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Re: The Star Witches Saga. Now Up: EP 1 Ch. 16

Postby AlysonGoddess » Sun May 21, 2006 5:48 pm

Go tara! U save that girl! :) this story is definitly awesome I dig it but uhm plz update soon? :)
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Re: The Star Witches Saga. Now Up: EP 1 Ch. 16

Postby SithLordWiccan » Tue May 23, 2006 8:30 am

AlysonGoddess: Hey, haven't seen you in a while. Glad to have you back. Update to go up in a few. :)
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Re: The Star Witches Saga. Now Up: EP 1 Ch. 16

Postby SithLordWiccan » Tue May 23, 2006 8:37 am

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[center]Chapter Seventeen[/center]

”What am I doing?”

Those four words had been running circles in Willow’s mind as she escorted the two Neimoidians back the way they had come. No matter how much she tried, she knew that she couldn’t maintain for much longer the butch persona that she had been quickly forced to adopt in order to show them that she meant business. The only thing that gave her some comfort was that the Neimoidians apparently weren’t aware of her shaking resolve.

Or if they were, they weren’t about to make any effort to do anything about it.

She watched as one of them, most likely the Viceroy, moved to sit down on the throne. Reluctantly, she raised her blaster, noting that his movement slowed.

“You’re not going to shoot me just because I’m going to sit on a chair, are you?” he sneered.

Willow was reluctant to agree, but kept the blaster raised all the same. “Just don’t try anything funny.”

Sitting down, the Viceroy glared at the blaster being pointed at his face, then at Willow. “You won’t use that.”

Willow was more than a little surprised by the statement. She had hoped that she wouldn’t be found out this soon.

“What do you mean?” she asked.

The Viceroy’s red eyes bored into Willow’s face, making her feel uneasy. “You’re a Jedi. You’re not a killer. You would never do anything unjust to another living being.”

Willow’s face grew cold, as she rested her finger on the blaster’s trigger. “You mean like you? What you did to this planet? What you did to my Master? Like you did with me?”

“That was not my doing,” The Viceroy huffed. “I was strongly against taking you as a prisoner.”

Willow scoffed at that.

“It’s true!” The Viceroy insisted. “None of this is what I wanted. But, like you, I have become a pawn in a far greater scheme.”

Willow’s brow creased. “What are you talking about?” She thought she caught the Viceroy give a small grin, but before she could inquire about that, the Viceroy continued to talk.

“I…I was forced into this plot,” he said. “It was the wish of…” A slight pause, as if he couldn’t quite describe the person he was talking about. “A higher power.”

“Higher power?” Willow inquired. “What do you mean?”

“I…I cannot say,” the Viceroy stuttered. The act painfully reminded Willow of her Master, who often stuttered whenever she was nervous. She could use this to her advantage.

“You’d better,” she said, unconsciously putting the power of the Force behind her words. “Or else I just scratch my itchy finger.”

Willow wasn’t sure, but she thought she saw the color drain from the Viceroy’s face. “He’s…he’s…”

Groaning, Willow fired a blast directly above the Viceroy’s head, sending small chunks of plaster down on top of his head. She noted, with some satisfaction, that the act caused him to cower even further.

“Who…is…it?” she hissed through clenched teeth.

The Viceroy whimpered. “Please…please…I’ll tell you. Just promise me…”

Willow let out a breath. She was getting sick of having to deal with him, and was more than willing to do whatever was necessary to get the information out of him. “What? What is it that you want?”

She would never find out the answer to that question, for moments after the words passed through her lips, she felt a wave of pain across her back. The blaster she had been holding fell useless from her grip as she slid to the floor.

Her last thought was that she had once again allowed her emotions to overcome her, and that Tara was now in more danger because of it.

**

Wiping some remnants of plaster from his robes, Nute Gunray looked up at Rune Haako’s, who held in his hands a rather exquisite statue. He wasn’t sure what surprised him more: the fact that his Lieutenant had acted very much out of character or that the Jedi had been taken completely unaware of it.

“That was…rather dangerous,” he noted, getting to his feet.

“I thought…that it would be a good idea,” Haako pointed out. “After all, she seemed so intent on causing you harm.”

Straightening his miter, Gunray affixed Haako with a icy stare. “At least we’ve captured her once again.”

“But what do we do with her?” Haako asked. “With the Sith taking care of the other Jedi, there is no one who can guard her.”

Gunray was about to respond when the armrest communicator inset to the throne began to beep. Heading over, he pressed the button. “What is it?”

”We have captured the Queen, sir,” came the mechanized voice of a battle droid. ”We are bringing them to your location now.”

Gunray let out a smile. In the space of thirty seconds, his fortunes had changed quite dramatically. The Jedi had been recaptured and the Queen was now his prisoner.

There was nothing that could ruin this day for him now.

**

The two Jedi had performed well; Maul had to grant them that. But they, much like the female, would succumb to his power. Even now, the younger of the two was trapped down the corridor, his path blocked by the defensive laser shields that protected the room in which both he and the elder Jedi, who Maul could feel growing weaker with every passing moment, were currently engaged in deadly combat.

Good. He could watch helplessly as he killed his Master. Then he would return to deal with the younger one. And once they were both out of the way, he would gladly send the female to join them.

Blocking a strike aimed for his head, Maul knew the time was now. Seizing the advantage, he slammed his own weapon against the Jedi’s arms, sending them upward. Allowing a grin to form on his face, he spun on his heels, driving his blade deep into the Jedi’s chest.

He heard a yell, and realized that the younger Jedi was angry. Good. Much like the female, he would teach him to use that hate. Then, when he had learned his lesson, he would join his Master in the great beyond.

**

The time for stealth had long passed. Tara realized that now. And as her lightsaber sent another battle droid to the scrapyard, she realized how wrong she had made things. How sheltering Willow led to her stunted growth as a Jedi. How her leading the two of them to the Gungans had led them to be exiled from their home. How her indecision to act had gotten her captured.

But she was close. So very close. Willow was nearby. She could feel it. She only had to make it past these battle droids…

And suddenly, without warning, she felt something through the Force. It was if someone had delivered a roundhouse kick to her midsection. The breath was immediately knocked out of her, and she collapsed to her knees.

Something terrible had just happened. But what could it have been? Had her prophetic dream come to pass? Was Willow now dead? Or had Master Qui-Gon been killed? She had no way of knowing for sure which of those scenarios had just played out.

All Tara knew was that someone close to her had just died. And she, in one way or another, was responsible.

She had to press on, however, but suddenly became aware of the fact that she was no longer alone. Approaching her from either side was a battle droid. All pointed their blasters straight in her direction.

“On your feet, Jedi,” one of them spoke.

Tara did so, fighting the urge to smile. These droids would no doubt take her to the Viceroy. Once she was there, she would be able to find out from him what happened to Willow. If she was alright, she wouldn’t do anything to harm him.

If not…no. She wouldn’t think about what would happen if Willow wasn’t alright. That was the old Tara. The Tara crippled by her fears. The Tara she no longer was.

And, as the droids marched down the corridor, the Tara she vowed, once again, she would never be again.
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Re: The Star Witches Saga. Now Up: EP 1 Ch. 16

Postby Emms » Tue May 23, 2006 8:38 am

Oh YAY! update!!! Dibs. :D
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Re: The Star Witches Saga. Now Up: EP 1 Ch. 17

Postby Hers Always » Tue May 23, 2006 9:57 am

I don't say enough how much i love this story. Well I must be off. I just wanted to relay a little praise your way.
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Re: The Star Witches Saga. Now Up: EP 1 Ch. 17

Postby notl33t » Tue May 23, 2006 12:03 pm

Oh no! Willow got captured again. But not before getting all persuasive with her itchy finger.

Tara probably feels like its some cosmic day of reckoning or something. It was interesting to see her thought processes related to everything that was going wrong, Willowcapture, Gungans, etc...

And I'm interested in seeing whether Darth Maul lives or dies...

Overall, grand update, chip chip, keep it up and all that stuff.
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Re: The Star Witches Saga. Now Up: EP 1 Ch. 17

Postby Devi Crystalseeker » Wed May 24, 2006 5:15 am

Yay for badass itchy finger Willow! (even if she got captured again)

And "grrrrr!" for the Neimodians. Now I feel even better knowing that (spoiler tag for those who haven't seen ROTS) [spoiler]Darth Vader will kill the buggers.[/spoiler]

And double "yay!" for no more crippled by her fears Tara.
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Re: The Star Witches Saga. Now Up: EP 1 Ch. 17

Postby PancakesinBellies » Wed May 24, 2006 5:48 am

Yay! Such a nice update. Now all you have to do is get them together, then they can rescue the Queen and make with the smoochies. And after :wtkiss comes the gay love. ;-)
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Re: The Star Witches Saga. Now Up: EP 1 Ch. 17

Postby Darth Pacula » Fri May 26, 2006 11:50 pm

Oh ruddy hell, I missed an update on this too! What the heck is with me these days.

Anyway, g'day Sith.

Right then, chapter 16 then. Well, despite her distaste for blasters, at least Willow doesn't share the stereotypical shitty aim of Stormtroopers. That was a nasty little anecdote there about Tara getting shot, but it was also a nice nod (or should that be a thumbing of the nose :grin) to Seeing Red, and supplied a good reason for Willow's dislike of the weapon.

That was also a nice touch having the Battledroid's blaster lack a stun setting. That forced Willow to make a choice between bluffing, or just shooting the fleeing Neimoidians. Personally I'd have at least shot one in leg to make a point, but then again that's why I'm not a Jedi. Aside from that whole fictional reality thing. :grin

And yay for Tara finally shedding her second-guessing, lack-luster persona. That's what I wanna see in my Jedi!

And now, chapter 17.

Ahh, Willow, sweet lovable Willow. See, this is why I'm happy to be in touch with my inner ruthless bastard, so I don't have to worry about bluffing in that sort of situation.

Given I know what's concealed in that throne, I got a bit of the wiggins when Gunray sat down in it. Until I remembered that he wouldn't know about the throne's hidden little present. :blush

I have to admit, Willow getting brained by Rune amused me on multiple levels. First, because Willow was so close to getting Nute to admit to Sidious' existence, and second because Willow didn't sense it coming.

There was nothing that could ruin this day for him now.


Jinx! Will this twit never learn?

It was a nice touch showing us Qui-Gon's death from Maul's point of view. I always like to get inside the villains head. They're frequently more fun, if not quite as nice.

If I was Tara (what a thought! :p) I'd be grinning too. Those dimwitted droids didn't even disarm her! :lol

Nice job, mate.

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Re: The Star Witches Saga. Now Up: EP 1 Ch. 17

Postby SithLordWiccan » Sat May 27, 2006 10:47 am

Hers Always: Glad to know you're still reading and that you enjoy it so much. :)

notl33t: Well, Willow's not really captured. She just got knocked out. Our two Neimoidian putzs were all set to run away again when they got word that the Queen had been captured. And with everything going so well for them, I guess they just decided to stick around. Of course, we all know better than that, don't we? ;)

Devi: I know. Badass Itchy Finger Willow is kinda cool. And I wanted to show that she wasn't above using whatever tools were necessary in order to accomplish a job, something that I hope to explore further later on. :)

And yeah, Tara's not shaking in her boots anymore. Of course, that could be a good thing or a bad thing depending on how you wanna look at it.

highlandlass25: Thanks. I don't really think there will be much gay love in this fic (that's why I started "Under the Sea"), but there will be smootchies. :)

Paul: I'm glad that you enjoyed that little nod to Seeing Red. I particularly enjoy mixing Buffy and Star Wars together. (The conversation between Willow and Tara in Chapter Six was meant to be a nod to their conversation at the end of "Family", Tara giving Willow her lightsaber a nod to the Doll's Eye crystal, etc.). Of course, it may appear that I'm leeching off others, but I think that it give this a style all its own. At least, that's what I hope.

I didn't want Willow to think that just because she's got the power and the ability she can do whatever she wants without thinking of the consequences (That's what ruined Season 6 for me). It's something that I've had running through this fic as well, what with her being upset about destroying the AAT, apparently disprespecting Tara towards the Gungans, going overboard during the fight with Maul, etc. That's the difference I see between Buffy Canon Willow And Star Wars Jedi Willow: Canon Willow, being a normal person, has an ability that she thinks makes her special, and thus uses to make herself feel important. Star Wars Jedi Willow, by contrast, is the proverbial drop of water in a big pond, and thus wouldn't see herself as needing to go out of her way to make her feel special. To her, whatever she can do to please Tara (get your minds out of the gutter, folks) is enough to make her feel special.

Like I said above, Tara's definitly shaken off her insecurities, though time will tell whether or not that's a good thing.

I would agree that Willow is a bit naive, but I think that's what makes her an interesting character, especially in this sort of setting. She's just not enough of a person to think that anyone, even the bad guys, can do wrong.

As for Willow getting beaned, I did that for several reasons. The first, obviously, is to present the Neimoidians in a different light than the movie (in which they were presented in too much of a cowardly role for my liking) and to give Willow an idea that there is more to what is going on than she suspects.

