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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby WillowRulez » Mon Jun 26, 2006 4:15 pm

You certainly re-defined hotness with that update :thud
And they kissed! Yay!
Spike's just too creepy. Now I can't get the image out of my head of him trailing 'innocent' Willow lol.
Willow’s face coloured, “Like hell I would! You can’t get back together with that skanky woman stealing whore!”

Cracked me up. Great update!
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby soup-chef » Mon Jun 26, 2006 9:00 pm

omg, you won't believe how glad I am to see an update! =D
Loved it! Go Willz!
It's great to see both of them being so honest and open - as much as they can at this point,at least - with each other.
I didn't expect that reaction from Willow at the alley, but it was totally cute and believable. Oh, and LOVED the bold move, another one, finally a successful one *grin*

Please don't leave us hanging there for too long this time ~.^
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby Willow Watcher » Tue Jun 27, 2006 2:48 pm

OK Wow and Wow! Willow's dance got Tara's attention alright and mine too! :whistle
What a fantastic update! More soon please! :pray
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby watty » Wed Jun 28, 2006 4:18 am

Just like that. One dance oozing with sexual tension and Tara succumbs to Willow's seductive charm. Or is it? I think not. The possibilty has been swimming in Tara's head for a few days now, and the dance was the proverbial final nail in the coffin that banishes her perception of Willow still as the young teen. I guess Willow hadn't much choice:
I’ve been sending out every signal I know, pretty much screaming that I want you

Tara isn't thick, she was just too afraid to cross that line. And it took a very special dance from Willow to nudge her across. Good for Willow.

Faith's interruption was untimely, though in a way timely.
Neither women were interested in the fact that they were standing in the middle of a stage, or that their kiss had obviously attracted catcalls from the crowd who were no doubt pleased at the additional show. The only thought that was running through Tara’s mind was sweeping Willow up into her arms and finding the nearest bed, or couch…or chair.

Probably in another minute, the stage.

Serious trouble. Eeeep. Glory? Can't wait to find out.

p.s. I'm liking strong silent Buffy here, such a contrast to the pun-filled slayer we're familiar with.
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby PancakesinBellies » Wed Jun 28, 2006 6:10 am

Guh. How do I coherently respond to that? I'm loving this story, and that was an awesome update. I mean, GO Willow! Tara really doesn't stand a chance, does she? ;-)
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby JustSkipIt » Thu Jun 29, 2006 6:51 pm

Alcy,
It seems that by the beginning of this update Tara isn’t even pretending to fool herself into believing that she doesn’t want Willow. She’s basically “Evie’s gone. Where’s Willow?” Yet, the transition (a day? 2 days?) seems somewhat reasonable to the reader. Of course by the end, everyone knows she’s 100% into Willow. Tee hee.

I think what sticks with me most in this update (ok, besides that kiss!) is the image I get of Buffy. She’s totally silent yet I finally feel like she appears in this story. I have no fear for Willow because Buffy seems to be completely dominating the back alley in spite of Tara and Spike’s pissing match (for lack of a better term).
She studied his face intently, it was almost starved of flesh, all hard planes and angles that made it appear as though he had been chiselled from a slab of pale rock. His lips, thin and cruel, curved up into a sardonic little smirk.
What a great description. I would imagine that someone into Spike would read this description and be all swoony and someone not into him would be like, “ug. How gross!”

“Like hell I would! You can’t get back together with that skanky woman stealing whore!”
Yeah, Willow! You tell it!
She would imagine that her cold metal pole was Tara’s body, and each caress would strive to bring warmth to that icy exterior.
May I say, and I think I speak for the other readers too… Ugghhhhhh…

Very little is left to the imagination but mine runs wild anyway. She’s working that pole as though it were born next to her and her hands are stroking her body as though they belong to someone who loves her fiercely. Fuck I wish they were mine! When she straddles the pole with both legs, sliding to the floor and back to her feet again, I nearly keel over.
Doesn’t really seem like I need to say anything does it???

And the kiss? Wow and double wow. Of course trouble interrupts. Not surprised here. Great job and can’t wait for more.
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby Alcy » Sun Jul 02, 2006 3:18 am

Darth Pacula: You know I don't really mind how late you are with your feedback Paul! But others may crucify you for sneaking in with a 'dibs' and doing a runner :p
Glad I could stoke up the fire so to speak, Sin City is incredibly sexy as well as violent, so I thought I had to get something smoking! While I cuoldn't had Spike as a vamp in this fic for obvious reasons, I'm trying to keep his vampish qualities, including the fact that he's not going to die as easily as we might like - although coming to a nasty end on the end of Buffy's katana does have quite nice imagery.
I wouldn't call Tara sloppy to her face...but now that she's acknowledged her feelings for Willow I think things are going to get a hell of a lot more difficult for her, having someone else to worry about etc...but with the hottest dancer in Sin City as your girl, who really cares! I also predict private shows in the near future!

shane: Damn straight Willow deserves that sort of attention from Tara, I know I wouldnt have been able to withhold my attentions as long as Tara! Although while Tara has lowered her guard, she's only lowered it a fraction and there's a complexity to her that Willow will have to unravel...all this while the battling the cops and the nastiest Madam in Sin City!

sacinema: Haha, I hope you found that cold shower...I'd keep it in handy too! And yes, your suspicions are spot on, I never like jumping straight into their relationship, in most of my fics there's a prolonged build up. Probably because I love writing them falling in love and having sex for the first time. And yes, I think they would have been stripping each other's clothes off right on the stage...not exactly the most prudent thing to do (but would any of us care?!)
Hmm, you must recognise who the stranger in the alley is...peroxided hair? English accent? It's our good old friend Spike!
I also enjoy writing adorable Willow...although it's a challenge to keep her adorable and yet having her work as a stripper as well!
Silent Buffy has become a favourite, I'm having my own personal little challenge to see how long I can go without having her speak! Thanks very much for reading!

Thianne: Thanks very much, yay for hotness, i promise more soon!

