Camp Flutie, Part Two

[MorganArcher]

i wish every time i got walked in on it turned out that well!

naughty me, i've been walked in on twice and both were baaaaaaaaaad

morgan

(more friendly with the devil on my shoulder than the angel)

"Hey! Respect the narrative flow, much?"

[sistakind]

i am addicted to camp flutie...i am soo happy its back...i keep checking for updates...i would do ANYTHING for an update..hee hee...anything.

[Tulipp]

Rane, Rane. Don't go away. (Okay, totally lame, but I've never said it before, so I had to.)



See, when I read the first of the last two chapters, I was thinking "dang, I wish I'd seen something like what Jaime saw when I was 15. It would have saved me years of angst trying to figure stuff out."



Then, when I read the next chapter, I was thinking "oh, I wish I'd had someone like Jaime to explain things to when I was figuring stuff out at Willow's age."



Best of both worlds there, baby.

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"I came to see the damage that was done and the treasures that prevail." -- Adrienne Rich.

[barnabasvamp]

Rane;



Good call, the truth is almost always the best.



You realize of course, that you will always be remembered for "the truck"



Thank goodness you reminded me that camp has 2 more weeks, Whew!



BV

"In front of total strangers won't you kiss me, Flowers for no reason but you miss me - OOH, I wanna be in love"

Melissa Etheridge-Skin

[Spice Faerie]

Rane, That update ROCKED!!! See, I knew Jamie would be totally cool. Willow was so adorable with her, "well there was the truck" line. That girl cracks me up. Keep up the great work. I can't wait for more.



Morgan, Technically you were interrupted three times if you want to include the one time we were interrupted by your grandmother (or was it great grandmother) and I pretended I was under the covers "searching for my lost sock..."



Spice

"No candles? Well, I brought one. It's extra flamey..."

[The Rose24]

I am going to sound like a broken record, but Jaime is so cool. I am glad she didn't freak out.



I am really happy you updating more frequently.

Tara: My heart doesn't stutter.

Tara: Willow, I got so lost.
Willow: I found you. I will always find you.

Willow: Hi, um Tara. I was wondering maybe you want to go out some time for coffee? food? Kisses and gay love?

Edited by: The Rose24  at: 10/6/02 11:16:12 pm

[mollyig]

Love the image of Willow re-reading the poem so many times. So lovely!



I'm pleased it was Jamie that interrupted, she's a brainy type she'll just figure out that our girls are meant to be together and accept it.

Adding up the total of a love that's true, multiply life by the power of two
Indigo Girls

[MorganArcher]

spice, you are EEEEEEEEVIL

i'm just a vixen, i'm too well-meaning to be evil

i just wanna get naughty at the wrong times in the wrong places, with the wrong relatives wandering around

Morgan

"Hey! Respect the narrative flow, much?"

[Spice Faerie]

Morgan, I'm not evil just painfully honest.



Spice

"No candles? Well, I brought one. It's extra flamey..."

[Lonewolf22]

Rane: Great two updates, it really sucks that they got caught and that they were interrupted but at least it was Jamie and not somebody who doesn't know about them. I really liked the conversation that Willow and Jamie had, its really cool that she understands, and Willow's explination of love was really sweet. I really hope that Tara tells Willow about Ojai soon. I can't wait to read more.



Lonewolf

[Scout]

"I'll attack you." heehee - so funny!



Okay, I know that was like a couple updates ago, but I'm just getting caught up. Work with me.



And I agree with Tulipp, I could have used some Camp Flutie in my youth, that's for sure. Lucky girls.



Great stuff, Rane, as always. Thanks!!

[Puff]

Oh I had two updates to read, you posting fiend Rane I am glad they were honest with Jamie and I liked her reaction especially telling them to kiss goodbye. That was sweet.

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You know, it's a real deal relationship and that's why people can relate to it
Amber Benson

[MorganArcher]

well, since we're being all honest....

why don't you tell the whole class how you didn't even LIKE tara at first, huh, spice?

yes, i think that blasphemy outweighs any immodesties by me: -->

tsk tsk

morgan

"Hey! Respect the narrative flow, much?"

[Rane018]

Little c- little jamie is a cutie. I like her. there’s more to come with her.