The scene with Maul was intended to play on Tara's vision that she had earlier in the fic, in which saw Qui-Gon die at the hands of Maul, only to watch as he changed into Willow. It kinda brings an undercurrent to the whole situtation when she finds out what happens.

Thanks for reading. :)
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Re: The Star Witches Saga. Now Up: EP 1 Ch. 17

Postby SithLordWiccan » Tue Jun 13, 2006 7:47 am

Sorry this took so long. School and a lot of other things took up the majority of my time. But at least I can say that I got one sixth of my planned saga done. So that's something.

Anyways, here it is. The conclusion. The end. The be all end all of everything. :)

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[center]Chapter Eighteen[/center]

Nute Gunray rubbed his hands in anticipation. It was almost too good to be true. The Queen was now in his grasp, two of the Jedi were his prisoners and now the entire debacle was coming to an end with little damage other than a few hundred easily replaced battle droids. Well, not easily replaced, but credits were nothing to him. He was certainly guaranteed a plentiful treasure trove out of the conquest of Naboo.

It was all going according to plan.

But he felt uneasy.

Perhaps it was the fact that, in the middle of what had been the worst moment out of a conflict ripe with situations that could easily be described as worst moments, the fact that everything was going to plan now somewhat concerned him. There was an old proverb that said a fool would work hard to get what he wanted, only to have victory snatched away from him at the last moment.

It was deceptively eerie how much that phrase could be applied here.

Still, he had his scapegoat. With the female Jedi still his captive, her Master would not do anything rash. And the Queen…well, the Queen would serve her purpose well, and then she would die.

He might even bring himself to do the deed personally.

It would certainly be ironic.

Watching as the prisoners were escorted into the room, he noticed that both the Queen and the Jedi held looks of grim determination in his direction, almost as if they had some sort of plan. No matter. It would not succeed. The group was surrounded on all sides by battle droids, all of whom had their blasters trained in their direction.

If they tried anything, the Queen, the Jedi and the others would be corpses by the time they hit the ground.

Affixing an authoritative look onto his face, he turned to look at the Queen. “It would appear that your attempted insurrection is at an end, Your Majesty.”

“Is it?” the Queen replied nonchalantly.

The comment stung Gunray, and he choked down the silent curse that he had been prepared to say. It most certainly was over. She was his captive, as were two of the Jedi. The other Jedi, he hoped, would have their lives ended at the hands of the Sith. There was nothing that she could do to salvage the situation.

But he couldn’t shake the feeling that his wall of confidence had just lost its vital support, and that it was starting to crumble.

Turing to the Jedi, Gunray attempted to regain his lost confidence. “And as for you, your apprentice put up a brave front. Almost atypical of her, considering how much I thought…” he paused, trying to figure out how to describe the Sith without naming him. A smirk appeared on his lips as he realized what could easily insult her. “How much I thought she couldn’t stand the interrogation.”

If the Jedi felt any frustration or hostility, she didn't let it show. A pity. He would have enjoyed watching the droids reduce her to a pile of ash. Turning his attention back to the Queen, he continued, “And now, Your Majesty, it is time for you to sign the treaty and put an end to this pointless debate.”

He thought he heard footsteps and the unmistakable sound of blaster discharges outside the room, and looked up to find…

”No. No! It wasn’t possible!”

“Viceroy!” a female that looked liked the Queen shouted. “Your occupation has ended!” Raising the blaster she held, she fired directly at two of the droids stationed by the door.

Gunray fumed. He could not believe he had been tricked. Well, the Queen would pay for that. Gesturing to the closest droids, he said, “This one is a decoy! Guards, after her!”

Four of the droids took off after the Queen and her entourage as the decoy moved to the throne.

Gunray caught the action immediately. “What are you doing?”

“Sitting down,” the decoy spat. “You’ve denied me everything else. You wouldn’t deny me this, would you?”

Gunray was disgusted. Human females were, after all, so repulsive. It was any wonder how they came to be vital to the affairs of the galaxy. If he had his way, he would never allow a female to get into a position in which she could challenge his authority and power.

With a dismissive hand, he allowed the woman to sit, turning to look at the Jedi crumpled on the floor, then back to the blonde. “It is too bad she did not put up more of a struggle. Perhaps her training was inadequate…or perhaps she had a bad teacher.”

“CAPTAIN!”

Gunray spun on his heels, seeing the Queen withdraw a pair of blaster pistols from the armrest of the throne, tossing one of them to one of the uniformed guards.

“What?!”

**

Tara hadn’t been aware of what the Queen had been planning, though the fact that she had allowed herself to be captured signified that she indeed had a plan. All Tara could do was wait to act on it, even if that meant dealing with the scathing insults of that Neimoidian disease.

It was all Tara could do to restrain herself from calling out with the Force and retrieving her lightsaber, now clutched in the hand of one of the remaining battle droids as the group had approached the throne room. As she reached out with the Force to touch her Padawan, she was delighted to discover that she was merely unconscious, having suffered a blow to the back of the head.

Tara vowed that, should she ever get the chance, she would make certain that the two Neomoidians would never harm anyone again.

And with the Queen’s retrieval of two blaster pistols from the armrest of the throne, she had been given that opportunity.

Reaching out with the Force, she called her weapon into her hand, igniting it as it traveled into her palm. As it landed in her hand, several of the droids turned her way and several shots. She brought her weapon down on the droids, easily destroying them just as the others were handled by the Queen.

The Viceroy reacted instantly, shoving aside the other Neimoidian and rushing to pick up one of the droid’s fallen blasters. Reacting immediately, Tara rushed to him, lightsaber raised. And as the Viceroy turned, blaster in hand and pointed directly at her, she brought her lightsaber down to strike the weapon in half.

Instead of the weapon, however, her blade impacted against the Neimoidian’s hand, separating both weapon and flesh from his body. The Viceroy howled in pain, collapsing to his knees and holding the cauterized stump of his arm.

Acting on instinct and adrenaline, Tara stood over his body, lightsaber dangerously close to his throat. Her instincts cried out at her and told her that what she was doing was wrong. But in this situation, common sense overrode all logical decisions. The Viceroy had led an invasion of a peaceful planet, ordered the deaths of countless innocents and had taken Willow captive.

The first two were bad enough, and despite her feelings, she knew that the Senate would do what they could to punish the Viceroy for that. But her feelings for Willow, combined with her desire to seek justice for her capture and harm, meant that there was nobody in this universe, Jedi or otherwise, that could adequately bring him to justice for his actions.

That task was hers alone.

“Tara?”

Tara turned at the sound of her own name, lightsaber still near the Viceroy’s throat, and saw Willow getting to her feet.

“Tara? Is that you?”

She turned back to Willow, looked at the lightsaber in her hand and finally, at the person to whom its blade had been pointed. Back to Willow. Back to the weapon. A icy chill ran through her as she realized what she had done. Disarming the Viceroy, in both senses of the word, had been bad enough in her view. But he had been going for a weapon, and could justify her actions. But killing him outright in cold blood was not the Jedi way.

It was not her way.

”By the Force! What am I doing?”

Tara thumbed the deactivation switch of her lightsaber, returned the weapon to her belt. She felt a great sense of relief at the action. Not only at that, but at knowing that Willow was all right. She rushed over to help her Padawan get to her feet.

“Tara? What happened? I got…so lost.”

Tara swallowed with some great difficulty. Willow always considered her a model Jedi, the epitome of what she could always aspire to be. And here she was, nearly letting her emotions get the better of her and making Willow’s image of the perfect Jedi be tainted.

It shamed her how close she came to the path of darkness. And all in the name of love.

She promised herself she would never do it again.

“I found you, Willow. By the Force, I will always find you.”


**

It was almost too easy. The elder Jedi was dead, and now his young apprentice would join him. Even now, he hung suspended over the bottomless pit before him, desperately trying to keep his grip on a small protrusion.

Swinging his lightsaber at the floor, Maul watched with pleasure as the sparks caused by his action caused the Jedi to nearly loosen his grip and send him to the abyss below. It had been too easy. The Jedi had allowed his emotions to overpower him, much like he had done with the female. And, like the female, it had been easy to mold that anger into a weapon that would bring about his destruction.

Maul became aware of the fact that the Jedi was staring at him. He returned the stare for a moment, wondering what trick he was attempting to pull.

Suddenly, he felt a disturbance in the Force. Its presence was unmistakable, subtle though it was. Tightening his grip on the weapon in front of him, he prepared himself, watching as the Jedi sailed above his head.

”Foolish Jedi,” he thought, as he raised his weapon to strike. ”You’ve left yourself defenseless.”

As Maul moved to strike the Jedi down, he became aware of several other things. The Jedi was no longer disarmed, having called the weapon of his Master into his outstretched hand. His thumb ignited the green blade, which he sent into an classic sai tok maneuver.

The blow caught Maul square in the waist, instantly bisecting him. Maul noted, with some satisfaction, that the move was not as painful as he had hoped. It was, instead, quite the opposite.

Maul’s final thought, as his body plummeted into the abyss below, was that the Jedi had learned the art of manipulating hatred well. And that he was glad to have passed on that knowledge.

**

Obi-Wan knelt beside the body of his Master. The Sith had been defeated, his body plummeting down the shaft in the center of the room. Obi-Wan took no pleasure in the killing of the enemy. The cost to himself was too great to allow it.

“It’s…it’s too late…Obi-Wan…”

Obi-Wan shook his head defiantly. “No!”

“Promise me…”

“Promise you what? Master, I’ll promise you anything.”

“Promise me…that…you will train…the boy.”

Obi-Wan took this news with a bit of trepidation. After all, he was among those who questioned his Master’s decision to allow the boy to be trained in the first place. But he certainly couldn’t refuse the dying request of his Master, even if it was rather unorthodox.

“Yes, Master. I promise you. Anakin will become a Jedi. I’ll make sure of it.”

Qui-Gon faintly smiled at that. “Good…Obi-Wan. He is…the Chosen One. He…will bring…balance…Train him well. And…speak with Master Maclay. Tell her that…she and Padawan…Rosenberg…have a bright future…ahead of them…”

And with a final, shuddering breath, Qui-Gon Jinn slipped away.

Obi-Wan held onto the body of his Master, refusing to allow emotion to overtake him.

He failed.

And a single tear traveled down his cheek.

**
The remainder of the day had become a time of great rejoicing. The Trade Federation had been defeated, Viceroy Gunray and his party were to be sent back to Coruscant to stand trial, and the newly appointed Supreme Chancellor of the Republic, Naboo’s very own Palpatine, had arrived and given his personal blessing to Obi-Wan and Anakin.

As she stood looking out at the landscape of Theed, Tara couldn’t help but feel uncomfortable about the situation. Indeed, they had succeeded, but at what price? Qui-Gon Jinn, one of the Order’s most experienced and revered Jedi, was dead. And Tara knew that it could have been prevented if she had spoken up and told him about her vision.

At the same time, and rather guiltily, she took some comfort in the fact that the secret of her love for Willow had died with him. He was the only one to realize how close she had gotten to Willow, and with him dead, she no longer felt honor bound to report to the Council about it. That was a thought that gave her comfort, yet made her wonder if she was being foolish. The wound she still felt about not telling Qui-Gon about her vision still hung over her like a dark cloud, its lightning striking directly into her heart. She had also made a promise, and the last thing she was known for was going against her word. With a firm conviction, she decided that she would inform the Council about her feelings when she was adequately prepared to handle the repercussions. To do so now would only deepen her already overworked sense of guilt.

A quiet knock came from the door, which opened as Willow entered.

Tara smiled faintly. “It is rather customary to wait for permission before entering someone else’s room, Padawan.”

“I know,” Willow smiled back. “I just…wanted to see how you’re feeling.”

Tara turned around and walked over to the bed. “I’m fine, Willow. It’s just that…I can’t believe how much has changed in the last few days.”

Willow moved to sit beside Tara. “I know. And we were at the center of it all.”

Putting her arm around Willow, Tara sighed. “It’s not going to be easy, Willow. Us being together. We’re Jedi. We’re not normally allowed to do this. You know that, right?”

Resting her head on Tara’s shoulder, Willow nodded. “I know. But if there was one thing that you taught me, Master, is that nothing worth doing is easy. We can make this work.”

Tara couldn’t help herself. She had to ask, otherwise she wouldn’t feel right. “Can we? The galaxy is a dangerous place. And we won’t always be together. I won’t be able to protect you…”

Willow got up and placed a finger of Tara’s lips. “Don’t. Tara, the time to shelter me from the galaxy is over. I know that you had the best of intentions, but if I’m to come into my own as a Jedi, I need to…get out from under your wing. I can’t depend on you forever.”

Tara’s eyes began to water. Just when she thought she couldn’t love Willow anymore than she already did. “I love you, Willow.”

Returning her head to Tara’s shoulder, the redhead returned the sentiment.

“I love you, Tara.”