Dianneswillowtree: Again, I'm glad you enjoyed...although sorry for making you have trouble typing!

beanie: No...we haven't climaxed yet! ;-) I think it's important to be able to write an all consuming passion, and it certainly isn't easy but I get warm fuzzies when people enjoy reading the scenes.
Our good friend Spike is also difficult to write, I've stripped away the vampire element which is basically what made him the character he was on the show so I have to build up the elements of nastiness that hang around him like flies on stink. I haven't written Spike as a bad guy in any of my fics yet so this should be interesting. A match up between him and Buffy would go down well I think (hopefully ending with Spike being skewered!) Thanks for enjoying my little fic!

caz: I think Tara would have something to say about Spike getting his filthy mitts on Willow but I'm sure she's appreciate your help! Yep, early canon Spike was a very nasty man, which is why his transformation into love sick puppy never really sat well with that early incarnation. He's bad, plain and simple, I plan on sticking to that. I hope Tara can ask for help when she needs it...although I have a suspicion that she likes to work alone.
On the verge of dragging Willow somewhere private yes...or perhaps dragging her to something as close as the dance floor! I thrive on 'serious trouble', this should be fun!

WillowRulez: 'Hotness' in my dictionary has always been defined as 'Sexy Willow and Tara moments.' Hopefully there will be much more than kisses in future updates! I'm glad Tara and Buffy were on hand to put everyone's fears to rest regarding Spike!

soup-chef: Almost as glad as I am to be able to post one! It's a struggle trying tog et them finished between work and studying but I love writing so much I just keep on going. In my experience honesty and openess are the keys to whether a relationship works or doesnt, although Sin City doesnt play by normal rules! Thank goodness Willow has the moves!

Willow Watcher: Thanks very much for all the wows! The next chapter is coming along really well, shouldn't be too far away!

watty: While the dance was pretty hot, it was merely the last straw in something that had been building within Tara's mind ever since she first laid eyes on Willow after escaping prison. You're right, Tara of course isnt stupid and Willow knows it too, she was frustrated that it had taken her so long to win Tara over, and perhaps she was thinking that it was never going to work out the way she wanted. Although in Sin City everything is very much the here and now, no one ever looks to the future...although people carry weighty baggage from their past which taunts them every day.
I'm thinking that Tara and Willow will be very pissed off if the trouble isnt very serious indeed! And while they were funny in the show, we don't need Buffy's one liners here. There's no place for quips and puns in Sin City!

highlandlass25: I don't need a coherant response, just hit a few keys on the keyboard and I'll get the idea that you enjoyed it! Nope, Tara doesnt stand a chance in hell of resisting our sexy little redhead!

JustSkipIt: Seeing Evie again has brought back to Tara what she had. A part of her remembers, while she and Evie obviously had a rocky relationship, how good it was to just have someone (even a self-centred movie star!). It's the final push towards a relationship with Willow. If it was merely good to be with Evie, she's wanting to find out what its like to be with someone she really loves. Even someone as world-wise as Tara still has yet to experience one of the best things that life has to offer. So she's off to find Willow in a hurry!

While Buffy has no voice, I'm glad that she has a strong presence. While she's not the boss in this fic, there's still that leadership quality about her, or at least the domination.
Glad that I could sum up Spike nicely, although at no point was I expecting anyone to swoon over him!
Okay, the pole analogy was a bit weird huh! I promise not to compare Tara to pieces of metal in the future.
Thanks for enjoying Willow's dancing, not knowing the intricacies of pole dancing myself, I'm glad it worked.

Trouble always seem to interupt at the most inopportune of moments, although nothing every happens simply in one of my fics, and I love trouble...Thanks very much Debra!
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby Thianne » Sun Jul 02, 2006 3:51 am

yay! dibs on the replies to feedback!!! and....i realize it's not very useful, so i'll just be over here....quietly....and please ignore me
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby HOPE REIGNS » Mon Jul 03, 2006 1:50 pm

Alcy,

I spent weeks trying to read all of your other fics over on Chris Cook's website and I have become an instant Alcy groupie. I was only sad to see that I had caught up with this fic and now have to wait for an update like everyone else. You really have the ability to take me out of my life and putting me in your story.

As for Sin City, I haven't caught the movie yet, but now I don't need too. I'm enjoying the darkness of all this and it puts a different view on how Willow and Tara's love can overcome anything that comes at it.

Thank you and take care of your muse. ;-)

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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby Alcy » Mon Jul 03, 2006 6:31 pm

Thianne: thanks for the dibs to the feedback! Hopefully you can come out of your corner and shout a bit when I post the next chapter shortly!

HOPE REIGNS: It definitely would have taken a long time to read all of those fics on Chris' site! But thank you for taking the time to do that and I'm very glad that you enjoyed them.
Watching the movie isn't amust, if you can pick up the general tone from just reading it then I've succeeded and am very happy! I won't make you wait too long for the next chapter.
Thanks again, from one Anna to another!

Next chapter is almost done folks, just editing it now to check that I haven't made any boo-boos (Many thanks to Debra for pointing out one in my last chapter!)

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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby Alcy » Mon Jul 03, 2006 8:31 pm

Chapter 8 – “Seige.”

I stare at the body lying face down on the floor. It’s a must-have accessory for any hotel room truly aspiring to have that ‘authentic’ Basin City feel. Too quote the cliché, I’ve seen enough dead bodies in my time that this one should be completely unremarkable…and it would be, apart from the fact that it’s on the floor of my hotel room. The pistol still held in a lifeless hand indicates that it was not meant to be a friendly visit.

“I’ve seen bodies in the Palace before,” Faith remarked from where she stood to Tara’s left.

She appeared just as unimpressed as Tara. Obviously the Palace was an establishment which had seen its fair share of dead bodies. The body was non-descript. It was just an ordinary looking guy wearing a crumpled suit. He lay on his back with a single bullet wound through the chest and blood had spread out across the carpet beneath him. Tara saw the look of annoyance on Faith’s face and thought she was probably more worried about the bloodstain on the carpet and inconvenience of getting rid of the thing.

Faith stared at Anya, who was on the verge of hysterics and currently being consoled by Willow and Dawn. She decided she wouldn’t get much out of the blonde woman and looked to another of the ladies who stood over the body with a grim expression.

“Mandy, where’s the problem, couldn’t you just dump it?” Faith demanded before her gaze travelled to Tara, a smirk appearing on her face, “You interrupted the live sex show that Willow and Tara were about to perform for the audience at Kitty’s…nice show by the way, Willow.”

