounded like, ‘I love you,’ although even Tara couldn’t been sure.

Just as Willow was beginning to make soft moans, Tara stopped her thrusts and gently withdrew her fingers. Before Willow had time to protest, she rose from the chair, lifting Willow along with barely a grunt of effort. Tara laid her roughly on the narrow bed before standing back slightly to admire the sight she had just created.

Willow bucked her hips insistently, feeling lost without the touch of Tara’s skin, not to mention cheated out of a release she desperately wanted, “Stop fucking me with your eyes and get down here!”

Tara responded to Willow’s command by throwing herself down, none too gently and biting her on the ear lobe. Willow yelped once and then once more seconds later as Tara had swiftly moved down her body to lower her face between Willow’s legs. She yelped at the darting touch of Tara’s tongue against her engorged clit. Although the second touch was a long, languid stroke that left her squirming and craving more. Tara was eager to oblige, lavishing attention on her clit in an exploratory, teasing manner as she became accustomed to Willow’s body and tested out the tricks that really made her squirm. Tara found the spot and the speed easily following a particularly vocal cry of assent from Willow and she settled to it with all the determination and perseverance she possessed.

Willow tried to prop herself up on her elbows as she discovered she loved the sight of Tara working between her legs but that lasted all of a minute before her head was thrown back against the pillow behind her as she tossed about uncontrollably. Tara’s tongue was driving her to the brink, easily threatening to push her right over the edge but with the skill to prolong release and take her beyond without falling off completely. Her hands clutched for something to grasp and she settled for fistfuls of Tara’s hair. If she was hurting the blonde, it did not slow her down at all. If anything, her movements became more intense and focused. She knew exactly what Willow needed and her release followed moments later in a rushing crescendo of guttural moans and profanities that Willow would not remember even uttering afterwards,

Willow’s hips jerked upwards several times with release before they settled back against the covers with the rest of her sweat soaked body. As Tara continued to stroke her stomach and thighs with tender fingers, she was all too aware of her throbbing cunt and the spread of wetness that chaffed against the back of her thighs.

As she lay on her back staring through half lidded eyes at the ceiling, she had visions of leaping upright and throwing Tara backwards where she would commence fucking her with the same intensity she had just received. However, as Tara’s mouth trailed kisses up her body while she came to lay alongside Willow, those thoughts were replaced by a lazy picture of the two of them spending time stroking and exploring each others bodies. Tara nestled against Willow, folding the smaller woman into the protective shelter of her arms.

They lay in silence for a few moments before Willow opened her mouth to speak. It was only then that she realised Tara’s soft and regular breathing indicated that she was asleep. She twisted her neck slightly to watch the blonde’s face, discovering that when she slept she appeared at peace with the world in direct contrast to her waking state. Willow reached out with her fingers and brushed back a strand of wet hair, tucking it behind Tara’s ear so she could study her face. So when she drifted off moments later, her dreams were filled with visions of a relaxed and happy Tara…in the midst of even more fucking.

******

Tara woke in darkness, instinctively knowing that the lump tucked beneath her arm was Willow. A small smile crossed her face as she contemplated remaining exactly where she was. The pleasant fuzz that clouded her brain brought a small smile to her face which broadened when she reached out to stroke Willow’s naked flank. The redhead purred in her sleep, nestling closer to Tara.

As her eyes adjusted to the faint moonlight filtering through the blinds, Tara stared at Willow’s face. In the milky light her skin was a translucent marble. Tara reached out to stroke it with the tips of her fingers, finding it warm and smooth. As she lay tracing Willow’s delicate features, her fears assaulted the edge of her pleasant fuzz. They gradually eroded the abnormal feeling until Tara was left in her usual state of mind, alert, wary and edgy. These feelings were amplified tenfold by Willow’s presence.

All too aware of he nakedness, Tara mentally berated herself for leaving her Berettas on the floor of the bathroom like a dirty pair of underwear. She managed to extract herself away from Willow’s body without waking the redhead. It was only when her weight left the bed that she stirred half awake.

“Where are you going?” Willow whispered in a sleepy voice, her eyelids remaining closed.

Tara reached out to brush a clump of Willow’s hair away from her forehead, “I’ll be right back.”

This seemed to satisfy Willow in her sleepy state and she smiled, reaching out to touch the hand that lay on her breast, “Hurry back to me.”

“I will,” Tara whispered, although she stopped short of saying, I promise, as the few words out of her mouth had already contained more than enough lies.

******

Tara exited the Palace from a second storey window. She dropped silently to the ground and instantly melded into the darkness around her. As she walked away from the Palace and away from Willow, a calm settled about her. She pulled up the collar of her coat, secure in the knowledge that what she was about to do was the best course of action.

Evie’s place in Sacred Oaks was a rather modest affair, especially when compared to the star’s flamboyant personality. Tara punched in the security code at the entrance to the massive gates, knowing full well that Evie would not have changed it. It was the date they first had sex…which was also incidentally the date they first met. Tara couldn’t explain why she would hold onto an anniversary long past, just that it was the sort of thing she would do. As she strode through the gates and bounded up to the front porch, she could feel the cameras on her. Evie or at least one of her bodyguards, was watching her approach. A suspicion confirmed when the front door clicked open as soon as her foot landed on the porch.