**

Later that night, the two joined the other members of the Jedi Council, along with the Queen, Boss Nass, Supreme Chancellor Palpatine, and several important Naboo citizens as they paid their final respects to Qui-Gon. The funeral pyre had been lit in the ritual fashion, and the entire entourage watched as the body was cremated.

Though the minds of all were on the procession, four carried thoughts on parallel tracks.

The first belong to a newly appointed Jedi Knight, who was telling his new apprentice that, one day, he would become a Jedi.

The second was a singular wavelength carried between two Jedi. Master and apprentice, their love for each other had been tested under fire, and now was poised to affect their lives. For good? For ill? It mattered not. What did matter was that they had, at long last, admitted to themselves what each had held true for the longest time.

The third was a poignant discussion between the leaders of the Jedi Council, debating the reemergence of the Sith threat to the galaxy. Always two there were. A Master and an apprentice. No more, no less.

But which had been killed? The Master? Or the apprentice?

The fourth belonged to the newly anointed leader of the galaxy. And, unknown to all present, the latest in the long line of the Sith , chosen by destiny to continue the work started by Darth Bane a thousand years ago following the climatic battle of Russan.

His plan had come to fruition. He was now leader of the galaxy. But…there had been complications.

Darth Maul was dead. It was an unexpected circumstance. But it was not irreparable. He would find another to carry the mantle of Sith Apprentice. One that could continue the work he and Maul had started here today.

Until the day that his Chosen One was ready. And on that day, the galaxy would finally fall to the Sith.

Everything was proceeding as he foreseen.

**

The victory parade traveled down the streets of Theed, Gungan’s pounding away on drums and Naboo fighters flying overhead. Children on both sides of the road threw confetti on the procession, which marched down to the steps of Theed.

Tara and Willow stood at attention alongside Obi-Wan and Anakin, whose hair had been cut and braided in the traditional manner of a Padawan learner. Willow had joked how much the nine year old had looked like her when she was younger, to which Tara laughed the first real laugh she had experienced since the whole situation began.

Tara took a look at Willow, who had changed so much during the past several days. And yet, despite it all, she remained the kind hearted individual Tara always knew she was. She no longer had a lightsaber, and that had pained Tara more than she thought it would. It had been a symbol. She had given Willow something precious to her that had been destroyed in an act of unmitigated aggression.

Willow would construct a new one. Tara knew she would. But it would not be the same. The special bond she had given Willow through her lightsaber was gone forever.

A lot of things were gone. But a lot had begun here. And Tara would try her hardest to make sure that they did not disappear forever as well.

Tara watched as the three Gungans who had played a critical role in the recent events step up. Boss Nass walked to Queen Amidala, who presented the Gungan a shining globe. Tara knew what the act meant. In much the same way that she had given something precious to Willow as an act of peace, so too did the Queen give a gift to the Gungans.

That would solidify their newfound bond. And would be the beginning of a new era for both the Naboo and the Gungans.

“PEACE!”

At the proclamation by Boss Nass, the entire crowd erupted into a frenzy. Both Willow and Tara, despite themselves, got caught up in the revelries and began clap alongside them. The cheering grew in intensity and power, not showing any signs of stopping.

And despite all that had happened, and despite what could happen in the future, in the here and now, Jedi Master Tara Maclay and Jedi Padawan Willow Rosenberg were together.

Fate had done this. And as the cheering continued, both knew that there was no power in the galaxy that could break them apart.

[center]The End[/center]
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Re: The Star Witches Saga: EPISODE 1 COMPLETE!

Postby Darth Pacula » Wed Jun 14, 2006 2:12 am

Aha! Dibs do be mine!



Whoops? Where'd the time go?

Anyhoo, g'day Alex! Way to go out with a bang! Well, maybe Nute isn't quite as stupid as I thought if he knows enough to be worried when everything seems to be going his way.

And things really didn't go his way, did they? Lost the battle, lost the war, and lost his arm. Whoopsie!

But on the less amusing side, it's Tara's turn to drift uncomfortably close to the dark side. With everything that's going on, they'd better be careful, or they might come to you-know-who's attention as a possible new apprentice.

Once again, poor ol' Darth Maul gets the chop, but I liked his dying thought. You certainly gave him more depth that he was allowed on screen.

And I just thought of something. If Tara keeps blaming herself for what happened to Qui-Gon, wait until she sees what happens to Anakin under Obi-Wan's tutelage. She'll blame herself even more!

And the ruminations of Darth Sideous was chillingly effective.

Great job, mate!

Cheers,
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Re: The Star Witches Saga: EPISODE 1 COMPLETE!

Postby notl33t » Wed Jun 14, 2006 12:24 pm

I do not get the vaunted dibs. *sigh* I tried anyway.

Taking Tara to the edge and back . . . I like that Willow was the one who pulled her back, so to speak. I can't wait for more Star Witch Goodness.

Thank you for giving Darth Maul an end worth reading, he went out his snarky, evil self. *sigh* It must be the color scheme that makes me like him so much.

I know this isn't the most helpful question, but I have to ask it: you don't want to one-up Monsignor Lucas and do 9 Eps instead? Question for another day, I suppose.

Overall, I applaud you. This was an excellent Episode. And the start to a pretty awesome series.

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Re: The Star Witches Saga: EPISODE 1 COMPLETE!

Postby Devi Crystalseeker » Wed Jun 14, 2006 2:05 pm

W00t f**king w00t @ the conclusion!

And *sniffle* @ Qui-Gon's last words.

Also, "Awwwww!" and "SQUEE!" and "Rock the f**k on!"
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Re: The Star Witches Saga: EPISODE 1 COMPLETE!

Postby WillowsGirlXX » Wed Jun 14, 2006 2:13 pm

Oh my god this was awesome, loved how you weaved Willow and Tara into the whole Episode one, this was way better than the movie.

Sequel please , please

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Re: The Star Witches Saga: EPISODE 1 COMPLETE!

Postby PancakesinBellies » Wed Jun 14, 2006 5:53 pm

Very nice. I'm glad that Tara recognized how close she came to darkness and that this darkness is reached through love. I hope Willow comes to the same realization. (Unlike Anakin, the stupid whiny bastard...stupid George Lucas...grumble grumble...*trots off to bitch about Lucas some more*

Looking forward to the sequel!
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Re: The Star Witches Saga: EPISODE 1 COMPLETE!

Postby Willowlover » Wed Jun 14, 2006 6:04 pm

cant wait for the next story. thx for this fic.
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Re: The Star Witches Saga: EPISODE 1 COMPLETE!

Postby mudrat » Fri Jun 16, 2006 6:16 am

Hey Sith,

I really, really enjoyed this fic. I'm sorry I didn't leave fb sooner, but for the longest time I've been lurking in the shadows where it's safe. It's only the last week or two that I've been actively posting... and damn, but it's bright out here in the open, yo!!

I was a big fan of the original Star Wars trilogy growing up; was a little disappointed with Episodes I and II, but very much enjoyed ROTS. I'm amazed at how well Willow and Tara have blended into the SW-verse. Then again, they seem to fit in pretty well in almost any universe, don't they?

While Episode I is one of my least favourites in the whole series, I like the way you've told the story... slotting W/T in neatly among the canon story, but centering most of their tale (and therefore shifting the focus of the whole fic) amongst what were more peripheral characters in the film (unless I'm remembering the whole thing wrong, in which case forgive me - it's been a while since I watched it).

At any rate, I like the Epsiode I that you've created, and I really do hope you decide to continue the series.

cheers,
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Re: The Star Witches Saga: EPISODE 1 COMPLETE!

Postby SithLordWiccan » Mon Jun 19, 2006 8:20 am

Paul: Yeah, I know how you feel about the time thing, Paul. I could have sworn that it was March last week. Maybe it's the five hour sleep time I've been getting lately, but the days are starting to blur a lot.

Anyways, onto the fb.

Yup. Things didn't turn out so good for our good ol' Neimoidian slimeball. And you can just bet that this isn't going to improve his mood a lot in the times to come. As for Tara, it was a good thing that Willow was there to keep her from doing something that she would later regret. Or maybe it's not such a good thing. Time will tell a lot on that, I guess.

Yeah, Darth Maul got the axe (I can't diverge too much from the established canon, now can I?). And I liked giving him a lot more characterization, too. I think Chris can agree with me that my Maul trumps Movie Maul in all aspects.

I think you're hints about what's to come are rather spot on, though I'm not about to actually tell you that. ;) Thanks for reading. :)

notl33t: You may not have gotten the vaunted dibs, but you do get the honor of being the first to actually leave fb. :) I felt that it was important for Willow to be the one to bring Tara back from the edge of darkness because, for better or worse, Willow's the center of attention in her universe now. Of course, being her student, that was always a given. But now that their relationship has been taken to the next level...well, you'll just have to wait and see.

Devi: Glad you enjoyed it. :)

Rachel: I loved being able to do that, too. Though, I will admit that this could have been a lot better than it ended up being. But hey, it's the first story. And the first story is about little more than setting up the characters for the eventual plot progression to come. And I can assure you that the next one will be more in depth in its characterization and plot. :)

Amber: Yeah, Tara knows what she's doing is wrong. And so does Willow...though it's not really evident. Glad you enjoyed it and can't wait for the sequel. :)

Willowlover: Thanks for reading.

mudrat: Hey, dude. Not to worry about leaving feedback whenever you can. And I certainly know how it feels to be a newbie around here. But don't worry. You get used to it. Or you go mad. Either way, it's all good.

I enjoyed Episodes I and II a lot, but there were always parts that I felt could easily be done better (which is essentially why I started writing this in the first place.) I enjoyed ROTS, too. (And if you enjoyed Episode III, then I bet you can't wait to see how I deal with it. :kdevil) I agree that any 'verse that W and T get put in to can look easy. (And you should see the ideas I got. "Red Dwarf", "Transformers", "Beauty and the Beast". The list goes on.) I enjoyed working in the behind the scenes stuff, too. This fic was more in line with the movie than I would have liked, which is why the others will mostly be their own self contained stories with little mention of the canon events.

Glad you all enjoyed reading it. :)
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Re: The Star Witches Saga: EPISODE 1 COMPLETE!

Postby Useful_Oxymoron » Wed Jun 21, 2006 2:39 pm

Hey, Alex. Sorry I'm late with my reply here. Congratulations on finishing the first leg of your story, mate. And it was one hell of an ending. I for one can't wait to read more about Master Tara and Padawan Rosenberg's bright future together, my friend. :)

Gunray lost an arm! That's new! And I took a rather sadistic pleasure in that one. Scared myself there. Maul went down, just as expected, but he was less of a cardboard cut-out in the story than he is in the films. Oh, he's still a thug at the basis, though.

Well done all around! :)
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Re: The Star Witches Saga: EPISODE 1 COMPLETE!

Postby SithLordWiccan » Sun Jul 09, 2006 10:11 am

U_O: Thanks for the congrats, man. It was tough to get here, and I'll be the first to admit that it wasn't as good as I thought it could be. Then again, I could say the same thing about the actual movie. :P

Gunray losing an arm was the first of the things that I did that will take this story off the path established in the movies, as I break off from them and established my own story about what's going on "behind the scenes" as it were. And I'm glad that you enjoyed me giving more character to Maul. That was something that Chris helped out a lot with.

As for the next part...well, you may have to wait for a bit, but to tide you over, I got a few surprises, one of which I think will make you a bit happy.
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Re: The Star Witches Saga: EPISODE 1 COMPLETE!

Postby SithLordWiccan » Sun Jul 09, 2006 10:16 am

• Title: Star Witches: Art of the Saber
• Author name: SithLordWiccan (Alex)
• Email Address: decepticons_4_ever@hotmail.com
• Rating: PG
• Disclaimer: I don’t own anything related to "Buffy: The Vampire Slayer" (aside from some novels and "The Chosen Collection" DVD set), or “Star Wars” (except for the movies, some games and a shitload of books). All things "Buffy" belong to Joss Whedon and things "Star Wars" belong to George Lucas. All I'm doing is borrowing their toys for a while to have some fun. No money is being made off this.
• Spoilers: Spoilers for Star Witches: Episode I. Reading it is not really required to follow the plot of this sotry, though, as I go over the basic summary of what happened in that fic here for the benefit of those who have not read it.
• Feedback: Sure. I’d like some.
• Summary: Willow and Tara travel to Ilum so that Willow can build a new lightsaber.
• Notes: Thanks to Chris Cook (Artemis) and Amber (highlandlass25) for the beta work, and all the readers (too many to really list) who’ve encouraged me to continue with this series.

[center]"The crystal is the heart of the blade. The heart is the crystal of the Jedi. The Jedi is the crystal of the Force. The Force is the blade of the heart. All are intertwined: the crystal, the blade, the Jedi. You are one."

Luminara Unduli
[/center]

Sitting in a cross legged position inside one of Ilim’s many crystal caverns, Willow tried to center her concentration on the task at hand, knowing how important it was. But no matter how hard she tried, she kept drifting back to what had happened mere days ago.