Tara stifled a growl that warned Faith she was treading on very dangerous ground with her little joke. Still standing at Anya’s side, Willow ducked her head in embarrassment. The redhead clutched her thick coat tightly around herself as underneath she still wore the same green set in which she had performed. Mandy did not appear concerned at Willow and Tara’s combined embarrassment or for ruining Faith’s fun, instead, she deftly flicked the guy’s coat open with the toe of one of her pumps. That single movement changed everything. Faith’s expression changed almost instantly from one of annoyance to one of barely contained apprehension bordering on horror. Gleaming on the inside of the guy’s coat was a badge…a cop’s badge.

“Why the fuck is there a dead cop in my place?” Faith directed her question to Mandy, who in turn inclined her head in Anya’s direction as though the blonde was somehow at the root of the mess.

Everyone in the room had immediately understood what had changed when the stiff turned out to be a cop, especially Tara. It seemed as if the threat delivered by Glory’s messenger a few days earlier was coming true…the cops were entering Old Town with something else on their mind other than a good time. If that wasn’t enough to break the truth then the dead cop lying on the floor of a room in the Golden Palace certainly was.

“Anya?” Faith continued with her questioning, she was out to get the full picture before making any decisions, “Please tell me you didn’t drive this guy to suicide?”

Anya responded by unleashing a hysterical stream of incomprehensible words and Dawn glared at Faith for provoking her, “Go easy on her Faith, she shot the guy okay! He broke into the Palace and when Anya went to check out the noise he shot at her…so she fired back.”

Faith raised her eyebrows and replied calmly, not willing to accept such a completely implausible explanation, “Okay, two things, Anya. Firstly, quit it with the hysterics – it’s making you look very unattractive, and secondly, since when did you start carrying a loaded gun around inside?”

Anya managed to compose herself suitably before she made a reply. As she did, Tara studied the scene, like any good cop would. She moved about the room taking a mental note of everything that appeared to be a part of the puzzle. The orientation of the stiff, the broken window and Anya’s compact purse gun lying on the floor at her feet. She ended up standing by the window with her back to everyone else when Anya spoke.

“My last client had just left in a rather foul mood, he kept claiming he hadn’t had his money’s worth…even though he most certainly did! I had Lola and her girls escort him out,” Anya spoke indignantly, as though she couldn’t believe a customer of hers was not satisfied by her ministrations, ”So when I heard the window break and all the banging and crashing next door here, I grabbed my gun thinking it was the bastard coming back.”

“And decided to check it out for yourself?” Faith asked sceptically, “Anya, we don’t keep you around here for your security skills…and you’re not exactly known for your bravery. Why didn’t you just call Lola?”

“Because any fucker who thinks I don’t give good value for money deserves a lesson!” Anya snapped, stomping one of her bare feet for effect, “I walked in here and the bastard shot at me…I fired back but when I turned on the lights it wasn’t him at all, it was this guy.”

Anya pointed at the stiff and them folded her arms across her chest, over her flimsy, short nightgown. Tara frowned, nothing added up. She walked across to the body and hunkered down beside it. The bullet had entered his chest, leaving a substantial tear in the flesh.

“Tara?” Willow spoke up, so far she had said nothing since they had arrived on the scene.

Tara didn’t reply, she stood and walked to the door where a single bullet had torn a chunk from the doorframe. Her fingers reached up and traced the splintered wood as she pursed her lips thoughtfully.

“You were standing in the doorway?” Tara’s question was obviously directed at Anya, although she did not turn and face her.

“Damn bastard nearly took my ear clean off,” Anya replied, touching the appendage just to reassure herself that it was still there.

“Pretty fucking awful shot for a cop,” Tara remarked, “Missing from such close range.”

“She said it was dark,” Mandy added, brow furrowed in an effort to understand where Tara was leading with her enquiry.

“The room was dark yes, Anya’s eyes would have had to adjust from the lit hallway into the dark room whereas he was already in the dark, the door opens and there’s Anya framed in the lit doorway…hence the fucking awful shot,” Tara turned and placed herself in the centre of the doorframe, almost as Anya would have stood when she opened the door, “And you fired two shots?”

Anya nodded in reply and Dawn added helpfully, “And one of them hit?”

“No, they both missed,” Tara said gruffly.

Faith grunted, “I’ve always said you couldn’t hit the side of a barn, Anya.”

“Then what the bloody hell happened here?” Mandy threw up her hands in frustration.

“Someone else shot him, the hole in his chest wasn’t made by that pop gun Anya was wielding, her two shots went here…”

Tara crossed the room, stepping directly over the dead body in the middle, before touching the wall between two unmistakable bullet holes punched through the wall. She then turned and faced the rest of the room, all eyes were fixed on her as though she had just stripped naked and done a little dance.

“Good catch,” Dawn nudged Willow’s side with her elbow, “She’s fucking brilliant.”

“Not really, simple, superficial crime scene investigation…and I’ve put enough bullet holes in people to know what kind of mess they make,” Tara stated matter-of-factly.

“What the fuck are you playing at?” Faith demanded of the ex-cop, obviously not as impressed as everyone else was with her ‘C.S.I’ skills.

“I’m saying Anya didn’t kill him,” Tara replied, unruffled by Faith’s attitude, “And although I can’t say who did for sure I’ve got my theory as to who was behind it all…it sure as hell wouldn’t be the cops, as corrupt as most of them are, they would never stoop this low. It’s an awful lot like Glory’s work…she’d love this sort of stuff.”

“You’re so busy thinking like a cop you’re missing the point Maclay. It doesn’t matter who shot him or why, all that matters is he’s dead on our turf…right in the guts of our turf. It means war plain and simple,” Faith stood with her arms folded staunchly across her chest, “That’s all that matters.”

Tara couldn’t accept what Faith had taken to be a given, “Talk to the cops, there’s still some good people left who would stand up to the Talbot’s…”

Tara bit her lip as soon as the words were out, they sounded pathetic even to her own ears.

“Who Tara?” Faith demanded, seizing on Tara’s discomfort, “I’m pretty fucking sure that you were the last bona fide hero in Basin City and look where you ended up! You wouldn’t be able to do jack for us. The only people who are going to get us out of this mess are ourselves.”