Singgirl- no date? We’ll see about that. hehe…



CK- you ARE SEXY! You are a hot mama yamma and you WILL do your little sexy dance for me!!!! Please. Pretty please. Come on… don’t be shy now! And as for brian giving you lessons… HAHAHAHA…. I’d like to see that. he’s usually busy reading w/t fanfic, cussin like a drunken saiilor, passing out over toilets and selling guns and alcohol to minors. I love ya TEN TEN!!!!! And see, another bed scene for you. what’s that now? Three camp bed scenes? Oh, how I spoil you! Poor lil CK and her thesis. Are your students driving you crazy too?



Morgan- you are too cute.



Sistakind- how about tying my little muse on my bed? MC forgot to do that this time around. They help with faster updates.



Tulipp- lame, no. never! Ok, so maybe at first I was like she must be smokin’ ME’s crack but then I figured it was that rain dance song. Hehe. I’m so glad you liked that update. I was afraid no one would get it and think of it as deeply as I did. Hehe. I’m so kidding. But yes, thanks for feeling that. As for seeing things like that when 15 I saw it plenty just never thought I’d spend years trying to figure out how to get it. and as for being a willow to a jamie, yeah I’d love to be able to mentor someone like that. like I’ve said before jamie’s like my little cousin in real life and a bit Dawnlike presence for Willow. Hugs!



Barnabas- lol, I should have my sig be *YES! I WROTE THE DAMN TRUCK SCENE!* that would be hilarious! Two more weeks of camp? Sort of… just cause camp has two more weeks doesn’t exactly mean willow and Tara do. Hehe. EVIL! I know, but you all knew that too right?



Spice- thanks! I missed those bouncing smilies. Lil ellie’s mia again. you and morgan are too cute.



The rose- hehe, thanks. I’m glad too. There’s not a lot left so the rest shouldn’t take too long but I tend to write when my muse decides and so… that’s what takes forever. Hehe…



Molly- hell, If I’d gotten a letter like that I wouldn’t even be putting it away under the bed. Jamie sure is smart. Maybe in beta I should write a bit more description on how she saw w/t glowing and in love and all that yucky stuff and so then her question to willow wont be so out of the blue. I know to us whenever they looked at each other you could just tell but I need to learn to narrate more. Hehe… thanks!



Lonewolf- hi amor! I’m so happy you liked this part. Hope to update soon. hehe. HUGS!



Scout- in our family we have what’s called *attack time* where we tickle people on beds. Don’t know why I had willow say that. Hehe… as for camp Flutie in your youth, this story was actually started as a *young adult novel* that was one of my new years resolution. I decided to turn it into a W/T fic just to make it easier. Who knows one day after a billion rewrites to erase every single copywritten character and buffyverse story line there just may be a camp flutie novel out there. huge overhaul but the essence would be the same. Two girls meeting at camp and falling in love. Who knows.



Puff- I liked Jamie telling them to kiss too. I found it funny.

[Spice Faerie]

You're just mean, Morgan. Mean, mean, mean... It's okay, though 'cause I worship Tara now, don't I? I was just a little jealous that someone else had Willow but now I like Tara even better than Willow so there!



Spice

"No candles? Well, I brought one. It's extra flamey..."

[MorganArcher]

aw, rane, i'm not as cute as this fic!

but first, 900 pages of "mists of avalon" await for my "legend of king arthur" class...

man, i love college , but i'm crazy...

only a looney would read fanfic to take a break from homework (yes, i AM blind and yes

i AM constantly reading something)

camp flutie rox my world,

morgan

"Hey! Respect the narrative flow, much?"

[saule77]

OMG!



I go away from the board for 3 little days (but I have excuses, Your Honour) and what do I find when I come back? Not 1 but 2 updates! Now THAT makes a Kitten happy...



Is Jamie the third Summers sister, with all the bad timing and stuff? At first, I was very happy with her for interrupting smoochies time but I really liked her conversation with Willow afterwards...

Poor Tara... I bet she's feeling all guilty now...



Thanks Rane! Great update. AGAIN.





*Going back to read the "truck" part again... That was a masterpiece*

"You are Willow Rosenberg, vixen-y lighter of the flame and keeper of my heart.”