What had started off as a simple negotiation mission had become so much more, her life changing forever. Qui-Gon Jinn, one of the Order’s most revered Jedi, had been killed by a Sith warrior, the first recorded sighting of one since the Battle of Ruusan a thousand years prior. And a nine year old boy, the oldest person ever to be inducted into the Jedi Order, had become the Padawan to Qui-Gon’s former apprentice, now a Jedi Knight.

And Tara…

The red haired Padawan took a breath as the image of her Master’s body formed in her mind. Willow had been the Padawan learner of Tara for eleven years, and during that time they had forged many emotional connections, often skirting the line that outlawed attachments. She had always wanted to take it a step further, but Tara had always kept herself composed just enough to make sure she didn’t fully cross over the line.

But that trip to Naboo had changed everything. Separated from Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan, they had traveled deep into the forests of the Mid Rim world, where they had laid their souls bare for one another. The redhead knew that Tara had kept a lot of pain internalized, which may have contributed to her rigid resolve to not cross the line too badly.

But, in one single instant, it had changed forever.

Opening her eyes, Willow glanced down at the components lying in front of her, along with the datapad that held the instructions on how to construct a lightsaber. Her old weapon, which in actuality had been Tara’s long ago when she was a Jedi Knight, had been destroyed in an outright display of arrogance by the Sith. That had been a traumatic experience for her, and she wasn’t too sure if she would get over it. The fact that she was here now, preparing herself to construct a new one, meant that she had indeed gotten over it.

But Tara…

Tara had changed so much. Ever since Naboo, she had taken on a completely different persona. No longer the shy, reserved, stoic Jedi Master she had been before, she had become confident and assured about what she was doing, becoming open about her feelings in a way that she never had before.

It frightened Willow. On the one hand, it was exactly how she wished her Master to be, but it was unsettling to know that such a change had occurred given circumstances as stressful as the ones they had undergone.

Stretching out through the Force, she could feel Tara’s presence onboard the transport that had brought them to Ilum. It comforted her to know that her Master was nearby, but she wouldn’t come to help her. The task she had to perform had to be done by her.

It was time to get to work.

She took up the datapad and read the instructions on the computer screen, casting her glance over to look at the components. Among the handgrip, power cell and other vital components lay the three mephite crystals that she had selected for her weapon.

Taking a deep breath, and glancing at the datapad once more, she began to concentrate and got to work on constructing her new weapon.

**

Sitting at the cockpit of the small transport ship, Tara kept going over the holonet messages of the past several days. It had kept her from thinking about what Willow had to do now.

And about what she had done mere days ago.

It wasn’t much of an exaggeration for her to think that her life had been irrevocably altered during the events that had happened on Naboo. She had opened herself up to her Padawan, which had been a serious breach in conduct as far as her role as a Jedi Master was concerned. Not only that, but it made her feelings for Willow all the more hard to deal with. Not that she was sorry about it. Now that she had begun her journey down that path, it would not be productive to dwell on it. And in any case, those feelings had always been there, albeit in a highly different form.

And it was how her own life had changed during that time that scared her the most. She had considered herself the epitome of what a perfect Jedi should be, a feeling that she had worked hard to cultivate given the realization of her origins and where she came from before she was a Jedi Knight. It had made her happy to know that it was the image that Willow wanted to work towards. The day that Willow became a Jedi Master was one that she looked forward to with great pleasure.

Suddenly, she sensed a disturbance in the Force. Opening herself up and allowing it to flow through her, she could sense someone nearby having a great deal of difficulty. But there was no one on the planet except for her…

Tara opened her eyes and let out a small sigh. No matter how disciplined Willow tried to be, there were times when she allowed her emotions to get the better of her. And when it happened, it was usually bad news for anyone who happened to be in the immediate vicinity. And it wouldn’t do to have Willow accidentally cause a cave in.

Spinning around, she walked over to the blue and green painted astrodroid plugged into the recharge socket. “R5?”

The droid started up and turned its dome to look at its owner. Tara took a moment to recall how the droid had come into their possession. They had decided to take a brief stopover at a used droid lot on their way to the spaceport. While there, they stopped at a droid lot and found a battered R5 astromech that had obviously taken one too many blaster shots. Though the Jedi forbade attachments, Willow couldn’t help but feel pity for the droid, and convinced Tara to buy it. She had been thankful that the owner had marked it down more considerably than was standard for R5 units, and was even more thankful that Willow had spent the majority of the trip refurbishing the unit back to tiptop shape. It would not have been a good idea for them to return to the Temple with a collection of scrap and short three hundred credits.

“I want you to go to the crystal cave and find out what’s wrong with Willow. I can’t go because of the traditions of the ceremony of which she is undertaking. Find out what’s wrong and come back. Understood?”

The droid bleeped in compliance and wheeled itself around, heading for the ramp. Moving back to sit down at the controls, Tara rested a hand on her shoulder, hoping that everything was alright.

**

Willow groaned as her latest attempt to construct her new weapon failed once again. No matter how hard she tried, she just couldn’t figure it out. She was very technical minded, being able to put together computer systems when she was barely a teenager. By the Force, she even put together a badly damaged astromech droid that she and Tara had found at a used droid lot which looked, for all intents and purposes, a likely candidate for Mister Scrap Yard Year 3 (Per the new dating format following the Great ReSynchronization). But for some reason, she couldn’t figure out how to build a simple tool like a lightsaber.

’I don’t want to let Tara down,’ she thought. ’I can do this. I can.’

Setting the components down in front of her once again, she tried to center her mind in order to calm herself down. But no matter how hard she tried, she couldn’t concentrate enough to set her mind on the task at hand. It instead drifted once more to the events of the past few days, where both her life and her Master’s had taken a dramatic turn.

Compared to that, building a new weapon, even if it was necessary, seemed insignificant.

A slight trilling whistle caught her attention then, and she turned to find the squat form of an R5 droid trundling towards her. A small smile spread across her face. Tara was not allowed to come and help her with this task, but that didn’t mean that she wanted the redhead to know that her presence wasn’t nearby. Tara must have also figured that sending R5 to cheer her up would improve her mood, reminding Willow that she could build something like him, she could build a weapon.

“Hi, R5,” she said. “Did Tara send you to check up on me?”

The droid gave off a whistle follow by a series of trilling notes, which Willow naturally interpreted as her Master’s comforting reaffirmation in what she was doing.

“Thanks, R5,” Willow nodded in response. “It’s good to know that someone out there is looking out for me.” Reaching over to pick up the datapad, she looked at the words on the screen.

“I just can’t seem to get this out, R5,” Willow sighed. “I’ve tried it exactly like it says here. And yet I can’t seem to get this working.”

Reaching out with his pincher arm, R5 took the datapad and casually scanned it, then delivered a trilling sequence of bleeps strung together with a singsong quality.

Willow could recognize scolding when she heard it. “Yeah, well, I don’t see you coming up with any great ideas to help me out, either.” Setting the datapad down on the ground, she held her arms against her legs, trying to gather some warmth into her body, the air around her tinged with the cold frost brought about by Ilum’s perpetual ice storms.

Trundling over, R5 reached out and gently tapped his owner on her shoulder. Turning to look, Willow smiled. It was almost as if Tara were right there with her, letting her know that things would turn out OK if she just tried once more.

Reaching over to take the datapad in her hands, she looked at the words again, gaining a new confidence in what she was doing. She would do this, not to make herself feel important, or because it was required of her, but to make Tara proud of her. Ever since Naboo, she had wanted to prove that she was capable of defending herself against any and all dangers the galaxy threw their way. If this had to be the first step, then she would have to make the decision to take it.

“OK, now let’s see if I can get this right,” Willow said. As she began to read the words, however, a thought invaded her consciousness. She had been following the instructions she had downloaded for just this purpose. Although she was rather unconventional in certain areas of her life, she made up for it by being rather stringent on others. And this included making sure she followed the basic structure of the Jedi Order to make sure that the fact she felt respect for her Master in a way that went beyond the standard Master/Padawan partnership didn’t become that obvious.

One of the lessons she had learned during the incident on Naboo had been not to let her emotions get the best of her. The fact that she had nearly gotten herself killed on one occasion and captured twice because it meant that she didn’t want to feel that defenseless ever again.

R5 let out a series of bleeps, and Willow turned to look. “Wha…? Oh. Nothing, R5. I think I just figured out what I’m doing wrong.” She handed the droid the datapad, which he took in his arm. “You see, I’ve been following the rules, doing what I’m supposed to do.”

Picking up the grip of her new lightsaber, she examined it for several moments before setting it down once again and she moved to collect the other components. “And if the situation on Naboo taught me anything, it’s that there are times when you just have to go around the rules to get something done.”

**

It had been too long, Tara realized with a growing discomfort. R5 had not yet returned, and she could feel the redhead’s growing tension through the Force. Tradition or not, she was very close to heading out to see if Willow needed any help.

It was making her feel incredibly conflicted. On the one hand, she wanted to be there and reassure her Padawan that everything would be OK if she just concentrated. But she couldn’t. Willow had to complete this task by herself without any help.

But could she do it?

Tara reflected on all that had transpired in the galaxy over the past eleven years and how much both it and her relationship with Willow had dramatically changed in that time. She had always considered herself to have a perfect moral center, able to easily distinguish between right and wrong. And despite all that she had been taught by her Jedi teachers and her own Master, she felt compassion for other living beings.

The Code explicitly forbade such attachments, but she couldn’t help it. Unlike other Jedi, who thought that action on their part was for the good of the universe, Tara believed that in order to best serve the citizens of the Republic, the Jedi should maintain a watchful eye over those who most deserved their help, gently guiding them in the direction those individuals believed they should go in, not the direction that any self righteous group thought they should go in.

Even if that group was the Republic Senate. And especially if that group was the Jedi Council. When Tara had been younger, she always believed that the Jedi Order and the Republic was a shining beacon of light that cut across the galaxy and brought freedom and civilization to all. But as she got older, she came to realize that the Republic wasn’t so much a beacon of light as it was the bloated remains of an overly damaged carcass going through the motions by sheer inertia alone. The Order to which she had been a part of was no better. Tara was someone who cared for each and every living being in the galaxy, even those who were undeserving of it. It was thus a constant struggle for her to have to place the well being of one group above another. It was that sort of thinking that led to her long standing belief that, no matter what either the Jedi or the Republic did, it always seemed to cause more harm than good. It didn’t help that there were many situations in her time as a both a Jedi Knight and Master that went a long way toward proving her correct: the Stark Hyperspace War, the Eriadu Trade Summit disaster, the Yinchorri Uprising, and…

Brushing back a strand of her hair, Tara’s thoughts turned to the invasion of Naboo, the latest situation that had proven her correct in her belief that the Republic, in attempting to solve the problems and concerns of others, caused a great deal of harm to those who did not deserve it. And it was certainly a great irony that it was there that the emotional wall that she had built over the course of her life had finally crumpled.

And it was all because of Willow.

Willow’s progress as a Jedi had been amusing to say the least. Tara had known of her during her time as a Jedi Knight, hearing her peers talk about a Padawan who was far beyond the others of her clan and exemplified what it meant to be the perfect Youngling and student. Of course, she was equally known for her rather…frequent brushes with the ethics of the Order. There was the time when she accidentally deleted a good majority of the information in the Jedi Archives, and her tendency to get overly emotional in situations that called for calm and peace of mind.

And then there was her late night excursion to Coruscant’s underworld.

That incident, ironically, was what had led to their current relationship. Having wandered into a cantina, Willow had inadvertently walked into the Black Sun Vigo that she had been tasked with bringing to justice. She had planned to use rather…unsavory methods in order to accomplish that, and wasn’t terribly looking forward to that. It was thus a relief for her when she came across the spunky little tyke who was to become her Padawan, though the guilt she felt about the situation forced her to talk to the Council when she learned that Willow was going to be cast out of the Order because of the redhead’s actions.

It had been the first of many times when Tara had done her best to keep Willow from harm as she helped to shape her into the perfect model of a Jedi. But then there had been that incident on Taris, when Tara had taken a blaster shot directly to the chest and had to spend months undergoing treatment in order to get well once again. Tenderly rubbing the spot that, even now, still bore the scares of that incident, she realized that had been the first time that she couldn’t protect Willow from the dangers of the galaxy.

That became all the more obvious during their trip to Naboo. Tara had hoped that it would be a good situation in which to slowly start expanding Willow’s experience in dealing with the problems of the galaxy. It was her hope that the redhead could start to come into her own as a Jedi, and not have to be dependant on her Master for everything, a situation about which she couldn’t help but notice the irony, considering all the blonde had done to foster that dependence.

Of course, things had not turned out so well. And Tara had done her absolute best to keep Willow out of danger, a task made all the more difficult by Willow’s constant need to be reassured about a situation that she herself, despite putting up a brave front, did not feel any more comfortable about.

But with the kiss the two had shared in the forested swamps, Tara knew that she had finally crossed a line. For the longest time, she had allowed her emotions to be bottled up so that she could never let the pain of learning of her origins: her mother had been a Jedi who had given her to the Temple at age three and was killed en route back to Alderaan by none other than her father, who had captured her some years earlier. Tara was the result of that forced union.