“Get Willow out of the building then, and Dawn, Anya, everyone who doesn’t need to be here…”

All the women in the room were alarmed when what remained of the window burst inwards, the exploding glass accompanied by a dark black shape. In the successive heartbeat, Faith whipped her pistol from its holster and would have dropped the intruder in an instant had she not recognised Buffy in her silky black Asian-style garb. The blonde woman dropped silently to the floor and rolled swiftly to her feet. Almost as soon as Buffy was inside and back on her feet, the wail of cop sirens filled the air outside. Everyone inside the Golden Palace knew that it was now too late to get out.

Buffy gave the body a single glance before lightly padding across the floor to stand before Faith who immediately saw the single tear in the sleeve of her loose fitting shirt. She was well aware that if their bullets could find Buffy then there was no way anyone else would get through. Buffy nodded in silent agreement, her small face stormy with anger as though she were pissed that someone had actually managed to hit her…even if it were only her clothing.

Faith issued orders coolly and efficiently, “It’s too late to get anyone out…Buffy, you know where you need to be…”

The deadly blonde woman nodded curtly again and was off at a run towards the stair well. She would make her way to the rooftop and from there make short and nasty work of any cop who tried to get into the Palace via that route.

As Buffy disappeared, Faith continued, looking around Tara’s hotel room to search out her younger Ladies. As she did, she saw Tara’s eyes dart discreetly to where Willow was standing still consoling Anya, a trace of anguish hidden behind a stony gaze.

Fucking brilliant. As I stand in that room with the dead body and the incredibly brave and foolish women who act as though they’re the fucking Light Brigade, I can’t take my eyes from the kid standing in the corner. This whole business has already gone far enough and I’ve at least got to try and end it.

“Willow and Dawn, I want you to…”

Tara’s sudden vice-like grip on her elbow interrupted cut her short and she turned to face her with an impatient expression. Faith wasn’t impressed at being manhandled from the hotel room and out of the line of sight of the room’s occupants.

“Stop this nonsense! I’m going out there, to hand myself over before any shit can start and you all get yourselves killed!” Tara hissed in a low voice so as not to be overheard.

“It’s not just about you anymore Tara!” Faith jabbed the taller woman hard in the chest with her index finger as she continued, “It’s about who owns Old Town.”

Faith could not afford to stand still and argue with Tara, she was on the move, a general marshalling her troops with an efficiently any military leader would be envious of, “Willow…Dawn, I want you to barricade yourselves in the third floor laundry. The rest of you, mount up, time for a good old fashioned shoot ‘em up.”

She then moved down the hallway, forcing Tara to trot along behind her like a dog…an analogy Tara was not impressed with. Faith was moving down the main stairs two steps at a time with Tara right behind her.

“People…Ladies, are going to die, is it worth it?” Tara persisted, even if Faith appeared not to be listening.

Faith didn’t pause for a moment, or even bother to look over her shoulder at Tara, “Fuck yes it is! If we don’t go to war now then none of us will ever be safe again. It will be a return to the old days of beatings and rape and men taking what they want from us whenever they want. Do you want that for Willow?”

Tara growled, now following Faith deeper into the bowels of the Golden Palace, “It’s not going to happen, I’ll protect her.”

Faith was quick to respond, even as she broke into a run, “And you’ll die trying…Tara, if you love her, you’ll let us do this, or better still, you’ll fight with us.”

As though to back up her point, Faith stabbed a combination into a pad beside the door she had come to a halt in front of. The pad clicked and Faith swung the door inwards, she flicked on the lights to reveal a small arsenal of weapons stacked on shelves and in racks. Clearly the Ladies were well prepared for a rainy day. Faith picked up an empty holster and chucked it to Tara as though that were the end of their argument.

Tara stared back at her and then at the cold steel in the rack opposite her. Before she knew what she was doing, she shrugged the leather coat from her shoulders and tossed it to one side. Such a cumbersome item of clothing would only hinder her movements. She was left clad in Faith’s cast off leather pants and her white prison issue vest which served to remind her of exactly where she did not want to return. The webbing for the holster slipped comfortably over her shoulders, the twin holsters nestling in the small of her back. She then selected a pair of her favourite Berettas from a rack nearest her, effortlessly slamming clips into both and then sliding them into the little pouches on her back. For the first time in eight years she felt the weapons comfortable weight and the security that came from knowing she could draw both in a heartbeat. With the Berettas in her hand, she knew exactly how much damage she could do, and just how hard she was to stop.

Faith looked on appreciatively, a small smile on her face.

“Why not,” Tara replied, meeting Faith’s gaze, “I’ve got nothing better to do.”