(Camp Flutie by Rane)

[spazz07]

Hey Rane, i finally got all caught up and i must say the only disappointing thing was that i ran out of parts to read I lve the growing story line you've implemented, yeah i see the ball rollin' Looking forward to Tara talking things through with Willow and getting away from her mean old family. I can totally see Tara acting out after her mother's deathm i'm glad you showed that side of her personality in this story As for getting caught, they were just lucky it was Jamie and not Jen



Cheers

Nath

Isn't it funny how you feel your most tired five minutes before you have to get up.

[barnabasvamp]

RANE;

Now young lady........ Don't be teasing or going all evil on the vamp here

There must be more "time" for our girls...



LOL , you are so right- it would make a great sig, and what a way to be remembered



Will be waiting for more.

BV

"In front of total strangers won't you kiss me, Flowers for no reason but you miss me - OOH, I wanna be in love"

Melissa Etheridge-Skin

[Rane018]

Saule- hey you! Hehe, updates galore! I know I’m a silly otter. But I’m glad to make you happy! I like jamie and yeah I make a lil dawnie out of her at times. so you’re off to read the truck scene eh? Maybe I should have stopped the fic after that. lol..



Nath- hi honey! glad you caught up and that you liked the fic. I’m trying to expand a bit further into tara cause we all know how lame of a job ME did. Happy to hear it sounds possible and real. Could you imagine if jenn had caught them? Well, she’d probably think it’s pay back for when willow caught her. hehe…



Barnabas- going evil on a vamp would be pretty funny no? but there will be more time for the girls, don’t worry.

[saule77]

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so you’re off to read the truck scene eh? Maybe I should have stopped the fic after that. lol...

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NOOOOO, Rane! As fantastic as the truck scene was, it definitely would have been a mistake to have left the story as that! 'Cause then, we wouldn't have had the cinema scene...

"You are Willow Rosenberg, vixen-y lighter of the flame and keeper of my heart.”

(Camp Flutie by Rane)

[Cindipitude]

Hehehe...my thoughts exactly.

Can't wait for more....I'm not above begging, tho I like to keep that more for *special* occasions...Ooops.

I said that out loud, huh?

[Spice Faerie]

Well, I'm certainly not above begging either and would just like to say, "PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE give us some more....SOON!" Seriously though, I really love this fic and can't wait for some more...



Spice

"No candles? Well, I brought one. It's extra flamey..."

[Rane018]

hehe, trust me if i wasn't such a prude there would have been a lot more to that cinema/bathroom scene. but i am and i blush whenever i think about the truck.



but yeah, you kittens are right, i would never have stopped Camp Flutie there. i'm loving this fic, i love writing it and i love reading it. it's kinda weird to actually like your own stuff. i think the fact this is such a silly fic, so simple, that i'm not worried about fight scenes or plot bunnies or anything like that. it just flows.



update hopefully this weekend. toodles and hugs!

[witchbitchwillow]

okay, ten pages later and im all caught up . i love this fic loads and loads! and ive relaly missed readung it. now that the summers over it kinda brings back all the memories of it hehe.



more soon please rane!!!



xelliex

**"Damn gayly forward!"** Anya- into the woods by blameburner.

[Rane018]

*pouts* ellie! where are your bouncing smilies?!

JOYCE- (speaking of Dracula) He came by the gallery, and he was amazingly well informed about art history-
TARA- Probably because he was around for most of it.

*Buffy vs Dracula*

[Canadian Kitty]

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hehe, trust me if i wasn't such a prude there would have been a lot more to that cinema/bathroom scene. but i am and i blush whenever i think about the truck.

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well then surely the powers of my sexy dance would overwhelm and shock you Rane. I wouldn't want to make you swoon or anything.



CK

"I'm not coming back." Willow. Villians

[Rane018]

oh sush you! you still owe me your sexy dance. i will NEVER forget that! i will fly all the way to nova scotia to see it! hehe...

[MadeinNZ]

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trust me if i wasn't such a prude

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OK - who are you and what have you done with our beloved Rane?

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Anya: I have finesse! I have finesse coming out of my bottom!

[sistakind]

i think for the lack of fic updates..which i am sure is going to be wonderful....i shall go back and also re-read the truck scene...i loved the truck scene....ohh man....the truck scene...i will go over there now.