It was that secret that had her to struggle for emotional control for the majority of her life. Jedi were not allowed to know of their past, but Tara knew of hers because her own Master, the famed Corellian Jedi Nejaa Halcyon, felt that she had a right to know. Tara couldn’t help but wonder what made Master Halcyon think letting her know would possibly be for her own good. The knowledge that her mother was a Jedi who had been captured, tortured and violated in the most perverse manner imaginable was something that the blonde tried very hard to forget from the moment she had learned of it.

But on the positive side, her mother must have cared a great deal for Tara if she was willing to give her up to be trained. It was a standard practice that Jedi initiates be found by the age of six months, before the feelings that could promote fear, anger and hatred could be developed enough to make them unsuitable for instruction in the ways of the Force. But since Tara had grown up on Alderaan, a planet well known for its peace and tranquility, and in the company of such a loving young woman as her mother must have been, the Jedi Council must have thought there reasons sufficient enough to allow her to be taken in.

Of course, the downside of this was that her mother had been forced to leave the Jedi Order. It was something that made Tara proud and conflicted at the same time. For Her mother had given up the only life she had ever known just to make sure that her daughter had the opportunity to have the life she deserved, and the decision must have weighed heavily on her. Because of that decision, Tara could desire to do little other than honor the memory of her mother and make her proud.

Tara felt something then. A subtle manipulation of the Force that, on the surface, passed by so quickly that it could be misunderstood as insignificant by less focused Jedi. It gave her pause as she wondered briefly if Willow was using the Force unnecessarily in her task. Although the task of creating a lightsaber was one in which manipulation of the Force was necessary, the redhead did have a tendency to overuse her Force abilities sometimes in even the most simplest of tasks. Tara recalled the first night they had spent on Naboo, when Willow had wondered why Tara was using sticks in order to create a fire when manipulating the air around them with the Force would have produced the same effect. Tara had chastised Willow by saying that the Force wasn’t a tool to be used to solve everyday problems, a credo borne out of her desire to limit the use of her own skills unless her life or the life of someone else was in danger.

The feeling passed, and was replaced by one of great accomplishment. Smiling briefly, Tara stood up and walked back to the ramp of the ship, preparing to step out and greet her apprentice as she returned.

**

Waiting at the edge of the ramp, her cloak tightly wrapped around her, Tara watched as two figures emerged from the snowy winds. Smiling, she walked up to greet Willow with a handshake that soon turned into a hug.

“Welcome back, Padawan,” Tara said.

Looking up into the crystal blue eyes of her Master, Willow replied, “And to you, Master.” Removing something from her belt, she gave her newly constructed lightsaber to Tara for inspection. “I thought you might like to look at it, seeing as how you played a vital role in its construction, and all.”

Tara looked at the weapon Willow had given her, a flood of memories returning to her as she recognized the shape and design of the redhead’s new weapon. It was, in every shape and form, a near perfect likeness of her weapon. This did not surprise Tara, as lightsabers built by Padawans often reflected the design of their Masters. But most Padawans added their own spins on the design, making their weapon one that showed respect to their Master, yet marked the weapon as their own. For Willow to have built hers in the exact likeness of her own…

“Willow…I don’t know what to say.”

The redhead’s eyes sparkled. “Say you’re proud of me.”

Tara smiled. “I am proud of you, Willow. No matter what you do, I will always be proud of you.”

The two enveloped in a hug once more, then turned to board the transport, R5 following behind. As Tara made the preparations for take off, Willow moved to sit beside her, head turning to look at her Master. “Master?”

“Yes, Willow?” Tara asked, not turning to look at her, still concentrating on her task.

Willow thought about how to proceed. Ever since Naboo, and the feelings she had experienced there, she had been wondering how to talk to her Master about what she had done. It pained her to realize that she had come so close to feeling the grip of the Dark Side on her heart. Willow knew that Tara had her own pain, and she did not want to add more to her Master’s, which, in relation, seemed rather insignificant. Willow may have brushed close to the Dark Side, but Tara had the stigma of being the product of an unloving relationship mixed with her desire to care and help others. It must be terrible for her to go through life every single day wondering how she could help others without harming them.

Willow turned away, knowing that now was not the time to deal with this. Ever since Qui-Gon Jinn had died, Tara had nearly fallen back into her own routine of keeping things to herself and not letting anything out that others may see as a weakness. Willow knew that her Master was currently agonizing about how to deal with a particular problem, and she also knew that until Tara came to a conclusion about that, it would not be a good idea to compound her problems by adding her own.

Turning to look out the viewport, Willow watched as the snowy surface of Ilum began to disappear as the ship lifted off and headed into space. “Nothing.”

Tara placed a comforting hand on Willow’s thigh, gently squeezing it. Willow smiled faintly at the touch, knowing that it meant one very important thing. Even though they knew the other held some kind of pain back and that now was not the time to discuss it, it meant that, no matter what happened or how long it took, they would find a way to deal with it.

Reaching for the hyperdrive levers, Tara pulled them back, and Willow watched as the stars around them transformed into the mottled sky of hyperspace. Sitting back in their seats, Master and Padawan relaxed, wondering what would happen to the galaxy around them before they would feel comfortable enough to talk to one another about the pain they kept close to themselves.

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Postby Darth Pacula » Mon Jul 10, 2006 1:31 am

Dibs!

Damn it! I had written all my feedback, but the bloody board logged me out, and I lost all of it! Buggeration! :fit2

Okay, so here we go again ...

Willow making her own lightsaber; I'm surprised that she hadn't done so earlier, but with the emotional attachment she must have felt to Tara's old one, I wouldn't have been surprised if she would have never made her own without being forced to.

Also, I would have expected the process to be more instinctive and spiritual, so the datapad with instructions didn't really seem to fit. That being said, Willow's allways been of a technological sense, so it makes sense that she would want concrete rules to follow.

As for her realization that she has to bend the rules ... :lol I keep seeing the episode in season three where she had to be manually carried off the school grounds despite that fact that she was allowed to leave. :grin

Tara though; her thoughts about the nature of the Republic are worrying. They seem reminiscent of pre-fall Anakin, and we all know where that led. :paranoid And their stubborn refusal to discuss their fears about the Dark Side is going to come back and bit them in the arse, I just know it.

Nice job, Alex. Can't wait for the next one.

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Postby Emms » Mon Jul 10, 2006 11:37 am

Wow...what a good ending, Alex. Though I had hoped that they would kiss again or something... *sigh* Oh well. I liked the update...but if you ask me Willow making her light-saber out to be just like Tara's seems kinda desperate... I had hoped throughout the fic that she would have developed a little more as a character as time progressed… but it seems as if she’s even more all about pleasing Tara now then she was in the beginning . I really wanted Willow to succeed in finding her own strength that’s the only way I can envision a relationship working out between Willow and Tara. As it stands Tara is still very much Willow’s Master, and Willow not but a side-kick.

I liked that they both had time to really think about what happened back in the forest and the bit with R5 was cute.

:hmm now I wonder... will there be a sequel? I hope so... :)

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Postby SithLordWiccan » Sat Jul 15, 2006 1:43 pm

Paul: Yeah, Willow only now building her lightsaber was something that I thought needed to happen. I had already established in the first fic how much the act of Tara giving her old lightsaber to Willow was important, so I wanted to show that when she had to, she could do so, yet in a way that still implied the emotional conncetion she shares with Tara (instead of using Tara's old one, Willow uses on that's almost the exact same style.) It's not uncommon for Padawans to make lightsabers in the style of their Masters, but in this case, there's a whole lot of subtext going on. ;)

I agree. The making of a lightsaber is indeed a spiritiual and instinctive act. And that's exactly why I didn't go that way. For all her bending of the rules, Willow knows when to play it safe. I mean, feeling the way she does towards Tara is bad enough, but going against the rules in building a weapon that can slice through anything? The EU has at least one instance where building a lightsaber in a less than perfect fashion is bad, so it wouldn't surprise me that Willow would stick to the beaten path. And in any case, this scene is an homage to a scene in the radio drama of Return of the Jedi when Luke does the exact same thing (building a lightsaber by following the rules, then realizing that he has to follow his instincts in order to get it done).

Tara does indeed have bad thoughts about the nature of the Republic and the Jedi. These have already been established, and given the situation that she'll find herself in very soon, they'll only get expanded. And you're right in that not talking about what happened is bad.

Emmy: Well, I can agree with your criticisms of this fic. For starters, I really didn't want the two to be all lovey dovey and making with the smootchies (Sorry, folks. While that does indeed happen, it's not the focus of this series. At least, not at this stage.) And like I said, Padawans building their lightsaber's in the image of their Masters is an established fact. I just took it one step further. Willow will be developing as a character, I can promise you that. But since this is a bridge story, I didn't feel it necessary to start that now.

I'm glad that you enjoyed the fact that they were thinking about what happened back on Naboo and R5. Both of those will be expanded upon in the sequel story (which I've started on and will begin posting after I post the second bridge story, which should happen sometime next week.)
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Postby SithLordWiccan » Wed Jul 26, 2006 7:56 am

OK, folks. This one's a bit different. Willow and Tara don't appear in this story, though it is important to the overall plot I have going for this series. And Chris did give me the idea to spend a bit of time developing the villains. Hopefully that's what I've accomplished here.

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• Title: Star Witches: Seeds of the Future
• Author name: SithLordWiccan (Alex)
• Email address: decepticons_4_ever@hotmail.com
• Feedback: Feedback keeps me going and is much appreciated.
• Spoilers: Spoilers for “Star Witches: Episode I”, along with some minor things from the Star Wars Expanded Universe and some hints about what's to come in “Attack of the Clones” and the upcoming “Star Witches: Episode II”.
• Rating: PG
• Disclaimer: I don’t own Willow, Tara or “Star Wars” (though I’ve done a whole lot better with them than others have.) No money is being made off this.
• Notes: Though most of this is my own work, the dialogue in the Grievous/Hill scene comes from the novel "Labyrinth of Evil" by James Luceno.
• Summary: Those who will play a critical role in events to come ruminate on the current state of affairs.

[center]"The seeds of the future lie buried in the past."

Jedi Master Ood Bnar
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The suite was that of the Supreme Chancellor of the Galactic Republic, located in the Republic Executive Building. The building was situated in the Senate District on the planet Coruscant, capital world of the Republic. One of the advantages that the holder of that office had was the prerogative to decorate it in any manner he or she saw fit. Weeks prior, it had been decorated in blue, the preferred color of the previous Chancellor. Now, however, the room was decorated a deep red, reflecting the nature of its current occupant. That person was sitting in the room’s newly crafted Chair of Office, which had replaced the room’s previously simplistic chair, looking out at the city before him as the sun began to set, casting a fading orange hue across the buildings.

Palpatine, newly elected Supreme Chancellor of the Republic and also known as Darth Sidious, Dark Lord of the Sith, watched it all with interest, knowing that the time was coming soon which this would all be his. Turning around to face the desk, he glanced at the datapad lying in front of him, going over the information contained within.

It had been eight years since the incident at Naboo, but his grand plans for the future had continued without incident. In fact, his term as Supreme Chancellor would have come to an end quite recently if not for the emergence of a group of separatist systems calling themselves the Confederacy of Independent Systems.

In truth, he had very much expected them to rise at this moment. Their leader, Dooku, was Count of Serenno and a former Jedi Master. Dooku had been unique among most of the other Jedi in the Order in that he had grown disillusioned by the actions of the Republic and had left them following the disastrous Battle of Galidraan a decade ago. He had left the Order two years later, following the death of Qui-Gon Jinn, and had not been heard from by anyone in the galaxy since.

In that time, he had found him, and begun molding him into the perfect Dark Lord of the Sith. The need to find a new apprentice quickly following the conflict on Naboo had been important. That had been the start of his journey to enact the final revenge of the Sith. The fact that Dooku had already held a great deal of distrust towards the Republic had made him an easy convert. All Palpatine did was show him that there was a way for him to bring about the change that he had desired.

And the way to that change was the Dark Side. The Jedi view its use as a negative aspect of the Force, that emotions were a deterrent. And that was what not only made them ignorant to the galaxy around them, but also unpopular with the general public, who had come to see them as an arrogant cult that thought their way was the only way.

It would be easy, perhaps too easy, to stoke the flames of that hatred the way that he desired. Already he had used the disillusioned attitude others had towards the Jedi to his own ends. After all, how long had it truly been part of the character of both Dooku and those who would follow him?

It did not matter. All that mattered was that that they would serve his purposes, and then be discarded. Dooku may think that he is destined to rule in the New Order, but like the majority of the players in his grand opera, his role was an insignificant one at best. There would come a day soon when Palpatine’s chosen apprentice, the one for whom the upcoming conflict was specifically tailored, would take his rightful place at his side.

But that was a day far into the future. For the present, he had to concern himself with other matters.