That was all I could say, ‘nothing better to do’…as though I was about to sit down to watch TV or eat a meal instead of try to save the woman I love.

~~~~~~

The Golden Palace’s exterior had seen better days, along with the rest of it. As the figure in the car peered up at it he smirked, seeing not just a rundown hotel, but the scene of his triumph and vindication. He would finally get to pay back that bitch for what she did to him. Pay her back by killing her and all the stupid whores who had taken her in. He knew full well how much a cop like her hated innocent people getting hurt or killed. It was the reason behind everything. If Maclay had been corrupt like every other good cop, he would have had his fun with that kid eight years ago and that would be the end of it. Instead he was a shadow of his former self, unable to get out of the car in which he sat even if he wanted to.

He saw police Captain Brewer approach his window and lowered it the merest fraction. The cop nodded respectfully, awaiting his orders. They were predictably short.

“Kill as many of them as you can, try not to kill Maclay but if it happens…well, it happens,” he liked the sound of it.

“With all due respect, I thought Maclay was wanted alive?” Brewer asked cautiously, not wanting to offend him.

“You know full well what happened to Amai, Brewer,” he snarled from inside the car, “Do you want my mother’s little pet watch dog, Spike, to do the same to you?”

Brewer shivered noticeably, “No sir.”

“Then I’d do what I say if I were you Captain Brewer, lest you piss me off…and you can be rest assured that I’m just as nasty and unforgiving as my mother.”

Brewer glanced up at the Golden Palace, he like many of the other cops had enjoyed many a wild party thrown by the Ladies in the hotel, all attended unknown to his wife of course. Although a glance was all he spared the place, he only had to think of the fat envelope that would greet him after this job was finished to forget all about those parties and concentrate instead on ‘officially’ sanctioned destruction and murder.

“Yessir Mr Talbot, no problem.”

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Tara peered from the window and saw the cop cars parked down on the street below and the cops swarming about, assuming their positions. She felt a strange sense of irony wash over her, as though she was seeing events unfold from someone else’s perspective.

I should be used to seeing things from the wrong side of the law by now. Especially after eight years behind bars and now running with Basin City’s most notorious prostitute cartel. I know the majority of the cops down there are following an order issued by the morally bankrupt fuckers above them but I also know the real truth is that those grunts would have no qualms about those orders. They’re cut from the same mould as that backstabbing ex-partner of mine, Seamus O’Hara. Rotten scum who would sell their own mothers for the merest hint of a cut of whatever’s going down. As I look down at them scurrying around in their uniforms, wearing badges that mean nothing, I realise that I’m beginning to enjoy being on the supposedly wrong side of the law. The more I think about it, the more right it seems. You know a city is fucked up when the good guys are drawn from the criminal element.

“Am I interrupting your concentration?” Willow’s soft voice sounded from behind Tara.

Tara shifted slightly so her head no longer presented a nice ripe target in the window and she turned her attention to Willow. The red head had been quick to change from her stage costume. She had donned a pair of well-worn jeans, a plain grey sweater and her red Converse shoes. Her hair still hung long about her face and down her back.

“Vigil more like,” Tara replied, feeling years worth of weariness lift from her shoulders at the mere sight of Willow.

“Do you think whoever planted that body knew you’d be able to figure it all out?” Willow asked quietly as she too strained for a view out the window.

Tara promptly placed her hand atop Willow’s head and pushed her back down before she had the chance to see anything. Willow plopped ungracefully backwards onto her arse. She opened her mouth to protest but received a rather stern look and she closed it again.

Tara shook her head, “It doesn’t matter how it got there…if Anya had charged in there with no weapon, the ruse would have been foiled completely. They did it because they can, to show us just how powerless we are in this game.”

“Well, it’s not very nice,” was Willow’s heartfelt reply.

Tara felt her facial muscles soften as though she was just one slight movement away from a smile. Willow shared none of Tara’s emotional reluctance and a warm smile spread across her face despite the situation they found themselves in. They remained like that for a few moment before the reality of what was going on outside came crashing back to Tara. In fact, she was mortified that Willow was anywhere near the front lines, in this case, the windows.

“I recall asking you to stay put where I left you,” Tara’s tone became gruff and serious, “If all hell breaks loose…”

“Then I’m safest at your side,” Willow interrupted promptly.

“Like hell you are,” Tara was unconvinced, “I want you out of the way.”

“Tara, if things turn to poo-poo around here them it’s going to be bad for everyone no matter where they are,” Willow knew full well she made a good point, “Besides, we need to have a serious chit-chat you and I.”

“Willow, we’re under siege by a bunch of greedy cops who don’t give a damn whether we live or die, now is not the time for chit-chat…serious or not!” Tara felt the cold weight of the pistols nestled against her back speak to this.

“We kissed Tara…unless you’ve already forgotten about Kitty’s and the dance…and the skimpy little outfit and us smooching in front of the whole crowd,” When Tara did not respond immediately Willow felt a sudden stab of anger but she kept it on a leash, “Are you going to go all staunch and quiet on me…or blame everything on my outfit?”

“A lot can be blamed on your outfit, Willow,” Tara replied dryly, again almost cracking a smile. She lifted her head a fraction and peered out the window to confirm the cops hadn’t moved in the last few minutes, she was still looking out the window when she finished her sentence, “But my actions can’t.”

“What can you blame it on then?” Willow response was immediate, for better or worse she was going to drag everything out of Tara, especially how the hardened ex-cop felt about her, “I wouldn’t think that Tara Maclay would change her mind without good cause.”

Tara watched the cops for a few more moments before turning back to Willow, she met the redhead’s gaze evenly. Willow had a determined set to her jaw and a gleam in her eye that hinted she was more than ready for a fight. She was dealing with the issues important to her, and everything else currently going on could go to hell. Against all better judgement, Tara knew that this was exactly what she wanted...

…although Tara knew full well the surrounding circumstances could have been better. Sitting in a rundown whorehouse with an army of cops outside and a cold hard weapon in your hands didn’t exactly have romantic connotations.

“I love you, Willow,” the words came out as one drawn out sigh, soft and tender as they ought to be. However, as if to reaffirm her fears, a siren blared at the precise moment she spoke and drowned them out completely.

“You what?” Willow frowned in frustration, she had barely seen Tara’s lips move.

I outwardly grimaced at the thought of having to repeat those horrid but delicious words, sirens continue to wail outside and I wish I could leap from the window and silence them all for this one moment. There are the cops outside, poised with their cannons ready to rip into flesh regardless of how innocent it is…and then there is this beautiful little minx sitting in front of me. Someone who deserves far more than all this…more than this grumpy old escaped criminal…but I suddenly realise I don’t care. I wish those sirens would shut the fuck up!