“Cruz,” Tara inclined her head in greeting towards the shape that lay in wait for her as she entered, she recognized his bulk immediately, “I need to see Evie.”

“Never one to stand on ceremony are you Maclay, nor are you possessed of a large supply of patience,” Cruz intoned, his carefully cultured tone and measured words at odds with his appearance.

“You know me too well,” Tara shrugged, “Is she busy?”

Cruz nodded solemnly but then inclined his head towards the stairs in an invitation for her to ascend. Tara smiled and bounded up two at a time, there was no time to stand on any sort of ceremony. Evie’s room was at the top of the stairs, straight down the hall. Tara knew the route by heart, and as she entered without knocking she also recognized the familiar cloying scent that assaulted her nostrils. Sex…and lot’s of it.

Tara made out a woman’s body moving upright in the semi darkness but instantly knew it was not Evie. She smirked and lent against the doorjamb for a few moments, hearing Evie’s moans from somewhere beneath the woman who pounded relentlessly above her. Tara reached out and flicked the light switch, not really caring that she was interrupting and watched as the woman gradually relaxed her pumping movements as she glanced over her shoulder to where Tara stood. She tossed her hair and gave a small snort of annoyance before lifting her hips away from Evie’s body. As she rolled over onto the wide bed, Tara not only saw the large, glistening dildo she wore but also recognised her instantly. It was Mandy, one of the Ladies who had been present in the Palace when the body of the planted cop was found. Although she was certainly not interested in the olive skinned woman by any stretch of the imagination, she did note that she was just the type of exotic beauty that Evie creamed herself over. Mandy was not in any hurry to hide that beauty as she lowered herself back against the luxurious pillows at her back

“Leave us,” Tara rumbled.

Mandy raised her eyebrows and glanced across at Evie, who had by now lifted herself on her elbows so she could face Tara.

Evie nodded without taking her eyes off her ex-lover, “Go take a shower, I’ll join you later…and keep that dildo on.”

With another snort, Mandy lifted herself from the bed and moved to the bathroom that adjoined Evie’s bedroom. As she walked, swinging her hips in an exaggerated manner, she kept her dark eyes locked on Tara’s in a silent challenge. She had obviously staked her claim on Evie. Tara continued to smirk; she had absolutely no desire to renew her passionate fling with the movie star.

As soon as the bathroom door closed shut, Evie lifted herself into a sitting position and patted the space on the bed beside her.

Tara shook her head, “This isn’t a social call, Evie.”

“Tara darling, I know things are over between us but do you really have to be so rude?” Evie replied indignantly.

“I need you to leave town,” Tara interrupted harshly; she didn’t have time for light-hearted conversation or any of Evie’s manipulating games.

Evie was taken aback and remained silent for at least half a minute which was an eternity for the move star. Clearly Tara’s request was out of the blue.

“I know you well enough to know that you wouldn’t ask such a thing of me without good cause, Tara,” Evie replied in a measured tone, “Why do you want me to leave, am I in danger?”

Evie couldn’t help thinking about herself all the time; it was just the way she worked.

“Yes,” Tara said curtly, her lips pursed tightly together, “But….”

Evie made a sound of dismissal, interrupting Tara before she could continue with the rest of her proposal, “You know full well I don’t give a fuck about the game that Glory Talbot plays, she can’t touch me and she knows it. Your concern is sweet but unnecessary, darling.”

“I know you you’re more than capable of taking care of yourself but I need you to do this for me,” Tara had to force the words out, for some reason it did not come easily.

“Give me a reason,” Evie urged, sensing Tara’s reluctance to blurt it out.

“I need you to leave town,” Tara repeated with a sudden catch to her voice, “I need you to leave town and take Willow with you.”

It was then that Evie realised what had caused Tara’s voice to catch like it had…the hardened ex-cop was on the verge of tears…


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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby diamondforever » Thu Oct 12, 2006 4:17 pm

:bow :thud

I wish there were a cold shower emoticon because I would really be using it right now. After all the tension you've put us through, WOW. FUCK. YES. That was so tender and hot and passionate and...just wow. There was so much rolled into there, and the way that you write just pulls the whole spectrum of emotions out of me.

Thank you. :D Can't wait for the next update.
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby PancakesinBellies » Fri Oct 13, 2006 5:37 am

Cliffhanger of DOOM! That was brilliant, but I can't imagine Willow taking Tara's having anything to do with Evie well. Or the trying to send her away. Does this mean that they'll fight and then have hot sweaty makeup sex, or are we in for lots more angst? Either way, I look forward to it. Great update!
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby HalfCamel » Fri Oct 13, 2006 9:26 am

What a fantastic update! It's so crude and tense, and at the same time it's passionate and loving. It's like crude love that's a product of their upbrings and only they understand it and eachother.

I can already see Willow freaking and fighting the whole way about leaving with Evie. And I think if Willow does end up going, it won't be queitly... or fully aware.

Can't wait for the next update.
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