**

Count Dooku stared out of the viewport in deep thought, thinking of the events that had led to his becoming Darth Tyranus, Dark Lord of the Sith. It had not been that long ago when he had been a respected Jedi Master. But he and the Council had not always seen eye to eye. Nowhere had their conflicting viewpoints been made more obvious than it had been a decade ago, when he had led the disastrous mission on Galidraan, when he had led a team of Jedi Knights, including his former Padawan Komari Vosa, to deal with the Mandalorians who had invaded the planet.

Looking back on that mission now, Dooku could see how disastrous it had actually been. What had meant to be a simple pacification mission against the group, whom he had been told were murdering political activists, had turned into a long and bloody battle that ended up costing many lives on both sides. There was the old saying that time would put a fresh perspective on things. And that was no truer than on that day, in which he had dealt a crippling blow to the Mandalorians. It had been a successful mission in the eyes of most, but that did not make the pain of losing a great deal of his comrades in the conflict, including his Padawan, acceptable.

No. Komari Vosa did not die on that war torn battlefield. She would die two years later, at his own hand, on Kohlma, one of the moons of Bogden. But she may as well have died on Galidraan. It would have saved her from dying a needless death.

Dooku shook his head, realizing that Vosa’s death was not unnecessary. It had to be done. She was leader of the Bando Gora, a destabilizing influence in the galaxy that would not a part of the vision his Master had for the Galaxy.

Turning, his thoughts turned to the plans that his Master had for the galaxy. The time was coming soon where he would lead the disenfranchised elements of the vast cosmos in a war against the Republic. He would tell them that it was because the Republic was weak and ineffectual, and that a change was needed in order to set the universe right.

That was a half truth. A change was indeed needed in order to bring an end to the weak and corrupt influence of the Republic. But it was not to be the corporate entity or their soulless armies that would take its place. It was, in fact, his Master who would bring about that change.

Darth Sidious, in his guise as Palaptine, the current Supreme Chancellor of the Republic, had done what no other Sith in the nearly 25 century history of their order had accomplished: brought the Republic to its knees. Many in the past had tried to attack it with brute force, their efforts wasted as the combination of Republic might and their own internal bickering kept them from succeeding at the one thing they all wanted to accomplish.

It had all changed a thousand years ago, at the Battle of Ruusan. It was then that Darth Bane, the only survivor of that conflict, instituted the Rule of Two, which had fundamentally changed the nature of the Sith from that point forward. Where before there had been massive armies and warriors, there were only two individuals: one Master, one apprentice. Dooku was Sidious’ current apprentice, brought into his fold after the death of Sidious’ former apprentice, Darth Maul, during the Naboo incident.

It was only after killing Sifo-Dyas, one of the Jedi in the Order that he could call “friend”, that Dooku’s journey had had truly begun. Sidious had informed him that in the coming decade, he would play a vital role in the events to come.

But Dooku knew that there was one other. He was to be the public face of the growing movement against the Republic, but the army that was to be built from the armies of the Trade Federation and other galactic corporate entities would need a warrior at its head. None of the current leaders of the potential Separatist movement were capable of handling the role. One of them had even lost his hand and part of his arm when attempting to perform in a warrior’s capacity. If that was any indication as to how the rest would react, then the army would fall apart within weeks, perhaps even sooner.

No, Dooku thought. The Confederacy of Independent Systems which would help create needed a strong warrior at its head, a turbolaster counterpoint to his subtle vibroblade.

Dooku knew there was one being in the galaxy that could fill this role. And it was his task to mold him into the perfect weapon of destruction. Entering the cockpit, he turned to the FA-4 pilot droid piloting the craft.

“Set course for Kalee.”

**

The being’s name was Qymaen jai Sheelal, though since the death of his comrade Ronderu lij Kummar, he had become known as Grievous, scourge of the Yam'rii and the most powerful warlord on Kalee. At the moment, however, he was a broken husk of his former self, floating suspended in a bacta tank. The last thing he remembered was piloting the Martyr away from Kalee to resume the war against the Yam’rii that had long been the scourge of his people.

Then…nothing but pain, death and loss.

He had longed for death every since Kummar’s death long ago, but he hoped for a death more befitting of a warrior of his stature. Being slain by an enemy on the battlefield was preferable to perishing in a shuttle crash.

Through the glass of the bacta tank, Grievous saw a figure enter the room and approach his position. The Kaleesh recognized the being as San Hill, Chairman of the Intergalactic Banking Clan. It had been the Muun who had first offered him the job of becoming the enforcer of the IBC. Grievous had taken the job when Hill said that he and the IBC would help to relieve the financial burden placed on Kalee following the Huk war.

And so he had performed the work expected to him by the company. It was satisfying, and after dealing with the pain of Kummar’s death and the defeat he had suffered during the war with the insectoid Yam’rii, it had been almost a relief to engage in warfare, even if it was the sort favored by businessmen and corporations rather than warriors of his stature.

These thoughts passed through Grievous’ mind for the briefest of moments, but were soon replaced by a questioning wonder as to what Hill hoped to accomplish by coming here. Had he come to gloat at Grievous’ misfortune, mocking the once proud and noble warrior for being dealt a death blow in the most embarrassing of manners? The truth was, Grievous couldn’t deny that Hill had every right to do so. All it would do was validating his feelings about the situation.

“My, my,” Hill spoke, his voice raspy. “It seems that you have had quite an accident, my dear General.”

“I won’t be pitied, Chairman Hill,” Grievous spat out, his voice carrying over the speakers in the room. “Allow me to die in peace as befits a warrior of my stature.”

Hill approached the bacta tank and ran a hand across its surface. “Ah, but my dear General, there is no need. We can keep you alive.”

“Of course,” Grievous dismissed. “But I would be hooked up to life support machines for the rest of my life, unable to lead your warriors in battle as I once was. I ask again, let me die in peace.”

“None, of that, my dear General,” Hill said, his voice taking on a note that sounded almost akin of concern. This made Grievous wonder whether Hill was genuinely worried for the safety of his prized warrior. “You will walk. You will speak. You will retain your memories…your mind.”

If he could, Grievous would have contorted his face in disgust. “I have a mind, Chairman. What I lack is a body.”

“I am aware of this, my dear General,” Hill replied. “But I know a way to give you the body that you desire. But it will have to require sacrifices on your part. You will have to give up more than you have before. And you will no longer be able to know the pleasures of the flesh.”

“Flesh is weak, Chairman. You need only cast your gaze on me to realize this.”

Hill rubbed his chin. “Indeed, General.” He then paused, building up the dramatic suspense of his next revelation. “A war is coming, General. I am unaware of when it shall begin, but when it does, it will shake the galaxy to its very foundations.”

This grew Grievous’ interest. “A war? Who will start this war? The Trade Federation? The Republic?” He watched as Hill shook his head once, then asked, “Who will start this war?”

“You will come to know him, General. And when you do, you will be impressed. He is a wise and powerful individual who has great plans for our galaxy”

As much as Grievous found himself tempted by this, one question continued to plague him. “If he is so wise and powerful, why does he need me?”

Hill chuckled, a sound that felt as if he had reached through the transparisteel of the tank and slapped him across the face. “General, as a warrior among your own kind, you should be very much aware of the fact that in every war, there are leaders and commanders to send troops into battle. Think about it, General. You could go down in history as the leader of the greatest army the galaxy has ever known.”

Grievous thought about this for a moment. It would be a crowning achievement in his life to lead an army against a far superior foe. But he was also disgusted by one particularly obvious fact: the forces he would no doubt be leading in this battle would be droids. The IBC had a sizeable army, mostly composed of their hoop wheeled hailfire droids.

The idea of leading droids once more, even into a war in which his name would be remembered for ages, displeased him. “A commander of droid’s, Chairman. An army of droids.”

A smile formed on Hill’s thin lips that could only be described as lecherous. “Ah, but there in lies the irony, dear General, for leading this army will be a living being. A living being that can bring the vibroknife that is our army down onto the very heart of the Republic and watch as it bleeds to death. And it can be you, General, if you so choose. I thus give you a choice. General Grievous, warlord of the Kaleesh, will you accept my offer?”

To Grievous, there was no need to ask the question. Though it once again meant that he would be shackled to the whims of others, it would grant him the ability to vent his frustration over the situation on those who had wronged him. And that gave the Kaleesh great amusement. To think that long ago the Republic had the chance to prevent this situation from happening by coming to the aid of his people. But they did not, instead leaving them to flounder and die.

Grievous would take Hill’s offer. But not for himself, not for the wives and daughters he would leave behind. Not even to honor the memory of his long departed Kummar.

He would do this for himself. To bring about the justice that the Republic failed to give him, and assuage his anger towards the fact that they had done nothing to help his people in their time of need.

The Republic, in failing to act and stop one danger, had unknowingly released another to the galaxy. And unlike himself, it would not live to regret their mistake.

For he was General Grievous. He would be leader of the army to be unleashed on the galaxy to bring about the destruction of the Galactic Republic.

And he would kill any who stood in his way.

And one day, those would make the name General Grievous spoken in hushed whispers out of fear and known throughout the galaxy as one of death and destruction.

**

Kneeling in front of the image of his Master, Dooku listened to him speak, though his mind was on other matters. With all they had done to set up the pieces for the upcoming conflict, Dooku was somewhat concerned. There was much that could cause their plans to go wrong. And unlike Sidious, he could not see how their intricately constructed plan could be salvaged if one of the supports keeping it together was weakened.

”Your thoughts betray you, Lord Tyranus.”

Dooku knew that his Master would pick up on his latent feelings, but was not afraid of reprisal because of it. He was as important to Sidious’ plans as anyone else, and it would not be logical for the Dark Lord to discard him at such a critical juncture.

This knowledge made it safe for him to speak. “My Master, I must admit that I have…concerns about your plan. The death of Maul…”

“…was unexpected, yes.” The voice was without emotion, but Dooku knew that it held restrained power at being questioned. “But unlike my predecessors, I have found a way to compensate for this disruption to my plans. I have found a new apprentice to carry out my will…unless you now believe that you are unworthy, Lord Tyranus. Do your newfound concerns for my plans somehow reflect a weakness in your character? This did not seem to matter when you murdered your friend.”

Dooku kept quiet, but he knew that Sidious had struck a nerve. In order to become indoctrinated into the Sith, he had to eliminate one of the few in this galaxy he could truly call friend. Master Sifo-Dyas had seen the changes in the galaxy, and had placed an order for a clone army to the cloners on Kamino. Sidious had allowed this, but had ordered Dooku to eliminate Sifo-Dyas, saying that the army must remain a secret until he was prepared to let the Republic and the Jedi know about it.

And over the course of the next eight years, nothing seemed to be able to stop Sidious in his grand march towards the Sith’s ultimate revenge. Dooku knew that his Master was always making his opponents guessing, seeing plans within plans within plans. This made him a dangerous adversary. And one not to be crossed.

“Indeed, my Master. It was necessary.”

Sidious smiled. “As is what is to come. Do not worry, my apprentice. When the time comes, you shall play your part. And you shall be remembered throughout the galaxy.”

The hologram faded, and Dooku got to his feet. In this, Sidious was right. He knew that, when all was said and done, he would be remembered as the man who led the disenfranchised and the embittered people who thought the Republic had abandoned them in a crusade to bring about the end of the corruption that both they and he felt towards it.

But in the end, only he would remain to see it. And one way or another, Dooku found comfort in that.

**

Turning from the holoprojector, the cloaked being made his way back to the desk, hands moving to removed the hooded robe he had worn during the conversation. Placing it inside a secret compartment, he sat down in the chair and gazed out the window, looking at the skyline of the city.

Palpatine smiled. Long ago, the Sith had sought to rule the galaxy. Soon, they would do so again. In fact, one could argue that, with himself as Supreme Chancellor, the Sith were already in control of the Republic. Its citizens merely did not realize it yet.

But they would. And by that time, it would be too late for the Jedi to stop him. For by then, he would have the citizens of that vast city that lay before him so blinded to who and what he truly represented that they would not accept him as anything less than what he seemed: a simple man with only the best interests of the people at heart.

The Jedi could fight any enemy. The coming war would prove that. But one enemy they could not fight was public opinion. And by the end of this war, the public would be crying for the Order’s destruction, an act that he would enjoy carrying out.

But not in the name of the people. In the end, they were naught but tools for him to use to bring about his ends. He would do what he had to do in the name of the legacy that had begun a thousand years ago by one who, like him, saw that change was needed in order to accomplish what was necessary.

And what was necessary was the revenge of the Sith. Revenge against the Jedi Order which had for too long preached that their way was the only way to master the Force and which had preached peace and serenity in a galaxy full of strife and discord.

The Code of the Sith preached that through passion, one gained strength. And that through strength, one gained power. And that through power, one gained victory.

Palpatine had the strength. He had the power. And soon, he would claim the victory.

[center]The End[/center]
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Postby Artemis » Sat Jul 29, 2006 5:26 am

That fills in a lot of blanks - I wondered where Grievous came from. In Star-Wars-world terms, that is (in real-world terms I suspect he came from a memo from Hasbro saying "George, the Christopher Lee action figures aren't shifting. Can't you replace him with, I dunno, a robot or something?") - I know, I'm a horrible cynic.