“I fucking love you, Willow Rosenberg!” Tara heard herself almost shout.

There was no trace of surprise on Willow’s face after the words had been uttered, but rather a little grin of triumph, a grin which Tara thought was entirely justified after the effort she had expended in trying to woo someone who had all but declared themselves eternally celibate.

The sirens stopped as though on cue for Willow, and Tara lifted her head to the window, suspicious of the silence. There was still no movement towards the building.

“I should be pissed off at your for making me wait so long…not to mention being a big meanie with all your denial,” was Willow’s honest reply when she had regained Tara’s attention once more, “Not to mention the fact that you’ve wasted our time together with your sulking and now I’ll probably die without ever even seeing you naked.”

Tara arched her eyebrows in Willow’s direction and replied in a deadpan voice, “Don’t count your chickens before they hatch kiddo.”

Just as a pout was beginning to form on Willow’s face, she saw the barest hint of a smile pass across Tara’s lips. It was only for a second as Tara must have felt it growing and turned quickly to peer out the window once more, her face lost to Willow. When she faced her again, it was gone, replaced by the serious Tara she knew all too well.

“I promise you’re not going to die Willow,” Tara stated firmly, “Although I might think about doing you myself if you don’t listen to me and get back to the laundry.”

“I will if you include me getting to see you naked in that promise of yours?” Willow asked cheekily.

Tara smirked, and was about to reply when the window above her shattered in a thunderous hail of gunfire. Panes of glass showered both Willow and Tara. Mere seconds after the shooting began, Tara grabbed Willow and rolled her away from the window, shielding her beneath her body. They lay, Tara’s cheek pressed against Willow’s forehead, her arms around her head. She felt the glass raining down on her and the sharp sting of each as it cut into the bare flesh on her arms.

Beneath her, Willow’s fingers clung to the fabric of her vest in terror. The redhead’s breath came hard and fast against Tara’s neck.

“I’m sorry,” Willow whispered in Tara’s ear, her voice barely sounding over the hail of gunfire.

“Don’t be,” Tara replied fiercely.

“If it’s worth anything, I fucking love you too,” Willow continued, her tone just as fierce.

The gunfire ceased and Tara knew they were going to come a split second later. She lifted her head and stared deep into those green eyes beneath her. The moment lingered beyond all sense of real time.

“It’s worth everything,” she replied in one breath.

As soon as the words were out, Tara was moving. She bounced onto her haunches to deposit a quick kiss on Willow’s forehead before practically throwing the redhead beneath a nearby coffee table. There was barely enough space for her to squeeze beneath it. Then she was on her feet, her boots grinding glass beneath them. She was about to feel for the Berettas at her back when something slammed into the side of her head. Tara reeled backwards against the wall behind her, feeling as though the side of her head had been blown away. She raised her hand to the source of the pain, expecting to find a mangled mess rather than the narrow graze she did find. Thrown off balance she was caught unprepared when a cop in full SWAT armour and helmet flew through the window. He had time to disconnect himself from his harness and move at Tara before she was able to collect herself from the bullet grazing her head. She stared down the barrel of a gun for far too many seconds before her arm lashed out and swiped it to one side. Bullets spewed from the weapon in an arc around Tara, punching holes in the wall dangerously close to her body.

My movements feel sluggish as I struggle with the cop, I try to keep the barrel of his weapon away from my body but I’m so tired, every muscle aches and I just want to go to sleep. There’s a flash of red hair in the corner of my eye. It’s more than just a glimpse of the kid, it’s seeing the woman I love and all the associated pain that comes with it. It’s hurts like hell and I’m glad for it. I feel stronger. I know that I can’t let anything end today...it’s just started.


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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby Guppy » Mon Jul 03, 2006 9:16 pm

Ahhh!! You can't end it there! What happens next?

Great chapter!
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby Thianne » Tue Jul 04, 2006 2:32 am

OF COURSE I CAN SHOUT FOR THIS CHAPTER! IT'S FUCKING BRILLIANT! I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT AND I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT! IT'S SO ROMANTIC....*sigh*

and i loved the "i've never even seen you naked" part... :lol
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby sacinema » Tue Jul 04, 2006 4:44 am

Hi Alcy, another chapter so soon? Wow. And a brilliant one. Some of the best romantic stuff I've read in a while. You know what? I love the melodramas of Douglas Sirk (mostly the fabulous Imitation of Life) and the power of your writing - espacially the emotions between Will and Tara - remembered me of his films. Gladly I know all will be fine in the end for our heroines. Thanks to the Kittenboard Rules and your great heart.

Funny Faith couldn't stop herself teasing. It's so shy little Willow to blush and tough Tara to growl. Later Willow shows herself more stubborn. She's a really interesting character (not that I don't love Willow in any way) in your story. So many faces between sexy dancer and shy schoolgirl. Thanks.

So, the fight must be short lived. You promised a private dance in the next chapter. I'm so waiting for that. You little tease.

Hmm, you must recognise who the stranger in the alley is...peroxided hair?

Yes, I definitely should have. My only excuse: I'm a W/T addict and I'm reading so many stories in progress at the moment, I lost the clues in your former chapters to Spike. You wanna know the real reason? My memory is absolutely bad. Sorry. I had a slight feeling that you described Spike but I lost memory of him being in the story. Forgive me? :pray
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby beanie » Tue Jul 04, 2006 7:22 am

HOLY CRAP!!!!! HOLY FRICKIN CRAP!!

Also, you have very punctual sirens, but not so punctual SWAT men. Bad SWAT men! Shame on you for ruining romantic moments. SHAME :shy

So much happiness for the very quick update, that accounts for a very large HUZZAH! And there were so many ways you could've handled a post-kiss interaction between Willow and Tara, so many bad negative it-was-a-fluke ways but I'm glad you didn't. Also because it wouldn't have made sense and would've been a whole lot harder to pull over on us.

Tara's CSI routine was quite charming. I love that show so I actually had a flashback of CSI while reading it. The way she recounted the details and her conclusions was exactly like the characters on the show. I'm sure that's also quite similar to how actual CSI agents work with a crime scene. Though the entire hopelessness of the situation could not have been avoided, especially with Faith practically spitting it out to the Ladies. And of course, the sirens. Good sirens.

The little scenes with Tara and Faith are doing much for building up that relationship. The friendship is quickly forming over their mutual love (though in different ways) for and desire to protect Willow. Plus, they're both leaders. I'm surprised that there wasn't more of a conflict between the characters in terms of leadership, though now that I think about it, it's probably because Tara's more of a loner than a team player whereas Faith's always got family. Is this how canon Faith would have acted if she had been given a chance to have a family? She would've head-butted with Buffy I guess, but in your fic conveniently Buffy is the strong and very silent killer.

Then we have the scene with the lovers. Oh good lovers. With the "I fucking love you"s, the quick kisses on the forehead, and the throwing underneath coffee tables. How romantic. Honestly, Alcy, don't you think they're being too fluffy (saarrccasssmm). Love isn't all hugs and puppies. There are guns, sirens, bribed police officers, SWAT men, blood, and shards of broken glass. When will you learn Alcy? Gosh! :p

Your maintenance of tone within scenes so drastically different as the ones you have just written is one of the most refreshing aspects of your writing. It's very easy to change pace and atmosphere when you're in a love scene, but you don't. And you haven't. So yay and yum!

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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby willohand » Tue Jul 04, 2006 8:14 am

oh bloody hell :thud
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby caz » Tue Jul 04, 2006 12:08 pm

Somebody really needs to tear Glory Talbot a new asshole. I want the bitch to suffer! I can probably come up with a few ideas for her little boy too.

Great update Alcy - I can't wait for the next one.

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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby db » Tue Jul 04, 2006 1:00 pm

I'm late on the uptake here - but wanted to say bravo and weeeeee and I am truely enjoying your story and *sigh* Tara said "it's worth everything" .... and it *is*.

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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby WillowRulez » Tue Jul 04, 2006 3:59 pm

Thank you so much for updating. I needed some cheering up after Germany lost against Italy :(
Glad that Tara didnt reconsider her actions but realized that she needed to tell Willow how she truly feels.
Please let everyone be ok? You can kill Faith for all I care *ducks* Nonono, dont throw anything at me.... okay, I dont want her to die either. But I figure somebody has to. Besides that Talbot ass. :x
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby Willow Watcher » Wed Jul 05, 2006 3:55 pm

Ooo Ooo Ooo! Getting goooood! Hell yeah! Go Tara! Go Tara! Kick those scumbags ass then get back to the snuggles with Willow and all the other stuff too. :smug

Great update. Can't wait for more! :bow
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby JustSkipIt » Thu Jul 06, 2006 4:20 am

Alcy,
You've done it again. You are really moving this story at an inspiring and energetic pace. I love the feel of each and every update. You've got the (trying to be) gruff Tara and Faith all business and Buffy swinging in windows and then Willow standing around in (I guess) g-string and pasties or something like that. The "I love yous" were adorable and I'm sure both women feel much better to have them out of the way.

Your cliffhanger is both well-written and evil. I love the concept of a first-person narrative in which the narrator becomes suddenly incapacitated or unreliable (because really, aren't all narrators somewhat unreliable). Here, we have huge unreliability.

I will say that I'm bolstered by this:
TBC in Chapter 9 – “Private Dancer.”


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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby watty » Thu Jul 06, 2006 8:37 am

That was very thrilling! I've said this before but you write action incredibly well ... and action is so hard to write. Glad that Tara could utilise her cop training for a little forensic work, very telling, what Faith is saying, that
[Tara is] the last bona fide hero in Basin City and look where you ended up

I really like how she and Faith understand each other. Two toughies, they know what they're up against and what they need to do.

Her concern for Willow, there's no denying the feelings now. Hasty declarations of love in the face of impending danger aren't the best, but they'll have to do for the time being. That is ... until Tara can get herself out of this current predicament she finds herself in, and then let Willow see her naked.
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby cantbefredless » Thu Jul 06, 2006 2:57 pm

this is a late fb for your last update... i loved it.. but i havent had time to read the new one hopefully tonight, but im going to try and come on tomorrow to fb on the new chapter.. but i love the last one.. very very hot!!!!

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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby Willowtree252 » Thu Jul 06, 2006 7:08 pm

:pinky YYYEEEEESSSSS I will lose control of my typing for your story anyday Love it I need more soon please :kdevil
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby Artemis » Fri Jul 07, 2006 3:44 am

Bad me, not leaving feedback for the previous chapter :ashamed Well, here it is, I'll be back later with feedback for Siege. But for now...

Dance For Me: Hummina :drool Great symbolism, using the coldness and impenetrability of the dance pole to represent Tara's steely facade, and thus the dance being a mirror of Willow's entire effort to get to Tara's heart, 'dancing' around her in every way she knows how. Did I mention hot? :drool Willow's definitely getting through, and not just in a superficial look-at-me-I'm-drool-worthy way - Tara's seeing her as a woman, not the young girl she used to be, and she's seeing Willow's dancing as something she loves, not a seedy career she needs to be 'rescued' from. I bet there were plenty of envious stares going Tara's way when she got up on stage and smooched :blush

The way you're using Spike is awesome - he's cocky, callous, punkish, dangerous, just the way he should be. And speaking of Spike brings me to Buffy, in the only way they should be linked, trying to kill each other, as opposed to, say, falling in love :happy - I really like Buffy too. You're writing her with this incredible style, she leaps right off the page with all kinds of ninja-ish coolness. I wonder what's in store for her - I've got this sinking suspicion that she who lives by the sword may die by the sword, but Sin City is nothing if not surprising, so I'm not giving up hope for her survival.

And just because I noticed it when I was coding the next chapter for Looking-glass, the title of the next chapter, 'Private Dancer' - I really hope that's not some ironic reference to, for instance, Glory capturing Willow and keeping her in a cage or something, because if it is what it suggests, Willow giving Tara a private dance with no-one else around to perve... yum :drool
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby willohand » Fri Jul 07, 2006 8:36 pm

I...I mean... :yikes oh damn it. :pray oh god Taraaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa....
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby Alcy » Mon Jul 10, 2006 1:34 pm

Guppy: I can too end it there if I want! Although don’t worry, you won’t be left hanging for long, I promise.

Thianne: Thanks very much indeed for the shouting, I love being shouted about! Glad you found it romantic…it was kinda wasn’t it…in a weird sort of way…

sacinema: Yes, I’m churning them out at the moment, could be that I’m not busy…or just that I’m busy but am procrastinating, hmmm, I think that’s it! Yes, Sin City will have a happy ending but I like to cram as much action and drama along the way as possible. I love a good mixing of drama and comedy, I don’t think I could do a pure comedy if I tried, I’d want to throw angst into the mix somewhere!

It’s hard to reconcile between Willow’s different personas, but I think it works given the different between who she actually is and the act she puts on when she goes on stage. On stage, she’s confident, sexy and bold and feels as though she can do anything. It’s this persona that eventually wins Tara over, but it’s the other that has to do all the hard work.