I like how the Sith feel justified - especially in their attitude to the Jedi, which is something I had no real part in at the beta-stage, so that's pure you. It works, because the Jedi are self-absorbed, preachy, and one can't help but feel, organised really badly. They deny themselves the most basic of human (or in this case, I should say 'sentient') interactions, personal relationships, and then somehow expect to be able to understand and mend everyone else's problems? No wonder the Republic got into the mess it's in.
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Postby Darth Pacula » Tue Aug 15, 2006 3:43 pm

G'day Alex.

Sorry it's taken me this long to leave feedback. I've been fighting a massive attack of procrastination.

I've always had a fond spot for villains, so enjoyed this little interlude fleshing out the villains of the piece. Palpatine; cunning, schemeing and power-hungry. Dooku; who still seems plagued by the vestiges of honor, and also slightly naive. The creature who will become Grevious; angry, desperate and willing to surrender himself to the machinations of the Dark Side for a chance to lash out at a universe that has treated him so cruelly.

I have to agree with Chris too. A lot of what befell the Jedi Order was of their own making.

Now, when do we get back to Tara and Willow?

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Postby SithLordWiccan » Thu Aug 17, 2006 2:14 pm

Chris: Yeah, it's like a lot of Expanded Universe stuff: it fills in a lot of the blanks that the movies don't really go into. And it always amazes me that the people who don't count the EU as "canon" are the same people who say that the movies don't go into detail about things like that.

Knowing how much you dislike Grievous as a character, I made it my mission to make sure to go into it in as much detail as I could get away with given what I knew about it with my available reference materials. An article in one of the recent Insider magazines provided a very detailed background to him (the online supplement being the first source to give his actual name) and, as I said, the major dialogue scene comes from an offical novel, the first of what would ultimately end up being a confusing attempt to tell the story of how ROTS began. (There was another source I wanted to include, but wasn't able to get it in time for me to post this.)

The part about explaining the Sith's actions was something I thought that the Expanded Universe tried to get across, along with the movies to a certain extent. (I think the ROTS Visual Dictionary makes reference to it.) Given the direction that this series is going, I want to make sure that comes across so that later actions can be reflected in this.

And speaking of things that will be reflected in later actions, I wanted to set up the fact that, on the whole, the galaxy at this point is starting to distrust the Jedi. For example, there was an incident that was covered in the online Holonet News tie in site that mentions the fact that the Jedi found a Force sensitive baby on a planet devastated by an earthquake and took her to the Temple for training. But it turns out that the baby's mother survived and wanted to reunite with her daughter. The Jedi, naturally, didn't want that to happen. There's a lot about the galaxy's anti-Jedi attitude that I hope to cover in the remaining two fics that are set in the prequel era. For a more basic overview of what I hope to accomplish, feel free to check this out.

Paul: The villains are indeed interesting, and all three of them (Palpatine, Dooku and Grievous) did get background into their actions and motivations in the movies. Of course, it was never really explained there, and only those who had an intimate knowledge of the whole of the Star Wars canon (IE: me) really know about it. Knowing that there were people who aren't as big into Star Wars as I am reading this, I wanted to set up the situation so that people reading the next two fics know why people are doing the things they are doing.

As for getting back to Willow, I've actually been working on the next fic for the past few weeks. I've got the prologue all ready to go, but there is one thing I want to check before I get it posted. And I don't have the ability to do it now, so I will say that the prologue of fic #2 will go up within the next 24 hours.
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Postby SithLordWiccan » Thu Aug 17, 2006 5:55 pm

• Title: Star Witches Episode II: Sins of the Future
• Author: SithLordWiccan (Alex)
• Email address: decepticons_4_ever@hotmail.com.
• Feedback: I'm a feedback whore. I live on feedback, so feed the beast. It’s the only way I keep going.
• Distribution: Through the Looking-glass, Extra Flamey. If you want to put it anywhere else, let me know
• Spoilers: No real spoilers, since anything that might be mentioned has been out for at least four years. Still, it bears noting that this fic references stuff that happened in "Star Witches: Episode I", along with stuff that happened in “Attack of the Clones” (though for the most part, it's on the periphery) and a whole bunch of Expanded Universe material that I’m not even going to begin mentioning, since I’ll most likely be adding to it as I go along.
• Rating: PG-13.
• Disclaimer: Willow, Tara and other “Buffy: The Vampire Slayer” stuff that may show up belong to Joss Whedon and Mutant Enemy. All things Star Wars belong to George Lucas and Lucasfilm (though if you ask me, I’m doing a lot better with it than he has in recent times.) No money is being made off this fic, and I don’t have anything anyone would want anyway, so don’t bother suing me, OK?
• Summary: On the eve of the galaxy’s greatest conflict, Jedi Master Tara Maclay and newly anointed Jedi Knight Willow Rosenberg face a more personal crisis.
• Note: Special thanks to Chris Cook (Artemis) for beta’ing this fic, hosting it on his site, for being an overall swell fellow and for putting up with me (I know from experience how difficult it is for anyone to do that.) Also thanks to all the readers who liked the first one enough to leave feedback, and for providing me with the inspiration and strength to keep going. You guys rock. *hugs*

[center]STAR WITCHES
EPISODE II
SINS OF THE FUTURE

It has been ten years since the incident on Naboo, and despite the promises made by Supreme Chancellor Palpatine, the galaxy has become a far dangerous place. Two years ago, Dooku, a former Jedi Master who had returned to his homeworld and assumed his hereditary title of Count after leaving the Order following the Battle of Naboo, reappeared after an eight year exile to stir anti-Republic sentiment on thousands of worlds within the Republic. These worlds, along with several of the galaxy’s major corporate entities, would join together in their common hatred of the Republic and form the Confederacy of Independent Systems.

But for two Jedi, a far more personal crisis looms on the horizon. Kieran Maclay, father of Jedi Master Tara Maclay, is about to be freed from prison by a group of mercenaries that include members of his immediate family, hired for the act by Darth Sidious as part of his master plan for the galaxy.

Tara, along with Willow Rosenberg, now a Jedi Knight, will join Tara’s former Master Nejaa Halcyon to bring Kieran to justice, unaware of the fact that a far more dangerous conflict is on the horizon…[/center]


Detention Block 2224
Oovo IV Asteroid Field
One Month Prior to the Battle of Geonosis


It was a tough day today. It was a tough day yesterday. It would be a tougher day tomorrow. Those three thoughts blazed their way into the mind of Kieran Maclay, who grew angrier at the words the more he thought of them, more so than anyone in his position might be able to comprehend.

How long had he been here? He had no clue. At a place like this, time ran together, eventually getting to the point where it became difficult to distinguish when one day ended and the next one began. All Kieran knew was that it had all started the day that he had been captured by a Jedi that, through either some stroke of luck or the ineptitude of his crew, had managed to infiltrate the ranks of the pirate group he had led. While there, the Jedi had managed to find out that he had captured one of his companions in order to intimidate the Trade Federation, one of his more audacious plans. Nobody, not even them, would have been stupid enough to attack him if they knew his group had a Jedi in their midst.

But he didn’t count on the stupidity of crew. Though to be honest, it was not much of a surprise to discover that they had been powerless to stop her as she jumped off ship while they were at Duro. And worse yet, how they had all been bested by a single infiltrator who had not even gone there to find out about that to begin with. At least he had the pleasure of knowing that the Federation, upon learning that he had lost his bargaining chip keeping their wrath from coming down on him, sent the most despicable bounty hunters to do away with most of the imbecilic Sithspawn, saving him the trouble of having to do it himself. Most of the ones who were lucky enough (or, more unlikely, smart enough) to escape managed to find an out of the way hole to bury themselves into.

Others, including himself, were not as lucky.

But it was not the indignity of all that which angered him the most. No, it was the fact that, on his way to be tried and sentenced to this place, he had encountered a female, one who looked suspiciously like the Jedi they had captured. But that could not be right. He had personally burned from the galaxy the ship that she had been traveling on. It was only later that he learned that it was not the Jedi he thought he had killed, but her child.

His daughter.

Spitting on the floor, Kieran glanced out the viewport, which offered a spectacular view of the galaxy beyond. Not much was in view at the moment, only the rocks of varying shapes and sizes that made up the Oovo IV asteroid field. Every so often a transport or shuttle would pass by, delivering prisoners or cargo and taking away personnel or prisoners that would be transferred to one of the other prison facilities.

Kieran had looked out that viewport ever day for the past month, ever since receiving that message, given to him by a guard who looked rather reluctant to do so, but had no real reason to deny him contact with the outside world. It had been a simple message, and one that he, well versed in the trade languages of the Outer Rim, could easily decipher.

”Bossman, no fret much. Not stay locked away for much longer. Thirty orbits from now, will come to prison and break you out. Be ready. One shot at this, or we all get 25 to life.

PS: Once off prison rock, job need done for bigwig. Will tell us more once we free jailbird.”


It was written in Trader’s Argot, one of the more complicated languages spoken by the smuggler types that frequented the area. He guessed that must have been the reason the guard decided to give him the message, figuring that it was nothing more than gibberish.

Ever since he had received that message, Kieran had spent the majority of his days staring out the window, watching the shuttle traffic. The other inmates, along with the majority of the guards, had begun to question what he was doing. But most of them came to realize that as long as it kept him quiet and under control, they were content to leave him be. After all, it meant that he wasn’t taking his frustrations out on others.

Kieran knew, without knowing how or why he knew it, that today was to be the last day he would have to suffer the indignity of having to deal with the guards, the other prisoners and living on this rock.

**

The cargo shuttle touched down inside the hanger bay, ASP droids watching with interest as they prepared to offload the cargo. The attendant on duty looked up as the ship touched down, and began to grow curious as to why the ship had not lowered its cargo ramp to allow the ASP’s to begin offloading its contents.

Withdrawing his blaster, he walked towards the door, his other hand moving to the comlink strapped at his belt. There was something about this he did not like, and he wanted to be prepared for any eventuality.

But all his training couldn’t prepare him for the sight of door being blown away as he approached. Rolling out of the way of the incoming projectile, he raised his blaster and shouted into the comlink, “Invaders in Hanger Bay 327! Repeat, invaders in Hanger Bay 327! Send all available forces down to level 23 immediately…”

A blaster bolt emerged from the hole left behind by the imploded door, impacting the man directly in the face. He was dead within seconds, and thus never saw the group of beings emerge from the shuttle and head towards the exit.

**

Kieran smiled as the alarm began to ring, knowing that the time of his liberation had finally come. He wondered for a moment if the guards would be able to handle his rescuers, whoever they were. The message hadn’t given him any indication as to who they were, only the cryptic remark of “bossman” being enough to convince him that it was someone from the old gang. But that didn’t mean anything. Kieran was a well known and influential figure in the underworld, and most people he knew would refer to him like that. And besides, if any of the old boys had planned this, then they wouldn’t be able to get past the airlock.

But as he heard the unmistakable whine of blaster fire coming from down the hallway, Kieran began to realize that whoever was in charge of this little skirmish knew what he or she was doing. There were few people that could break into what was supposedly a maximum security prison and get this far without being caught.

The blaster fire was growing in intensity, the cries of pain of the guards falling under the approaching group’s fire starting to mix in with the sound of the weapons. Kieran jerked his head around to see one of the guards collapsing to the floor, body armor clattering and smoke rising from the wound on his side. Stepping over the body was an eclectic group of individuals, which consisted of a human female, two human males, a Wookiee, a Quarren, two Rodians and a Duro.

One of the females, a stunning beauty with light red hair and blue eyes and a exquisite body that was sheathed in form fitting armor, pointed a blaster directly at the lock and discharged a bolt directly into its workings, slagging the delicate electronics instantly.

As the door opened, Kieran stepped out and accepted a blaster rifle from one of the Rodians. “Well, Beth, it’s been a long time.”

The blonde smiled. “It has indeed. I haven’t seen you in a long time, Uncle. Not since that Jedi scum locked you away.”

Kieran’s face darkened as he checked the charge on the blaster rifle. “Don’t worry about it, Beth. I can assure you that I’ll start working on rectifying those mistakes.”

**

Jedi Council Chambers
Jedi Temple, Coruscant


Tara Maclay stood in the center of the Jedi Council chamber, a room she had been a guest in many times before. But on this occasion, there was a special feeling to be in the presence of so many important members of the Order.

She was going to be joining them.

Eleven chairs in the circular room were occupied, all by Jedi who had done far more important things that she had. There was the Vurk Jedi Master Coleman Trebor, who had become the Council’s representative to the galactic media. And was, very much like herself, diplomatic in voice and gentle in touch. There was also Shaak Ti, a wise and noble Togruta who herself was a recent addition to the Council, after the death of Yaddle three years ago. Tara kept her face forward, but she knew of the others who were in the room: Thisspiasian Oppo Rancisis, born of royalty but giving up the title to serve the entire galaxy. Iktotchi Saesee Tiin, one of the best pilots the Jedi had to offer.