I’m not saying whether the fight is short lived or not, although the title for the next chapter does promise something far better than a fight doesn’t it?

Don’t worry about not picking Spike, we all have little lapses, especially when burying ourselves in fanfic to the point where we can’t think of anything else (says me who’s writing replies to feedback while I’m at work!)
Thanks very much Sacinema!

beanie: I don’t feel the slightest shame for ruining the romantic moment, I’m good at it! although you do realise that this just means the romantic moments to come will be even better…Although I too would feel the irresistible pull of scantily clad Willow, its good to know that it wasn’t a one off fluke and that it meant more to Tara than the initial lip-lock. This bodes well for the future (and for future nakedness).

I’m glad to know that the CSI routine came off kinda believable, I don’t actually watch that show so I was a little worried that it would come out all wrong…and I don’t have any aspirations towards becoming a detective either because my logic and reasoning is decidedly flawed! It’s interesting to note the rather pervasive role of sirens in this fic, almost as though they were a character! See the first chapter for their involvement too!

I enjoy writing Tara and Faith and the relationship between the two of them, it is beginning to have the makings of a friendship, albeit a very weird one. I like your analysis over Tara being a loner and Faith as the team player, I think this is entirely accurate and a good attempt to portray Faith as the leader of a ‘family’, although they are a little different from the Scoobies.

I love unconventional romances and I think this one takes the cake for being the weirdest in my fics so far. And yes, I love fluffiness! Let me know if there’s anything I can do to make it fluffier…we could always throw in a kitten…

I love writing everything at pace, although I love description as well. Some of my favourite authors do this very well, Tad Williams, Alastair Reynolds, big with the detail, but not at the expense of pace. I would only hope to aspire one day to their level of complexity.

I’m ever so glad you’re enjoying it so much, makes the writing more than worthwhile.

willohand: Thanks willohand, I’m glad to see this chapter had such an effect on you!

caz: And that someone tearing Glory a new arsehole would be Tara? I can’t think of anyone more appropriate! Thanks Caz, I hope to not keep you waiting for long.

db: You’re never too late, I’m glad it’s all worth it!

WillowRulez: I was supporting Germany as well so I can share in your disappointment, although the victory against Portugal for third place must have cheered you up a little!

Kill Faith? Surely not…although I killed Buffy in ‘Captain Red’ so I wouldn’t be surprised if I killed another major character in ‘Sin City.’ Although it would be a far better outcome for all the bad guys to die and the good guys to live…now that’s a good ending…

Willow Watcher: Gotta mix up the snuggles with some arse kicking! Although I’m sure it’s possible to have all snuggles and no arse kicking, but that would be boring (okay, maybe some Kittens would enjoy that!) Thanks WW.

JustSkipIt: The source material is very short and fast paced, and although this fic will tease that out somewhat, it will still end up being relatively concise. It lends itself well to moving along at a good pace and it’s fun to write when each chapter has such a clear place in the overall direction of the fic. I really feel as though I’m speeding towards the conclusion, although there’s still so much more to happen before then.

Very glad to hear that the cliffhanger worked in your opinion, its always good to know that ones choices actually make sense to other writers. Tara’s narrative is challenging to write, and some times its just a chore, but when it works I’m really pleased with it.

Glad to hear your anticipating the next chapter, I hope it will be worth it!

watty: Action can also be a chore to write but I love a good action story as much as the next Kitten so I’m glad I can deliver! Although maybe for my next fic I’ll take a break and write something lighter!

Faith and Tara are indeed two of a kind, although their lives have take very different trajectories. Faith found the Ladies which brought out her leadership qualities. Tara found the police force, which (in Sin City at least) turned her into a loner. A personality enhanced by her time spent in prison. And it’s not hard to see who’s going to bring her out of that shell.

Willow…and the accompanying hasty declarations serve to mark a sort of turning point in Tara’s character. You are right in the ‘hasty declarations of love in the face of impending danger aren't the best’ but they’re exciting no?, And will indeed have to last until they have the time to get naked!

cantbefredless: There wasn’t much time between the two chapters so I’m not surprised people missed out on leaving feedback, I must have been inspired! I hope you enjoy the chapter to come!

Dianneswillowtree: Thanks very much! More to come very soon.

[b]Artemis:/b] Yes, shame on you Chris! But you’re forgiven very quickly! I love your analysis of Willow’s pole dancing, it’s the medium through which she can really express herself and show Tara just how much she means to her and that she should pay attention to her because she’s fucking hot!

Spike’s exactly the way he should be, I always had trouble writing season6/7 Spike, now that I’ve begun to explore villain Spike I don’t think I’ll ever go back. And I also don’t think I’ll go back to having Buffy as a speaking character! (Although I might have trouble writing her as a mute in other settings!) After killing Buffy in Captain Red, I wouldn’t be so callous as to kill her in Sin City too? Or would I?

Yes, I could ruin a lot of expectations by what I do with the next chapter, but trust me, it’ll be good!
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby ringwaldoeuvre » Mon Jul 10, 2006 10:33 pm

I haven't left feedback for this wonderful story, and I am certainly sorry. Your writing ability continues to impress. I've read all your stories (yes...all) and I am especially impressed that you can capture the tone of an era or movie or genre and turn it into a great W/T story.

This tale is no exception. I am particularly taken with your ability to paint the dark tone and mood of a scene, something that is so critical in a noir piece. I suppose that's why they call it "noir," but... anyway. I can't spell it out, just know that I am floored and look forward to more. I will try to come up with more specific thoughts after your next update. Which will be soon, yes?

~Mary
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My sister: Well the real question is, why does he bother working out when no one will ever love him?
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby Artemis » Tue Jul 11, 2006 6:54 am

I'm back having read 'Siege', and wow. There's something so Sin City about 'I fucking love you' - anywhere else it'd seem crude, here it's weirdly romantic. Buffy continues to be the coolest thing ever with all her ninja moves. And although I'd much rather he be quietly taken out the back and shot, it's kind of nice to know that Talbot jr is miserable with what's left of his life.

I'm really, really heartened to see Tara thinking about a future - she's been pretty kick-ass all along, but now, with a reason to live, the amount of ass she can kick has risen phenomenally. I liked her little CSI moment too, but Faith's probably right - it's all very interesting, but it won't make a lick of difference now that the shooting's started.
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby cantbefredless » Thu Jul 13, 2006 12:02 pm

i love the update.. and last night i decided to watch Sin City again... but i still wish the movie was like this story cause then i would watch it all the time.. but awesome update cant wait for more!! :dance
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