Tara tried to control her feelings as her eyes found the horned Zabrak Jedi Master Eeth Koth. It had been nearly ten years since it had happened, but every time she saw a Zabrak, she was instantly transported back to the planet of Naboo, when she had nightmare visions of a horned and tattooed demon very much like Koth. During one of her visions, she had seen the aged and contemplative Jedi Master Qui-Gon Jinn fight the demon, and looked on in horror as Qui-Gon morphed into Willow and was speared through the stomach.

Tara had never spoken of her nightmares. She had not brought them up to Qui-Gon, the overall obvious danger at the time being more important than the supposed personal danger. It had made learning of the elder Jedi Master’s death unbearable for her to deal with, knowing that she could have prevented it if she had spoken up. But though she had not discussed her visions, they had discussed her feelings towards Willow, and Qui-Gon had told Tara that he was aware of the emotional connection she had forged with her red haired Padawan. He had also insisted that she tell the Council about it. And when he had died, Tara swore that she would honor that promise as soon as she could prepare herself to deal with the repercussions of her actions.

But such a situation never seemed to occur, as one thing after another had been brought up to occupy her time: Missions around the galaxy that required her total concentration, lest she make a mistake and kill either herself or Willow. The increasing political strife between the Republic and threats, both external and internal, that threatened to tear the galaxy apart.

And there was her more proactive approach to training Willow. Where before she had been merely content to keep the redhead out of danger and train her in diplomacy and other activities requiring peace of mind, she had, after the incident on Naboo, reluctantly decided to make sure that Willow knew how to defend herself, a situation that her Padawan had readily agreed with.

And in the ten years since, armed with her newly created lightsaber that was in every way a mirror image of her own, Willow had become more confident and powerful, which both frightened and pleased Tara. The blonde knew that, as a Jedi, Willow was very special and wanted to use her abilities for the benefit of all. But she also knew that the redhead, despite all the changes she had been through, still occasionally thought of the Force as nothing more than a tool to be used in whatever way that she thought was best in order to solve a particular problem.

Tara was thankful that no situations had occurred in which Willow had the opportunity to use the Force to influence others, but she knew that the day was coming soon when Willow would not longer be hers to watch over. And when that day came, Tara had cause to wonder if she could truly allow herself to let Willow go.

“Master Maclay?”

Tara’s thoughts returned to the present at the sound of the unmistakable voice of one of the two senior members of the Jedi Council. She tried to keep the smile that threatened to form on her face from manifesting itself as she saw the small form of Yoda sitting on his chair, green face a mask of calm emotion that Tara knew belied the nearly 900 year old Jedi’s untapped power. The last time that Tara had faced him in this manner, she had been speaking to the Council as a whole, telling them of the good that Willow could bring to both the Jedi and the Republic if she were allowed to be reprimanded into her care.

“Yes, Master Yoda?”

Yoda smiled. “Understand you do the honor the Council gives you today?”

Tara nodded. It was indeed an honor, one she thought she would never deserve. And yet, she couldn’t help but wonder if she was truly deserving of what the Council was giving her. Certainly there must be other Jedi in the Order more right to take her place. Obi-Wan Kenobi was obviously a better choice. Anyone who could take the nine year old boy whom she had met all those years ago and turn him into a Jedi as good as the one that Willow had become obviously deserved the honor of being part of this body more than she did.

“Then unto you we, the members of the Jedi Council, this seat give.” Yoda gestured to the seat opposite his, which had been the seat that had once belonged to Yarael Poof, a Quermian Jedi Master that had served on the Council until perishing in a failed attempt by the Annoo-Dat General Ashaar Khorda to destroy Coruscant some years back.

As she sat down in the chair, Tara felt a great sense of accomplishment, knowing that it was from here that she could make sure Willow was the safest she could possibly be. But even as she wondered this, Tara wondered also if it was selfish of her to think that way. There were more important things that should concern her, now that she was part of the Jedi Council.

No, she realized. Willow was, and would always be, the main concern of her life. The question was whether or not she would allow that to interfere with her decisions?

She didn’t answer that question now. And she wondered, for the briefest of moments, if she ever would.

**

The day was nearly over, and most of the other Council members had departed. But Tara remained in the High Council chambers, looking out at the setting sun as it dipped behind the Manarai Mountains.

She wondered, not for the first time, how she could find pleasure in seeing this. Despite the fact that it was one of the most beautiful things she had ever seen, it took place on a world of technology and lifelessness, where the entire surface was covered from pole to pole in one endless city. There was no natural life to be found on Coruscant. The closest thing that came to nature on this planet was the Western Sea, and even that was little more than the result of technology running rampant on the planet’s surface.

The only place where Tara could be comfortable enough to relax and be contemplative in was the Room of a Thousand Fountains. Only there, among the various plants and as close to an approximation of nature that she could find on Coruscant, was the blonde at her most comfortable. Not even with Willow was Tara at such peace. Not to say that she couldn’t find solace in the company of her Padawan. But it just wasn’t the same.

She heard the door to the room open, and felt the presence of who it was through the Force, so she didn’t turn to face the newcomer. “Master Windu.”

Walking forward to stand beside Tara, Mace Windu also looked out onto the skyline. “Master Maclay…Tara, there is something I needed to discuss with you.”

Tara didn’t need to use the Force to detect the tension in Mace’s voice. She tried to keep the fear from her voice as she responded, “About what, Master?”

“Your appointment on the Jedi Council,” Mace responded. “I could sense throughout the meeting that you were wondering why you had been given the honor in joining us.”

Tara really couldn’t deny it, and so she silently nodded in reply to the statement.

Mace’s face took on a slight frown. “Your feelings betray you, Tara. It is not right for you to think that you have not accomplished great deeds in the Order. No one Jedi is more important than the other. Master Yoda and I are not the grand and glorious warriors that the media have made us out to be. The moment that any one Jedi starts to believe that they are better than the rest, he or she begins to take the path to the Dark Side.”

Tara nodded in understanding, knowing how right Mace’s statement was. This was merely the latest of a long series of incidents in the past ten years where she had tried to prove herself better than her contemporaries. What kind of an example was she setting for Willow, whom she had often scolded for doing the exact thing?

“There was something else,” Mace continued. “We’ve been watching the progress of your Padawan for quite some time, and we feel that she has learned all that she can from you and has successfully passed the Trials. The time has come for her to become a Jedi Knight.”

Tara kept herself composed on the surface and tried to control her emotions, lest Mace pick up on her happiness. But the truth of the matter was that she was happier at that moment than she had been at any point in her life. Nearly twenty years ago, she had stood up for Willow and made sure that the Council understood how important it was that she became a Jedi. And for Mace Windu to freely admit that Willow was now ready to take the next step in her journey as a Jedi meant that the blonde had done well in instilling within the redhead the values and beliefs that made one a good Jedi Knight.

Despite her good feelings, this news deeply troubled Tara, if only for a moment. With Willow becoming a Knight, that meant that they would no longer be together. And although she was not required to do so, Willow would no doubt select a Padawan of her own and begin to train that person in the ways of the Force. It was that which troubled Tara the most. Despite how much she had grown in the past two years, she knew that Willow was neither fully ready nor adequately prepared to do that.

And there were still the feelings that they had for each other. Willow had never really kept them a secret, at least from her. And Tara had always felt an emotional connection to the redhead from the moment they had first met, one which time had grown from simple respect and admiration to something more emotional.

But now things were going to be different. Willow would need to show the responsibility and strength that she had developed ever since her trial under fire on Naboo on a near constant basis. Tara knew that she could do it, despite whatever reservations she still had about whether or not Willow was truly ready for it. But could the two of them continue to feel the way they did towards each another, knowing that their responsibilities to the Order and to themselves were about to be fundamentally altered?

For now, that was a question that Tara was prepared to leave unanswered. She would not allow thoughts of what might happen in the future to impact the happiness she should be feeling in the present.

“Thank you, Master Windu,” she said. “I am sure that she would be honored to know that you think that way of her.”

“We will hold the ceremony tomorrow morning,” Mace said as he turned to leave the room. “May the Force be with you, Tara.”

“And with you, Master Windu.”

**

’I’m not late. I’m just…making a fashionable entrance. That’s it. That’s what I’ll tell them.’

Willow moved through the corridors of the Jedi Temple as fast as she could without attracting unwanted attention from passersby. As one with a well known reputation for being a troublemaker, even if she had never really meant to cause the trouble she somehow inadvertently created, she didn’t want anyone to become aware of the fact that she may be in trouble again. After all, she had worked hard in the ten years since her last overt act of going against the Jedi Code to develop a more professional attitude. But there were times, like this, when she inadvertently fell into old patters.

’Why didn’t I set my chrono last night? It’s never a good idea to keep the Council waiting, but especially when it’s me; it’s not a good idea to get on their bad side. I hope that Tara can understand what happened. I don’t want her to have to come to my defense again. I’m a big girl now. I have to be able to take care of myself.’

Willow slowed to a rapid walk with the occasional skip as she thought about what she had just said. While there were indeed times when she slipped back into old habits as if she were slipping into her robes, it was true that she was no longer the spazzy Padawan that she had once been. Tara had a lot to do in turning her into who she was today, and for that she would be forever grateful.

The mission to Naboo had changed everything for them. The redhead had never kept it a secret how much she loved her Master in ways that were less than typical of the standard Master/Padawan relationship, and she had long suspected that Tara felt the same way towards her. But until Naboo, there had been no overt action on her part to confirm that.

But it was during that influential time when Tara had finally opened herself to Willow, and the redhead knew that, having been done, there was no way that they could go back to the way they had once been. Neither had really regretted it, but both knew that it would be a challenge for them to keep their feelings for one another a secret from others.

For ten years they had managed to do this, but having been summoned to the Council room, Willow knew that something had happened and that her life was going to be altered forever because of it.

Approaching the door to the High Council room, Willow moved to readjust her robes, making sure that she was as presentable as she could make herself. Once she had done so to the best of her ability, she stepped up to the door, which opened, showcasing the darkened room inside.

’What the…?’

Moving cautiously inside, one hand moving to the lightsaber she wore on her belt, Willow tried to hold back her fear, succeeding more easily than she would have thought possible. Of course, this had to do with the fact that she was in the Jedi Temple, one of the most impregnable buildings on the planet. If anyone could have infiltrated the Temple, there most certainly would have been more commotion going on.

Willow walked into the center of the room, head darting around cautiously in an attempt to find something familiar to ease the fear that she was beginning to lose control of. She soon found it as twelve lightsabers ignited. The mixture of blue and green light from the weapons highlighted the circle of twelve beings that stood around her, forming the wheel that she became the axle of.

Turning her head, she saw the twelve Jedi Council members looking at her. Among them included Tara, who was trying to keep the tears from falling from her eyes. But Willow knew that, of all the people in the room, she was the most proud about what was going to happen.

What was going to happen…

Willow took another looked at the assembled group and suddenly realized what it was she had been summoned to the High Council room for, a smile forming on her face. It was difficult to contain her emotions, but this had been the moment that both she and Tara had worked hard ever since Naboo to reach. And in a galaxy currently filled with danger and the threat of civil war, they would both let themselves have this moment.

The assembled Jedi spoke as one. “We are all Jedi. The Force speaks through us. Through our actions, the Force proclaims itself and what is real. Today we are here to acknowledge what the Force has proclaimed."

Then one voice among the dozen spoke up. “Step forward, Padawan.”

Willow recognized that voice, and turned to see the diminutive Jedi Master Yoda. It constantly amazed her that so much power could come from such a small and unassuming figure. But, as she had often been taught while she was growing up, size mattered not.

Moving forward to kneel in front of Yoda, Willow couldn’t help but be amazed at what was about to happen. Far too many times when she had been brought to this group, it had not been a comfortable experience for her. But now, there was nowhere else in the galaxy she would rather be.

Yoda placed the ignited blade of his lightsaber on Willow’s right shoulder, then moved it to her left. As he brought it back to her right, he casually flicked his wrist, slicing the neatly woven Padawan braid from her hair.

“Willow Rosenberg, by the right of the Council, by the will of the Force, I dub thee, Jedi Knight of the Republic."

If Willow was a sun, the light emanating from her at this very moment would have eclipsed the light given off by the lightsabers of the Council. All of her hidden fears and buried insecurities disappeared. There was only this room, herself and the other Jedi, who no longer saw her as she one was, but as one of their own.

“Take up your lightsaber, Willow Rosenberg, Jedi Knight. And may the Force be with you.”

It was another recognizable voice that spoke those words, and Willow got to her feet and turned to look at Tara, their eyes meeting and locking for what seemed liked eons. The two knew that what had just happened was but a tiny droplet of water in the sun baked expanse of the galactic turmoil that was threatening to turn the entire galaxy into a war zone, but that single drop was enough to sustain them, their bond stronger now than it had been before.

Together, Willow and Tara knew that the love they had for one another and their new responsibilities wouldn’t do much to change the galaxy. But it would make them happy.

And sometimes, that was more important than keeping the galaxy safe from evil.
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